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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Grandy Glaze/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:45, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  • Lead could be fleshed out to two full paragraphs, it doesn't mention how he got to St. John's, or how long he's been there, just for examples.
  • What about anything about his life before high school?
  • "18 points and eight rebounds" Either spell out both, or use numerals for both.
  • Spell out UNLV at least once.
  • "For the 2011–2012 season, Glaze decided to wear #55 which was his high school number. Glaze played in a mere 9 games as reserve power forward for the Billikens. The highlight of the year of Glaze was against Alabama State where Glaze played 10 minutes while recording 2 points, 3 rebounds, and an assist.[9] " Only the actual statistics seem sourced, not his number, not the nine games, not the "highlight of the year" bit, just the statistics of the game versus Alabama State.
  • "Glaze changed his number prior to the season to #1. " Watch the unsourced sentences
  • "Glaze played in 25 games, a sizable increase in playing time, and had 20 starts. Glaze was used primarily as a hustle player who played anywhere from 10–20 minutes to provide energy. Glaze's best game came against conference foe Duquesne where he tallied 8 points, 10 rebounds, and 2 steals." None of this is sourced by the next reference except "8 points, 10 rebounds, and 2 steals".
  • "The 2012–13 Saint Louis Billikens men's basketball team went 28–7 and earning a postseason ranking of 16th in the nation. Glaze and his team won the Atlantic 10 Conference Championship which earned the Billikens a 4 seed in the NCAA Tournament. " Literally none of this but the #4 seed is in the next source provided.
  • I'm going to stop now. This isn't hard to fix, but there's clearly a problem in insufficient inline citations going on here. Go through, source everything, and I'll resume this review. On hold for now. Courcelles (talk) 21:55, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Courcelles: Sorry about the sourcing, I should have been more careful and diligent finding sources. Most of this article is based on one that was deleted a few years ago (which I nominated btw, before his pro career). As such it is possible that there were a few unsourced bits. I have addressed all your concerns, do you have any more? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:48, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Take 2

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Courcelles (talk) 23:07, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Reality career

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Should mention his porn and reality career; including on Zeus network ‘Bobby, I love you purr’ 208.117.220.90 (talk) 22:54, 26 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]