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::Various editors have opinions about this too, I was using UK and that seems to cause issue. Might I suggest British Empire? As for the various 1st Nation's involved it might be better to call out the ones actually involved and on which side. The Cherokee were a large nation and always fought on the American side of the fence. The Sauk, and Mohawk, were on the British empire side and found in some battles.[[User:Tirronan|Tirronan]] ([[User talk:Tirronan|talk]]) 13:10, 4 October 2010 (UTC) |
::Various editors have opinions about this too, I was using UK and that seems to cause issue. Might I suggest British Empire? As for the various 1st Nation's involved it might be better to call out the ones actually involved and on which side. The Cherokee were a large nation and always fought on the American side of the fence. The Sauk, and Mohawk, were on the British empire side and found in some battles.[[User:Tirronan|Tirronan]] ([[User talk:Tirronan|talk]]) 13:10, 4 October 2010 (UTC) |
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:::I think we can put aside "Great Britain". On Wikipedia we usually use that name to describe entity created by the union of England and Scotland in 1707 and United Kingdom for the union of Great Britain and Ireland in 1801. We are not the only ones, see for example Britannica [http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/614670/Act-of-Union Acts of Union 1707] &[http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/614673/Act-of-Union 1801]. |
:::I think we can put aside "Great Britain". On Wikipedia we usually use that name to describe entity created by the union of England and Scotland in 1707 and United Kingdom for the union of Great Britain and Ireland in 1801. We are not the only ones, see for example Britannica [http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/614670/Act-of-Union Acts of Union 1707] &[http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/614673/Act-of-Union 1801]. |
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"Anachronous" Reference
Anachronous is defined on dictionary.com as chronologically misplaced,or misplaced in time. The reference to the treaty of Paris was being used to describe the author of my reference's claim that the United States did want to annex Canada. Thereby, deleting the reference(actually, the whole edit too)is merely trying to conceal that fact and keep the page's biased view predominant. Now that I've explained this ,please allow this edit to stand.Ronald Wenonah (talk) 22:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)Ronald WenonahRonald Wenonah (talk) 22:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)
- Your use of George F. G. Stanley's reference to the negotiations of the 1783 Treaty of Paris is not directly related to the War of 1812. It is out of place by 30 years and is therefore anachronous. The author you are using does not make the claim that Benjamin Franklin's effort to persuade the British to relinquish Canada is evidence that the US wanted to annex Canada in the War of 1812. Stanley wanted to show that the US had previously shown an interest in obtaining British North American territory long before the War of 1812. The author did in fact believe that a motive for the US declaration of war was a desire to obtain Canada, but his evidence for this is the usual recitation of the comments of a number of the so-called War Hawks in the time just prior to the war and during the war.
- What is particularly ironic is that the paragraph that contains Stanley's comments about the negotiations of the 1783 Treaty of Paris has a single endnote reference and that reference is to A. L. Burt's book The United State, Great Britain and British North America: From the Revolution to the Establishment of Peace After the War of 1812. If you look it up it is clear that Stanley took that material directly from Burt. Why is it ironic? Burt is one of the authors that is cited in this article on the War of 1812 who did not believe that the US wanted to annex Canada. So it is obvious that he, Burt, did not believe that the negotiations of the 1783 Treaty of Paris had any bearing on the War of 1812.
- You stated, "The Napoleonic wars provided an excellent excuse, as the United States could claim that annexing Canada was merely supporting the French against the British as the French had done for the Americans in the American Revolutionary War." I am unable to find any supporting statement from your reference George F. G. Stanley. What is the page number for this claim?
- As for your claim that "Oswald dug his heels in" I believe that is an exaggeration as Franklin and the other Americans merely suggested the complete cession of Canada and never actually pressed Oswald over it. In any case it is irrelevant with respect to the War of 1812.
- Your reference to the negotiations on the 1783 Treaty of Paris does not belong in this article. This is an article and not a book on the War of 1812. Dwalrus (talk) 02:00, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Note that in 1812 the US was VERY angry with France and at one point there was a suggestion about going to war with BOTH Britain and France. Talk about bad war plans! in any case the US refused to ally itself with France in 1812-14. Rjensen (talk) 02:39, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
One interesting thing to note is that in the "United States Expansionism" section every single author cited(except Burt and Stanley)are either American or British. And since the British public never really noticed the war the overwhelming atmosphere on that page is pro-American. I expect that if I had used the treaty of Paris reference to support the United States there would not have been a single objection.In addition, the vast majority of the editors on the War of 1812 are American.It is sort of like the War of 1812:the British and Canadians vastly outnumbered.Except in this case the invasion is of bias into Wikipedia and not of the Americans into Canada.Ronald Wenonah (talk) 13:36, 3 September 2010 (UTC)Ronald WenonahRonald Wenonah (talk) 13:36, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Among scholars, the Canadians and Americans are now in very large agreement, and the issue of bias seldom appears anymore in the RS. However, at the popular level, anti-Americanism is still a factor among a certain fragment of the British Canadian population, one that continues to exult in the burning of Washington. But those folks are out of touch with Canadian scholarship, as shown by their reluctance to acknowledge the central role, and decisive defeat, of the Canadian First Nations in the war of 1812. The British continue to ignore the war -- for example the major new survey in the New Oxford History of England, by Boyd Hilton (2006) has only one paragraph on the war,Rjensen (talk) 15:05, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Mr.Wenonah, why don't you create a nice user page? As you can see, not having one is not going to protect you from being questioned. You might as well be questioned in style! The rest of you, why do you not welcome Mr. Wenonah to WP? Welcome, Mr. Wenonah. You have to persist around here to be of much use. By the way, Mr. Wenonah, I do like your writing style. Excellent style. Many of your problems come from not doing references in proper format. It might make life easier if you can do that. I suggest perusal of template:cite book, template:cite web and others of the family. WP is serious about those. There are copyright considerations. Now for the issue at hand, I'm not turning into a War of 1812 scholar, so I would appreciate it if you afficionados would get this matter resolved so we can get that tag off the section. There is no point in having these tags being left on for months and years the way they often are, is there? Mr. Wenonah, what would you consider non-biased language? Exactly what sentences trouble you? What would you accept? Can we look at this in short sentences to the point? Thanks.Dave (talk) 16:07, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
- Among scholars, the Canadians and Americans are now in very large agreement, and the issue of bias seldom appears anymore in the RS. However, at the popular level, anti-Americanism is still a factor among a certain fragment of the British Canadian population, one that continues to exult in the burning of Washington. But those folks are out of touch with Canadian scholarship, as shown by their reluctance to acknowledge the central role, and decisive defeat, of the Canadian First Nations in the war of 1812. The British continue to ignore the war -- for example the major new survey in the New Oxford History of England, by Boyd Hilton (2006) has only one paragraph on the war,Rjensen (talk) 15:05, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- How many time and by how many people have to tell you about your behaviour and insults.Moxy (talk) 16:27, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
ugh
This article needs a lot of attention. One big problem I have with it is that it seems to be peppered with throw-away sentences like:
"Canada also emerged from the war with a heightened sense of national feeling and solidarity."
They seems to be thrown in to placate Canadians, for whom this war is historically significant, no doubt. Is there no better way to integrate these ideas in an article, or at least to remember that when we edit, when we add a sentence into the middle of a paragraph or section, it affects the readability of the entire piece?
The lead is especially bad, and makes one not want to read the rest of the article. If I were to attempt to work on this, what are the odds of getting lynched by zealots?Vinithehat (talk) 15:39, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Lead is horrible,,was just recently downgraded with bad grammar and nice POV statements..Moxy (talk) 22:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- I won't lie, you run risks exposing yourself to some of the fan-base around here. One of the other editors and I joked about lining the two sides up and letting them have at one another with stone clubs. As you see in the above sections I guess we are supposed to make everyone feel good about the war not how the war was, and we have a few that assume (behind the lies and bias) the single real reason was Canada. Regardless of the mountain's of documentation to the contrary. R, is right though I have been reluctant to admit it, its just plain anti-Americanism that peeks through when one some of them get really upset. Still I would love to see it rewritten. Still I find it amazing that this silly little war that neither side really wanted to fight and just couldn't wait to quit on, still generates so much passion. User:Tirronan (talk) 17:33, 3 September 2010
Questionable Edits
Ok enough is enough, one more attempt by this gentleman with deliberate misrepresentations of sources and I fully intend on taking him to the admins for action. God knows I have patience for the guy or gal that really believes in their pov but I will not stand for lying and cheating to slant an article.Tirronan (talk) 16:37, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- I redid the disputed edit. It should be less offensive to the multiple Americaneditors who have constantly reverted me. Take me to the admins if you want but before you do so consider this: with the vastly predominant pro-American atmosphere on Wikipedia no wonder they didn't want me to refer to George Stanley-he designed the Canadian flag.Ronald Wenonah (talk) 13:28, 12 September 2010 (UTC)Ronald WenonahRonald Wenonah (talk) 13:28, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- I wouldn't care if you were doing this from any side, when you say that a source says this, it had better say that. Lying to me and the other editors to get a bogus edit in is not acceptable. I know that D has caught you at it no less than 3 times.Tirronan (talk) 13:45, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've reverted again, for the same reasons that you were reverted last time. Wikipedia is not the place to right historical wrongs.Tirronan (talk) 13:55, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've talked to another editor here that supports an rfc about this fellow. Interested parties please signal on my talk page for further action.Tirronan (talk) 13:18, 17 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've reverted again, for the same reasons that you were reverted last time. Wikipedia is not the place to right historical wrongs.Tirronan (talk) 13:55, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- I wouldn't care if you were doing this from any side, when you say that a source says this, it had better say that. Lying to me and the other editors to get a bogus edit in is not acceptable. I know that D has caught you at it no less than 3 times.Tirronan (talk) 13:45, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
I've decided to simply post his behavior on the admin notice board and leave it at that. The admins can decide what to do about this fellow.Tirronan (talk) 20:05, 19 September 2010 (UTC)
- I was informed that using someone's user-id in as a header was incorrect, so here we are.Tirronan (talk) 05:35, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
Botteville
Well, it looks as though we need a few experienced hands here. I need about 50. I think my country ought to have good articles. Class B is too low for this one. I think I will place this on my list. That means, every once in a while I make a few changes. I generally start with the links and the refs. I always explain my changes. I never delete material unless it is wrong. I insist on proper formatting. I check all refs: they better say what they are supposed to say. I don't like personal opinions. I am by trade a writer so I am interested in good English. English is my first language. I'm a New Englander. I think I'm a reasonable man and I expect things to be worked out. You won't be left without reasons for the things I do. I won't be doing too much at first, as I have a pretty good list now. I will be aiming at a shorter, better-written, comprehensible, mainstream article. If I'm still around eventually I would expect this to be a good article, the gooder the better. I'm not interested in your bickering, so don't bother me with it. Unless you have a better or equal reason to mine, I won't take no for an answer. Balance and neutrality certainly are good ideas. Quality of article is my main concern. Don't expect a lot at first, but better be ready. Don't bother to answer this as I will not reply. See you around.Dave (talk) 15:32, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
- No ego or attitude problem there, I see. If you won't take no for an answer unless someone offers what you consider to be better or equal reasons, then what if someone else won't take yes for an answer unless you offer what he or she considers to be better or equal reasons? But you think you're a reasonable man who expects things to be worked out.
