Talk:Jefferson–Hemings controversy

This article was nominated for deletion on 26/2/2006. The result of the discussion was no consensus.

Eston Hemings' name

Later in his lifetime, Eston Hemings had his (and his family's) last name changed to Jefferson, so his name became "Eston Hemings Jefferson." At least one person has edited the main article to change "Eston Hemings" to "Eston Hemings Jefferson." I believe it should be kept as "Eston Hemings" (except when directly quoting sources who used the latter name) for the following reasons. First, his name was Eston Hemings during the time of his life that this controversy originated; the name change did not come until 1852, long after Thomas Jefferson's death, and therefore in the context of this controversy the earlier name should be used. Second, and perhaps more to the point, using the "Jefferson" surname for Eston is conclusionary in the context of the article, and furthermore becomes very confusing since most of the discussion of the controversy concerns DNA matching between the Hemings and Jefferson families. - Embram (talk) 21:42, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

Scope of Article

I believe this article was initiated to provide the details of Jefferson's DNA data, not the Hemmings Controversy. I think that the controversy should really stay on either the Hemmings page, or a "Hemmings-Jefferson Controversy" page. A lot of people are interested in the Atlantic Modal Haplotype and various other aspects of Y-chromosomal DNA without any concern with respect to who Jefferson did or did not sleep with. This article could be a reference/source in the Hemmings, Ellis, and perhaps a future "Controversy" article for those who want more information. Sandwich Eater 13:39, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

There is a separate article on Haplogroup T (Y-DNA), which is the appropriate place for the technical discussion. Parkwells (talk) 00:46, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Article title

This article needs a better title. --JW1805 (Talk) 20:48, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

It's hard to know what the original intent of the article was - if to discuss overall aspects of Jefferson DNA, then that needs to be more clear. It seems to devote too much space to K2(T) material. Do we need to know its representation in every population around the world?--Parkwells (talk) 17:23, 10 February 2009 (UTC)

Context

Who conducted this study? Who took the DNA samples, and when? Are the names of the people tested known? Since this article is basically about one experiment, it needs some context on who conducted the experiment, and where/when. --JW1805 (Talk) 20:48, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

More information could be added. The first referenced study was in 1998, conducted by Dr. Eugene Foster, of the Y-DNA samples from male descendants of the Jefferson line (no direct descendant documented of Jefferson), Eston Hemings, Thomas Woodson (proposed as another Jefferson son), and Carr brothers (proposed as alternative fathers to Hemings' children.) The DNA test proved 1) that the Jefferson line and Eston Hemings line were related. It further proved 2) that the Jefferson line was not related to the Woodson descendants, and 3) that the Carr males were not related to the Eston Hemings descendants. Some people just don't want to give up.--Parkwells (talk) 17:21, 10 February 2009 (UTC)

This is not the most appropriate place for the presentation of the historical background. However, this page indicated the lack of a link between Thomas Woodson and either Sally Hemings or Thomas Jefferson. It was corrected. Misrepresentation of this history continues after 200+ years. Historians do not acknowledge the mutilations to the Farm Book that Thomas Jefferson wrote in his own hand. An erasure is located in a census of slaves, written by Jefferson in the column for male slaves and the line for slaves born in 1790. Hemings' first son was born in 1790. The names were not entirely erased and so the last letter of the mother's name survives in the Farm Book. The letter is a 'Y.' The name Sally ends in a 'Y.' Nor do historians acknowledge the record of gifts Thomas Jefferson recorded made to Thomas in his financial records. Jefferson made those gifts in 1800 and 1801, shortly before newman James Callender reported that Sally Hemings was the concubine of Thomas Jefferson, disquieting the liaison. If Jeffersonian historians were to acknowledge the mutilations of the Farm Book and the notations written by Thomas Jefferson, then historians, such as Andrew Berstein would be oblidged to exalt a much different history. They would be forced to write the history as Thomas Jefferson would have written it.

