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: "The conflict was sparked by the [[1947 Jammu massacres|genocidal massacres of Kashmiri Muslims]] in Jammu<ref>Snedden</ref><ref>Al Jazeera</ref>"
: "The conflict was sparked by the [[1947 Jammu massacres|genocidal massacres of Kashmiri Muslims]] in Jammu<ref>Snedden</ref><ref>Al Jazeera</ref>"
:As for the note in the infobox, I'd prefer it be removed altogether, but it can be altered to have a similar phrasing. [[User:Solblaze|Solblaze]] ([[User talk:Solblaze|talk]]) 18:11, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
:As for the note in the infobox, I'd prefer it be removed altogether, but it can be altered to have a similar phrasing. [[User:Solblaze|Solblaze]] ([[User talk:Solblaze|talk]]) 18:11, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
::It was not sparked by the "massacres" in Jammu. It is just false propaganda. -- [[User:Kautilya3|Kautilya3]] ([[User talk:Kautilya3|talk]]) 18:29, 31 March 2023 (UTC)


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Former good article nomineeIndo-Pakistani war of 1947–1948 was a Warfare good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Toolbox info is incorrect

The toolbox info is incorrect as it says that GB was annexed by Pakistan. GB was not annexed, rather it was acceded to Pakistan by the locals. According to various scholars, the people of Gilgit as well as those of Chilas, Koh Ghizr, Ishkoman, Yasin, Punial, Hunza and Nagar joined Pakistan by choice and the Gilgit scouts willingly fought alongside Pakistan and the princely state of Chitral against the Indian/Dogra occupation. I have decided to delete the toolbox with the statement that GB was annexed because that is a false statement as Gilgit and its neighboring states signed a combined instrument of accession to Pakistan on November 18th 1947. Seeing the pro-Pakistani sentiment amongst the people of Gilgit, it is baseless to call it an annexation, also the fact that the Gilgit Scouts fought alongside Pakistan proves that GB had very strong pro-Pakistani sentiments. On the other hand could the same be said about India in Kashmir Valley, Jammu and Ladakh? Did it have the favor of it's people? It was India that had annexed two thirds of Kashmir via an accession treaty signed by a despot dictator (Maharaja Singh) which was not favored by it's people. When a dictator accedes the territory that doesn't belong to him to another country without the approval of it's people, that is illegal annexation. India acted on an accession treaty signed by a despot dictator, what gives the right for one single man to decide the fate of millions? Pakistan was clearly the liberator.

See references:

Bangash, Yaqoob Khan (2010), "Three Forgotten Accessions: Gilgit, Hunza and Nagar", The Journal of Imperial and Commonwealth History, 38 (1): 117–143, doi:10.1080/03086530903538269, S2CID 159652497

Bangash, Yaqoob Khan (9 January 2016). "Gilgit-Baltistan—part of Pakistan by choice". The Express Tribune. Retrieved 5 January 2017. Nearly 70 years ago, the people of the Gilgit Wazarat revolted and joined Pakistan of their own free will, as did those belonging to the territories of Chilas, Koh Ghizr, Ishkoman, Yasin and Punial; the princely states of Hunza and Nagar also acceded to Pakistan. Hence, the time has come to acknowledge and respect their choice of being full-fledged citizens of Pakistan.

Zutshi, Chitralekha (2004). Languages of Belonging: Islam, Regional Identity, and the Making of Kashmir. C. Hurst & Co. Publishers. pp. 309–. ISBN 978-1-85065-700-2.

Mahmud, Ershad (2008), "The Gilgit-Baltistan Reforms Package 2007: Background, Phases and Analysis", Policy Perspectives, 5 (1): 23–40, JSTOR 42909184

Sokefeld, Martin (November 2005), "From Colonialism to Postcolonial Colonialism: Changing Modes of Domination in the Northern Areas of Pakistan" (PDF), The Journal of Asian Studies, 64 (4): 939–973, doi:10.1017/S0021911805002287, S2CID 161647755

Victoria Schofield, Kashmir in Conflict: India, Pakistan and the Unending War, I.B.Tauris, 2003

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 31 August 2022

Prior to May 1948, the regular Pakistan Army did not fight in the war; only irregular forces did. The infobox should mention this in such a manner:

Extended content
Indo-Pakistani War of 1947–1948
Location
{{{place}}}
Belligerents

