Jump to content

Talk:Ahlam Tamimi

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia


Introductory Paragraph Grammar/Language

[edit]

The introductory paragraph language should be adjusted as it is not well structured and as it maybe be construed as politically biased from the tone of the sentence. I dont want to take sides and am writing this as a neutral observer.

"Despite multiple life sentences for the deaths she caused, she is free as a result of a prisoner exchange, and hosts a television show about Palestinians in Israeli prisons. She is known for her participation in the Sbarro restaurant suicide bombing."

maybe restructured to:

"She is known for her participation in the Sbarro restaurant suicide bombing for which she was serving multiple life sentences until her release as part of the Gilad-Shalit prisoner exchange. Ahlam now hosts a television show about Palestinians in Israeli prisons."


Considering the rules on editing here and that I have currently forgotten my user id/password combination for wikipedia I am not doing an edit but just mentioning my concerns here.

75.49.251.113 (talk) 19:25, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 3 external links on Ahlam Tamimi. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 22:19, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Extradition

[edit]

There is disagreement on the extradition treaty between the US and Jordan. However, it is documented fact that the purpose of the treaty was to extradite Eyad Ismoil and the treaty was in fact used for that purpose. Jordan may claim that the treaty lacked the approval of the Parliament but even given that fact, the treaty was implemented in that case, and arguably in others.

I added a paragraph to that effect, quoting The New York Times [1].

I have a question on the other paragraph I added, which quotes a book by Samuel M. Katz [2] that documents that the Jordanian Parliament scrapped the treaty because of the controversy of handing over a Jordanian national to the US. This contradicts the Jordanian version even more directly because it indicates that instead of the treaty never being used, it was not only used but voided by the Parliament after the fact. The actual page from the book can be viewed online here Relentless Pursuit : The DSS And The Manhunt For The Al-Qaeda Terrorists


I would like to know upfront, rather than wait for someone to come across what I added, where those 2 paragraphs I wrote stand.

TIA,

UClaudius (talk) 05:27, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ McKinley Jr., James C. (4 August 1995). "Suspect Is Said to Be Longtime Friend of Bombing Mastermind". New York Times. Retrieved 7 February 2021.
  2. ^ Katz, Samuel M. (2002). Relentless pursuit : the DSS and the manhunt for the al-Qaeda terrorists (1st ed.). New York: Forge/Tom Doherty Associates. ISBN 9780765304025.

Revert

[edit]

מחסל האגדות, what do you mean by "There is no dispute about the location, no you determine" ? Jerusalem is a disputed city, so Wikipedia can not state that it is "Israel". --Supreme Deliciousness (talk) 17:32, 16 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]