Talk:Femininity

"feminity" vs. "femininity"

Until I came across this page, I thought that the occasional occurrences of "femininity" I saw on the Interwebs were playful/sarcastic/memetic deliberate misspellings of "feminity", but this entry and the redirect from Feminity indicate that this isn't the case. However, the number of instances of "feminity" in Talk:Femininity and its archives would indicate that the confusion isn't uncommon. Should there be a discussion of the use of both words (or perhaps a mention in the lede, since that also mentions womanliness and womanhood as alternate names)? Or is there a better place for that? The Crab Who Played With The Sea (talk) 12:38, 12 February 2013 (UTC)

It seems that feminity is an older version of the term femininity [1] and is already addressed in the Wiktionary [2]. USchick (talk) 19:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

Inclusion of feminine disambiguation at top of page

I don't believe it is appropriate to provide a link to the Grammatical gender page at the top of the femininity page. I can see providing a link to the Grammatical gender page to the gender page but this link is not appropriate.

I switched it to ...

"Feminine" redirects here. For other uses, see Feminine (disambiguation).

like on the Masculinity page. -- Dave3457 (talk) 03:46, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

Yes, that's fine, my fault for not checking whether a disambiguation page existed (I just assumed it didn't, since it wasn't linked to). Victor Yus (talk) 06:30, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

re placement of Geert Hofstede's book

I'm not sure I'm keen on Geert Hofstede's book coming up almost at the top of the Behavior and personality section, which is an important section which follows the lede.

Since we're just giving an overview of the subject for the general reader, I think the stuff starting with "Femininity is sometimes linked..."; "something something dichotomy has had a considerable influence..." is good too (assuming it's true) and "An ongoing debate [regarding nature vs. nurture]" gives a good perspective, assuming that Hotstede has not somehow conclusively proven that it's nurture, which I sort of doubt. (It would be unusual for adaptive behaviors to not influence genetics, given enough time, I would suppose.)

Not an expert, don't feel strongly about it, and it's not terribly important I guess, but I moved Hofstede down quite a bit. (I also moved Serano down with him, keeping her just below Hofstede as before. Don't know Serano but I get a polemical vibe here (her article describes her as an "activist" for instance), although I could be dead wrong about that. I'm sure she's worthwhile, but not up so high.) They could go up a few paras too I suppose (or be restored to the top if someone can indicate that Hofstede really is is more or less the last word on the matter). Herostratus (talk) 14:59, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

Yes, I support you on this. I think these are interesting and useful edits, but I don't think either should come before Ann Oakley for example. I also think that if editors are going to introduce relatively little known sources such as the Hofstede book, then we should have page quotes as in the Serano (and in which case a different citation model really ought to be used, since presently we have three citations for the same book differing only in page numbers: I'll try and take care of that some time if someone else doesn't oblige first). Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 16:34, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

Added: Regarding page numbering, I've used the reference page {{rp}} template described in Help:References and page numbers to rationalise the hitherto five duplicate Serano references and added a comment at the beginnign of mark-up to encourage editors to follow suit. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 00:57, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks ERH. This is great work! Herostratus (talk) 13:37, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

Added: incidentally I see from your User page that you translate articles from the Russian Wikipedia. The Russian article on Femininity is rather good I think and eventually I propose to incorporate some material from it here if I don't see it from elsewhere first. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 17:10, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll maybe take a look at that anon. Herostratus (talk) 13:36, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

"Ideal feminine"

What exactly is meant by "ideal feminine" (the heading for a subsection in the article)? It's not a collocation of itself that I recognise.

The Google search engine allows you to search for occurences of an exact string of words by putting them in quotation marks. Searching thus on "ideal feminine" gives you as a first hit this Wikipedia article on femininity, while subsequent hits as far as I can see offer it exclusively as as adjectival phrase rather than as a noun phrase - this "ideal feminine beauty", "ideal feminine figure", and so on.

Looking through the Revision History I find these from User:USchick who first created the section (Barbie dolls ...) here and then 'defined' her neologism here.

Shouldn't we be renaming this section somewhat more conventionally?

