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Actually the source is worthless, we don't use wikis as sources in articles. --[[User:Cameron Scott|Cameron Scott]] ([[User talk:Cameron Scott|talk]]) 15:12, 1 May 2009 (UTC) |
Actually the source is worthless, we don't use wikis as sources in articles. --[[User:Cameron Scott|Cameron Scott]] ([[User talk:Cameron Scott|talk]]) 15:12, 1 May 2009 (UTC) |
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In this case see the sources |
In this case see the sources on wikinews. I'm a little surprised, never thought that wiki is blacklisting wiki. This is weird. [[User:Multiplyperfect|Multiplyperfect]] ([[User talk:Multiplyperfect|talk]]) 15:14, 1 May 2009 (UTC) |
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Frequently asked questions
Family and religious background Q1: Why isn't Barack Obama's Muslim heritage or education included in this article?
A1: Barack Obama was never a practitioner of Islam. His biological father having been "raised as a Muslim" but being a "confirmed atheist" by the time Obama was born is mentioned in the article. Please see this article on Snopes.com for a fairly in-depth debunking of the myth that Obama is Muslim. Barack Obama did not attend an Islamic or Muslim school while living in Indonesia age 6–10, but Roman Catholic and secular public schools. See [1], [2], [3] The sub-articles Public image of Barack Obama and Barack Obama religion conspiracy theories address this issue. Q2: The article refers to him as African American, but his mother is white and his black father was not an American. Should he be called African American, or something else ("biracial", "mixed", "Kenyan-American", "mulatto", "quadroon", etc.)?
A2: Obama himself and the media identify him, the vast majority of the time, as African American or black. African American is primarily defined as "citizens or residents of the United States who have origins in any of the black populations of Africa", a statement that accurately describes Obama and does not preclude or negate origins in the white populations of America as well. Thus we use the term African American in the introduction, and address the specifics of his parentage in the first headed section of the article. Many individuals who identify as black have varieties of ancestors from many countries who may identify with other racial or ethnic groups. See our article on race for more information on this concept. We could call him the first "biracial" candidate or the first "half black half white" candidate or the first candidate with a parent born in Africa, but Wikipedia is a tertiary source which reports what other reliable sources say, and most of those other sources say "first African American". Readers will learn more detail about his ethnic background in the article body. Q3: Why can't we use his full name outside of the lead? It's his name, isn't it?
A3: The relevant part of the Manual of Style says that outside the lead of an article on a person, that person's conventional name is the only one that's appropriate. (Thus one use of "Richard Milhous Nixon" in the lead of Richard Nixon, "Richard Nixon" thereafter.) Talk page consensus has also established this. Q4: Why is Obama referred to as "Barack Hussein Obama II" in the lead sentence rather than "Barack Hussein Obama, Jr."? Isn't "Jr." more common?
A4: Although "Jr." is typically used when a child shares the name of his or her parent, "II" is considered acceptable, as well. And in Obama's case, the usage on his birth certificate is indeed "II", and is thus the form used at the beginning of this article, per manual of style guidelines on names. Q5: Why don't we cover the claims that Obama is not a United States citizen, his birth certificate was forged, he was not born in Hawaii, he is ineligible to be President, etc?
A5: The Barack Obama article consists of an overview of major issues in the life and times of the subject. The controversy over his eligibility, citizenship, birth certificate etc is currently a fairly minor issue in overall terms, and has had no significant legal or mainstream political impact. It is therefore not currently appropriate for inclusion in an overview article. These claims are covered separately in Barack Obama citizenship conspiracy theories. Controversies, praise, and criticism Q6: Why isn't there a criticisms/controversies section?
A6: Because a section dedicated to criticisms and controversies is no more appropriate than a section dedicated solely to praise and is an indication of a poorly written article. Criticisms/controversies/praises should be worked into the existing prose of the article, per the Criticism essay. Q7: Why isn't a certain controversy/criticism/praise included in this article?
A7: Wikipedia's Biography of living persons policy says that "[c]riticism and praise of the subject should be represented if it is relevant to the subject's notability and can be sourced to reliable secondary sources, and so long as the material is written in a manner that does not overwhelm the article or appear to take sides; it needs to be presented responsibly, conservatively, and in a neutral, encyclopedic tone." Criticism or praise that cannot be reliably sourced cannot be placed in a biography. Also, including everything about Obama in a single article would exceed Wikipedia's article size restrictions. A number of sub-articles have been created and some controversies/criticisms/praises have been summarized here or been left out of this article altogether, but are covered in some detail in the sub-articles. Q8: But this controversy/criticism/praise is all over the news right now! It should be covered in detail in the main article, not buried in a sub-article!
