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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Shall take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
"For years he worked under dual identities as he also worked" - repetition of the word "worked"
"but transitioned to working 100% as Zacarias in 2012." - working solely

Professional wrestling career[edit]

"but by Mid 2007" - mid-2007,
"he worked as a regular Mini-Estrella under the name "Atomo", although due to his very short stature did not work regularly as an active competitor." - frequently participate

Mini Máximo (2008–2012)[edit]

"at times referred to as" - sometimes
"as he defeated La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", who was a male masked wrestler), thus forcing La Novia de Chucky to remove his mask per the match stipulation." - defeating La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", a male masked wrestler) and forcing his opponent to remove his mask per match stipulation.
"In a Ruleta de la Muerte tag teams face off in a single-elimination tournament, but unlike traditional tournaments," - repetition of tournament/tournaments
The term Mask should be wikilinked to Wrestling mask on the first mention not the third
"The team that loses the tag team match final" - tne word in bold should be replaced by squad to avoid close repetition of the word "team"

La Peste Negra (2011–2017)[edit]

"movie series than he usually did." - film
"and at times help them cheat during the matches." - occasionally helped them cheat during matches.
"Rey Bucanero would leave the group when Mr. Niebla returned but Perico remained with the group" - repetition of the word "group"
"at times referred to as Perico Zacarias." - sometimes

Micro-Estrella division (2017–present)[edit]

"four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - This sentence should begin with a capital letter
"Zacarias and his team once again lost to Microman's team." - repetition of the word "team"
"Zacarias, Microman, Atomo, and Guapito took on Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito take on, and Zacarias." - Chamuel, El Gallito, and Zacarias.
"Zaracias, Chamuel, and Guapito joined forces once again" - teamed up

Independent circuit (2017–present)[edit]

"While working for CMLL, Zacarias, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - repetition of working/workers and CMLL
"Mije and Zacarias lose to Microman and El Gallito by disqualification." - lost
"which featured Microman and Gallito defeating Mije and Zacarias." - saw
Delink Mr. Niebla since he is already linked earlier in the article

References[edit]

The spaced-out hyphens in the titles of the relevant references should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
References 1, 9 and 10 are missing the authors of the respective articles

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator time to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:27, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 everything has been addressed I think. MPJ-DK (talk) 03:10, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:24, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Spanish typos[edit]

I have read the article. There are some small typos in Spanish, like Atomo Átomo, cibernetico cibernético or Maximo Máximo. However, there is a big one, since it's Zacarías, not Zacarias. A name change would be needed. Also, one superluchas source calls him Zakarías. HHH Pedrigree (talk) 10:52, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]