Pakistan Pakistan

Joooshhh (talk) 18:32, 31 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. @Joooshhh - because this is a change to the infobox, it's possible there's already a reliable source cited somewhere in the article prose. If that's the case please just point me to it and WP:PING me to take a look (or leave a note on my talk page). I'll leave this open a while longer in case another editor cares to review or hunt down a source. --N8wilson 🔔 18:24, 2 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@N8wilson: Found this in the article - In May 1948, the Pakistani army officially entered the conflict, in theory to defend the Pakistan borders, but it made plans to push towards Jammu and cut the lines of communications of the Indian forces in the Mehndar Valley.[94], the cited source being Schofield, Kashmir in Conflict 2003, pp. 65–67. Re12345 (talk) 07:39, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Thanks Re12345. I'm going ahead with this change based on the reference provided above. --N8wilson 🔔 18:47, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am going to revert this edit on the grounds that, even if Pakistan troops were not deployed in Kashmir prior to May 1948, the Pakistan Army was fully involved. Here are some extracts from General Chaudhry Wajahat Hussain's talk at an ISPR-organised conference:[8]

"When Quaid-e-Azam was briefed about all this [on or around 27 October 1947], he kept quiet, General Gracey then asked his permission to draw his own plan."

"The first thing after this conversation was selection of suitable officers. officers were picked up from the army. Brigadier Akbar had served with General Gracey on the Burma front and was recommended for Victoria Cross but was awarded D.S.O. due to lack of evidence. A cell for planning on Kashmir was created in Military Operations Directorate under Brigadier Sher Khan. Similarly a branch under Adjutant General was opened which was assigned the job of selecting those officers who had been associated with Kashmir or the State forces. Such officers were sent to assist the Mujahideen and were shown as retired or absent without leave".

General Wajahat further said that "apart from planning military operations, General Messervy had a close liaison with the civil authorities. He used to come to the office at half past seven, Brigadier Sher Khan would present the report on the previous twenty four hours and get instructions for the next day. Then they would visit the operations room where consultations would continue till 10 a.m. Thereafter rest of the affairs were handled. In the evening General Gracey would visit Commissioner Rawalpindi, attired in civil clothes. Briadier Sher Khan, GOC 7 Division Major General Tottenham and a couple of other Brigadiers like Brigadier Azam Khan or Brigadier Akbar used to be present. The deliberations would continue till late at night. Every second or third day General Gracey used to submit the progress report to Prime Minister Liaquat Ali Khan who himself used to come once or twice a week, accompanied by Secretary General Mohammad Ali. Once in a fortnight or so Defence Secretary Colonel Sikandar Mirza would pay a visit".

-- Kautilya3 (talk) 17:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the explanation Kautilya3. Working only with the prose of this article leads me to believe the May date is simply the nominal/official entry but not necessarily the first involvement of any form. In IB discussions such as this I tend to lean toward pruning information out so that readers in search of finer or more nuanced details must rely on the prose anyway. That is to say, I'm fine with this revert and appreciate the added context you've provided here. --N8wilson 🔔 22:26, 13 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kautilya3: and @N8wilson: - That's proxy warfare, not direct involvement of Pakistani troops. For example, we don't say that the Pakistan Army was directly at war with the Soviet union in Afghanistan - we say that they supported the Mujahideen - even though, like this war, Pakistani officers were coordinating many attacks with the mujahideen, including raids into Soviet territory. But after May 1948, regular Pakistani foot soldiers directly entered Kashmir and began fighting their Indian counterparts.
A more appropriate way to represent this would be to indicate that til 1948, the AJK irregulars were supported by Pakistanis - but it was not until after this date that the regular Pakistan Army itself entered Kashmir. Please refer to this infobox -
Indo-Pakistani War of 1947–1948
Location
{{{place}}}
Belligerents

Pakistan Pakistan

Supported by:

Re12345 (talk) 06:01, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]


