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Additionally, the publisher of the source you have used to make the claim is not a source that is well-known in academia nor would it take precedence over the 3 scholarly sources cited above ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Academic_consensus WP:RS/AC]). The book used seems to also have a broad focus and would not be as reliable compared to scholarly works published solely on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources WP:RS]; [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Some_types_of_sources WP:SOURCETYPES]; [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Scholarship WP:SCHOLARSHIP])
Additionally, the publisher of the source you have used to make the claim is not a source that is well-known in academia nor would it take precedence over the 3 scholarly sources cited above ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Academic_consensus WP:RS/AC]). The book used seems to also have a broad focus and would not be as reliable compared to scholarly works published solely on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources WP:RS]; [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Some_types_of_sources WP:SOURCETYPES]; [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Scholarship WP:SCHOLARSHIP])
Based on the above it should be removed from the article as it does not provide any substantive information, while likely misleading readers.[[User:Apollo1203|Apollo1203]] ([[User talk:Apollo1203|talk]]) 19:56, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
Based on the above it should be removed from the article as it does not provide any substantive information, while likely misleading readers.[[User:Apollo1203|Apollo1203]] ([[User talk:Apollo1203|talk]]) 19:56, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
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As {{u|Actionjackson09}} has mentioned, Gavin Flood’s work is from 1996 and fairly outdated ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Age_matters WP:AGEMATTERS]). Also, Gavin Flood’s work is on the entire Hindu religion, not specific to the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. In fact, in his entire book, there are only 2 sentences about the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and it cannot be used to make a contentious claim about a particular tradition ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view#Due_and_undue_weight WP:UNDUE]). For those 2 sentences, Flood cites William’s work, however, in Williams (2018), there is no mention of the Swaminarayan Sampradaya’s development from the Pusthimarg. Scholarship from 2017 and 2018 refute Gavin Flood’s claim: I Patel (2018) has summarized the Swaminarayan Sampradaya in a scholarly encyclopedia entry in which there is no mention of the sampradaya developing from Vallabha’s pushtimarga: “[Swaminarayan] concluded his 7-year, over 8000-mile journey upon meeting an ascetic named Ramanand Swami, whom he accepted as guru and from whom he received the names of Sahajanand Swami and Narayan Muni at initiation. Two years later, in 1801, Ramanand Swami announced the 21-year-old Sahajanand Swami as his successor. In one of his first actions as a leader, Sahajanand Swami asked his disciples to chant the new mantra of “Swaminarayan”….Over the next 29 years, Swaminarayan institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth.” In fact, this quote supports the contrary and shows that Swaminarayan concluded his journey and met Ramanand Swami, who named him his successor. Swaminarayan then “institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth.” First, there is no mention of Gavin Flood’s claim in the encyclopedia entry. Second, if Flood’s claim was supported by consensus and scholars, there would be a mention of this. And finally, in the way Vallabh is described refutes the claim by Flood, “[Swaminarayan] referred to Vallabha’s son, Vitthalnath’s prescriptions on fasting, temple rituals, and festivals in presenting his modified conceptualizations of all three.” This is the only time that Vallabh is mentioned in the entry and it shows that Swaminarayan presented “modified conceptualizations” of fasting, temple rituals, and festivals that can be traced back to Vitthalnath’s prescriptions about the three. A journal article on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya features a sustained comparison of Vallabha’s pushtimarg and the Swaminarayan Sampradaya (S Patel 2017). Nowhere does the author write that the former developed from the latter. In fact, the author cautions against precisely the claim that the Swaminarayan Sampradaya developed from pushtimarg. The claim is further negated as S Patel explains: “I would like to caution against reading the pointed but limited agreement with the Pustimarga as a means by which to pin down the history of Swaminarayan development…[T]he latter’s self-presentation in light of the former was to help the nineteenth-century collective move efficiently towards its motive—the implementation of its own programme” (Patel 2017: 54).
The most recent and credible scholarly consensus on this point, then, is that the Swaminarayan Sampradaya did not “develop from Vallabha’s Pushtimarga” ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Academic_consensus WP:RS/AC]) and it is misleading to put it in the article and warrants removal. Furthermore, the sentence “The various branches of the Swaminarayan-tradition narrate their origin as a biographical account of Swaminarayan,[5]” is vague and the language is a bit too convoluted to be easily comprehensible. My edit summarizes Kim’s quote better.


