A fact from Peninah Musyimi appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 18 March 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Overall: Article is new enough, long enogh, is well sourced and the hook is cited. The pic looks free to use to me, and clear. QPQ is done. My only concern is slightly about the tone - it reads a bit like a (fascinating) novel (at least to my ears). Would it be OK to tighten that up a bit? In particular the second paragraph. I also added a citation needed, as it wasn't clear to me where the info was from. It's great to see this biography though! Lajmmoore (talk) 22:33, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Lajmmoore: good catch. I hadnt removed the sensational tone enough - its better now, it now has the missing citation, an extra ref and if you think it needs a few more tweaks then do feel free to sharpen the tone further. Thank you. Victuallers (talk) 13:36, 24 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Article is new enough, long enogh, is well sourced and the hook is cited. The pic looks free to use to me, and clear. QPQ is done. My only concern is slightly about the tone - it reads a bit like a (fascinating) novel (at least to my ears). Would it be OK to tighten that up a bit? In particular the second paragraph. I also added a citation needed, as it wasn't clear to me where the info was from. It's great to see this biography though! Lajmmoore (talk) 22:33, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
Hi Victuallers, I made a few corrections to typos etc. The tone feels alright to me so giving a tick on the basis that the other checks have been carried out by Lajmmoore - Dumelow (talk) 13:04, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
