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Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Edge3 (talk) 03:43, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
- ... that the Crusading movement created a framework of ideologies and institutions that described, regulated, and promoted the Crusades? Source: Maier, Christoph T. (2006a). "Ideology". In Murray, Alan V. (ed.). The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. Vol. II:D-J. ABC-CLIO. pp. 627–631. ISBN 978-1-57607-862-4.
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Improved to Good Article status by Norfolkbigfish (talk). Self-nominated at 15:23, 4 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Crusading movement; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Onegreatjoke, many thanks. How about these?
- ALT1:....that one feature of the Crusading movement was the increasing popularity of models of the prime objective, Church of the Holy Sepulchre, that became embedded in daily devotion, providing a visible sign of what crusading was about. Source: Tyerman, Christopher (2019). The World of the Crusades. Yale University Press. ISBN 978-0-300-21739-1.
- ALT2:....that the crusader states that had been created in the Levant by the Crusading movement became nationalist rallying points and emblematic of western European colonialism in the mid-19th century.Source: Madden, Thomas F. (2013). The Concise History of the Crusades (Third ed.). Rowman & Littlefield Publishers. ISBN 978-1-4422-1576-4.
I find it all interesting but have been in amongst it for too long to understand what they lay reader finds interesting. So guidance is welcome. I'll be away for a couple of weeks now, so please be patient with my replies. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:46, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
Onegreatjoke, thanks. I think we are getting there. How about using Levant for the geography? Alternatives would be Near East or Eastern Mediterranean, all of which are pretty much synonyms. I have also wiki-linked what I can.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 06:53, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
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Overall: @Norfolkbigfish: Good article, but a much better hook could definitely be made for this nomination. So i'll wait for the new hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:11, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish: alt2 works though I feel like some wikilinking and clarification would do nicely if it can fit under 200 characters (For example, what is the East?). Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:05, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
Alt2 is good now. Onegreatjoke (talk) 21:21, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish and Onegreatjoke: I think ALT2 is too long, vague, and winding. Being familiar with the article—good to see it got to GA eventually, how about something like: ALT3 "... that the Crusading movement defined concepts of warfare throughout medieval Europe?" Shorter, sweeter, and more likely to 'hook'. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:25, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- I am ambivalent, what do you think Onegreatjoke Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:01, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Sure, I can approve that. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- In that case, it is fine by me @AirshipJungleman29 and Onegreatjoke: Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:06, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke:—I assume all is ok to go with this one? :-) Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:26, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
- It's just waiting for a promoter, don't worry; neither I nor OGJ can promote it because we're involved. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:52, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke:—I assume all is ok to go with this one? :-) Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:26, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
- In that case, it is fine by me @AirshipJungleman29 and Onegreatjoke: Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:06, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Sure, I can approve that. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:43, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- I am ambivalent, what do you think Onegreatjoke Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:01, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish and Onegreatjoke: I think ALT2 is too long, vague, and winding. Being familiar with the article—good to see it got to GA eventually, how about something like: ALT3 "... that the Crusading movement defined concepts of warfare throughout medieval Europe?" Shorter, sweeter, and more likely to 'hook'. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:25, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish: alt2 works though I feel like some wikilinking and clarification would do nicely if it can fit under 200 characters (For example, what is the East?). Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:05, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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- Result: I am closing this with a consensus to delist. I count three editors in favor of a delist, versus one opposed, and most editors who have weighed in are not convinced that the article has been fully cleansed of close paraphrasing. Let's not get into a WP:FIXLOOP situation here - the article may be renominated for GA status when involved editors are in agreement all copyvio has been removed and any other issues precluding GA status have been addressed. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 22:53, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
During the article's FAC review, it became apparent that the article does not meet all GA criteria: 2c. it contains original research; 2d. it contains copyright violations and plagiarism; and 3a. it does not address the main aspects of the topic. Furthermore, its prose is not clear and concise as a consequence of copyright violations and plagiarism. Although the article could be delisted without further review because it is a long way from meeting criterium 3a, and contains copyright violations, I think giving a last chance for improvement is a better approach. Of course, the article should be cleaned of copyright violations and plagiarism as soon as possible, because copyright violations not only harm Wikipedia's redistributability, but also create legal issues. Borsoka (talk) 04:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
This discussion was closed as delist by Borsoka; I have reverted the close as a WP:NACINV-breaching action which contravened the WP:GAR instructions. I suggest, to avoid a WP:FIXLOOP, that Norfolkbigfish attempt to eradicate all plagiarism from the article and ping Borsoka when they feel this is done; if Borsoka feels that the article should still be delisted, they can simply !oppose and their !vote will be taken into account by an uninvolved closer. This will not only avoid excess use of other's time and energy, but will also demonstrate if Norfolkbigfish properly understands the copyright policies, which may be helpful in deciding whether the other articles they have contributed to need immediate reviewing. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:08, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
To begin the process, I copy my remarks from the FAC review page here:
General remarks
- A general remark on sourcing: more than 30% of the article is verified by references to individual articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. Our relevant policy says, "Wikipedia articles usually rely on material from reliable secondary sources. ... Reliable tertiary sources can help provide broad summaries of topics that involve many primary and secondary sources and may help evaluate due weight, especially when primary or secondary sources contradict each other." I think the use of a tertiary source goes beyond this boundary, and the rationale beyond the selection of individual encyclopedic articles is unclear. As a consequence of this approach, the article looks like an encyclopedia with individual articles following each other without much connection between them. I am not sure that this method can secure that the movement is presented in WP as it is presented in relevant scholarly literature. Could we write an article about "Humanity" based on arbitrarily selected articles from Encyclopædia Britannica?
- The Encyclopedia is WP:RS. Where particular facts are insufficient this can be addressed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the encyclopedia is a reliable source. I have never questioned its reliability. However, we need a coherent encyclopedic article about the crusading movement, not an abridged version of The Crusades: An Encyclopedia, with individual articles within it. Right now, this article could hardly be regarded more than a collection of individual articles on topics like "Penance and indulgence", "Knights and chivalry", etc. Even the seemingly chronologicaly organised "Evaluation" section is a mostly incoherent mixture of texts from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia (often with texts copied from its articles about indvidual popes). For the time being, the article does not introduce the crusading movement as it is presented in scholarly literature: arbitrarily selected articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia placed one after another can hardly be regarded as an encyclopedic article. Therefore, sourcing must be changed radically. Not only because the extensive use of tertiary sources contradicts our relevant policy, but also because editors' task is to present an article's subject as it is presented by scholars writing of the topic. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- While an issue for FA, I am not sure this is as important for GA. If 30% of the article is sourced to a tertiary source, 70% is still cited to secondary sources. I am uncertain how an article 70% based off secondary sources can be described as "arbitrarily selected articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia placed one after another". Could you please clarify? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:25, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- There are no separate policies for FA and GA, we need to meet the same standard. If you review the article, you will find that it is structured around the encyclopedic articles arbitrarily selected from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. These are placed one after another, and all other information is organised around them. The encyclopedic articles form this article's backbone. This contradicts our principal logic: we write articles based on high-quality comprehensive studies, present topics as they are presented in these studies, and in some cases we add some supplementary information citing encyclopedias. Borsoka (talk) 16:10, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- "There are no separate policies for FA and GA, we need to meet the same standard." That is undeniably incorrect, Borsoka; you may wish to acquaint yourself with the GA criteria, the FA criteria, and the difference between them. You have perfectly outlined the reason why this article is not an FA, but over-reliance on tertiary sources is not a reason to remove GA status. Copyright, on the other hand, is. If your next argument is that by "policies" you refer to the formal policies and guidelines, please point to where we write articles based on high-quality comprehensive studies is in WP:CONTENT.~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- With regard to secondary and tertiary sources, we do not have separate policies. GA requires reliable sources, FA high-quality reliable sources: The Crusades: An Encyclopedia is without doubt a high-quality reliable source, so it could be cited in a FA, but only in accordance with our relevant policy: "Reliable tertiary sources can help provide broad summaries of topics that involve many primary and secondary sources and may help evaluate due weight...". How randomly selected articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia could provide broad summaries about the whole crusading movement? For instance, the encyclopedic articles "Finance of the Crusades" and "Women" are ignored, although these are two major themes in books about a crusading movement. On the other hand, each encyclopedic article about an individual pope is cited, even his original name is sometimes mentioned in the article. Borsoka (talk) 02:19, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- "There are no separate policies for FA and GA, we need to meet the same standard." That is undeniably incorrect, Borsoka; you may wish to acquaint yourself with the GA criteria, the FA criteria, and the difference between them. You have perfectly outlined the reason why this article is not an FA, but over-reliance on tertiary sources is not a reason to remove GA status. Copyright, on the other hand, is. If your next argument is that by "policies" you refer to the formal policies and guidelines, please point to where we write articles based on high-quality comprehensive studies is in WP:CONTENT.