- Please don't treat us like wayward, bickering children. This article has been a long time in the making by a host of preceding editors, many of them quite experienced hands (and probably more than 50), both in its great detail and in trying to work out the various point-of-view and organizational problems. (My own involvement has only been as a very light copy-editor using his own journalistic/editorial experience, whose knowledge of most of the underlying matter is too superficial to create or alter the substance.) A perusal of the article history and of the talk page archives will show not only some repetitive childish, nationalistic squabbles, but a great deal of hard research and thoughtful discussion (much of it over my own head) from all sides of the various questions. It takes a great deal of self-confidence to think that a new broom is all that's needed to solve the problems (e.g. overall length) that most of us have recognized for quite a while and tried to reduce in various ways. Thanks. (By the way, when you say "my country ought to have good articles", you may not be recognizing what's been a consensus here, that this article is equally about three countries. You wouldn't say "my country ought to have good articles" about World War II.) —— Shakescene (talk) 08:31, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
Unencyclopedic link
If this were in proper "cite web" format we would soon see that it is not about the battle or the war, but is about the museum and its exhibits and events. This is, in other words, advertising for the museum. There are no articles or information here. I think it must be a wonderful museum and it must be very informative once you get there and pay the price to get in. I am sure anyone who signs up for the events will probably have a wonderful time. However, we are not about great museums and wonderful times. We want to be informed concerning the War of 1812, and in an encyclopedic manner without advertising. Thank you.Dave (talk) 18:41, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Replacing the link to James Madison University
Botteville just removed a dead link to the Madison Center (an institute to advance teaching) at James Madison University in Virginia. With a minor amount of digging, I was able to find a War of 1812 bicentennial page at the same site at http://www.jmu.edu/madison/center/page19.html . I don't know if this is similar or identical to the page that was deleted. To my untrained eye, the page looks marginal (most of the content seems to be one very simple wall chart and a series of links to other places; no doubt it will expand and deepen as the bicentennial approaches and teachers become more interested in finding relevant resources): I wouldn't remove it if it was already there, but I wouldn't add it to External Links if they already had half a dozen better ones. What do others think? —— Shakescene (talk) 18:49, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
- Hello Mr. Shakescene, you caught me right in the act. But on with the show. I looked at your site. I have to point out, you are not giving the web site of the material you want to include; instead you give us this other site that links to the material. The other web site is really quite unacceptable; it contains advertising all over the place. It is advertising. It plugs the society, which although I am sure is quite an excellent one is not encyclopedic information on the war. I don't know why you do that - why not give the information site directly? As for the chart, well, it has some informational value. If it were me I would say not enough to make it worth our while to include. It is more like a grade-school prop. Below level, I would say. But, if you want to put it in I would not take it out. Perhaps as you say it might be better to wait for feedback if the site is questionable in your mind. There are plenty of sites around. The trick is get the best ones for the limited space; we are not lists of links for the sake of the links. Thanks. Don't know when I will look at this again.Dave (talk) 19:14, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
- I really don't have a strong position on this one way or the other, which is why I'm asking other editors. I didn't put in the original JMU link, and I haven't put in the new (bicentennial) one, either. (The page isn't really all advertising; it's just embedded into a university site with a lot of institutional links and is offering information to teachers who want information about the war.) The reason I didn't give a direct link to "Prelude to the War" is that (while it promises many things), right now it seems to be just a link to a PDF of that wall chart. —— Shakescene (talk) 19:48, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
- I still don't think you are quite getting the point of a link. Even if there were no advertising in it, it is as you say a university site, not the information itself. We don't want to be offered information to teachers who want information about the war, we want the information. Pick the link, follow it to the information, then give us the information. These links are not references but they could be. In a similar category are magazine sites that offer free articles. We don't want the magazine site, we want the article. The magazine is not of interest, only the information in the article. Similarly the university and the very fact that such a university could offer this type of information are not of interest. The information is, if it is on our topic. Do you see the difference? It is the same principle as giving the Google search page instead of giving them the thing searched for. I admit there are a few cases in which you cannot give the thing searched for, you must give the search page. Those are pretty rare however and this is not one of them. I would say we seem to be agreeing that the WP public does not need the wall chart so the argument is only academic. And, the university site is an advertisement of itself, which is what I mean. It advertises the university. We don't want to do that! All we want to do is present factual information on the War of 1812 and as far as I know the university played no part at all in those events, so what is it doing here? Its like a commercial inserted into a program: "this information is brought to you by x university ...." Advertisers are very subtle, believe me. Sometimes there is a problem making the distinction but I do not see any problem here. The university site is out, it seems plain.Dave (talk) 01:27, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- I really don't have a strong position on this one way or the other, which is why I'm asking other editors. I didn't put in the original JMU link, and I haven't put in the new (bicentennial) one, either. (The page isn't really all advertising; it's just embedded into a university site with a lot of institutional links and is offering information to teachers who want information about the war.) The reason I didn't give a direct link to "Prelude to the War" is that (while it promises many things), right now it seems to be just a link to a PDF of that wall chart. —— Shakescene (talk) 19:48, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Inappropriate link
Again, if this were in "cite web" format we would soon see that it is not about the privateers in the war. In fact it is an advertising site for materials on the war. It contains an index of sorts to readings apparently by the authors from their books on the war. It is a very large index. I'm sorry, I cannot find the one on the privateers. Now, if you click on the index items you get other sites. If you can locate the privateers site for us and give us THAT website then perhaps it would be appropriate. I cannot tell until I see it. Remember, it has to be encyclopedic and not be advertising and the site has to be specified in one of our "cite" formats; e.g., template:cite web. Thank you.Dave (talk) 19:01, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Site too general
- War of 1812 Art Collection Niagara Falls Public Library (Ont.)
This is only the library's search site inviting us to search for materials of any sort. Too general. We are interested the the War of 1812, not in searching the library site for any material we might guess is relevant. By that theory, why not just put Google in as a link? We need specific addresses to particular material. Do your homework! Thanks.Dave (talk) 19:22, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
The too long intro tag
I read that intro carefully and you know what? I think it is well-written and hangs together well. And, there is nothing incomprehensible or unclear about it. I was having trouble seeing what could be cut out. Some intros are longer than that. In the early years of WP there were severe space limitations of article length. That changed after I got started but some editors developed a one-sentence intro style and from time to time I still get such comments. Frankly for a great many articles one sentence is just not going to do it. I think the problem here was the statement about the Canadians toward the end of the intro. That can be be handled by a reference if necessary. If you really want one just put a small "fact" template on it. No big deal, no big mess. I therefore second the tag's removal and would not take kindly to anyone reverting it. Unless you have good reasons other than "I like short intros" I would treat that as vandalism. We don't like a short intro in this case. If you disagree with something, or know it is wrong, or really want a ref on this overview, use the small template tags please. Otherwise I would expect to see the same thing whenever I get back. By the way, use of the top-article templates on an article is a serious objection to it. I wouldn't expect to see any thrown in without the discussion promised in the tag. If I do I am just taking it out. Bye now. Thanks.Dave (talk) 01:48, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- I removed the "too long intro" tag, but I wouldn't consider its return to be vandalism. That's stretching the word a little bit far. If it was repeatedly restored without discussion, then we'd get into edit wars and the 3-reversion rule, but not vandalism. —— Shakescene (talk) 08:02, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
Major reference format problem
I was just about to leave this for now when I noticed a major problem, which I should point out before I go. It's no one's fault. It is just a lack of understanding of the Harvard Reference system as used on WP. The so-called "additional reading" actually contains the bibiography for a partially implemented Harvard ref system. It should be labeled bibiography and go under the notes if in fact we are going to set up refs that link to it. Looking at the notes I see some of them have Harvard refs without any corresponding item in the bibiography. No, you can't do that. These errors come from copying the notes from somewhere else without much thought. Don't be a robot, be a thinker. That means, a lot of these refs are no good as such. Someone has to do the research to find the book. I see we are going to go around and around about this. The biblio items have to be in the usual "cite x" format. I got us started by showing you how to do a "cite web." I will have to put off showing you the Harvard ref system until next session - whenever, unless you know a little more and want to undertake it yourself. Meanwhile you might just finish up the links.Dave (talk) 02:19, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- I think you mean that the long reference should go into the "References section" and that using a {{harvnb}} or {{sfn}} template as a short citation in the text will generate the appropriate list in the "Notes section". Providing that a parameter "|ref=harv" is added to the long citations templates (such as {{cite book}}) the two will be linked together. -- PBS (talk) 04:48, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
Major reference problem
I am sorry to relate there appears to be a major reference problem as well as a reference format problem. It appears as though things have gotten out of control. I went on a bit and looked up the very first item of the references, an article on upper Canada. Guess what - wrong reference. You can't distinguish volume and issue and both are wrong. That means, whoever did it did not work from this reference, he copied it over from elsewhere getting it wrong. That being so, how can we trust it? This initial failure to check out is probably indicative of the whole thing. What good is this, editors? You are willing to bicker viciously to get YOUR opinion in, but you are not willing to do the work to get it right? I suggest you stop work on WP immediately, take some time to think it over, and come back with the appropriate attitude. Unless this article is mainly correct, it is worthless to anyone, is it not? As no one is getting paid for it, there is no value; you are wasting your and our time. If you can't do it right, don't do it!Dave (talk) 15:41, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- Good points on the reference issues in two paragraphs above; I've been seeing the same problem and encourage editors to take the time to do it right. A general website isn't sufficient; the entire source can be removed and [citation needed] added.Parkwells (talk) 17:26, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
Changes to cites
