Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of apartheid (fifth nomination)

Allegations of apartheid

Article renamed Apartheid analogies July 11, 2008

AfDs for this article:

• AfD 1 - opened 5 Jun 2006, closed as "no consensus"
• AfD 2 opened 29 Mar 2007, closed as "delete"
• DRV 6 Apr 2007, closed as "overturn and relist"
• AfD 3 opened 11 Apr 2007, closed as "keep"
• ArbCom review opened 12 Aug 2007, closed 26 Oct
• AfD 4 opened 19 Oct 2007, closed procedurally in deference to the ArbCom investigation

Allegations of apartheid (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) (delete) – (View log)

Delete This article has long been a source of controversy, and is regarded by many as a WP:SYNTH violation consisting mostly of original research. Most of the articles cited in the footnotes contain only fleeting references to the term "apartheid", and I do not believe that any make formal accusations that particular countries are guilty of the Crime of apartheid. (The Bosnia reference is especially weak, as it refers to "apartheid" solely in terms of rich and poor ... normally, there's some reference to class, ethnicity, gender or religion as well.)

For those curious, the first afd ended in utter chaos (the closing admin's comments must be seen to be believed), the second ended in a deletion that was subsequently overturned, the third resulted in a "keep" vote, and the fourth ended with a procedural closure. In other words, there is no strong historical precedent that this article should be retained. In fact, this article's stature is so low in some circles that it's actually been parodied on non-article space (see WP:Allegations of allegations of apartheid apartheid).

I should also note that the previous four nominations took place against the backdrop of controversy over the page Allegations of Israeli apartheid. As this page has now been retitled as Israel and the apartheid analogy, and all of the other "Allegations of [...] Apartheid" pages have been removed, there seems little reason to retain this article. CJCurrie (talk) 03:37, 8 July 2008 (UTC) updated 23:35, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Further comment The following discussions may also be of interest:

• Allegations of Israeli apartheid (5th nom) (opened 19 Apr 2007, closed as "no consensus")
• Allegations of French apartheid (opened 16 Jul 2007, closed as "no consensus"). Article renamed as Social situation in the French suburbs
• Allegations of Jordanian apartheid (opened 19 Jul 2007, closed as "delete")
• Allegations of American apartheid (opened 24 Jul 2007, closed as "delete")
• Centralized discussion/Apartheid (opened 24 Jul 2007, inconclusive)
• Allegations of Saudi Arabian apartheid (opened 31 Jul 2007, procedurally closed in deference to the centralized discussion) Article renamed as Human rights in Saudi Arabia
• Allegations of Chinese apartheid (opened 2 Aug 2007, closed as "delete")
• Template:Allegations of apartheid (opened 21 Aug 2007, closed as "delete")
• Allegations of Israeli apartheid (7th nom) (opened 3 Sep 2007, procedurally closed in deference to the ArbCom case) Article renamed as Israel and the apartheid analogy
• Allegations of apartheid in Slovakia and the Czech Republic (opened 20 Nov 2007, closed as "delete")

CJCurrie (talk) 03:36, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

This listing is utterly irrelevant to this discussion and misleading, as the voting editors don't have opportunity to review the merits of articles that were deleted; and it would be undue burden to expect them to review the state of the articles that were kept at the time they were up for deletion. Whether the article up for deletion should be kept or not should be based on the merits of the article itself, not on opinons about certain editors. CJCurrie has not explained why these discussions may be of interest, save to express some (absolutely unfounded) theories about the thinking patterns of some imagined group of editors with whom he appears to have a disagreement or personal beef (not clear which). CJCurrie also refuses to discuss this issue in the talk page. I can think of many other discussions that also might be of interest to voting editors, but will refrain from including them here pending a constructive discussion. --Leifern (talk) 16:36, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Response I agree that Allegations of apartheid should be deleted on its (lack of) merits, but it's also important for newcomers to know that there's a history to this discussion. It's also worth mentioning that four arbitrators concluded that the voting patterns of a real group of editors amounted to a WP:POINT violation, and that nine arbitrators concluded "Allegations of Israeli apartheid" was central to the broader debate. I would tend to think this is entirely relevant. CJCurrie (talk) 16:45, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

If this article should be deleted or kept on the basis of its merits, what possible relevance does a completely different article, Allegations of Israeli apartheid have? You were among those who said that the existence of an article about alleged apartheid in Israel had absolutely nothing to do with alleged apartheid in other states; and then constructed the case you were referring to out of thin air. And now you are the one who wants to couple the issues for your own purpose. And to take it even further, what possible relevance does it have that four arbitrators at one point in a messy case they eventually gave up, decided they could read my mind? What you seem be saying is that you think that it is time to finish the work you started in the failed Arbcom case, namely to make it difficult for editors who in your opinion have a pro-Israeli bias to edit articles related to Israel? --Leifern (talk) 16:53, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

The relevance of "Allegations of Israeli apartheid" to this article will be obvious to everyone who's looked over its history. The only reason User:Jayjg brought back Allegations of apartheid as a full article in 2006 was to merge Israeli apartheid into it. This isn't speculation -- he acknowledged it at the time! I'm against this strategy for two reasons: (i) Israel and the apartheid analogy is an encyclopedic topic that deserves its own article, (ii) Allegations of apartheid is a WP:SYNTH violation that fails on its own merits.

I don't completely follow the rest of your comments, though suffice it to say: (i) the arbcom case ended in a stalemate, but four arbitrators still endorsed the view that Jayjg and others were taking part in a WP:POINT violation centred around "Allegations of Israeli apartheid", which suggests the accusation wasn't invented out of nowhere, (ii) I'd very much prefer to get over the "pro-Israel/anti-Israel" dichotomy and just work on creating encyclopedic articles. CJCurrie (talk) 22:16, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Then why do you bring in these other articles and keep bringing up Jayjg's supposed motivation for starting this article? You're arguing a particular line of reasoning to make your point (that the article only exists to serve some kind of purpose that has to do with Israel), but you categorically close the door to the equivalent line of reasoning on the other side (that you want the article deleted to single out Israel).

Also, why is it important why a particular article is started? I started an article on Stein Ørnhøi, a Norwegian politician. Do I need a good reason to start it? Should I have to explain myself in case I did it to make some kind of point that some people might not like?

As for the four Arbcom members, I am inclined to round up those mentioned by them and start this issue all over again with these four so we can get on with our lives. I decided at the time to just let things go rather than go nuts trying to explain why I voted each time; but if my vote on AFDs is going to get discounted on any article that has any connection with Israel because these four arbcom members didn't understand my actions, then I'll start a campaign to vindicate myself. So either you drop this argument, or I'll take it to these arbcom members that you think their views at the time gives you a carte blanche to assume bad faith on my part. --Leifern (talk) 23:22, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Responses: (i) I've already answered the other "line of reasoning": Israel isn't being "singled out", and the Israeli apartheid analogy is encyclopedic in any event, (ii) this article is rather different from a biographical piece on Stein Ørnhøi, (iii) I agree that Jayjg's professed reason for re-establishing the article is not directly relevant to the question of whether or not it should be deleted now; it is relevant to the question of how we got to this stage, (iv) I'm not arguing that your "vote" should be discarded, though I'll note that afds aren't supposed to be votes in the first place. CJCurrie (talk) 03:34, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep, of course. These kinds of allegations are made by many reliable sources, referring to specific types of (perceived) institutionalized discrimination with a great deal in common - which is why, of course, people use a common term for it, "apartheid". What has marred these discussions are the contributions of a specific banned editor, and his 20 or more banned sockpuppets, who have collectively done little but create heat rather than light on this specific topic - including creating the original "Israeli apartheid" article, and then creating strawman sockpuppets for the purpose of fake AfDs, which would then ensure that articles he preferred were retained. On this article alone he has deleted most of the content, deleted what little was left, put it up for deletion, deleted even more, then deleted even more again, all in a desperate attempt to make this article deletion-worthy. While the allegations against some countries (e.g. Israel, Brazil, Cuba, France, China) have received more attention than others, what should really be done with all of these "apartheid" articles is that they should be merged into one main article - this one - and this article should cover the whole topic to the extent that it deserves. And if CJCurrie's issue is with the phrase "Allegations", there's no reason why this article couldn't be renamed "Apartheid analogies", in line with the other article renaming. Jayjg ^(talk) 04:28, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Comment I suppose I was naive to hope this could be drawn to a quick resolution.
  In response to Jay's statement, I should note that this particular controversy actually predates the creation of the Israeli apartheid page. To the best of my knowledge, it began with the creation of this subsection of the "Apartheid in South Africa" article on 15 November 2004, which in turn led to this retitling less than an hour later. This material was later spun off to "Apartheid Outside South Africa" (which, in turn, was later retitled as Allegations of Apartheid) via this edit and this edit on 10 June 2005. The section on Israel was removed in February 2006, and the article was reduced to a redirect later in the same day. It was only expanded again on 5 June 2006, when Jayjg tried to merge Israeli apartheid (phrase) into a larger article.
  I'm quite aware that Jayjg has never accepted the legitimacy of an article on Israel and the apartheid analogy, but that matter now been resolved to the satisfaction of most parties, and Jay's suggestion that all of the "allegations" should be merged into a single article is a complete non-starter. The partisan gamesmanship that's taken place on both sides of this debate has been one of Wikipedia's least edifying spectacles of the last few years, and I think it's time we all moved on from this. Retitling Allegations of Israeli apartheid was a good start; deleting Allegations of apartheid would be a good next step. I could add that past situations involving now-banned editors are not germane to the present discussion.
  My question to Jay: how is this article not a violation of WP:SYNTH and WP:NOR? Our standards have improved somewhat from 2005, after all. CJCurrie (talk) 05:14, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure what you mean by "that matter now been resolved to the satisfaction of most parties"; a series of mostly strawman AfDs doesn't particularly resolve anything, and it sometimes takes the community quite a few AfDs to come to a decision - see, for example, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Daniel Brandt (14th nomination). I note that the article you refer to is, after 4761 edits, still an unreadable, edit-war riven, unholy mess. As for "The partisan gamesmanship that's taken place on both sides of this debate", your nomination is hardly "moving on", but rather is just one more example of it. Can anyone honestly say that Wikipedia wouldn't be better served by including all of these similar types of analogies/allegations into one comprehensive article? As always, I'm willing to abide by whatever standard Wikipedia wants to set for its articles, but I'm hoping we'll give common sense a chance for a change, rather than trying to destroy any possibility of it. Jayjg ^(talk) 05:36, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
    • Israel and the apartheid analogy could stand a bit more polishing, but there's now a general agreement that the subject matter is encyclopedic. Given the growing number of former Israeli politicians who have weighed in the matter, one would think this particular controversy should be at an end.
      In response to your question, I think that Wikipedia would be best served by having individual articles on apartheid analogies (as applied to countries other than South Africa) when these have been the subject of serious academic and sustained journalistic discussion. In practice, this means that we should have articles on Israel and the apartheid analogy and Social apartheid in Brazil; one could possibly add Tourist apartheid in Cuba to the list, and, who knows, there may be some scholarly legitimacy to the Chinese apartheid analogy by the time the 2008 Olympic games are over.
      Wikipedia is not served well by Allegations of apartheid, the sources for which mostly consist of passing references to apartheid comparisons in standalone articles.
      And I doubt that anyone regards the Daniel Brandt situation as a stellar example of how Wikipedia articles should be managed. CJCurrie (talk) 05:47, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep - this article is just the thing for a high school student doing some research for an essay. None of the related articles (such as racial segregation) quite address the exact topic that this article is about. The article is heavily referenced (the list of references is longer than the main text of the article), it is written from a neutral point of view, and it is thoroughly wikified. Keep! - Richard Cavell (talk) 05:08, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Comment I can understand this position, but I don't think it's the right standard by which to measure this article. The problem with Allegations of Apartheid is that it's based almost entirely on original research and synthesized research: most of the citations are taken from scattered references in unrelated primary sources, and these do not amount to an encyclopedic article when considered together. CJCurrie (talk) 05:28, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete. It is true that nearly each sentence or information has its reference. Sometimes it even has several ones. This is a good point. BUT the whole topic seems to be a synthesized research. INDEED, who are the scholars (here sociologists or political scientists are expected) who studied, as a whole, the allegations of apartheid carried against the different countries or regime around the world ? If the topic was physics, and if somebody would have gathered different experiment results or comment to point out an hypothesis, it would certainly be speedy deleted. Here, because the topic is (also) political, it seems to me other standards apply... Ceedjee (talk) 07:03, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per the well argued nom and the wel argued deletion vote by Ceedjee above. They have basically argued all the objections I have to articles like this. Viridae^Talk 07:29, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep, but rename to Apartheid analogies. -- Olve Utne (talk) 15:05, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete forthwith. It's a random assemblage of primary sources that happen to use the word "apartheid" in passing; these have been googled-up, huddled together, and awkwardly cordoned off with a sophomoric OR-synthesis: "Allegations of apartheid have been made, informally, against societies beyond South Africa...Apartheid has been used in compound phrases coined to compare actual or alleged forms of segregation, discrimination or disparity to South African apartheid." There are no secondary sources grouping these disparate items or observing these rhetorical trends, or even discussing "allegations of apartheid" as a topic in itself at all. This is purely a Wikipedia invention. The idea may be to create and sustain some sort of larger umbrella topic of which the Israeli apartheid analogy will appear as only one example, but this larger umbrella category of discourse – "allegations of apartheid" in a general sense – has not been recognized as a topic in the real world. For us to invent it is original research.--G-Dett (talk) 15:48, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete Not only per the nominators fantastic reasoning as to why the sources do not establish profound notability, but as to the unnotability of the topic itself. While many countries may have had allegations of apartheid made against them, I can't see any useful reason to have a topic discussing them all (each individual case can obviously be referenced on the countires article etc.), or given the quite drastic cover of definitions of apartheid in the sources, what definition it is that actual links this articles content. The article while appearing to be structured, is nothing more than a list of indiscriminate information, which doesn't even provide useful connections to other areas of wikipedia. - Jimmi Hugh (talk) 17:15, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete, or rather redirect to a general article on apartheid. Extended diatribes about the motives or conduct of editors, even if their content is accurate, have no bearing on the subject of this discussion, and votes (whether "keep" or "delete") based on them should be ignored by the closing admin. On point: While the individual data points used to construct this article are indeed reliably sourced, there are currently no sources provided which are actually about the topic "allegations of apartheid," ie, about the uses and abuses of the word "apartheid" in political discourse. If anybody can find a book, monograph, or even scholarly journal article which is actually about the subject (I'm mentally picturing something like a book called "The A-Word: Apartheid Rhetoric in Contemporary Ethnopolitics,") there would at least be a valid, if not necessarily convincing, case to keep this article. Absent such a source, it is clearly novel synthesis of unrelated material. <eleland/talkedits> 21:00, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