A8: Wikipedia articles should avoid giving undue weight to something just because it is in the news right now. If you feel that the criticism/controversy/praise is not being given enough weight in this article, you can try to start a discussion on the talk page about giving it more. See WP:BRD. Q9: This article needs much more (or much less) criticism/controversy.
A9: Please try to assume good faith. Like all articles on Wikipedia, this article is a work in progress so it is possible for biases to exist at any point in time. If you see a bias that you wish to address, you are more than welcome to start a new discussion, or join in an existing discussion, but please be ready to provide sources to support your viewpoint and try to keep your comments civil. Starting off your discussion by accusing the editors of this article of having a bias is the quickest way to get your comment ignored. Talk and article mechanics Q10: This article is over 275kb long, and the article size guideline says that it should be broken up into sub-articles. Why hasn't this happened?
A10: The restriction mentioned in WP:SIZE is 60kB of readable prose, not the byte count you see when you open the page for editing. As of May 11, 2016, this article had about 10,570 words of readable prose (65 kB according to prosesize tool), only slightly above the guideline. The rest is mainly citations and invisible comments, which do not count towards the limit. Q11: I notice this FAQ mentions starting discussions or joining in on existing discussions a lot. If Wikipedia is supposed to be the encyclopedia anyone can edit, shouldn't I just be bold and fix any biases that I see in the article?
A11: It is true that Wikipedia is the encyclopedia that anyone can edit and no one needs the permission of other editors of this article to make changes to it. But Wikipedia policy is that, "While the consensus process does not require posting to the discussion page, it can be useful and is encouraged." This article attracts editors that have very strong opinions about Obama (positive and negative) and these editors have different opinions about what should and should not be in the article, including differences as to appropriate level of detail. As a result of this it may be helpful, as a way to avoid content disputes, to seek consensus before adding contentious material to or removing it from the article. Q12: The article/talk page has been vandalized! Why hasn't anyone fixed this?
A12: Many editors watch this article, and it is unlikely that vandalism would remain unnoticed for long. It is possible that you are viewing a cached result of the article; If so, try bypassing your cache. Q13: Why are so many discussions closed so quickly?
A13: Swift closure is common for topics that have already been discussed repeatedly, topics pushing fringe theories, and topics that would lead to violations of Wikipedia's policy concerning biographies of living persons, because of their disruptive nature and the unlikelihood that consensus to include the material will arise from the new discussion. In those cases, editors are encouraged to read this FAQ for examples of such common topics. Q14: I added new content to the article, but it was removed!
A14: Double-check that your content addition is not sourced to an opinion blog, editorial, or non-mainstream news source. Wikipedia's policy on biographies of living persons states, in part, "Material about living persons must be sourced very carefully. Without reliable third-party sources, it may include original research and unverifiable statements, and could lead to libel claims." Sources of information must be of a very high quality for biographies. While this does not result in an outright ban of all blogs and opinion pieces, most of them are regarded as questionable. Inflammatory or potentially libelous content cited to a questionable source will be removed immediately without discussion. Q15: I disagree with the policies and content guidelines that prevent my proposed content from being added to the article.
A15: That's understandable. Wikipedia is a work in progress. If you do not approve of a policy cited in the removal of content, it's possible to change it. Making cogent, logical arguments on the policy's talk page is likely to result in a positive alteration. This is highly encouraged. However, this talk page is not the appropriate place to dispute the wording used in policies and guidelines. If you disagree with the interpretation of a policy or guideline, there is also recourse: Dispute resolution. Using the dispute resolution process prevents edit wars, and is encouraged. Q16: I saw someone start a discussion on a topic raised by a blog/opinion piece, and it was reverted!
A16: Unfortunately, due to its high profile, this talk page sees a lot of attempts to argue for policy- and guideline-violating content – sometimes the same violations many times a day. These are regarded as disruptive, as outlined above. Consensus can change; material previously determined to be unacceptable may become acceptable. But it becomes disruptive and exhausting when single-purpose accounts raise the same subject(s) repeatedly in the apparent hopes of overcoming significant objections by other editors. Editors have reached a consensus for dealing with this behavior:
Other Q17: Why aren't the 2008 and 2012 presidential campaigns covered in more detail?
A17: They are, in sub-articles called Barack Obama 2008 presidential campaign and Barack Obama 2012 presidential campaign. Things that are notable in the context of the presidential campaigns, but are of minimal notability to Barack Obama's overall biography, belong in the sub-articles. Campaign stops, the presidential debates, and the back-and-forth accusations and claims of the campaigns can all be found there. |
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Redundant discussions
In case anyone is wondering if they have an original comment about one of the frequently-discussed issues for this article, here is a list of discussions at length which have taken place just in the past couple of months.