~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- There are no separate policies for FA and GA, we need to meet the same standard. If you review the article, you will find that it is structured around the encyclopedic articles arbitrarily selected from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. These are placed one after another, and all other information is organised around them. The encyclopedic articles form this article's backbone. This contradicts our principal logic: we write articles based on high-quality comprehensive studies, present topics as they are presented in these studies, and in some cases we add some supplementary information citing encyclopedias. Borsoka (talk) 16:10, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- While an issue for FA, I am not sure this is as important for GA. If 30% of the article is sourced to a tertiary source, 70% is still cited to secondary sources. I am uncertain how an article 70% based off secondary sources can be described as "arbitrarily selected articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia placed one after another". Could you please clarify? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:25, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the encyclopedia is a reliable source. I have never questioned its reliability. However, we need a coherent encyclopedic article about the crusading movement, not an abridged version of The Crusades: An Encyclopedia, with individual articles within it. Right now, this article could hardly be regarded more than a collection of individual articles on topics like "Penance and indulgence", "Knights and chivalry", etc. Even the seemingly chronologicaly organised "Evaluation" section is a mostly incoherent mixture of texts from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia (often with texts copied from its articles about indvidual popes). For the time being, the article does not introduce the crusading movement as it is presented in scholarly literature: arbitrarily selected articles from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia placed one after another can hardly be regarded as an encyclopedic article. Therefore, sourcing must be changed radically. Not only because the extensive use of tertiary sources contradicts our relevant policy, but also because editors' task is to present an article's subject as it is presented by scholars writing of the topic. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- A point on the first sentence, there are 35 citations to the Encyclopedia in this article out of a total of 169, a fraction over 20%. None of these citations are particular contentious and all are written by academics who quote their own sources. There are 41 citations to the Oxford Illustrated, so the the Encyclopedia is not even the most popular source. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:56, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- There are more than 169 citations: for instance, citation 2 verifies two statements, citation 12 three statements. Borsoka (talk) 02:05, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- The Encyclopedia is WP:RS. Where particular facts are insufficient this can be addressed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sudden changes in tone and vocabulary and redundant content suggests that significant texts may be closely paraphrased. Has the article been reviewed from this perspective? I have only reviewed about one fifth of the article, but I have found several cases of close paraphrasing and copyvio. Borsoka (talk) 04:18, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- Can be dealt with on an incident by incident basis. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I think this is an extremly urgent task. For the time being, I cannot exclude that the whole article will be deleted for plagiarism. I think you know which texts were copied from the cited sources, so you are in the position to solve this problem. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you think the article is eligible for WP:G12 speedy deletion or WP:AFD, you should nominate it there at once Borsoka; as you have kindly pointed out, copyright is a serious issue, so playing around with GA reassessments is like passing the buck. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it is a serious issue. You may not remember but it was me who first raised it about a week ago during the FAC review. However, I have not reviewed the whole article, so I only assume that it will be deleted due to plagiarism. After reviewing about one third of the article (or rather collection of texts), I need some time for recovery to continue this exceptionally irksome work. Moreover, I would give a chance to the nominator to clear the article, because a version free of plagiarism could be kept. Borsoka (talk) 13:45, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Borsoka, the versions of the article you believe are irrevocably tainted will still reside in the page history even if a version free of plagiarism is created, and will need to be WP:REVDELled. As someone who has nominated many pages for CSD, it is easier to nominate now then later. I will not do this myself as I personally believe there is 0% chance of either G12 or revdel deletion, but if you really think it's needed, it is legally proper to do it now and not later; otherwise, you are knowingly cooperating to keep copyrighted material on WP. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- No, I am not knowingly cooperating to keep copyrighted material on WP, because I have listed several cases of probable copyright violations during the FAR review. I shared all my knowledge with the community, including yourself. I assume that Norfolkbigfish's other articles, like the House of Lancaster also contain copyvio, because I have more than one time had to remind him to the dangers of plagiarism since the first time we met during a FAC review years ago. Should I review that article as well because of my assumption? Could you quote the relevant policy? If there is an obligation, I will do it but I sincerely hope that Norfolkbigfish will be cooperative and achieve the deletion of versions filled with plagiarism. Sorry, I do not understand the terms "CSD", "G12", and "revdel deletion". Sometimes links are helpful for stupid people like myself. Borsoka (talk) 14:52, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Just for curiosity: if you "felt that there was substantial close paraphrasing" during a previous review[1], why did not you investigate it? When I feel close paraphrasing, I always compare the texts in the article and the cited sources during a review. Borsoka (talk) 15:08, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did: see Talk:Crusading movement/Archive 2#Recent Edits, a discussion you were very much part of Borsoka. The reason I did not take it further then is that it took place in April 2022, and I had begun to edit WP a couple of months earlier—I was still unsure of many of the finer details. Ignoring the "stupid people"—you are well aware that I think you precisely the opposite—CSD refers to WP:CSD: criteria for speedy deletion, of which one is WP:G12 (Unambiguous copyright infringement); if not all versions of the article contain close paraphrasing, we might need WP:REVDEL (revision deletion), where versions in the page history get deleted for copyright infringement.
- Right now, the close paraphrasing is far less blatant than it was in April 2022, when I provided this link as an entire paragraph which was plagiarised. From what I can see below, the close paraphrasing is now restricted only to sentence fragments—as such, G12 deletion is out of the question. Hope that helps. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Borsoka-I appreciate, as you say, the chance to clear the article, thank you for that. Will work through this from the top, line by line, and ping you when complete Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:11, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Borsoka, the versions of the article you believe are irrevocably tainted will still reside in the page history even if a version free of plagiarism is created, and will need to be WP:REVDELled. As someone who has nominated many pages for CSD, it is easier to nominate now then later. I will not do this myself as I personally believe there is 0% chance of either G12 or revdel deletion, but if you really think it's needed, it is legally proper to do it now and not later; otherwise, you are knowingly cooperating to keep copyrighted material on WP. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it is a serious issue. You may not remember but it was me who first raised it about a week ago during the FAC review. However, I have not reviewed the whole article, so I only assume that it will be deleted due to plagiarism. After reviewing about one third of the article (or rather collection of texts), I need some time for recovery to continue this exceptionally irksome work. Moreover, I would give a chance to the nominator to clear the article, because a version free of plagiarism could be kept. Borsoka (talk) 13:45, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you think the article is eligible for WP:G12 speedy deletion or WP:AFD, you should nominate it there at once Borsoka; as you have kindly pointed out, copyright is a serious issue, so playing around with GA reassessments is like passing the buck. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I think this is an extremly urgent task. For the time being, I cannot exclude that the whole article will be deleted for plagiarism. I think you know which texts were copied from the cited sources, so you are in the position to solve this problem. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Can be dealt with on an incident by incident basis. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Secondary sources cited in the article dedicate several pages to the Muslim world and the influx of the Turks in the politics of the Middle East [Asbridge (pp. 17-29), Jotischky (pp. 40-47), Lock (pp. 3-19), Madden (pp. 1-5), Tyermann 2019 (pp. 33-45). Several other sources that follow the same path could be listed. Why does the article ignore this usual scholarly approach?
- This article is not about the crusades, it is about the crusade movement e.g. the ideology and institutions of crusading. For this reason there is no MILHIST is this article, as suggested by another editor. It is a Latin Church institution.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did not suggest that MILHIST should be added. The development of the crusading movement should be presented as it is presented in reliable sources. Right now, readers who consult with this article will not understand why the crusading movement began. The presentation of one single scholar's PoV does not solve this problem (I refer to Latham). Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- The above named works are narrative histories of the crusades and go on to detail numerous campaigns in the Eastern Mediterranean. It is natural that they give background on the political and military situation in the East. This article is a subtly different topic, it is about the institutions and ideology that was developed to support crusading that almost entirely occurred in Western Europe. Bull for one saw no need to mention the Turks in any detail when discussing the Origins of crusading because they weren't relevant. Christian Muslim warfare existed for hundreds of years prior to the crusades and would have continued for years even if the crusades did not exist. By definition the instituition of crusading only came into effect because of reformists within the church. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:09, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
