Talk:James Yabe

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This page is just a general description of a person who is influential to martial arts instruction and is similar in nature to : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hidetaka_Nishiyama

Please note, no contact info is provided , no addresses, no product promotion, no links to product sales etc.....

Respectfully - New Wiki user

I'm satisfield this wasn't intended as a spam article now, so I'm removing the speedy tag. However, this article does need rewording from a neutral point of view.
Basing articles on existing articles is a good start, but beware of basing your articles on articles rated stub-class (as you can see here) as they probably fail to meet a number of Wikipedia's quality standards. Try looking here for examples of how to write articles about martial arts. Try looking at articles rated FA,GA or B for some good examples.
Chris Neville-Smith (talk) 19:27, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Thank you for your kind review of my posting. I have added a few citations and done some small rewording as per your suggestion. Please review for your further suggestions.

Thanks JionFrank (talk) 18:59, 11 November 2008 (UTC)