• Comment We've tried that before; in fact, there's a year or more worth of discussion about that at WP:APARTHEID. The current solution of redirecting Apartheid to South African Apartheid and having this article be the catch-all of Apartheid outside of South Africa seems to be working well. AfD isn't the right place to rework all that, imo. -- Kendrick7^talk 04:05, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep and rename, presumably to Apartheid analogies or Apartheid analogy. It seems kind of strange to me that some people think it is ok to have an "Apartheid analogy" article about one specific country, which is basically an attack piece against that country, but we can't have a more general article about the "apartheid analogy" phenomenon worldwide. (The absence of any country's name from the title of this particular article means that it does not present the same POV problems that the other one does, which is why it is consistent to favor deletion of the other one but retention of this one -- in case anyone is keeping track.) As for the current structure and text of the article, it is pretty bad, but that is mostly because after the failed attempt to get rid of it the last time, banned editor Homey aka Lothar of the Hill People basically destroyed the existing article and turned it into the current piece of garbage. Maybe we should go back to the text from about a year ago and people can start improving it from there. Presumably, any sources that do not mention "apartheid" should be removed from the article. Improvement is the answer, rather than deletion. 6SJ7 (talk) 21:39, 8 July 2008 (UTC)Update: The article has been moved to Apartheid analogies. 6SJ7 (talk) 21:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
  • 6SJ7, we've been through this many times. The reason to have the Israel article and the Brazil article but not a general article is not that Israel and Brazil are somehow the worst countries in the world, or the most appallingly racist or apartheid-like or whatever. The reason is simply that in both cases a body of literature (in the Israel case a vast body of literature) exists which discusses the meme itself – debating its merits, describing its history and attendent controversies, and so on. Meanwhile no body of literature exists that discusses "allegations of apartheid" or "the apartheid analogy" in a general sense. As a general subject, it was invented on Wikipedia.
    By the way, you're right that the current version doesn't read as coherently as the one from last year. But the old one had a much bigger problem in that it seriously misrepresented its sources. Material focusing on the Israeli apartheid analogy was presented as if it addressed the merits of apartheid analogies in general.--G-Dett (talk) 21:57, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
    • This is not really the place to discuss the contents of the "Israel and the..." article, but most of the sources in that article are not of the kind you describe. They are just name-calling or taking quotations out of context. (I said "most", so don't quote me counter-examples because they are irrelevant.) As for the apartheid analogy in a general sense being "invented" on Wikipedia, there have been dozens of examples of the analogy being used cited in a number of different articles, though whether they are all still on Wikipedia after last year's Great Purge, I do not know. Some, obviously, are in this very article. Would the article be stronger if there were several books about the general use of the analogy? Sure. But that's not the test for inclusion of an article on Wikipedia. 6SJ7 (talk) 22:18, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
      • Actually, that is sort of the test for inclusion. You need secondary sources about the analogy itself in order to establish its notability. Wikipedians' observations about rhetorical trends in discussions across sundry topics do not establish the notability of this or that meme.--G-Dett (talk) 22:28, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
  • 6SJ7 writes: It seems kind of strange to me that some people think it is ok to have an "Apartheid analogy" article about one specific country, which is basically an attack piece against that country [...]
    My response: Israel and the apartheid analogy is not an attack piece against Israel; it's an overview of the serious academic discussions (and sustained journalistic discussions) that have taken place regarding the analogy mentioned in the title. I suspect that some editors will never reconcile themselves to the existence of an article with both "Israel" and "apartheid" in the title, but this particular debate has become extremely stale and most parties have by now concluded that the article is encyclopedic.
    By contrast, keeping Allegations of apartheid alive in the hopes that Israel and the apartheid analogy will one day be merged with it is not encyclopedic.
    Btw, it might be worth mentioning that four members of the 2007 Arbitration Committee voted to endorse the following statement:

    "Seven editors (Gzuckier (talk · contribs), Humus sapiens (talk · contribs), IronDuke (talk · contribs), Jayjg (talk · contribs), JoshuaZ (talk · contribs), Leifern (talk · contribs), and Tickle me (talk · contribs)) voted to delete the allegations of Israeli apartheid article, largely on principle, after having earlier voted to keep the allegations of Brazilian apartheid article. Given the circumstances, the only reasonable explanation for this voting pattern is that the editors in question were attempting to prove a point regarding the allegations of Israeli apartheid article." (see Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Allegations of apartheid/Proposed decision, Proposed Finding of Fact #6)
    This case eventually collapsed due to unresolvable divisions among the arbitrators, but the fact that four committee members were willing to endorse the aforementioned statement suggests that it wasn't a completely arbitrary charge. It's probably also worth noting that nine arbitrators agreed that "Allegations of Israeli apartheid" was the locus of the dispute. I would tend to think that these matters bear some relevance to the present discussion. CJCurrie (talk) 23:27, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

    • Four out of twelve arbitrators. Jayjg ^(talk) 01:20, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
      • Four out of eight who voted. CJCurrie (talk) 03:29, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
        • The proposed finding of fact that you mention was hardly one of Arbcom's finest moment, as it sought to infer culpability without a) even asking those of us charged what our reasoning was; and b) faulty logic to begin with. --Leifern (talk) 19:25, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
          • I suppose that's one way of looking at it, but this view was assuredly not shared by all parties. CJCurrie (talk) 00:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
            • I think that any finding of fact that makes assumption about people's motivations based on just a few data points is questionable by any standard. --Leifern (talk) 02:08, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
              • I would encourage all interested parties to review the evidence and come to their own conclusions. CJCurrie (talk) 03:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep: This does seem to be a case of keep nominating an article until you get the result you want. It's survived four deletion discussions and now there's a fifth. If it survives this, then someone will, I'd venture, have yet another go. Renaming to Apartheid analogies seems acceptable. Analogies of X to apartheid are common currency (and indeed overused) in political discourse and this article usefully draws these together. Nunquam Dormio (talk) 21:47, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Only one of the four previous nominations resulted in a "keep" vote. Of the three others, one resulted in a deletion that was later overturned, one was closed on procedural grounds, and the other ended in utter chaos. Moreover, all of the previous nominations took place against a politically-charged backdrop rooted in divisions over the status of the Allegations of Israeli apartheid article. That matter has now been resolved to the satisfaction of most parties, and I think it's time that we reviewed Allegations of apartheid with new eyes. CJCurrie (talk) 23:33, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
    • On the contrary, the issue of the Allegations of Israeli apartheid article has hardly been "resolved to the satisfaction of most parties". The AfDs for it were far more polluted than those for this article, with a couple of straw-man nominations by the article creator to poison the discussion right off the start, and most of the rest being various silly nominations by new editors etc. The only real AfD was Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of Israeli apartheid (5th nomination), in which the !vote ended up at 30 Keep, 35 Delete. Most sensible people have mostly decided to avoid that article as a festering sore that contaminates any who touch it. And there are very few "new" eyes viewing this nomination; rather, it's the same old partisans, making the same nominations and the same tired arguments. By the way, do you plan to argue with every single person who !votes keep? Jayjg ^(talk) 00:53, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
      • It's worth noting that what Jay is arguing was the only "real AfD" was precisely the one where his vote (along with that of six other editors) was determined by several Arbcom members to have been made in bad faith. See CJ's comment above.--G-Dett (talk) 01:08, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
        • It's even more worth noting that only 4 out of 12 active arbitrators made that determination, and, in fact, they made that determination based on the statement of yet another editor, one who was assumed to have been involved in editing the related articles and therefore relevant, but in fact, had never edited them. Jayjg ^(talk) 01:20, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
          • Four arbcom members made this determination, four expressed reluctance about generalizations, and four didn't comment. Are you saying that the first four based their determination solely on a statement by an uninvolved editor? They didn't look at diffs, weigh evidence, or exercise any other due diligence? You have experience in Arbcom; is this how things are usually done, or an unusual example of gross negligence?--G-Dett (talk) 02:57, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
          • It may be worth noting that the most recent afd on "Allegations of Israeli apartheid" ended with 36 "keep" votes and 15 "delete" votes (refer: [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of Israeli apartheid (8th nomination)). I agree that it was a silly nomination from an inexperienced editor, but the outcome was still rather conclusive.
            Btw, Jay, I believe that some editors may regard this post of yours as proof that you've finally reconciled yourself to the existence of the Israel and the apartheid analogy article. Would that view be mistaken? CJCurrie (talk) 03:47, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep might as well...- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 20:42, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Arbitrary break 1