- Do you really say that rhe article's non-encyclopedic sources do not cover the article's topic? Why are they cited? Borsoka (talk) 06:48, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- The sources cited, are cited because they contain valuable information on this article's topic. That does not mean or imply that everything written in them is relevant to this article's topic. Equally, just because information is not included in those works should not be taken to mean or imply that it is not relevant to this topic. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:18, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- Bull's perspective differs from your above summary: "What the Mediterranean theatres of war [between Muslims and Christians] had in common ... was that formerly Christian lands were being wrested from infidel control. Consequently the Holy Land, which had been overrun by the Arabs in the seventh century, was bound to attract the Church's attention sooner or later. ... The perspective of a Mediterranean-wide struggle was visible only to those institutions, in particular the papacy, which had the intelligence networks, grasp of geography, and sense of long historical tradition to take a broad overview of Christendom and its threatened predicament, real or supposed." [Bull (1995), p. 19] Jonathan Riley-Smith - who is the editor of the book to which Bull is a contributor - emphasizes, after mentioning Pope Urban II's call for the First Crusade, that "The crusading movement had begun in the melodramatic fashion which was to be typical of it thereafter. ... Now about 60 years old, [Pope Urban II] had embarked on a year-long journey though southern and central France. The summoning of an expedition to the aid of the Byzantine empire had probably been in his mind for several years and it had been aired at a council held at Piacenza in March which had heard an appeal from the Byzantine (Greek) emperor Alexios for aid against the Turks, who for over two decades had been sweeping through Asia Minor and had almost reached the Bosphorus." [Riley-Smith (1995), pp. 1-3]. We can conclude, there is no book cited in the article that ignores pre-Crusades Muslim-Catholic clashes or the Turks' expansion in the Levant. Borsoka (talk) 17:02, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- Not at all, all this does is rather proves the original point. Rather than an idepth summary of several centuries of military history Bull and Riley-Smith feel only a reference or two is necessary. And only the regarding events during or subsequent to the Gregarian reform. This point remains irrelevent and against consunsus on this article. An aricle that has successfully passed both a GAR and a ACR without a single other editor raising this point. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:48, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- There is no consensus on this article. That a point was not raised during the article's reviews does not indicate that it is not relevant. Bull dedicates about 1 page to both pre-Crusades Muslim-Christian conflicts and the Gregorian Reforms. Again, the article should present the movement's background as it is presented in the cited sources. Borsoka (talk) 11:36, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- 1 page on Muslim-Conflicts demonstrates an appropriate weight for this. You have rathered made my point. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:12, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Please read my above remark again. In a chapter containing nineteen pages, one page is quite significant, or at least as significant as the one page about the Gregorian Reforms in the same chapter. Borsoka (talk) 12:52, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Or rather 1 page in a book of 436? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:12, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have not counted the pages about pre-Crusades conflicts between Muslims and Christians, but there are at least two pages in two chapters. The Gregorian reforms are mentioned also on two pages in the book, according to the Index. If you think pre-Crusades conflicts can be ignored, you should also ignore the Gregorian Reforms. Can we agree that it would be a quite original approach? Borsoka (talk) 15:31, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Strangely, Riley-Smith in his chapter "The crusading movement" in "War, Peace and World Order" didn't think to mention those pre-Crusades conflict at all. What is novel is you thinking you know more about the subject than he did. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:19, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- It is quite unusual that you are referring to a source you do not cite in the article. Nevertheless, Riley-Smith neither mentions the Council of Clermont or the Gregorian reform in his chapter. Do you suggest that references to the Council of Clermont or the Gregorian Reform should be deleted from this article? I rather think that he does not refer to the origins of the crusading movement because from the perspective of "War, Peace and World Order in European History" this is irrelevant. No, I am not thinking that I know more about the subject than Riley-Smith does. Above, I quoted a text from his work cited in the article proving that he also emphasises the Turks' invasion of the Byzantine Empire when writing of the beginnings of the crusading movement. Borsoka (talk) 01:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Except this is not the case. Riley-Smith emphasises Alexios I Komnenos requests for military support against the Turks, that is not the same. Neither he nor Bull consider the military history of the Levant in the earlier centuries relevant. Whereas the reforms, the reformers and their institutions are mentioned and relevant. It was they who invented the crusading movement, and without them there would have been no movement. Simply put this is covered in sufficient detail. Unless there is something specific that you can identify as missing, but unless I have missed something that is not the case. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:03, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Read more carefully the quote from Riley-Smith's work, it refers also to the decades before the crusades. I have never suggested that you should present the military history of the Levant in this article. However, our readers need a complex background to understand the beginnings of the crusading movement. For instance, Thomas F. Madden, Professor of History and Director of the Center for Medieval and Renaissance Studies at Saint Louis University, goes as far as stating that the Reconquista—the "reconquest" of Iberia from the Muslims—"was the training ground for the theological and moral justification of the crusading movement". (Madden, Thomas F. (2013). The Concise History of the Crusades. Critical Issues in World and International History (Third ed.). Rowman & Littlefield. p. 4. ISBN 978-1-4422-1575-7.)
- As you point out Madden makes a good point. I would add this to the Christianity & War section, but I am using the First Edition and it doesn't seem to be there (or a page 4 for that matter). Does he make the smae point anywhere else? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:54, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- The quote is from one of the last paragraphs of section "Holy War". I think Madden's PoV nicely fits into a Background section. Right now, the article does not distinguishes developments occurring before the beginnings of the movement, and features of the movement itself. Borsoka (talk) 04:28, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- Found it, thank you, agree and added. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:10, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- As you point out Madden makes a good point. I would add this to the Christianity & War section, but I am using the First Edition and it doesn't seem to be there (or a page 4 for that matter). Does he make the smae point anywhere else? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:54, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Read more carefully the quote from Riley-Smith's work, it refers also to the decades before the crusades. I have never suggested that you should present the military history of the Levant in this article. However, our readers need a complex background to understand the beginnings of the crusading movement. For instance, Thomas F. Madden, Professor of History and Director of the Center for Medieval and Renaissance Studies at Saint Louis University, goes as far as stating that the Reconquista—the "reconquest" of Iberia from the Muslims—"was the training ground for the theological and moral justification of the crusading movement". (Madden, Thomas F. (2013). The Concise History of the Crusades. Critical Issues in World and International History (Third ed.). Rowman & Littlefield. p. 4. ISBN 978-1-4422-1575-7.)
- Except this is not the case. Riley-Smith emphasises Alexios I Komnenos requests for military support against the Turks, that is not the same. Neither he nor Bull consider the military history of the Levant in the earlier centuries relevant. Whereas the reforms, the reformers and their institutions are mentioned and relevant. It was they who invented the crusading movement, and without them there would have been no movement. Simply put this is covered in sufficient detail. Unless there is something specific that you can identify as missing, but unless I have missed something that is not the case. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:03, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- It is quite unusual that you are referring to a source you do not cite in the article. Nevertheless, Riley-Smith neither mentions the Council of Clermont or the Gregorian reform in his chapter. Do you suggest that references to the Council of Clermont or the Gregorian Reform should be deleted from this article? I rather think that he does not refer to the origins of the crusading movement because from the perspective of "War, Peace and World Order in European History" this is irrelevant. No, I am not thinking that I know more about the subject than Riley-Smith does. Above, I quoted a text from his work cited in the article proving that he also emphasises the Turks' invasion of the Byzantine Empire when writing of the beginnings of the crusading movement. Borsoka (talk) 01:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Strangely, Riley-Smith in his chapter "The crusading movement" in "War, Peace and World Order" didn't think to mention those pre-Crusades conflict at all. What is novel is you thinking you know more about the subject than he did. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:19, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have not counted the pages about pre-Crusades conflicts between Muslims and Christians, but there are at least two pages in two chapters. The Gregorian reforms are mentioned also on two pages in the book, according to the Index. If you think pre-Crusades conflicts can be ignored, you should also ignore the Gregorian Reforms. Can we agree that it would be a quite original approach? Borsoka (talk) 15:31, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Or rather 1 page in a book of 436? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:12, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Please read my above remark again. In a chapter containing nineteen pages, one page is quite significant, or at least as significant as the one page about the Gregorian Reforms in the same chapter. Borsoka (talk) 12:52, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- 1 page on Muslim-Conflicts demonstrates an appropriate weight for this. You have rathered made my point. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:12, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- There is no consensus on this article. That a point was not raised during the article's reviews does not indicate that it is not relevant. Bull dedicates about 1 page to both pre-Crusades Muslim-Christian conflicts and the Gregorian Reforms. Again, the article should present the movement's background as it is presented in the cited sources. Borsoka (talk) 11:36, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Not at all, all this does is rather proves the original point. Rather than an idepth summary of several centuries of military history Bull and Riley-Smith feel only a reference or two is necessary. And only the regarding events during or subsequent to the Gregarian reform. This point remains irrelevent and against consunsus on this article. An aricle that has successfully passed both a GAR and a ACR without a single other editor raising this point. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:48, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Bull's perspective differs from your above summary: "What the Mediterranean theatres of war [between Muslims and Christians] had in common ... was that formerly Christian lands were being wrested from infidel control. Consequently the Holy Land, which had been overrun by the Arabs in the seventh century, was bound to attract the Church's attention sooner or later. ... The perspective of a Mediterranean-wide struggle was visible only to those institutions, in particular the papacy, which had the intelligence networks, grasp of geography, and sense of long historical tradition to take a broad overview of Christendom and its threatened predicament, real or supposed." [Bull (1995), p. 19] Jonathan Riley-Smith - who is the editor of the book to which Bull is a contributor - emphasizes, after mentioning Pope Urban II's call for the First Crusade, that "The crusading movement had begun in the melodramatic fashion which was to be typical of it thereafter. ... Now about 60 years old, [Pope Urban II] had embarked on a year-long journey though southern and central France. The summoning of an expedition to the aid of the Byzantine empire had probably been in his mind for several years and it had been aired at a council held at Piacenza in March which had heard an appeal from the Byzantine (Greek) emperor Alexios for aid against the Turks, who for over two decades had been sweeping through Asia Minor and had almost reached the Bosphorus." [Riley-Smith (1995), pp. 1-3]. We can conclude, there is no book cited in the article that ignores pre-Crusades Muslim-Catholic clashes or the Turks' expansion in the Levant. Borsoka (talk) 17:02, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- The sources cited, are cited because they contain valuable information on this article's topic. That does not mean or imply that everything written in them is relevant to this article's topic. Equally, just because information is not included in those works should not be taken to mean or imply that it is not relevant to this topic. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:18, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- This article is not about the crusades, it is about the crusade movement e.g. the ideology and institutions of crusading. For this reason there is no MILHIST is this article, as suggested by another editor. It is a Latin Church institution.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- The article's structure is diffuse, and seemingly lacks any detectable logic: several elements of the flourishing crusading movement are mentioned in section "Background". (For instance, why are the military orders or the development of the crusading ideology in the 13th century mentioned in this section?)
