User talk:Philg88

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WikiProject Dacia

Template:WikiProject Dacia Invitation --Codrin.B (talk) 03:44, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

Many thanks for the invitation but I did the edits on the Dacian Draco article following a request at the GOCE Requests Page rather than from any specific interest in the topic. That said, please feel free to post any further requests for copyedits at that page and someone will respond. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:50, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

I see. Makes sense. And thanks sooo much! We could use some members that could help us with English and copy-editing. Best regards! --Codrin.B (talk) 03:56, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

Another thought, it would be great to continue the trend and get the article to WP:GOOD now after DYK. I'm fairly new to this, but in my mind a great start would be a neutral reviewer checking it against the criteria for B-Class status and updating the findings in the WP Dacia tag on Dacian Draco's talk page (b1 through b5 items). Is your guild the right place for this? Thanks a lot and best regards! --Codrin.B (talk) 23:15, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

The Guild of Copyeditors just does copyediting. If you want to submit an article for WP:GA review have a look here. Alternatively, you can submit articles for Peer Review — you can find the instructions here. Good luck! Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 23:26, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

Thank you

Thanks for reverting my edit. I was trying to add the artwork for their upcoming album (the artwork has been released), but I ended up doing it wrong, not knowing where to put it. I attempted to revert my edit myself, but it added an image that hadn't been there before, so I gave up, knowing that it would be reverted. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.159.18.64 (talk) 21:31, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

You are welcome but please create a sandbox if you want to play around with the wiki meta-language. Otherwise, things get screwed up as they did in this case. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 22:17, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Federation of Stoke-on-Trent copyedit

This is great work. I'm very impressed. Apterygial ^talk 05:32, 16 April 2011 (UTC)

Why thank you! It's alway nice to get positive feedback. If you come across any GA/FA candidate articles that could benefit from a copyedit please post a request here. Thanks again for the kind words. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 05:40, 16 April 2011 (UTC)

Livonian War C/E

(Not really a reply to your post on my talk page.) Thanks for that, hopefully it'll be enough to satisfy A-class reviewers. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 09:58, 16 April 2011 (UTC)

Utopian language

Why did you revert my changes to this article? All I did was make the poem and its translations coherent! Cgboeree (talk) 21:41, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my mistake - it looked like you added "Bargol he maglomi baccan ſoma gymnoſophaon.
Agrama gymnoſophon labarem bacha bodamilomin.
Voluala barchin heman la lauoluola dramme pagloni." which is the type of jibberish vandals often insert. In this case .... Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:46, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Ratchet and Clank edit

Sorry to bother you, why exactly did you edit my contribution to the 'Sasha' post. All the information I changed is truthful, I'd know because I have all the Ratchet and Crank video games. Next time you 'edit' some information, make sure that the information you're 'editing' is false. If you desire proof of the facts I've stated, I'll be happy to show you. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.106.135.147 (talk) 23:07, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

No bother, but I think you must have the wrong editor as my username does not appear in the Ratchet and Clank edit history. As I revert hundreds of edits everyday it's hard to remember every one but I think a name like "Ratchet & Clank" would have lodged somewhere in my brain and I don't remember reverting it. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 23:18, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to butt in. It was List of Ratchet & Clank characters, and although reverted without edit summary, it was an unconstructive edit because it was carelessly stuck next to another sentence with no space, was grammatically incomprehensible, and unsourced. Cheers. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 23:52, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Anna, I don't revert without a good reason and it seems there were several in this case. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 23:57, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

You're most welcome. I think you are a careful vandal-fighter. You were right to revert in this case. Don't worry about mistakes. I've made plenty. It happens.

