Talk:Annika Zeyen

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Annika Zeyen/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this article sometime today. Wizardman 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

  • "She has also played the national team," played for the
  • "was runner-up at 2010 World Championships" was the runner-up
  • "Zeyen found ASV Bonn." starting off a paragraph like this feel like rather iffy writing. Can it be modified a bit? If nothing else at least changed found to joined.
  • "which contained a number of former teammates and opponents from the University of Illinois." This implies to me that she went to Illinois, which I know is not the case since she went to Alabama. Can this be rewritten to avoid the confusion?
    • YesY Ooops. Wrong state. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
  • "where majored in advertising" where she maintained.
    • N No, "majored" is correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
  • "Her team at the University Alabama" of Alabama
  • "an game" a game
  • "Academic All American" All-American should be hyphenated.
    • YesY Done. I still think it's kewl that you can be All-American without being American at all.
  • Do a run-though of the article to double-check the English, just to make sure there were no remaining missing word issues I missed.

Article is now on hold, and I will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

  • All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

Everything looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:55, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

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