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Former featured articleNew York City is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on October 6, 2007.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
December 17, 2004Featured article candidateNot promoted
December 20, 2005Good article nomineeListed
February 17, 2006Peer reviewReviewed
April 4, 2006Featured article candidateNot promoted
July 17, 2006Featured article candidateNot promoted
September 18, 2006Featured article candidateNot promoted
December 3, 2006Featured article candidateNot promoted
January 31, 2007Featured article candidateNot promoted
June 10, 2007Featured article candidatePromoted
May 18, 2010Featured article reviewDemoted
October 30, 2011Peer reviewReviewed
June 26, 2012Peer reviewReviewed
April 25, 2013Good article nomineeListed
July 5, 2013Good article reassessmentDelisted
June 28, 2020Peer reviewReviewed
Current status: Former featured article


No sports section

I noticed there was no sports section, unlike most other major cities. Is there a reason for this? Sumdood2798 (talk) 16:45, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There is a sports section; it is a subsection of Culture. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:54, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Sumdood2798 (talk) 17:20, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
💀 Cleter (talk) 00:50, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

PATH

Just so that we're on the same page, this is not a "critical part of New York City's history":

The World Trade Center PATH station, which had opened on July 19, 1909, as the Hudson Terminal, was destroyed in the attacks. A temporary station was built and opened in 2003 and a 800,000-square-foot (74,000 m2) permanent rail station designed by Santiago Calatrava, the World Trade Center Transportation Hub, the city's third-largest hub, was completed in 2016.

Also, I'm visiting the city in a couple of weeks, so I can expect to be treated as a savant upon my return. That is how it works, right? Seasider53 (talk) 12:02, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Seasider53 Do you mean to say this paragraph should be deleted? Chronus (talk) 15:08, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Correct. Seasider53 (talk) 16:41, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I see that NYC has only been a featured article, not a good article, despite it being nominated a couple of times in the last 20 years. It's obvious why, given its poor state until recently, but maybe it's time to try again with the changes made. Seasider53 (talk) 16:45, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It has previously been both an FA and a GA. It was demoted from FA status in 2010 and delisted as a GA in 2013. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:03, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead too long

A discussion was happening here regarding article ledes, and this article was specifically mentioned as a case where through accretion, the lead went from being near-ideal to too long. I agree, so I figured I'd drop a topic here about it. Remsense留 02:33, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

For reference, here is the state of the article when it was demoted from featured status. I think it is four full paragraphs mostly touching on the correct things, but I will gladly concede that maybe they can be two full and two stuffed paragraphs. Remsense留 06:09, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Let me shorten it. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 04:22, 17 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I made my edit at Special:Diff/1190307831. Here's the edit summary as promised:

  • Removed "one of the world's largest natural harbors". Not true, as Hamburg's harbor is much bigger and has a much more extensive port. As this is not the objectively defining feature of NYC, it is not due to put that in the first sentence of the lead. I'm open to mention that somewhere else in the lead though, but for now, it has to go.
  • Listed the district names.
  • Added [by whom], because extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence
  • Removed "NYC has more than double the population of Los Angeles, the nation's second-most populous city. New York is the geographical and demographic center of both the Northeast megalopolis and the New York metropolitan area, the largest metropolitan area in the U.S. by both population and urban area." I removed this because we have already established that NYC is a populous city in the first sentence. Keep that in the article body though.
  • Removed "making it the most linguistically diverse city in the world", can be inferred from the >800 languages stats
  • Removed "If the New York metropolitan area were its own country, it would have the tenth-largest economy in the world." I do understand the need to communicate scale to the reader, but this sentence feels trivia-y and also comparing GDP of a city against GDP of a country is somewhat misleading. I'm open to adding this sentence back however.
  • Removed "New York City is an established safe haven for global investors.", cited to an unreliable source. Also this can be inferred from the paragraph
  • Moved "New York City is the most expensive city in the world for expatriates to live." from fourth to second paragraph. It makes sense as the fourth paragraph is about NYC's economy and the second paragraph is about NYC's population.

- CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 04:41, 17 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

    • The cutting is done. It's been cut even after Remsense had made their comments above. It's been cut several times, and now we're down to bone. You in particular don't have NYC topic experience and clearly have no idea what you're doing. I know you've tried this before, but unfortunately, despite your good faith efforts I'm sure, you do a very poor job every time, and this time is no different. This article is about the most complex city in the world, and so yes, all around it will be longer. Much simpler and much more homogeneous cities like Hanoi, for example, can have leads one-third this long. Not NYC. Castncoot (talk) 03:15, 18 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      Ha ha, down to the bone. It's not. It's amazing how little the lead is communicating to the reader with so many words. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 15:10, 18 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      Recalling previous conversations, it seems that you do not want to work with me. Fine. Just please stop denying that NYC's lead is too long and stop exhibiting ownership behaviors when things do not go your way. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 15:25, 18 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      I was checking the history of the page and saw your edits, and couldn't comprehend why they were reverted. I've kept your changes and would like to express my thanks for your contributions towards the NYC page. I don't think the existing thanks feature works - if it does, I want to express my thanks properly anyway. Cutting down the lead is a headache to work with and what you did was brilliant. Cavoodles (talk) 08:07, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      Thank you so much in return - CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 07:49, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Some of these cuts look good, I would quibble on a few that seem somewhat overly extensive. New York Harbor is a critical geographical feature to NY history and its economic role. It may not be the largest harbor, but size is not really what we're going for, it's significance. It can be reworded to include something about the harbor, that is true, and reasonably relevant. Similarly, to the GDP stats, I would emphasize these more, because NYC's role as a center of global finance is one of its major reasons for hegemony over the American Northeast when it comes to shipping, and later banking, Wall Street, is synonymous with American and indeed global finance. The comparison of a city to a country is very common in the sources. Andre🚐 05:00, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Could we compare NYC's GDP with other cities though? CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 07:50, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sure. We could. It gets tricky to do apples to apples because of metro areas. That's why the cities to nations comparison is used, I'm positing. e.g. [1] I'm fairly confident NY is still the top world city by GDP or #2, but when you do metro area, I think Tokyo is bigger. Andre🚐 07:54, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • For the port, something like, the largest port in the USA by cargo volume, ie freight imports and exports. Yea or nay, what say ye [2] Andre🚐
  • There needs to be one more paragraph in the lede discussing the city’s culture and notable sites more specifically, as other city pages have. There seems to be an agenda against cultural pages pertaining to the U.S. or America on Wikipedia. Threefrgy

19:59, 03 January 2024 (UTC)

Is the Statue of Liberty both part of the city's history and also a landmark?

User:Nikkimaria has repeatedly removed content regarding the Statue of Liberty, most recently tagging the article with a copy edit tag, arguing that there is "repetition of content". In this edit, Nikkimaria removed a sentence about the statue welcoming immigrants; I reinserted the material here, as the details of the significance of the statue to immigrants was a pivotal role of the statue.. Nikkimaria removed this again here saying it "Already appears below"; The material was reinserted here, with additional material explaining the role that the statue played as a symbol to immigrants.. In response, Nikkimaria in this edit, Nikkimaria removed the Statue of Liberty as a landmark, with the edit summary "rm dup".

