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Guild of Copy Editors' requests page

On this page, you can request that the Guild of Copy Editors copy-edit specific articles.

Instructions for requesters

To make a request, remove any existing {{copy edit}} tags from the article, then click this button and follow the instructions:

Please remove any existing {{copy edit}} tags from the article to avoid edit conflicts during the copy edit.

Please note:

  • No request by an unregistered editor will be accepted unless the IP has done significant work on the article. Drive-by IP requests already on the list may be declined by any editor.
  • The average waiting time is two or so months. Please be patient and feel free to improve your requested article while you wait.
  • If you plan to nominate the article for good article, A-class or featured article status, please wait until the copy edit is complete before nominating it.
  • Having your article copy edited by our team does not guarantee that the prose will be considered acceptable during any of the above reviews.
  • You may have up to two open requests at any one time. This is enforced so that every request can have a fair chance of being fulfilled within a reasonable period.

Requests may be declined if the article is:


March 2022

Minneapolis

Greetings. Can you help us keep the FA star? One esteemed editor suggested that you may have the expertise. My hope is to avoid FAR/FARC. Thank you. -SusanLesch (talk) 17:40, 7 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 Working Baffle☿gab 01:34, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

List of British corps in World War II‎

Next up in the series of British Second World War lists, we have the list containing all the British corps formed. I intend to take this list through the ACN and then FLC process, and would appreciate a copy edit with that in mind.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 05:03, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

List of Neon Genesis Evangelion characters

For a GAN in the future.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 15:33, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Terminator 2: Judgment Day

Big expansion needs copy editing before FA (FAC), thank you. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 16:13, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Interstate 205 (Oregon–Washington)

Another road article that is heading towards FAC. Looking to get some of the last bits of prose hammered down before the big show. SounderBruce 05:34, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nuremberg trials

I'm hoping to get this article to FAC in the future. (t · c) buidhe 02:56, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Shane Warne

GA (GAN) candidate for the recently deceased famous cricketer. A big article Desertarun (talk) 17:30, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Failed GA on the prose, will re-run at a later time. Desertarun (talk) 11:18, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Mario + Rabbids Kingdom Battle

Although the article passed GA, the DYK reviewer requested a copyedit for grammar before it goes onto the front page. Thank you in advance! Panini! 🥪 20:49, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

James Madison

Article for the fourth President is currently at GA and planning to prepare article for FA (FAC) nomination, if someone with FA experience could be willing to do copy edits it would be a significant boost to the article. ErnestKrause (talk) 14:10, 31 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

April 2022

Como la Flor

Just finished expanding the article from my sandbox. Planning on taking it to FA after GAN. – jona 21:50, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

MLS Cup 1999

Another article I'm hoping to take to FAC in the near future. The format is similar to MLS Cup 1996 (an existing FA). SounderBruce 00:42, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ada Wong

Needs to be copyedited after being expanded a lot. OnlyFixingProse (talk) 04:17, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dororo (2019 TV series)

Needs some improvements. Potential for a GA review (GAN).Tintor2 (talk) 13:38, 9 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Atmanirbhar Bharat

Requesting a basic copyedit to improve readability. Please increase summarisation where possible. Thank you DTM (talk) 13:58, 9 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sven Melander

Needs c/e after a major expansion by me, this after his recent death. ThanksBabbaQ (talk) 09:14, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  •  Working MaggieAtKryton (talk) 16:20, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    On hold: I've asked a coordinator to help me take a look at the references section of the page as I noticed that some sources don't seem to be supporting the sentences they're next to. However, there is also an official celebrity page that we could maybe refer to if it's considered credible for Wikipedia. I'm still quite new to Wikipedia's criteria, so I didn't want to overlook anything just in case. It's been clarified to me that as a copy editor, I don't need to focus on the references of a Wikipedia page. However, because I did notice that this page's references should be more relevant to the info they're next to, I will mark them accordingly. MaggieAtKryton (talk) 21:57, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Comment, @MaggieAtKryton: Just so you know, WP:MINREF outlines when a statement requires an inline citation. You should remove the statement if any of the 4 criteria apply listed on the page for a statement lacking an inline citation. As you mentioned, this is not applicable to copyediting work, but it's still very useful for editing wikipedia in other aspects. Happy editing! — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 20:12, 19 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @PerfectSoundWhatever: Ah, thank you! I'm still sorting out all the rules for everything here, so it's nice to be pointed in the right direction. When I get the chance, I'll take a look at that too for this page. :) MaggieAtKryton (talk) 20:17, 19 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