Nor has denial quieted after 200 years. In 1999 University of Virginia doctorial student Joshua Rothman wrote an article, after the reported DNA results were reported. The article was printed in a book published by the University of Virginia. Rothman claimed, "Hemings herself claimed this child died shortly after being born." The fact is that no letters, no diary or any writings by Hemings survived, if they existed. Further no one during her lifetime (in writing) quoted a word spoken by Hemings. Rothman could not have interviewed Sally Hemings, as she died over 100 years before Rothman was born. Rothman attempted to kill off her son after 200 years with this misrepresentation of the historic record. This error is not the only abomination in Rothman's article. It is obvious that Rothman's education at the University of Virginia confirms the caution W.E. B. DuBois, advised over 100 years ago,"We shall never have a science of history until we have in our colleges men who regard the truth as more important than the defense of the white race."

Nor did the habitual liar Joseph Ellis quiet the controversy when he appeared on the PBS NewsHour program on November 2, 1998 to report the DNA results. If scientists controlled the process, then why didn't scientists appear first on television to comment on the results, rather than a habitual liar? Historians, such as Ellis, who have misrepresented the history for 200 years, could have commented after the release of the DNA results. What in fact happened was that Ellis was in contact with Nature before the DNA results were released. Dr. Eugene Foster, who collected blood samples from participants, had promised participants that the process would be removed from the reach of historians, but Ellis crossed the line too early. The God and Country Foundation forced the magazine Nature to "clarify" its position and admit that the DNA testing was not conclusive. Whatsmore, Ellis immersed the Jefferson /Hemings controversy in the muck of the Clinton/Lewinsky scandal two days before a congessional election (front page Sunday newspaper coverage). How does a "scientific" process have ethical intregity, when its most visible spokesman is a habitual liar, immersed in the political soup of fresh White House scandal? Ellis added controversy to controversy.

What's with all this editorializing and race-baiting by this (unsigned IP?) editor? Gee, have an agenda much? I've seen holy hell raised in other corners of Wikipedia and people topic banned and Wiki-banned for this kind of soapboxing. Speaking of incomplete history, Callender is mentioned but the editor apparently forgot to mention that he had an ax to grind with Jefferson and had threatened Jefferson with "consequences" if not given a particular appointment. It's said he "disquieted" the liaison as if it's established fact. Callender alleged it. For the record, Jefferson denied it.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 01:20, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Sounds as if the editor supports Thomas Woodson as a descendant of Jefferson and Sally Hemings. Guess no one bothered to pay attention, given the facts of the DNA.Parkwells (talk) 15:52, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

Diagram

Would some sort of family tree diagram be helpful here? --JW1805 (Talk) 20:50, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

A diagram would be extremely helpful to illustrate how the DNA test -- absent of any historical assumptions/opinions -- indicates that twenty-five "Jefferson male relatives" are candidates for paternity of Eston Hemmings. This includes Randolf Jefferson (Thomas Jefferson's brother) and his sons, who lived within 20 miles and all frequented Monticello, all of whom the Scholars Commission indicated as the most likely suspects for paternity. I have not come across such a diagram, and I would assume that historian and genealogist Herbert Barger, who assisted Eugene Foster (now deceased) in the DNA study, would be a good source for such a diagram. This would be a significant visual aid, since many assume that the DNA results demonstrated a direct link to Thomas Jefferson, which it didn't. In William Hyland's book "In Defense of Thomas Jefferson", historian Willard Sterne Randall called the FBI DNA lab to question the inferences of Foster's conclusion, since no DNA was used from Jefferson himself:

I don't deal in inferences. As a former journalist, I got on the phone and called the head of the DNA lab at the FBI, Jennifer Smith, who told me this case wouldn't hold up in court because his [Jefferson's] only son died, and as long as there are other possibilities of people who had access to Sally Hemings the case would be thrown out of court on those grounds. (Willard Sterne Randall's interview on John McLaughlin's One on One, PBS television broadcast, November 6, 1998)

For this reason, I would also recommend the sentence in the article "The study concluded that Jefferson was the probable biological father of Eston Hemings Jefferson" be corrected to say "a Jefferson male" in order to be more accurate with the DNA results. Otherwise opinion and assumption is being projected onto the DNA results, which is unscientific and would be mistaken as proven fact. The DNA results point to a number of Jefferson males as candidates, but does not single out one as the father. Therefore the results are inconclusive for direct paternity.

