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All of this unsourced puffery should be removed from the lede. The lede should be fairly straight-forward, objective and merely reflect what RS say. [[User:Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans]] ([[User talk:Snooganssnoogans|talk]])
All of this unsourced puffery should be removed from the lede. The lede should be fairly straight-forward, objective and merely reflect what RS say. [[User:Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans]] ([[User talk:Snooganssnoogans|talk]])

:Before I respond to your arguments, can you please define ''puffery''? [[User:Nightscream|Nightscream]] ([[User talk:Nightscream|talk]]) 03:28, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

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Fiancee killed in car accident?

The grammar is confusing in the bio section that states that Rachel was injured in a car accident along with passengers and an MTV producer who "were" killed. Who "were" the people who were killed and did that include her fiancee at the time? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.60.151.53 (talk) 18:47, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Is it better now? Nightscream (talk) 23:00, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Protected edit request on 7 March 2014

  • The passage John-Paul(2006), needs to have a space placed between "Paul" and the opening parenthesis.
  • The end of that passage has two periods at the end of the last sentence, one before and one after the citation. The latter one is the wrong one, per WP:PAIC.
  • The passage Campos earned a master's degree in international affairs from the University of California at San Diego. is unsourced.
  • The passage on Jenny McCarthy replacing Hasselbeck is unsourced. There are a number of sources in The View article that could be added to that passage.
  • The passage on The Wedding Video may benefit from having "2003" placed before The Wedding Video for historical clarity.

Nightscream (talk) 19:56, 7 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: According to the page's protection level and your user rights, you should currently be able to edit the page yourself. If you still seem to be unable to, please reopen the request with further details. — {{U|Technical 13}} (tec) 01:43, 15 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Personal information regarding minor children

I have deleted the full names and dates of birth of Campos-Duffy's minor children. There is no encyclopedic need for this level of detail of personal identifying information. If fans are that fixated on knowing this information, there are apparently other sources online, but Wikipedia shouldn't participate. This is People stuff, not encyclopedia stuff; WP:NOTGOSSIP.Julietdeltalima (talk) 22:46, 21 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Unsourced puffery in the lede

(1) RCD is not "known as for her work as a television host and as a former reality television personality." -- She's not known for anything. She is a television personality, she is not known for it. That's puffery. (2) She did not "gain wide exposure". That's entirely unsourced. Puffery. (3) "Recurring" guest host is unsourced. It's more precise to say she "has guest-hosted", without specifying how many times or giving readers the impression that she's guest-hosted a lot of episodes. Again, unsourced puffery.

All of this unsourced puffery should be removed from the lede. The lede should be fairly straight-forward, objective and merely reflect what RS say. Snooganssnoogans (talk)

Before I respond to your arguments, can you please define puffery? Nightscream (talk) 03:28, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]