() I've asked MaggieAtKryton about the progress of this request on their talk page. Baffle☿gab 21:42, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Per their talk page reply, MaggieAtKryton is unable to continue copy-editing at this time. The request is now open to all. Discuss at REQ talk. Baffle☿gab 22:19, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Imperial Bottle Shop & Taproom

Requesting a copy edit ahead of possible Good article nomination (GAN). Thanks! --Another Believer (Talk) 21:34, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Chibi-Robo! Zip Lash

Hello Members of the Guild, I am planning to turn this article mentioned above into a FAC. Currently, I have sent the article into the process of PR, however I have been adviced to send this article here for copyediting. I hope that you can help me make this article the best it can be. All the best to all who reads this. CaptainGalaxy 18:30, 12 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Evangelion (mecha)

Another anime article for a GAN.TeenAngels1234 (talk) 10:02, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Federico Gatti

I want this small article to be a GA (GAN). However, I ask you to edit the page to make a prose which could lead me someday to nominate this for FAC. I also ask you to make the prose less monotonous. Dr Salvus 10:23, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Anarkali

This or associated article can go to GA if South Asian editors pay little more attention for expansion. Any ways I had updated the article in previous year and IMHO as of now a good c/e might inspire other editors to improve upon further. Bookku, 'Encyclopedias = expanding information & knowledge' (talk) 16:26, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Crusading movement

Would be of great assistance if some of the GOCE magic could be weaved on this article after a pretty comprehensive rewite. Another attempt at GA-R (GAN) would be the objective, but the contentious nature of the subject may prevent this. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 20:15, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thevar Magan

Potential GAN. Kailash29792 (talk) 06:11, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Rebecca Chambers (Resident Evil)

Massively expanded and currently on GAN. Still appreciates any copy edits even it is already over. OnlyFixingProse (talk) 12:44, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Vovan and Lexus

I believe this has the potential to become a good article, but is in need of some overhaul, including re-structuring and focusing the article. I have recently removed the GAN for this article to give time for a good copyedit. Thank you! QueenofBithynia (talk) 13:26, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ashok Mahto gang

Ip editors has deteriorated the article. The article is short but relevant and it is one of the notable topic in the category of South Asia related articles. Some one may help to improve it.Heba Aisha (talk) 23:07, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dead Space 3

I'm intending to take this article through GAN in the near future, but I'm worried the GAN might bring up a lot of issues that I may not have time to deal with since I'm going to be potentially busy in real-life. I've done my best to address any glaring matters, but a disinterest copyeditor's eye would be much appreciated. ProtoDrake (talk) 21:14, 23 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Gospel of Barnabas

For GA (GAN). —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 14:30, 24 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Death of Hacı Lokman Birlik

Hello! This article is approved for DYK but an editor suggested to post it here for a look. Bruxton (talk) 20:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Asteroid

I tried to rewrote the article, and thinking about submitting it to GAN. Would be great to have it copyedited before. Thanks a lot! Artem.G (talk) 08:00, 27 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Gilwell Park

Former featured article: Wikipedia:Featured article review/Gilwell Park/archive1 Now up for GAR: Good Article Reassessment. Probably better that the copy editor be familiar with British English. Thank you. --evrik (talk) 04:54, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Future Husband

Hi. I would like to submit this article about a 2015 Meghan Trainor single at FAC and hopefully make it my sixth featured article. Thank you so much in advance!--NØ 16:42, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Asisguard Songar

DYK Copyediting of the article, which is on DYK-nom, has been requested by a reviewer. Thanks. CeeGee 10:00, 29 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ray Reardon

