Talk:Iraq War
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To-do list for Iraq War: Use <s> and </s> (aka. strikeout) when each of these are done:
One thing that I think would be extremely relevant would be a timeline of important events; they have much of the information needed for it in the article itself, but it would be easier to read and comprehend if it was contained in a timeline. I also think it should clarify whether there are still U.S. troops in Iraq and what their purpose is there if they are still occupying parts of Iraq. --Tarzane (talk) 04:03, 11 September 2012 (UTC) Update/correct civilian casualties. Estimates off by several hundred thousand. Ideally use a source other than a media article. |
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Requested move 1 June 2015
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The result of the move request was: No move. There is no agreement that other topics challenge this one as primary topic of the name "Iraq War". Cúchullain t/c 13:24, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Iraq War → Iraq War (2003–2011) – Per consencus reached at Iraqi insurgency (2011–2013) --Relisted. George Ho (talk) 01:36, 8 June 2015 (UTC) UASR (talk) 19:02, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support multiple Iraq/Gulf Wars -- 65.94.43.89 (talk) 03:16, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support - as above. Jrcrin001 (talk) 02:49, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose It is the Iraq War. Everyone knows it as the Iraq War, thus no confusion results, thus no clarification is needed. Perhaps no other war has the years of fighting in the title. It's not Iran–Iraq War (1980–1999), Second Anglo-Dutch War(1665–1667), etc. etc. Why is it to be the only war involving Iraq that has the years in the title? Gulf War is not being page-moved to Gulf War (1990–1991). Can't see any reason for moving it. --YeOldeGentleman (talk) 07:33, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
SupportEDIT: support Iraq War (2003-11) per George Ho. Red Slash 17:48, 9 June 2015 (UTC)Red Slash 07:32, 9 June 2015 (UTC)- Move to Iraq War (2003–11). The period looks easy to understand. Why hesitate to shorten? --George Ho (talk) 09:53, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose - I agree with YeOldeGentleman that there is no confusion about the Gulf War and the Iraq War. Moreover, this move would editorially conclude that the Iraq War ended in 2011; in previous discussion we never reached a consensus that this is true. Even if this article primarily addresses the conflict between 2003-2011, there is no reason to declare it really ended then, especially at a time when U.S. warplanes and military trainers are still active or on their way to Iraq. If in the future there is another distinct Iraq War, perhaps this proposed move will become useful. -Darouet (talk) 17:34, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support but I understand where Darouet is coming from. I also feel that the war didn't really end in 2011. I think it simply entered a new phase. Which is also why I suggested the creation of a new umbrella article (see here). Charles Essie (talk) 20:39, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support - move to Iraq War (2003-11) per user:George Ho.GreyShark (dibra) 14:17, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support - Coltsfan (talk) 16:40, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose. "Iraq War" is the common name and the primary topic. Rreagan007 (talk) 01:20, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose, Iraq War is the common name of the conflict. Other conflicts that have occurred in Iraq are often known by other similar but unique names.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 19:52, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
- Support and move Iraqi insurgency (2011-2013) to Iraq War (2011-present). The conflict never ended in 2011 and there is a distinct continuity between the two. These two articles merely demarcate two distinct phase: one driven by the United States and another driven by the Islamic State. Assuming that there is no historical connection between the two through a difference in nomenclature is quite inaccurate. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 13:21, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose Per WP:COMMONNAME, and other wars are known by other distinct names, so it seems unnecessary. DimensionQualm (talk) 16:38, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
- Oppose. The US-led invasion is the clear WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Jenks24 (talk) 16:09, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
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Removal of sourced content
The Lancet is an excellent source; and if anybody wishes to remove sourced content, then they need to obtain consensus for it. The fact that Stumink has been reverted by multiple editors suggests no such consensus exists. Both Stumink and myself are at 3rr right now, so I for one won't be reverting further; but hopefully that acts as a spur for discussion. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:08, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with Stumink's edit, but I do believe that, if the Lancet number is given in the first paragraph, perhaps the PLoS number should be there too. I will think of a way of bringing that into the text. -Darouet (talk) 20:11, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- Stumink's current compromise isn't bad. Note that those numbers represent the number of Iraqis who died from violence. -Darouet (talk) 20:26, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- You mentioned that you wanted to add PLOS but PLOS figure for violent deaths is 132,000 for the entire war so 151,00 for 3/4 years wouldn't be the minimum estimate. Does PLOS mention its violent death figure for 3/4 years? If so I would think that should be added to the lead as the minimum. Stumink (talk) 20:30, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- I skimmed the PLoS article recently and will read it in greater detail, but I doubt they'd be able to break down the deaths into 3 or 4 year intervals that way, based on the methodology. That's because they estimate a pre-war mortality rate and a "within-war" mortality rate up until 2011. Also, concerning the numbers themselves, they estimate 460,000 excess deaths (55,000 of those estimated through additional migration calculations) from 2003-2011, over 60% of which are due to violence. That would be 276,000 due to violence, or assuming a constant mortality rate from 2003-2011, 138,000 violent deaths in the first four years. -Darouet (talk) 20:39, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- No offence, but that seems like a lot of assumptions. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:51, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- It is a lot of assumptions. Actually though, in figure 5 Hagopian et al do break down mortality by year, and it's higher in the first 4 years. Also, they effectively endorse the Lancet results in their discussion, which tries to understand why their own mortality rate is lower. One reason, they surmise, is that reporting error increases as time passes, making more recent studies less reliable. Another reason is that families may be unwilling to report deaths of their own members who fought for the insurgency. Another is that as families break up due to civil strife, it becomes more difficult to interview families neutrally, with remaining families less likely to have lost members. Anyway the list goes on. -Darouet (talk) 21:17, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- No offence, but that seems like a lot of assumptions. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:51, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
- I skimmed the PLoS article recently and will read it in greater detail, but I doubt they'd be able to break down the deaths into 3 or 4 year intervals that way, based on the methodology. That's because they estimate a pre-war mortality rate and a "within-war" mortality rate up until 2011. Also, concerning the numbers themselves, they estimate 460,000 excess deaths (55,000 of those estimated through additional migration calculations) from 2003-2011, over 60% of which are due to violence. That would be 276,000 due to violence, or assuming a constant mortality rate from 2003-2011, 138,000 violent deaths in the first four years. -Darouet (talk) 20:39, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
Umbrella article
I think there should be a new umbrella article about the entire war from 2003 to the present. The discussion is taking place here. Charles Essie (talk) 19:45, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
Iraqi Opinion Section
"In 2006, a poll conducted on the Iraqi public revealed that 64% of the ones polled said Iraq was going in the right direction and 77% claimed it was worth ousting Saddam Hussein.[375]"
Both of these statistics are supported by the source but they are both from January '06. The source presents them amongst other data for the same questions from various other dates including more recent dates. The source doesn't give any greater prominence to these dates. I can't see any rationale for using them in preference to the most recent data provided by the source 52% and 61% respectively. --IanOfNorwich (talk) 22:49, 24 July 2015 (UTC)
I've updated the page to the most recent stats as above, although they are still only from 2006. This [1] suggests by 2008 public support, in Iraq, for the initial invasion had fallen further, though an even more recent source would be good. --IanOfNorwich (talk) 19:06, 25 July 2015 (UTC)
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