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Q on reference source language

07:53:55, 14 November 2017 review of submission by FriendlyB


Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft "Dr. Petry Textile Auxiliaries".

For the sources, I cited independent sources, such as - http://www.genios.de/fachzeitschriften/artikel/MTB/20080617/umweltschutz-und-nachhaltigkeit-in-/060817061.html - https://www.biooekonomie-bw.de/de/fachbeitrag/aktuell/insektenchitin-macht-textilherstellung-nachhaltiger/

In order to have more evidence, I added information from further independent sources and references: - https://www.bloomberg.com/profiles/companies/6311207Z:GR-textilchemie-dr-petry-gmbh - https://www.bluesign.com/industry/chemical-suppliers/references/textilchemie-dr-petry

Thank you in advance for re-reviewing.

Thanks for your help!

Thanks for your assistance with Draft:InnoCare. I have included {{connected contributor}} and noted it on your user page that I work for that company. They're not paying me to create this page, I just think it would cool to have a Wikipedia page. Let me know if there's anything else you can suggest to improve my draft. I appreciate your help!

05:44:48, 23 November 2017 review of submission by Lizzybunker

I've added the appropriate citations!

Invacio

Hi Theroadislong I've edited the text - please let me know if it's better this way I appreciate your feedback!

00:53:26, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Cmolaro


I added more 3rd party sources that are verifiable and are independent, professional sources (not personal blogs or sites). I now have 15 citations.

Please let me know what else you think is required to have it accepted?

12:54:53, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Llewol


08:40:08, 28 November 2017 review of submission by Salt&pepper12345


Hi there, thank very much for your care and consideration to to help build this page. I can understand why the review was rejected, as i hadn't cited enough sources on the first draft. I was wondering if you'd mind having a read over the latest draft and checking if it is better now thank you. SP

13:22:45, 4 December 2017 review of submission by 79.106.95.85


21:10:13, 6 December 2017 review of submission by Innocent Cuty


Dear Theroadislong

Hope you are fine and doing good.

I am requesting for a review again as the major comment for rejection/decline of this article was its Reference section or having less references. Now, the draft has been updated, and more than 20 solid references have been employed, with more historical details, and best possible bibliographic support in the light of the available literature. This single page article is now having over 25 appropriate references, and are strengthened with new data.

Your anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Sincere Regards

Dear Theroadislong

Thank you very much for your prompt response.

The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). I think, these were the most up to dated and regularly updating references. Moreover, the last paragraph was deleted, because the book describing the paragraph and the mentioned material is in press (which is written by Dr. Ikram), and once the book got published, the three to four lines paragraph will be inserted again.

I do hope, that the draft will get approved now and will get online, as after coming across other such articles, this one seems to be far better than those.

Your prompt and positive anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Thanking you in anticipation

Sincere Regards

07:43:09, 15 December 2017 review of submission by Kgkg90


23:49:06, 23 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally


The submission's referencing was improved as advised, and I added a few more. More information on his teachings and publications were added. The page exists in 3 other Wikipedia: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://sk.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell

In-depth coverage

I added RPG Site. Is that a reliable source?

02:14:50, 26 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally


Please see references 15,18,19,21,22

07:39:46, 28 December 2017 review of submission by Nat.johnson


Hi Theroadislong! I have recently uploaded a draft of the article "Admitad" here and you have declined it. Could you kindly explain what can I do to make it right? Is it possible to work with you as my mentor on the draft? Or, maybe, you can help with writing, could you kindly tell me what is the best option? admitad is a global company, it already helps over 630,000 people worldwide. I believe, that it needs to be on Wikipedia.

23:24:44, 4 January 2018 review of submission by Yesterdaysfire


Hi there!

I was just wondering what the issue was with my article submission? I tried to follow all the guidelines. I hope that I can make any revisions that you may require!

edited

Hi there Thanks for your comment. Made the edits per your notes on the page for David A. Hurwitz. GigiH0118

13:36:39, 8 January 2018 review of submission by Tearstosweat


More reliable references like newspaper sources(Times of India, Decaan Chronicle) are added

00:42:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander


Dear Theroadislong,


Thank you for your valuable time and timely reply.


