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Just double checking but it seems that the change was made on February 9th with no [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=United_States&type=revision&diff=764658672&oldid=764550527 explanation] by user XXGfHXx.--[[User:Mark Miller|Mark Miller]] ([[User talk:Mark Miller|talk]]) 23:38, 23 June 2017 (UTC) |
Just double checking but it seems that the change was made on February 9th with no [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=United_States&type=revision&diff=764658672&oldid=764550527 explanation] by user XXGfHXx.--[[User:Mark Miller|Mark Miller]] ([[User talk:Mark Miller|talk]]) 23:38, 23 June 2017 (UTC) |
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== the food section should begin as follows: == |
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The United States has a strikingly different food culture from other Western countries, with which it shares basic food types, with the difference focusing on quantity. The average American eats more than 3,000 Calories per day, and typical food servings are double that of other countries. The country has introduced sugar-based beverages (Coca Cola) and carbohydrate-rich fast food (McDonalds), and as a result of this and other cultural differences, the country faces a the largest epedemic of obesity (40%) among all developed countries. As direct result of the food culture, morbidity from preventable disease is by far the highest among all developed countries, and although the country is the richest in the world, as a direct result of preventable eating-related health outcomes (preventable leading causes of death include Stroke (cerebrovascular diseases), Chronic lower respiratory diseases, Diabetes, Heart Disease), its life expectancy is 31st in the world, at only 69 years (both sexes life expectancy, HALE), a full 5% - or 4 years - lower than comparable countries without this epidemic. Americans are often caricatured as "fat" and masses of clinically obese people are a surprising first sight for all international travelers arriving in any American city. There is a cultural movement called Fat Acceptance having its source in the United States and with the purpose of normalizing and promoting these eating habits. The reasons why American cuisine has moved so markedly in this direction are not clear but began in earnest only in the second half of the twentieth century.}} |
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As it is, you fail to describe or summarize food in the United States. You simply don't give basic information. it would be like writing about the Catholic faith without mentioning the Vatican. you're omitting the fundamental information everyone knows. For balance you could mention the FDA and nutritional labels (which are very positive.) |
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Q1. How did the article get the way it is?
Q2. Why is the article's name "United States" and not "United States of America"?
Isn't United States of America the official name of the U.S.? I would think that United States should redirect to United States of America, not vice versa as is the current case.
Q3. Is the United States really the oldest constitutional republic in the world?
1. Isn't San Marino older?
2. How about Switzerland?
Many people in the United States are told it is the oldest republic and has the oldest constitution, however one must use a narrow definition of constitution. Within Wikipedia articles it may be appropriate to add a modifier such as "oldest continuous, federal ..." however it is more useful to explain the strength and influence of the US constitution and political system both domestically and globally. One must also be careful using the word "democratic" due to the limited franchise in early US history and better explain the pioneering expansion of the democratic system and subsequent influence.
Q4. Why are the Speaker of the House and Chief Justice listed as leaders in the infobox? Shouldn't it just be the President and Vice President?
The President, Vice President, Speaker of The House of Representatives, and Chief Justice are stated within the United States Constitution as leaders of their respective branches of government. As the three branches of government are equal, all four leaders get mentioned under the "Government" heading in the infobox. Q5. What is the motto of the United States?
There was no de jure motto of the United States until 1956, when "In God We Trust" was made such. Various other unofficial mottos existed before that, most notably "E Pluribus Unum". The debate continues on what "E Pluribus Unum"'s current status is (de facto motto, traditional motto, etc.) but it has been determined that it never was an official motto of the United States. Q6. Is the U.S. really the world's largest economy?
The United States was the world's largest national economy from about 1880 and largest by nominal GDP from about 2014, when it surpassed the European Union. China has been larger by Purchasing Power Parity, since about 2016. Q7. Isn't it incorrect to refer to it as "America" or its people as "American"?
In English, America (when not preceded by "North", "Central", or "South") almost always refers to the United States. The large super-continent is called the Americas. Q8. Why isn't the treatment of Native Americans given more weight?
