Talk:Caryn Navy

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Assessment notes[edit]

B class criteria: 1- refs look good 2- good coverage 3 - structure good 4- no glaring prose errors 5- a photo would be nice, but if one isn't available that's fine 6- understandable, the math section is predictably arcane, but the commentary on the work is nice and there are plenty of informative links. This isn't really the proper article to explain the technical stuff. Danger (talk) 02:33, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

Comment[edit]

I am Caryn Navy's husband, somewhat amazed that an article of this length has been written about her. Everything written is well sourced, and accurate except for one tiny detail: Caryn obtained her Optacon during the summer between her undergraduate and graduate education. I have made the minor correction to update this. Right now I cannot cite a source, except to say my whole family was present when the lessons took place. If you want to stike this change, please cite evidence that Caryn used an Optacon during her undergraduate years. Silver dot (talk) 21:25, 28 March 2012 (UTC)