Nikkimaria seems to be arguing that the Statue of Liberty can only be in the history section OR listed as a landmark and that we have to choose one or the other. My position is that it is a fundamental fact that the Statue of Liberty is recognized both as a symbol to immigrants during the ‎Late 19th and early 20th century AND that it remains as a fundamental landmark. What does the community think? Alansohn (talk) 20:01, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That is not my position. My argument is that we should not be repeating exactly the same material about the statue in multiple sections. We are doing less now, but we're still repeating the bit about "ideals of liberty and peace" in two sections (plus an image caption).
However, this is not the only instance of repetition of content, so a broader review to address this issue is warranted. Other examples include the "New York minute", being the setting for films and TV programs, and Madison Avenue being metonymous for advertising. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:35, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Nikkimaria, It's hard to take that position seriously after this edit, in which you removed any mention whatsoever of the Statue of Liberty as a landmark, which did not serve any constructive purpose? If you have a genuine interest in avoiding repetition of exactly the same material, why not show some small measure of good faith by editing the material to make it sufficiently different, rather than simply removing the material out of spite? If you are genuinely building an encyclopedic article about New York City, surely you must agree that the Statue of Liberty is a landmark and that the removal of that detail from a section about landmarks was inherently disruptive? Alansohn (talk) 21:51, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's not a section about landmarks, it's a section about tourism. With or without that sentence, the section doesn't mention most major landmarks.
Greater improvement would be achieved by removing/relocating that whole paragraph, since neither "New York Minute" nor the use of the Empire State Building as a measuring stick is relevant to tourism, and there is already reference to landmarks in the preceding paragraph. Nikkimaria (talk) 23:04, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I disagree somewhat. The Empire State Building is relevant to tourism, as art deco architecture is one of the main tourism draws. Andre🚐 04:02, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I’ve never heard this. Do you have any information to support it? Seasider53 (talk) 04:06, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
There's a whole article on it Art Deco architecture of New York City. It's more of common knowledge than that I'm pulling it from any particular source, but surely one could be found easily. The best one I found on a cursory look was this: [3] Andre🚐 04:08, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The claim in that paragraph isn't about its architecture, or anything to do with its tourism draw - it's about it being used as a unit of measure. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:11, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That I agree may be trivial or silly, but a fun factoid. Andre🚐 04:12, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
FWIW, I agree with Alan, the Statue of Liberty, and its welcoming immigrants, are two of the most critically important aspects of New York City. I know it personally firsthand as my ancestors came through Ellis Island. Andre🚐 03:51, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
All landmarks are part of a city's history, and are imbued with intentional and acquired meaning. I would keep that in mind when thinking about potential redundancies. Remsense留 03:59, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Very true, but the Statue of Liberty is a renowned symbol of New York City. It appeared on the NY license plate for a number of years, it was also used in a version of the NY logo. Just about the only more common and recognizable symbols are the I <3 NY logo and the NY Yankees logo. Andre🚐 04:01, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This is true to some degree with many landmarks that are seen as emblems of their city, is the overall point I'm making. The meaning imbued in the landmark doesn't necessarily need to be presented on its own from the landmark itself. Remsense留 04:02, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's a good point, but, the Statue of Liberty moreso than any random stadium. It was a gift to the US from France to symbolize that alliance, the poem is relevant, "tired masses, huddled, yearning to breathe free," and the period of time during NYC's major boom and growth was due to immigration in the 1800s and early 1900s. It's one of the most relevant things to New York City. In my very humble opinion as a highly biased person as a NYer from NYers from NYers. Andre🚐 04:26, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think there's a justification for viewing NYC as unique compared to any other world city here. One could be equally romantic about the Eiffel Tower or Tiananmen Square. Remsense留 04:50, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Again biased but again disagree and I think a case can be made there. NYC is uniquely important to the American economy. I mean, yes, comparable to say London or Tokyo or Paris, but not any world city, it's in the elite top 5 to be sure, on most metrics that I know of. But I get what you mean. However, I do think there is a very significant source-based case for NYC exceptionalism on many things. Specifically as pertaining to the Statue of Liberty - as a landmark, it's not unlike a modern Seven Wonders of the World. In fact I believe it is a direct architectural homage to the Colossus, if I'm not mistaken. Andre🚐 04:52, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Compare the article Rio de Janeiro which prominetly features Cristo Redentor. Andre🚐 07:57, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The statue is only mentioned in the text once. My quibble was with potentially reduplicated mentions because of the cultural importance of a landmark being treated as a topic in itself, in addition to the landmark as a physical object/place. I think they would ideally be mentioned together, giving an adequate, holistic description of the landmark. Remsense留 08:06, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Having looked over both sections and comparing their current state to what they were before the edit warring, I see an improvement now in how the welcoming of immigrants bit was removed from the tourism section, since this information was repetitious and not needed there. I don't have a problem with liberty and peace though, because it's shorter, it was the original intent of the statue's donors, and it's more generic info that could apply to both sections. StonyBrook babble 18:19, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Historic population table

I just looked back at the table when New York City was the featured article and — I'm sure we're all shocked to hear this — the table was much shorter than it is now. Why do we need it broken down by decade for every century, especially when significant fluctuations have rarely happened? Seasider53 (talk) 02:54, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Although I restored that table (which apparently has no [Hide] default) after @Nikkimaria:'s good-faith removal. I'm looking from the other direction and wondering how important those percentage changes in the second column are in a general article, as opposed to the Demography subarticle.
Perhaps we need to create our own single-column collapsible outside-the-template chart, pre-set at either Show or Hide. See also @Moxy:'s quotation from Wikipedia:Summary style in the #Climate chart/weatherbox discussion on this Talk Page:

"...overly detailed statistical charts and diagrams such as economic trends, weather boxes, historical population charts, and past elections results, etc, should be reserved for main sub articles..."

