Talk:Acts of Peter and the Twelve
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[edit]The full title of this text is "The Acts of Peter and the Twelve Apostles" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 101.161.27.53 (talk) 01:33, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Jenhawk777 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
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Hello TriplePowered, I am Jenhawk777. I was asked to review this article by Mike Christie, so I am going to begin. Looking forward to working with you. Jenhawk777 (talk) 15:49, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
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Prose
[edit]- Okay, I've done my first read through, and I am uncomfortable with the lead. It is a common problem when writing of something commonly known in a field of study that is not commonly known outside that field. There are technical terms that the average sophomore - for whom we write - will not understand. I see that tractate is explained but Codex, and the Nag Hammadi are not, and neither are explained later in the body either. So I would like to see that added to make it more accessible to that broad audience. Jenhawk777 (talk) 16:13, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, the generic 'codex' has been replaced with more context-friendly 'sheepskin-bound papyrus codex' and the meaning of 'Nag Hammadi library' is more explicitly stated in the opening. TriplePowered (talk) 21:07, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- Thanx for getting back to me so quickly. Imo, adding sheepskin doesn't clarify anything. However, now that you've changed it, it looks like there is no good way to include explanations that don't make it worse rather than better. You have all jargon-terms linked, the explanations are available, so shorten those two sentences, and that will be good enough.
- How about this: "It is the first [tractate] in [Codex] VI of the [Nag Hammadi] texts, taking up pages 1–12 of the codex's 78 pages."
- Sorry to be fussy about that, but stats indicate most people never read beyond the lead, so it needs to be clear.
- Moving on down through the rest of the article.
- Remove the link to lodging. I'm guessing someone else came along and did that for you. Overuse of links that add nothing substantive, but are a distraction, is an ongoing problem on WP. If someone doesn't know what 'lodging' is, I'm guessing they won't be reading this article. There are a few other similar unnecessary links through the remaining paragraphs as well. Use your best judgement and remove them.
- Do that and I can pass this first requirement with a yes, it is well written. Jenhawk777 (talk) 04:11, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- I have edited. TriplePowered (talk) 05:22, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you. I will be going through the citations now. That always takes a little longer than just checking prose and punctuation. Everything looks good so far. Jenhawk777 (talk) 15:12, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- I have edited. TriplePowered (talk) 05:22, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- b. (citations to reliable sources):
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Sources
[edit]- Just for future reference, unless something is controversial, which imo this article is not, each sentence only needs one citation. You are absolutely right about checking more than one source for verification, but every source you look at can't be cited. These sources all look reliable, so any of them will do.
- 12 is good; however 13 seems misplaced as the source says only "first half of the fourth century" on that page. Could those refs be reversed? It looks like 2 has that earlier date. (I like the description in this one - focus on commission and fairy tale with symbols, and Molinari calling it an allegory. Perhaps consider adding some of it? Your decision, it won't impact this process. It could easily fit in the lead and just broadens it a bit.) 7 also has the earlier date.
- I cannot access 20. Could you get it for me? I really like that you included the word for word in the citation. I am amazed it didn't come up as a copyright violation - quotes always seem to for me! Since you used the one translation throughout - which is perfectly fine - I am just wondering if there might be any significant differences in any other translations. Do you happen to know?
- 4 is good
- Made it through to 71 and have to quit for today. Almost done! But it's my birthday today and I keep getting interrupted!! As far as I am concerned this is great, and will be finished tomorrow. Good work! Jenhawk777 (talk) 18:41, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
- 4 is good
- I cannot access 20. Could you get it for me? I really like that you included the word for word in the citation. I am amazed it didn't come up as a copyright violation - quotes always seem to for me! Since you used the one translation throughout - which is perfectly fine - I am just wondering if there might be any significant differences in any other translations. Do you happen to know?
- I don't see an issue with ref 13. On p. 414 Schenke says, "There is also scarcely any serviceable indication in the text for answering the question of the date of composition, i.e. how long before the first half of the 4th century, the terminus post quem non, the ActPt was composed. We are practically entirely reduced to estimates. Thus scholars speak in quite general terms of the 2nd and/or 3rd century."
- You can use the search feature on archive.org to access the limited pages, like so: [1]https://i.ibb.co/r37nN7H/archive.png. Essentially the same translation is also at [2]http://www.gnosis.org/naghamm/actp.html. There are a few other English translations, but the only one I can find for free is in Molinari's dissertation, which is almost identical to Parrott/Wilson, with a few suggested rewordings mixed in.
- I'm glad that citing the quotes passed, because I think that summaries are especially vulnerable to editors' inserting misinterpretations, personal views, or minor errors, whereas citing the exact quotes makes it easy to see whether each sentence of the summary accurately represents what the original author wrote.