The bellow listed recognition letters and independent press publications may provide a more in-depth coverage regarding different subjects about Carl-W. Röhrig's life and work mentioned in the WIKI article.


I now additionally added the following references to the Citations and References section in the article:


8. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Newspaper Article". DIE WELT - Independent Daily Newspaper for Germany.

9. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". East Grinstead Courier, United Kingdom.

10. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1989). "Recognition Letter". by the National Geographic Society, Washington D.C.

11. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". THE PRESS, Christchurch, New Zealand.

12. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Recognition Letter". by Heinz Sielemann, Munich, Germany.

14. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". BILD Newspaper, Germany.

17. Röhrig, Carl-W. (2003). "Newspaper Article". Fränkischer Tag, Newspaper, Germany.


I am looking forward hearing from you.


Sincerely,

Vliander


Vliander (talk) 00:42:00, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:27:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander

Dear Theroadislong,


The article was written from a neutral point of view and reliable sources where provided.

The questioned links in regards to Röhrig letters could be removed if required.


Sincerely,

Vliander

Who are u

Who are u to correct me or remove the changes I made to kammara sambhavam.

Request on 08:52:05, 6 June 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by WildBullMiller


Thanks for the info

For the bio, is Nicholas Kaufmann's official website a good enough source? That's where the info comes from, anyway.

Typo in Title

Hi and thanks for approving my post for "Helgesias of Sinope." Unfortunately there's a typo in the title, which should be "Hegesias of Sinope" (no L). My apologies for that (it was my first post). I don't know how to fix a mistake in a title. Are you able to help me? Thank you, Budapest Joe

Re-submitted

Hi Theroadislong.

I have resubmitted the article for a re-review, please let me know if it reads better now? If not, can you give me an example of how to improve it. Thank you, Christian.

Images/Imágenes

Hi! As Images/Imágenes stated I am being paid to edit this page, but I am also working on this program as it is a work in progress. It was on the aire for over 30 years and pulled off in 2011. We are currently working on starting the project again but as this program began in the 70's there is not a large online presence. Is there anyway this page could be published for now, so we can show people that Images/Imágenes is coming back? Thanks, Alice

I have a lot of information from the Executive Producer but since none of it is available online, I cannot reference it. For example: (None of this is available online) Mission Images/Imágenes is a multi- Emmy award-winning television program series that creates, chronicles, and promotes the varied rich diverse history, culture, and life experiences of Hispanic/Latino communities in the state of New Jersey and the nation. Brief Organizational History For 46 years, the Images/Imágenes television series provided a voice and platform for New Jersey's diverse Latino population. The program series is known as the longest-running Latino community program in the history of PBS. Over the decades, the Emmy award winning series featured thought provoking round table discussions, interviews, profiles, documentaries and special topic episodes on the most prevalent issues pertaining to and for the Hispanic/Latino populations – the fastest growing demographic in New Jersey. Program topics ranged from lifestyles, business, education, legal matters, community affairs, pop culture/entertainment, the arts, sports and the health and sciences. Images/Imagenes was launched on January 6, 1972 than titled “Mi Casa Su Casa” on NJPTV hosted by producer, Diego Castellanos. The program made history as the first Latino television series on Public Television in New Jersey to air across the Garden State and surged as the nation’s number one market in New York and the number 4 market in Philadelphia. Since then the series is recognized as a resource for top Latino stories, both at local, as well as the national level. Award Winning Producer William Sánchez is the Producer/Director of Images/Imágenes since 1972, and is currently revitalizing a new series as its producer/director at Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey. He produced the series with the PBS NJ Television Network until the station was dissolved by the state on June 30, 2011. Within the first ten years Images/Imágenes became the leading contributor of programs for the PBS Series Presente hosted by Rita Moreno. Images/Imágenes competed with mainstream networks and was selected over ABC World News Tonight at the National Unity Awards in St. Louis. Then it rose to the top of the Latino Broadcasting Media when it was highlighted at the San Antonio Film Festival in the 1980s as a must see series on Latin Music alongside the films “LA BAMBA” and “STAND AND DELIVER.” National Recognition