• Keep. Suggest renaming to Countries and Apartheid analogies. Amoruso (talk) 22:39, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete. This article suffers from the same fundamental WP:SYNTH problem as several other now-deleted "allegations of apartheid" articles (see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of Chinese apartheid and Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of American apartheid). It's an obvious piece of original research by synthesis, like the other articles. Looking at the sources, it's clear that the article is based not on any secondary source about "allegations of apartheid", but on little more than a Google search of a country's name plus the word "apartheid". To take two examples from a part of the world I know well, Bosnia and Macedonia, the article's flaws are obvious: "Other countries whose practices have been compared to apartheid include Bosnia and Herzegovina" (based on the word appearing in a single op-ed piece in The Guardian) and "Greece for its treatment of Macedonians" (based on, again, one source - one mention in one book). It goes on like this for example after example, giving no indication of who is making the "allegations of apartheid" (a misnomer in itself, since the word is often used as an analogy, not an allegation), often not stating even what the allegations/analogies actually are, or how widespread such views are. In effect, the article is little more than a "list of occasions when someone has used the word 'apartheid' about a country", with no regard for the due weight of that POV. This is not a viable basis for a Wikipedia article. -- ChrisO (talk) 22:55, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete The arguments about WP:SYNTH are compelling. The individual elements may be well sourced, but the overall article is very much a synthesis. It seems to me very similar to some of the lists I've seen removed of late. In fact, had it been a category called "List of Countries Accused of Apartheid" I imagine it wouldn't have survived long. --InkSplotch (talk) 00:50, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
  • In fact, if you go back to the first version of this article you'll see that it was conceived as an alphabetical list. -- ChrisO (talk) 18:16, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep per Jay. Briangotts (Talk) (Contrib) 03:25, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep I'm not seeing the WP:NOR issue here: There's plenty of reliable sources supporting the notion, and all are obviously tied together by the "apartheid" concept. FeloniousMonk (talk) 11:51, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
  • The NOR issue is specifically one of synthesis. The individual sources are certainly reliable but that's not the point. As I've pointed out above, the article has been compiled essentially by trawling Google for any occasion when someone has used the term "apartheid" in relation to arbitrary countries. This is a classic example of synthesis; to quote WP:SYNTH, "Material published by reliable sources can inadvertently be put together in a way that constitutes original research. Synthesizing material occurs when an editor comes to a conclusion by putting together different sources." In this case, the conclusion is that there is a worldwide phenomenon of "allegations of apartheid"; this has been supported by putting together different sources, none of which states that conclusion. The article cites no secondary sources that treat "allegations of apartheid" thematically, as opposed to individual mentions of the term.
    In addition, as I've also pointed out, the article drastically fails the NPOV undue weight requirement in that it gives no weight whatsoever to the different "allegations" it cites. How notable is it that a Guardian journalist once wrote an op-ed piece comparing the social situation in Bosnia to apartheid? Yet the article blithely informs us of "allegations of apartheid in Bosnia" based on this one op-ed piece. -- ChrisO (talk) 18:16, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
    • I don't see NOR or WP:SYNTH. If the article could stand as a list that coheres under a sourcable concept, it coheres enough to avoid those issues. Apartheid exists as a concept in international law and even a concept (perhaps not exactly the same concept, but no more than a variation of an idea) in public discourse. All elements of the article with a direct connection to either (or any) of those variations in the idea would show that the article avoids WP:SYNTH. The title of the article and its format may only hint it, but this looks a lot like an article that should have been formated as a list. It's a short list with a bit of introductory prose that would fit well into Crime of apartheid since its length doesn't warrant its own article and doesn't show signs of being expandable enough to make a separate article necessary. Noroton (talk) 01:37, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per the WP:SYNTH issues raised above.--Cúchullain ^t/c 14:57, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete. A fairly transparent POV attempt, along the lines of the prior seies of "Allegations of X Apartheid" articles, to portray what is overwhelmingly a phenomenon specific to a single country as a generic condition affecting numerous countries. Tegwarrior (talk) 17:20, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep - this is, and should be, an article about political rhetoric, and then it is only appropriate that it covers a wide range of examples of that rhetoric. I think Tegwarrior (right above here) reveals his/her bias pretty clearly, which is a preference to single out one country by only writing the article about it. --Leifern (talk) 19:25, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

You make a reasonable argument for an article titled "Political rhetoric." However, whether you like it or not, the term "Apartheid" has been broadly used to describe the actions of only three countries, and two of these only in their policies since abandoned (one of these - the United States - only ever having had the term applied to it in distant retrospective). The "bias" you believe you perceive is not mine, but the world's. If you want to eliminate it, I think your most productive course of action would be to write books and articles on Cambodian and French and Saudi and Brazilian Apartheid, and not to insist that Wikipedia act as if such books and articles already exist, along with a vast readership. Good luck finding a publisher. Tegwarrior (talk) 01:32, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• • It's interesting that the people !voting to keep so far are almost all Israel-focused editors, as is the person who created the article in the first place; your comments make the agenda here pretty obvious. -- ChrisO (talk) 19:46, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
    • ChrisO: What evidence do you have that I am an Israel-focused editor? What evidence is there in my comments that my agenda is anything but what I am writing? What basis do you have for making such accusations? Honestly, you claim to be an expert Wikipedian, yet you make these accusations and sweeping pronouncements without any discernible substantiation. --Leifern (talk) 19:55, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
      • Well, I was trying to put it more diplomatically than "pro-Israel partisans". *shrug* -- ChrisO (talk) 20:26, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
        • Which doesn't change my point at all - what evidence do you have that I or anyone else that has voted here is a "pro-Israel partisan?" This is very simple: stay with the issue at hand and stop making accusations that you can't possibly substantiate. --Leifern (talk) 20:45, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
          • Let me refer you back to the evidence I gave in the arbitration case mentioned earlier, at Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Allegations of apartheid/Evidence#Diametrically-opposed positions and non-policy-based block voting, which implicated you and a number of other allied editors in a systematic pattern of tactical !voting on AfDs. This is more of the same, I'm afraid. -- ChrisO (talk) 21:17, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
            • You didn't gave evidence - you presented allegations, just like you are doing now. There is a difference between facts and your opinion. Aside from that, this is one vote on one issue - how can there be a pattern? Not only that, you are claiming that everyone who voted to keep this article is doing so because of some imagined pro-Israeli advocacy. --Leifern (talk) 23:57, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
              • I'm afraid, Leifern, that this is not just a matter of one vote on one issue. I don't believe that everyone who's voted to keep Allegations of apartheid is approaching the issue from the same perspective, but there's still a transparently obvious pattern here ... and anyone who's familiar with the situation will realize that it's centered around Israel and the apartheid analogy. CJCurrie (talk) 00:56, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
                • Wouldn't this be a more constructive discussion if we focused on the merits of the article rather than suppositions about various editors' motivations? --Leifern (talk) 02:08, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
                  • Just a reminder, Leifern – with genuine respect for the gist of what you're saying – that your first post to this page (your "keep" vote) was a supposition about another editor's motivation.--G-Dett (talk) 02:43, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
                    • No, I wrote - just a few lines above - that "this is, and should be, an article about political rhetoric, and then it is only appropriate that it covers a wide range of examples of that rhetoric." And then I commented on precisely the rationale given by the editor above me. Which was all about some assumed motivations of people who had edited the article. --Leifern (talk) 19:24, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep. Fifth nomination? Someone needs to get a grip. Any article which has passed four afds has been thoroughly vetted by the community. — goethean ॐ 19:56, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Ahem. Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Daniel_Brandt_(14th_nomination)--Cúchullain ^t/c 21:13, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
    • So what? I'm pointing out that this is ludicrous, and you point to something even more ludicrous. What does that prove? — goethean ॐ 20:24, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
      • I would think it proves that the community doesn't get things right the first time, or indeed the first 13 times in that case. Also, could you possibly offer a substantive rationale for your keep !vote? Please don't forget that you're supposed to "make recommendations on the course of action to be taken, sustained by arguments." The closing admin is entitled to ignore !votes with no rationales. -- ChrisO (talk) 20:27, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
        • Exactly. Consensus can change over time, as in the case with Daniel Brandt. Just because something is kept once, twice, or more times doesn't mean it should always be kept, especially in cases such as this where no clear consensus has developed. This article did not "pass" four AfDs, all manner of things have happened to it (including a deletion which was overturned later). This very issue was addressed by the nominator.--Cúchullain ^t/c 20:46, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
        • Nominating the same article over and over again is an abuse of the process. — goethean ॐ 20:50, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
          • Except that no consensus whatsoever developed after the previous AfDs, and as the issues raised there still stand, attempts to handle them are warranted.--Cúchullain ^t/c 21:09, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Comment. I've updated the table of prior discussions with a better list. I've also added some links to possibly-related deletion discussions. Note: I deliberately did not include every discussion which included the word "apartheid" but tried to select those discussions which were well-enough referenced that other discussions chose to link to them. Rossami (talk) 21:25, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep if for no other reason that this statement "This article has long been a source of controversy, and is regarded by many as a WP:SYNTH violation ..." is no more than an appeal to the public and argumentum ad verecundiam, the authority being the alleged "many". (A use of "many" nebulous enough to imply that the "many" are in the majority). But, I digress, the term and concept exists, we are here to report it. Improve the article, don't delete it just because you find it displeasing and contentious. &#0149;Jim62sch&#0149;^dissera! 21:38, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Comment Have you read WP:SYNTH? If you are going to quote mention of a policy which applies perfectly to this case then at least support it, don't use the quote as reasoning for Keeping this Original Research just because you didn't like the way the argument was worded. I assume from the fact you didn't actual propose a counter argument, that you agree this is entirely Synthesised for the purpose of making a point? Infact... go back through that and you can label two more policy Violations, however Synth pretty much covers it. - Jimmi Hugh (talk) 21:43, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Did you read the part after "But, I digress,"? (The argument put forth by the nominator is so poor as to not really require a vigorous counter-argument.) Anyway, read the part after the digression. &#0149;Jim62sch&#0149;^dissera! 22:03, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

I read your comment fully thankyou, questioning that in this case didn't really make sense, considering my point stands. You didn't make a counter argument as to why this is not a synthesis, you simply stated matter of factly that there is notabilty. Clearly you didn't read the references, none of which mention the topic of "Allegations of apartheid" and all of which are brought together purely for the purpose of Original Research. Please remeber there are other Policies by which an article can be unsuitable, Notability through lots of somewhat related references are not the only reason to keep an article. - Jimmi Hugh (talk) 22:10, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

If it's synthesised, fix it rather than try to delete it. It's that simple.