- Thanks for spending your birthday reviewing Acts of Peter and the Twelve. TriplePowered (talk) 20:33, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
- I see the problem with 13 - all I get is p.415 not 414, but I accept your statement about it as accurate. This is the first article I've done where I checked every reference - I found it all so interesting I couldn't help myself! (Don't give me more credit than I deserve. I didn't spend much of my birthday here on WP. Which is why you've had to wait till Monday for your results. So I will say thank you for your patience.)
- I too am glad the quotes passed - I love to use quotes for exactly the reasons you say - and I get dunned for it all the time, so I glad to have another "quoter" on board. :-)
- This is a brilliant little article, perfect for WP, and I am passing it for GA. Congratulations! Jenhawk777 (talk) 16:03, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you, great work reviewing. TriplePowered (talk) 19:49, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- It's still a nominee... TriplePowered (talk) 00:04, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
- 12 is good; however 13 seems misplaced as the source says only "first half of the fourth century" on that page. Could those refs be reversed? It looks like 2 has that earlier date. (I like the description in this one - focus on commission and fairy tale with symbols, and Molinari calling it an allegory. Perhaps consider adding some of it? Your decision, it won't impact this process. It could easily fit in the lead and just broadens it a bit.) 7 also has the earlier date.
- Just for future reference, unless something is controversial, which imo this article is not, each sentence only needs one citation. You are absolutely right about checking more than one source for verification, but every source you look at can't be cited. These sources all look reliable, so any of them will do.
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- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
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- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Aoidh (talk) 21:33, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
- ... that the text of the Acts of Peter and the Twelve were completely unknown until there discovery at Nag Hammadi in 1945? Source: Schenke, Hans-Martin (2003). New Testament Apocrypha: Writings relating to the Apostles; Apocalypses and related subjects. Louisville: Westminster John Knox Press. pp. 412–425. ISBN 978-0-664-22722-7. Retrieved 1 March 2023. Pages 412-413 , https://epublications.marquette.edu/dissertations/AAI9719094/
ALT1: ... that some scholars debate whether the Acts of Peter and the Twelve is gnostic as although the text lacks explicitly Gnostic views, its themes could be interpreted as Gnostic?Source: Schenke, Hans-Martin (2003). New Testament Apocrypha: Writings relating to the Apostles; Apocalypses and related subjects. Louisville: Westminster John Knox Press. pp. 412–425. ISBN 978-0-664-22722-7. Pages 415-416 , Parrott, Douglas M.; Wilson, R. McL. (1981). The Nag Hammadi library in English. San Francisco: Harper & Row. pp. 265–270. ISBN 9780060669294- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Loddon Bridge disaster
Improved to Good Article status by TriplePowered (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 00:18, 31 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Acts of Peter and the Twelve; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Not a review but I'd like to suggest an alternate hook:
ALT2 ... in the Acts of Peter and the Twelve, Jesus transformed into a pearl merchant and a physician?
- (The corresponding sources would be 3:10–13 and 8:14–20 of the text itself.)
- Also, should the "Acts of Peter and the Twelve" be italicized? It's italicized in the article, so I think we should also italicized it in ALT0 and ALT1. --TheLonelyPather (talk) 20:06, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
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Plot CLOP
[edit]I know this article has been declared good, but the plot section is a WP:PARAPHRASE of the text. I realize it may seem odd to complain about copious cites, but in this case, virtually the entire story is reproduced piecemeal in the footnote section, a clear case of WP:CITEKILL. A single cite at the end of the plot section w/ no reproduction of original text would be far more encyclopedic and would be supported under WP:REPCITE. Just Another Cringy Username (talk) 02:40, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Evidently you need to hear this: no, you should not mass delete the citations from a Good Article that you just discovered after it was featured on the main page. The citations prevent misinterpretations and original research from getting into the summary. TriplePowered (talk) 00:14, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
- What does it matter where I found it? Being featured on the main page doesn't exempt an article from editing, nor does being declared Good, and to say it does is pure gatekeeping. I helped make Wicked (Maguire novel) into a GA and that has been edited several times since.
- I'm aware of why plot summaries are given citations (though per MOS:PLOT it's by no means necessary). My question is more about the sheer abundance of them, as well as the amount of detail involved. At this point, what you have is not a summary, but a WP:PARAPHRASE of the text.
