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Section size for BTS (36 sections)
Section name	Byte count	Section total
(Top)	8,130	8,130
Name	3,221	3,221
History	12	174,936
2010–2014: Formation and early years	11,752	11,752
2014–2017	18	46,982
Skool Luv Affair and first concert tour	8,756	8,756
Mainstream breakthrough and commercial success	15,810	15,810
You Never Walk Alone and Love Yourself: Her	22,398	22,398
2018–2020	18	79,621
Love Yourself album series	23,793	23,793
Map of the Soul: Persona, stadium world tour and BTS World	28,199	28,199
Map of the Soul: 7, "Dynamite" and Be	27,611	27,611
2021–present	23	36,569
"Butter", "Permission to Dance" and Proof	22,384	22,384
Military service and contract renewal	14,162	14,162
Artistry	13	25,858
Influences	6,678	6,678
Musical style	8,775	8,775
Lyrical themes	10,392	10,392
Impact	6,159	19,789
Diplomacy	8,760	8,760
Fandom	4,870	4,870
Other ventures	22	11,344
Endorsements	6,993	6,993
Philanthropy	4,329	4,329
Accolades	4,621	4,621
Members	3,457	3,457
Discography	641	641
Filmography	455	455
Bibliography	54	54
Concert tours	3,991	3,991
Notes	24	24
References	28	28
Bibliography	4,216	4,216
Further reading	256	256
External links	4,117	4,117
Total	265,138	265,138

Comma vs Fullstop

@Lightoil I believe my edit makes more sense grammaticlaly, as the sentence is too complex without a full stop divider 🇬🅰️Ⓜ️⭕🔱📧🅱️🅱️📧🇩 (talk) 04:42, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gamowebbed Then you should reword the whole sentence. Lightoil (talk) 04:49, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you 🇬🅰️Ⓜ️⭕🔱📧🅱️🅱️📧🇩 (talk) 07:18, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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bts is known for their popular music and all other kinds — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.100.114.121 (talk) 12:01, 15 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. — Paper9oll (🔔 • 📝) 12:09, 15 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Change 2013-present to 2013-2023 Loganp23 (talk) 08:43, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{Edit extended-protected}} template. — Paper9oll (🔔 • 📝) 09:16, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

BTS no longer hold highest selling album

This record is now held by Seventeen's FML, as reflected here-- List of best-selling albums in South Korea 173.68.72.44 (talk) 20:56, 29 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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I want to add HYBE Corporation page link in the labels column so that the readers would know that K-Pop singers who are in music companies that are part of HYBE should include HYBE Corporation page link to know more about it.

Example Code:

KOZ
Hybe

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Impact, subsection Diplomacy.

1) CURRENT: "BTS were invited to address the United Nations General Assembly in September 2018[349][350] and perform before 400 officials, including President Moon Jae-in, at the 2018 Korea-France Friendship Concert in Paris, a summit celebrating the friendly relations between France and South Korea."

SUGGESTED: "BTS was invited to address the United Nations General Assembly in New York in September 2018. That same year they performed in Paris before an audience of 400, including President Moon Jae-in and other officials, at the 2018 Korea-France Friendship Concert, a summit celebrating the friendly relations between France and South Korea."

WHY: a) This should not be one long, confusing run-on sentence. b) It contains a factual error: they did not perform in front of 400 officials, they performed in front of 400 people, some of whom were officials (https://en.yna.co.kr/view/AEN20181015006700315 and https://www.korea.net/NewsFocus/Culture/view?articleId=164255). c) You need to decide if you're going to treat 'BTS' as a singular or plural noun. In most of the rest of the article you treat it as singular ('As of 2023, BTS is the best-selling...' and 'BTS has also appeared on Time's...')

2) CURRENT: "Political scientist Joseph Nye developed the concept of soft power in his 2004 book Soft Power: The Means to Success in World Politics,[345][346] which researchers such as Maud Quessard have applied to BTS and their influence on entertainment diplomacy and international relations.[347] Nye wrote, "when one country gets other countries to want what it wants might be called co-optive or soft power in contrast with the hard or command power of ordering others to do what it wants."

SUGGESTED: "In his 1990 article Soft Power Joseph Nye developed the concept of a second type of power different from traditional authoritarianism. "This second aspect of power – which occurs when one country gets other countries to want what it wants – might be called co-optive or soft power in contrast with the hard or command power of ordering others to do what it wants."[348-will need updating] Researchers such as Maud Quessard have applied the concept of soft power to BTS and their influence on entertainment diplomacy and international relations.[347]

WHY: a) By using only *part* of a sentence from Nye's book you've created a grammatically incorrect sentence that's hard to follow. b) It is, again, factually incorrect - The quote comes from his 1990 article "Soft Power" published in the journal Foreign Policy, edition No. 80 (Autumn, 1990), pp. 153-171 (the quote is on pg 166) which you can view here: https://www.wilsoncenter.org/sites/default/files/media/documents/page/joseph_nye_soft_power_journal.pdf Niccast (talk) 23:12, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 10 September 2023 ==
+{{edit extended-protected|BTS|answered=no}}
+Impact, subsection Diplomacy.
+) CURRENT: "BTS were invited to address the United Nations General Assembly in September 2018[349][350] and perform before 400 officials, including President Moon Jae-in, at the 2018 Korea-France Friendship Concert in Paris, a summit celebrating the friendly relations between France and South Korea."
+SUGGESTED: "BTS was invited to address the United Nations General Assembly in New York in September 2018. That same year they performed in Paris before an audience of 400, including President Moon Jae-in and other officials, at the 2018 Korea-France Friendship Concert, a summit celebrating the friendly relations between France and South Korea."
+WHY: a) This should not be one long, confusing run-on sentence.  b) It contains a factual error: they did not perform in front of 400 officials, they performed in front of 400 people, some of whom were officials (https://en.yna.co.kr/view/AEN20181015006700315 and https://www.korea.net/NewsFocus/Culture/view?articleId=164255).  c) You need to decide if you're going to treat 'BTS' as a singular or plural noun. In most of the rest of the article you treat it as singular ('As of 2023, BTS is the best-selling...' and 'BTS has also appeared on Time's...')
+) CURRENT: "Political scientist Joseph Nye developed the concept of soft power in his 2004 book Soft Power: The Means to Success in World Politics,[345][346] which researchers such as Maud Quessard have applied to BTS and their influence on entertainment diplomacy and international relations.[347] Nye wrote, "when one country gets other countries to want what it wants might be called co-optive or soft power in contrast with the hard or command power of ordering others to do what it wants."
+SUGGESTED: "In his 1990 article ''Soft Power'' Joseph Nye developed the concept of a second type of power different from traditional authoritarianism. "This second aspect of power – which occurs when one country gets other countries to want what it wants – might be called co-optive or soft power in contrast with the hard or command power of ordering others to do what it wants."[348-will need updating] Researchers such as Maud Quessard have applied the concept of soft power to BTS and their influence on entertainment diplomacy and international relations.[347]
+WHY: a) By using only *part* of a sentence from Nye's book you've created a grammatically incorrect sentence that's hard to follow. b) It is, again, factually incorrect - The quote comes from his 1990 article "Soft Power" published in the journal ''Foreign Policy'', edition No. 80 (Autumn, 1990), pp. 153-171 (the quote is on pg 166) which you can view here: https://www.wilsoncenter.org/sites/default/files/media/documents/page/joseph_nye_soft_power_journal.pdf [[User:Niccast|Niccast]] ([[User talk:Niccast|talk]]) 23:12, 10 September 2023 (UTC)