Nice to see you doing such a lot of anti-vandal work. I notice that you've been getting cursed at on your talk page. That means you're doing something right. :) By the way, do you know how to use GIMP? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:09, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I think it's necessary but it does get a bit boring sometimes removing "...is gay" from countless articles. Occasionally, some vandalism is actually funny but it's still vandalism. As for GIMP, you mean the Photoshop clone? Yes, I do know how to use it. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 00:17, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

New Hainan map

I just emailed you a preview of the topomap for Hainan. I'm waiting for it to be uploade. I've added some roads and cities, etc. If you want versions ranging from only roads, to a few cities, to nearly the current version, let me know and I will email them to you. This was my first experiment with GIMP. Not perfect, but probably helpful to visitors. If you spot any serious errors or omissions, please let me know.

Best, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:13, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll take a look later. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 00:19, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Map looks good with the following comments:

• text is hard to read against the background - change from black
• airport symbol is too small and not colourful enough - Sanya Phoenix is barely visible.
• Couple of major towns missing - Danzhou and Wuzhishan for starters. Maybe it should feature the 18 county capitals.
• They have good back bacon in RT Mart.

Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:52, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

I will add those. If you would like to give it a shot, I can skype you the master bmp files at various stages, plus the round dots.

I couldn't find the exact location for Wuzhi city. I made the airport symbol small so as not to be larger than the city symbol, but can still make it larger. Love the GIMP. Keep it in a trunk. Would love an IRC chat with you to help with the steps for layers and transparency tracing, if you are so inclined.

RT also has rats. Rogers has smoked salmon sides for 150. Nice. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:00, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

I've emailed you a shiny new airport symbol which you can resize to your requirement. When I get the chance to drop in on IRC I will. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 07:52, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Stamkos is Greek

He's Greek, from the province of Macedonia, which has nothing to do with the Slavic Macedonia Country. Just as Stamkos is a Greek last name, and not a slavic one. 70.29.35.219 (talk) 02:09, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a sensitive topic but he is cited by the reference as Macedonian. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 02:13, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

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edits

This entry has very biased wording and not all of the reference links take you to working sites or sites that are legitimate to prove that reference. It needs to be much more neutral and have legitimate links as references. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.107.93.74 (talk) 03:10, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

The information you deleted from USANA Health Sciences has a working reliable reference. If you want to improve the article go ahead and do so rather than just deleting content. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:17, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Hainan Yellow Lantern Chili

Is the Scotch bonnet-looking chili pepper commonly found in Haikou actually the Hainan Yellow Lantern Chili? If so, I will take a nice photo for the article. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 03:18, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Indeed it is. As a local though, I would say that the Scotch Bonnet is a Hainan Lantern pepper lookalike :) Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:21, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Very well. I will take a photo. I would like to point out, however, that the image in the Hainan Yellow Lantern Chili article shows a rather longer pepper, whereas the ones that I see in the market are quite stout, with seemingly more well-defined vertical indented lines. Is it possible that the current article image is inaccurate? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 03:28, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Basically it's a crap picture that I added. If you look at one of the small bottles of yellow Chilli sauce you'll see which one it is. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:32, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Okay. It must be the same then. The bottles, (I guess you mean the ones with with no labels that contain way too much salt), are sold along side the peppers. Great. I will take the picture. I always thought those were the SB peppers. Lovely. Thanks.

The new topomap image is now at the Hainan article. Feedback me!! Backfeed me!!! Feed me back bacon!! Mmmmmmm, back bacon. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 03:43, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

1st Airlanding Brigade (United Kingdom)

Thanks for the copy edit - I have no problem what so ever with the changes. Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:55, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome. The glider pilot I mentioned took part in two out of the three operations (Sicily excluded) in the article so I have an affiliation with the topic which is always nice. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 08:06, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

DYK for Hollingworth Magniac

The DYK project (nominate) 12:02, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Why did you delete?