It was clandestine warfare, not just proxy warfare. The Army was involved in many ways, directly on the ground, even before its official declaration. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 14:34, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sending officers to coordinate and plan attacks (supporting) is very different from sending 10s of thousands of regular troops to fight (direct belligerent). Re12345 (talk) 15:53, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Bangash, Three Forgotten Accessions 2010
  2. ^ Khanna, K. K. (2015), Art of Generalship, Vij Books India Pvt Ltd, p. 158, ISBN 978-93-82652-93-9
  3. ^ a b c Jamal, Shadow War 2009, p. 57.
  4. ^ Robert Blackwill; James Dobbins; Michael O'Hanlon; Clare Lockhart; Nathaniel Fick; Molly Kinder; Andrew Erdmann; John Dowdy; Samina Ahmed; Anja Manuel; Meghan O'Sullivan; Nancy Birdsall; Wren Elhai (2011). Nicholas Burns; Jonathon Price (eds.). American Interests in South Asia: Building a Grand Strategy in Afghanistan, Pakistan, and India. Aspen Institute. pp. 155–. ISBN 978-1-61792-400-2. Retrieved 3 November 2011.
  5. ^ Jamal, Shadow War 2009, p. 49.
  6. ^ Valentine, Simon Ross (2008). Islam and the Ahmadiyya Jama'at: History, Belief, Practice. Hurst Publishers. p. 204. ISBN 978-1-85065-916-7.
  7. ^ "Furqan Force". Persecution.org. Archived from the original on 2 June 2012. Retrieved 14 March 2012.
  8. ^ "Failures and Successes of Kashmir War: Muzaffarabad Seminar - 27 November, 1990", Defence and Media 1991, Inter Services Public Relations, Pakistan, 1991, pp. 114–125

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 12 November 2022

Please re-add the campaignbox. Re12345 (talk) 07:42, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 Already done Has {{Campaignbox Indo-Pakistani Wars}} for a long time ಮಲ್ನಾಡಾಚ್ ಕೊಂಕ್ಣೊ (talk) 13:08, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@ಮಲ್ನಾಡಾಚ್ ಕೊಂಕ್ಣೊ: I meant this particular war's box which included the various battles of the war (Skardu etc) Re12345 (talk) 05:33, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

1947 mirpur massacre leads to a different event. 2A02:A44D:E8B0:1:258D:6D40:804E:C29 (talk) 11:26, 26 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox info