You've accused me of something I didn't do; I didn't change any cites nor their formats. In fact, several of my changes were lost because someone else was editing the article, so perhaps it went back to before the version you had corrected. Can't figure out exactly what happened, but I didn't do it.Parkwells (talk) 17:55, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- I am sorry parkwell. Please accept my heartfelt apology. I also seem to be troubled by persons trying to edit when I am editing. Well after all it is a popular article and we are all trying to get it right. Probably the number of collisions is proportional to the editing population. You would think with so many editors it would start coming out right! Again I apologize. I'm going on with the show until the references at least are correctly formatted. Ciao.Dave (talk) 18:03, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, Dave, I understand (and agree cite format is important.) This article reminded me I needed to copy the templates to a page where they're easier to find when I need them. Good luck with the work - we know there's an audience for careful, good work; that's the reason to work on these.Parkwells (talk) 20:22, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
Links to pay sites
Extended discussion about links to pay sites and in general is not about this article
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Generally we do not link to sites that require you to buy the book. I'm pretty sure of this policy. During my earlier years on WP I don't know how many times I had links to Amazon removed, but it was a lot. And yet, Amazon lets you look at as much of some books as does Google! These are commercial sites. The user can find his own way to them without us. The same thing applies to JSTOR. Every once in a while JSTOR gives you a free article (not very often). I don't hesitate to link to that, as the article contains no reference to JSTOR, only to the original publisher. Sometimes they give you a free first page. Mostly you have to pay for the article at a price they advertise. If you belong to an organization that belongs to JSTOR you can get the article for free. Again, the user can find his own way to that. Most people can't afford the membership or the article and it is WP policy not to present pay articles to anyone as references. Please, stop putting the link to JSTOR on the reference. Go to my home page, look in the upper right corner, tell me what you see there and what it means. I'm not a sysadmin but often sysadmins take an interest in what I do. I will in fact push this until one does decide. No pay sites, please.Dave (talk) 22:01, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
While I don't have a particular viewpoint one way or another about JSTORS what I suggest is lets go get an official wiki ruling and let us all live by what is said. What we don't need is charges of vandalism if you revert/insert et all. I don't believe anyone in this discussion is that type of editor. Let us go to source and get a ruling and be done with this.Tirronan (talk) 01:19, 23 September 2010 (UTC)
A recursive reference is a reference on a reference. It is a sort of chain of references. The first note gives you the ref. The note on the note gives you an additional ref. This is the first and only time I have seen the arrangement. It strikes me as very clever, but like many clever things, unuseful. It requires the notes be below the reference list or it does not work. The way WP has designed this autonote system is, you have one list of notes. Sometimes you might have two sets of notes, one for sources, one for extra information. In that case the sets are parallel to each other. First you get one set followed by the other. You put the reflist for each in different headings. To avoid the limitations of notes on notes, I ask you to make your second note into just an ordinary note. We often have notes right next to each other. I am going to finish implementing the harvref system someone started. To do that I must change the order of the final section and to do that I must remove the notes on notes. Please, if you want those notes, just put them in the text next to the other one with which you wanted to associate it. Eveything will then work fine. Thanks.Dave (talk) 22:20, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
An issue has come up that has come up before on WP. You can read the discussion above. No resolution was reached before. It concerns JSTOR. As most of you know you cannot give links in references or external links to people who are selling books or articles, such as Amazon or many of the others; i.e., to commercial sites. We aren't helping anyone to sell here, or are not supposed to be. Is JSTOR such a site? In order to read most of their articles you have to join and to join you have to pay. However, everyone lives near a public library and most public libraries belong to JSTOR so working through a library site you can read JSTOR articles without payment (except taxes). Some would argue that by giving a JSTOR article in a reference or link you improve its verifiability. Therefore JSTOR should be allowed. Others would argue that verifiabilty does not exist without access to the article and if anyone has to pay to join then verifiability is not universal, only for those who can join, some of whom have to pay. There is no dispute concerning Amazon and not even much of a dispute concerning Google. For some reason there is a dispute concerning JSTOR. I mistrust that, but then I can prove nothing. What I for one think would be useful is more senior opinions than the ones I have seen. Anyone can jump in of course. We do have a case in this article where one editor wants to remove a JSTOR link and two others to keep it. The one who wants to remove it is a reviewer and one of the others won't say who he is. So what do you think, people? Is JSTOR a special case or just a clever purveyor of articles?Dave (talk) 23:59, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
Ok folks, 1st off Rjensen isn't a vandal, 2nd if there is a ranking system here I sure don't know what it is, 3rd lets get a ruling on JSTORS and I am asking everyone to back it down now please.Tirronan (talk) 02:54, 23 September 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for your de facto cooperation. For JSTOR, save yourselves the trouble, that book is not even the right one for the references given in the article. However, if we could have gotten a ruling we would have. Now the same issue has come up with Quaestia, same deal as JSTOR. I belong to Quaestia myself. You cannot link to Quaestia; it is a pay organization. Unless you log in, you don't get your page. To log in you have to join. Sorry, them's the rules. The source is a good one - it is Horsman - and since I belong I can check you on it. We just can't link to it. There is a limit to how helpful you can be. I see someone went ahead of me and did some work. Thanks. I realize now the meaning of the hidden tag in the links. You people are all secondary school or belated teenagers. Boys, in a few short years you are going out into a pretty serious world where you like as not are going to be in danger of life and limb. I suggest you start getting serious. In the town I live in colonial 18-year-old's were going out to sea sometimes as ship's officers and even vessel owners. What are you doing? On WP I have talked even to children who could hold their own with an adult. You don't fit that category. I don't have time for your boyish nonsense. I suggest you start thinking of growing up as you will be at a distinct disadvantage if you do not. Do you realize how absurd you sound? "a profound level of cluelessness." How long did it take you to think that one up, and why on earth would anyone think that was an intelligent thing to say? The key of course is that you are saying it to an adult. Are you having problems with your father? Maybe you better keep it in the family. For reply, don't bother. I do appreciate your helping to clean this article if it is you. I hope you can start finding positive and useful things to say, otherwise you aren;t going to find real life quite so amusing as you seem to think it is now. Best wishes. I only mean this for your own good.Dave (talk) 00:05, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
1..Does the book link go directly to the page refer-to in the reference or just a general page about a book?
2...Does the book link make the reference verifiability easier to check for all users regardless of Internet experience?
3Does removing a book link from a references make it harder to verify the content in question and the context of the reference its self?
4..Does the linked book page have an option of a "Full view" thus limiting the amount of promotion of the book site that is seen? ..So what to link..According to Template:Cite book It should only be linked to the pages in-question and not to the pay sites ingereral ..SO if no visible page is available it should NOT be linked. url: URL of an online location where text of the book can be found. If applicable, should point to the specific page(s) referenced.
Please, no JSTOR. The most current insertion has us referencing JSTOR as part of the reference. We are not endorsing JSTOR, as far as I know. They can look the article up wherever they please, not necessarily JSTOR. And, JSTOR definitely is a pay site. The site given states that you can purchase the article for $9.00. It is quite clear, they are selling the article for $9.00. Otherwise you cannot access the article through the link given. This is NOT a link to the article, only to the pay site. Thanks.Dave (talk) 10:17, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
Admins, you might want to consider putting the block up again on this. Just a suggestion; there obviously is an edit war going on here. I'm an autoreviewer. Thanks.Dave (talk) 14:58, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
Dave you write "In the future I wish you would identify yourself earlier". See the history of my user page: it has not been changed since March; See my second posting to this page "I'm here because user:Tirronan left a message on my talk page. The first thing I will declare is that I am an administrator as it is an issue that seems to concern Dave. However Dave being an administrator does bring some responsibility for overseeing editorial behaviour, it grants no special privileges regarding the content of articles, or insight into the content of articles. ..." Dave there is no need for this article to be blocked, no one has taken any action to warrant it. If they do, and their actions are seen as disruptive, then the editor concerned can be blocked. Tirronan there is no official ruling on content that can be made, we can go through the dispute resolution process. I see little point in doing so as it will be a waste of time, but if Dave wants to initiate an RFC or post a question at reliable sources noticeboard he is of course free to do so (with the proviso that this is not a licence to go forum shopping which would be seen as disruptive). -- PBS (talk) 22:02, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
..i see Dave has opted out of editing the page - i cant speak for all....However i dont believe anyones intent was for Dave to stop adding his good additions. But rather to simply leave in the links that he believes are unvalued. My main concern is Dave simply going to still be deleting things at will of this nature in other articles? I dont realy see a resolution here but rather Dave saying hes moving on and will continue removing this as per his views of spam and not what was stated here or Template:JSTOR, WP:PAYWALL, Template:Cite book, Template:Cite journal {{subscription required}}, etc. Moxy (talk) 22:44, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
1. A free online version of the full text 2. An online version of the full text, for which subscription is required 3. An abstract or information page, if no DOI or PMID record is available
So...what are we to do...do we look at all his edits (is this even possible) and reinstate the links he has been deleting for years... and what about future edits of this nature now that he is fully aware of the current position on this links. Would be best if he could say he understands that an rfc procedure may occur. I do believe that all his previous deletions were done in good faith. However this cant go on. Moxy (talk) 01:00, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
I'd like to hear what others have to say, I'd like to make sure I am not in left field on this.Tirronan (talk) 01:26, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