== Out of context regarding Swaminarayan and Vallabha ==
== Out of context regarding Swaminarayan and Vallabha ==

Revision as of 20:12, 14 August 2020

Schismatic groups

I would want to know as to the following of each in terms of numbers. Its important as if the following is the same then the views should be represented equally. Wikidās ॐ 08:25, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Title

Name does not sound right. I propose it be moved to either Swaminarayan Faith or Succession of Swaminarayan. Wheredevelsdare (talk) 14:09, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, I like Swaminarayan Faith    Juthani1   tcs 19:30, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You can look up on how exactly this works with other groups. I think a good example is Bahá'í Faith article. Its featured and can used as an example to where to go from here. Wikidās ॐ 20:27, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Wheredevelsdare (talk) 22:19, 16 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Should "Faith" and/or "Sect" in the title be capitalized? I could be wrong, but it seems to me that only Swaminarayan should be capitalized, since "faith" is not the only formal term used for the tradition, and is used for the article to make the distinction between the faith and the religious leader. --Shruti14 t c s 16:00, 4 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree. Around The Globeसत्यमेव जयते 15:59, 29 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I agree from what I read this may be blasphemous to Hinduism. BAPS financing is also not clear whether this is a commercial enterprise or a genuine religious organization. This is worship of the person swaminarayan just like sai baba who is inspired by muslim influences and some people still consider Hinduism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.49.150.167 (talk) 00:07, 1 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Denomination?

Is the Swaminarayan faith considered Shaivism, Shaktism, Vaishnavism, or Smartha? Sylvain1972 (talk) 17:07, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is considered a denomination of vaishnavism by most, however some believe it is a denomination of its own    World   tcs 20:15, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I think the intro should characterize it as Swaminarayan Vaishnavism or Swaminarayan Vaishnavist Hinduism then. As a westerner having delved into the topic of Hinduism, I agree with the Indic sentiment that there is not really a religion called "Hinduism", but since most westerners use to believe there is, the "Hinduism" (similar to Abrahamite) may still be retained. Rursus dixit. (mbork3!) 22:31, 12 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
See my comment above, that's the only problem with doing that The World 12:38, 13 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This should be a denomination on its own — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.171.129.133 (talk) 06:35, 1 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

It is a sub-denomination within Vaishnava Hinduism, much like Gaudiya Vaishnavism (ISKCON sect). The present title doesn't really make sense since it's not its own brand of Hinduism; rather, it is a sect of subsect within Hinduism. It would be more appropriate to move the article back to its previous name of Swaminarayan faith or Swaminarayan sect. Or perhaps it could be renamed to something like Swaminarayan (sect) to indicate that its name is Swaminarayan (and not Swaminarayan Faith, as in the case of the Baha'i Faith, but that it is a faith community as distinguished from Swaminarayan the spiritual leader who is the founder of the faith group. --Shruti14 talksign 01:45, 12 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned references in Swaminarayan Faith

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Swaminarayan Faith's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "isbn8170247985":
  • From Shikshapatri: M. G. Chitkara (1997). Hindutva. APH. Retrieved March 26, 2009. Page 230
  • From Desh Vibhag Lekh: M. G. Chitkara (1997). Hindutva. APH. Retrieved March 26, 2009. Page 228
  • From Shri Swaminarayan Mandir, Vadtal: M. G. Chitkara (1997). Hindutva. APH. pp. 227–228. Retrieved June 10, 2009.
  • From Vachanamrut: M. G. Chitkara (1997). Hindutva. APH. p. 228. Retrieved June 13, 2009.
  • From Swaminarayan Sampraday: M. G. Chitkara (1997). Hindutva. APH. p. 230. Retrieved June 17, 2009.
Reference named "isbn8120606515":