- These are cross topic themes, a narrative structure would mean that detailed commentary would be lost.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did not say that we should follow a narrative structure (even if the article, incoherently, follows it in section "Evolution"). I only said that background to the crusading movement should clearly be differentiated from its features, elements and consequences. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- The use of Background seems to cause some confusion, I will amend to Features as you suggest. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:50, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, a major restructuring is needed, but without a background one could hardly understand the development of the movement. However, I suggest you should concentrate now on copyright issues. Borsoka (talk) 13:59, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Another nonsensical point. Structure is only a perceived issue to you. Consensus, GAR and ACR indicate that it makes sense to a consensus of editors and reviewers. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:50, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- One of the principal problems is that the "article" is actually a poorly edited, extremely abridged version of The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. One can delete subsections from the article without having an effect on any other (sub)section. This is not an encyclopedic article but a collection of individual encyclopedic articles. Borsoka (talk) 11:36, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- It is you and only you who is making this point. Almost by definition PoV pushing. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:13, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Please stop this approach. It leads nowhere. Borsoka (talk) 12:52, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Godtres, Hawkeye7, Peacemaker67, and Donner60: as Norfolkbigfish is always referring to your reviews, I would be grateful if you could share your thoughts especially about two issues: 1. I think the article ignores several important aspects of the crusading movement (especially its background, but also important elements of the flourishing crusading movement, such as finances, women, arts, etc.) 2. I think the article is diffuse, its structure reminds me an encyclopedia with subsections as equivalents of encyclopedic articles that follow each other without any connection between most of them. Borsoka (talk) 12:52, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Well that at least is progress. What exactly do you think is missing regarding finance, women & the arts? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:10, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Clearing the article from plagiarism would be a progress. All other issues are less relevant for the time being. I think the article should summarise the principal points of the movement as it is presented in its sources. Borsoka (talk) 15:31, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- That is wip, thank you for pointing that out. The article pretty much matches Riley-Smith's view of the subject, as his definition of a crusade is now pretty much universally accepted it would be fair to say that the pricipal points are presented. The topic is, as it has always been the crusading movement. Not the crusades, not Muslim/Christian relations in the 7th/8th/9th/10th centuries, not the Orthodox church and not campaigns in the Eastern Mediterrean or anywhere else for that matter. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:25, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- To which works by Riley-Smith are you referring? Interestingly, in his work cited in the article (What were the Crusades?) he mentions both pre-Crusades conflicts between Muslims and Christians, and the Turks' advance in Anatolia. Borsoka (talk) 01:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- I am referring to Riley-Smith's essay titled "The Crusading Movement", it is the Further Reading. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Please read my answer to your similar remark above: [2]. Borsoka (talk) 17:13, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- To which works by Riley-Smith are you referring? Interestingly, in his work cited in the article (What were the Crusades?) he mentions both pre-Crusades conflicts between Muslims and Christians, and the Turks' advance in Anatolia. Borsoka (talk) 01:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Clearing the article from plagiarism would be a progress. All other issues are less relevant for the time being. I think the article should summarise the principal points of the movement as it is presented in its sources. Borsoka (talk) 15:31, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- One of the principal problems is that the "article" is actually a poorly edited, extremely abridged version of The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. One can delete subsections from the article without having an effect on any other (sub)section. This is not an encyclopedic article but a collection of individual encyclopedic articles. Borsoka (talk) 11:36, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, a major restructuring is needed, but without a background one could hardly understand the development of the movement. However, I suggest you should concentrate now on copyright issues. Borsoka (talk) 13:59, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did not say that we should follow a narrative structure (even if the article, incoherently, follows it in section "Evolution"). I only said that background to the crusading movement should clearly be differentiated from its features, elements and consequences. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- These are cross topic themes, a narrative structure would mean that detailed commentary would be lost.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- In most cases, the article does not explain the events, but mentions facts or PoVs without making clear the connection between them, or providing our readers with a coherent (or incoherent) story: "Pope X said this, Pope Y told that, and Pope Z said another thing, etc".
- This article is about the ideology and institutions. As such PoVs are key, as are facts. The facts relate to changes to this. The events mentioned here are probably outside the scope of the topic.
- Yes, but ideologies and institutions rarely develop ex nihilio. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- This article is about the ideology and institutions. As such PoVs are key, as are facts. The facts relate to changes to this. The events mentioned here are probably outside the scope of the topic.
- The article contains original research and original synthesis. Several examples can be found in the "Specific remarks" section. Borsoka (talk) 04:21, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- If so, this is unintentional and can be remediated as part of the review. Nothing here is WP:OR, everything comes from academic writing. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did not say you had intentionally filled the article with original research. I only referred to the fact that it (or at least its first major section) is filled with sentences that are not verified by the cited source or cobtradict it. Borsoka (talk) 12:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Everything in the article has come from WP:RS Norfolkbigfish (talk) 12:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, quite often word by word. However, also quite often the sentences do not reflect the cited source, sometimes because you failed to copy an important word from the cited book or encyclopedic article. Many examples are listed below. Borsoka (talk) 13:51, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did not say you had intentionally filled the article with original research. I only referred to the fact that it (or at least its first major section) is filled with sentences that are not verified by the cited source or cobtradict it. Borsoka (talk) 12:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- If so, this is unintentional and can be remediated as part of the review. Nothing here is WP:OR, everything comes from academic writing. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
specific FAC comments
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- I would have to call for a delisting of this article. If the issues were only editorial, I'd be willing to give time for those to be addressed (FARs—as a similar example—go on months!); there's no deadline after all. The issue that demands immediate attention is the copyright/close para issue, one which not only negatively impacts other policies such as WP:N (also itself a pillar), but has legal implications. While G12 may not apply (i.e., when
there is no non-infringing content on the page worth saving. Only if the history is unsalvageably corrupted should it be deleted in its entirety
, and maybe revert to an earlier version), #2 of WP:QF is clear that ifIt contains copyright violations
it will be discounted. Multiple editors have established these issues. So: if this was a new nomination, it would literally never get off the starting blocks. Revert to last version and let more recent stuff be revdel'd? ——Serial Number 54129 14:36, 8 April 2024 (UTC)- I am working through all raised incident at present. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 14:43, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I assume the older versions contain even more plagiarism. AirshipJungleman29 mentioned at the beginning of the FAC review that "I believe that the last time I looked at this article, I felt that there was substantial close paraphrasing. I do hope that issue has been adequately looked at and resolved—because that of course is a reviewing dealbreaker." ([3]). Norfolkbigfish answered that "I remember, this has been rewritten repeatedly since then so I am expecting/hoping this is no longer an issue." [4]. Borsoka (talk) 15:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Borsoka: I don't care where the bloody thing was put in, only that if there is a relatively clean version—and frankly, since it's from 2003, it's almost impossible that there isn't, even if it's only a stub—going back a few years, the GOCE did a copy edit—then we revert to that and then revdel delete. I mean, there must have been a time when there was minimal plagiarism unless it's been overlooked for 20 years. Or is it being suggested that NBF was responsible for their insertion when he augmented the article? I note, you see, that a previous FAC failed promotion over much the same problems(the source reviewer stated,
the article needs a complete source check ... Too many issues I found with things not matching what they were sourced to
. Mind ye, that had been resolved to the point of promotion six months later (non obstante, though, that it never got the source-integrity spot-check Ian Rose asked for...) ——Serial Number 54129 15:27, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I think only Norfolkbigfish knows when he began copying texts from the cited sources. I have not monitored the development of this article for years. Norfolkbigfish's remark here suggests that the article was originally a redirect, which was developed into a separate article on or before 4 October 2020. No, I did not see the FAC review of House of Lancaster (sorry, Plantagenet). I referred to this article because I know from one of his remarks (saying that his article is one of the best WP articles about a dynasty, or similar), that he developed it. Based on my experiences, I would not be surprised that it would also contain plagiarism but I would not like to review it. Borsoka (talk) 16:25, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Borsoka, I see... On 4 Oct 2020 NBF moved a chunk of Crusades, wholesale, to Crusading, which was itself then moved by Srnec to the current title. Concerns re. CP and atribution were apparent even before then, which of course NBF was also a primary contributor too. Thanks again, ——Serial Number 54129 17:17, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Borsoka: I don't care where the bloody thing was put in, only that if there is a relatively clean version—and frankly, since it's from 2003, it's almost impossible that there isn't, even if it's only a stub—going back a few years, the GOCE did a copy edit—then we revert to that and then revdel delete. I mean, there must have been a time when there was minimal plagiarism unless it's been overlooked for 20 years. Or is it being suggested that NBF was responsible for their insertion when he augmented the article? I note, you see, that a previous FAC failed promotion over much the same problems(the source reviewer stated,
- The earlier comments to which I referred at FAC can be found at this diff, and the links therein, from April 2022, when the close paraphrasing was far more blatant than it is now. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:27, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- I am in the process of redrafting again, any remaining close paraphrasing, of which it is only now fragments of sentences, will be excised as part of this. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:27, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- The earlier comments to which I referred at FAC can be found at this diff, and the links therein, from April 2022, when the close paraphrasing was far more blatant than it is now. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:27, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Delist Norfolkbigfish has continually insisted that plagiarism has been resolved, but as demonstrated on the talk page, substantial plagiarism still exists. I am too involved to close this as I normally do for GARs, so I might as well !vote. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:18, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Delist In addition to plagiarism (GA 2d), the article contains unverified claims (GA 2c.), does not address the main aspects of the topic (GA 3a), and the article's reliance on specific scholar's views remained unverified (GA 4). My detailed arguments are listed above. Borsoka (talk) 00:24, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Delist per Borsoka's forensic analysis. ——Serial Number 54129 09:50, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- List on the basis that all issues identified have been addressed, Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:34, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- For the time being, let's forget other issues than blatant plagiarism. Do you guarantee that you cleaned the text of plagiarism? Borsoka (talk)
- I detected new cases of plagiarism in two further short sections of the article. I think the article should as soon as possible be delisted and restored into the redirect page it used to be before Norfolkbigfish filled it with texts copied from copyrighted material. Borsoka (talk) 02:46, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- All now addressed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:52, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- @GAR coordinators: this is not going anywhere, and I am too involved to close. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:30, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Probably not going anywhere because it is a particularly malformed GAR. Nominated, flooded with comment by the nominator who has a history of trying to get the article deleted, and then even closed by that nominator. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:17, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- What a helpful comment. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:01, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Probably not going anywhere because it is a particularly malformed GAR. Nominated, flooded with comment by the nominator who has a history of trying to get the article deleted, and then even closed by that nominator. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:17, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Plagiarism and close paraphrasing
Although the article has underwent several reviews and edits, it is still filled with plagiarism and close paraphrasing. Many cases can be read here (under section "specific FAC comments"), but I listed other cases of plagiarism and close paraphrasing from a relatively short section of the article "12th century". The below list contain both the article's text and the text of its source Borsoka (talk) 17:21, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- The first century of crusading coincided with the Renaissance of the 12th century, and crusading was represented through the rich vernacular literature that evolved in France and Germany.:
- "The period of the first four crusades coincides with the evolution in France and Germany of a rich vernacular literature which does reflect the crusades."