Race
- Talk:Barack Obama/race
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 47#Barack Obama is half-white
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 46#Ethnicity in first sentence
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 46#Media coverage of ethnicity controversy and the intro
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 46#Mulatto, the term is Mullato
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 44#He's Multi-Racial.
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 43#Obama and race
Religion
Citizenship
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 46#Supreme Court Controversy
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 45#Still no mention on the birth certificate?
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 45#Donofrio v. Wells
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 44#Unverified Birth Hospital Needs Revision and Reference
Full name
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 46#Article Name
- Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 44#Barack Hussein Obama JR, not II
Give this some consideration before deciding to start another one. Bigbluefish (talk) 14:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
Please skim this page first (and ideally the FAQ) before starting a new discussion about Obama's birthplace, citizenship, race/ethnicity, etc. You'll probably find there's already a section there where you can add your comments. Thanks, Wikidemon (talk) 00:09, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
If you want to read about where Obama was born and have concerns about it, read Barack Obama citizenship conspiracy theories#Citizenship facts, rumors and claims and in particular this source which is heavily utilized in the article.
- Where is the archive on Ayers? 68.5.11.175 (talk) 19:42, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- Should we select one from this list? ↜Just me, here, now … 19:56, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- Any of those should do. I do wonder why the Ayers topic is not included in the "Discussions". Admins getting censor happy?Miker789 (talk) 02:18, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
- Did you miss the whole WND invasion? They spammed the page and we even got mentioned on Drudge and Fox News for having "whitewashed" the article. Soxwon (talk) 02:22, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
- Where did the discussion on Teleprompters go? I don't believe that was finalized.Miker789 (talk) 02:22, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
What were you doing when Kennedy died?
US Presidents are remembered for having been the first born since the civil war, first born in the 20th century, first that didn't serve in WW2 and so on. Those of us beyond a certain age, 50 something, all know what we were doing the day JFK was assassinated. Obama was 2 years old then so he must be the first US President who is not in the group who remember what they were doing when those bullets were fired. I have been surprised over the years to run into folks who were too young to remember that event, but he is the first US President who falls into that category. --KenWalker | Talk 06:26, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I suppose that's true, but personally I don't really see this as something worth including in the article. Referring to Obama as the first president who doesn't remember Kennedy's death is a bit arbitrary even though that was obviously an important moment in time in American history (then again so was Bobby Kennedy's death and Martin Luther King's, and presumably he has some recollection of those). I think it's more common to hear Obama described as the first post-baby boom president (though I guess he's at the tail end of that group), or the first post-WWII president who did not come of age during (or at least live through) the cultural battles of the 1960s and early 1970s. Or the first "post-civil rights" president if we want to put it that way. I'm not sure we need any of these descriptors in this article, but I think the ones I just mentioned are probably much more heavily referenced in secondary sources than the idea that he's the first president who was too young to remember JFK's death. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 09:36, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- And Kennedy couldn't remember the shooting of the Archduke. So what? Welcome to the concept of 'time'. Not notable at all.ThuranX (talk) 06:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think that what Ken perhaps had in mind was the idea that Obama represents a generational shift in the presidency. Our article on Bill Clinton notes in the intro that "he became president at the end of the Cold War, and as he was born in the period after World War II, is known as the first Baby Boomer president." Obama is arguably the first post-baby boomer president (or something like that), and one way to say this would be to point to the fact that he did not remember a significant event like JFK's death. I don't think it's at all appropriate to put that in the article as I said (perhaps eventually something about his generational significance could be noted), but I also don't think anyone here needed to be reminded about the concept of time. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 06:55, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- And Kennedy couldn't remember the shooting of the Archduke. So what? Welcome to the concept of 'time'. Not notable at all.ThuranX (talk) 06:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Bigtimepeace's comments and have had ample opportunity to become familiar with the concept of time, although reminders are useful. The Kennedy reference is only to point out that he is of a different generation than his predecessor. I agree that not remembering the assassination of Ferdinand is not relevant this article (for the record, I don't remember that event either) but the change of generation is relevant amongst the various other changes he represents. --KenWalker | Talk 23:47, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think this is something we can just bear in mind, and if at some point it seems obvious that Obama is being referred to as the first president of the _____ generation (hey - they should make a song about that!) or of the post-______ era (i.e. in some generational sense) then that would warrant inclusion. I'm just not sure that there's anything approaching agreement on that right now. Perhaps there never will be, and if different terms are used to describe a generational shift in Obama's presidency maybe those could be briefly discussed at Presidency of Barack Obama. It's probably best to wait awhile (maybe even a few years) and see how this whole presidency thing unfolds, but it's definitely worth thinking about. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 00:15, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
First Hundred Days
Obama hits his 100th day in office next Wednesday. As I've suggested previously on this talk page, I think the conclusion of the first hundred days will provide a good opportunity to expand/revise our current section on the presidency. Right now we don't talk about anything that's happened in his presidency since late February, and while of course we are not a newspaper, I think some stuff has gone down in the last couple of months that is worth discussing in this the main bio article (I mentioned a couple of suggestions in this now archived thread). We obviously have to make decisions about when and how to expand the presidency section over time - it will necessarily take up more of this article as we get deeper into Obama's term - and I think we're getting to a point where some (fairly small) expansion is necessary.
