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Law and Order

Should something be put in the article that this scenario was used in a resent episode of law in order SVU?--Blood Panther (talk) 03:10, 30 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. F (talk) 12:28, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

RE: Citation Needed

In the article under Media depiction it states

These incidents were the inspiration behind an episode of Law & Order: SVU featuring Robin Williams as the hoaxer,
who identified himself as "detective Milgram", a reference to the famous Milgram experiment that tested obedience to authority.

A Citation needed tag is placed there.

I am watching this episode now and beginning at ~5:13 into the episode the following dialog appears.

Detective Olivia Benson: What about this Detective Milgram? He's the one who pulled Dwight's strings.
Detective John Munch: Stanley Milgram? He's dead.
Detective Elliot Stabler: You knew him?
Detective John Munch: Not personally, but the real Milgram was a psychology professor who instructed volunteers to give electroshocks to screaming victims.
Detective Odafin 'Fin' Tutuola: Sounds like a nut case.
Detective John Munch: Well, the shocks weren't real. The real nuts were the people frying their friends because somebody told them to.

Quote

Hello, I have a problem with the following quote: "If Stewart was indeed the caller, his occupation as a correctional officer would seem to confirm the conclusions of the notorious Stanford prison experiment.". Considering the fact that i dont see a citation and that wikipedia does critisize the Stanford prison experiment, wouldnt it be better to say that it supports (and not confirms) the Milgram experiment. Personaly i dont see how this incident would in any way support the Stanford prison experiment (other than correctional officers being sadistic), if anything it supports the Milgram experiment which shortly states that people will put their consciousness aside when authority figures tell them so. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Leonidaslundell (talkcontribs) 12:29, 13 January 2007

I agree. -Unsigned —Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.111.229.13 (talkcontribs) 01:14, 20 January 2007
  • Detention guards reveal their sadistic side.
  • Even in absence of real constraint, victims easily become very submissive.
--Nnemo (talk) 20:50, 20 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Removal of Picture

The picture of the woman being sexually abused should be removed. This is a real person, who is really being raped. I partially disagree. I feel that it should be kept on the article, as it is VERY relevant to the article, and provides a visualization of what went on. However, I wouldn't not object to hiding it behind a "click here for picture" link. 24.205.53.113 (talk) 10:20, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not censored. --99.199.42.152 (talk) 07:09, 15 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, wikipedia is not censored, since this is after all 2006. The picture is censored, her name is censored. 68.0.20.56 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 04:19, 12 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Plagiarism?

The following is a quote from a cited source: "The first report of such a call came in 1995, in Devil's Lake, N.D.; another came later that year in Fallon, Nev. The caller, usually pretending to be a police officer investigating a crime, targeted stores in small towns and rural communities -- areas where managers were more likely to be trusting."

This is a bullet in the article, not indicated as a quote of any kind: "The first report of such a call came in 1995, in Devil's Lake, N.D.; another came later that year in Fallon, Nev. The caller, usually pretending to be a police officer investigating a crime, targeted stores in small towns and rural communities — areas where managers were more likely to be trusting."

Furthermore, the source cited for the 'quote' appears to have itself taken the quote from the source I am talking about, 2 years later, with minimal attribution. It's not a better source than the original, so if quoting without indicating that it's a quote is valid, the citation should still be changed to the original source of the quote, rather than somebody that is quoting the original source. http://www.courier-journal.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=2005510090392 , the second is here: http://hitsusa.com/blog/163/mcdonalds-strip-search-video/

It seems likely that there is more in that list, but I'm tired, which is why I didn't check everything and quote as necessary-- but really, who wants a list of quotes instead of 'original' content?Scorchsaber (talk) 17:02, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thought I would add my surprise that this content is still sitting pretty on the page. almost that entire section is word-for-word an exact copy and paste job of The Courier-Journal's story on the events. i felt pretty confident in my belief that wikipedia does NOT in any way condone plagiarism (i mean, come on...someone took the time to write it in their own words...the least we can do is rewrite it in ours.) could anyone please clear this up ASAP. if this is NOT an acceptable way to present information in a wikipedia entry- nor should it be- i'd be more than glad to rewrite the section Ocrasaroon (talk) 03:00, 10 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Category:American comedy and humor

This article is not a humorous article and does not belong in this category. Please stop adding it. KiTA (talk) 23:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Removed this category again. KiTA (talk) 14:27, 23 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I beg to differ. There is a great deal of comedic value in the suffering and humiliation of others. Haven't you ever seen America's Funniest Home Videos? Uncle Dick (talk) 18:50, 12 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Due to issues with an abusive sockpuppet account, adding that category results in an immediate indef block. OhNoitsJamie Talk 19:00, 12 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Are the reported incidents real? Or this just an example of an urban legend? Is it correct to imply one person was behind this - particularly when he was acquitted. If he was responsible it is reasonable to expect that he would have been convicted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.197.15.138 (talk) 06:33, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Claim that Summers was awarded over a million

Strangely the article has contained an assertion that Summers, the woman who forced the young girl to strip in the Mt. Washington McDonalds case, was awarded over a million US dollars as part of the victim's lawsuit. I removed it [1]. --C S (talk) 22:48, 30 December 2008 (UTC) You are incorrect. Donna Summers was awarded 1.1 million by a jury. See link: http://www.wlky.com/news/14267691/detail.html It states: "The jury also awarded $1.1 million to a former assistant manager who strip-searched Ogborn" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.86.225.185 (talk) 02:32, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

One or more portions of this article duplicated other source(s). The material was copied from: http://www.courier-journal.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20051009/NEWS01/510090392. Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a license compatible with GFDL. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 13:20, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Middle name