- Crusade songs served multiple purposes. They provided material for the poet/performer, variations on courtly love, allegories, and paradigms. Through song audiences learnt doctrine, information, and propaganda unmediated by the Church. These songs reinforced the nobility's self-image, confirmed its position in society, and inspired esprit de corps.:
- "... crusade songs served several purposes. From the point of view of the poet-performer, they provided material for sirventes, a counterpoint to and a source of variations on the theme of courtly love, a range of allegories and structures of thought. From the point of view of the audience ...they presented, in a palatable way exclusive to their milieu, the doctrine, information, and popaganda that was otherwise delivered by preachers or diffused by clercs. At the same time, the songs reinforced the audience's self-image and showed how the crusade could conirm their possessions of the virtues of nobility, holding up models for them to emulate and to inspire their esprit de corps."
- He also equated the reconquest of Iberia from the Muslims with crusading in the Holy Land....
- "Calixtus also equated participation in the Reconquista (reconquest of Iberia from the Muslims) with the crusades to the Holy Land.
- The Holy Land was considered the patrimony of Christ and its recovery was on behalf of God. The Albigensian Crusade was a defence of the French Church, the Baltic Crusades were campaigns conquering lands beloved of Christ's mother Mary for Christianity.
- "...the Holy Land was represented as the patrimony of Chrfist that the crusaders were recovering on God's behalf. The Albigensian Crusade ... was called a war in defense of the French church as the spouse of Christ; the Baltic Crusades were conceptualized as campaings to conquer for Christianity lands beloved of Mary, the mother of Christ."
I also remark that several sentences in the section are not verified by the allegedly cited source. Borsoka (talk) 17:21, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- Taking into account that plagiarism has been detected since the article's creation, I think it should be restored to a redirect page: [5]. Borsoka (talk) 18:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- For transparency; this has been listed at copyright problems for review. Sennecaster (Chat) 20:36, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Sennecaster, I have been working through this article cleansing any obvious infringments, if I have missed any please let me know and I will remediate. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 06:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish: your edit summaries do not indicate that you have been working on cleansing the article. Could you make it clear when editing in the future? It would facilitate reviewers' work. @Sennecaster:, do you agree with my suggestion? Borsoka (talk) 07:29, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- It would be very useful, to us editors who review the Copyright Problems board, if edits that were rewriting infringing content had edit summaries that described them as such, so we can quickly assess whether any problematic content remains. – Isochrone (talk) 17:59, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- I will explicitly label any edits that are directly intended in fixing content issues in future. Currently I am working my way through the article to reduce the reliance on an Encyclopedia that @Borsoka considers a particular issues, identifying new sources and rewriting the text appropriately. I am not aware of any issues that have been raised and not resolved. If there are any I will address as part of this process. Please do call these out so this can be fixed quickly. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 14:29, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- It would be very useful, to us editors who review the Copyright Problems board, if edits that were rewriting infringing content had edit summaries that described them as such, so we can quickly assess whether any problematic content remains. – Isochrone (talk) 17:59, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- You have no other work to do than cleansing the article from copyvio. Borsoka (talk) 14:34, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- OK, would you mind listing anything you consider is out standing on that basis? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:33, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Right now, I am extremly busy in real life. I have several times repeated to you that it is your responsability. Borsoka (talk) 15:55, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Well, as far as I am aware I have addressed all points raised, whether real or perceived. I remain willing and able to address any and all that I have missed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Are you sure you are here to build an encyclopedia? It is quite obvious that you still do not take this issue seriously, although you were very close to loose your editing privileges. You have promised several times, that you will be working on this issue. For instance, you stated at 16:40 on April 10th that "I am in the process of clearing the article of any remaining hint, although it apperas to be only fragments of sentences now." Nine days later, I still detected several examples of plagiarism, as it is demonstrated by the list at the very beginning of this section. Your blatant and persistent plagiarism have been detected by at least two other editors ([6], [7]). Still, your sole edit summary referring to your attempt to cleanse the article implies that plagiarism is only my perception: [8]. I strongly suggest that you should not wait for other editors' input because "copyright violations not only harm Wikipedia's redistributability, but also create legal issues". Borsoka (talk) 02:30, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Norfolkbigfish, are you saying that you have removed all plagiarism from the article, or that you have removed all the plagiarism that Borsoka identified? I am increasingly concerned about your perception of the issue. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:33, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- What I am saying @AirshipJungleman29 is that I have removed all the plagarism that I am aware, or have been made aware, of. I have run the tool against the article and this indicates that 1) it detects a low risk (<11% chance) of plagarism; 2) That if there is plagarism, the most likely book is one I don't have, I haven't used and isn't cited in the article. I am working way through the article and removing the usage of the Encyclopedia, resourcing, reciting and copy editing as I go. I doubt very much whether this leaves anything outstanding, but I understand it remains under investigation and if anything remains it will be remediated. The level of scrutiny is now such that is over and above what is normal for an article. I acccept that I am responsible for this, but we are now talking of standard academic terms used across all the works cited, fragments, and in one case a 2 word wikilink being cited as signs of plagarism or close paraphrasing. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:26, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- By "the tool", I assume you mean Earwig, which cannot detect close paraphrasing or check against books (WP:NOTEARWIG) Norfolkbigfish? The trouble is that you have repeatedly claimed that plagiarism has been addressed, only for blatant violations like the last one above to be uncovered. Is this going to happen again? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:03, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, Earwig. I am endevouring to ensure it is not repeated, it certainly won't be intentionally repeated @AirshipJungleman29. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:38, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- By "the tool", I assume you mean Earwig, which cannot detect close paraphrasing or check against books (WP:NOTEARWIG) Norfolkbigfish? The trouble is that you have repeatedly claimed that plagiarism has been addressed, only for blatant violations like the last one above to be uncovered. Is this going to happen again? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:03, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- What I am saying @AirshipJungleman29 is that I have removed all the plagarism that I am aware, or have been made aware, of. I have run the tool against the article and this indicates that 1) it detects a low risk (<11% chance) of plagarism; 2) That if there is plagarism, the most likely book is one I don't have, I haven't used and isn't cited in the article. I am working way through the article and removing the usage of the Encyclopedia, resourcing, reciting and copy editing as I go. I doubt very much whether this leaves anything outstanding, but I understand it remains under investigation and if anything remains it will be remediated. The level of scrutiny is now such that is over and above what is normal for an article. I acccept that I am responsible for this, but we are now talking of standard academic terms used across all the works cited, fragments, and in one case a 2 word wikilink being cited as signs of plagarism or close paraphrasing. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:26, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- Well, as far as I am aware I have addressed all points raised, whether real or perceived. I remain willing and able to address any and all that I have missed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Right now, I am extremly busy in real life. I have several times repeated to you that it is your responsability. Borsoka (talk) 15:55, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- OK, would you mind listing anything you consider is out standing on that basis? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:33, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish: your edit summaries do not indicate that you have been working on cleansing the article. Could you make it clear when editing in the future? It would facilitate reviewers' work. @Sennecaster:, do you agree with my suggestion? Borsoka (talk) 07:29, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Sennecaster, I have been working through this article cleansing any obvious infringments, if I have missed any please let me know and I will remediate. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 06:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Further examples of plagiarism and close paraphrasing
I reviewed two further (very short) sections, and found the following examples of plagiarism:
- Crusade providentialism was intricately linked with a prophetic sensibility at the end of the 12th century. Joachim of Fiore included the war against the infidels in his cryptic conflations of history combining past, present, and future. Foreshadowing the Children's Crusade, he believed that the third of his three ages of history was the age of the Holy Spirit. The representatives of this were children, or pueri. Franciscans such as Salimbene saw themselves as ordo parvulorum – an "order of little ones" amongst a revivalist enthusiasm and a spirit of apocalypse. The Austrian Rhymed Chronicle added apocalyptic elements of mytho-history to the Children's Crusade.