From the OED:

Name given in South Africa to the segregation of the inhabitants of European descent from the non-European (Coloured or mixed, Bantu, Indian, etc.); applied also to any similar movement elsewhere; also, to other forms of racial separation (social, educational, etc.). Also fig. and attrib.

[1929 J. C. DU PLESSIS in Die N.G. Kerk in die O.V.S. en die Naturelle-Vraagstuk 22 In hierdie grondbegrip van Sendingwerk en nie in rassevooroordeel nie, moet die verklaring gesoek word vir die gees van apartheid wat ons gedragslyn nog altoos gekenmerk het.] 1947 Cape Times 24 Oct. 7/7 Mr. Hofmeyr said apartheid could not be reconciled with a policy of progress and prosperity for South Africa. 1948 Ibid. 12 Aug. 1/1 Mr. P. O. Sauer..will explain the application of the apartheid policy on the railways. Ibid. 13 Aug. 8 It is always easy to discern the immediate benefits or comforts conferred on the apartheid-minded Europeans, but impossible to discern the benefits conferred on the non-Europeans. 1949 Ibid. 18 July 9/3 Apartheid is to be introduced at the Kimberley Post Office as soon as necessary structural alterations can be made. Separate counters will be provided for European and non-European customers. 1949 Manch. Guardian 13 July 4/6 Thus Dr. Malan's policy of ‘Apartheid’ for the non-Europeans, which is only the Dutch word for Field Marshal Smuts's policy of ‘segregation’, which in turn is only a pretty word for repression, is achieving a position of ‘Apartheid’, in the literal sense of isolation, for the nation as a whole. 1950 Hansard Commons CCCCLXXVI. 2020 It does not really justify making a sort of political apartheid as the basis of one's foreign policy. 1953 J. PACKER Apes & Ivory ii. 17 This residential and social apartheid is not artificial. It is in the very nature of life in South Africa. What is new in apartheid is the Immorality Act which forbids intimacy between White and Brown. 1955 Times 5 July 6/3 The Archbishop of Canterbury, Dr. Fisher, drew a parallel yesterday between the political apartheid which he had seen in South Africa, separating the nation, and ecclesiastical apartheid which prevented unity among the churches. 1958 Times Lit. Suppl. 21 Nov. 674/5 The tristichs deprived of their rhyming nexus suggest only a metrical apartheid. 1959 Times 28 Feb. 7/3 Some system of apartheid in Central Africa would result. 1959 News Chron. 13 Aug. 4/1 Without going to extreme lengths of apartheid, it should still be..possible to allow those who smoke to do so..on a bus top, reserving the lower deck to those who find the habit revolting. 1961 Times 15 Mar. 14/2 The South African Broadcasting Corporation said the word apartheid would now not be used except in direct quotation... It would use the word ‘self-development’ to describe the Government's race policies. 1963 Listener 25 Apr. 699/1 It was Sir Charles Snow who first put about the idea of cultural apartheid.

&#0149;Jim62sch&#0149;^dissera! 22:12, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

"If it's synthesised, fix it rather than try to delete it." Ordinarily I would agree, but the problem we have in this case is that the fundamental concept of the article is irretrievably flawed. It's based on the supposition that there is a worldwide phenomenon of "allegations of apartheid", but none of the references in the article discuss this alleged phenomenon. The article instead argues for the existence of such a phenomenon, based on citing random instances when someone has used the word "apartheid" in relation to various countries. That's the heart of the problem. "Unpublished facts, arguments, speculation, and ideas", such as the claimed existence of an "allegations of apartheid" phenomenon, are exactly what WP:NOR prohibits. -- ChrisO (talk) 22:27, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Well said. Articles about political discourse and rhetorical trends can be terrific, but they need sources that actually write about those things, not sources that supposedly exemplify them.--G-Dett (talk) 00:11, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Thank you for your suggestion. When you feel an article needs improvement, please feel free to make those changes. Wikipedia is a wiki, so anyone can edit almost any article by simply following the edit this page link at the top. The Wikipedia community encourages you to be bold in updating pages. Don't worry too much about making honest mistakes — they're likely to be found and corrected quickly. If you're not sure how editing works, check out how to edit a page, or use the sandbox to try out your editing skills. New contributors are always welcome. You don't even need to log in (although there are many reasons why you might want to). &#0149;Jim62sch&#0149;^dissera! 22:40, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the sofixit template Jim. I should create a template for the following response, since I've typed so many versions of it. In a nutshell: I don't think the sourcing issue can be fixed because so far as I can tell, there are no secondary sources for this topic. This is what I meant when I said it appears to be a made-up topic. Wikipedians using search engines have discovered what they think is a rhetorical trend in discussion of everything from Bosnia/Herzegovina to the worldwide distribution of potable water, but no one describes that rhetorical trend except them. The thing this article is about is not recognized as a thing by any real-world RS; this is what I mean when I say no sources. I've looked for sources myself to no avail, and asked others for them and got nothing.--G-Dett (talk) 23:10, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

You searched all 5 million potential sources? Woe. &#0149;Jim62sch&#0149;^dissera! 18:47, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Question for "delete"rs: For those who are saying there is an "original sythensis" here, can someone quote me the exact words in the article that constitute the "synthesis"? When I look at the intro, I see no "conclusion" or "supposition", or any statement about a "phenomenon." All I see is statements about how a particular word has been used. Also, I'm not sure what it means for an article to have a "fundamental concept" apart from its actual words. (All these quoted terms happen to be from posts by ChrisO, but anyone can answer.) What actual words represent the "synthesis"? 6SJ7 (talk) 23:24, 9 July 2008 (UTC)Update: Nobody below has really answered the question, so I have to conclude that there is no valid argument that this article is an original synthesis. 6SJ7 (talk) 21:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

• Every sentence that discusses the topic of this article, "allegations of apartheid," is a synthesis. From the first sentence forward. Because that topic doesn't exist as a general topic in the real world; it was formulated here.--G-Dett (talk) 00:14, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• Although this should probably go without saying, I will say it anyway: I don't think that even comes close to answering my question. You need to show what the synthesis actually is, from the words of the article, in order to show that there actually is a synthesis. As for the title, it can be changed. 6SJ7 (talk) 01:11, 10 July 2008 (UTC)Update: The article has been moved to Apartheid analogies. 6SJ7 (talk) 21:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

• Actually, no, you need to start with the lead and show us which reliable sources claim that "allegations of apartheid have been made, informally, against societies beyond South Africa," which ones claim that "activists and political theorists have used the term 'apartheid' to describe other perceived social or political discrimination," and which ones claim that "apartheid has been used in compound phrases coined to compare actual or alleged forms of segregation, discrimination or disparity to South African apartheid."--G-Dett (talk) 02:05, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• The article is a synthesis in the sense that it draws together a large number of fleeting references to "apartheid" in relation to countries other than South Africa. There is neither a scholarly nor a serious journalistic discussion behind "use of the apartheid analogy, in a general sense". CJCurrie (talk) 22:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Answer. In just a quick look, I can answer your question in one word: "Arab." The second sentence of the Post-South Africa section reads, "In France the word apartheid has been used to describe the social situation in the French suburbs where Arab immigrants are not integrated with the general French population and live with inferior social services and housing." (italics added) The sentence has two footnotes, the first of which points to the article Postcolonial Urban Apartheid, and the second of which contains an excerpt from an interview of Tariq Ramadan. After the "Allegations of apartheid" article describes the UN definition of apartheid as referring to "racially based policies in any state," we handily see it reported that in France the term has been used to describe the situation of "Arab immigrants" there. All very good, right? We have the state; we have the affected race. The affected race is even Arabs, which perhaps goes to demonstrate the even-handedness of the authors of this article!

But when we look to the footnotes, we find that the first only uses the word "Arab" once, in the sentence, "The 'rage' expressed by young men from the cités does not spring from either anti-imperialist Arab nationalism or some sort of anti-Western jihadism as Fouad Ajami, Alain Finkielkraut, Charles Krautheimer, and Daniel Pipes among others would have it, but rather from lifetimes of rampant unemployment, school failure, police harassment, and everyday racist discrimination that tends to treat them generally as the racaille of Sarkozy's insult—regardless of race, ethnicity, or religion." Huh! "Arab" as something that the situation is not about!

And then if we look to see what exact phenomenon the authors were describing as "apartheid," there is mainly discussion of how "socioeconomic marginalization has been paired with spatial isolation" in "preeminently multiracial sites, with local bases of solidarity conditioned by common social class rather than ethnic or religious similarity."

But, race? Surely race has something to do with it! And it does, sort of: in "popular talk;" in "pre-existing metropolitan anxieties;" in something the authors call "racialization," which apparently is applying a "racial" grouping to a non-racial group; in prejudice excused by Jacques Chirac as a "justified response to the 'noise and smell' of immigrants." So, "apartheid" has been used by the authors to describe a socioeconomically delineated phenomenon that the nattering classes of France (and now a few intrepid Wikipedia editors ...) have described in racial terms for their own purposes or due to their own prejudices. This isn't exactly an "allegation of apartheid," which, according to the UN definition so helpfully described is "racially based policies in any state." Racially-based, not socioeconomic.

Well, surely the second footnote will clarify! Ramadan also talks about France "disintegrating before our eyes into socioeconomic communities, into territorial and social apartheid." So far, the apartheid he talks about is socioeconomic and not racial. But then he almost immediately says, "Institutionalized racism is a daily reality." But this isn't what he has called "apartheid." And he also specifically says, "The attempt to Islamicize social issues perverts and falsifies political discourse." (What might he say about attempts to Arabicize them?)

Anyway, I think it should be clear beyond any doubt that the claim that "apartheid" had been used in France to describe something having to do specifically with Arab immigrants is a synthesis of the authors of the "Allegations of apartheid" authors, or at least they have not gotten this information from the articles they cite.