Since we are down to the reasonable discussion phase I don't mind discussing reasonably. It seems to me the communication problem is occurring because we are on different mental tracks or thought sequences. I agree with everything you just said about JSTORS. I appreciate its value in serving as a clearing-house of articles. However, look at your environment - you are not the general public, you're academia. Most people do not get a PhD and are not acquainted with academic tools. This encyclopedia is aimed at the general public, not the academic establishemnt. If you read the writings if Jim Wales you see that he had considerable dissatisfaction with academia, who were in his view hoarding the information. I know in my field, archaeology, hoarding is so bad that often the archaeologist dies unpublished losing all the priceless and non-repeatable results of excavation. Jim wanted to create a free encyclopedia and give it away to the masses, especially of the third world. One of my commentators made a remark about being too cheap to spend the $9.00 on the article. But, for most people, $9.00 for an article is more than they can afford. If you think about this, I am sure you will see that public education is quite a different thing. Massachusetts has long recognized the difference. Some poor kid cannot even buy his lunch, and he has been told to do a report on the war of 1812, and along comes a PhD and says, well, kid, look it up in JSTORS - don't be too cheap to spend the $9.00. How do we do something for the minds of the average or marginally average men? I do understand your point of view. Please excuse me for fighting on behalf of the common man. JSTORS fills a needed clearing house role, but mainly not for the average man. So you see, I am not really attacking JSTORS or your valuation of it. I am saying, we are not all geniuses, let's give the common man break. You have based your WP argument on verifiabilty. I understand. However, let's look at that peacefully for a moment. These articles were not originally published by JSTOR, which is only a clearing house. They all have journals and dates. The public can find the article at many locations (typically). Our citations however, often leave that information off and just say "in JSTOR." For the poor and ordinary, the non-academic, who can't pay for the membership or know enough to want to seek it, is that verifiable, really? This is for your consideration, not for debate.Dave (talk) 13:17, 28 September 2010 (UTC) We all agree, the disruptions should stop. I have a few suggestions. We should address the causes not the results. I think you realize that and currently are trying to fix the causes. The thing that attracted me was the bad references. The article has been around for a long time, it needs to be finished up. I see you are doing that. If the formats are correct and everything is in order the article will attract only subject-interest attention. Then the tags of dissatisfaction were another significant factor. I see you are getting them off. If you give the article loving attention it will repay you. I think threatening and formal procedures are the last thing likely to work. I know that, being an intelligent man, you will give means and methods some serious thought. What good does it do to get good contributions and take them off again for the sake of a power struggle? Frankly that is the main complaint I have heard about WP and the main reason why many skilled people I know will no longer contribute to WP. One has to give a thought to long-term strategy. "WP, the encyclopedia that anyone can edit." Is that really true? Not unless we make it so. Thanks for listening. I look forward to seeing this article made into a good one after you finish with it. I am happy to cede it to you in the interest of peaceful development.Dave (talk) 13:17, 28 September 2010 (UTC) I don't know when I can get back to this, I have so much to do.Dave (talk) 13:17, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
Moxy asked me to come back over here presumably to gaze at this. All right, I have gazed. I think some of your concerns are legitimate. The rest is just rude behavior. For your legitimate concerns, I think we have to focus on the administrator among you. Admins are WP officers and have the final authority unless overridden by higher admins. Committees and consultations are fine but they are only advisory. Even the elections are only advisory. We vote for the candidates and the owners may or may not follow the vote in selecting board members. Tirronen has some concerns which to some degree reflect the concerns of others. I believe I have already said I recognize an area of ambiguity in the concept of paysites and commercialism. The sites we mentioned are in the grey area and that is why all this is occurring. Tirronen has ruled that JSTOR is to be allowed. Unless I appeal to a higher authority or unless one steps in, it is incumbent on me not to change any more. That does not bother me. Since the ruling has been made, I don't mind following it. I presume the clearly commercial sites are not affected by this ruling. I don't believe, tirronen, you are saying the template listed above can't be used with it, the "subscription required". In contrast to what some of you are saying, I am a rule follower once the rule has been established. It hasn't been universally established but it appears in process. In the meantime, you are right, it shouldn't be deleted. So go ahead, put as many as you like in. The more the better. This will bring them to public attention and we may be able to finally get a definitive universal ruling. You admit, tirronen, you are not universal, only one admin. So, in answer to your legitimate concerns, no, I will not delete any more anywhere on WP until this matter is finally resolved (which may be some time). Satisfied? Now, for what I may have already deleted - well, I don't remember ever seeing any JSTOR links outside of this article. Usually people don't use JSTOR. I only work on select articles anyway, not in general. You are welcome to check anything I have ever done. I must say I am totally surprised that having created an autoreviewer, for which my work was already checked, WP would now turn around and say, OK, we are going to reverse everything and revert everything you've ever done. It seems to me these suggestions were made by persons of malicious personal intent. Frankly, moxy, I suspect you of having malicious personal intent because you do not like my criticisms. Shame on you. I will be back to this. What I will do is, in the round of my articles if I see any places where I remember I deleted a JSTOR non-free articles I will fix that place. I don't delete references to free articles if I can help it. I've used page 1 in JSTOR myself, but the information was on that page. I have nothing against JSTOR or any of the others for that matter. I just don't think we should be endorsing subscriptions and giving them advertising when we have to ask for money ourselves. But, we've been over that. Well I believe that covers your legitimate concerns. As for your other talk, such as being a Dave cop, that seems quite irrational to me. Why would you need to police an autoreviewer? If you did, why would WP make me an autoreviewer? As far as reverting all my stuff, well, all I can say is, you go right ahead, do that. I believe I'm a valued contributor. Let me outline the way I procede. I look first at links and references. They have to be in "cite" format, you know that. That is where the commercial sites get an opening. Also there are copyright considerations. We can't alter or improve on their names and we don't comment on their sites. This is all standard stuff. From there I go on to content. There's nothing different about me. I fight hard for what I believe is right. I accept what has to be in the end. I don't see how else you can get good articles. Now, I'm only consenting to be here because this seems to be a more formal hearing, so to speak. Always defend yourselves at hearings. I'm not too proud to do that and I don't think I am superior, so just get that nonsense out of your heads. As far as asking for any forgiveness is concerned, for what? For trying to obtain good articles? No, no apology is due. You should be apologizing to me for all the excellent contributions I have made. That gets me around to the topic of rudeness. I would appreciate it if you would quit being rude. I'm trying to help here. Show some sanity; I can't be a great editor one minute and a long-term vandal the next. I feel you are getting carried away by the edit war that has consumed page after page of discussion and my advice to you is, if you want good articles on WP, don't conduct edit wars. Now, for this article, I am actually done with it, as I said. I reviewed the content. I liked it. There is an organization problem and that involves the whole set of 1812 articles. I don't feel up to it. I hope someone does and I hope he gets a different treatmant than what you are giving me. How you behave is your own responsibility. You are responsible for your own consciences! The formatting work I saw to be done I did until you took it over. So you don't prefer my formats, you prefer some other formats. Fine. As I said, it isn't the code but the look I care about. Two people do it different ways. That's to be expected. You are using your authority to override my way. Well, as long as it looks good and may be animprovement, that is fine. It appears as though my work is done. I don't need to cop out of anything; there is nothing further to cop out of. You've taken it over. Now, with all you people on it, why is this not a superior article by now? What is the story? Have you WP first in your minds or other more personal reasons? I think I brought these issues up before. I put the articles first myself. If that is not what WP wants then I fear I do not know what it does want and will stop trying to seriously contribute. You summoned me to this hearing. I did not despise you but came. I believe I have answered you concerns. Kindly start being polite and repsectful to me. Resolve this issue whatever way you think best. If it is going to be in an irrational and malicious way than WP truly is not worth spending any more time on. I'll be available for more hearing-type questions if any ambiguity remains. I will not be available for more maliciousness. I do have one more offer. I notice tirronen began in a reasonable vein. He said he would miss my contributions. Well, tirronen, put up .... I offer to attempt to cut down on the size of this article and reorganize it as a group with the other articles. I could only work on it sporadically and I would require more cooperation than what I have now. These articles certainly are challenging. I am a professional writer and I might be able to do it, but not if I have to fight you. Maybe you would prefer to do it yourself or with some with someone with whom you get along better. Now, I have things I need to do. If it is all right with you I think I wil get about them. If you do contact me make sure it is necessary and relevant and not in the same malicious vein. Why don;t you pick someone else to contact me?Dave (talk) 15:59, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
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Aftermath, outcome, consequences, results
Well, I appreciate all your points of view. I notice they were being amply given long before I got here and I did not expect they would cease to be amply given. Something has to be holding this article up. I am making some progress on references and links. You have stopped reverting my reforms. Thanks. A second major difficulty with the article is the extremely lengthy political and social analyses. An attempt has been made to offload much of it per the suggestion concerning length. Unfortunately nothing gets deleted or condensed. So, the result is mutiplication. Have you noticed, we have an Aftermath, an Outcome of Conflict, Consequences, and then a different main, Results of the War of 1812? Don't you think that is a bit much for aftermath? I suppose that whoever does these things does not dare to condense or delete for fear of more of this incredibly huge discussion, much huger than in just about any other article I have worked on. Someone has to take some action here. It seems as though I can either join your gigantic discussions more than I have or work on the article. Being an experienced reviewer I chose the latter. I do apologize if I offend your various sentiments, tastes, opinions and whatever. You are not unique- there have been and are some pretty terrible articles on WP. An article gets terrible when this sort of thing happens. But there is hope! I have seen some of the worst turn into some of the best! That is what I am trying to do here. Don't think you can evade it forever by discussion. Eventually what happens is experts get appointed to straighten it out and all your huge (and mainly pointless) discussion gets archived and no one ever reads a word of it again. So, whatever you may view me to be, I assure you I am only the forerunner. Eventually the admins do get serious about articles such as this. Don't get me wrong, there is much good about it! Now, for those that are interested, let's get on with it, shall we? I want to try and condense and offload all these aftermaths without losing any points of view. So now in addition to formatting changes I will be making content changes. Ordinarily I would have gone on but I have a certain amount of time I want to spend on troubled articles and this one needs it. Again, for those who have been inclined to cooperate, thanks. For those who are not, well, you puzzle me greatly. I have no idea why you'd be doing it. I will be adding sections to here as I discover problems. Unless your comments seem critical and need an answer I will not be answering those. If you have alternative solutions I certainly would like to see those. Ciao.Dave (talk) 09:51, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
- Dave I don't have much of an issue with a rewrite and is required. I do take issue with some of your comments towards other editors and apparently addressing them as children to be chastised. Regardless of your editorial skills I don't remember a job description calling for that. I don't expect to see that kind of behavior again. I'll go a bit further in that it is not your job to lecture us as children either. If you can't stop, get off the talk page.
- I've remained mostly silent to this point as I think that many of the website links that I reviewed after you called them out flat did not belong in this article. Yes I think we don't need 3 separate articles to deal with the outcome of the war. However, it must be stated, in this war far more than most the outcomes were far more important that the war itself. Boiled down to its essentials, we have 3 years of offensives by both sides that failed every time. So much was changed by the war that its worthy of a good 1/3 of the article.