- "Crusade providentialism went hand-in-glove with a prophetic sensibility. It is not coincidence that the greatest of medieval prophets, Joachim of Fiore (d. 1212), was a child of the crusading epoch an in his alluringly cryptic world-historical conflation of past, present, and future found a place for the war against the infidel. ... Joachim taught that the new century which began in 1200 would see the tumultuous transition to a third epoc in human history, the age of the Spirit. ... symbolic of the third age, that of the Holy Spirit, which was imminent, were children, pueri. Joachim disciples pored over his prophesies. Among the most enthralled were Franciscans like Salimbene, for the Franciscans saw themselves as an ordo parvulorum, an order of little ones, of pueri. Although Joachite prophecy had no impact upon the pueri of 1212, revivalist enthusiasm itself encourages a spirit of prophetic elation. Later writers like Salimbene and the author of the Austrian Rhymed Chronicle added a prophetic element to the mythistory of the Children's Crusade."
- Aristocratic family networks and feudal hierarchies played key roles in disseminating informal propaganda about crusades during the medieval era.
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- "Most significant was the information about the crusade that passed through family networks and feudal hierarchies." The quote is from an encyclopedic article that is seemingly not cited in the article (Maier, Christoph T. (2006b). "Propaganda". In Murray, Alan V. (ed.). The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. Vol. III:K-P. ABC-Clio. pp. 984–988. ISBN 978-1-57607-862-4.)
- Church art and architecture, including murals, stained glass windows, and sculptures, often depicted themes related to the movement.
- "Church art and architecture in particular took up themes related to crusading in murals, strained glass windows, and sculptures." The quote is from an encyclopedic article that is seemingly not cited in the article (Maier, Christoph T. (2006b). "Propaganda". In Murray, Alan V. (ed.). The Crusades: An Encyclopedia. Vol. III:K-P. ABC-Clio. pp. 984–988. ISBN 978-1-57607-862-4.)
Not done—this is simply two lists. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:39, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Classical example of copyvio. Borsoka (talk) 09:18, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Done—as per Airship's comment below. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:14, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Classical example of copyvio. Borsoka (talk) 09:18, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- "By the time of the Fifth Crusade this system developed into executive boards with legatine power, while the papacy codified preaching."
- "For almost every province an executive board was established, with legatine powers in the matter of the crusade, to implement promotional policy."
What is especially alarming, that in two cases the text in the article was copied from a source (Maier's article from The Crusades: An Encyclopedia) that is not cited which makes the detection of copyvio extremly difficult. Norfolkbigfish already used this tactic to hide his plagiarism ([9]). I think this article should be restored as soon as possible into the redirect page it used to be before Norfolkbigfish filled it with texts copied from copyrighted material. Borsoka (talk) 02:42, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- All addressed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:51, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- I am torn here. The first example, to me, is straightforward CLOP: it's a lot of text where a lot of the creative decisions about structure, order and presentation have simply been cloned. On the others, I am less sure that they are plagiarism within the meaning of WP:CLOP, at least in isolation. There is after all a tension between WP:CLOP and WP:TSI: it's important that the bare factual information of the sources is communicated without change in the article. In the last one, in particular, it would break WP:TSI to rephrase "executive board" unless we are absolutely confident what the source means by it, and both it and "legatine powers" are two-word phrases which have an established use and meaning: they are not creative works of the cited author. Granted, it's poor academic form not to cite the work which is the immediate source for an article, and there are other, perhaps better, ways to express what has been done, but there's a large gap between "the best way to do it" and "culpably bad enough to get the page WP:TNT'd".
- With that said, the problem with plagiarism, CLOP etc is that we can only ever catch a subset of it: it's almost a given that more exists that we don't catch, and there will always be a question-mark hanging over the article that can only really be removed by another editor re-writing it from scratch. My personal feeling is that the content of article would be a loss if reduced a redirect, but equally that we cannot have an article with serious doubts over its integrity, however valuable is contents are.
- All that is, I suspect, a lot of words to say relatively little, but I think it would help for some other (relatively) uninvolved editors to weigh in on where they see the balance. UndercoverClassicist T·C 08:53, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- I would not describe large chunks of texts copied from sources as "valuable": it is rather a permanent source of legal problems for our community. From the very beginning, plagiarism has been continously detected, and after more than two years one can still easily find more examples. Some of the above and previous examples indicate that Norfolkbigfish tends to hide plagiarism by not referring to the plagiarised sources in the text, so no one can guarantee that any version of the article is free of plagiarism. Borsoka (talk) 09:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Personally, I also find the third example above rather too close for comfort UndercoverClassicist, especially as it's from a source that isn't actually cited. The others are more borderline. I think there is no question that Norfolkbigfish has a poor understanding of what exemplifies plagiarism, as exemplified by the fact they cited a copyright tool which only checks web sources as evidence that an article which cites a single web source does not contain plagiarism (I can't quite get my head around that one). However, I do think I have a good understanding of copyright processes, and I don't think there is adequate justificatiion for reverting the article to a redirect, although it probably should lose its GA status. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:38, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @AirshipJungleman29, on that basis I have excised this example. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:13, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Do you really want to run the risk of legal problems by keeping a closely paraphrased, poorly edited article? About 50% of the article has been reviewed, and dozens of cases of copyvio, close paraphrasing have already been detected. Borsoka (talk) 11:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- I must say @Norfolkbigfish I find it remarkable that you have managed to forget what you have and have not closely paraphrased from sources. In significantly fewer words than the above, if the copyright concerns are foundational, then much of the article, even parts that may not have violations, will have to be removed (it is already listed at WP:CP).UndercoverClassicist is right in saying that there are certain phrases in which there are limited other ways to creatively express them. However, it is clear from the above examples that the structure and foundation of the source materials is still deeply integrated into some areas of the article.It is not impossible for this to be rewritten; a common exercise involves reading a source, going away for a few minutes, and then writing what you remember and correcting errors or supplementing information after. Whether that can be done for an article of this size is questionable. – Isochrone (talk) 12:35, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- It is just a question of time @Isochrone, I am busy IRL and I am doing this when possible. Where the article has been reviewed and issues raised I have endeavoured to remediate these as soon as possible. It is a complex subject with many technical terms, a large article, some of it is years old and has been through GOCE, 2 x Peer review, GAR and ACR. The suggestion in your third paragraph is useful/welcome, but that is not going to be a quick job. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:00, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Close paraphrasing could have easily been avoided in 95% of my examples of copyvio above, because there are few technical terms. I am not sure that Norfolkbigfish is able to rewrite the article in a way that all copyvio would be deleted. For instance, occasionally he does not cite the source from which he copied text but an other source ([10]), or even he dares to delete citations from the article to hide plagiarism ([11]). What is clear that three weeks ago I gave a chance to Norfolkbigfish to rewrite the article, but he failed, as I can without much work find new and new examples of previously undetected plagiarism . His only concern is his undeserved GA badge [12]. Borsoka (talk) 15:42, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Borsoka I don't think criticising an editor's article achievements if the best way to find a resolution here. @Norfolkbigfish I understand as such, but the main problem here is that you seem to relying on other editors to highlight your own copyright issues, which is obviously going to take much longer than if you just did so yourself.Unfortunately, copyright is one of the few aspects of Wikipedia where there actually is a deadline. Other editors will never be able to adequately clear an article of copyright violations if you yourself have difficulty in identifying them. I highly recommend you read, comprehensively, close paraphrasing, as it is quite clear that you are struggling to understand what is an is not an issue.As I said above, the content will have to be removed outright if anything remains (though of course you are free to add it back at any time if appropriately rewritten). We generally have a seven day limit for doing this at CP, but as this seems to be such a complex issue, I think a resolution here is a better solution. Else, it will be removed. – Isochrone (talk) 16:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Achievements? Sportsmen who use drugs are criticised and discredited. By copying texts, Norfolkbigfish used illegal drugs to enhance their performance. Borsoka (talk) 02:31, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Isochrone, I am struggling with getting the time on this one and will be away for a week. Resolving here is certainly the best way forward, and I am in the process of working my way through this as fast as I can. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:56, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- To clarify, that does not mean that the content will not be removed, but the fact there is so much that needs to be checked means it is much preferable that a solution is fashioned here. Really, the only way I can imagine to clear this otherwise is by deleting most of the article (which is not permitted by guidelines save some exceptions).For now, any problematic text should be hidden using the {{subst:copyvio}} template: @Borsoka, as you seem to know more than I do in where there are infringing elements, would you mind doing this as suitable? – Isochrone (talk) 17:00, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- I did my homework: I have indicated several times during the last 1,5 months that the article is filled with plagiarism and copyvio and I offered a period of two weeks to Norfolkbigfish to clean it. I think editors who are convinced that this poorly edited article should be saved should also review it and guarantee that it is free of plagiarism. Good luck. One cannot be sure from which sources are texts copied because Norfolkbigfish sometimes uses false citations to hide plagiarism. If no editor does this irksome and risky work, the article should be reduced to the original redirect page ([13]). Norfolkbigfish's other "achievements" should also be investigated from copyvio perspective: Angevin kings of England, House of Lancaster, House of Plantagenet. Borsoka (talk) 02:31, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
If no editor does this irksome and risky work, the article should be reduced to the original redirect page