- Per policy, "If one source alone supports consecutive sentences in the same paragraph, one citation of it at the end of the final sentence is sufficient. It is not necessary to include a citation for each individual consecutive sentence, as this is overkill." You've not only cited each individual consecutive sentence, you've gone phrase by phrase and included quotes for each cite, which means that you can pretty much read the whole original text verbatim just by looking through the footnotes. All the footnotes come from the same source, so why not just cite it once at the end? Just Another Cringy Username (talk) 01:11, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
- Xenogears (Good Article), Chrono Trigger (Featured Article), and Chrono Cross (Featured Article) are examples that use the same quoting style. They do not just say "Source: Square" at the end. Stop trying to justify vandalizing the article. If you would like to do something actually helpful like adding more analysis to the article, go ahead. TriplePowered (talk) 14:21, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
- Those articles' plot summaries are way too long and full of fancruft. That aside, they still don't show nearly the same level of citation overkill that this one does. There's a cite or two for each paragraph, where you have two or three for every single sentence, all pointing to the same source. That's w/o even addressing the WP:PARAPHRASE issue. Finally, crying "vandalism" when I haven't even made an edit suggests that you're overly attached to this article. Just Another Cringy Username (talk) 16:50, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
- Xenogears (Good Article), Chrono Trigger (Featured Article), and Chrono Cross (Featured Article) are examples that use the same quoting style. They do not just say "Source: Square" at the end. Stop trying to justify vandalizing the article. If you would like to do something actually helpful like adding more analysis to the article, go ahead. TriplePowered (talk) 14:21, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
A general comment: I suggested once that WP:RSPSCRIPTURE should say something like "a MOS:PLOTSOURCE approach can work well regarding some scriptural stories." It caused a bit of discussion: Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_327#Scriptural_texts_(WP:RSPSCRIPTURE). Perhaps you'll find the arguments interesting. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 08:53, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
RFC on Summary Section
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Which of the following versions of the Summary section should be used? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:15, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
A – The existing version in Acts_of_Peter_and_the_Twelve#Summary ?
B – The trimmed version in Draft:Acts of Peter and the Twelve/Summary ?
Enter your choice in the Survey with a brief statement. Do not reply to the posts of other editors in the Survey. You may discuss in the Discussion section; that's what it's for. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:15, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]A, with minor changes – In articles on religious texts, a high level of detail is important and appropriate, even for an encyclopedia. The existing version could use a minor copyedit for legibility, and the number and density of citations is clearly excessive. However, I don't think it should be substantially trimmed. Actualcpscm (talk) 12:01, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
B with more inline citations. I think that the extra details in the longer version could do more harm than good, as their purpose is unclear and they could cause readers to lose interest. If there are a few details missing from the trimmed version that people find especially important, I would not oppose expanding it slightly to find a sort of middle ground between the two. — Freoh 15:22, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
Both seem fine. I found it a hard to follow the longer version. Cuñado ☼ - Talk 15:52, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
B as a basis. The level of detail and the number of citations in A are excessive. I wouldn't even call it a summary, it seems more like a paraphrase. The quotes in the footnotes are unnecessary and I'm wondering whether they really don't constitute a copyright violation: we have a lot of quotes from a very short text. There are some issues with B, too. It takes the number of citations to the other extreme. I think the right amount of citations lies in between (although far closer to B than to A). Some relevant details are left out, e.g. the pearl is mentioned in the analysis, so it should be mentioned in the summary. I'd also like to point out that neither version conforms to WP:RSPSCRIPTURE. B is not perfect, but it is far better than A. -- Random person no 362478479 (talk) 06:30, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
A, with minor changes (summoned by bot) As Actualcpscm has said, religious texts warrant a highly detailed summary. The summary does need some citation cleanup, because in its current state, it is hard to read. The number of citations is unnecessary and it is in need of a copyedit, but nothing major. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 18:00, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
A. The idea that classical texts, especially religious ones, should be described at the same level of detail as episodes of The Bachelor is fatuous and destructive. 104.226.30.18 (talk) 21:32, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Discussion
[edit]Freoh I don't think retaining user attention is a major priority; comprehensiveness is much more important than managing reader interest. Of course articles shouldn't go into absurd technical detail, but there is real encyclopedic value in a thorough summary. I'm also not sure why the purpose of the additional detail is unclear – it's there to provide relevant information, and such a level of detail is quite useful for the vast majority of readers seeking out this kind of article. Actualcpscm (talk) 16:47, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
Re:quotes in footnotes The original[3] has 2210 words. The quotes in the footnotes have 885 words. That's 40%. -- Random person no 362478479 (talk) 06:45, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- The quotes also do not mark gaps in the original and insertions by the translators and therefore does not follow MOS:PMC and good practice and gives a misleading impression of the state of the source. -- Random person no 362478479 (talk) 16:27, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
Question both summaries mention ""endure the trials and difficulties of the storms"". What storms? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 12:35, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- This is the only mention of storms in the text:
I responded, saying, "Justly [...] have men named it [...], because (by) everyone who endures his trials, cities are inhabited, and a precious kingdom comes from them, because they endure in the midst of the apostasies and the difficulties of the storms. So that in this way, the city of everyone who endures the burden of his yoke of faith will be inhabited, and he will be included in the kingdom of heaven."
[4] Note that "[...]" seems to mark gaps in the original. -- Random person no 362478479 (talk) 12:47, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
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