I don't think we need to necessarily frame whatever is added in terms of the First Hundred Days - there is some truth to the idea that it's an arbitrary point at which to evaluate the administration (though given the constant comparisons between Obama's situation and FDR's, it's rather more historically resonant than basically any administration since WWII). The only reason I think it's good for us to rethink the presidency section right now is that we're about to see (indeed are already seeing) a slew of articles in reliable secondary sources that will evaluate the presidency up to this point. Arbitrary or not, this is seen by secondary sources as a milestone. They'll consider the most important legislation, foreign trips, popularity, criticism and support for Obama's policies, etc. In addition to probably importing/summarizing some material from Presidency of Barack Obama and First 100 days of Barack Obama's presidency (though I'm not sure the latter is, right now at least, all that useful in that regard), I think we can get a good sense of what's receiving the most coverage in secondary sources by culling through a number of these "let's-sum-up-the-first-hundred-days" type pieces. It might make more sense to revise Presidency of Barack Obama first, though I still think it's worth it to discuss the overall approach here.
Any thoughts? Does this strike others as a good time to grow the presidency section a little bit? Also note that I don't at all think we need to/should have this done by the hundred day mark, indeed we would probably want to wait until that passed before making significant revisions. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 10:08, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- And one other thing, which perhaps has been mentioned previously, but the "political positions" section really needs to be reworked. Essentially all of it precedes his election and time in office. I think we'd want to keep a good amount of that, but we'll also want to start to show how his positions evolved (or stayed basically the same) after he took office. That's probably a rather tall order and it probably makes sense to work on that somewhat separate from the section on his presidency (though I suppose it's actual possible it could be easier to work on them in tandem), but I just wanted to throw this out there as well. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 10:24, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am in complete agreement. Sufficient time has passed, with some of the new legislation and executive decisions having a chance to "bite", to begin thinking in terms of "historical perspective". I'm sure there will be a wealth of material referencing the first 100 from the mainstream media in the coming few days. Regarding your second point, there is a similar discussion going on at Political positions of Barack Obama; an enormous article in dire need of an overhaul. Since the "political positions" section of this article is meant (to a large extent) to summarize the sub-article, work on improving this section should happen in tandem with that. WP:OBAMA is certainly a gigantinormous project! -- Scjessey (talk) 15:13, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
I support a small expansion of the Presidency section, importantly adding the car company bailout and the concern over the expansion of Taliban influence in Pakistan. (The Taliban expansion part undoubtedly will need revision as developments develop.) Maybe including his foreign trip, though its effects look minor at the moment and the most notable element was his popularity, which if commented upon is likely to start edit wars. I strongly support not having a "first 100 days" heading. Eventually the Presidency section should go back to having subsections, probably Foreign and Domestic initially, but eventually Economic, Domestic, Foreign Policy, and War Policy. (I was part of the elimination of this breakdown earlier, since the section was too small (and probably still will be for another 6 months).) We need to resist a large expansion at this time-- the Presidency section ideally would grow gradually as his presidency takes form. I'd like to lobby now for avoiding a strict chronological approach in the section. The edit warring is less if we just list events and actions in chronological order, but it's more informative if organized topically. Regarding "political positions", it might be better to wait until the fur settles down over the Presidency section expansion. CouldOughta (talk) 15:30, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- "War policy" seems like it should be part of "foreign policy" if we are going to talk about recreating sections. Also, I was not aware that America had declared war on any nation. Did I miss something important? -- Scjessey (talk) 15:42, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- You