: I will defer to those with more experience of copyvio cases, but it would seem bizarre to delete an article because of evidence we assume exists but which hasn't actually been presented. UndercoverClassicist T·C 11:30, 1 May 2024 (UTC)- Your above statement is what sounds bizarre. Borsoka (talk) 01:16, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- Please step back from this and re-evaluate your approach in calling attention to issues. Hostility and strong language towards someone's editing capabilities is not helpful in copyright. If you want to have a systemic review of contributions, WP:CCI is the place to request it with diffs and proven sources, not an article talk page with vague statements of issues. UndercoverClassicist is correct in that articles are not BLARed without evidence. The general exception is a CCI with extensive and systemic copying proven with some combination of paywall, offline, source falsification on a mass scale, or socking. I use PDEL a decent amount, but I find the prospect in this context to not be good. Sennecaster (Chat) 04:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Sennecaster: did you review the article? Borsoka (talk) 04:17, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and it's not something I have time or energy to handle completely myself, I just checked in on the progress since I know Isochrone has been discussing here. Sennecaster (Chat) 04:23, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Do you say that my above examples do not prove blatant plagiarism and the sections I have not reviewed do not contain plagiarism? Borsoka (talk) 04:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's not plagiarism, it's copying, and copyright folks treat it differently (the former referring to attribution failures and the latter referring to copyvio). The content should be removed until then. However, the article is not all close paraphrasing and is salvageable, thus remaining offending content should be removed but the article is NOT in a state to be stubbified outright.Sennecaster (Chat) 04:38, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- You are incorrect, if I'm understanding correctly. Close paraphrasing is a core example of plagiarism, is it not? Remsense诉 06:18, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's not plagiarism, it's copying, and copyright folks treat it differently (the former referring to attribution failures and the latter referring to copyvio). The content should be removed until then. However, the article is not all close paraphrasing and is salvageable, thus remaining offending content should be removed but the article is NOT in a state to be stubbified outright.Sennecaster (Chat) 04:38, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Do you say that my above examples do not prove blatant plagiarism and the sections I have not reviewed do not contain plagiarism? Borsoka (talk) 04:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and it's not something I have time or energy to handle completely myself, I just checked in on the progress since I know Isochrone has been discussing here. Sennecaster (Chat) 04:23, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Sennecaster: did you review the article? Borsoka (talk) 04:17, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Please step back from this and re-evaluate your approach in calling attention to issues. Hostility and strong language towards someone's editing capabilities is not helpful in copyright. If you want to have a systemic review of contributions, WP:CCI is the place to request it with diffs and proven sources, not an article talk page with vague statements of issues. UndercoverClassicist is correct in that articles are not BLARed without evidence. The general exception is a CCI with extensive and systemic copying proven with some combination of paywall, offline, source falsification on a mass scale, or socking. I use PDEL a decent amount, but I find the prospect in this context to not be good. Sennecaster (Chat) 04:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Your above statement is what sounds bizarre. Borsoka (talk) 01:16, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
- I did my homework: I have indicated several times during the last 1,5 months that the article is filled with plagiarism and copyvio and I offered a period of two weeks to Norfolkbigfish to clean it. I think editors who are convinced that this poorly edited article should be saved should also review it and guarantee that it is free of plagiarism. Good luck. One cannot be sure from which sources are texts copied because Norfolkbigfish sometimes uses false citations to hide plagiarism. If no editor does this irksome and risky work, the article should be reduced to the original redirect page ([13]). Norfolkbigfish's other "achievements" should also be investigated from copyvio perspective: Angevin kings of England, House of Lancaster, House of Plantagenet. Borsoka (talk) 02:31, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- To clarify, that does not mean that the content will not be removed, but the fact there is so much that needs to be checked means it is much preferable that a solution is fashioned here. Really, the only way I can imagine to clear this otherwise is by deleting most of the article (which is not permitted by guidelines save some exceptions).For now, any problematic text should be hidden using the {{subst:copyvio}} template: @Borsoka, as you seem to know more than I do in where there are infringing elements, would you mind doing this as suitable? – Isochrone (talk) 17:00, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Borsoka I don't think criticising an editor's article achievements if the best way to find a resolution here. @Norfolkbigfish I understand as such, but the main problem here is that you seem to relying on other editors to highlight your own copyright issues, which is obviously going to take much longer than if you just did so yourself.Unfortunately, copyright is one of the few aspects of Wikipedia where there actually is a deadline. Other editors will never be able to adequately clear an article of copyright violations if you yourself have difficulty in identifying them. I highly recommend you read, comprehensively, close paraphrasing, as it is quite clear that you are struggling to understand what is an is not an issue.As I said above, the content will have to be removed outright if anything remains (though of course you are free to add it back at any time if appropriately rewritten). We generally have a seven day limit for doing this at CP, but as this seems to be such a complex issue, I think a resolution here is a better solution. Else, it will be removed. – Isochrone (talk) 16:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Close paraphrasing could have easily been avoided in 95% of my examples of copyvio above, because there are few technical terms. I am not sure that Norfolkbigfish is able to rewrite the article in a way that all copyvio would be deleted. For instance, occasionally he does not cite the source from which he copied text but an other source ([10]), or even he dares to delete citations from the article to hide plagiarism ([11]). What is clear that three weeks ago I gave a chance to Norfolkbigfish to rewrite the article, but he failed, as I can without much work find new and new examples of previously undetected plagiarism . His only concern is his undeserved GA badge [12]. Borsoka (talk) 15:42, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Do you really want to run the risk of legal problems by keeping a closely paraphrased, poorly edited article? About 50% of the article has been reviewed, and dozens of cases of copyvio, close paraphrasing have already been detected. Borsoka (talk) 11:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- All addressed. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:51, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
I may misunderstand your above remarks, but do you say I could copy texts from the cited sources without violating any copyright law because copyright folks prefer copying to plagiarism? This could ease my work because I am not a native English speaker. Borsoka (talk) 04:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- You are using terms correctly. Copyright violation is the legal aspect, where an entity's intellectual property rights are violated. It is often but not always coterminous in applicability with plagiarism, the ethical aspect where one passes off work as theirs within a given context when it is is not (this includes self-plagiarism). For example, copying directly from public domain sources to Wikipedia without direct attribution would not be a copyright violation, but it would be plagiarism. Remsense诉 06:17, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Sennecaster, my understanding was that close paraphrasing, such as examples which have been outlined on this page and at the GAR, can constitute both plagiarism, if done without proper attribution, and copyright violations, if done excessively. Is that incorrect? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:07, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
@Sennecaster: thank you for openning my eyes: I am a sinful editor who was hostile towards a co-editor who was diligently copying texts from copyrighted material, thus improving Wikipedia. I promise that in the future I will never compare texts in articles with the cited sources, because I do not want to prevent the publication of copyrighted material in FAs. I hope this masterpiece of WP editorship will soon be published on the main page as a TFA. Borsoka (talk) 05:48, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- I poorly explained myself here and I apologize for that. Plagiarism is trying to pass off something as your own work, copyvio is infringing on rights by substantially copying. Typically we refer to everything as copyvio over at CP and CCI for simplicity, but Airship is right in that it can be both and it usually is. Remsense is correct that in that plagiarism is mostly used to explain that you can't just pass things off as your own if it's freely licsened, but the core thing that we deal with is the removal of copying wholesale, whether or not it's attributed properly. Borsoka, I'm going to take you seriously on this regardless if you mean it as snark or not. You are not allowed to add copyvio under any circumstance. Consequences can go as far as indeffing and would warrant this being expanded.
- At this point, remove whatever's still closely paraphrased but leave the references in the article (near the reference section) and then rewrites can be moved into place with attribution as they are completed and checked for infringement. The article should not be blanked entirely because as I understand, there is salvageable content. That's the best way to clear this up, but since both Isochrone and myself are busy with both IRL and other onwiki obligations, neither of us will be able to personally handle the removal for a little while. (please do not ping on reply)Sennecaster (Chat) 23:16, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- There are thousands of WP editors, including myself, whose time is also limited. I have indicated dozens of cases of plagiarism and copyvio in the first third of the article, but I do not want to continue this work because I am fed up with reviewing this article. Borsoka (talk) 05:15, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Rewrite & copy edit
In consideration of the WP:Copyright concerns I commit to rewriting and copy editing this article to ensure that I have not introduced any copyright violations or close paraphrasing. I will take Isochrone's kind advice to understand WP:close paraphrasing. I am away on holiday today but will pick this up on my return. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 06:49, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- Started here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crusading_movement&diff=prev&oldid=1221702048, will work down section by section and then lead.........when I return from holiday.
- All feedback welcome Isochrone—AirshipJungleman29 Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:04, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I would suggest that you do this in userspace Norfolkbigfish; we have established that you don't really understand how plagiarism works, so perhaps better to avoid any chance of adding it to mainspace. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:24, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I can certainly do that @AirshipJungleman29, just trying to demonstrate I am showing willing. If the patience is there? Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I would suggest that you do this in userspace Norfolkbigfish; we have established that you don't really understand how plagiarism works, so perhaps better to avoid any chance of adding it to mainspace. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:24, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Norfolkbigfish, it is moderately concerning that you seem to exclusively prefer describing the issue as "suspicion of copyvio". Far be it from me to want to scold peoples' language choices for sport. To be crystal clear, this is solely an abstract rhetorical point and not a reflection of anything that could happen or I would want to happen—but if your article had been published in a print encyclopedia, there would have been legal consequences over your infringement of the copyright of others. This is simply the case, and it is incontrovertibly so: I say it with the highest certainly one can have about theoretical events. It would be nice to continue moving on, and being plain about the situation can only help with that. Remsense诉 14:05, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- Happy to tag these series of edits something else @Remsense Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
Major features
The first four paragraphs of this section have been rewritten to avoid any suspicion of plagaraism or close paraphrasing. These act as as introduction and flow into the later sections, touching as they do on the various reform movements of the 11th-century. As Morris writes it is difficult to distinguish between them. Sourcing has been checked and ammended where required. Nothing contained here is contentious or would trouble academics working in the area. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 22:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- The term the church is not a proper noun so isn't capitalised. If it good enough for Morris is should be good enough for this article. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:28, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Be consequent. You also used the capitalised form in the same section, so I also modified these cases. I think in context "Church" should be used, but I can accept your version.