--Tlsihcd (talk) 16:06, 7 December 2010 (UTC)

This is not a court case. Th e Foster team was aware of some of the historical evidence supporting Jefferson's paternity, and its article said that the simplest explanation of the results and most probable was that Jefferson was the father of Eston Hemings and likely Sally's other children. A committee of researchers called by the Thomas Jefferson Foundation, which runs the Jefferson public history site of Monticello, concluded the same thing in 2000. Major biographers have changed their minds about Jefferson's likely paternity, as the assertion for more than 150 years was that the Carr nephews were the fathers, not some other Jefferson. In 2001 the National Genealogical Society Quarterly ran a special issue with articles concluding that the DNA results, together with the body of historical evidence, demonstrated a firm chain of evidence connecting Thomas Jefferson with Hemings and her children. They strongly criticized the Scholars Commission report, published earlier that year by the Thomas Jefferson Heritage Society, for failing to follow good historical and genealogical practices, and ignoring the weight of evidence. Randolph Jefferson was never seriously proposed as a paternal candidate until after the DNA results showed the Carrs could not be the father of Eston Hemings, and that there was a match between the Jefferson male line and the Hemings descendant. The MacArthur Foundation awarded Annette Gordon-Reed, who had pointed out how historians discounted some of the evidence prior to the DNA testing, for her persistent investigation resulting in a "dramatic change in Jeffersonian scholarship." Parkwells (talk) 00:40, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

A diagram is not necessary for this article. Also, DNA from Jefferson, or a legitimate son/male-line descendant of Jefferson, would just be as good as the DNA they took from Jefferson's paternal uncle, since what they are testing is Y-chromosomal DNA (Y-DNA is the same for all male descendants of a family in male line). That is, even a direct legitimate male-line descendant of Thomas Jefferson would be just as good a match as a descendant of Jefferson's paternal uncle - which means that, even if there is available Y-DNA data from a legitimate male-line descendant of Thomas Jefferson, it cannot be definitively said that the Hemings descendants were descended from Thomas Jefferson. It would still just mean that the Hemings were descended from a Jefferson male. Given the Y-DNA evidence and historical accounts, it is safe to conclude that Jefferson is the father. The only other thing that would be better than this Y-DNA test they performed would be to take DNA from Jefferson and Eston Hemings and compare all of their 23 chromosomes (instead of a Y-DNA test, which compares just 1 chromosome). Emerson 07 (talk) 11:13, 25 August 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but it was the Foster team who, with all the caveats, concluded that Thomas Jefferson was most likely the father, as there is other historical evidence that contributes to this conclusion.Parkwells (talk) 19:44, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

The major issue is that two of Jefferson's grandchildren identified Peter and Samuel Carr, his nephew(s), as the father of Hemings children. Historians adopted this view and it prevailed for about 180 years, along with many subjective evaluations of Jefferson's "character" as to why he would have refrained from this relationship. The 1998 DNA study conclusively proved that the Hemings descendant did not match the Carr descendants "consensus" haplotype, but did match the Jefferson haplotype (which is relatively rare.) This demolished the chief pillar of the family denial of Jefferson's paternity; therefore, the new consensus is that Jefferson was the father of all of Sally Hemings' children. In addition, related historical data known to the study team was that Jefferson was at Monticello for the conception window of each of Hemings' children; she never conceived except when he was there. Full reports are online.Parkwells (talk) 02:49, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

Jewish?

