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:::::You said "I am sure". [[User:Alexbrn|Alexbrn]] ([[User talk:Alexbrn|talk]]) 19:10, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
:::::You said "I am sure". [[User:Alexbrn|Alexbrn]] ([[User talk:Alexbrn|talk]]) 19:10, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
::::::Figure of speech, how humans talk. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
::::::Figure of speech, how humans talk. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
::::But yes, indeed, i meant the piece by Zimmer, not Hall. That's the one that sourced the lede sentence that called paleo diet a fad diet. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
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So what i'm gathering is that the use of "fad diet" is source to Hall [https://www.highbeam.com/doc/1G1-394997140.html here]. I think that's a POV source and not enough for an NPOV article to call the diet a "fad diet" in the opening sentence. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
So what i'm gathering is that the use of "fad diet" is source to Hall [https://www.highbeam.com/doc/1G1-394997140.html here]. I think that's a POV source and not enough for an NPOV article to call the diet a "fad diet" in the opening sentence. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
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::::Skeptic (TM) sources are from a very specific point of view. They are happy to so-called "debunk" a lot of things without the care and integrity needed to actually do a real unbiased secondary source type of assessment. They do not have a balanced or mainstream or anything approaching neutral point of view. That's pretty obvious. You may not believe do, but i do believe so. And yes, the Telegraph article does ask the question and then does conclude that it's not a fad diet. You don't need to see a sentence explicitly saying "It is not a fad diet" in the article to read this in the article. It clearly ends with the answer to the title's question being "not really, there's some benefit and some basis to it". And there was also the source that did explicitly say it's not a fad diet, which is equally as POV as the Skeptic source is POV in the other direction. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 17:01, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
::::Skeptic (TM) sources are from a very specific point of view. They are happy to so-called "debunk" a lot of things without the care and integrity needed to actually do a real unbiased secondary source type of assessment. They do not have a balanced or mainstream or anything approaching neutral point of view. That's pretty obvious. You may not believe do, but i do believe so. And yes, the Telegraph article does ask the question and then does conclude that it's not a fad diet. You don't need to see a sentence explicitly saying "It is not a fad diet" in the article to read this in the article. It clearly ends with the answer to the title's question being "not really, there's some benefit and some basis to it". And there was also the source that did explicitly say it's not a fad diet, which is equally as POV as the Skeptic source is POV in the other direction. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 17:01, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
:::::Just wanted to point out that the NHS did refer to it as a "fad diet" back in 2008 [http://www.nhs.uk/news/2008/05May/Pages/Cavemanfaddiet.aspx here]. The debate here seems to be grounded on a particular definition of fad diet, i.e. a Dr. Oz-type "miracle" diet. The term "fad diet" doesn't necessarily mean that the diet has ''no'' benefits whatsoever; rather, it means the diet's primary claims are unscientific, unrepresentative, or outright false, and that it has high profile marketing and widespread rapid uptake. So the paleo diet may not quite be a "fad diet" as such, but the diet ''is'' a fad. Perhaps a rephrasing in the lede would be appropriate. [[User:Amateria1121|Amateria1121]] ([[User talk:Amateria1121|talk]]) 22:03, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
:::::Just wanted to point out that the NHS did refer to it as a "fad diet" back in 2008 [http://www.nhs.uk/news/2008/05May/Pages/Cavemanfaddiet.aspx here]. The debate here seems to be grounded on a particular definition of fad diet, i.e. a Dr. Oz-type "miracle" diet. The term "fad diet" doesn't necessarily mean that the diet has ''no'' benefits whatsoever; rather, it means the diet's primary claims are unscientific, unrepresentative, or outright false, and that it has high profile marketing and widespread rapid uptake. So the paleo diet may not quite be a "fad diet" as such, but the diet ''is'' a fad. Perhaps a rephrasing in the lede would be appropriate. [[User:Amateria1121|Amateria1121]] ([[User talk:Amateria1121|talk]]) 22:03, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
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Some points on the term "fad diet" being the definitional noun in the first sentence of this article for the paleo diet concept:
* "Fad" means that it's a passing phenomenon, which would be a prediction, as the concept is still a cultural force going strong.
* "Fad diet" has the ring of a packaged diet, at least to me, a branded thing that is offered by a single source generally, not a cultural phenomenon like the paleo diet appears to be to me.
* The hyperlink [[fad diet]] leads to a technical definition {{tq|A fad diet is a diet for which promises of weight loss are made that are not backed by good science, and which is characterized by unusual food choices.}} Whether or not this is an accurate and good working definition for the term, it's also very much debatable whether this fits the paleo diet at least in the main stream of what it means to most people who understand it and/or practice it and/or pay attention to it. I sussed this out by reading some forums recently .
* The term is also a loaded pejorative, with the apparent intent of discrediting the subject of the article which seems undue to me on the whole. It would be a good fit for a criticism section and the Hall piece would fit well there, but i don't find it reasonable or justifiable to make this the definitional noun for the article's subject. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)

