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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 22:54, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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  • She competed for Central Valley High School in Spokane Valley, Washington. from what year to what year?
  • Done.
  • She won the Associated Press add the word "also" before won
  • Done.
  • She became the first freshman in program history to register a double-double in their debut this seems pretty important. Is there a news article with more detail than her basic bio?
  • I could not find an article with more detail.
  • a freshman season-high do you mean then season high for her or a freshman season high program record?
  • This was the most points she scored in a game that season. I removed the repetition of "freshman."
  • She helped Stanford win the Pac-12 Tournament. This seems like too short of a sentence. Can this be merged with her stats in the following sentence?
  • Done.
Sportzeditz, Everything else looks good. Please ping me when the changes are made. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Poor sentence

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" Four year track and field athlete that competed at the State Championships placing ninth her senior year." Where's the main verb ?Kdammers (talk) 00:35, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]