- The reason you have such a meandering article has been too much pandering and frankly too much non-stop fighting about partisan issues that have gone on far too long. We've had a 3 year campaign by one fellow to get the outcome box changed and a forced mediation cabal for another section in this article that its fair to say most of us didn't want or need to see here. We've had many a visit by POV warriors and vandals all who absolutely know better than we who bothered to research the war.
- Mostly what has ruffled my feathers is the assumed superiority in tone, and the lecturing of us by you that was not asked for... shut up with the comments about other editors, just get on with the edits and a short comment ABOUT THE CONTENT and leave it at that. The rest of the commentary isn't required or asked for.Tirronan (talk) 13:02, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
- Hello Mr. Tirronen, What is this, one-sided advice? Look back through here - do you see one polite thing that was said to me? I saw a bunch of immature juvenile statements concerning me so I concluded I was dealing with immature juveniles. If that is not so, I am at a loss to explain it. I am sorry your feathers are ruffled. I can't imagine anyone reverting something rightly formatted to something wrongly formatted, insisting on the wrong reversion and then calling the person who set it right four kinds of fool. Where were you when I was trying to set it right, standing by? Why didn't you jump in then, why now? But let us set that aside for the moment. Some of these editors such as you have some pretty good experience on here. And yet, this article is wrongly formatted and has been so for quite a long time. There is page after page of discussion and yet it still is all wrong. Why is it you experienced editors have not jumped in to fix it and insist on it staying fixed? Usually people thank me for doing the work to set it right! Obviously whatever has prompted several archives of discussion and prompted you to jump in on THEIR side is largely what is wrong with this article. No one is allowed to fix it! Would you care to explain that and explain why you are a part of it? I think I can identify mature statements and behavior when I see it. There is one editor who spoke maturely; he said since I seemed to know what I was doing concerning harvref he was going to defer to me. He did, so now the harvrefs are getting fixed. Apart from him there is a considerable deficit of the qualities required to do a good article. You people have gotten into a kind of negative downward spiral here that has to be broken before we can get the article fixed! You fill up kB after kB of this kind of pure stuff and forget all about the article. I'm only bothering to answer you at all because you seem to be an experienced editor. We need to break out of this spiral, would you not agree? I think you really do as you mentioned it. I'm sorry, standing around a politely allowing someone to revert the wrong without discussion is not my idea of how to break the cycle, wouldn't you agree? That is NOT how it works on other articles that need work and NOT how it ordinarily works on WP. That is why I ask you, what on earth are you people doing here? Practicing your efficacy at edit wars? So, I am going to personally appeal to you to cease and desist from this long, disgusting edit war, which produces nothing but bad articles, and start working to improve the articles. I wouldn't expect to see any more of my changes reverted without discussion, and none of them reverted to something that is manifestly wrong. And after this moral lecture on your part I would not expect to see any more insulting disparagements of Botteville for trying to fix things that are wrong. Whew. I know there are plenty of editors. I know this war has been going on non-stop for as you say three years. If the admins are not going to put a stop to it then it is up to us experienced editors to do so and if we don't stick together that isn't going to happen. It is prety plain I am needed here. What good is to be experienced on WP if you cannot make a difference, if you cannot stop wars and start things in the right direction once more? Why even bother? I'm sorry to inflct this lecture on YOU but it seems called for. I do hope you get over it soon. It seems to me it is time for a shock not to go around rewarding wrong editors for being wrong. None of the people who brought me up on WP rewarded ME for doing it wrong. I could either do it right or get off WP. The message was not lost so I'm passing it on to you. For my progress, well, I'm making it blow by blow. I always start around the edges and work to the center, which is what I am doing now. It has not escaped me that much of this article is well-written and in fact balanced. Maybe the edit war did achieve that, I don't know. We aren't writing a book here, so like it or not some consolidation must occur. 117 kB is too long. What I usually look for in that case is duplicate material - it has been offloaded but left here. Or, articles covering the same material, which could be placed in one article. This process helps me to identify subjects that might be spit off. That is what I am trying to do after I fix the formatting, is that all right with YOU? Do you think you can assist me in this effort? If so we might be able to fix the length and sprawing problems without taking away from the goodness of the article. It just needs some polishing up here to make it shine. Wouldn't you rather have worked on a shiny article than a tarnished one? I don;t mind listening to you as long as you listen back. This one-sided morality is really too much. Well, at some point I will be taking a break for a few weeks. I do not feel I am at the point where I can do that yet. I will let you know. Anyway thanks for your advice. Do take it, will you?Dave (talk) 01:12, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- The rest of the commentary isn't required or asked for.Tirronan (talk) 01:32, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- I believe in the do unto others rule Mr. Tirronan. If you don't like my commentray don't offer me any. I do not volunteer these things. I'm sorry there's war on. Let's you and I drop out. Thanks.Dave (talk) 01:43, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- I'm unaware of any revert that I have done to a single change over the last week. I've noted the personal attacks and additional insults. I'm going to ask you to refrain from more of the same. Any more attempted slights and we can take it to the powers that be.Tirronan (talk) 17:46, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
- I believe in the do unto others rule Mr. Tirronan. If you don't like my commentray don't offer me any. I do not volunteer these things. I'm sorry there's war on. Let's you and I drop out. Thanks.Dave (talk) 01:43, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- The rest of the commentary isn't required or asked for.Tirronan (talk) 01:32, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Hello Mr. Tirronen, What is this, one-sided advice? Look back through here - do you see one polite thing that was said to me? I saw a bunch of immature juvenile statements concerning me so I concluded I was dealing with immature juveniles. If that is not so, I am at a loss to explain it. I am sorry your feathers are ruffled. I can't imagine anyone reverting something rightly formatted to something wrongly formatted, insisting on the wrong reversion and then calling the person who set it right four kinds of fool. Where were you when I was trying to set it right, standing by? Why didn't you jump in then, why now? But let us set that aside for the moment. Some of these editors such as you have some pretty good experience on here. And yet, this article is wrongly formatted and has been so for quite a long time. There is page after page of discussion and yet it still is all wrong. Why is it you experienced editors have not jumped in to fix it and insist on it staying fixed? Usually people thank me for doing the work to set it right! Obviously whatever has prompted several archives of discussion and prompted you to jump in on THEIR side is largely what is wrong with this article. No one is allowed to fix it! Would you care to explain that and explain why you are a part of it? I think I can identify mature statements and behavior when I see it. There is one editor who spoke maturely; he said since I seemed to know what I was doing concerning harvref he was going to defer to me. He did, so now the harvrefs are getting fixed. Apart from him there is a considerable deficit of the qualities required to do a good article. You people have gotten into a kind of negative downward spiral here that has to be broken before we can get the article fixed! You fill up kB after kB of this kind of pure stuff and forget all about the article. I'm only bothering to answer you at all because you seem to be an experienced editor. We need to break out of this spiral, would you not agree? I think you really do as you mentioned it. I'm sorry, standing around a politely allowing someone to revert the wrong without discussion is not my idea of how to break the cycle, wouldn't you agree? That is NOT how it works on other articles that need work and NOT how it ordinarily works on WP. That is why I ask you, what on earth are you people doing here? Practicing your efficacy at edit wars? So, I am going to personally appeal to you to cease and desist from this long, disgusting edit war, which produces nothing but bad articles, and start working to improve the articles. I wouldn't expect to see any more of my changes reverted without discussion, and none of them reverted to something that is manifestly wrong. And after this moral lecture on your part I would not expect to see any more insulting disparagements of Botteville for trying to fix things that are wrong. Whew. I know there are plenty of editors. I know this war has been going on non-stop for as you say three years. If the admins are not going to put a stop to it then it is up to us experienced editors to do so and if we don't stick together that isn't going to happen. It is prety plain I am needed here. What good is to be experienced on WP if you cannot make a difference, if you cannot stop wars and start things in the right direction once more? Why even bother? I'm sorry to inflct this lecture on YOU but it seems called for. I do hope you get over it soon. It seems to me it is time for a shock not to go around rewarding wrong editors for being wrong. None of the people who brought me up on WP rewarded ME for doing it wrong. I could either do it right or get off WP. The message was not lost so I'm passing it on to you. For my progress, well, I'm making it blow by blow. I always start around the edges and work to the center, which is what I am doing now. It has not escaped me that much of this article is well-written and in fact balanced. Maybe the edit war did achieve that, I don't know. We aren't writing a book here, so like it or not some consolidation must occur. 117 kB is too long. What I usually look for in that case is duplicate material - it has been offloaded but left here. Or, articles covering the same material, which could be placed in one article. This process helps me to identify subjects that might be spit off. That is what I am trying to do after I fix the formatting, is that all right with YOU? Do you think you can assist me in this effort? If so we might be able to fix the length and sprawing problems without taking away from the goodness of the article. It just needs some polishing up here to make it shine. Wouldn't you rather have worked on a shiny article than a tarnished one? I don;t mind listening to you as long as you listen back. This one-sided morality is really too much. Well, at some point I will be taking a break for a few weeks. I do not feel I am at the point where I can do that yet. I will let you know. Anyway thanks for your advice. Do take it, will you?Dave (talk) 01:12, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Mr. Moxy's blank line
Hello Mr. Moxy, I see you are trying to tell me something. You seem a little impatient. I just now noticed you. I took the trouble of looking up template:-. The rest of you, Mr. Moxy insists in putting one of those at the end of the "See also." You know, I rarely see one of those? It seems to have an obscure software effect. It probably did have some effect at one point. I am not sure where things stand now. Leaving it out had no effect that I could see, except for the blank line. The template write-up mentions "the ugly additional blank line." I presume you must know something I don't know, some evil bug that might become obvious in the article. Do you care to tell me what that is? This is not sarcasm, I'd like to know. I see the portals are there. Does it have to do with those? Why are you inserting "the additional ugly blank line?" Hm. I notice that the write-up recommends template:clear for cases in which the line is less desirable. May I? I am going to try it. Again, I'm quite amenable to hearing why THIS article has to have the blank line. I've already encountered a situation where one error was being condoned by introduction of another and I am wondering it that is so here. If so, would it not be better to correct the first? So, I'm putting the "clear" in but only tentatively. I look forward to your explanation.Dave (talk) 01:29, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Well, I put the "clear" in. The blank is still there. I confess I'm stymied. Can you enlighten us on this Mr. Moxy? Why do we have to have the blank line?Dave (talk) 01:34, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Wait, wait - I added an item and the line went away. It works after all. I still would like to know what difficulty the "-" or "clear" avoid, if you feel like it, Mr. Moxy.Dave (talk) 01:39, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- {{Reflist|colwidth=30em}}....Will not work if the section above it intrudes..So {{-}} or {{clear}} will allow spacing so coding will work...I take it you still use IE to edit Wikipedia should try any other browser and you will see the proper outcome. Multiple columns are generated by using CSS3. Too many references can fixed by having columns. Using {{reflist|2}} will create a two-column reference list, and {{reflist|3}} will create a three-column list. Using {{reflist|colwidth=30em}} will allow the browser to automatically choose the number of columns based on the width of the web browser. Choose a column width that's appropriate for the average width of the references on the page.
