Talk:Harley J. Earl Trophy

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Good article Harley J. Earl Trophy has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
March 24, 2011 Good article nominee Listed

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I spend some time trying to figure out if the daytona 500 winners should be merged in, since just being in the Daytona 500. After looking through examples of other notable trophies with their own articles, however, I shrugged that off, so there's no comprehension issues. Anyway, here are the issues I did find:

  • Crew chief and Winston currently link to disambiguation pages. For that matter, the Winston link doesn't seem useful at all.
  • "who served as the second commissioner of NASCAR, has" and has
  • "a wooden trophy, approximately three feet tall," comma after trophy unneeded
  • Is there a link for NASCAR's Governor's Cup?
  • You could add a note about Trevor Bayne being the youngest trophy winner, though I'll leave that up to you (if you do so, finding the oldest winner for balance would be beneficial)
    • The actual contributor can do so if they would like. Since this is a option, I am not going to search for it. --[[::User:Nascar1996|Nascar1996]] ([[::User talk:Nascar1996|talk]] • [[::Special:Contributions/Nascar1996|contribs]]) 03:46, 24 March 2011 (UTC)
      • I added both plus I took care of some other minor issues. Royalbroil 04:09, 24 March 2011 (UTC)

Just a few issues. I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:40, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

 Working on the issues. Done --[[::User:Nascar1996|Nascar1996]] ([[::User talk:Nascar1996|talk]] • [[::Special:Contributions/Nascar1996|contribs]]) 03:40, 24 March 2011 (UTC)
Looks good, article passes now. Thanks for fixing that up. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:56, 24 March 2011 (UTC)
Sorry for abandoning this, had an extended Wikibreak and completely forgot about this one. :embarassed: Thanks! - The Bushranger One ping only 23:04, 1 October 2011 (UTC)