For over 40 years, Images/Imágenes under the leadership of producer William Sanchez the television industry has recognized the series with four Emmys and nominated for twenty by National PBS. The series is distinguished having received numerous national acclaims from the White House, Congress, National PBS, the National Corporation for Public Broadcasting (CPB), and three New Jersey Governors. The series represented PBS in Europe, Asia, and Latin America. It was distributed by the Department of Defense and with audiences including American military bases around the world. It was also national under the Latino Consortium’s series “PRESENTE” with host Rita Moreno. Now under the banner of Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey, Images/Imagenes’ legacy continues for public viewing at the United States Library of Congress. Signature Shows There are a number of evergreen programs that were signature shows for the series and are timeless works of history and culture. A. Sembrando El Futuro/Seeding the Future (5-part Parent Education Series) Nationally acclaimed/ New York Emmy Award Winner 1985 B. The Hispanic Youth Showcase 1999 (Talent competition/motivational program hosted by kids (Ages 5 to 17) was recognized as one of the top six children’s programs in the nation by The Arts Council Co-op/ Mid-Atlantic Emmy Award Winner C. Su Salud Primero/Your Health First with host John Quiñones Mid-Atlantic 2008 Emmy Award Winner, drew national acclaim D. The Spanish Guitar (History/Legends: Jose Feliciano) Mid-Atlantic Emmy Winner 2010


Notable Programs & Specials Include: E. Festival Afro-Caribeño (Afro-Caribbean Festival at Newark’s Symphony Hall 1980) 2,500 people attended concert/first of several Images’ shows to obtain national acclaim F. Word-Up Stop the Violence with Edward Hames Olmos (Actor) 2004 Emmy Nominated Town meeting with 400 teens G. Lainzation of New Jersey, 1982 winner of the national Unity Award held in St. Louis, Ma. Won against ABC’s World News Tonight Other Notable Programs & Specials Include: H. Caribbean Music And Dance Emmy Nominated, Represented PBS At An International Level I. Latin Music Special Emmy Nominated J. The Art of Baseball Emmy Nominated K. Latinos in Boxing (History and Legends) L. History of Flamenco (History and Performance)

The Golden Age of Dance: The Palladium Obtained worldwide download success on the internet in 2009 1983 Special: Alcoholism & Mental health Inspired New Jersey Government offices to establish policies and focus groups aimed at understanding and serving Latinos in need of mental health

Productech Corporation draft reviewing

Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft of Productech Corporation article. I was trying to do it objective aтв not an advertising, taking an article about JBL as an inspiration. Looks like I failed (( Would you please advise, what parts of the article require editing? thank you in advance!

References added

Hi, I filled up the draft with some useful references and also added some literature. I hope it could be enought. Thanks

Thanks

I want to know that why my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dolmen_Malls not approving any suggestion

Grateful!Gmli82164 (talk) 11:12, 7 October 2018 (UTC)Gmli82164

Hi! Thank you for the review. I will do what I can to improve that article.

Lorraine McGowen Draft Page

Thank you for the notification. I have removed all external links from the Lorraine McGowen page.

DRAFT:Summation Formula List Decline

Ok, I took your advice and added my material back onto the wiki page on summation. You watch how long it takes D Lazarus to delete it and post his own rambling notes. His notes don't transition well for sentence-to-sentence; paragraph-to-paragraph, nor make any sense; Some of what he posts really is not related to closed form summation. Roger

Dixon Algebra submission.

I have followed your instructions and I think I have successfully updated the references to conform to wiki practices.

Historical notes: • I begsn working on this topic some 40 years ago; • Periodically the algebra has cropped up in the works of others; • Most of this activity has occurred in the last 8 years; • John Baez was the first to call the algebra the Dixon algebra; • This became somewhat solidified when the Quanta Mag and Wired articles appeared; • I recently saw a blog in which the blog's author said there is no wikipedia page for the Dixon algebra yet; • So I decided to start one.

Cheers, Geoffrey Dixon

Great American Doll Company Draft

Hello. Can you please help me edit this wiki page. I have done it the best I can. Can you please tell me what i need to fix up

Thank you for your help....

I really appreciate your help with my draft:Marek Holeček. I will try my best to add those missing citations you pointed out so hopefully it can get better. Thanks again...I really hope the article will be accepted at last ...

autobio

Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your reply - I wasn't aware of restriction on autobiographies, but can well appreciate the reasoning behind it!

all best,

Ketty Nez

Aron Ain Draft

Thank you for reviewing the draft. I'll edit the page to include more sources or remove sections that don't have sources. Thank you!