- There are still unverified statements in the article. Borsoka (talk) 01:41, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- On that basis and for consistency I have decapped all uses of the church in the article. It is British English, it is not a proper noun and as Morris is an academic church historian—if it is good enough for him, it should be good enough for us. The statements are verified, but will look to address the tagging later. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:55, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Penance and indulgence
This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:40, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Christianity and war
This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Knights, chivalry and the military orders
This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:31, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Common people
This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 22:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Perception of Muslims
This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 10:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
History
The introduction to this section has been rewritten to remove any suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:49, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
Legacy
his section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio.Norfolkbigfish (talk) 14:21, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Historiography
Started Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:02, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Or rather Historiography started Norfolkbigfish (talk) 15:04, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- This section has been rewritten to remove suspicion of copyvio. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:20, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
Tags, verification and clarification
Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:27, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
If you indeed want to clean the article, please compare your texts with your sources before publishing your edits. Your latest edits contain unverified statements, including two whole sentences ([14]). If you do not reveal your actual sources, no one will be able to guarantee that your text remained free of plagiarism and copyvio. Borsoka (talk) 02:30, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
I have at least four times indicited that the allegedly cited sources do not verify the two tagged statements. You have always deleted my tags without addressing the problem. I must say that reviewing your articles is an especially irksome task although I have reviewed dozens of articles, including some about much more controversial subjects. Borsoka (talk) 09:08, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- I moved this comment from above. To help uninvolved editors make sense of this it is better to keep the plagarism/rewrite thread on topic and have another thread to cover verification questions and clarifications. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:32, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Historians trace the beginnings of the crusading movement to the significant changes within the Latin church enacted during the mid and latter eleventh century
This was flagged failed verification with the rationale Bull writes of the mutationist modell on the cited pages. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:42, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Bull writes The launching of the First Crusade was made possible by a revolution which had overtaken the western Church since the middle of the eleventh century. From the 10405 a group of reformers, first with the support of the German emperor Henry III and then in opposition to his son Henry IV, had taken control of the papacy. This institution they shrewdly. Without closely paraphrasing and being objective this looks verified. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 13:46, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Now, I found the quote on an other page. Borsoka (talk) 01:31, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
A group of reformers took control of the governance of the church with ambitions to use this control to eradicate behaviour they viewed as corrupt.
This was flagged with failed verification with the rationale Bull writes of the mutationist modell on the cited pages. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:36, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Bull writes The launching of the First Crusade was made possible by a revolution which had overtaken the western Church since the middle of the eleventh century. From the 10405 a group of reformers, first with the support of the German emperor Henry III and then in opposition to his son Henry IV, had taken control of the papacy. This institution they shrewdly identified as the best means to pursue their programme of eliminating abuses within the Church. Without close paraphrasing and being objective this looks verified. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:51, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Now, I found the quote on an other page. Borsoka (talk) 01:33, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
The changes were not without opposition, causing splits within the church and between the church and the emperor.
This was flagged as failed verification with the rationale No similar statement can be found on the cited page Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:36, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- This was cited to Morris p82 This group was itself split by the policy of Gregory VII. Whether or not his ideas were a logical consequence of earlier policies, their application created a new situation, with an open breach with the emperor and a schism in the papal office. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 07:22, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Change made Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
However, the reform faction successfully created the ideology for men they saw as God’s agents. It would enable them to later refashion the church along the moral and spiritual lines they believed in.
This was flagged as clarification required with the rationale The chronology of the events is unclear Norfolkbigfish (talk) 16:36, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the sentence absolutely ignores chronology in the paragraph. Borsoka (talk) 01:36, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Latham writes Simply put, it provided the constitutive discourse around which crystallized an element within the Latin clergy whose members saw themselves as divinely inspired agents of moral and spiritual renewal within the Christian commonwealth. By the middle of the eleventh century, this social force found itself dominant, if not yet hegemonic, within the Latin Church. Seizing this opportunity, popes Leo IX, (1048–1054), Nicholas II (1059–1061) and Alexander II (1061–1073) all took specifi c steps to address the ills they perceived to be at the heart of Latin Christendom’s moral corruption and spiritual decay—especially the “immoral” practices of simony (the purchase of clerical office and the related practice of lay investiture of abbots and bishops) and clerical concubinage. With the accession of Gregory VII in 1073, however, this process of renewal and revitalization took a different tack: it evolved from being an essentially legal and hortatory effort—involving both the promulgation of canons prescribing these practices and a variety of efforts designed to delegitimize them—to one focused on transforming the papacy into a powerful institution capable of more effectively pursuing the socially constructed values and interests of the reform faction of the clergy. Thus, in addition to his efforts to continue the work of his predecessors and extirpate the sins of simony and clerical concubinage, Gregory also took steps to assert control over the bishops and to strengthen the administrative apparatus of the papacy. This was the Gregorian or Papal Revolution of the eleventh century, a phenomenon perhaps best understood as an enactment of the basic constitutive script of the Latin clergy in the distinctive conditions of post-Carolingian feudal Europe. He it turn cites this to Cantor refering to the “Gregorian World Revolution.” in Norman F Cantor New York: Harper-Perennial, 1994, The Civilization of the Middle Ages, 243–76. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:59, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think Borsoka would like a clarification on "later": in particular, I think, that the ideology seems to have become the norm in the mid-C11th and that the refashioning happened under Gregory from about 1073. On a more general point, while editing an article to improve it is always good, it's probably not particularly useful to add tags for secondary issues like clarity and chronology while we're in the process of fixing a bigger problem: as the article is not currently in contention for GA or FA status, we can and should take the proverbial beam out of its eye before looking too closely for specks. UndercoverClassicist T·C 10:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- If all they are looking for is a date then I have added From the second half of the 11th century. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:05, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- @UndercoverClassicist: thank you for drawing my attention to my useless acts. You are right, to be particularly useful, I should again and again review this article to improve it instead of tagging the problems I detected when they are detected. As I mentioned above, I am fed up with reviewing this article, so I suggest you should review it to solve the bigger problem. Borsoka (talk) 01:29, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- If all they are looking for is a date then I have added From the second half of the 11th century. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 11:05, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think Borsoka would like a clarification on "later": in particular, I think, that the ideology seems to have become the norm in the mid-C11th and that the refashioning happened under Gregory from about 1073. On a more general point, while editing an article to improve it is always good, it's probably not particularly useful to add tags for secondary issues like clarity and chronology while we're in the process of fixing a bigger problem: as the article is not currently in contention for GA or FA status, we can and should take the proverbial beam out of its eye before looking too closely for specks. UndercoverClassicist T·C 10:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Latham writes Simply put, it provided the constitutive discourse around which crystallized an element within the Latin clergy whose members saw themselves as divinely inspired agents of moral and spiritual renewal within the Christian commonwealth. By the middle of the eleventh century, this social force found itself dominant, if not yet hegemonic, within the Latin Church. Seizing this opportunity, popes Leo IX, (1048–1054), Nicholas II (1059–1061) and Alexander II (1061–1073) all took specifi c steps to address the ills they perceived to be at the heart of Latin Christendom’s moral corruption and spiritual decay—especially the “immoral” practices of simony (the purchase of clerical office and the related practice of lay investiture of abbots and bishops) and clerical concubinage. With the accession of Gregory VII in 1073, however, this process of renewal and revitalization took a different tack: it evolved from being an essentially legal and hortatory effort—involving both the promulgation of canons prescribing these practices and a variety of efforts designed to delegitimize them—to one focused on transforming the papacy into a powerful institution capable of more effectively pursuing the socially constructed values and interests of the reform faction of the clergy. Thus, in addition to his efforts to continue the work of his predecessors and extirpate the sins of simony and clerical concubinage, Gregory also took steps to assert control over the bishops and to strengthen the administrative apparatus of the papacy. This was the Gregorian or Papal Revolution of the eleventh century, a phenomenon perhaps best understood as an enactment of the basic constitutive script of the Latin clergy in the distinctive conditions of post-Carolingian feudal Europe. He it turn cites this to Cantor refering to the “Gregorian World Revolution.” in Norman F Cantor New York: Harper-Perennial, 1994, The Civilization of the Middle Ages, 243–76. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 08:59, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the sentence absolutely ignores chronology in the paragraph. Borsoka (talk) 01:36, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
The Crusades: An Encyclopedia
Despite being WP:RS, the use of this as a source has provoked some criticism. In addition the use of a concisely written source has raised the risk of copyvio and close paraphrasing. All usage of this has therefore been removed from the article, the text supported either removed or rewritten and cited to a different source. Hopefully this removes any contention. If not, all feedback is welcome. Norfolkbigfish (talk) 17:19, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
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