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Neutrality

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I am placing a template on the article disputing its neutrality. This is obviously written in the style of a hagiography rather than a neutral encyclopedia article. Phil Bridger (talk) 20:27, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Improving shockingly bad article

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I just came across this article as part of my research for a class and was honestly kinda shocked at some of the issues I saw. I think the primary issue here is that whoever originally created the article was a native Hebrew speaker because the grammar and formatting is atrocious and sourcing is sorely lacking throughout the article (similar to what is found on the less strict Hebrew version of Wikipedia). I also agree with Phil Bridger above that this article is written way too promotionally. I don't have time to do this all now because this is a very long article, but I'm going to dedicate some time to improving things here over the coming weeks (maybe months? Depends on my work schedule...). Please let me know if you have any feedback for the edits I make. Happy to discuss and/or be overruled in certain cases! Roth3nyk (talk) 10:57, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ha - looks like I actually first discovered this a couple of months ago without remembering! In any case, seems that back then I just did some temporary fixes, while I now intend to do more intense work to make sure everything is in line with Wikipedia standards moving forward. Roth3nyk (talk) 11:30, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]