I made an addition to Holy Week that was deleted. Why? It was pertinent to the subject as it is a reconstruction of Holy Week that has no inter-Gospel contradtictions or ambiguities. Please use personal email marknystedt@yahoo.com as I am not familiar with wiki-chat. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.147.69.193 (talk) 18:42, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

What I deleted was the text "WHY DID YOU DELETE MY ADDITION?", which you added at the bottom of the lead section. That is vandalism. If you have comments to make they should be added to the article's talk page or on the talk page of the editor concerned. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:15, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

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RAF Northolt

Just wanted to say thank you properly for the copy edits you have completed on RAF Northolt. It looks much better! Harrison49 (talk) 10:18, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome. Anything else that I can do to help just let me know.► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 12:32, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

Red is enough for WV

we need not for every country an own article for World Vision. A RED is enough 92.252.67.255 (talk) 22:32, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can see that now - it would have helped if you'd made a similar comment to the one above on your edit before I reverted it. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 22:35, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

it's to much to have for each charity organisation own articles in all countries of the world. That's stupid 92.252.67.255 (talk) 22:40, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

There would be an article World Vision in Chile, World Vision in Bulgaria, and so on. ONE article for a charity organisation is enough ! 92.252.67.255 (talk) 22:41, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

As I said above, I agree with you — that's why I rolled back my revert. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 22:45, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

Screwed up trying to edit

I just received a message because I screwed up an attempted edit of this page:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_pharaohs

I don't know how to bring this issue to someone's attention but the person listed on the right side of the page as the 'current pretender' is just a woman who runs her only little religious group/cult and thinks she is bringing back the ancient Egyptian religion. She is in no way the pretender to the Egyptian throne. Her reference is her own website which is listed in the footnotes.

I really think her name should be taken out. It's really the equivalent of anyone putting their name in as the pretender. 76.122.134.129 (talk) 02:32, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

No problem, I will undo my revert. Best, Philg88

Don't undo it

You can't put it back to what I did because I screwed up the edit. I must have taken too much out and screwed up the page. I was hoping to just bring the issue to your attention because I'm having too difficult of a time editing it myself. Maybe someone else needs to take a look at the issue and decide if the info I wrote about should be there or not. 76.122.134.129 (talk) 02:41, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

The problem with the infobox is fixed. I will have a quick look at the content now. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 02:44, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

I have removed the information about the pretender per you original intention. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 02:47, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

whats up

why you delete my edit?

Because you added "HELLO Ricky Mtz WAS HERE LIONEL MESSI!!! :D" to the end of the Alligator snapping turtle article. This is vandalism If you continue to add nonsense to Wikipedia articles you will be blocked. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:22, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

yo

philg88 how do you respond so quickly!?!? Wicked!

70.124.0.91 (talk) 03:19, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

El Salvador national football team season 2011

The season overview section is written out in lists which is not good for GA nominations (goal). If anyone could help me out make look more like 2010–11 FC Barcelona season or 2009–10 York City F.C. season. Thanks. Jaime070996 03:32, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm a bit busy with another major copyedit right now. I see you have also posted this request at the WP:GOCE requests page so don't worry, it will be taken care of in due course. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 03:39, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I understand. Happy editing! Jaime070996 03:42, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Opium War

Thanks for the good words -- I'm trying to make these articles even handed, which is sometimes tricky! ch (talk) 15:17, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Andhra

I see that you took lead to wikify Andhra page. Please look into talk page (about topics Andhra definition, edit war, proposal) before wikifying it. There is a talk of merging pages or moving pages etc. I just want to give you heads up, so that your efforts will not go waste. I spent so much time on this page before it was replaced completely by another user(started edit war). Thanks. Ramcrk (talk) 18:20, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for the heads up, much appreciated. I came across the article by accident and fixed up the lead because it looked bad. When I get a minute I will take a look at the talk page and contribute my two annas worth. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 20:20, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Kerry Katona

I think that i am right and you are wrong and also that i was extremely right in changing the article

"I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

this is the reason i give for your aggressiveness —Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.26.102.134 (talk) 21:30, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