really need to check your tone, Scjessey. He didn't say anything about the United States declaring war on anyone; more likely, he was talking about the reshuffling of troops from one theater of operations to another ie Iraq to Afghanistan. If you can't participate without being snarky, I suggest you you're in the wrong place. Ikilled007 (talk) 17:50, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I was making a valid point that you cannot have a "war policy" when you aren't actually at war. No snarkiness was intended, and may I respectfully suggest that it is you who needs to "check your tone" and discuss the article, not the editors. This puts your comment in the proper perspective. -- Scjessey (talk) 18:02, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- The US is at war. That's what its government says. It's "the war against terror" (it sounds nutty to me, but I'm not the government). Or rather less nuttily, a war against Al-Qaida. And the duck test: The US kills other people and destroys stuff, and those nationals kill people and destroy stuff: yes, it looks like war, smells like war, generates body-bags like war. Even if the recently departed Potus didn't actually ask for any sacrifices from those not at war, so in some ways it doesn't seem like war at all. Certainly it brings on snooping and government violations of the Constitution like war. The US does this without declaring war, because declaring war irritatingly starts to democratize the decision or even hinder it. Whether or not the previous administration had any policy for its war, I'd hope that the new one does. -- Hoary (talk) 10:23, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I was making a valid point that you cannot have a "war policy" when you aren't actually at war. No snarkiness was intended, and may I respectfully suggest that it is you who needs to "check your tone" and discuss the article, not the editors. This puts your comment in the proper perspective. -- Scjessey (talk) 18:02, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- You really need to check your tone, Scjessey. He didn't say anything about the United States declaring war on anyone; more likely, he was talking about the reshuffling of troops from one theater of operations to another ie Iraq to Afghanistan. If you can't participate without being snarky, I suggest you you're in the wrong place. Ikilled007 (talk) 17:50, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I agree that war is mostly foreign policy; the four headings suggested just seemed like appropriate divisions. If we use "Military Policy" instead, the topic also would include the Defense Secretary's proposed changes to military spending, which might be a nice way to organize the summary.CouldOughta (talk) 00:32, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Both Scjessey and Ikilled007 need to comment on content, not other editors. Too many discussion get sidetracked when folks start attacking each other and that really needs to stop completely, particularly from veteran editors of this page. I don't think we need to have a "war policy vs. foreign policy" debate about sub sections at this time, since I don't think anyone is proposing that we split the presidency section into sub-sections just yet. We can cross that bridge when we come to it. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 00:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Record !! During this first 100 days the Obama 44 Admin has spent (at least had authorized, some yet to be spent) more money/funds than all governments on earth since the earth began, clearly a reocrd; but some feel this massive, resulting new USA debt (5 trillion from Obama44 and 2-3 trillion from Bush43) has already broken the back of the USA ultimately bankrupting it and so destroying the most successfull country in global history. added in this edit by some IP
- There are so many facts to write up that Wikipedia in general and certainly this article in particular can safely skip writing up what some unspecified people "feel". -- Hoary (talk) 12:32, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Record !! During this first 100 days the Obama 44 Admin has spent (at least had authorized, some yet to be spent) more money/funds than all governments on earth since the earth began, clearly a reocrd; but some feel this massive, resulting new USA debt (5 trillion from Obama44 and 2-3 trillion from Bush43) has already broken the back of the USA ultimately bankrupting it and so destroying the most successfull country in global history. added in this edit by some IP
How about adding these two words to this sentence?
The article contains this sentence, except for the two bolded words. I propose that these two words be added:
The bill included increased federal borrowing and spending, aid to states, and tax reductions.
