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April 16, 2022	Good article nominee	Listed

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On 29 March 2022, it was proposed that this article be moved from Real Groove (song) to Real Groove. The result of the discussion was moved.

Requested move 29 March 2022

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. (non-admin closure) NW1223 <Howl at me•My hunts> 18:33, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Real Groove (song) → Real Groove
Real Groove → Real Groove (magazine)

– Pageviews, the magazine has been disestablished, and the song was named one of the best songs of 2021 by Billboard. The song is the clear primary topic. Tree Critter (talk) 15:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support per nom. LOVI 33 16:12, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Support per nom. Shoestringnomad (talk) 00:20, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support That’s a pretty clear case. Schwede 66 08:37, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Per the comments and evidence presented above. — Tom^(T2ME) 08:43, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support even though the song is more recent it has far more views. Crouch, Swale (talk) 17:33, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Real Groove/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
"Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
"and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
"attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
Pipe single to Single (music)
"A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
"with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
Add a comma after second studio album
"Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
"Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
Italicise Infinite Disco

Done

Background and composition

"Minogue was recording her own vocals" → "Minogue recorded her own vocals"
[6] needs to be at the end of the penultimate sentence from the Apple Music notes since that uses a quote
"doesn't know what's coming with it and it" → "does not know what is coming before it" to be less wordy
Remove overly obvious wikilink on London per WP:OVERLINK
Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
Pipe strings to String instrument on the audio sample text
auto-tune → Auto-Tune on the text, with the wikilink
Pipe synths to Synthesizer
Pipe strings to String instrument
Pipe talk-box to Talk box
"Minogue uses auto-tuneed" → "Minogue uses Auto-Tuned" with the wikilink
"found again with Minogue" → "found again, with Minogue"
Remove wikilink on New York City
Wikilink tempo
Remove wikilink on electro-disco
Pipe chorus to Refrain
Remove wikilink on Tokyo

Done

Release and promotion

Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
"the day earlier." → "the previous day."
Italicise Infinite Disco
Where is the LED flooring sourced?
- Removed. LOVI 33 04:31, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
"Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"

Done

"by BBC Radio 2 on 24 December 2020 with" → "by the station on 24 December 2020, with"
"noting its "clean lines" → "noting the "clean lines" to avoid overusage of it
"on a remixed version" → "on an alternate version" since no remix is specified by the source
The source does not specify a digital download and streaming release, also shouldn't you stylize as "Studio 2054 Remix"?
- Added source to back up. "remix" should be lowercase per MOS:MUSICCAPS. LOVI 33 19:01, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"was released on 30 April 2021." → "was released on 30 April." to avoid overusage of the year

Done

Critical reception

"compared it to that album." → "compared the song to the album."
"Gil Kaufman "silk shirt" → "Gil Kaufman observed "silk shirt"
Any idea which wiki Tony Manero should be piped to, if any?
- Per Tony Manero it seems as though he is a character played by John Travolta in two films. Perhaps I pipe it to one of the films? LOVI 33 19:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You should probably leave this actually; doing otherwise would be going against MOS:LINKSTYLE and the film is also unspecified. --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Mike Wass of Idolator called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
"strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
"by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
"said it is" → "said the remix is"
"Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
"best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"

Done

Commercial performance

Pipe UK Singles Sales Chart to List of UK Singles Sales Chart number ones
"as an album chart." → "as an album track."
"that is an increase by" → "that marked an increase of"
"the following week becoming" → "the following week, becoming"
"on the chart." → "on the Hot Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
"16 in Hungary and 8" → "number 16 in Hungary and number 8"
New Zealand Hot Singles chart → New Zealand Hot Singles Chart with the wikilink

Done

Track listings

Good

Personnel

Good

Charts

Good

Release history

Good

Footnotes

Good

References

Copyvio score looks great at 15.3%!!!
Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:RSP
Add url-access subscription to ref 34

Done

External links

Good

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this smooth review! --K. Peake 08:30, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Kyle Peake thanks for the review. All of the issues have been addressed. LOVI 33 19:15, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33 ✓ Pass once again to no surprise; I am consistently impressed with your hard work on these detailed articles! --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]