The title of the article is Kerry Katona and you changed the infobox to Kerry Hunter with no comment or reference. That is vandalism QED. What an earth the words of Martin Luther King have to do with this is beyond me. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:38, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Builder Broker

hello - I have read all of your articles for the start up pags, I have looked at every page and no where is this whle large industry represented. There is a need for this information to be placed into the enclopedia / wiki. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nicole2H (talk • contribs) 21:39, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

You must have missed the article about spam, for that is what the article is. You are asking people to pay to join an organisation that is not notable and (aside from the organisation's own web site) unreferenced. Pray tell me, why on earth would that justify inclusion in Wikipedia? ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:53, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Good point and I totally agree, if that was what I was going to do, but I an assure you from being a editior with MOZ that is def not my intentions. I have justified the reasons on the Talk Page - reason for non deletion. The reference is about the industry as a whole, same as the reference and article about the estate agents, to which was my reference point. Please see the talk page for total references and justification on why this industry needs to be located into this. Thankyou. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nicole2H (talk • contribs) 22:13, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

The article has now been retagged which will avoid speedy deletion and should give you time to knock it into shape. Good luck! ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 22:32, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Conversion of St Paul edit removed

Was simply pointing out that actually it is probably more correct to talk of Paul as called rather than converted (in line with an essay by Stendahl and Paul's own language about the event- was about to work out citation but added the edit without as I have never done a wikipedia edit before and was unsure how) the information is legitimate and in line with scholarly thought so not sure why removed... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.178.177.217 (talk) 00:37, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

It was reverted because the title of the article is Conversion of Paul the Apostle and the lead section should match the title. If you can get concensus on the article's talk page then by all means move it to "Calling of Paul the Apostle". ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 00:42, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Edit Re-verted

This template was added to User;Blue Square Thing as the page in question contained rubbish and should be speedey deleted or looked at by a administrater. (Sidessneck (talk) 01:07, 22 April 2011 (UTC)0

I'm not sure where you are coming from here. User pages do not usually qualify for speedy deletion and as far as I can see User:Blue Square Thing does not contain rubbish. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 01:12, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Greenfield Reservoir (Hainan)

Am I close with the name? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:52, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Where did you get "Greenfield" from? It's the Songtao Reervoir according to official sources. Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 06:55, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

The sources seem to say that. This one seems most credible. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 07:16, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Yes, that site calls it the "Songtao Reservoir Irrigation Area" whereas "Songtao Reservoir" is more concise. This is a similar issue to the one regarding cave names, i.e. use pinyin whenever possible. "松涛" doesn't mean "greenfield" anyway, it translates roughly as "Rolling wave" but that's an arbitary translation by me and hence irrelevent. My preference is for "Songtao Resrvoir". BTW, did you get my email about the map with the airport symbol? Best ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 07:42, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Good. I will move the page to Songtao Reservoir, and happily. I wasn't happy with Greenfield because of the dab "(Hainan)" at the end. Should I completely remove mention of Greenfield from the article? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 08:03, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a fine idea. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 08:05, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

New Hainan map (redux)

I got the symbols. That looks better. Yours has colour and background. How would you feel about me sending you the image with the airport symbols in place, needing only the addition of the missing cities? I can send you the dots and you place them? If you're too busy, I will give it a shot.

You mentioned the black lettering being too hard to see. I cannot find a single map anywhere with lettering that's not black. We might have to lump that one. Other than that, I just realized that the map source can provide roads. I might start over. No biggie, it was a learning experience. What sayeth thee? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 08:07, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

No problem, send it - can you do so in Photoshop format? Is it layered? I will also redo the roads in Adobe Illustrator so that they look more "map like" i.e. with different coloured edges which is not possible in Photoshop or GIMP unless you have the patience of a saint—looking in the mirror I see no halo. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 08:13, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Take a look at this If you click map on the right, you can get the roads. Suitable?

No. The image is just a bmp.