So does jefferson have a jewish paternal line? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.69.81.224 (talk • contribs) 18:26, 20 June 2007

It's possible. There are Jews who belong to Haplogroup K2, and that is one source of K2 in European populations. The New York Times ran an article on the possibility in February. However there are also many other ways K2 lineages are believed to have been carried from the Middle East to Western Europe. One possibility, raised in the article here and particularly publicised a couple of years ago by Spencer Wells, is possible lines of descent from Phoenician traders; another is possible lines of descent from soldiers of the Roman Empire with origins in the Eastern Mediterranean.

At the moment we simply don't have a detailed enough picture of what clusters of STR haplotypes there are in K2, and whether they fall into identifiable geographic or migratory patterns -- because K2 remains rather unusual in the Western Europeans and European Americans who have mostly been tested so far.

But the picture may well become clearer as more and more research and DNA testing continues to be done. Jheald 19:06, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

As Jews made up 10% of the Roman Empire 2,000 years ago, it would be almost mathematically impossible for a European or North-African not to have at least one ancestor who was either Jewish or a "Jewish" progenitor. LarG (talk) 19:57, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

This is totally misleading. Haplogroup K2 frist of all originated in South Asia, not the Middle East and second of all it is also more common among European (25% (4/16) of Chians in Chios,[9] 23.5% (4/17) of German Stilfser/Tyrolese in Stilfs,[10] 22.2% (2/9) of Venetians in Vigasio and Povegliano Veronese,[11] 17.9% (5/28) of Sicilians in Sciacca,[12]), Caucasus( 28% (7/25) of Lezginians in Dagestan,[67] 21.7% (5/23) of Ossetians in Zamankul,[71] 13% (3/23) of Ossetians in Zil'ga), and Asian( 55.6% (10/18) of Kurru in Andhra Pradesh,[2] 52.6% (10/19) of Bauris in West Bengal,[2] 50% (2/4) of Lodha in West Bengal,[2] 15.9% (3/19) of Rajus in Andhra Pradesh,[2] and 15.3% (2/13) of Mahli in West Bengal.[2] With K-M9+, unconfirmed but probable T-M70+ : 56.6% (30/53) of Kunabhis in Uttar Kannada,[3] 32.5% (13/40) of Kammas in Andhra Pradesh,[4] 26.8% (11/41) of Brahmins in Visakhapatnam,[4] 25% (1/4) of Kattunaiken in South India,[5] 22.4% (11/49) of Telugus in Andhra Pradesh,[6])populations than it is in Jewish populations. In fact, if one looks at the highest frequencies of people who carry this marker, they are found in European, Caucasus and Asian populations.[1] (Angar432 (talk) 02:01, 8 July 2010 (UTC))

Far-fetched stuff

The last paragraph of this piece reads: "The Haplogroup K2 may be part of the Jefferson male line DNA as Jefferson is said to be a spelling variant of the name Jephson. The Jephson surname's variant has been recorded as Gestson. Gestsson is an Icelandic viking name. The vikings were known to have settled in Wales (where Jefferson's ancestors lived) and have trade routes in Africa." It's highly doubtful that Jefferson's last name had anything to do with Icelandic Vikings, and it's far from certain that Jefferson's family came from Wales either. MarmadukePercy (talk) 20:59, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

No one has replied to this since I posted it, so I'm removing the last paragraph of this article as it's highly speculative and poorly sourced. MarmadukePercy (talk) 19:22, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

Moved technical discussion

This article got too far into a discussion of the haplogroup K2/Haplogroup T (Y-DNA), so I moved two paragraphs to that article, a more appropriate place for detailed discussion of population percentages and Levantine migration.Parkwells (talk) 00:43, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

I agree with the move. But I see no mention here of the actual haplogroup of the Carrs. If that is known, that needs mentioning. Jefferson came from a very rare haplogroup in Western European populations. The Carrs, with whom I'm familiar, are undoubtedly not in haplogroup T/K2. That needs fleshing out here. MarmadukePercy (talk) 01:43, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

Have not found it.Parkwells (talk) 18:05, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Discussion of Malone's documentation of Jefferson's activities