Hi, I'd like to take this BLP article to FAC after a copyedit. Many thanks in advance. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:59, 29 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final Cut of Director

Article went through major rewrite and the current grammar and sentence structure of the article is weird and awkward. DareshMohan (talk) 04:55, 30 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

May 2022

Lumines: Puzzle Fusion

I need assistance in copy-editing the article to meet the requirements of FA Criteria 1a. That is the requirement that is affecting the article from becoming a Featured Article (FAC). It would be greatly appreciated if someone with experience in turning the article into FA would assist in editing the article to meet the FA criteria 1a. Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 04:27, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Note: this article received a GOCE copy edit in August 2021. Here is a diff of changes since that edit was completed. All of the FAC comments on the prose were made before the GOCE copy-edited the article, and the FAC was withdrawn before the GOCE edit was completed. – Jonesey95 (talk) 13:26, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Bad Romance

Planing to take to FAC in a distant future. The prose could use some tightening in places. FrB.TG (talk) 07:13, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lettergate

DyK reviewers recommended GOCE. Thanks Bookku, 'Encyclopedias = expanding information & knowledge' (talk) 10:34, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The Holocaust in Bohemia and Moravia

Planning to take this to FAC in the future. (t · c) buidhe 16:22, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Maekiaphan Phillips

A general copy edit for sentence fluency and grammar would be appreciated! TJMSmith (talk) 05:17, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Carolyn C. Perrucci

I am planning on submitting a GAN. A general copy edit for grammar would be appreciated! TJMSmith (talk) 05:20, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tor (network)

Needs some copyediting, I least per the warning box added by another user. --► Sincerely: Solavirum 21:05, 9 May 2022 (UTC)33[reply]

@Solavirum: I think it is technically possible to track every server in this network one by one and it's mentioned in the article "Tor is not designed to completely erase tracking (...)" but from what I read in articles there is contradictory narrative and some people are not trackable so how they do it? Is there any article discussing it? "It directs Internet traffic through a free, worldwide, volunteer overlay network, consisting of more than six thousand relays" - what are those relays and all of them are hosted by The Tor Project from from donations as The Tor Project is nonprofit organization? Eurohunter (talk) 10:09, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Kamala Khan

Became GA in 2014 but hasn't been reassessed. I've done a basic reorganization but it could use a copy edit before GAR. Thanks! Sariel Xilo (talk) 01:26, 10 May 2022 (UTC) Forgot to mention that a Disney+ show based on the character premieres in June so I expect that the character article will see an increase in traffic. Sariel Xilo (talk) 01:28, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nakodaji

Hello, The article is nominated for DYK. Kindly, help me in improving the quality of article. Thanks and regards Pratyk321 (talk) 06:03, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Flawless Shade

Requesting a copy edit for this relatively short bio ahead of Good article nomination (GAN). Thank you! --Another Believer (Talk) 16:37, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Samnites

I would like to nominate the article Samnites for a copy edit, as User:AirshipJungleman29 requested that I should also I would like to improve the article's prose. Ewf9h-bg (talk) 20:15, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Survivor: Micronesia

Episode summary needs a cull and general C/E for eventual GAN. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:41, 11 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hydroelectricity in Turkey

Suggested in DYK comment at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Hydroelectricity_in_Turkey. Chidgk1 (talk) 06:23, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Handcream for a Generation

Possible GAN. MusicforthePeople (talk) 07:16, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Monique Luiz

For possible FAC – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 22:05, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ethan Winters

Expanded a lot, needs to be copyedited. BloatedBun (talk) 01:47, 15 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

30 Goes Around the Sun

Possible GAN. MusicforthePeople (talk) 08:07, 16 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fest i hela huset

Short article about Basshunter's single recorded in Big Brother nominated for DYK. Eurohunter (talk) 16:19, 18 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The Great Wave off Kanagawa

Recently rewrote this Level 4 Vital Article. Needs some copyediting before I take it to GA. — Golden call me maybe? 18:01, 21 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Kerala Blasters FC