@Kautilya3: Your edit reverted more than just infobox edits. Why Indian gain (which is bigger) shouldn't be entered first? Not to mention that India is described as the victor of this war by many sources. Abhishek0831996 (talk) 16:49, 23 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I reverted the edit because you replaced the existing precise wording (one-third and two-thirds) with wooly wording like "most of Kashmir". You did this in both the infobox and the body. Yes?
As to which country should go first and which should go second, we don't want to engage in enormous hair-splitting. The question doesn't interest me. (We write Wikipedia for literate readers, who read and try to understand the substance, not verbal gimmicry.) But I don't want to see to-ing and fro-ing between the sides. So unless there is a strong reason for change, for which WP:CONSENSUS can be obtained, the STATUSQUO should remain. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 19:09, 23 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Most of Kashmir" is the right way to define it because "Kashmir" also includes Aksai Chin and Pakistan or India never fought a battle in Aksai Chin or had any control there.
The current wording is more dubious than you think. It is "Pakistan controls roughly a third of", "whereas India controls the rest".
In line with your message on above section, it seems that Pakistan army was "fully involved" in this conflict before Indian army attacked Kashmir.
In this sense, I am wondering how "Pakistan controls roughly a third" would be relevant. It lost control over most of Kashmir. At best it can say "Pakistan retains control over area what came to be known as Gilgit-Baltistan and Azad Kashmir, while "India gains control over most of Kashmir" which is still a reality.
Infobox needs to be also clear about Indian victory since many reliable sources say so. Abhishek0831996 (talk) 03:29, 24 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
See WP:NOTAFORUM and WP:NOOR. You need to provide multple high-quality reliable sources for whatever wording you want to propose and argue that that is how the majority of RS describe the result. - Kautilya3 (talk) 09:24, 24 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
We can discuss the result later but first we need to resolve the issue over "most of Kashmir". See what sources say:
Abhishek0831996 (talk) 10:58, 24 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I am afraid you didn't process what I said. So here it is again. Point 1: You cannot replace precise wording in the the infobox by vauge wording. (This is independent of whatever sources you have produced). Point 2: For any other changes, you need to state the change you want made and back it up with RS. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 12:05, 24 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Above sources are enough for supporting my original wording: "Most of Kashmir fell to Indian control, while Pakistan gains one-third of the region." This is what I am still proposing. Abhishek0831996 (talk) 09:50, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Two-thirds" was apparently changed to "most of" in this edit without any source. It was probably a misguided copy-edit.
None of your sources sway me. None of them are specialists in Kashmir and it is doubtful if they even know what "Kashmir" means. The last source is a Master's thesis. The first source is a constitutional lawyer from the 1950s. You will find many dubious statements and claims in them. If "Kashmir" is supposed to mean the Kashmir Valley, then "most of Kashmir" would be wrong since India has all of Kashmir. If they mean the Kashmir Division (which was called "Kashmir province" in 1947), then it would be true. If they mean the whole of the Kashmir region, then it would be wrong again. It is perfectly normal for non-specialist authors to pick up tidbits from here and there and regurgitate them without understanding what they mean. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 01:19, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No those sources are reliable enough for the information. What actually your preferred "specialists in Kashmir" say? Can you recall them? Abhishek0831996 (talk) 08:32, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I have no nationalistic iron in this fire. I have made an edit that tends to follow that by Abhishek0831996. Per WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE, we don't write the article in the infobox. It should be an at a glance summary. It is not a place for intricate detail. Detail belongs in the body of the article and perhaps in the lead. I have edited the territory parameter to read: One-third of Kashmir controlled by Pakistan. Indian control over remainder[1][2] IMHO, this is a summary that best conforms to WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE. To the result, I believe that this has been flogged to death, resuscitated and flogged to death again. It is an ex parrot. Neither side got what they wanted. Both sides got something before the UN stepped in. Per MOS:MIL an appropriate result would be the see aftermath section option - the nearest existing section being the Moves up to cease-fire section but that isn't great. The alternative is to omit the result parameter. IMHO, the status quo (United Nations-mediated ceasefire) is a reasonable WP:IAR alternative to the guidance at MOS:MIL. However, the dot-points that follow are intricate detail and I have removed these as being inconsistent with WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE and usage of the result parameter per MOS:MIL. I would suggest that the article could be improved by expanding detail on the cease-fire and aftermath that would address some of the detail mentioned. I have retitled two sections as a start. Cinderella157 (talk) 13:37, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Cinderella157: Thanks for improvements but there is more. There are three Kashmirs. One that is controlled by India, another that is controlled by Pakistan and the last one is Aksai Chin which was never controlled by either countries. Sources I mentioned above say "most of Kashmir" falling into Indian hands instead of "rest of Kashmir" or "remainder of Kashmir", because they know about Aksai Chin. Can you discuss this issue and change the wording? Thanks. Abhishek0831996 (talk) 16:34, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Which source has mentioned Aksai Chin in the context of this conflict? -- Kautilya3 (talk) 17:03, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
What Kautilya3 has asked. This appears to me to be splitting hairs and a non-starter. If there is any substance to this, it should be supported by the article in the first instance. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:30, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Cinderella157: But this question does not make sense because India established "control over the Kashmir valley and most parts of Jammu and Ladakh before a UN-sponsored ceasefire."[1] "Aksai Chin" (part of Kashmir) is not on the list. That's why we cannot describe "remainder" or "rest of Kashmir" falling in Indian control. It gives false impression that Aksai Chin was also a part of this battle because it comes under Kashmir but in actual it was not a part of this battle and was not controlled by Pakistan or India. Abhishek0831996 (talk) 08:32, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
If you are making assertions about what sources do or do not mean, it is perfectly reasonable to ask for verification. The relative areas are defined by the UN cease-fire per this map. I have change the description in the territory parameter to read One-third of Jammu and Kashmir controlled by Pakistan. Indian control over remainder, since the war was fought over the principality. Kautilya3, do you see any issue with this? Cinderella157 (talk) 10:52, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Cinderalla157. That is the right thing to say. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 11:15, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Cinderalla157: But Kautilya3 changed here changed the earlier text to "successfully defended the majority of the contested territory"(emphasis mine). So why infobox cannot say the same? I would support modifying the current wording to "One-third of Kashmir controlled by Pakistan. Indian control over the majority of territory". Abhishek0831996 (talk) 17:10, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The aftermath section is under construction. I think we let this gestate for a while before making a change to the infobox. Cinderella157 (talk) 22:33, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Ciment, J.; Hill, K. (2012). Encyclopedia of Conflicts since World War II. Encyclopedia of Conflicts Since World War II. Taylor & Francis. p. 721. ISBN 978-1-136-59614-8. Indian forces won control of most of Kashmir
  2. ^ "BBC on the 1947–48 war". Archived from the original on 30 January 2015. Retrieved 30 January 2015.

