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This sentence in the summary: "Reforming the police department's administration and policing practices, they applied the broken windows theory, which cites social disorder, like disrepair and vandalism, for attracting loitering addicts, panhandlers, and prostitutes, followed by serious and violent criminals." is a bit of a run on. It's also a bit hard to parse. Would it be possible to change the wording of this sentence to something like this?: |
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"In an effort to reform the police department's administration and policing practices, Giulani and Bratton applied the broken windows theory. The theory states that social disorder attracts panhandlers, prostitutes, and criminals. As a result, Giulani removed panhandlers and sex clubs from Times Square." [[User:Xwedodah|Xwedodah]] ([[User talk:Xwedodah|talk]]) 03:21, 31 January 2023 (UTC) |
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making false and debunked allegations about rigged voting machines, polling place fraud 2603:7081:6801:8252:4C22:8ECD:CFA8:8A97 (talk) 17:31, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
- There are no "rigged voting machines" and there was no "polling place fraud". – Muboshgu (talk) 17:38, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
Said he was told WTC would collapse.
Around Noon, Sept 11, 2001 by 'phone 'Live' with ABC-TV Peter Jennings, Giuliani said something very revealing (which he has since falsely denied): 01m:50s "We were told the World Trade Center was going to collapse and it did collapse before we could actually get out of the building. So we were trapped in the building for ten..fifteen minutes and finally found an exit and walked North...took a lot of people with us." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=arVPrp5OzVs 81.241.224.173 (talk) 15:48, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- Where does it say that the building in question was the WTC? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 15:51, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- 01:52, "We were told the WORLD TRADE CENTER was going to collapse..." 81.241.224.173 (talk) 15:59, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- But what building where they in when they were told that? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 16:01, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- "New York Mayor Rudy Giuliani told ABC’s Peter Jennings in the morning that while he and his Emergency Management team – who were in a building at 75 Barclay Street] where they had set up temporary headquarters after the Twin Towers were struck – had been warned that the World Trade Center was going to collapse, so they had decided to [escape from] leave the Barclay Street building. He later gave the 9/11 Commission a quite different account about which building was expected to collapse. The 9/11 Commission did not ask him about the apparent contradictions, so the account he gave the Commission must be considered the official story."
- https://www.consensus911.org/point-mc-10/ 81.241.224.173 (talk) 16:11, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- So you're saying that Giuliani was not in the WTC when told it would collapse but in 75 Barclay Street? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 16:19, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- CLARIFIED! While in the OEM/Office Of Emergency Management, 75 Barclay Street, "He was told WTC would collapse" 81.241.224.173 (talk) 16:45, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- While in the OEM/Office Of Emergency Management, 75 Barclay Street, "He was told WTC would collapse" which he later FALSELY denied. 212.166.9.248 (talk) 18:24, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- CLARIFIED! While in the OEM/Office Of Emergency Management, 75 Barclay Street, "He was told WTC would collapse" 81.241.224.173 (talk) 16:45, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- So you're saying that Giuliani was not in the WTC when told it would collapse but in 75 Barclay Street? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 16:19, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- 01:52, "We were told the WORLD TRADE CENTER was going to collapse..." 81.241.224.173 (talk) 15:59, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
- This fact is already included at Rudy Giuliani during the September 11 attacks and doesn't need to be duplicated. The towers were damaged and burning, and the possibility that some part of them could collapse was not hard to foresee. Osama bin Laden even stated, after the fact, that he expected them to collapse above the impact points only. A blog pushing crank claims from the usual suspects does not become a reliable source by declaring itself one. 67.180.143.89 (talk) 01:06, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
"Cristyne Lategano" listed at Redirects for discussion
An editor has identified a potential problem with the redirect Cristyne Lategano and has thus listed it for discussion. This discussion will occur at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2022 December 2#Cristyne Lategano until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion. Star Mississippi 03:23, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Run on sentence in summary / request for edit
This sentence in the summary: "Reforming the police department's administration and policing practices, they applied the broken windows theory, which cites social disorder, like disrepair and vandalism, for attracting loitering addicts, panhandlers, and prostitutes, followed by serious and violent criminals." is a bit of a run on. It's also a bit hard to parse. Would it be possible to change the wording of this sentence to something like this?:
"In an effort to reform the police department's administration and policing practices, Giulani and Bratton applied the broken windows theory. The theory states that social disorder attracts panhandlers, prostitutes, and criminals. As a result, Giulani removed panhandlers and sex clubs from Times Square." Xwedodah (talk) 03:21, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
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