The article only needs minor copyediting in certain sections. This has GA status heavily edited by non native english speakers. Everything looks fine to me except that 2021-22 season segement. Can somebody assist me in its copyediting. The Footballean (talk) 07:00, 23 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Out of the Woods (song)

I am planning to take this article to FAC and it needs a fresh eye to catch any prose issue. Thank you very much in advance. Ippantekina (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2022 (UTC

@Ippantekina: "The song was released for digital download as a promotional single" - "download" and "promotional single"? I assume it was download only for DJ's? I have checked the source and it was released on iTunes in 2014 so it's standard single and released in infobox should be fixed ("“Out Of The Woods” will be released on iTunes tomorrow, and Swift has released a video of herself discussing the track, which was written and produced by fun.". "Australian Singles Chart" is not actual chart name so I have removed capitals. Charts table: "2014–16" - you need to divide table by year of peak otherwise we don't know when it peaked. A lot of links to redirects. Eurohunter (talk) 09:45, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Eurohunter: Thank you for reaching out. To address your comments: (1) The WP:SONG community has established that being released onto iTunes alone does not necessarily make the song a single (see WP:SINGLE?); after its October 2014 release Taylor Swift and the label also said it was not a single at that point of time). (2) "digital download" refers to music download where a user on the internet can download music from a site. (3) unless the time gap is considerable (I'd say a 5-year gap) I'd keep the current charts section as it is because it is hard to trace when the song peaked/charted by retrieving certain chart history links. Thank you for addressing the Australian chart link. Is there a specific tool to check redirects? Ippantekina (talk) 12:05, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
It charted 136 in the United Kingdom and received Silver status just in 7 (or 5?) years. I think it's quite fast without even charting in top 100. Is there any article discussing it? Eurohunter (talk) 09:51, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think it is too challenging for a song to get certified Silver in the UK; and no, it is certainly not worthy to have an article discussing it. Were it a 10 times Platinum single, however, there may be a chance. Ippantekina (talk) 12:05, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Eurohunter:, thank you for your attention to detail. For multiple reasons, questions about the content of a specific article are best addressed on that article's talk page, not here. – Jonesey95 (talk) 13:21, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hausman Baboe

For DYKN, thanks~ Nyanardsan (talk) 18:15, 25 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Science

Yes, that science. I am trying to copyedit the article to the best of my ability, but because the scope of the article is so big, I really want to have another person to help me out. Thanks a lot to the copyeditor that accept my request. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 06:46, 26 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Siege of Bukhara

Already a GA, I intend to take this to MILHIST ACR and then FAC. Any help welcome. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:57, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Seattle SuperSonics

Would like to work heavily on this article and give it a major overhaul, especially on its references (i.e. adding where needed). However, there's a huge chunk of the article centered around the franchise's former possibility of being revived, particularly via other teams relocating. This "Possible new franchise" section seems like it has a truly undue weight in the overall Sonics article (References #39–#74 out of 81 total are introduced in this section, with #39–#61 being completely related to the Sacramento Kings' early 2010s possibility of moving to Seattle. I would really like to have this section condensed and copy edited if possible. Thank you for the help! Soulbust (talk) 15:55, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Angel in the Night

Short article about Basshunter's single nominated for DYK. Eurohunter (talk) 23:58, 28 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Climate change in Uganda

Requesting for a DYK nomination (Climate change in Uganda) by User:Micheal Kaluba. The article needs copyediting before it's suitable to be linked from the Main Page. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 01:48, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

English-language education in Iran

Needs to be copyedited after being written from scratch. Thanks in advance, - LouisAragon (talk) 15:14, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ai-Khanoum

By the time of the review, the article will have undergone a thorough rewrite. Intend to take it to GAN and FAC. Any help is welcome. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:00, 30 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tyrant (Resident Evil)

I have expanded the article and needed some copy edits for this small article. BloatedBun (talk) 23:59, 30 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lost Judgment

This game article never got copyedited since the DLC wasn't released until some months ago.Tintor2 (talk) 18:57, 31 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Preston Richards

PR: several significant recent changes, also my source editing/template addition needs a once over. Jmjosh90 (talk) 05:41, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]