- Mozilla Firefox and other Gecko-based browsers support multiple columns with two caveats:
- may create widows
- may mangle long URLs in the printable version; see Image:Wikipediareflistoverlap.gif for an example
- Internet Explorer through version 8 does not support the column property
- Safari through 4.03, Google Chrome and probably other WebKit based browsers have a bug that breaks links in multiple columns; the column feature has been removed for these browsers until the bug is resolved; see Template:Reflist/Safari testcase for details and information on enabling WebKit columns per editor.
- This issue has been resolved in Safari 5 and Chrome 5. WebKit support will be returned once the usage reports indication a preponderance of adoption.
....Moxy (talk) 03:27, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot mox. You're right, with my browser I don't see any of that. If I see any more I will make sure not to remove them. You imply I can use clear if the space appears.Dave (talk) 05:11, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Off topic For fun you should try Mozilla Firefox is free and i find much more user friendly with Wikipidia and comes with a spell check that works normally on Wiki. Plus all the extra layout coding you will see...no odd gaps..Headers in the right places...Fixed image sizes and of course nice columns and auto text justifying.Moxy (talk) 05:24, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Right to the Point I got WP open under Mozilla. What a diff! All the columns come out, everything. The question now arises as to whether to work under my vanilla comcast browser or Mozilla. Probably most people are reading it with a vanilla browser. I don't want to use features they cannot read. On the other hand I seem to be missing the point of some special code. I don't want to meddle with anyone's set-up. Maybe I better work in Mozilla for a while, see how it works out. Thanks for pointing out these higher-level nuances.Dave (talk) 11:18, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot mox. You're right, with my browser I don't see any of that. If I see any more I will make sure not to remove them. You imply I can use clear if the space appears.Dave (talk) 05:11, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
ref=harv
Dave I think with this series of edits you have bought a little confusion to the article. See Template:Citation#Anchors for Harvard referencing templates and the following section Template:Citation#IDs must be unique. There is no need to put in a specific id on each long citation. Instead simply use "ref=harv" and the combination of last= and year= will make the ID unique. Allowing the system to us its own default values makes it less likely that mistakes will happen. I am going to change a couple in the article to demonstrate. But if you dislike the simplicity then revert the changes out. -- PBS (talk) 04:52, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- This edit by user:Geometricks at 07:52 on 4 July 2010 converted some dates from 1990 to 1989 including the long citation but it missed some of them. I will change the last few now. There are further problems with the Hickey citations. For example footnote 39 says "Hickey, War of 1812 p. 183" the trouble is that there are two long citation for Hickey with the name "War of 1812 ...", so someone is going to have to go through the history of the article and find out which one the original editor who inserted the footnote intended it to be. -- PBS (talk) 05:35, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- I fixed fn 39 by using a better source--a detailed book by Gilbert on Tecumseh's role in the warRjensen (talk) 06:02, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- I was going to answer you Phil but your typing bombed out mine. Fortunately I copied it. I'll give it to you in a minute. No, no ,no on that last, Phil. Now you are beginning to see what is wrong with the refs. They only look like refs. A lot of junior editors do that, kluge something phony up that looks like a ref. The ref might not have been valid to begin with. What I do is check the book on the Internet. Going back to the original editor and contacting him about what he intended to say is going to plunge you even deeper into the tangled thicket, especially if he gets defensive. However, do it your way. I only got about 1/4 through the refs. I'm totally delighted someone else around here but me is taking an interest. By the way here is what I was going to say. With regard to any possible reversion,
- Why should I do that? I started using using the ref=CITEREF because it seemed the only surefire way to cover all cases. There are a bunch of different ways to use "harv." harvnb with a CITEREF is only one of them. Needless to say you can find the total writeup at template:harvnb. Most of the ones I saw in articles didn't work for one reason or another so the editor just abandoned it. For myself I resolved to do it one standard way if I could. CITEREF always works. You can put anything in there, it does not have to be author and date. You might not have an author; you might not have a date. There is also a loc parameter. However, if you have a simpler way I don't object in the slightest. Change them all for all I care, if you have the inclination. Its the functional level that I care about not the code level. If it does the same thing it is golden. What was there were what I would describe as incomplete harvard references: the biblio item was not there so you couldn't tell what book it was, or there were no page numbers, or no dates, so you couldn't tell what edition it was. You might as well have had no ref at all, but it was misleading; it looked like a ref until you tried to find the book. As of this moment I have not looked at your efforts. One feature of the harv ref I especially like is the link to the biblio item. One click and you are there and then you just back arrow to get back. Partial harv refs without the auto features are next to useless. However, as I speak I am sure you have found a simpler way to create the same effect with SOME references. I only got 1/4 of the way through that incredibly long list. (However, I have seen hundreds of notes in an article). I don't know if I shall go to the trouble of switching to your method. I may do it for some of the rest not yet done. If yours does the same, why on earth would I revert it? I think you people have me confused with an edit warrior of the type you have seen far too many of in that article. No, I'm not an edit warrior. I'm turning in now. I'd like to see the refs done before I move on this time. I think content is a little too much for this session. Too many WP would-be samurai tripping over their own bootlaces. So the major content problems, how to organize and distribute all this fine English prose remain unsolved. Ciao.Dave (talk) 05:57, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Treaty and aftermath
I moved some sections on Treaty & postwar around -- grouping the treaty material together got rid of duplication and keeps events together. The section on memory gets renamed (historians are very keen on memory of events). There were no substantive changes. Rjensen (talk) 11:38, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Page numbers on Stagg
Stagg is cited in a disputed section. There are 2 references to his 1983 book, the name of which I had to get off the list of 1812 books. I presume that is the 1983 book; I can't find another. He is cited for two opinions in the article. No page numbers are given. The book is inaccessible on Google. Amazon does not display it. In my experience I should be suspicious of a manufactured reference. However, All the page numbers in this article I have checked so far have been valid. Not one imaginary reference (yet). So instead of deleting the reference or putting a tag on it I am going to assume in good faith the author of that section had page numbers but they got lost and ask you here to supply the page numbers, please. If you saw this in a regular book you would become very indignant. How are you suppose to find the place without the page number? This is no service. In fact the book editor would never let it through to begin with. So, since we are all focused on this now if someone could take the book off the shelf and look up the page numbers I would appreciate it. Thanks.Dave (talk) 16:18, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Inconsistencies
I like the reorganization and new headings in the article. There are couple of inconsistencies, which should be addressed. The lede says that the war was fought in four theatres: the Atlantic Ocean, the US east coast, at and around the US-Canada border and the coast of the Gulf of Mexico. The section titled "Theatres of War" says there were three theatres (presumably the Atlantic Ocean and the US east coast were combined into one) and then goes on to add a fourth theatre not previously mentioned, Section 4.3 Creek War. This article says "Most historians consider the Creek War as part of the War of 1812, because the British supported them." The article on the Creek War says "It is sometimes considered to be part of the War of 1812." The subsection ===Historians' views=== seems to say that the majority of historians "often conclude that all three nations were the "real winners" of the War of 1812." yet a few sentences later it is stated that "A second minority view is that both the US and Britain won the war". So, is it the majority opinion or a minority view that everyone except the Natives won the war? Silverchemist (talk) 21:10, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
- good point. I regrouped all the Southern battles together. Since the two armies at New Orleans did not know a treaty had been signed and were following war plans made by their governments on the assumption the war would be still going on, it makes more sense to move the section here. On the Natives, it's unanimous that the Indians/First Nations were losers. Rjensen (talk) 06:41, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
- As for your last noted inconsistency, although I had written what was at the time was considered the final edit, I realized a day later that my final re-working included that inconsistency, and protested unsuccessfully that it needed to be resolved. But the principal contestants were by that point so punch-drunk and battle-weary, and so glad to have something that looked like a mutually-agreeable resolution, that they demurred. See the series of sections beginning with Talk:War of 1812/Archive 14#Last chance to comment on agreed version and with Wikipedia:Mediation Cabal/Cases/2009-11-11/War of 1812#First Folio. —— Shakescene (talk) 04:49, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reply. Reading the archived discussions for this article is a huge undertaking, so making edits to the article is like treading a minefield. I appreciate how passionate editors working on this article can get. The problem is that it seems that sometimes the article is being written for the benefit of the editors, not the readers. In striving for nuanced perfection, we (editors) have created an article that at times could be unnecessarily confusing for its intended audience.
- I have noticed a few other inconsistencies, at least one in this article and others in the whole suite of articles on the War of 1812. Firstly, the size of the regular British Army at the beginning of the war. The infobox says 5200, but the section on the "Course of the war" says 6034. To confuse matters even more, French Wikipedia [[1]] infobox says 48163 (which doesn't correspond to any numbers in the English article).
- Regarding the belligerents given in articles on battles of the War of 1812, one belligerent is always United States while the others vary widely with no obvious reason in some cases.
Battle Belligerent Battle of Baltimore United Kingdom Battle of Buffalo Great Britain Battle of Beaver Dams United Kingdom, Native Americans Battle of the Chateauguay Lower Canada, Mohawk Nation Siege of Fort Mackinac Britain, Native Americans Battle of York Great Britain Battle of Malcolm's Mills Canadian Militia Skirmish at Farnham Church British Empire Raid on Elizabethtown United Kingdom Battle of Craney Island Britain
- Various editors have opinions about this too, I was using UK and that seems to cause issue. Might I suggest British Empire? As for the various 1st Nation's involved it might be better to call out the ones actually involved and on which side. The Cherokee were a large nation and always fought on the American side of the fence. The Sauk, and Mohawk, were on the British empire side and found in some battles.Tirronan (talk) 13:10, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
- I think we can put aside "Great Britain". On Wikipedia we usually use that name to describe entity created by the union of England and Scotland in 1707 and United Kingdom for the union of Great Britain and Ireland in 1801. We are not the only ones, see for example Britannica Acts of Union 1707 &1801.