While I'm here, am I alone in being distinctly underwhelmed by Sue Gardner's (the 70th most powerful woman on planet Earth - no really :)) effort on the "ideal feminine" in Communism? A strong brianish carefully skirting whistling to oneself restraining desire to a lift back leg dog walk sort of mental image takes hold of me as I work through this piss poor collection of quotations from various sources. This would be Sue chasing the femininist vote in a safe redneck sort of way I take it (she didn't exactly cover herself in glory at New York v Strauss-Kahn valorising an investigative report by Edward Jay Epstein that was was immediately shot down in flames but was nevertheless the subject of a far from NPOV section for a very long time before I restored balance to it). I'm prepared to have a go at editing her good faith yeah right efforts, but would I, you know, get sent to Siberia for it? Exiled for life? Trolled into a lonely suicide on a Mediterranean island perhaps (just an idle thought)?

Reassurances sought. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 01:53, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

This is not a blog for personal musings. Is there a question here? Since there is no consensus on what Femininity is, or how it is defined, it's reasonable to explain what is considered as the "ideal" feminine in case someone is interested in striving to achieve it. USchick (talk) 06:03, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

"Traits that have been cited as feminine include gentleness, empathy, and sensitivity ..." in the lead

Originally this was "Behavioral traits generally considered feminine include gentleness, empathy, and sensitivity ...".

"Behavioural" is clearly wrong ("personality" is the appropiate quailifier if one were needed). The statement is supported by two citations, one an obscure 1980s academic citation (well. times have moved on ...) and the other is a tertiary source. In the circumstances I changed to "Traits that have been cited as feminine include gentleness, empathy, and sensitivity ... " and asked for a quotation. If an obscure source is cited that is an appropiate request.

IP Florida making a revert says that this is bogus and she can provide the quotations - so provide them please.

Thank you. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 00:13, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

Unfortunately, Florida IP immediately reverted. Well, one tries one's best ... Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 00:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

And your point of steadily calling out my IP location is? That type of thing makes me not want to log in (I accidentally edited this article while logged out and kept with it after that because my IP address had been exposed). I should get my IP address (which will change later regardless) wiped from the history first before replying here while logged in, which can be legitimately done upon request. I'm also a guy, so I don't know why you assume I'm a she unless that's your feminist side showing. Usually, people assume that an anonymous person is a guy unless it's evident that the person isn't. And assuming that someone is a guy on Wikipedia is usually correct. I can see from your edit history that you have a lot more experience editing Wikipedia than is expected of someone with an account that has not been registered with Wikipedia for very long, but I'm sure you don't want me calling you "not-so-new editor."

This is what I said.[3][4][5] I didn't say I can provide the quotations. If the sources use the word "generally" and that is taken into account with all the many sources saying that those (or some of those) traits are generally considered feminine or are generally associated with femininity, I don't believe you should remove "generally." WP:Verifiability doesn't care if you disagree with "generally." You are also contesting a very non-contentious statement. Though what is considered feminine varies, it is well known that these traits are generally associated with femininity. And an abundance of sources support it. Using the "need quotation to verify" tag is strange to me because a lot of sources used for Wikipedia are offline sources: WP:SOURCEACCESS. 72.216.11.67 (talk) 20:28, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

It also doesn't make sense to revert me on the words "Traits cited." Using "Traits that have been cited" is unnecessary verbiage. 72.216.11.67 (talk) 20:35, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

In the first place what led to this was that an editor SusanLesch removed the list of traits from the lead. I had been editing here, but had refrained from editing the lead where it is claimed by Sue Gardner that a consensus had been reached, but Susan Lesch's edit seemed to me a sensible edit given an (expanded) version of these traits was also present in the main body and I thanked Susan for it. However her edit was subsequently reverted by another user Halo Jerk1 who reinstated the list.

Now I would suggest it's contentious today to maintain today that traits such as gentleness, empathy and sensitivity are "generally" associated with femininity. I would be happy with "traditionally", but "generally" strikes me as something that needs citing nowadays. But when I looked at the citations they were as I decribe them above, one ancient and obscure, the other a tertiary source (I mean an encylopedia genus Elsevier). I set to finding a more accessible source, and the point is I simply couldn't. So I think it's perfectly fair to ask for a quotation as verification.

Note that I didn't revert an edit here. I simply tried to resolve a conflict, replacing "cited" by "have been cited", deleting "behavioural" (which is just plain wrong), and asking for a quotation. If as you claim you can provide these quotations, why don't you simply provide them? What's the big deal with that?

Why so aggressive in your edit responses? The claim that I'm "biased"? That I'm "apparently new" (yeah right, there's a rite of passage for editing leads in Wikipedia? I was watching Avatar last night: is there something where I have to hitch my pony tail - you've all got pony tails in Wikipedia right - to a USB port and, you know, merge with Mother Goddess Sue Gardner, earn myself a leonopteryx from Jimbo, even get mysekf a bit of tail up against a wall the way I like it if I handle it right 'cos we're all good mates here ...)?

