Talk:Mahal (actress)
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[edit]Im going to make a few changes here, but Mahal was an actress who quite recently passed, so I thought I would check in with you all before making any huge changes.
"Mahal admitted to spreading a scandalous video a few years earlier" - does anyone have any more information about this bit? Seems kind of strange to say it was scandalous and then just not say anything else.
"She had dwarfism, but was noted for her childlike roles and giggly personality"- Definitely want to reformat this bit. Firstly, it says she had dwarfism and then says: "but she was known for... Why the but? if it said that she was known for playing roles that one would not expect someone with dwarfism to do then the but might be ok, but it isn't really surprising to me that she had a giggly personality and played childlike roles. the but has no place there.
perhaps:
"She had dwarfism, and was noted for her childlike roles and giggly personality"
any objections/ changes?
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