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On the cultural place of ''Skeptic'' magazine as a source and skepticism of this subcultural sort in general (questioned in comments above regarding the reliability or POV nature of the Hall piece in ''Skeptic''), there are indeed many sources that speak of this phenomenon as a subcultural happening. I just found a lot of these writings by googling about it. [http://www.skepticalaboutskeptics.org/examining-skeptics/daniel-drasin-zen-and-the-art-of-debunkery/ Daniel Drasin], [http://www.tricksterbook.com/ArticlesOnline/CSICOPoverview.htm this paper] speaks about CSICOP and ''Skeptical Inquirer'' and "the Skeptics" as a group with a particular POV and agenda and other various sociological observations. And [http://www.newdualism.org/pseudoskepticism.htm here] is a list of various writings about what they call pseudoskepticism. (I had come to these same conclusions and even began to use the term "pseudoskepticism" on my own in the last months while observing this social movement or social phenomenon in various media campaigns designed to discredit certain people or concepts, generally in line with an industrial modernity point of view, and to the detriment and insult of people and ideas to which they are hostile. [[User:SageRad|SageRad]] ([[User talk:SageRad|talk]]) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)

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Tooth enamel analysis etc.

I am moving this content from the article page for discussion as it seems violently off topic (or is OR) for the "paleo diet" as popularized in contemporary culture. Could some of this maybe find a home in the Paleolithic article?

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While the consumption of animals grazing on C4 pastures can contribute to C4 isotopic signatures, the magnitude of 13C enrichment—used to infer C3/C4 ratios—in early hominid fossils suggests that the carbon in their diet was derived mainly from C4 plants rather than the tissues of animals grazing on C4 grasses.[1][2] Very high proportions of animal food are not considered plausible for hominids given that even modern hunter gatherers armed with bows and arrows tend to have dismal hunting success,[3] and hominids lack the appropriate dental morphology of a high meat diet.[1] Expanding on those findings, Oxford University researchers observed that baboons today eat large quantities of starchy C4 tiger nut tubers and the wear patterns on the tooth enamel from these sedge tubers are a perfect match with the wear patterns on the enamel of Paranthropus boisei ('Nutcracker Man')—a hominid, with a high C4 isotopic signature, who lived in East Africa between 2.4 million and 1.4 million years ago.[4] The Oxford University study therefore concluded that Paranthropus boisei survived mainly on a diet of starchy tiger nut tubers.[4][5] Dr Gabriele Macho, a lead researcher on the study from the School of Archaeology at Oxford University, said "I believe that the theory—that 'Nutcracker Man' lived on large amounts of tiger nuts—helps settle the debate about what our early human ancestor ate. On the basis of recent isotope results, these hominins appear to have survived on a diet of C4 foods, which suggests grasses and sedges. Yet these are not high quality foods. What this research tells us is that hominins were selective about the part of the grass that they ate, choosing the grass bulbs at the base of the grass blade as the mainstay of their diet."[5] Incidentally, tiger nut tubers were among the earliest plants cultivated by humans, including ancient Egyptians and Paleo-Indians.[6] Additionally, recent understanding of the human genome has shown that modern humans typically have many copies of the AMY1 gene for starch digestion—suggesting widespread evolutionary adaptation to starch consumption by humans. Furthermore, the restriction of starchy plants, by definition, severely limits the dietary intake of microbiota-accessible carbohydrates (MACs) and may negatively affect the microbiome in ways that contribute to disease. Starchy plants, in particular, are a main source of resistant starch — a dietary fiber with strong prebiotic properties. Resistant starches are not digestible by mammals and are fermented and metabolized by gut flora into short chain fatty acids, which are well known to offer a wide range of health benefits. Resistant starch consumption has been shown to improve intestinal/colonic health, blood sugar, glucose tolerance, insulin-sensitivity and satiety. Public health authorities and food organizations such as the Food and Agricultural Organization, the World Health Organization,[7] the British Nutrition Foundation recognize resistant starch as a beneficial carbohydrate. The Joint Food and Agricultural Organization of the United Nations/World Health Organization Expert Consultation on Human Nutrition stated, "One of the major developments in our understanding of the importance of carbohydrates for health in the past twenty years has been the discovery of resistant starch."[7]