I did not originate the term "timeline" in reference to Malone's documentation of Jefferson's activities and residencies at Monticello. Winthrop Jordan made use of his data and noted the connection between Jefferson at Monticello and Hemings' conceptions. This data was also used and referenced by Fawn Brodie in her biography of Jefferson and Annette Gordon-Reed in Thomas Jefferson and Sally Hemings: An American Controversy, who refers to a Malone "timeline". The point is that other historians used the documentation of Malone of Jefferson's activities to assess his possible paternity of Hemings' children, and found she conceived only when he was at Monticello, during years when he was away for months at a time. Parkwells (talk) 15:44, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

Recommend separate article on DNA study

Earlier editors had recommended that articles on the controversy and on the study be combined. Now that more time has passed, I think this should be rethought. The article on the controversy needs a summary of the DNA data, not all the details. And, there are people very interested in the DNA data and not all the historiography. I will try to draft a summary of the DNA study and data to show here. If we agree, then we can move the major discussion of the DNA data to another article - perhaps "Jefferson DNA Study"? Or "Jefferson-Hemings DNA study"?Parkwells (talk) 18:04, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

I think that it is valuable to have this article (pretty much as is, though it could be better written) since it joins together all the historical and genealogical evidence on the controversy. There probably could be a sub-article on the DNA evidence as well, though I am neutral to that. Sunray (talk) 19:27, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

That was what I meant, to have a sub-article on the DNA study and conclusions alone, as some people are interested in the more technical issues (especially the discovery of the rare haplotype). (In its previous form, the DNA study article had much information also about the historical arguments, but that could be excluded.) The most important part of the DNA study as it relates to the controversy are the first three paragraphs under the "DNA Study" section - which essentially form a summary.Parkwells (talk) 16:31, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a reasonable approach. Sunray (talk) 02:37, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

National Park Service biography

The National Park Service runs the Jefferson and Westward Expansion Memorial in St. Louis, as well as the Jefferson Memorial in Washington, DC. Its biography of Jefferson online includes a discussion of the Jefferson-Hemings controversy, and the academic consensus supporting Jefferson's paternity of Eston Hemings and likely all of Sally Hemings' children. Parkwells (talk) 15:13, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

Alleged son?

Why does the portrait say Eston Hemings son is the alleged grandson if it's been established was Jefferson's son?Studyhard12 (talk) 14:05, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Because some people don't want to accept the academic consensus on this.Parkwells (talk) 07:57, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

It hasn't been definitely established and probably never will be one way or the other. It's the opinion of some based on circumstantial and limited DNA evidence. The only thing that's known for sure is that some Jefferson male fathered Eston Hemings. TJ was one possible candidate out of many.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 06:10, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

Nonetheless, there is an academic consensus, based on traditional means of historical interpretation together with the DNA evidence, and that is that Jefferson is the father of Hemings' children. The way such an argument is generally presented, is that there is a consensus, and there are dissenting opinions, as is seen in other articles in which a minority disagree.Parkwells (talk) 12:58, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

It hasn't been definitively established and probably never will be one way or the other. It's the opinion of some based on circumstantial and limited DNA evidence. The only thing that's known for sure is that some Jefferson male fathered Eston Hemings. TJ was one possible candidate out of many.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 19:32, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

Current scholarship

Each of the books in the first paragraph of this section accepts the current academic consensus that Jefferson likely fathered all of Hemings' children. It is not my POV. The review by Wood only referred to Bernstein's book, and that has been clarified.Parkwells (talk) 20:30, 19 April 2012 (UTC)

TDOL, you are attacking this section as if it were not connected to the rest of the article. These authors have written books reflecting the academic consensus that emerged about 2000 agreeing that Jefferson fathered Hemings' children, which is discussed earlier in the article beginning in the Lede, and in following sections. The cites refer to that aspect of their books. It was not the only thing they were writing about in relation to studying Jefferson. The joint Smithsonian-Monticello exhibit at the National Museum of American History is considered a landmark for its treatment of Jefferson. It is current scholarship that reflects the consensus on Jefferson's paternity and is cited for that conclusion. It is appropriate to look at works since 2000 and see what has been happening in the field in the last 12-14 years since the DNA testing and independent studies. Please stop deleting this properly sourced material. Parkwells (talk) 01:56, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