Ashleylouisewilliams3408

FYI: Ashley has been adding photos to Commons and then inserting those photos into various articles in preparation for her intention to create an article about her grandfather, Virgil Williams. I left a note on her Talk to declare paid or COI if she proceeds with the attempt. (Evidence for intention is creation and then deletion of a draft in her Sandbox.) The quail hunting photo you deleted was there because Virgil owns the land that was name-mentioned in the image caption. David notMD (talk)

Mona Lisa Brookshire

New edits

https://ameyawdebrah.com/mona-lisa-brookshire-blay-miezah-featured-in-upcoming-inspirational-film-becoming-the-keys

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Ml4lyfe2 (talk • contribs) 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Can you help me improve my page?

Celalettin-Field Quantum Observation Tunnel

Hello there,

I have removed unsourced material and thinned it out as per your direction. Can you please cast an eye?

Draft:900 wine prosecco

Hi Theroadislong, thanks for reviewing my page!

I saw your comment on my draft page 900 wine, I'm inserting the Italian wine brand on the market. I'm not connected to the company, I just try to make the list of brands on wikipedia as complete as possible. I am passionate about wine and I think this brand is important in the Italian sparkling wine scene.

can you possibly and kindly advise me of the changes that can better comply with the policies of wikipedia? Thanks a lot!

time travel episode

I wanted it to go in the category, but I cannot put the series in the category because it is not an episode. - Oranginger — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oranginger (talk • contribs) 19:03, 19 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Individual episodes of Stella and Sam are not notable enough for stand alone articles. Theroadislong (talk) 19:07, 19 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It was a SPECIAL episode, shouldn't the title bring people to read https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stella_and_Sam#Episode_list ? How do I do that? -Oranginger — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oranginger (talk • contribs) 17:59, 21 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry can't help you. Seems like you have been blocked for sockpuppetry. Theroadislong (talk) 18:39, 21 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rejected article for being "too promotional"

Hello.

The page I created is rejected because it was too promotional. When it was in draft, user who reviewed it said that I need to touch on one more thing, which I did and to submit it then. I did that and it's still rejected (I know that it didn't mean I the article would the automatically accepted). Do you care to say which part is promotional? I left the bare minimum - about the bussines, a bit of history and the core of the business (placing a hotel into a specific category). I can't see anything promotional left there. I am also a bit frustrated as I keep reading similar Wikipedia pages and they are really promotional yet, I leave the bare minimum and still getting rejected. I don't see how a bit of history and about the company is being promotional.

We would like to be a part of the Wikipedia and I hope you'll help me get it there.

Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kristijanwh (talk • contribs) 11:19, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Well the first sentence says "a global collection of independent mid and upper hotels around the world" which isn't exactly neutral tone. Wikipedia is NOT a venue for promoting your business and I won't be helping you to do that. Theroadislong (talk) 11:23, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I meant help in pointing me in the right direction. Thank you, I will try to write it better before I submit it for AFC. Appreciate the help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kristijanwh (talk • contribs) 11:38, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Questions and Thank you for reviewing the Draft The Complete Lyrics to The Messiah by Georg Friedrich Händel

Hello! My name is Winny by the way. It is very good to hear back from your. I just want to thank you very much for having so quickly reviewed my draft submission. Yes, I know.... it is declined. How do I go about finding out the reason for declining? Also if I failed to do this right...can YOU do this project and make a submission so the complete lyric is more accessible? I don't care who post it....as long as it is there. You see...The reason why I did this was because I recently listened to The Messiah by Georg Friedrich Handel and I wanted to look up the entire lyric in Wikipedia. It ended up not being there. And I ended up having to google each individual movement (songs...and there are 53 of them) to find the lyrics. It was very frustrating. So I compiled all of these from various lyric websites. I am not sure why I can fine Enriqu Iglesias Lyric here but not Handel's Messiah here. It is true there are plenty of information on Wikipedia about Georg Friedrich Handel....including description of each movement for The Messiah. But I wish there is a list of all the lyrics on one page. And I really hope someone could do this....and have it up by Easter this year.