Tegwarrior (talk) 02:54, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Yes indeed - the misuse of the sources is obvious. I'd also like to point out that many of the cited sources use "apartheid" as an analogy, not an allegation, so they're not even directly relevant to the theme of the article. -- ChrisO (talk) 08:00, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

The title (and the first sentence) can be changed, so that's not an issue. In fact, since there is at least arguably a consensus to change the title among those who believe the article should be kept, I am thinking of moving the article myself, while this AfD is pending. 6SJ7 (talk) 19:25, 10 July 2008 (UTC)Update: The article has been moved to Apartheid analogies. 6SJ7 (talk) 21:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

A LOT more than just the first sentence needs to be changed. As I've noted elsewhere on this page, the citation for "Canadian Aprartheid" more nearly clarifies that assimilation rather than apartheid is what's worried about in Canada. Much of this article seems to be a hodgepodge of stuff that someone found by through google and didn't review very well. Tegwarrior (talk) 12:37, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

(Indeed, it seems that many of the "examples" given for "allegations of apartheid" would more accurately be called "misuses of the term apartheid," because they directly refer to economic grounds for discrimination rather than racial grounds. When a term has been defined as a specific crime, it seems awfully un-encyclopedic to call uses of the term that have nothing to do with that crime "allegations." Saying that someone "murdered" a baseball is not exactly a cause to call the police. The economically based matters that are called "apartheid" are not really allegations at all, but more accurately exaggerations. Tegwarrior (talk) 03:23, 10 July 2008 (UTC))

• Keep This is roughly the bazillionth time that some editors have banded together to try to eliminate all mention of any counry but Israel with respect to the apartheid analogy. It makes it look as though Wikipedia is interested in bashing Israel and/or holding it to a vastly higher standard than any other country. I'll also ask editors who are enaging in rank trolling regarding incomplete and therefore defunct/inapplicable arbcom cases to please stop. IronDuke 01:16, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• Oh come on, ID. We know each other, you know the history, and you know very well that I, the nominator CJCurrie, ChrisO and others have all of us expressed support for articles on the Cuban apartheid analogy and the Brazilian apartheid analogy, and any other apartheid-analogy article with secondary sources that actually describe and discuss the analogy itself. If you think there are good secondary sources describing "allegations of apartheid" in a general way and establishing its notability as a general topic, share them. If you want to contest what we're classifying as "primary" sources versus "secondary" ones, do so – with clarity and thoroughness, please. If you think WP:NOR is commonly misunderstood and you want to make the case for the validity of articles built entirely out of primary sources, then do that. But don't come here and tell editors who are assuming your good faith that we have "banded together to try to eliminate all mention of any counry but Israel with respect to the apartheid analogy." It violates both the spirit and the letter of the truth as you know it.--G-Dett (talk) 02:05, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• Well, GD, I’m prepared to admit I’m wrong if and where I am. If my memory plays me false, feel free to tell me. But as I look at the Brazilian Apartheid AFD, I see no G-Dett, no ChrisO, and no CJCurrie. When I look at the Cuban apartheid article, I have a Zen experience: the article of no article. Did you support having that as a stand-alone article? I also seem to recall a deletion (oh sorry: a “merge” from a straw poll while a nasty arbitration was going on about that very issue) of the Saudi Apartheid article, in my view the best of the lot. Did you fight that? Did ChrisO? Did CJ?

And again, the fact that an entirely irrelevant non-finding from a non-case by arbcom is being waved about by some (including you, depressingly) makes me feel like those who’ve smashed nearly every other article on this topic into submission won’t be happy until they achieve total victory: Israel must be shown to be in as bad a light as possible, and Wikipedia policy must not be allowed to stand in the way of that.

As for NOR, this article vastly exceeds common wiki standards. If the articles were all in as good a shape as this or better, we’d really have something to be proud of. IronDuke 03:11, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Response: I don't believe I was even aware of the Brazilian apartheid afd at the time, but I endorsed retention of the article here. Since we're on the topic, I can't help but notice that most of the people who voted on Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Allegations_of_Brazilian_apartheid are veterans of Wikipedia's Israel-Palestine battles. Should I assume this was a coincidence? CJCurrie (talk) 03:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Ironduke, thanks for your response. Here's where I voted "weak keep" on the Cuban "tourist apartheid" AfD. When the "Brazilian apartheid" AfD came up, I was not certain where I stood on its notability, so I didn't vote. Here's where I expressed my sense that the Brazilian "social apartheid" may indeed be notable per reliable secondary sources. In those comments and just about any other I posted during the whole "allegations of apartheid" debacle last summer, you will find clearly laid out my rationale for inclusion – which has nothing to do with Israel and everything to do with the need for secondary sources in articles about political rhetoric.

Your belief that the Saudi Arabia article was the "best of the lot" suggests to me that we are working from dramatically different criteria. If you mean that of all the countries discussed in these articles, Saudi Arabia has the most hands-down appalling human- and civil-rights situations, then we're pretty much agreed. But I think "Allegations of Saudi Arabian apartheid" (now Human rights in Saudi Arabia) was actually the very worst of the lot, because it was built out of the most ridiculously fleeting and incidental uses of the word "apartheid" in three or four random op-eds and blogposts, there were no secondary sources whatsoever, and nothing indicating at all that the analogy had gained any traction or indeed any notice from anyone anywhere. It's not surprising that so few people have ever compared Saudi Arabia to South Africa, because in most people's minds the former is if anything worse than the latter; and it's not surprising that when the odd pundit does make the comparison, no one notices or cares, given that the Saudi regime has so few defenders (the royal family, a handful of oil oligarchs and regional despots, and about 6 or 7 American presidential administrations), none of whom are culturally, emotionally, spiritually, religiously, and politically invested in its reputation the way millions are in that of Israel. If Wikipedia were a tribunal in charge of praising and censuring countries according to their moral merits, I'd agree that Saudi Arabia would deserve a rotten tomato here and maybe Israel wouldn't. But this is an encyclopedia, and we're supposed to be writing neutral articles on notable topics. The "Israeli apartheid" analogy has been the locus of an extraordinary amount of debate, discussion, and controversy for decades now, and the secondary-source literature on the analogy itself is voluminous. By contrast two or three non-specialist pundits used the word "apartheid" in connection with Saudi Arabia, and nobody noticed except a few Israel-focused Wikipedians. Meanwhile, for the last time, in the real world this supposed general phenomenon of "allegations of apartheid" has never been recognized or discussed; it isn't a topic, except here, among us. Textbook case of original research synthesis.--G-Dett (talk) 18:53, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

I voted on this AFD for the simple reason that there was an attempt to slander me in this nomination. Otherwise, I wouldn't have noticed. As for the Israel connection, I'm pretty sure it wasn't any member of this imagined Zionist conspiracy. --Leifern (talk) 15:26, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

That's an impressive smear, but it misses the point. Let's put it this way: when over half the contributors to afds on Allegations of Brazilian Apartheid, Allegations of Chinese Apartheid (and so on) are veterans of Wikipedia's Israel-Palestine disputes, there's a good chance that the larger issue may have something to do with an Israel-Palestine dispute.

Last year's controversy over the various "Allegations of [...] apartheid" was an embarassment to the project, and it's lamentable to see the same gamesmanship continuing. CJCurrie (talk) 16:37, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Perhaps, but that works both ways - the Arbcom case last year was lengthy, involved, very unpleasant I'm sure for everyone involved. Raising the voting pattern of one possible group should open the door to someone responding in kind. If I had hours to spare, I could have generated lots of documentation to look the detractors from this article look just as bad if not worse, but I honestly believe that each article's existence should be based on its merits alone. --Leifern (talk) 19:19, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Are you referring to those of us who wanted to keep the encyclopedic article Israel and the apartheid analogy, and also wanted to delete the dubious articles that were created in response to it? This doesn't strike me as a mark of inconsistency. CJCurrie (talk) 22:22, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

@ G-Dett. Okay. So you, CJ, and ChrisO didn’t all necessarily support the articles you earlier said you’d supported. No biggie, I guess, but you’ll save me time if you look these things up first. We may indeed be using radically different criteria to determine which articles merit inclusion -- “the secondary-source literature on the analogy itself is voluminous.” Really? Voluminous? And there’s been “an ‘extraordinary’ amount of debate?” Radically different criteria indeed.

Also, as you’ve demonstrated such a keen interest in eliminating fleeting uses of the word apartheid, I wonder if we can look forward to your excising all fleeting allusions to it in the Israel article.

@ CJCurrie. I find it puzzling that you keep using the word ”gamesmanship” in a derogatory manner: gamesmanship is the only reasonable explanation for the existence of this AfD that was calculated to inflame, and for the appalling appeals to bad faith that have accompanied it. You're a veteran -- you had to have known this would happen. IronDuke 23:25, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Ironduke, this is getting annoying. Here's what I wrote last summer, in a statement to Arbcom:

My sole criteria for any "allegations" article is that there have to be secondary sources discussing the allegations themselves and attesting to their notability, not merely primary-source instances where the word "apartheid" is used gathered and arranged into quote farms...I do not believe the Israel article is the only article that meets this criterion. The Cuba article meets this criterion (though just barely), hence my vote for "Weak keep." And the Brazil article may meet this criterion – and will almost certainly do so if the title specifies "social apartheid." ([1], emphasis added)

And whaddya know, it's since been moved to Social apartheid in Brazil. Rustle my beanbag if there's an AfD on it and you'll have my "keep" vote.

You post here that I and others have "banded together to try to eliminate all mention of any counry but Israel with respect to the apartheid analogy," and when I point out (for the tenth time) that this is false and give you a cursory review of the history, instead of retracting you try to find some new quibble to be magnanimous about ("no biggie"). Next you'll be telling me I've only reiterated it nine times, and forgiving me my misleading paranthetical aside. The "biggie" here is that you keep burying the history and feeding this nonsense about "singling out Israel." Yes, the literature on the Israeli apartheid analogy is indeed voluminous. It goes back decades, and was fed for many years by the close strategic and economic ties between Israel and South Africa. It has become more purely rhetorical in recent years, and is now fed more by demographic concerns about the future of Israel, and the diminishing practicability of the two-state solution due to settlement expansion and the failure of the peace process. Yes, there's a whole lot of crap in the article as well and yes, you and Jayjg are right that it's a POV magnet and often a total mess. Read my extensive suggestions to its talk page at the end of last summer, which were geared toward a historicized treatment of the analogy itself, coupled with a reduction/elimination of the quote-farm food-fight aspect (see my posts in archive 24 of that talk page, especially the lengthy academic bibliography). In answer to your question, yes fleeting mentions should go, except where fleeting mentions themselves have provoked great consternation and discussion (Carter's book = great example). If you feel like giving me a magnanimous "no biggie" free pass on something, let it be for my lack of follow-through last summer. My suggestions were good ones, and my bibliographic research extensive, I think you'll find.--G-Dett (talk) 00:42, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

I think bring up this bit of ancient history is totally inappropriate. I stand by my vote, but would not apply it now to anyone involved in the earlier case. This nomination should succeed or fail on its merits, not on virtues or failings of a proposed, but failed finding of fact. Fred Talk 01:02, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Well, Fred’s having said what he did puts the kibosh on what I was going to write, which would have been to the same effect, but with perhaps less impact. I trust that ends that part of the discussion for good. In fact, if editors wanted to go back and strike through the inappropriate remarks, a lot of people would, I think, take it as a sign of good faith.