After taking a closer look I recognized it for what it is and as consistent with your typical MO. The connections and assertions made are yours - pure POV and OR and as such have no place in a Wikipedia article. As noted previously, when I first looked at it, you were trying to prop it all up with a single reference that didn't even mention most of the books and authors mentioned in the paragraph hoping no one would notice. "..They have used their acknowledgement of Jefferson's relationship with Hemings and paternity of her children as a basis for re-evaluating.." - nowhere to be found in the reference cited - it didn't make a comparison of the referenced works. Nothing but academic review according to Parkwells. Just shuffling a few things and rewording doesn't change what it is.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 19:11, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

You're criticizing something that didn't exist. Fact: You took the Wood cite as referring to all the books; I clearly had a quote referring to Bernstein's book alone. Fact: Each of the books acknowledges the new consensus, and in some cases represents changes by their authors from previous works. Fact: Each book discusses Jefferson or Monticello from new perspectives, as noted in the reviews. And the Smithsonian/Monticello exhibit? Do you think that doesn't exist because you are trying to bar coverage of it in the article? Parkwells (talk) 22:09, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

All assertions, assessments, etc. need to be from RS's, not those of an editor.

Criticizing something that didn't exist? Let's take a look.

Current scholarship

In the last decade, many new works related to Jefferson and Monticello have been published, such as Richard B. Bernstein's Thomas Jefferson (2003); Andrew Burstein's Jefferson’s Secrets: Death and Desire at Monticello (2005); Christopher Hitchens' Thomas Jefferson: Author of America (2005); and Annette Gordon-Reed's The Hemingses of Monticello: An American Family (2008), which won the Pulitzer Prize for history and 15 other major awards. They have used their acknowledgement of Jefferson's relationship with Hemings and paternity of her children as a basis for re-evaluating the rest of his life and some of his political decisions.[63] Other scholars, including some associated with the TJHS, have published works that continue to argue against Jefferson's paternity.

Here's the reference cited - http://www.nytimes.com/2003/12/14/books/slaves-in-the-family.html?scp=2&sq=thomas%20jefferson%20garry%20wills&st=nyt&pagewanted=all

What doesn't exist is any statement by this reviewer resembling what you've inserted regarding any comparison of the works cited. That's strictly your OR. Only the Bernstein book is even mentioned in the review. So this large chunk of the section is predicated on the strength of a single *book review* that doesn't even contain what you claim it does. Pure POV and OR. TheDarkOneLives (talk) 23:49, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Each of the books acknowledges Jefferson's paternity; what you describe as POV is a summary of that; it is not an independent assertion of my own opinion not related to fact. The Smithsonian exhibit paragraph was cited and you deleted it - that is your POV.Parkwells (talk) 15:13, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

Meaning of controversies

Numerous Wikipedia articles discuss the "meanings of controversies," especially some of the recent media storms around breaking news, videos released widely over the Internet and later shown to be less then they appeared. It is part of the discussions related to how the controversies developed. An example is in James O'Keefe, in which there was much soul-searching by media as to their role and their part in the controversy. The writing of history is about interpretation, and it is legitimate for historians to discuss or question how interpretations have arisen. Parkwells (talk) 02:23, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Barger

The description of Barger's activities in the "Dissenting" section needs to be supported with a cite. The source cited is only a web page showing him as the previous president of TJSH; it says nothing about his activities in tracing descendants.Parkwells (talk) 15:01, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

Monticello Community

Restored cited content on this group; it arose among Jefferson descendants in opposition to the position of the Monticello Association excluding Hemings-Jefferson descendants from membership. It received an international award and has been covered by the media.Parkwells (talk) 15:09, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