The article is written in summary style and the sections "Indigenous peoples" and "European colonization" summarize the situation. |
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The sum of the religions is over 99% essentially covering the population 100%, implying there are no atheists or negligible irreligion. A flat falsehood rather than a misrepresentation. Probably best source on this will be Pew Religion. Suggest you consult usage in similar countries, i.e. Canada, UK, and Australia. Implying that religion applied to the entire population would be reasonable in the set of countries like Malta, Iran, Saudi Arabia, etc. but not this set. Lycurgus (talk) 04:11, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
- Also grossly contradicts the text in the body of the article. Lycurgus (talk) 04:13, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
- I think you misread a few things? First of all, the source of the religion in the infobox is Pew. Secondly, the second entry - 22.8% - is "irreligious". And a quick glance shows the same numbers used in the body. So I'm not sure what you're seeing here that needs to be fixed? --Golbez (talk) 04:36, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
- ty~, my bad, somehow I looked at that and assumed it was something else, a denomination. Shouldn't have been so ready to see the negative thing. It's a natural mistake given the current order, one I wouldn't have made if irreligion was at the bottom, or otherwise distinguished from a list of religions. 98.4.124.117 (talk) 04:55, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
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The United States of America /əˈmɛrɪkə/ (USA), commonly known as the United States (U.S.) or America, is a constitutional federal republic composed of 50 states, a federal district, five major self-governing territories, and various possessions. Forty-eight of the fifty states and the federal district are contiguous and located in North America between Canada and Mexico. The state of Alaska is in the ... | The United States of America, commonly referred to as the United States, America, and sometimes the States, is a federal republic consisting of 50 states and a federal district. The 48 contiguous states and Washington, D.C. are in central North America between Canada and Mexico. The state of Alaska is located in the ... |
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First sentence
I removed the term "Constitutional" from the first sentence. The first sentence has a consensus that went through dispute resolution and should only be altered with another strong consensus. While consensus can change, the last discussion that brought up the word usage next to "Federal Republic" seems to indicate there is no need to add the word. "Federal Republic" is sourced.--Mark Miller (talk) 23:18, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
Additional discussion;[1] and here [2] and here [3] and here [4].--Mark Miller (talk) 02:05, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Just double checking but it seems that the change was made on February 9th with no explanation by user XXGfHXx.--Mark Miller (talk) 23:38, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
the food section should begin as follows:
Please add words almost exactly as follows to the start of the Food section:
“ | The United States has a strikingly different food culture from other Western countries, with which it shares basic food types, with the difference focusing on quantity. The average American eats more than 3,000 Calories per day, and typical food servings are double that of other countries. The country has introduced sugar-based beverages (Coca Cola) and carbohydrate-rich fast food (McDonalds), and as a result of this and other cultural differences, the country faces a the largest epedemic of obesity (40%) among all developed countries. As direct result of the food culture, morbidity from preventable disease is by far the highest among all developed countries, and although the country is the richest in the world, as a direct result of preventable eating-related health outcomes (preventable leading causes of death include Stroke (cerebrovascular diseases), Chronic lower respiratory diseases, Diabetes, Heart Disease), its life expectancy is 31st in the world, at only 69 years (both sexes life expectancy, HALE), a full 5% - or 4 years - lower than comparable countries without this epidemic. Americans are often caricatured as "fat" and masses of clinically obese people are a surprising first sight for all international travelers arriving in any American city. There is a cultural movement called Fat Acceptance having its source in the United States and with the purpose of normalizing and promoting these eating habits. The reasons why American cuisine has moved so markedly in this direction are not clear but began in earnest only in the second half of the twentieth century. | ” |
As it is, you fail to describe or summarize food in the United States. You simply don't give basic information. it would be like writing about the Catholic faith without mentioning the Vatican. you're omitting the fundamental information everyone knows. For balance you could mention the FDA and nutritional labels (which are very positive.)
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