Talk:Louie Cullen

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Louisa "Louie" Cullen
Louisa "Louie" Cullen

5x expanded by Kaybeesquared (talk). Nominated by Paul2520 (talk) at 03:38, 5 November 2019 (UTC).

  • Comment: Great nomination Paul. I have now added an image of her....Victuallers (talk) 09:50, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Thanks, Victuallers! Question for you or Kaybeesquared or the reviewer of this nomination: should we update the hook to mention that this photo is captioned "Holloway", a.k.a., where she was imprisoned? = paul2520 (talk) 17:11, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
How about DYK etc......Holloway brooch for hunger strike in prison for women's suffrage?

Kaybeesquared (talk) 23:06, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Louie Cullen (pictured) was given a Holloway brooch for her hunger strike in prison for women's suffrage?
= paul2520 (talk) 23:20, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Sorry, I moved the page. We should have only one common name, - never saw a bracket in a bio name. I also made some changes to the article, please check.
Symbol question.svg Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and shows the period well. Of the hooks above, I like ALT2 best, striking the others. I could imagine that Australia would be even more interesting than a brooch. Fell free to suggest ALT3 below - or not. I'd have some wishes for the article which you may follow or not:
Can we find her birth last name?
No text "sandwiched" between images
No one-line paragraphs
More lead, - almost a most, such a rich life!
Not sure that "artifacts" is the proper header name, how about "memorabilia"?
Thank you, Kaybeesquared, nice to meat you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:10, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback, Gerda Arendt. All valid. I made a couple of the changes. Will do more later. = paul2520 (talk) 16:06, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
Gerda Arendt, do you think this is a legit source? [1] It mentions the husband, and suggests Clarissa is the middle name, with Mays the maiden name.
I fixed the "sandwiched" text, one-line paragraphs, and lead. I also changed the section header. Can you review again? = paul2520 (talk) 01:16, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
I think the source is better than no name, but for the article please use the English version, - the German sounds awfully translated. Please mention the precise Cullen, as there are so many.
Symbol confirmed.svg with thanks for your work! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:10, 12 November 2019 (UTC)