Grundle2600 (talk) 00:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Seems like an improvement to me; the borrowing is significant. Go for it, see if anyone fights. CouldOughta (talk) 00:34, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks! I'm waiting for a consensus before I add it. Grundle2600 (talk) 01:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure either way, but did the bill itself actual include "increased federal borrowing?" That is, was the limit on what the government can borrow explicitly raised as part of the bill, or did the bill say "this will be paid for by borrowing x dollars, which is an increase?" If not I don't think we can word it like this. Certainly the government will have to borrow more in order to pay for this and other expenses, but that's not exactly what the above sentence says. If increased borrowing was part of the stimulus bill we would need a source that says that. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 00:49, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- The sentence says they cut taxes. If they cut taxes and increased spending, then where did the increased spending come from? Grundle2600 (talk) 01:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- This response sounds like original research to me. Tvoz/talk 02:09, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Grundle if you find a couple reliable sources about the increased borrowing, I think we should be able to work out an NPOV way to include it. As you've pointed out, the stimulus package requires a lot of borrowing. Clearly, the deficit is also related to the economic slowdown, so maybe Tvoz can suggest wording that is NPOV and gives appropriate context? ChildofMidnight (talk) 03:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I have no problem with the sentence as it is presently worded, so no thanks. Tvoz/talk 03:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- It doesn't clarify anything, and the problem isn't sourcing. It's a truism that deficit = spending - revenues. There are some complexities like budget estimates, off-budget spending, accounting games, printing money, etc., and all of those are political truisms as well. It does not add to anyone's understanding of things to include an aside, at every turn, that increased spending without increasing revenues requires borrowing. That is a partisan rhetorical flourish - if Obama proposes to spend money it means more borrowing, which means blame Obama for something. Wikidemon (talk) 04:14, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Is it really so simple? The latest issue of Reason magazine says outright by any measure of funding, the general public's reliance upon government will increase with the next budget. Ottre 11:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I also want to chime in that the way the sentence is currently written is NPOV and fine. The addition of the two words is in the assumption that there will be borrowing. (Because there is no RS source that says that borrowing has taken place specifically to aid this bill.) This same assumption is also behind the tax day tea parties, that while right now the taxes are being lowered for 95% of the population, the assumption is that sooner or later they will have to be raised again to cover all this spending. The issue here is that there is a big debate between economists whether this is going to happen. Not surprisingly the two sides of this economics debate is also the same two political sides too. Simply put, this is a debate over assumptions and future predictions. If way down the road, Obama does raise taxes, has to barrow money to cover this bill, or someone else, then we can include that. However, to include any derivation of this assumption boils down to synthesis and original research. Brothejr (talk) 12:52, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry, Ottre, if ever a statement smacked of panic generation for sake of sales and drama, Reason's statement is it. That's simply a libertarian fear tactic. ThuranX (talk) 13:10, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Is it really so simple? The latest issue of Reason magazine says outright by any measure of funding, the general public's reliance upon government will increase with the next budget. Ottre 11:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- It doesn't clarify anything, and the problem isn't sourcing. It's a truism that deficit = spending - revenues. There are some complexities like budget estimates, off-budget spending, accounting games, printing money, etc., and all of those are political truisms as well. It does not add to anyone's understanding of things to include an aside, at every turn, that increased spending without increasing revenues requires borrowing. That is a partisan rhetorical flourish - if Obama proposes to spend money it means more borrowing, which means blame Obama for something. Wikidemon (talk) 04:14, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I have no problem with the sentence as it is presently worded, so no thanks. Tvoz/talk 03:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Grundle if you find a couple reliable sources about the increased borrowing, I think we should be able to work out an NPOV way to include it. As you've pointed out, the stimulus package requires a lot of borrowing. Clearly, the deficit is also related to the economic slowdown, so maybe Tvoz can suggest wording that is NPOV and gives appropriate context? ChildofMidnight (talk) 03:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- This response sounds like original research to me. Tvoz/talk 02:09, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- The sentence says they cut taxes. If they cut taxes and increased spending, then where did the increased spending come from? Grundle2600 (talk) 01:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure either way, but did the bill itself actual include "increased federal borrowing?" That is, was the limit on what the government can borrow explicitly raised as part of the bill, or did the bill say "this will be paid for by borrowing x dollars, which is an increase?" If not I don't think we can word it like this. Certainly the government will have to borrow more in order to pay for this and other expenses, but that's not exactly what the above sentence says. If increased borrowing was part of the stimulus bill we would need a source that says that. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 00:49, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Here's a source. Fox News says: "The federal deficit is projected to hit a record high of more than $1.8 trillion this year, due in large part to the government providing aid to Wall Street firms and other struggling companies, as well as Obama's $787 stimulus package." Grundle2600 (talk) 13:49, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Quote says nothing about borrowing. ThuranX (talk) 14:21, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- The American Recovery and Reinvestment Act of 2009 had a CBO reference: [1] The fact that the stimulus package increases debt is neither disputed nor surprising; it's inherent in the idea of the stimulus and was freely if hotly discussed by all parties. There is the objection by Bigtimepeace that the language of the bill may not have addressed the actual borrowing; we may want to use "increased Federal deficit spending, aid to states..." since the increased short-term deficit is what makes the stimulus, at least in theory, work. This addition slightly improves a section that is a little short right now. CouldOughta (talk) 15:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Fixing the reference. The cite: [1] and then the reference : CouldOughta (talk) 16:07, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Recovery.gov, the website created for this Act.