@Uness232:—— Shakescene (talk) 02:55, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would agree that the level of detail is more appropriate to the subarticle. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:56, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've just delated that table altogether because it gives inconsistent numbers: in some years for what is now the Five-Borough city, sometimes just for the old pre-consolidation city (Manhattan or Manhattan + all or part of what is now The Bronx}. For an article about the City as a whole, Mahhattan's population in, say, 1840 is a relatively-trivial detail. Fortunately, the U.S. Census worked this out about a century ago — for example, peeling off and including the bits of then-Westchester County that now lie within the Bronx, so that there is a consistent population total from the first U.S. Census in 1790 to the present. See the references in User talk:Shakescene#Census.
It's certainly straightforward though tedious to create a stand-alone one-column table with consistent coverage (at least since 1790), but I'm not up to trying that now.
Cheers to @Nikkimaria, Seasider53, Moxy, and Uness232: and all. —— Shakescene (talk) 03:45, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Population
of 5-borough area
1790—2020
Year Population
1790 49,401
1800 79,216
1810 119,734
1820 152,056
1830 242,278
1840 391,114
1850 696,115
1860 1,174,779
1870 1,478,103
1880 1,911,698
1890 2,507,414
1900 3,437,202
1910 4,766,883
1920 5,620,048
1930 6,930,446
1940 7,454,995
1950 7,891,957
1960 7,781,984
1970 7,894,862
1980 7,071,639
1990 7,322,564
2000 8,008,288
2010 8,175,133
2020 8,804,190

Here's my proposed single-column table (no % change), with the Census' numbers for the current five-borough area. (References and citations to be added). We need a consistent area (which we can't do before the First Census of 1790) to avoid a highly-misleading jump (+125%) from the then-unconsolidated City in 1890 to the City of Greater New York in 1900. (If necessary, any or all of the four earlier estimates before 1790 can be mentioned in the prose text.) —— Shakescene (talk) 01:58, 11 January 2024 (UTC) @Nikkimaria, Alansohn, Seasider53, and Moxy:[reply]

Britain did not exist until 1707

The article states that New York came under British Control in 1664. This is impossible since Britain did not come into existence until 1707. Hence it came under English control. 2A02:1811:424:B800:5320:429:8728:B2E6 (talk) 19:55, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Climate chart/weatherbox

@Shakescene Thank you for the kind and civil explanation on your revert; I definitely understand the complex nature of the detailed climate chart. My issue with the simplified one is that it leaves out information that is, in my opinion, too important for the city to be left to the climate article (like precipitation days, snowfall and sunshine), as well as the fact that depending on the screen resolution, it does not even appear alongside the climate section.

Maybe we can find a compromise in something similar to the climate chart on the Istanbul page (compare Climate of Istanbul#Inland from the Bosporus (detailed) to the main article (simplified)); leaving behind record temperatures, annual mean max mins, relative humidity, dew points etc. Would that be good enough? Uness232 (talk) 20:44, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In my view...... As a major super city this article should look like a country article because of all the sub articles affiliated with the topic. Wikipedia:Summary style As prose text is preferred overly detailed statistical charts and diagrams such as economic trends, weather boxes, historical population charts, and past elections results, etc, should be reserved for main sub articles on the topic as per WP:DETAIL as outlined at WP:NOTSTATS. Moxy- 23:17, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That's fair, however I am still uncomfortable with removing something that provides what I think of as important info (especially for a city with a transitional, not entirely agreed-upon climate) and is a pretty standard inclusion in other large cities like Tokyo, Paris and such, whether they have climate pages or not. The simplified weatherbox also has problems as it moves with photos on the right side of the page, and may not align with the climate section depending on your resolution. Uness232 (talk) 23:43, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A country had many different climates. NYC has one essential climate with minor variations within. Also, [4] (see climate section) is very different from its Canadian counterpart, [5]. We should stick to the established guidelines standard for U.S. city articles, the overwhelming preponderance of which contain a weatherbox on the main page. Castncoot (talk) 06:52, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe I misunderstand, or perhaps the confusion arises from me using climate chart/weatherbox interchangeably, which I shouldn't have done; but I was arguing for the removal of the simplified template that you did remove recently, and the addition of a somewhat simplified version of the template that Shakescene was opposing, so I don't exactly understand your stance (or why you replied to me) here. Is it that you want the full, detailed weatherbox?
By the way, what I meant by transitional climate was more technical and referred to Köppen, not that the city has many microclimates. Uness232 (talk) 11:32, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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