- I'm not sure that in 1812, the concept of the British Empire as an entity existed. There was the United Kingdom and colonies, but unlike at the end of the 19th century when the Empire sent troops to the Boer War, can the British participants in the war be accurately described as Empire troops? Were the troops fighting for Empire or for the constituent parts? What do British reliable sources call British [Empire] troops? -- PBS (talk) 19:02, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
- the RS a) almost never use "United Kingdom" -- it's Great Britain or Britain. They call the country UK only after 1945. b) yes the RS use "Empire" all the time--here are some recent major books: # Judd, Denis. Empire: The British Imperial Experience, From 1765 to the Present (1996). # Lloyd; T. O. The British Empire, 1558-1995 Oxford University Press, 1996; # Louis, William. Roger (general editor), The Oxford History of the British Empire, 5 vols. (1998–99). vol 3 The Nineteenth Century (1998). Rjensen (talk) 19:53, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
- I think you are misunderstanding what I am saying. It is not that the British Empire existed and that people write about the British Empire, but for example in an article on a battle are the troops are described as imperial troops, and if when writing about the decisions of the government in London they refer to the Imperial Government/British Empire's government. -- PBS (talk) 01:26, 5 October 2010 (UTC)
- Apart from the passage of time and styles (and Irishmen's justifiable sensitivities), I think there might be several distinctions in play. For example, (1) Just using "imperial" in this era can carry the unintentional implication that you're referring to French Imperial forces, since neither the U.S., Britain, Ireland nor Canada had a head of state commonly called an Emperor, while France did, (2) by contrast, "imperial" was often later used in distinction to "home" or "the Mother Country", e.g. "the British troops were beleaguered until the timely arrival of imperial reinforcements", (3) In the beginning of this article (e.g. in the information box and lead sentences), "British Empire" is used as handy term to encompass both British North America and the British Isles. —— Shakescene (talk) 04:35, 5 October 2010 (UTC)
- I think you are misunderstanding what I am saying. It is not that the British Empire existed and that people write about the British Empire, but for example in an article on a battle are the troops are described as imperial troops, and if when writing about the decisions of the government in London they refer to the Imperial Government/British Empire's government. -- PBS (talk) 01:26, 5 October 2010 (UTC)
- My reading on this war leads me to believe that the overwhelming preference of historians is Britain with the occasional use of Great Britain. The two most recent British writers on this war are Jeremy Black and Jon Latimer. Black in The War if 1812 in the Age of Napoleon uses Britain almost exclusively in the text and in the index uses Britain with no reference to Great Britain. Latimer in 1812: War with America does use Great Britain in his index but his preferred choice in the text is Britain. The prominent Canadian historian Donald E. Graves does refer to Great Britain in the indexes of his books Where Right and Glory Lead! and Field of Glory, but his preferred choice in the text of these works is clearly Britain. The US historian Donald R. Hickey in his works The War of 1812 and Don't Give Up The Ship uses Britain overwhelmingly but does use Great Britain occasionally. Also, the common references are to the British Government and British troops.
- Historians make a clear distinction between British armed forces and Canadian militia. Referring to Canadian militia at the Battle of Malcolm's Mill is not being inconsistent. As to the inconsistency of the number of British soldiers that problem also applies to the US figures. The numbers of soldiers given for the start of the war for both Britain and the US in the info box are questionable. Dwalrus (talk) 04:40, 5 October 2010 (UTC)
- On the term Imperial--it was used by Brits. The OED quotes the great authority on English Law Blackstone: 1765 BLACKSTONE Comm. I. vii. 242 The meaning...of the legislature, when it uses these terms of empire and imperial, and applies them to the realm and crown of England, is only to assert that our king is equally sovereign and independent within these his dominions, as any emperor is in his empire. Edmund Burke in discussing the American colonies in 1774: 1774 BURKE Amer. Tax. Wks. II. 436 The parliament of Great Britain sits at the head of her extensive empire in two capacities: one as the local legislature of this island..The other, and..nobler capacity, is what I call her imperial character; in which..she superintends all the several inferiour legislatures. Rjensen (talk) 04:48, 5 October 2010 (UTC)
Latimer
It seems at first that two editions of Latimer's book have been cited:
this version from 10 March 2008 there is one citation
- Jon Latimer, 1812: War with America, Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press, 2007, pp.362-5.
and a reference in the reference section
- Latimer, Jon, 1812: War with America ISBN 0-674-02584-9
which links to this Google books entry
The problem with the entry came with this edit by user:Bender235 for some reason the
- Toll, Ian W., Six Frigates ISBN 139780393058475
- Caffrey, Kate, The Twilight's Last Gleaming ISBN 0-8128-1920-9
- Latimer, Jon, 1812: War with America ISBN 0-674-02584-9
were changed to
- Caffrey, Kate (1977). The Twilight's Last Gleaming: Britain vs. America 1812-1815. New York: Stein and Day. ISBN 0812819209.
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(help) - Latimer, Jon (2007). 1812: War with America. Cambridge: Belknap Press. ISBN 9780674025844.
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(help) - Toll, Ian W. (2006). Six Frigates: The Epic History of the Founding of the U.S. Navy. New York: W.W. Norton. ISBN 9780393058475.
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In making this edit Bender235 changed the Latimer publisher from Harvard University Press, 2007 ISBN 0674025849, 9780674025844 to Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, 2007 0674025849, 9780674025844 and the ISBN number was changed from the short one to the long one. BUT the citation is in fact the same edition. -- PBS (talk) 05:35, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
PCB Reference changes
Hi there PCB. Thanks for your personal communique. I appreciate the friendship. However, I still have to insist on conformance to WP methods and policies. You made a bunch of changes to the reference list. Let me take this opportunity to explain how the Harvard Reference system as it applies here works. The general purpose is to avoid having to repeat the name of the book over and over in every note. So, you put the full book citation in a reference list, except for the page numbers. Then in the text or in a note to the text you state the author name, the year and the page number(s), or you can state the chapter or section number. Our system links to the item in the reference list. You don't put the page numbers in the reference item because you might have other entries with different page numbers. I did call for page numbers. Thank you for your response. I realize ultimately you are trying to help. I am willing to work with you on this, and rjenson also who I see is taking a hand. The reference list should contain only items referenced. For other bibliography we have an additional reading and also a separate article for the annotated bibliography. The page numbers do not go in the reference item. That item might be only a chapter, in which case the numbers of the chapter can go in. I am going to start from the beginning again and fix the formats. Feel free to do it once you are sure you understand it. See template:harvnb (if you will). Meanwhile I have made a committment here and I will see it through. I will not abandon you on this. Feelings run high I know. So, I will try not to use language you may find provoking. Once you start looking into the template and the system you will get the hang of it. Never be too proud to learn. Thanks.Dave (talk) 10:17, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, PCB, I just noticed it was you who established the double annotation system. You know, I considered that but it didn't see there were enough additional notes. However now that it is there I approve. I see you can indeed do it. I may have wrongly identified you as the person moving the page numbers from the cites to the reference list. If that is so I certainly warmly apologize. It appears as though the person in question may be rjenson, who keeps inserting JSTOR. Since you do understand the system, perhaps you could help me out on this? I am going to create a special heading here on the topic.Dave (talk) 10:31, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
- OK PCB, here it comes. Are you ready? I judge that you can handle these references and that you can and will go through and straighten them out. Therefore I am going to give you a free hand. The field is yours. I will be be back to see how things are going. If they are going well I will not have much to do on it. I am following it through as I promised. In this case that means non-interference with someone who looks like he can do it. I'm totally against micro-management. It looks as though we have found the man for the job. You will have to deal with rjensen. He's your baby now. We can't be giving pay sites for references. This is either pure juvenile stubborness or as I suspect committment to JSTOR. Well, good luck. I will see you probably in a matter of weeks. This article remains on my list. Roses are red, violets are blue, the flying fickle finger of fate strikes you!Dave (talk) 10:55, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
Identification of edits
Please identify your edits. I can't tell who to address on this. Apparently there may be some misidentification. WP policy is to adequately identify your changes as yours. Thank you.Dave (talk) 10:31, 26 September 2010 (UTC)
missing information in the citations
- Stevens, Walter B. (1921). Centennial history of Missouri (the center state) one hundred years in the union. St. Louis: S. J. Clarke. See choice of volumes on the Internet Archive
- Theodore Roosevelt, The Naval War of 1812 Or the History of the United States Navy during the Last War with the United Kingdom to Which Is Appended an Account of the Battle of New Orleans. See choice of volumes on the Internet Archive.
At the moment both these authors and books are cited but neither includes volume number of page number. Without this information they are of little value. -- PBS (talk) 03:44, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- The Stevens references would appear to be in "Volume 1" for the pages around 480. Would someone like to work out the exact range? -- PBS (talk) 03:51, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
http://www.princedeneufchatel.com/ broken link now a go daddy park page selling stuffTirronan (talk) 04:39, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- the first Roosevelt reference is The Naval war of 1812, Par II (1814-1815) pp. 155-158
- The second seems to be The Naval war of 1812, Par II (1814-1815) taken from the Summary that starts on page 180 and more specifically 184. But two points the first is that I could not find a mention of "Another frigate had been destroyed to prevent it being captured on the stocks" and using it to support "Yet—as the Royal Navy was acutely aware—the U.S. Navy had won most of the single-ship duels during the war" is questionable.
