Talk:Jumalan teatteri

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A fact from Jumalan teatteri appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 March 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that during their two-minute performance at the Oulu City Theatre, the group Jumalan teatteri caused a huge scandal by throwing excrement, eggs and yoghurt at the audience?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Jumalan teatteri.

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 04:02, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that during their two-minute performance in Oulu, Finland, in January 1987, the Jumalan teatteri group caused a huge scandal by throwing excrement, eggs and yoghurt on the audience? Source: Paska juttu – Jumalan teatteri Oulussa, Yleisradio. Accessed on 11 February 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Clutter

Created by JIP (talk). Self-nominated at 11:24, 11 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jumalan teatteri; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Definitely an interesting hook and interesting article. I wonder if we can tighten the hook a little, maybe using the theater name and link Oulu_City_Theatre. I think the month and year could be dropped too. The first reference is returning a broken link. The article could probably do with a thorough copyedit as the article still reads a little clunky from the translation. A huge thank you to User:Rjjiii and User:TSventon for the copyedit! Looks good to me! Seddon ^talk 01:01, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will have a look at what I can do about the broken link at the first reference. JIP | Talk 00:04, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- The broken link at the first reference has been fixed. JIP | Talk 00:10, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that during their two-minute performance at the Oulu City Theatre the Jumalan teatteri group caused a huge scandal by throwing excrement, eggs and yoghurt on the audience? Source: Paska juttu – Jumalan teatteri Oulussa, Yleisradio. Accessed on 11 February 2024. JIP | Talk 13:07, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JIP: hook and ref fix is good. The only thing I would say is that the article could probably still do with a thorough copyedit. Seddon ^talk 01:06, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am not a native English speaker so the text in the article is not necessarily perfect English. It should be copyedited by someone who is a native English speaker. JIP | Talk 06:50, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JIP: I've asked for a copyedit on Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know and will check-in periodically on this! Seddon ^talk 18:01, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit complete! Seddon ^talk 01:01, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]