Well be of good cheer Florida IP, because I don't have the time for this. I came here via New York v. Strauss-Kahn where I was tidying up and I'm on my way to Postmodern feminism. Meet me there for some real sport, boyo.

Why not get yourself an account (if you can) in the meantime? Stick it in a port, make my day ... Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 23:45, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi guys. Can Halo Jerk1 please point to the precise part of MOS:INTRO that you are citing for putting a list of traits in the lead? -SusanLesch (talk) 16:07, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Not-so-new editor Elissa Rubria Honoria, you say "it's contentious today to maintain today that traits such as gentleness, empathy and sensitivity are 'generally' associated with femininity"? Well, frankly, that's ridiculous. But I know it's just your feminist bias showing. Let's not pretend that there is not a general distinction (even if we say "general Western distinction") between masculinity and femininity; let's not pretend that gentleness, empathy and sensitivity are equally or are also generally associated with masculinity.[6][7][8][9] You said that when you "set to finding a more accessible source," the point is you simply couldn't. And despite that, I somehow found many sources on Google Books showing or specifically noting that gentleness, empathy and sensitivity are generally associated with femininity.[10] Not just "traditionally" associated. Also, per WP:TERTIARY, tertiary sources are fine to use. Let's not pretend that many things on Wikipedia aren't sourced to encyclopedias without any problem. I trust an encyclopedia source (non-Wikipedia one) more than I trust a source that has one author spouting their opinions. Encyclopedia sources summarize the primary and secondary sources, the majority assigning gentleness, empathy and sensitivity to girls/women/femininity a lot more than they do to boys/men/masculinity or to those who declare they are a mix of genders/in between genders (genderqueer). Nothing wrong with using Encyclopedia of Women and Gender: Sex Similarities and Differences ..., Volume 1 as a source.[11] It's not a typical encyclopedia source (such as Encyclopædia Britannica) anyhow. Elsevier is also just the publisher, so your use of genus there doesn't seem correct to me. But now I've directed you to many sources, "ancient" and new, saying the same thing about what are general feminine traits. So let's pick a few of those sources.

Regarding the rest, such as my comments about your status as a new editor, you need to pay more attention to what people say. I didn't say you are "apparently new." I said you are "apparently not new." I know you aren't. New editors don't make edits like this[12] right from the beginning (your third edit ever as Elissa Rubria Honoria) unless they have been editing for a good bit of time as an IP address or previously as a registered account. It's rare that even a student that has been assigned to edit an article edits with as good Wikipedia formatting (such as MOS:REFPUNC) as you were using in your first few days as Elissa Rubria Honoria. You again said that I claimed I can provide quotations, even though I said I never claimed that I could/would provide quotes for those two sources you object to. You asked "Why not get yourself an account (if you can)," even though I said I have a registered account. Yikes, woman. Read better. And you are biased. I can tell that you a feminist. SusanLesch too. Most feminists are biased concerning gender topics, especially aspects categorized as male vs. aspects categorized as female (unless it's just secondary sex characteristics). You two don't want the general femininity characteristics in the lead because you think they are all socially constructed and they shouldn't, or mostly shouldn't, be characterized as what defines a girl or a woman. Well, see WP:GREATWRONGS. But I guess we should focus on the content and not the editor, right? I will if you will. You can start by not calling me Florida IP. Just "IP" will do. You called on your buddy by linking her name. Maybe I should call on those with similar views to mine? Dave3457 and USchick, this IP is calling you for your opinion here. Or does calling them while an exposed IP address not work?

SusanLesch, WP:MOSINTRO says, "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article in such a way that it can stand on its own as a concise version of the article." I don't know how you don't consider a summary of the characteristics generally (or most often) associated with femininity as something that shouldn't be there, but it should be. 72.216.11.67 (talk) 20:41, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

72.216.11.67, would you please fulfill Wikipedia policy at WP:PROVEIT? It says there the "burden of evidence lies with the editor who adds or restores material". We need a quote, preferably an online source that anybody can use. Also, I repeat my question for Halo Jerk1, please cite the precise part of MOS:INTRO that applies. I'm asking because the article does not ever explain how or why these traits are feminine, which I think it ought to do in exact detail. -SusanLesch (talk) 23:42, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Wow, Florida IP, you're really psyched about this! Relax, you can have it. Honest. Take a walk on that beach of yours. Cool down.

