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Good articleTerry Bywater has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 16, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 5, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that 2012 British Paralympic wheelchair basketball player Terry Bywater made his Paralympic debut in 2000 in Sydney?

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Terry Bywater/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 09:45, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


This article only needs a few fixes

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    I've done a copy edit - revert anything you don't like.
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    Can you use the medal templates for the Paralympics?
     Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Can we link Middlesbrough - Super League - World Wheelchair Basketball Championship ?
     Done World Wheelchair Basketball Championships and Middlesbrough. Super League does not have an article. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Any idea what other European clubs he has played for?
    After a hunt, I cannot find which ones. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    No worries. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:03, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    Can you update it to include the 2012 Summer Paralympics?
    Done. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Colour

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Is there any reason for using the dark blue in the infobox as in is difficult to read the black text on the dark blue. Keith D (talk) 15:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the author wanted to reflect team GB's colour. Tried switching to a lighter shade of blue. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:41, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Much clearer - thanks. Keith D (talk) 19:00, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]