Current scholarship

New scholarship is being generated that is influenced by the change in consensus, at least among some scholars. For example, in 2010 the MacArthur Foundation noted the change in Jeffersonian scholarship when awarding Gordon-Reed. That's why I had listed (with cited reviews) new works on Jefferson and his society, such as Burstein's and Rothmann's works, which go beyond acknowledging TJ's paternity of Hemings' children to study and add new history. Hyland and similar authors seem to continue on one thing: to argue the "defense" of Jefferson. Parkwells (talk) 18:25, 1 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your additions.Parkwells (talk) 02:41, 2 May 2012 (UTC)

You're thanking yourself?TheDarkOneLives (talk) 05:10, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Musical Talent

Musical talent is hereditary. Both Thomas and Randolph Jefferson were musical and played violin. Was any Hemmings whom they supposedly fathered also musical? Schmausschmaus (talk)

As I recall, Eston Hemings was known for his talent with the violin. Alanscottwalker (talk) 00:11, 24 September 2012 (UTC)

Things I found confusing and would wish clearer

Two things: First, The sentence QUOTE: In addition, they determined he would not have had such a relationship because of his expressed antipathy to blacks and miscegenation in his writings, combined with his perceived moral character. UNQUOTE Could we have the "expressed antipathy to blacks" in Thomas Jefferson's own words, not necessarily the text but a clickable link to his text? I haven't read everything Jefferson wrote but what I have read suggests that while he thought it might be impossible in the future to have a country of undifferentiated blacks and whites in harmony, it was not necessary for him to have antipathy towards blacks for him to have believed that was true. It's possible that a person who believes that whites will never work out in South Africa or Zimbabwe has no antipathy towards whites. But if there's words (and for all I know there ARE) of Thomas Jeffersion that really are an "antipathy to blacks" just link them please. Second, "his perceived moral character". A man with antipathies based on race HAS no moral character, so that needs some kind of explanation or some indication or irony or SOMETHING that would make it not-totally-bewildering.

Second, those Carr nephews. They are referred to as if someone reading this article already knows who they are. I think contributors simply forget that a lot of people are not coming to Wikipedia to read an article about something on which they are already expert and tweak that article in such manner as needed to protect their friends' careers, but, rather, simply to learn about a topic (and as often as not express frustration at how contributors make it hard to do just that) on which they know no more than the average person. Coming here only to find out about the topic, I had no idea, before I got here, who the Carr nephews were. The constant reference to their genetic difference from Thomas Jefferson (for without that difference they could be the father of Hemings's children) required me to go to the article on Thomas Jefferson's mother, find therein a daughter of hers who married a man named "Carr", and then rest easy. It would have been far more to my liking had you spared me the effort and referred to the Carrs not as "nephews" but as "sororal nephews", not that I know that that is the correct term but I'm making a guess. Because if they're Thomas Jefferson's brother's sons (and no, don't go there, there's ways their surname could be "Carr" were they sons or step-sons of a brother, step-brother, or half-brother of Thomas Jefferson) then something's not making sense vis-a-vis the "male-line" DNA. I checked and saw they're his sister's sons. So then it connected up. But I shouldn't have had to check. If I were writing this article I wouldn't even use the term "sororal nephews" for them. People tend to be precise about step-siblings and half-siblings, but less so about "nephews" who are stepsons of a sibling, or sons and stepsons of someone who is a step-sibling or half-sibling. They'll say "nephew" rather than "step-nephew" or "step-half-nephew", which, in genetics, leaves it too broad. I'd have gone with "sister's sons" or even "full sister's sons". Or adopted the diagram suggestion.

I do not create an account here because I'm a reader, not a writer, of your articles. I've obeyed the stated instructions for editing this talk page. If more is required then change your instructions and make your cyber-system REQUIRE more. I'm signing BEFORE AND AFTER the four tildes because apparently not everyone can see otherwise. Christopher L. Simpson69.86.131.77 (talk) 09:49, 16 February 2013 (UTC)Christopher L. Simpson