As for your “support” of other articles, all I can say is there wasn’t any for Brazil where it most mattered, on the AfD. And the Cuban article is gone.

You also misquote me, saying that I said you were a member of the band that was seeking to single out Israel. I don’t see where I said that.

How voluminous is the literature exactly? How many books have been written solely on that topic?

“If you feel like giving me a magnanimous "no biggie" free pass on something, let it be for my lack of follow-through last summer.” Actually, that's exactly where I don’t want to give you a pass. Harping on an article because it simply organizes information in a way you don’t like (how many user-generated lists are there on Wikipedia, again?), while letting the IA article fester does not help your case when you claim to bear no animus towards Israel. Not saying you do, BTW: I really have no way of knowing that. I can only read your edits, not your mind. IronDuke 02:29, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Sorry for the flare-up, Duke, my affection + respect for you is undimmed. I left the Israel article last summer because I was approaching burnout and because the inestimable HG (one of the only editors widely credited on both sides for knowledge and fairness) was in charge, not because I was content to see it fester. My parting suggestions were as follows:

This article...could use a lot of improvement, beginning with a rename to Israeli apartheid analogy and a more detailed, rigorous, and nuanced treatment of the various valences of the analogy. It isn't purely a debate about what Israel is or isn't "guilty" of, a fact I think is not fully appreciated by those who keep suggesting moving this to Human Rights in Israel and the Occupied Territories (nor, for that matter, by those who insist on the word "allegations" remaining in the title). The Adam/Moodley book is the tip of the iceberg when it comes to work that accepts the analogy as a working model (with reservations) but tries to turn it to practical and pragmatic purposes of conflict-resolution as opposed to rhetorical and ideological purposes of delegitimizing Israel. The South Africa comparison is at the center of debates about whether a society can transform without losing its essential character, whether a SA-style truth and reconciliation commission could work in Israel-Palestine; whether a successful peace process based on a one-state solution (South Africa) can provide a good model for one which will almost certainly end in a two-state solution (Israel-Palestine); whether the almost sui-generis efficacy of boycotts and international sanctions against South Africa is a good model for anti-occupation activism, or whether it's likely to provoke a backlash and other unintended consequences; and so on. We need to begin to expand the bibliography and explore books like Geneaologies of Conflict: Class, Identity, and State in Palestine/Israel and South Africa, Talking with the Enemy : Negotiation and Threat Perception in South Africa and Israel/Palestine, Peace Building in Northern Ireland, Israel and South Africa: Transition, Transformation and Reconciliation, God's Peoples: Covenant and Land in South Africa, Israel, and Ulster, Mobilizing for Peace: Conflict Resolution in Northern Ireland, Israel/Palestine, and South Africa, Undercutting Sanctions: Israel, the U.S. and South Africa, and so on, as well as other books exploring the ethically controversial dimensions of the analogy we're more familiar with: Israel and South Africa: Legal Systems of Settler Domination, Security, terrorism, and torture: Detainees' rights in South Africa and Israel : a comparative study, Israel, South Africa, and the West, Israel And South Africa, etc. This is a fascinating subject and deserves an article in its own right; I see neither reason nor precedent for a merge.--G-Dett 17:53, 7 August 2007 (UTC)

The "tourist apartheid" in Cuba article was not deleted; it was merged with Tourism in Cuba per the consensus of Latin-America-focussed editors. It has a section of its own there, and Cuban tourist apartheid is a redirect. As for where my support for the Brazil article mattered most, it survived the AfD I didn't vote in, and its move from the POINTy Allegations of Brazilian apartheid to Social apartheid in Brazil, a move urged by me and others, is what has preserved it since.--G-Dett (talk) 03:21, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

For clarity, I'm not suggesting that last year's proposed finding of fact should be applied to any contributor to this discussion; I brought it up as background information. CJCurrie (talk) 03:13, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Why did you single out that particular FoF? There were 11, if you count the variations. 04:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC) IronDuke 01:56, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete WP:SYN violation. If this article is a response to another article, it is an example of WP:POINT as well. Fix the problems with the other article; don't create new articles with additional problems. csloat (talk) 01:31, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Except for the fact that this article was created 10 months before the article it is allegedly a "response" to. Jayjg ^(talk) 01:38, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
    • Jayjg is sort-of correct: Allegations of apartheid was created (under a different title) about a year before Israeli apartheid first appeared on the scene. What he's leaving out is that "AoA" had been reduced to a redirect in early 2006, and was only brought back as an actual article here as a direct response to the piece on Israel.
    • I don't think Jay's intentions in 2006 were a secret ("time for a merge"), and I don't think they've really changed since then (refer: [2]). What has changed is that a growing consensus of editors now recognizes that Israel and the apartheid analogy is a subject worthy of its own article. And yet we're still stuck with this gamesmanship. CJCurrie (talk) 03:27, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
      • You were the one who nominated this article for deletion, so the gamesmanship you refer to must be with you. As for the growing consensus, I've stayed away from the apartheid and Israel discussion because it's toxic to Wikipedia, the topic, and in addition a complete waste of my time, since the last time I had to endure having my thought patterns examined by people who didn't know anything about them. --Leifern (talk) 15:30, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
        • I nominated this article for deletion because it's a piece of garbage. If it weren't for Wiki-politics, Allegations of apartheid would have been deleted long ago. CJCurrie (talk) 16:37, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
          • But you're linking it to a bunch of other articles, which is what you thought was such a horrid thing about a year ago.--Leifern (talk) 16:58, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
            • I'm not arguing that we should link the retention or deletion of Allegations of Apartheid to past afds; I'm just providing historical context. CJCurrie (talk) 22:22, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep per User:Jayjg but rename to Apartheid analogies. Ostap 04:20, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per G-Dett. By the way, I learned of this discussion via a thread on Wikipedia Review. Cla68 (talk) 05:35, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete. I'm more or less persuaded by the original research arguments presented here, and I'm concerned about the possibility of POV. Everyking (talk) 10:16, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per nomination. --Hillock65 (talk) 11:08, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Comment It might make sense to have an article titled "Economic apartheid," which could include the more significant of the arguments about economic as opposed to actual apartheid from this article. If there are any references to actual apartheid in the article that are noteworthy (the Canadian example does not belong in any article about apartheid, because it essentially is a discussion about how assimilation has possibly threatened First Nation culture and society, but that most people other than one First Nation leader think this is a good thing), separate articles using the most commonly used term for the particular situations (i.e., probably not "apartheid") might be created. Tegwarrior (talk) 14:00, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per nom and G-Dett. -- Kim van der Linde ^{at venus} 15:15, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • I'll quote self-proclaimed Wikipedia expert: "The closing admin is entitled to ignore !votes with no rationales. " --Leifern (talk) 16:38, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
    • Better this way? -- Kim van der Linde ^{at venus} 19:18, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
      • Definitely, it's perfectly fine to endorse someone else's rationale. -- ChrisO (talk) 19:24, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
        • Note to closing admin: this vote was WP:CANVASSed. Not only was the voter told on her talk page to come back and give a rationale, but she was told how to frame her vote “If you are agreeing with someone else's view, it would be useful to say so.” IronDuke 23:34, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
          • Well, whether or not there is canvassing, it's certainly worth noting that ChrisO hurried to User:KimvdLinde's talk page to make sure that her vote to delete got counted, but didn't extend the same courtesy to User:Goethean when warned the closing admin not to count Goethean's keep vote. --Leifern (talk) 23:39, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
            • Your tiresome assumptions of bad faith are noted. Grow up, the pair of you. -- ChrisO (talk) 23:43, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
              • When did I say anything about bad faith? IronDuke 23:47, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
              • ChrisO, I simply stated a fact. Where is there bad faith? --Leifern (talk) 23:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep The general acceptability of these articles has been discussed many times, and the consensus has been to keep them, and that attempts at removal are usually based of a POV about what they say--perhaps even a POV that the particular group involved does not in fact practice something that might be regarded as analogous to apartheid. But that's a question for the talk page each time--the articles will presumably explain why such allegations are made, and refuted. The possibility or even certainty of POV problems is no grounds for deletion. DGG (talk) 18:01, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete the nom is well thought out and I agree. The artilce had had POV problems for years, so it's not a leap to assume that it will be for years to come, being a potential embarrasment to Wikipedia. Sceptre ^(talk) 18:03, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep Wikipedia:Consensus and the entire XfD process are completely and utterly pointless if the results of previous iterations are not respected. There is no explanation to demonstrate that consensus has changed since deletion attempts I, II, III and IV, nor that stabs VI, VII, VIII (and more) won't be coming at regular intervals down the pike when this attempt fails. Alansohn (talk) 18:06, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • So you actually have no reason of keeping this article based on its satisfaction (or violation) of the WP:NOR, WP:V, and WP:NPOV criteria.?Bless sins (talk) 21:51, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete per G-Dett, ChrisO, et al, terrible article full of original synthesis. Naerii 18:20, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Strong keep - the argument that the article violates WP:SYNTH is flawed. We don't need a reliable source to tell us that certain topics are tied together by a certain theme, and in this case, the theme is obviously apartheid: the claim of systemic, government supported, discrimination - we don't even have to guess about it. Indeed, we have lists on Wikipedia for just about everything, and I doubt that scholars have tied together in such lists all the topics we have lists for. The article is properly sourced and can be expanded even to featured status, I believe (as long as it's stable). It appears that the only reason some users are voting delete is to leave Allegations of Israeli Apartheid as the only allegations of Apartheid article, even though many scholars have indeed linked Apartheid with many national policies worldwide, as documented in this article and its sub-articles. -- Ynhockey ^(Talk) 18:21, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Ynhockey everything on wikipedia needs to be supported by reliable sources (except maybe images) thus "We don't need a reliable source to tell us that certain topics are tied together by a certain theme" is inconsistent with wiki policies.Bless sins (talk) 21:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Two corrections are in order: (i) Allegations of Israeli apartheid was moved to Israel and the apartheid analogy a while ago, and (ii) Social apartheid in Brazil also has an article. CJCurrie (talk) 22:05, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete - As with many others here, I see that there is a set of collected facts, and an enterprising synth endeavor to make a case against a group. Does it exist? Most likely in most article subjects. Do the articles do that reporting within policy? No. Either rewrite them around a sourced central premise, or burn them. Like others here' I'd like to see a serious set of sources who can tie all this together into a clear systemic, publicly endorsed situation, otherwise, it can all be written off as cultural perceptions differentiating. ThuranX (talk) 18:35, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Strong Delete Article fails WP:OR, WP:SYN and WP:SOAP. L0b0t (talk) 18:54, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete. There are hardly any sources (from what I see) that discuss "allegations of apartheid". Sources certainly discuss apartheid allegations against Israel, or apartheid allegations against Afghanistan, or apartheid allegations against Sri Lanka... But to put these sources together is a violation of WP:SYNTH.Bless sins (talk) 21:49, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Comment users should not consider whether keeping/deleting this article will "single Israel out", or "this article is in response to allegations of apartheid". This article must judged purely on whether it meets/violates WP:NOR and other core wiki policies. Lets keep Israeli-Palestinian politics out.Bless sins (talk) 21:55, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Lets keep all politics out of it - it must stand and fall on its own merits (or lack thereof). Viridae^Talk 21:56, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete - just like the last 10 times I've commented. A case of POV pushing that is not worth an article, even if it could be kept free of bias and original research (which it can't). The Evil Spartan (talk) 21:58, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Arbitrary break 2

