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What does "deconflicted" exactly mean in this context? Y. Dongchen (talk) 10:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No idea. @Y. Dongchen: Please restore "aid workers", as they were specifically employees dealing with the distribution of aid and not any other managerial positions. Also please restore the information about the UNRWA workers killed, which is being reported in every RS article about the airstrike, so this is definitely notable and relevant. Makeandtoss (talk) 10:59, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have used "employees" as it is a specific word used in the WCK press release. The killed UNRWA workers is not of high relevance − Wikipedia is not written in news style. If readers want some context of the level of Israeli killings, the "see also" section does that. Y. Dongchen (talk) 11:09, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Makeandtoss Ah sorry on the first point I didn't initially understand you: If you do not understand the original language in e.g. a press release, inclusion should be done via Wikipedia:Quotations. NPOV reporting demands aversion from direct copying from press releases if a term is unclear. Y. Dongchen (talk) 11:14, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Makeandtoss: You can revert non ECR editing without consequence and non EC editors may submit edit requests if desired per WP:ARBECR. Selfstudier (talk) 11:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ah that explains quite a number of things, I still haven't reverted anyone anyway, but good to know. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:17, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WCK logos on the cars

@Durranistan: [1] was this reverted by mistake? In addition to the grammar fix at the opening paragraph? Makeandtoss (talk) 13:13, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have already it seems reverted me twice which violates 1RR. [2] Makeandtoss (talk) 13:14, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This might be a mistake because I'm mostly focused on the reaction section of the article Durranistan (talk) 13:16, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Durranistan: Waiting for your kind self-revert then of both edits. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

working on it Durranistan (talk) 13:40, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deaths

@Gianluigi02: Please add "aid workers" to the 7 in the infobox which was removed. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Perpetrator

Drones are operated by the IAF or IDF generally? Makeandtoss (talk) 13:15, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request: add Polish reaction

The reactions were removed from World Central Kitchen in preference for inclusion in this main article. The Polish reaction has not been transferred. It is is included in this diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=World_Central_Kitchen&diff=prev&oldid=1216867533 Y. Dongchen (talk) 13:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Selfstudier (talk) 13:37, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Full text of Haaretz source

The Haaretz article used for the single source of an armed man being seen on the truck is paywalled. I assume that claim was from the same military source referred to later, but if someone can make an archive.org link or whatever so the full article can be read in context, that would be helpful. Meantime I have caveated the claim. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chaikney (talk • contribs) 13:48, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaikney: It should be accessible via WP:TWL, since we recently got access to Haaretz. Archive.org and archive.today don't seem to work in bypassing the paywall, iirc. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 16:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead vs body

I agree with the tag that the lead is overly long, especially given the short body. All information in the lead seems relevant for the article, but perhaps some could be moved from the lead to the body to give the article a more impactful lead? Jeppiz (talk) 20:40, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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 :@[[User:Chaikney|Chaikney]]: It should be accessible via [[WP:TWL]], since we recently got access to Haaretz. Archive.org and archive.today don't seem to work in bypassing the paywall, iirc. [[User:ARandomName123|ARandomName123]] ([[User talk:ARandomName123|talk]])<sup><span class="tmp-color" style="color:Green"><small>Ping me!</small></span></sup>  16:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
+== Lead vs body ==
+I agree with the tag that the lead is overly long, especially given the short body. All information in the lead seems relevant for the article, but perhaps some could be moved from the lead to the body to give the article a more impactful lead? [[User:Jeppiz|Jeppiz]] ([[User talk:Jeppiz|talk]]) 20:40, 2 April 2024 (UTC)