References

  1. ^ a b Lee-Thorp, J.; Likius, A.; Mackaye, H. T.; Vignaud, P.; Sponheimer, M.; Brunet, M. (2012). "Isotopic evidence for an early shift to C4 resources by Pliocene hominins in Chad". Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences. 109 (50): 20369–20372. doi:10.1073/pnas.1204209109. ISSN 0027-8424.
  2. ^ Dominy, N. J. (2012). "Hominins living on the sedge". Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences. 109 (50): 20171–20172. doi:10.1073/pnas.1218081110. ISSN 0027-8424.
  3. ^ Cite error: The named reference NatGeo092014 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. ^ a b "Ancient human ancestor 'Nutcracker Man' lived on tiger nuts". University of Oxford. School of Archaeology—University of Oxford. 2013-01-09. Retrieved 2014-08-31. An Oxford University study has concluded that our ancient ancestors who lived in East Africa between 2.4 million and 1.4 million years ago survived mainly on a diet of tiger nuts
  5. ^ a b Hardy, Karen; Macho, Gabriele A. (2014). "Baboon Feeding Ecology Informs the Dietary Niche of Paranthropus boisei". PLoS ONE. 9 (1): e84942. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0084942. ISSN 1932-6203.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link)
  6. ^ Daniel Zohary and Maria Hopf, Domestication of plants in the Old World, third edition (Oxford: University Press, 2000), p. 198
  7. ^ a b Carbohydrates in human nutrition (Report of a Joint FAO/WHO Expert Consultation, Rome, Italy, 14-18 April 1997). FAO food and nutrition paper. Vol. 66. World Health Organization. 1998. ISBN 9251041148.

Discussion

Original source

The article from the NYT, August 15, 2015, is largely based on http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1086/682587, which is a research paper cum short review. Is a secondary, popular source better than a primary source (in terms of Wik)? Kdammers (talk) 14:11, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

it is hard to respond to this. Are you talking about some edits that were made, or proposing to use these as new sources? Jytdog (talk) 15:28, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I am asking whether it is Wik policy to use a secondary source (in this case, the New York Times) or original material (in this case, a research article: http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1086/682587). Our PD article currently uses the former.Should we keep it that way or go to the original source of the information?Kdammers (talk) 17:40, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Kdammers. Check WP:MEDPRI. My understanding is that you're not supposed to quote obscure research papers willy nilly to back up one view or another, but rather quote a (respected - not a tabloid newspaper) secondary source that synthesises the research. So in the case favour the NYT article? Though I haven't seen it. --Cornellier (talk) 21:53, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
This is not an obscure research paper: it was published in a well-established, refereed journal (impact factor over 5). The source we currently use is a distinguished but popular secondary source. So, do we in Wik, unlike in scholarly research, give preference to a secondary source that synthesizes the research [as long as it is reputable though not a scholarly publication] over the original work? Kdammers (talk) 14:10, 17 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The source you are talking about, currently footnote 1, is used only to support a general description of the paleo diet in our article; the discussion in the NYT article about the scientific paper, is not used in our article. The NYT article is used appropriately as a source for that general description. Jytdog (talk) 14:20, 17 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry Kdammers for my sloppy English above. By obscure I meant extremely specialized. --Cornellier (talk) 01:16, 18 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Criticism section needed

I've removed the following, because it belongs to a criticism section - to be created.