So Help! Thank you for reading this long message! Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by WinnyHuangatEcontact (talk • contribs) 13:55, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please read WP:INDISCRIMINATE Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information. It might be appropriate here though, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikisource Theroadislong (talk) 14:05, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Umlaut draft

Hello, I am trying to get my article draft fit for approval since it was initially declined. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:UMLAUT_(band) I realize that there isn't a huge amount of material to support the subject. The musical group exists on many music streaming websites, has been promoted in podcasts, and is tied to other subjects that do have their own wikipedia pages. Like associated acts of Mr. Bungle: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mr._Bungle 

And the Umlaut band leader, who was a member of Mr. Bungle:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clinton_McKinnon_(musician) Should I go to one of those pages, click the link and "create page" from there instead to prove validity?

Or is it just that my draft is lacking a decent amount of supporting sources and should be trimmed, at which point it's more likely to be approved? Thank you. Catoco (talk) 22:15, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft is lacking enough independent reliable sources about them. Wikipedia requires multiple in-depth coverage in it's sources. Theroadislong (talk) 22:29, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

De-commercializing this page

We are doing our best to clean up the Williamsburg Christian Academy Wikipedia entry. We are stripping positive descriptors from sections and just trying to present factual information regarding the school. Unfortunately, the bulk of information available about the school can only be obtained from the school's website in terms of their philosophy, programs, and personnel. There really is no public information that has covered what people really need to know about the institution. What would you recommend that we do regarding the warnings placed on the page to make it inline with guidelines? We want the most factual detail we can get on the page, but don't want to be viewed as advertising, just providing data.

As an aside, one problem that exists here is that Google for Business draws upon the Wikipedia description of the institution. This yields temptation to improve or polish the appearance of the Wikipedia description to garner more appeal....just an observation. In my opinion, Wikipedia has no place in a commercial listing, unless it's a purely governmental or monument type location. Sullymaan (talk) 17:41, 21 March 2019 (UTC) The Maan[reply]

If the content has not been discussed in independent sources then it can't be on Wikipedia. Articles on Wikipedia must be adequately supported by reliable sources so that information can be verified

and we only summarise what reliable, independent published sources have to say about a subject. If there are no such sources then we cannot include the content and who is "we" Wikipedia accounts are strictly for single person use only. Theroadislong (talk) 17:46, 21 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

April editathons at Women in Red

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(Please excuse this post if it is a duplicate!)

Question, if you have time

Thank you for reviewing my page. Was it declined simply due to a lack of references? If so, how do I go about rectifying so that it can be published. Page was 94.1 WIP Midday Show. It was my first attempt, and I was pretty certain that I did at least 1900 things incorrectly. Thanks for your time. Kenny Spaulding — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kennyfrombethlehem (talk • contribs) 20:14, 26 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Yes articles need to refer to a range of sources. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about the show in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. Theroadislong (talk) 20:17, 26 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

AFC

Hello.

You rejected my article and I re-submitted it. Now I am not sure did I submit it or not again since there still a button to submit it and I didn't get a response. Can you just confirm to me if I did or did not submit it so I can proceed? Thank you. (Kristijanwh (talk) 10:56, 27 March 2019 (UTC))[reply]

I can confirm your draft has not been re-submitted. Theroadislong (talk) 11:03, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Adam

I've Just Removed the Conceptual Image or Portrait of Prophet Adam.. Because The Portrait or Image of A Prophet or A Messenger is not Allowed in Islam.. I'm A Muslim So I did so.

It would be best to start a discussion here first Talk:Adam, as Wikipedia is not censored. Theroadislong (talk) 15:25, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Universe

Hello. You have reverted my edit on Universe on the basis that it doesn't belong in the lead section. However, the current definition of a universe contradicts many multiverse articles at once - for example, the article multiverse, which states that a multiverse is a "group of multiple universes". Of course, if a single universe encompasses all time and space, that would be impossible. Furthermore, the article Universe itself has a dedicated and relatively detailed sub-section about the multiverse hypothesis, which directly contradicts the lead. I would like to hear your arguments as to why you don't think the definition of a universe in the multiverse context does not belong in the lead section.