- ^ a b letter by Douglas W. Elmendorf, director of the CBO, February 11, 2009
I'm not against the principle, but I don't believe it's an accurate way of stating it, because the "aid to states" and "tax reductions" also directly cause an increase of the deficit. A better, more neutral and accurate, way of stating the same thing would be "The bill included increased federal spending, aid to states, and tax reductions, paid for by an increased federal deficit" or some-such. I'm not sure Fox News would be a strong source for citation, however, given their well-publicised bias, but the CBO citation would be a decent source. -137.222.114.243 (talk) 16:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
New Pakistan / anti-terrorism info
An editor has reverted this proposal[4] citing length, which gets to WP:WEIGHT. That means that this one matter takes up too much of the entire article in relation to its relative importance to Obama's life. I agree with that, but also see problems relating to encyclopedic tone and WP:NPOV (neutrality), relevance, and focus. To avoid redundant discussions, I'm opening a topic at Talk:Presidency of Barack Obama, where similar material was just added (and where I will remove it for purposes of discussion, if it has not already). This is more relevant to the presidency article than the bio so it makes more sense to hash it out there. This article is even broader than that one, so we have a higher threshold of importance before something is worth adding. Whatever we say here, if anything, would likely be considerably shorter and focus on what it says about Obama's overall life and career rather than the policy / world events aspect of it. Wikidemon (talk) 17:19, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Definitely agree that it makes more sense to discuss this material over at the "Presidency" article, and that we should forgo any inclusion of "anti-terrorism" operations in this article for now. However if we expand the presidency section at some point in the relatively near future, it would not be unreasonable to at least consider including a quick mention of the operations in Pakistan in a paragraph on foreign policy. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 17:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
This was originally in the wrong section, but the information is relvant as it immediate follows the President's policy in Afghanistan. It is well supported and most expert's would agree the Pakistan is the most signicant national security threat. This should of been shortend and moved, but not of been removed. Obamiac (talk) 20:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Obamiac, and anyone else interested, please see the discussion here as that's probably a better place to hash this out. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 20:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Actually I think we may have a sockpuppet problem here, I'm looking into it. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 20:23, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- FYI Obamiac and HoyaProff (the latter being an account which edit warred on behalf of Obamiac's version) seem to be controlled by the same user, along with four other accounts. I've indef blocked the lot of them for abusive sockpuppetry. See here for relevant information. These accounts do not seem to have had a major effect on the Obama articles, however if anyone comes across any accounts that seem to be part of this sock ring please let me know.
- Actually I think we may have a sockpuppet problem here, I'm looking into it. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 20:23, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Note also that this obviously does not mean that it's not legitimate to discuss inclusion of anti-Al Qaeda operations in Pakistan in this article, or (much more likely) in the article on Obama's presidency. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 21:47, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Inauguration of Barack Obama/archive2
Why are we getting no feedback at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Inauguration of Barack Obama/archive2 except a stale oppose for an image that was removed last week?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:22, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I dunno. You do realize this is the talk page for Barack Obama and not Talk:Inauguration of Barack Obama, right? -- Scjessey (talk) 19:18, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
Obama's plan against swine flu
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Currently 103 deaths only in Mexico and 1614 reported cases. "The government declared a public health emergency." " In the United States, the largest number of cases was in New York City, New York, where the CDC confirmed cases in eight students at preparatory school." I would like to read more about Obama's plan against flu, if there is any. And not after killing 20 millions peoples. Multiplyperfect (talk) 10:01, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
← No one is suggesting that the flu is not a serious matter, Multiplyperfect. The point is that this is a biography of Barack Obama, and at this point the flu has no place in this article. I concur with Bigtimepeace that we should close this thread for the time being. Tvoz/talk 19:08, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
If there's several million deaths on US soil and becomes a defining moment of Obama's presidency then it definitely deserves a mention in this article. Until there is, you're merely trying to mention a relatively minor current event in a tangentially related article and that makes no sense. -137.222.114.243 (talk) 20:52, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
Okay, folks. Show's over.