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In 2012 the paleolithic diet was described as being one of the "latest trends" in diets, based on the popularity of diet books about it;[1] in 2013 the diet was Google's most searched-for weight-loss method.[2] The diet is one of many fad diets that have been promoted in recent times, and draws on an appeal to nature and a narrative of conspiracy theories about how nutritional research, which does not support the paleo diet, is controlled by a malign food industry.[3]

References

  1. ^ Cunningham E (2012). "Are diets from paleolithic times relevant today?". J Acad Nutr Diet. 112 (8): 1296. doi:10.1016/j.jand.2012.06.019. PMID 22818735.
  2. ^ "Top diets review for 2014". NHS. Retrieved 2014-11-24. The paleo diet, also known as the caveman diet, was Google's most searched-for weight loss method in 2013.
  3. ^ Hall H (2014). "Food myths: what science knows (and does not know) about diet and nutrition". Skeptic. Vol. 19, no. 4. p. 10. Fad diets and "miracle" diet supplements promise to help us lose weight effortlessly. Different diet gurus offer a bewildering array of diets that promise to keep us healthy and make us live longer: vegan, Paleo, Mediterranean, low fat, low carb, raw food, gluten-free ... the list goes on. (subscription required)
Dear anonymous: I've put it back in, since no such section has materialized. --Cornellier (talk) 13:21, 14 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fad diet label?

I was curious to see the label "fad diet" in the lede and questioned its applicability and definition. I found the most recent discussion about the term in the talk page archives here. It seems a bit too much to define the idea of Paleo diet as a fad. The link to the article fad diet says "A fad diet is a diet for which promises of weight loss are made that are not backed by good science, and which is characterized by unusual food choices." Most reference i've ever seen to paleo diet are not mainly in regard to weight loss but rather sense of well being. Anyway, i wished to bring this up again so it's an active discussion on the talk page. As i read the archived discussion, i didn't read a consensus about the term "fad diet" being the definitional noun in the first sentence of this article. I found many people advocating otherwise, in fact. SageRad (talk) 18:19, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

It's well-sourced in the body (to a piece by H Hall). And it is a diet with "unusual food choices" which seems to fit the bill. Have you got sources that dispute the "fad diet" categorization? Alexbrn (talk) 18:41, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have no specific source at hand. I've been curious about this diet, and quite undecided about my own opinion on it. I will be taking a lot more time to read sources, and to gather information for my own use. However, the word "fad" does color the opening sentence heavily with a pejorative tone, and it's also not actually in the source document you cite there, the piece in the New York Times by Hall, which you are saying is the source for the use of the term "fad diet". The term is not used in that article at all. It's quite a wonderful article and i'm glad to have read it. It makes wonderful points about the presence of starches in pre-agricultural human diets, and about the use of fire to cook starches making them more bioavailable, but it doesn't call the paleo diet a fad diet, and doing so might be synthesis if that's the only source. I am sure that there are sources that call the diet a "fad diet" as well as sources that state explicitly that it's not a "fad diet" but as editors we're tasked with writing an article that is as NPOV as possible and that might mean leaving out a pejorative term as the defining noun for the topic of the article and including criticism later in the text. SageRad (talk) 18:52, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The link you say is to Hall's piece is in fact to one by "Karl Zimmer"?? If there are reliable sources that 'state explicitly that it's not a "fad diet"' then produce them. Why are you "sure" about this before even looking? Sounds like editing with a strong POV! That is best avoided. (BTW, also be aware that in the literature there is an overlap between the question of GMOs and the paleo diet, which this article needs expanding with.) Alexbrn (talk) 18:58, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Please stop the personal attacks here (by which i mean you saying i'm "editing with a strong POV" just because i'm reviving this question and asking it here). This is not a friendly tone for a good dialogue and it's not assuming good faith. Taking a break from this. Not interested in a contentious dialogue like this. I've had enough of that. And for goodness sake, this is not about GMOs. This is a completely different topic. Please sir, i've had enough of this. Can't i please edit peacefully and expect good dialogue anywhere? SageRad (talk) 19:07, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
You said "I am sure". Alexbrn (talk) 19:10, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Figure of speech, how humans talk. SageRad (talk) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
But yes, indeed, i meant the piece by Zimmer, not Hall. That's the one that sourced the lede sentence that called paleo diet a fad diet. SageRad (talk) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

