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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Valereee (talk19:12, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Meandering creek at Innisfree Garden
Meandering creek at Innisfree Garden
  • Reviewed: to come

Created by Thriley (talk) and Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 23:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • Technically, the article is long enough (2683 chars) but some of the material is replicated (in both lede and body). I'd feel more comfortable if it was a bit longer given this duplication of material. Perhaps expand a little on the nature of Innisfree Garden and what makes it particularly important?
  • The hook is short enough and sourced. Looking at the article on the garden itself, there the following information is provided: "inspired by scroll paintings of the 8th-century Chinese poet and painter Wang Wei.". This could be added to Collins' article and maybe included in the hook to make it a bit more hook-y.
  • QFQ is still needed.
  • Expand the article just a bit more and make hook more hooky if possible (though if need be the article should be fine as-is). Volunteer Marek 18:52, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Volunteer Marek 18:52, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the review! While you right about the hookiness of the Chinese artist, we had that already in the DYK for the garden. Also: it's normal that the lead duplicates the body. Duplication from a different article would be worse, no? More later. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:56, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I reviewed now Template:Did you know nominations/Hollis Taylor. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:34, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I think it's good to go. Volunteer Marek 05:02, 5 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]