As for it not being clear, please explain in what way it is not clear, and possibly suggest an improved version.OlJa 20:18, 28 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It's not clear because it contradicts what the first paragraph says and you seem to have stated as fact what a multiverse is, whilst it is only a hypothesis and it is already noted as such a few paragraphs down. Theroadislong (talk) 23:04, 28 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I have italicised the articles 'the' and 'a' for distinction, and also note how the Universe is capitalised, unlike a universe. Furthermore, at the end of the sentence, it is stated that this definition only applies to "many multiverse hypotheses". Don't see any contradiction. Please read the edit clearly before reverting. To make it clearer, however, I can put this adverbial clause at the front of the sentence.OlJa 23:43, 28 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Since when is Billboard not a reliable source?

I do not understand your comments. Since when is Billboard not a reliable source? It says right in the reference that this artist co-wrote a song recorded by Dionne Warwick for Sudden Infant Death Syndrome. Her music has also been played on the BBC in addition to other things. I have seen musicians on Wikipedia with almost no references.Are you sure you're seeing the revised article? Every reference listed is either a review, radio play on a national station or a major publication like Billboard.

Mark Shiwolich — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mshiwolich (talk • contribs) 19:50, 29 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft Draft:Ellen Woloshin was declined by User:SamHolt6 I can't see any mention of Billboard in the draft? Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rabbi Dovid Tugendhaft

I added references relating to the subject after the first review. the references have a wealth of information relating to the subject on them. I am unaware of why my article falls short of standards. please can you help me on this matter?


Danny — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winston16 (talk • contribs) 20:29, 30 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ursula Holden Gill's Wikipedia Page

Hello there,

I attempted to update my Wikipedia page on Saturday evening because it has concerned me for a while that I am currently being misrepresented there. It seems the page was set up for me by someone when I was a television actress (over ten years ago). However, for the last decade I have worked as a Storyteller and Educator. As much of the information on my page is either incorrect or out of date I took pains to correct it myself but I received notification from you yesterday morning that you had changed it back again! I totally respect that Wikipedia isn't about self promotion and I assure you that is not what I'm trying to do but PLEASE could you ensure that I'm represented accurately? I've included a version of how I'd like the page to read below. Doesn't need much. Just some things taking out and updates adding in. Any problems, please contact me via ursulaholdengill@gmail.com.Thanks.

Ursula Holden-Gill (born 21 March 1974) is a storyteller and educator known initially for her acting work including her roles as school secretary Carol on Channel 4's comedy drama Teachers (2001–04) and cancer sufferer Alice Dingle on ITV's Emmerdale (2004–06).

Ursula Holden-Gill graduated from St Martin's College, Lancaster in 1996 with a BA Honours in Drama and Music before attaining an MA in Intercultural Storytelling at University of Lancaster and a PG Dip in Acting from the Drama Studio London. Her screen credits include The Bill, Sex, Chips & Rock n' Roll, Mrs Merton and Malcolm, Trial and Retribution, Doctor Willoughby, The Wyvern Mystery, People Like Us, Teachers,[1] Emmerdale, The Syndicate, Vera and Wolfblood.

In 2007, Holden-Gill underwent teacher training at Unity College, Burnley where she attained full status as a qualified teacher and went on to establish herself as a professional Storyteller and Educator. She is currently an associate artist of Opera North and Settle Stories, an associate teacher of The London Academy of Music and Dramatic Art, Storyteller in Residence at Leeds General Infirmary for the charity Henry Dancer Days and works within the community, education, entertainment and health sectors alike, both in the UK and abroad.[2] In 2012 Holden-Gill was voted Best Newcomer at the British Awards for Storytelling Excellence[3] and in May 2013 released her first collection of songs ‘The Handless Maiden’s Daughter’.

(In the Occupation Section please could take out the word Performer. Thank you). — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.30.117.12 (talk) 12:58, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'm afraid that, like many others, you have misunderstood what Wikipedia is about. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia that summarizes what independent sources say about a subject. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what you or I have to say about anything. We only summarise what reliable, independent published sources have to say about a subject. Theroadislong (talk) 14:36, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Theroadislong, thank you for reviewing the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Florian_Graf. I improved the referencing in the section life and work and hope you will be able to re-review the page and let me know if there is anything else that can be improved. Many thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aniblab7 (talk • contribs) 19:46, 2 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Australian and Oceanian Continent

Matthew Flinders from Our Union(The UK), if you didn't happen to know, circumnavigated The continent of Australia-Oceania back in the day.