David R. Stewart, none of the sources say what the R. stands for? Tyciol (talk) 02:11, 5 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It's not important. I'd like to ask that you kindly drop this line of inquiry at once. I'm sure that you have much better things to do than this. 24.23.32.249 (talk) 16:08, 15 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, don't think you'd find "david+r.+stewart"+david+stewart+mcdonalds many results outside name search databases. Nevard (talk) 21:40, 19 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Too long

This page is way too long, and has way too much detail. 203.24.135.66 (talk) 21:52, 16 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

What is “too much”, for example ? --Nnemo (talk) 20:52, 18 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Name of victim

Why exactly are we seemingly protecting the name of the victim? Does Wikipedia have any policy on that? It's on every reference website! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 59.96.24.156 (talk) 10:11, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Rape and sexual assault victims are typically not identified by name to protect them. Do you think the article would be improved by including her name? (Wikipedia isn't censored, so technically it could be included - I'm not sure what good it would do.) Buspar (talk) 07:47, 30 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It's in the sources; not so important here. Cool Hand Luke 16:13, 30 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Having read the article I noticed the victim was not named. I vaguely assumed the name might have been suppressed in the hearing (and reasonably so), so was surprised that one of the linked-to references gives the name up front. I agree that having the name itself really does not add much, but its omission here is noticeable. Format (talk) 00:06, 23 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is the policy of Wikipedia to censor any information that may offend readers. 68.0.20.56 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 04:22, 12 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No, it is not. However, there are steps taken to preserve the privacy of individuals. This sounds like one of those cases. —C.Fred (talk) 04:25, 12 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"quick-thinking"

How DARE any one write "A quick-thinking employee dialed *69" if Summers or any other of the three morons dialed it. Overall the article has a disgraceful apologetic tune in it as if it was written by Summers lawyer. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.156.68.194 (talk) 19:02, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Quick thinking!!! Not at all. I am in two minds about this entire subject. Either these are scams designed to extort money from McDonald's, or McDonald's must recruit employees with IQ's lower than that of chimpanzees. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.197.15.138 (talk) 06:39, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The residents of small towns in American must be very backward. How could 70 calls be made to McDonald's and in each case the employee's on duty are so stupid as to fall for this scam? Nigerian scams are more plausible, and they only dupe a small percentage of recipients - something like 1 in 1000. How can McDonald's employee's be so thick? Doesn't the company employ anyone with an IQ over 50?

Reassessment

I've upgraded the assessment on the article from Start-class to C-class. It would take very little for the article to be upgraded to B-Class, mostly more inline citations. Thanks. Wildhartlivie (talk) 21:16, 10 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Applebee's Example

The description of the 26/01/03 incident could be more appropriately worded. While the other examples in the "prior" section clearly show that the recipients of the calls (wrongly) believed they were doing the right thing, the Applebee's example seems to imply that the assistant manager was simply taking advantage of the situation. The only real evidence for that viewpoint seems to come from the fact that the he had received a memo warning about hoax calls a month earlier. Perhaps the current description is accurate, but the single paragraph about it in the citation is ambiguous. 222.153.51.127 (talk) 23:43, 20 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I edited the entry to match the text from the cited article, not that it's that much clearer. Frankly I will never forgive you, whoever you are, for causing me to click the link and read all those descriptions of what was done in this so called "scam."Modern Primate (talk) 01:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah right

"I got a phone call telling me to take the clothes off a customer so I did it". Never heard anything so stupid in my life.

Yes, it seems many McDonald's employees are incredibly stupid.

What about the customer? Excuse me miss, but there is a police officer on the phone and he says you need to take your clothes off.. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.24.163.16 (talk) 11:48, 14 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Title

The name is wrong. This is either a scam or a prank. It cannot be both. If the calls were part of a plot to defraud McDonald's (i.e. the "victims" were in on it) it would be a scam. If the calls were made by one or more persons to unwitting (and witless) staff, and relying on the incredible stupidity of McDonald's employees, then it would be a prank. Obviously it is the latter only. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.197.15.138 (talk) 06:46, 6 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Not necessarily I think you could rightly call anything where you pretended to be something you weren't a scam with or without personal gain involved. Conversely one could easily argue that this wasn't a prank since one generally assumes a prank to be done for amusement and this seems more likely some sort of sexual gratification or power trip.

However at the very least I think call should be pluralized since obviously there was more then one call.--99.61.24.92 (talk) 01:24, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Wait, are you implying sexual gratification or a power trip isn't for amusement? I agree, scam should be taken out of title. 124.169.116.195 (talk) 06:29, 5 August 2012 (UTC) Sutter Cane[reply]

This was neither a "scam" nor a "prank." This was sexual assault. The current title trivializes that fact. Modern Primate (talk) 01:36, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Wholly agree, Modern Primate. Note: see [2] at en.wiktionary. "Scam" redirects to Confidence trick. Martinevans123 (talk) 11:14, 30 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Invalid source for content

The citation Wolfson, Andrew (9 October 2005). "A hoax most cruel" has been overused throughout this article and often the citation has no reference to the text. Specifically in the before incidents.

Category:Practical jokes

clearly so— Preceding unsigned comment added by [[User:{{{1}}}|{{{1}}}]] ([[User talk:{{{1}}}#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/{{{1}}}|contribs]])

Do you have a WP:RS that states that this is seen as "a joke" (of any kind)? Martinevans123 (talk) 11:00, 30 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"What follows is a series of events .. that, in certain moments, we can’t help but regard .. as darkly humorous"— Preceding unsigned comment added by [[User:{{{1}}}|{{{1}}}]] ([[User talk:{{{1}}}#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/{{{1}}}|contribs]])