So what i'm gathering is that the use of "fad diet" is source to Hall here. I think that's a POV source and not enough for an NPOV article to call the diet a "fad diet" in the opening sentence. SageRad (talk) 19:12, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like to have a better source, but given the nature of diets I think it's fine.
What does "a POV source" mean? --Ronz (talk) 19:38, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The Skeptic source is POV in that it has a strong slant upon the topic which is different from general mainstream slant, in that it's within the Skeptic subculture which has a particular bent toward what they call "debunking" things, which often goes far beyond actual skepticism into a particular ideological realm. It's a subculture as documented here and here. It's a subculture that fetishizes debunking and uses a caricature of scientific knowing. It's a subculture that creates media on many things outside itself, and yet is not necessarily an authoritative source on those other things.
There is a source that explicitly says that the concept of paleo diet is not a fad here although it's also a POV source in that it is from a pro-paleo-diet stance. Then there is a source in a more mainstream mode here that asks the question "is it a fad?" and contains lines like Not all medical scientists agree with some of the diet's claims. but does not conclude that it's a fad diet, but rather that it can be helpful: This is, I'm sure, a good thing, eliminating foods that are low in nutrients and high in calories. It's also a diet that involves no weighing or calorie counting – another plus. SageRad (talk) 16:31, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
different from general mainstream slant ← I don't believe so. Produce sources on this diet to back-up that Point of View, please. And best to avoid The Daily Telegraph. Much as I admire [Xanthe Clay's] cookery writing this is not a good RS, and it doesn't even say this diet is not a fad diet. Better to rely on medical writers like Hall, or the NHS. Alexbrn (talk) 16:55, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Skeptic (TM) sources are from a very specific point of view. They are happy to so-called "debunk" a lot of things without the care and integrity needed to actually do a real unbiased secondary source type of assessment. They do not have a balanced or mainstream or anything approaching neutral point of view. That's pretty obvious. You may not believe do, but i do believe so. And yes, the Telegraph article does ask the question and then does conclude that it's not a fad diet. You don't need to see a sentence explicitly saying "It is not a fad diet" in the article to read this in the article. It clearly ends with the answer to the title's question being "not really, there's some benefit and some basis to it". And there was also the source that did explicitly say it's not a fad diet, which is equally as POV as the Skeptic source is POV in the other direction. SageRad (talk) 17:01, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Just wanted to point out that the NHS did refer to it as a "fad diet" back in 2008 here. The debate here seems to be grounded on a particular definition of fad diet, i.e. a Dr. Oz-type "miracle" diet. The term "fad diet" doesn't necessarily mean that the diet has no benefits whatsoever; rather, it means the diet's primary claims are unscientific, unrepresentative, or outright false, and that it has high profile marketing and widespread rapid uptake. So the paleo diet may not quite be a "fad diet" as such, but the diet is a fad. Perhaps a rephrasing in the lede would be appropriate. Amateria1121 (talk) 22:03, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Some points on the term "fad diet" being the definitional noun in the first sentence of this article for the paleo diet concept:

  • "Fad" means that it's a passing phenomenon, which would be a prediction, as the concept is still a cultural force going strong.
  • "Fad diet" has the ring of a packaged diet, at least to me, a branded thing that is offered by a single source generally, not a cultural phenomenon like the paleo diet appears to be to me.
  • The hyperlink fad diet leads to a technical definition A fad diet is a diet for which promises of weight loss are made that are not backed by good science, and which is characterized by unusual food choices. Whether or not this is an accurate and good working definition for the term, it's also very much debatable whether this fits the paleo diet at least in the main stream of what it means to most people who understand it and/or practice it and/or pay attention to it. I sussed this out by reading some forums recently .
  • The term is also a loaded pejorative, with the apparent intent of discrediting the subject of the article which seems undue to me on the whole. It would be a good fit for a criticism section and the Hall piece would fit well there, but i don't find it reasonable or justifiable to make this the definitional noun for the article's subject. SageRad (talk) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

On the cultural place of Skeptic magazine as a source and skepticism of this subcultural sort in general (questioned in comments above regarding the reliability or POV nature of the Hall piece in Skeptic), there are indeed many sources that speak of this phenomenon as a subcultural happening. I just found a lot of these writings by googling about it. Daniel Drasin, this paper speaks about CSICOP and Skeptical Inquirer and "the Skeptics" as a group with a particular POV and agenda and other various sociological observations. And here is a list of various writings about what they call pseudoskepticism. (I had come to these same conclusions and even began to use the term "pseudoskepticism" on my own in the last months while observing this social movement or social phenomenon in various media campaigns designed to discredit certain people or concepts, generally in line with an industrial modernity point of view, and to the detriment and insult of people and ideas to which they are hostile. SageRad (talk) 22:36, 25 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]