Neill Patterson (talk) 11:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding Manish Ranjan article.

Hello!

Hope you are doing well.

I have made all the references inline as suggested by you. Kindly check and revert if anything else needs to be done here.

Mahishranjanias (talk) 11:54, 4 April 2019 (UTC)BR[reply]

Request on 12:38:07, 4 April 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Gedgmoss


Hello, thank you for your feedback but I'd like further clarification: 1) which reference is not "significant" 2) at least one reference is a published Book - is this not significant enough? 3) do I simply need to refer some references leaving only (2) ?

I understand your principles, but just more specifics on the execution. Thank you

Gedgmoss (talk) 12:38, 4 April 2019 (UTC)G.MossGedgmoss (talk) 12:38, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Gedgmoss (talk) 12:38, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Article submission

Hi, you recently left a comment on my page that I am trying to publish - I've done a couple of edits, would you be able to take another look?

Thanks!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hcs2019/sandbox

Hcs2019 (talk) 14:40, 5 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It would need a complete re-write, it is just blatant advertising, entirely inappropriate in tone.Theroadislong (talk) 14:49, 5 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

John Webb Singer

I am awaiting for comments/corrections from a local expert, Sue Bucklow, who is publishing a book on Singer before July and who is curator of Singer events within the Frome Festival this year. I am also seeking permission to use an image of Singer from the local museum, the image to be placed in Wiki Commons. I will probably publish within a few pages. Many thanks for your support of the article. Philgryce (talk) 18:28, 6 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing draft of Samiran Chhetri Priyadarshi

Hi, Thank you for taking out your time to review the draft of Samiran Chhetri Priyadarshi. The only reason we have made his information available is because his stories are used in school syllabus and one his work Balibedi is used as a textbook by the University of North Bengal, India. So, having his information on Wikipedia will help the fellow students to gather information about him. The information on the draft is complete to as what we can cover on his literary life. Still I request you kind help to help me to update the draft so that it can be approved. Thank you once again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Poemsforsoul (talk • contribs) 13:31, 7 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Masochistic Beauty

I give thanks to you (and anyone else) who was involved in reviewing and accepting the article, especially considering the fact that it is about one of Marvin Gaye's more obscure/bizarre records. {{LonerXL (talk) 18:38, 7 April 2019 (UTC)}}[reply]

A barnstar for you!

The Original Barnstar
Thank you... Viki-BSU (talk) 05:53, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Viki-BSU (talk) 06:12, 8 April 2019 (UTC)Hello. I tried to make the page better. But each has its own taste. Maybe someone did not like it - that's fine, I think so. I am going to add here my teacher’s scientific articles so that students and other specialists can use them for free. Despite the fact that he is a young specialist, but he is the first person who put forward the concept of "Document and Information Sciences" - showed their structure. He is also the author of the monograph of The Fund for Periodical Press of the Azerbaijan National Library. I am very thankfull you - for your editing my Draft.Viki-BSU (talk) 06:12, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Farshid pakzat

Why was Farshid Pakzat article being removed? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Farid m19022 (talk • contribs) 06:33, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Deletion of page

Dear sir, Could you please delete the page Girish Bharadwaj — Preceding unsigned comment added by VeeraArjun (talk • contribs) 12:41, 8 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

The German wikipedia entry for Botond Roska has been approved in the meantime https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Botond_Roska I really have no idea who the author is. Reading it, I see differences in structure, but not regarding factual content to my EN draft.

Which sufficient 'secondary reliable resources' are missing in my EN draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Botond_Roska?


I'm really not trying to set up an advertisment page here, just try to reply to many Qs 'why is Botond not yet on wikipedia?'


Thanks for your help and for concrete hints on what I need to do to get the draft published - I am a first time wikipedia entry user (more proof for me not trying to create anything like an advertorial here) and I do not understand or use HTML, unfortunately.

Kind regards, sabine — Preceding unsigned comment added by 31.164.126.132 (talk) 10:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The draft requires more sources, no knowledge of HTML is required to edit Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 10:49, 9 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Editing Wikipedia

Sorry I thought this was uncyclopedia, I'm illiterate man living on streets of Colombia. Sorry for mistake.

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