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request: Jammu massacres

This article should mention in the lead and background section that Hari Singh slaughtered 100,000+ Kashmiri Muslims in "revenge" for their dissent[1] and to change the demographics of the region[2][3][4], which fueled the violence that Pakistan would take advantage of.[5][6] Solblaze (talk) 10:08, 21 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please state you request as "change x to y". Cinderella157 (talk) 11:58, 21 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done. The sources don't say what you claim (except I haven't checked Al Jazeera, which is a newspaper op-ed, not a reliable source for history. Neither is it clear that the so-called massacres took place before the invasion. And they are not part of the war in any case. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 20:53, 21 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
But Snedden (2001) outright says The tale of a massacre of Muslims caused a chain of events that produced the Kashmir dispute my bad on not copying this quote properly initially - the text was not copy paste-able
Al-Jazeera is not an op-ed, it's published in the news section, not the opinion section. It also attributes the article's contents to Al-Jazeera itself at the bottom of the page. And although HISTRS is not a Wikipedia policy page and its guidelines aren't set in stone, I couldn't find any mention of newspapers being considered unreliable - it simply says when available, scholarly sources are preferred.
In fact, it states This essay doesn't mean to imply that reliable non-scholarly sources are inappropriate or insufficient just because scholarly sources are available or potentially available. Finding and using scholarly sources is a best practice, not a requirement. Solblaze (talk) 06:32, 22 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Kautilya3 I'm assuming you have no objection to Snedden? Solblaze (talk) 22:49, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I may or I may not. It depends on what you want to say based on it. Note that Snedden's book considered quite biased in India.[2][3] Morever, it is now known pretty conclusively that the Pakisani invasion of Kashmir was decided on 12 September. There was pretty much no violence in Jammu on that date, "massacre" or otherwise. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 23:42, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copying below a couple of timeline entries from the Timeline of the Kashmir conflict:

  • 19 September 1947 (1947-09-19): The Muslim Conference acting president Choudhri Hamidullah and general secretary Ishaque Qureshi were summoned by Pakistani prime minister Liaquat Ali Khan and briefed about Pakistan's invasion plans.[7]
  • 14 October 1947 (1947-10-14): Some activists of the Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh and the Akalis mounted attacks on villages of the Jammu district, which killed Muslims and set houses on fire,[8] stated to be the beginning of the 1947 Jammu violence.[9]

-- Kautilya3 (talk) 01:40, 26 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This feels a bit WP:SYNTHy. Solblaze (talk) 18:01, 31 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Kautilya3 A way to phrase this in the lead would be
"The conflict was sparked by the genocidal massacres of Kashmiri Muslims in Jammu[10][11]"
As for the note in the infobox, I'd prefer it be removed altogether, but it can be altered to have a similar phrasing. Solblaze (talk) 18:11, 31 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It was not sparked by the "massacres" in Jammu. It is just false propaganda. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 18:29, 31 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ State, Community and Neighbourhood in Princely North India, c. 1900–1950 By I. Copland. Palgrave Macmillan. 2005. p. 143. ISBN 9780230005983.
  2. ^ Ved Bhasin (17 November 2015). "Jammu 1947". Kashmir Life. Retrieved 4 June 2017.
  3. ^ Chattha, Partition and its Aftermath 2009, p. 179, 183.
  4. ^ Cite error: The named reference Noorani2 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  5. ^ Chattha, Partition and its Aftermath 2009, p. 179.
  6. ^ Noorani, A.G. (25 February 2012). "Horrors of Partition". Frontline. Vol. 29, no. 4.
  7. ^ Khan, Aamer Ahmed (1994), "Look Back in Anger", The Herald, Volume 25, Pakistan Herald Publications, p. 54: 'Once past Kahuta, the two leaders were apparently whisked away to Liaquat Ali Khan by military personnel. The meeting was a hush-hush affair, attended by Sardar Shaukat Hayat, Mian Iftikharuddin, Khan Abdul Qayyum Khan and General Sher Khan besides some other officers. "We were told about the plan to attack Kashmir. Liaquat Ali Khan said that it would all be over within hours. The Frontier government was to mastermind the attack from Garhi Abdullah while the Punjab government would control the attack from Kahuta to Jammu."'
  8. ^ Puri, Across the Line of Control (2013), pp. 25–26.
  9. ^ Talbot, Pakistan: A Modern History (1998), p. 116, footnote 90..
  10. ^ Snedden
  11. ^ Al Jazeera