Talk:Isaac Okoro
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Lead
[edit]- "Okoro played basketball for McEachern High School in Georgia for four years. As a senior, he helped McEachern win the state championship and achieve national success." - consider merging these two sentences and shortening them accordingly
Early life
[edit]- "When he was seven to eight years old," - was around seven to
- "and grew up in the outskirts of metro Atlanta." - and was raised close to metro Atlanta.
High school career
[edit]- "Okoro played basketball for" - played high school basketball
- "His team closed the regular season" - ended
- "and receiving a No. 1 national ranking" - No.
- Delink Sharife Cooper because he is already linked in the previous subsection
- "Okoro was named to the MaxPreps All-American second team" - not mentioned by USA Today. Please find another source that explicitly states this information
College career
[edit]- "The following game, he had 17 points" - attained
- "Okoro did not play in a game against Missouri on February 15" - in a February 15 game against Missouri
- Wikilink hamstring injury
- "Okoro was named SEC Freshman of the Week" - spell out SEC out in full and put the acronyms in parentheses
- "he announced that he would test the waters for the" - please don't use idioms per MOS:IDIOM and state its literal meaning
National team career
[edit]- Delink Argentina per MOS:OVERLINK
References
[edit]- References 24 and 27 should have the work in the publisher field and without www. and com. in them
- Both of the above references should also mention the date they were published
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:12, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: All comments have been addressed Sportzeditz (talk) 16:43, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Sportzeditz: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a few changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
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