What I need is someone to walk me through the process of making a map by tracing another. I have GIMP. I can make a layer and trace stuff. Then I can save the layer in some xclsx whatever gimp format that saves the layers. I can then clumsily fit the layer onto a new alpha in WPPaint (don't laugh). That's basically all I can figure out. I have trouble with a couple of things:

• Moving the layer around over the new alpha and adjusting its size.
• Adding a layer and making it somewhat transparent so I can trace elements of the alpha underneath.

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 08:29, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

By the way, mapsforfree is having trouble displaying topo colour format (like the one in the article) at closeup zoom. It's not the firewall here. It's them. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 08:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

For tracing purposes you will need to learn to use the "pen" tool which takes a bit of practice to get the hang of. As for layers, you can adjust the opacity in the layers panel. I would really recommend that you get hold of a copy of Photoshop. There are a billion tutorials for it out there.

As you say, there is a problem with maps for free right now so I can't get what I need. Do you have the original bare topo map that I could work from? Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 22:42, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

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Anna Frodesiak (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Got it thanks, there's a fair lick of work to do on the map so it will be a few days in the making. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 23:10, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Copyediting

I'm sure your copyediting is done with the best of intentions, but I think you need to become more familiar with the manual of style and keep an eye out for changing the meaning of what is written. Also, some changes at Castles in Great Britain and Ireland seem unnecessarily invasive without improving what is written. I think it is important to respect a writer's style; just because they have written something in a different way to how someone else might does not necessarily mean one needs to change as each may be equally valid. This ties in to allowing the writer's voice to come through the article. I've undone some of the changes you've made, and will provide a few examples of the reasoning behind my reversion.

• You changed "Although a small number of castles had been built in England in the 1050s" to "Although a small number of similar structures were built in England during the 1050s". This implied that the structures built in England in this period were not castles. As the section Anglo-Saxon fortifications says, there were indeed castles so this change altered the meaning of the sentence, whether it was intentional or not.

• You changed "During the 12th century, the Normans began to build more castles in stone" to "During the 12th century, the Normans built more castles of stone". The change from imperfect tense to perfect meant that the bit about more stone castles suddenly became restricted to the 12th century when it was actually the beginning of a process of building predominantly in stone that went on for centuries.

• Here you added an endash into a word. Hyphens (-) rather than dashes (–) are used for prefixes, homographs, and compound modifiers per WP:HYPHEN.

• You changed "Second World War" to "World War II"; "Second World War" is more common in British English and per WP:ENGVAR should be preferred in an article of this kind.

• "Who's" is a contraction of "who is" or "who has" [1], the word you were looking for is "whose" [2].

These are only a sample of the problems. Many of your changes were an improvement, fixing typos dabing links etc, but I'd encourage you to in future be more circumspect in your copyediting. Nev1 (talk) 17:18, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for your comments. Since you consider my copyediting sub-standard I will proceed no further on the article. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:01, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

External Links Added to Fashion blog information.

I was under the impression that adding external links to the fashion blog topic (including the blogs mentioned in the wikipedia article) would be beneficial to the information content of the page. Some people might have wanted an easy link to said fashion blogs, and were not easily provided with them. -- Yet the change was reverted. Am I mistaken by this reasoning? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.102.166.189 (talk) 19:23, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

Hi, I didn't revert the edit but had I seen it I would have. Please takes a look at the Wikipedia guideline on external links. None of the links you added meet the requirement and were hence reverted. ► Philg88 ◄ ^talk 21:58, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

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Re: St.George Day

I wouldn't have minded you erasing my comments, because they were a little abrupt and didn't belong on article. However, I am disappointed in you reverting back to what is totally untrue. Wikipedia should contain truth.

St.Georges day is celebrated on the 23rd of April in England. It isn't 'moved' anywhere. Christian churches hold St.George services on the nearest Sunday to the 23rd of April.

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