Seriously Multiply? The Spanish Flu? Millions of deaths? Really? You don't even think that maybe there's a difference in perhaps both the strand of flu as well as medical technology, living conditions of average Americans, general conditions of urban environments from the Spanish flu epidemic until now? I mean why stop with the Spanish flu, hell the black plague wiped out a third of Europe in about a decade. Should we go ahead and just make blind comparisons of a completely unrelated virus while ignoring little facts like we can now effectively treat virus' like the bubonic plague? The number killed by the Spanish flu had far more to do with living conditions in New York City and the lack of adequate health care than it did the virus itself. Frankly, like the bird flu, what is likely to happen is that as it passes from humans to other species back to humans and so forth, the swine flu will begin to lose its potency, it becomes weaker as it mutates. Also given the fact that it has yet to show an ability to kill beyond at risk groups it is simply unlikely to become a full blown epidemic of any size. But all of that is besides the point, and I probably could have just made a sufficient response by calling you stupid. There is absolutely no reason to put the swine flu into Obama's biography, that's ridiculous. Sure it might deserve its own article or subarticle as part of Influenza in general, but in Obama's bio? Should we put West Nile Virus into George W.'s bio simply because people thought that was going to be some massive virus that would just pile up a body count? What happens happens but safe money's on this thing being blown out of proportion. I'm just basing that on how our media works and how influenza works. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jdlund (talk • contribs) 00:03, 28 April 2009 (UTC) |
I started a new Obama related article!
Grundle2600 (talk) 23:09, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the notice. I'm not sure this page is great as a general purpose bulletin board though - I'll comment on that article's talk page. Wikidemon (talk) 23:39, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- WP:WikiProject Barack Obama is the proper forum for such announcements. Wasted Time R (talk) 23:44, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Oh. OK. Thank you, both of you, for telling me. Grundle2600 (talk) 01:13, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I looked at the page. I'm not really sure where to put it. Grundle2600 (talk) 01:19, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
New apologize
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Include it in the article. "A White House official apologized Monday after a low-flying Boeing 747 spotted above the Manhattan skyline frightened workers and residents into evacuating buildings. The huge aircraft, which functions as Air Force One when the president is aboard, was taking part in a classified, government-sanctioned photo shoot, the Federal Aviation Administration said." Multiplyperfect (talk) 12:04, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
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Consensus and Tertiary Sources issue
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So if everyone were to still have a concensus that the world was flat, would that mean it was correct to put in wikipedia, as tertiary sources stated so? Furthermore, it should be people of directly mixed ancestry that should decide what terminology to label themselves, not the general public concensus. We do not use this type of labelling for any other race than black, thanks to the slavery etc, and we already know that the concept of the on-drop rule, where everyone with a trace of black ancestry is labelled black was formed in the 1920s by white supremacists who wanted to keep the white race pure, hence labelled any in-between as black. It's an originally racist concept. Why wouldn't any 'african american' with a trace of one-drop of white ancestry, i.e (usually lighter than dark brown)be called white? It's precisely the same absurd principle. Mixed race people's opinions are continuously ignored in all sections of society. In fact there has been evidence shown from 'reliable sources' such as New Scientist to say that mixed race people are discriminated against mroe n the workplace than black people, and govermnet statitiscs form teh UK show that mixed race people are 50% more likely to be a victim of crime than ANY of the other main ethnic groups in the country, including those that are black. If the point in race labelling was to identify these issues, then surely mixed race people should be classified seprately , because statistics have shown these different trends. If they put 1st African American president, they should also include 44th European-American president of the United States. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.192.129.91 (talk) 18:07, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
So what determines whether a consensus is in fact factual information or popular opinion? There are probably numerous sources in other countries that say the American Government is planning on nuking Iran, it doesn't mean it's true. Could this be stated as factual information in Wikipedia? The race aspect is just an aspect of this discussion, involving reliability of tertiary media sources. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.192.129.91 (talk) 18:15, 29 April 2009 (UTC) |
I'm sorry but this issue has not been covered in the FAQ section 2 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.192.129.91 (talk) 18:18, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- This talk page is for discussing how to improve the Barack Obama biography article. It is not for meta discussions about consensus and sourcing. -- Scjessey (talk) 18:21, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
Unsuccessful health politics
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My proposal for the article: WHO raised the swine flu alert level 5. Currently US has the biggest number of proven swine flu cases 91, compared to Mexico's 26 cases. It is indicating that something is wrong in US, one reason can be that we had no health minister.Multiplyperfect (talk) 22:32, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
What the WHO says + your take that something is wrong with US response = Synthesis and original research. it's not going in. --Cameron Scott (talk) 22:40, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
I've asked that you are topic banned from those articles, you may wish to comment here before that happens. --Cameron Scott (talk) 22:50, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
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U.S. GDP sees worst drop in five decades
I think it would be good for Obama's article: U.S. GDP sees worst drop in five decades The source can't be better. Multiplyperfect (talk) 15:09, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Actually the source is worthless, we don't use wikis as sources in articles. --Cameron Scott (talk) 15:12, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
In this case see the sources on wikinews. I'm a little surprised, never thought that wiki is blacklisting wiki. This is weird. Multiplyperfect (talk) 15:14, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
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