- I do know about the frigate I believe Toll has something on it and believe it or the the actual account from the yard master to the Sec of the Navy (If I remember right) is available online as well. This happened with the burning of Washington I think it was the Brig Argus and I don't remember the frigate name.Tirronan (talk) 14:21, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- What Roosevelt says about that is in the summary section and is criticising "James in his "Naval Occurrences"": "the "New York, 46, destroyed at Washington," which was not destroyed or harmed in any way, and which, moreover, was a condemned hulk; the "Boston, 42 (in reality 32), destroyed at Washington," which had been a condemned hulk for ten years, and had no guns or anything else in her, and was as much a loss to our navy as the fishing up and burning of an old wreck would have been;". It seems there is a mismatch between the cited source and Wikiepdia text. -- PBS (talk) 01:05, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- "Rushing down to the river, they set fire to a new Frigate, Columbia, caulked but still in the stocks and nearly ready for launch; and to the new Sloop of War Argus, which lay along side the wharf virtually ready for sea. Ian W. Toll six frigates. p.435Tirronan (talk) 01:28, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- That helps find it in Roosevelt, who put it: "Ross took Washington and burned the public buildings; and the panic-struck Americans foolishly burned the Columbia, 44, and Argus, 18, which were nearly ready for service."(Part II page 47) He also lists them on Part II page 80 under the heading "Destroyed by British Armies." along with the Adams as "Destroyed to prevent them falling into enemy hands" and the much smaller Carolina that was "Destroyed by battery". The number of guns given in Roosevelt's two mentions are different Columbia 44 and 52, and Argus 18 and 22 (different sources? shrug). But as Roosevelt does not mention destruction "on the stocks" it rather suggests that although the Roosevelt book(s) are cited they are not the original source for the Wikipedia text. -- PBS (talk) 05:59, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- The Adams was a wreck to my understanding and perhaps that was to what he referred, contrary to popular film, he had a high reedy voice and was a genius by any measure. I'd be suprised if the Columbia wasn't another Joshua Humphrey's 44 which often really carried 52 guns. The Argus was most likely a Frolic class sloop and in someways they actually had a better combat record than the 44's. "Naval Occurrences" is a bit of twisted history to my understanding but I haven't read it.Tirronan (talk) 06:14, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- That helps find it in Roosevelt, who put it: "Ross took Washington and burned the public buildings; and the panic-struck Americans foolishly burned the Columbia, 44, and Argus, 18, which were nearly ready for service."(Part II page 47) He also lists them on Part II page 80 under the heading "Destroyed by British Armies." along with the Adams as "Destroyed to prevent them falling into enemy hands" and the much smaller Carolina that was "Destroyed by battery". The number of guns given in Roosevelt's two mentions are different Columbia 44 and 52, and Argus 18 and 22 (different sources? shrug). But as Roosevelt does not mention destruction "on the stocks" it rather suggests that although the Roosevelt book(s) are cited they are not the original source for the Wikipedia text. -- PBS (talk) 05:59, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- "Rushing down to the river, they set fire to a new Frigate, Columbia, caulked but still in the stocks and nearly ready for launch; and to the new Sloop of War Argus, which lay along side the wharf virtually ready for sea. Ian W. Toll six frigates. p.435Tirronan (talk) 01:28, 29 September 2010 (UTC)
- Theodore Roosevelt is highly critical of British biased sources, and no one who knows anything about him would say he was not an American patriot, but even his summary is less biased than the current one in this Wikipeida article for which his summary is used as a citation. -- PBS (talk) 05:20, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- Then perhaps it is time to rewrite it. While we are at it, I'm 1/4 Cherokee and frankly some of the Indian sections...Tirronan (talk) 14:25, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
Removed duplication in the section on the Course of the War
There was a lot of duplication in this section and the chronological order could have been better. I rearranged the section to address these issues. I did my best to maintain the tone and content of the section, but I'm not perfect. Please check it over to ensure that I didn't introduce any errors. Thanks. Silverchemist (talk) 13:56, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
Proposed new section
Old section The war was scarcely noticed then and is barely remembered in Britain because it was overshadowed by the far-larger conflict against the French Empire under Napoleon.[1] Britain's goals of impressing seamen and blocking trade with France had been achieved and were no longer needed. The Royal Navy was the world's dominant nautical power in the early 19th century (and would remain so for another century).[2] During the War of 1812, it had used its overwhelming strength to cripple American maritime trade and launch raids on the American coast. The United States Navy had only 14 frigates and smaller ships to crew at the start of the war, while Britain maintained 85 ships in North American waters alone. Yet—as the Royal Navy was acutely aware—the U.S. Navy had won most of the single-ship duels during the war.[3] The causes of the losses were many, but among those were the heavier broadside of the American 44-gun frigates and the fact that the large crew on each U.S. Navy ship was hand-picked from among the approximately 55,000 unemployed merchant seamen in American harbors. The crews of the British fleet, which numbered some 140,000 men, were rounded out with impressed ordinary seamen and landsmen.[4] In an order to his ships, Admiral John Borlase Warren ordered that less attention be paid to spit-and-polish and more to gunnery practice.[5] It is notable that the well-trained gunnery of HMS Shannon allowed her victory over the untrained crew of the USS Chesapeake.[6]
The war is barely remembered in Britain because it was overshadowed by the far-larger conflict against the French Empire under Napoleon.[1] Britain's goals of impressing seamen and blocking trade with France had been achieved and were no longer needed. The Royal Navy was the world's dominant nautical power in the early 19th century (and would remain so for another century).[7] While the land campaigns had contributed nothing, the Royal Navy had in fact destroyed American commerce, bottled up the U.S. Navy in port, and suppressed (though never eliminated) privateering. Though both newspaper articles and official letters were expressing dismay at the assumed unchecked growth of the United States of America, in fact the countries quickly resumed trade and over time saw a growing friendship that has remained over the better part of 200 years.
1. The Naval part of the war was already explained, why do it again? 2. This should be a result on the country not a recap of the war again.
I await your comments. Tirronan (talk) 14:44, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
American Outlook
Today, American popular memory includes the British capture and destruction of the U.S. Presidential Mansion in August 1814, which necessitated its extensive renovation. From this event has arisen the tradition that the building's new white paint inspired a popular new nickname, the White House. However, the tale appears apocryphal; the name "White House" is first attested in 1811. Another memory is the successful American defence of Fort McHenry in September 1814, which inspired the lyrics of the U.S. national anthem, The Star-Spangled Banner.[8] In John Updike's Memories of the Ford Administration, the central character, historian Alfred Clayton, thinks of the US as having "bitten the bitter apple of defeat before - e.g. in 1812-1814, up to Jackson's delusory footnote of a victory at New Orleans."[9]
Although we all learned about Dolly Madison and the burning of the White House, and the Star Spangled Banner, there is nothing here about how the US views on its Military and above all its Navy were changed forever. There is a reason that the War with Mexico went so well after this war. The US went and got itself proper military academies turning out infantry officers as well as engineering and artillery that it already had. The Congress no longer tried to put its entire Navy out of commision between wars. Why is a fictional characters musings on a defeat here at all?Tirronan (talk) 18:00, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
- most historians credit the Army reforms to John C. Calhoun, who became Secty of War in 1829 or so rather than the war itself.Rjensen (talk) 12:28, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- Alexander Hamilton tried to start real professional formations and it was greeted with a dread, suspicion, and some outright hostility. Calhoun had more success because of this war. The US Navy started expanding right away as it was seen as a more democratic force.Tirronan (talk) 23:23, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- most historians credit the Army reforms to John C. Calhoun, who became Secty of War in 1829 or so rather than the war itself.Rjensen (talk) 12:28, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
Citation templates
The Wikipedia policy on citations (Wikipedia:Citing sources#Citation templates and tools) begins:
Citation templates are used to format citations in a consistent way. The use of citation templates is neither encouraged nor discouraged. Templates may be used or removed at the discretion of individual editors, subject to agreement with other editors on the article. Because templates can be contentious, editors should not change an article with a distinctive citation format to another without gaining consensus. Where no agreement can be reached, defer to the style used by the first major contributor.
I personally dislike citation templates for a number of reasons (the main one being that they either involve endless extra lines, or else, when run together, make it hard to find individual elements and confuse even experienced editors, let alone newcomers already overwhelmed with Wikipedia's other quirks and arcana). However, that's just my opinion: I fully recognize that other editors see good reason to use them.
If you look at the source for an article version just before Botteville's/Dave's first recent revision, for example 18 September 2010, and run a "Find" (control F) for {cite, you'll find only about thirty, out of 127 separate footnotes. So "cite web" or "cite book" was clearly not the article's format then.
I'm not interested in starting or re-starting an endless war (just in time for the War of 1812's bicentennial), but I would be interested to know what other veteran editors of this article think. —— Shakescene (talk) 05:30, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- a agree with Shakescene: 1) I dislike the templates 2) the editors never reached any agreement to change to templates, which means templates violate the quuted rule. Rjensen (talk) 06:02, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- Over the last year I have started to use citation templates, particularly on large pages like this one. It took me some time to learn the syntax -- and that was time consuming, but I think worth the effort for the advantages they bring. I don't place the the fields in the default order, instead I usually place them in order that they appear. IE last name, first names, year of publication... . I don't like their use when they go over multiple lines, particularly in the text of the article. as it can be very difficult to see the wood for the trees. I also don't think that adding lots of blank fields to the template is desirable for the same reason.
- The real advantages of adding them is the ease of use of short citations. Citation templates ties short and long citations together and the uniformed appearance in the formatting of short and long citations allow for easy spotting of missing information such as year, publisher and page numbers. One other big advantage is that {{sfn}}, (other than when in edit mode the template does not interrupt the format of the body of the text much) is that it does away with the need to create named reference tags -- it handles duplicates automatically -- and that does away with a lot of the manual maintenance to named reference tags that inevitably occurs over time with changes to the article. -- PBS (talk) 00:43, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
I think that you will find that Dave has moved on to other pastures so lets just leave that subject where it lies. Be that as it may the consensus was that if an editor insists on ugly behavior and disruptive edits we can and will take action appropriate to remedy the situation. In other words the war is over.Tirronan (talk) 12:24, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- ^ a b Latimer 2007, [page needed].
- ^ B. Lavery, Nelson's Navy: The Ships, Men and Organisation 1793–1815 (1989).
- ^ Toll 2006, pp. 382–383.
- ^ Toll 2006, p. 382.
- ^ Toll 2006, pp. 405–417.
- ^ B. Lavery, Nelson's Navy: The Ships, Men and Organisation 1793–1815 (1989).
- ^ "The Star-Spangled Banner and the War of 1812". Encyclopedia Smithsonian. Retrieved 2008-03-10.
- ^ John Updike, Memories of the Ford Administration, Knopf, 1992, ISBN 0-449-91211-6. p. 248
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