• Keep/Merge with Crime of apartheid. Passes WP:SYN and WP:OR and WP:SOAP. Here's the sourced, central concept: The International Convention on the Suppression and Punishment of the Crime of Apartheid" passed Nov. 30, 1973 by the U.N. General Assembly, defines it: For the purpose of the present Convention, the term "the crime of apartheid", which shall include similar policies and practices of racial segregation and discrimination as practised in southern Africa, shall apply to the following inhuman acts committed for the purpose of establishing and maintaining domination by one racial group of persons over any other racial group of persons and systematically oppressing them It's a legit subject. Noroton (talk) 22:01, 10 July 2008 (UTC) (((Vote amended from simple Keep -- Noroton (talk) 22:21, 10 July 2008 (UTC))))

Yes, and that's why we should have an article on the Crime of apartheid. It's not enough to justify the piece currently under discussion. CJCurrie (talk) 22:02, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

That sounds like a (good) argument for a merger rather than a deletion. It appears that both articles are so close in theme and so short that they might be merged. This article does look a bit too short though, given all the other, country-specific articles on allegations of apartheid. It seems it could work well as a longer article with sections summarizing the other articles. In that case, it would be too long to merge. Noroton (talk) 22:12, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

My mistake, there aren't that many. I see country-specific articles for Israel, the U.S., France. This sounds like it could all fit into one, merged article. I'm changing my vote to reflect that. Noroton (talk) 22:21, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

I would be willing to live with merging Allegations of Apartheid into Crime of Apartheid (though I would not, of course, support a merger of any country-specific articles that are encyclopedic in their own right). CJCurrie (talk) 22:26, 10 July 2008 (UTC) See below for a clarification. CJCurrie (talk) 03:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't write that well: I meant to say almost exactly what you just did. Sorry for the confusion. Bad idea to edit while tired. Noroton (talk) 01:09, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

To my understanding the crime of apartheid is a specific legal charge, have any of the countries with articles suggested for merger been charged with the crime of apartheid? By that I mean some real sanctioning body like the World Court not just some journalist or academic comparing policies or broad social and demographic trends to apartheid. If they have not been charged or sanctioned for the crime of apartheid then there is no reason to merge into Crime of apartheid. Also, the quote from the UN only speaks to the existence of apartheid and the possibility that it may, at some future time, appear in nations other than the RSA, not to the existence of any overarching and connecting allegations of apartheid around the world. The WP:SYN problem is in no way addressed by the quote. L0b0t (talk) 22:38, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

This is exactly right. There are two different topics here – one about political rhetoric, the other about international law – and only the latter topic has sources and notability. These two topics have tended to be conflated on Wikipedia, a problem that's been exacerbated by the systematic misuse of the word "allegations," which only properly applies in the context of international law (ChrisO has addressed this problem above and I have at length elsewhere; analogies, comparisons, and so on are not "allegations," a term which refers exclusively to assertions of fact that could conceivably be proven or disproven). Any merger would have to be very selective and avoid further conflation; otherwise, far from atoning for the SYNs of this article, it would sink deeper into them.--G-Dett (talk) 23:01, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

For clarity, I should indicate that I'm willing to merge Allegations of Apartheid into Crime of apartheid on the following terms: at the end of the latter article, brief reference is made to the fact that the "apartheid" analogy is sometimes used in a less formal fashion, where no formal allegation of the crime of apartheid has been made. One or two noteworthy examples may be provided. This may not sound like much of a "merger", but then Allegations of apartheid isn't much of an article. CJCurrie (talk) 03:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

• • If this article was merged to Crime of apartheid then that'd be a reasonable solution. However, the two topics seem to be different. This article is about allegations (made by random people), while Crime of apartheid would include more careful assessments made by international bodies and scholars.Bless sins (talk) 23:10, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

Also, the crime of apartheid is specifically "inhumane acts ... committed in the context of an institutionalized regime of systematic oppression and domination by one racial group over any other racial group or groups and committed with the intention of maintaining that regime." Probably two thirds of the "examples" of the article have nothing to do with the crime of apartheid because they are about socioeconomic discrimination rather than anything based on race. Tegwarrior (talk) 15:09, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep The characterization of the crimes against humanity committed by Israeli against the Palestinian people as "apartheid" is over-stated and perhaps unfair, but clearly the State of Israel has chosen to not conform to international law with respect to the occupation of Palestinian territories, and some call it "apartheid". I don't think, however, that the actual crime of apartheid is actually present, thus merging it with crime of apartheid is inappropriate. Fred Talk 00:52, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
  • What does any of that have to do with this article? Viridae^Talk 02:56, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
    • 'This is like apartheid': ANC veterans visit West Bank
      • ... which would be applicable to Israel and the apartheid analogy, but not to this article. I'm still puzzled. CJCurrie (talk) 22:09, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep per Fred. Khoikhoi 03:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
  • I'm a bit confused -- this isn't an afd on Allegations of Israeli apartheid (which has been moved anyway), but a separate (if related) work called Allegations of apartheid. CJCurrie (talk) 04:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
• delete this & all other articles that misuse the word apartheid by applying it outside of pre-1992 South Africa. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 205.205.50.30 (talk) 05:01,
• Delete per WP:AAAA (and for those of you looking for a non-humourous reason, because the article is a net detriment to the project due to the controversies and trouble it creates). Stifle (talk) 09:25, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
• Note: Per the above discussion, I have moved the article in question to Apartheid analogies. 6SJ7 (talk) 13:11, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep and move to Apartheid analogies. It certianly isn't original research, no less than the Israel article is. Topic is highly notable and the article is a benefit to wikipedia. YahelGuhan (talk) 06:51, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep It is a notable article. The article is heavily referenced and the sources are reliable. I don’t think the article is based almost entirely on original research and synthesized research. I don’t agree that no body of literature exists that discusses "allegations of apartheid" or "the apartheid analogy" in a general sense. In the article, reliable sources are tied together by the "apartheid" concept. Masterpiece2000 (talk) 06:54, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

But the "apartheid concept" you refer to was created through judicious use of synthesis right here in this article, it is purely a product of Wikipedia, there is no body of work in reliable sources that talks about apartheid as political rhetoric and connects it around the world to countries other than the RSA, which is what this article is about, this article is NOT about the real, actual, defined Crime of apartheid. This article just collects disparate, unrelated, incidents of some journalist or blogger compares economic inequality or broad social and demographic trends with apartheid as it was practiced in the RSA prior to 1992. It is ALL original research and synthesis. Those who have simply opined "keep, not OR or Syn" have either not read the article, sources, and our core policies or they are being obtuse. Cheers. L0b0t (talk) 14:25, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete per the well reasoned arguments of ChrisO. I guess I defy the generalization that pro-Israel editors are collectively voting keep on this article, don't I? Avruch 16:29, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

General comment Whatever happens to this article, this AfD has attracted enough attention to set a precedent for what counts as original research when working from primary sources. We should all hope it will be a sensible precedent, given that it's likely to reverberate beyond the Israel-Palestine quarrels on Wikipedia. To my mind a good guideline for thinking about these things is this: if an article's genesis would be virtually inconceivable without the use of automated search engines – not just more difficult but virtually inconceivable – then that article probably constitutes an original research synthesis. That is, if there's no bibliographic trail anywhere, if the scenario involves the equivalent of thousands of monkeys with red pens reading through mountains of primary sources and circling key words, it's original research.

I have always assumed, for example, that an article like Talking animals in literature would be original research unless sources outside Wikipedia had defined that as a notable general topic.

Now, let's apply the test I've just described. Automated search engines like Google don't exist, so I consult a reference librarian, who tells me that a Harvard scholar by the name of Marc Shell has indeed written about talking animals in literature. I then consult Professor Shell's books and articles, and their bibliographies lead me to other sources, primary and secondary. By mid-afternoon I have the skeleton of a well-sourced Wikipedia article. With Google I could have gotten there in the time it takes to brew a pot of coffee, of course, but the bibliographic trail is well-marked, and easily traversed in a half-day at the library. This passes my proposed SYN test.

If, on the other hand, Marc Shell's work or its equivalent doesn't exist, and the research librarian can only furrow his brow and dimly recall reading something about a talking dog somewhere in a Pynchon story, so I go and scour Pynchon's oeuvre looking for the dog, in the meantime hiring 1000 research assistants to start reading other novelists at random looking for other talking animals in other books, then this fails my proposed SYN test and I'm doing original research.

The fact that both the half-day search at the reference library and the 6-month primary-source team expedition take only 3 minutes on Google has led many, I think, to regard them erroneously as comparable forms of research. The fate of this AfD will give us a sense of where the community stands.--G-Dett (talk) 16:57, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Very cute and clever, but this AfD is about this article. Besides, all of your "spinning" will just make people dizzy. 6SJ7 (talk) 17:02, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

I don't think it shows what "the community" thinks. Take out all the editors who are involved in Arab-Israeli articles and you'll have a pretty strong consensus for deletion. -- ChrisO (talk) 17:31, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Wow, now we have spinning of the spinning! And see my comments on your "counting" below. 6SJ7 (talk) 18:11, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Take out the people who disagree with you and you will indeed have a 'consensus' for any position! Nunquam Dormio (talk) 17:41, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Nope, not what I said. Take out the editors on both sides of the Arab-Israeli issue and you'll still have a consensus for deletion. This AfD has been distorted, like all the other "allegations of apartheid" AfDs, by the endless Arab-Israeli edit war. -- ChrisO (talk) 17:46, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Actually, I just did a count (as of 17:40 UTC, July 12), excluding those who can reasonably said to be "involved in Arab-Israeli articles" and I get 11 for keep, 13 for delete, and 1 for keep/merge. (There were, of course, some definitional problems as to who is involved and who isn't. I am not going to analyze each editor in "print" because it would be overly intrusive. If you count the total number of comments on this page, which I didn't, you will see that I excluded a lot of people. If in doubt, I excluded the person. I did include Avruch's "delete", in case anyone was wondering.) Hardly a consensus either way, and barely even a majority either way. 6SJ7 (talk) 18:11, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Yes, I did the same count - they cancel each other out, don't they? But if you count the editors who are not "involved in Arab-Israeli articles", I think you'll find a majority for deletion. (Then again, decisions shouldn't be based on a crude headcount anyway...) -- ChrisO (talk) 18:15, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

I already excluded those involved, and got a count of 11 to 13. Look, you were the one who said there is a "pretty strong consensus" if you exclude the involved, and there is no consensus, there is barely a majority. 6SJ7 (talk) 18:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