For the record Susan Lesch is not a buddy of mine. I do think her edit was very sensible. I think you should get an account before indulging in this kind of edit warring. We're not really talking guest edits here.

Sorry about not reading you with the full attention you plainly imagine your merit. Oops. But I am a new editor, though (rather like Sue Gardner) part of a community that does indeed regularly edit Wikipedia. I've been working with computers all my life, so it's scarecely surprising I don't have any difficulty editing Wikipedia. It's not rocket-science. I really can't imagine why all that effort went into designing a Visual Editor. That's not why Wikipedia isn't keeping its editors. And indeed where we do have misgivings about editing Wikipedia is having our efforts reverted all the time or constantly having to deal with the kind of unpleasantness you are indulging here.

Understand I'm not going to notice you any more. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 01:30, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Unregistered users should be treated with the same respect as everyone else. As far as the edits go, I'm fine with either suggestion, but I support not listing specific traits. This is a minor issue IMHO. USchick (talk) 14:21, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Florida IP has an account it seems. For whatever reason she's not using it. I'm not aware that I dissed her. I rather thought she had me. Bias, newbie/not newbie (whatever) and so on.

I disagree it's a minor issue, but such is my respect for Florida (where most of the Wikipedia servers are) and above all for Sue Gardner of the Wikimedia foundation who got that lead paragraph together for all of us, that I'm unwilling to take it on as a mere newbie.

On another issue, as I noted above, you were responsible for coining the neoligism "Ideal feminine". Actually I see from your user page that English isn't your first language. Don't you think that section heading needs channging? I suggest "Ideals and stereotypes". Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 17:53, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Stereotypes are already discussed throughout the article. Again, the reason to have a section for the "Ideal feminine" is that no one can agree on a definition or meaning. Currently, the heading accurately describes the information listed in that section. And many WK editors are fluent in several languages, that only improves the experience, don't you think? USchick (talk) 18:20, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Yes, but it's not English. You might as well head it "идеальную женскую". I'm afraid most readers (and we are talking readers and not editors) of the English Wikipedia will be determinedly monoglot, especially Florida ones :). But I defer. It's not that I don't think it's important, I do, but I look to others to agree and to effect the changes needed. I'm surprised you don't recognise it's an issue.

I'll just make a concluding remark here because I don't want to edit this article any further and in any case I shouldn't have the time at the moment. When I came to this page (and I confess it was only out of curiosity because I saw that Sue Gardner had been editing a lot here) I was rather struck by a tendency to present relatively minor academic work as paradigms of the whole academic community. This was true, foe example, about the remarks to the effect that femininity was a construct arising out of the Black Death. Sue's edit about Hofstede had much the same effect. I'm sure that's something editors ought to be guarding against. Elissa Rubria Honoria (talk) 18:45, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

"идеал женственности" is the accurate translation for the ideal feminine, and both are proper use of language. I'm sure femininity has been around much longer than the academic assessment of it. Cheers! USchick (talk) 18:57, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

SusanLesch, your WP:PROVEIT argument is without sense to me. The info is already sourced. Just because not-so-new editor Elissa Rubria Honoria questions what the sources say, or just because you do, doesn't mean that info isn't already verified. Besides, higher up, I've directed you to many sources that support gentleness, empathy and sensitivity as general feminine traits. I will use three or more of those sources to support that content in the lead, since no one else in this discussion is discussing the sources I pointed to. And re MOS:INTRO, what I pointed to about that is the precise part of MOS:INTRO that applies. What is generally considered feminine is a big part of this article and should subsequently be in the intro.

Not-so-new editor Elissa Rubria Honoria, you have continued to disrespect me by calling me "Florida IP" and "she" (the former is against my wishes, and not calling me by the latter after I've disclosed my sex as male is common sense in addition to being against my wishes). And somehow I'm the one, or only one, who is indulging in unpleasantness here? That's rich. You also act like I haven't said why I'm not using my registered account. And saying things like "Wow, Florida IP, you're really psyched about this!" is just more of your passive-aggressive behavior. No, you aren't new to editing Wikipedia, but anyhoo. If you are "not going to notice" me anymore, good.

USchick, thanks for providing your opinion on this topic and for saying "Unregistered users should be treated with the same respect as everyone else." Though I'm not unregistered, that was great of you to say. 72.216.11.67 (talk) 03:02, 31 August 2013 (UTC)