We may be counting the numbers differently. Not that it really matters, anyway, since the quality of the arguments is what is supposed to count, so we'll just have to let the closing admin decide on that point. -- ChrisO (talk) 19:17, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep We cannot hope to ever neutrally deal with such issues as long as deletionists keep trying to bury them under the carpet. When that is done it will just come up again under some other name. Eclecticology (talk) 17:38, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Now do you have a reason that is germane to the discussion at hand? This AfD is about an article that fails WP:OR and WP:SYN and those concerns have yet to be addressed. We have seen lots of straw man arguments, lots of WP:ILIKEIT, and WP:IDONTLIKEIT arguments and lots of arguments about the relevance of other articles but this article is still afoul of policy with no hope of improvement because the subject just does not exist other than on Wikipedia. L0b0t (talk) 18:02, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep - This is a well known political issue, and allegations of apartheid have been put forth by scholars, authors, and the press. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 17:55, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete or rename as List of weak comparisons for sole political purpose. Popo le Dog ^{throw a bone} 18:08, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete Any discussion of allegations can go under the main article on apartheid. John Smith's (talk) 18:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Comment - no vote, but the closer should note I was canvassed to come here by ChrisO. I haven't looked to see who else he has canvassed. Neıl 龱 18:33, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Editors who participated in the last four deletion discussions, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of apartheid in Slovakia and the Czech Republic, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of Chinese apartheid, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of Israeli apartheid (8th nomination) and Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Allegations of American apartheid, excluding those who are currently blocked or who have not edited in the last month; a "friendly notice", limited in scale, neutrally worded, nonpartisan and open. -- ChrisO (talk) 18:37, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

ChrisO has canvassed no less than 115 users. This needs to be taken into account when closing this discussion. I do not think 115 users is a "small number" of "friendly notices" as mentioned in WP:CANVASS. Jehochman ^Talk 18:41, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

115? Can this be documented, or is ChrisO stipulating that's the right number? Looking at the policy, it appears this is at least excessive cross-posting. If ChrisO limited this cross-posting to editors he knew were likely to vote his way, then it might be votestacking. To be fair, ChrisO's culpability in this matter shouldn't be held against the honest delete voters, though. Should this be investigated separately? --Leifern (talk) 01:59, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Those AfDs have involved a larger number of editors than in most cases; that's the only reason for the number of users notified, and in absolute terms it's a tiny fraction of the user community. But consider the bigger picture here. The more feedback we have in this AfD, the more integrity it is likely to have as a representative view of the Wikipedia community. Nobody has been asked to support one side or the other. -- ChrisO (talk) 18:43, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

The language in WP:CANVASS refers directly to 'indiscriminately sending announcements to uninvolved editors' which clearly is not what Chris has done. Suggesting that something improper has occurred is off base. Jd2718 (talk) 20:18, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete or Listify This is merely a catalog of instances in which the word "apartheid" has been used to describe situations in various countries. If the article is kept, let's not pretend there's any "glue" that holds them together; this should be a list. — [[::User:Malik Shabazz|Malik Shabazz]] ([[::User talk:Malik Shabazz|talk]] · [[::Special:Contributions/Malik Shabazz|contribs]]) 18:50, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete, basically per nom. The article is a POV pushing vehicle. Nsk92 (talk) 19:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep. As before, WP:SYN is a content policy, not an article inclusion policy. Every article can be considered a "synthesis" in the literal sense -- an editor decides that a topic merits an articles, goes and fetches sources, and synthesises them in writing the article. Thankfully, our definition of prohibited synthesis is more narrow. "Synthesizing material occurs when an editor comes to a conclusion by putting together different sources." Exactly what non-obvious conclusion is being synthesized here; what "position" is being advanced -- that apartheid analogies are observably common? (Not exactly a controvertible premise.) Deciding that topic like apartheid analogies merits inclusion is a meta-level editorial decision; applying WP:OR in this context is like applying WP:NPOV to an XfD comment. — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 20:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Arbitrary break 3

• Delete. Quite simply, this "article" is a dumping ground for every time the word "apartheid" is mentioned, and is a playground for POV-pushing. Additionally, it violates both WP:SYNTH and WP:NOR. Also, I see no problem with the notes left by ChrisO. This type of discussion needs more light, not less. S. Dean Jameson 19:26, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

After reading the notice left by Chris0, I don't see anything that is not endorsed by WP:CANVASS. A number of editors commenting here seem to have brought issues with other articles and topics with them to this discussion so some fresh eyes here can't hurt. Cheers. L0b0t (talk) 19:46, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep Jehochman, I respect ChrisO for 'canvassing' people like myself who might oppose his opinion. Does it even matter why I choose to keep? It seems that the opinions of pro-Israel editors seem somewhat disregarded here (speaking of some sort of alluded WP apartheid for even mentioning that ludicrous association). Ho hum. --Shuki (talk) 19:54, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep The fact that so many people have found it interesting to comment on this AfD shows that it is a notable issue. The page needs some work, but that is not a reason to delete. Apartheid in countries other than SA has been mentioned in the press and so it should be straight forward to properly cite and document this page. lk (talk) 20:05, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Weak keep with new name This is a toughie, because what would be WP:UNDUE in one part of the world might be pretty mainstream in another. If this were Americopedia, I'd be inclined to Delete because the apartheid analogy is pretty fringy where I live. However, it appears to me -- and I vote "weak" because I could be wrong here -- that the apartheid analogy is relatively mainstream in some parts of the world. Care should be taken, though, to consolidate where appropriate so that we don't have pov forks and such. For instance, this may be redundant with Israel and the apartheid analogy. (On a side note, any allegations of WP:CANVASsing on the part of ChrisO are ludicrous. He is informing potentially interested parties of thjs debate regardless of their previous opinions -- which, having done similar things in the past, I can say is a tedious, thankless, and yet very valuable service. Shame on the accusers, and kudos to ChrisO for getting more participation.) --Jaysweet (talk) 20:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

The article has been renamed Apartheid analogies but that does nothing to address the problems of WP:OR and WP:SYN. This is still just a collection of random, disparate mentions of the word "apartheid" in relation to various policies and practices of nation states and broad socio-economic and demographic trends. The only thing that connects these items is that somewhere in the source material the word "apartheid" appears. This article is just an original research dumping ground held together by synthesis. L0b0t (talk) 20:34, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete per S. Dean Jameson, and my argument in the prior AFD that any article about "allegations of" is just a recipe for POV in all its mutated manifestations. Disclosure: I probably wouldn't have seen this AFD without the note from Chris O on my user talk page. --Rividian (talk) 20:38, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
  • "Allegations" is no longer in the title of the article, nor does that word appear in the text. 6SJ7 (talk) 20:42, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
    • Well that's good. I'm uncomfortable with most articles titled "Allegations of X" because it seems potentially inviting of POV pushers. I suppose I might go "weak keep" then, but for now I'm not voting.--T. Anthony (talk) 20:45, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
    • Sorry but the title is still Allegations of apartheid, and "Analogies to..." suffers from the same basic problems. Articles shouldn't be framed around an argument like this... it lies to the inherent problems I mentioned and referenced. I.e. instead of "Arguments that Bush is a Bad President" and "Arguments that Bush is a Good President", it's vastly more practical just to write an article about all (notable) viewpoints on his presidency. Doing it the other way is much more condusive to compiling a laundry list of POVs than actually writing a useful article. That's just how I approach article writing. --Rividian (talk) 21:06, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep Real allegations of various crimes against humanity: see crime of apartheid. -- Kendrick7^talk 21:08, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete per nom. Gamaliel (talk) 21:14, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep. Sadly the term "Apartheid" is used too easily worldwide to describe various forms of discrimination. The most notable example, where it is falsely used, is regarding Israel, but is not limited to it. This article should be improved rather than deleted. Noon (talk) 21:53, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Strong Keep, per user:Nunquam Dormio: it seems that if one were to author any article on Wikipedia critical of Israeli government policies, some people (apparently mostly United States citizens, not even Israelis) will try to have it deleted. That said, some small consensus appears to be building around some merge (in approach if not a full merge) into crime of apartheid. T L Miles (talk) 22:00, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Strong Delete - not because of the essence of the article but because of its inherent biased POV. --Oren neu dag (talk) 22:21, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
• Delete Apartheid was a complex system of laws that were unique to pre-Mandela South Africa. The article completely misuses the word "apartheid," turning it into a trivial catch-all phrase. Ecoleetage (talk) 22:36, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

I agree with you about the widespread dillution of the original meaning of the word. But the ignorant journalistic or NGO usage of it to describe descrimination in many places has already been accepted by equally ignorant vocabulary-challenged people around the world. Very sad, but a fact that WP will not be able to change.--Shuki (talk) 23:07, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Er, since when is the United Nations an NGO? -- Kendrick7^talk 03:44, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep The current definition of the international Crime of Apartheid is not just about race, it's about inhumane acts such as torture, murder, forcible transfer, imprisonment, or persecution of an identifiable group on political, racial, national, ethnic, cultural, religious, or other grounds, "committed in the context of an institutionalized regime of systematic oppression and domination by one racial group over any racial group or groups and committed with the intention of maintaining that regime." That's a broad remit, and therefore it's natural that scholars and commentators will apply this definition to a broad range of international situations. I find sources on sexual apartheid in Afganistan and class apartheid in America , and proceedings from a conference on social/class apartheid around the world, all of which would benefit from a high-level view of "comparisons to apartheid" rather than only splitting them off into separate subjects. I think it's absurd to suggest that an article about the widespread phenomena of applying the notion of "apartheid" to various international situations is original research when there is an international law that does exactly that. The United Nations groups these things together as forms of apartheid, but we can't? Further, this article shouldn't be merged into crime of apartheid because it is independantly notable and has potential to grow considerably. The question of the allegations against Israel, and the wiki-maneuvering surrounding the article on that topic, should be set aside and this subject judged on its own merits. It is clearly notable and it is possible to write an article on the subject suitable to Wikipedia, so it should stay. Ryan Paddy (talk) 22:44, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

I agree when you say "...all of which would benefit from a high-level view of "comparisons to apartheid" rather than only splitting them off into separate subjects.", once a reliable source does that then, and only then, we write an article about it. Since a reliable source has not done that yet, this article fails WP:OR and WP:SYN. This article is nothing more than a collection of random uses of the word "apartheid" in relation to a vast array of things from government policies to broad socio-economic trending. This article is about the term "apartheid" as used in political rhetoric not the actual, defined and codified Crime of apartheid there should be no conflation of the two. L0b0t (talk) 22:55, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete per ChrisO and Dean Jameson. rootology (T) 23:10, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

• Keep In wikipedia, we say what other's say and this article is a clear cut case as an example. There are many WP:RS that claims these allegations and indeed is a notable subject. Just because it is something controversial, it does not deserve to be deleted. Watchdogb (talk) 00:09, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

• Delete. This article seems very close to an original work (even if is well referenced). Comparing the French suburbs situation to the Israelian colony policy is at the very least utterly stupid. Poppy (talk) 00:10, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
• Keep, per xDanielx. Guettarda (talk) 01:45, 13 July 2008 (UTC)