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 10:24, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

https://indiankanoon.org/doc/145565 laxmikant (talk) 03:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

New information

Keeping in mind some information has been transplanted here from Swaminarayan, the article now gives information on both the Faith (or belief) and Succession. Should the article title be changed to reflect the same - Swaminarayan Faith and Succession or Swaminarayan Hinduism? Around The Globeसत्यमेव जयते 10:43, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I strongly agree. The name of the article must reflect the information. I think Swaminarayan Hinduism would be a suitable name. Swaminarayan Faith and Succession, to me at least, feels like there is a bit of repetition. The faith includes succession, if you see what I mean. World (talkcontributions) 18:34, 3 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

There are a number of academic and journalistic sources that provide an (at times highly critical) analysis of the evolution and social function of the faith. These should be covered in this article, and some use of the would be essential, should it be nominated at any future stage for Good Article status:

  • Rohit Barot, 'Religion, migration and wealth creation in the Swaminarayan Movement', in Bryceson, Deborah and Ulla Vuorela (eds), The Transnational Family".
  • Rohit Barot has written books that would also prbably touch on the subject and should be checked at some stage.
  • David Hardiman, "Class base of Swaminarayan sect", Economic and Political Weekly, 10 September 1988 (subscription needed, or library access)
  • Makrand Mehta, controversial article in the Gujarati-language journal of the Centre for Social Studies, Surat, 1986

Suggestions

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  • "The Swaminarayan faith has a large percentage of Hindus who are followers of Swaminarayan." what how it mean? Are there non-Hindu Swaminarayans?
  • "India, Britain, and the United States." Form sentences. A section on distribution of Swaminarayan Hindus is necessary
  • Instead of having a section titled "Succession of Swaminarayan", I suggest a layout of:
    • "Common beliefs"
    • Common History: who is Swaminarayan? Sampradaya and reason of schisms
    • Separate sections on each sect within S.Hinduism. Highlight differences in philosophies, succession etc. A short history of each within the sect section. Chief Temples and leaders by each sect. Organization of each sect.
      • Swaminarayan Sampraday
      • BAPS
      • et al
    • Relations of the schisms (approval/criticism of each other etc.)

--Redtigerxyz Talk 13:44, 31 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The Swaminarayan faith can be considered an "original" work by wikipedia standards as Hinduism already has an established collection of authentic books. remove swaminarayan from wikipedia hindu references as per wikipedia standards please and also other faiths like sai baba and iskcon claiming to be hindu faiths . please

Swaminarayan and ISKCON are established, widely recognized faith communities that are sub-denominations of Vaishnavism, which itself is a major denomination of Hinduism. Thus they are not merely 'claiming to be hindu faiths' as you say. They are actually validly classified as part of Hinduism and recognized as such by scholars, legal systems, and governments. --Shruti14 talksign 01:47, 12 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia standards are based on reliable sources and there are sources that clearly point to both ISKCON and Swaminarayan being recognized and widely accepted subgroups within Vaishnavism which itself is one of the major branches of the Hindu faith. --Shruti14 talksign 01:56, 12 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Gunatit Samaj edits by Apollo1203 and Moksha88 are factually incorrect and the "reputable" sources are one-sided thus they are not reputable. Reputable accounts can be found on gunatitjyot.org and kakaji.org as they consider points of views from all parties who are involved with the discussion of the Gunait Samaj.

Name change & lede

Name change given for reasons mentioned above - it does not make sense to call the article 'Swaminarayan Hinduism' since that is not an official name for it and frankly it is not some special brand of Hinduism. More properly it is a spiritual tradition within the Vaishnava major sect of Hinduism. It is also not known as Swaminarayan Faith officially (akin to Baha'i Faith) nor is it officially known as the Swaminarayan Sect. Its name is simply Swaminarayan. Changed the title of the article accordingly, with a parenthetical explanation that this is a spiritual tradition to distinguish from the spiritual leader with the same name who is the founder of the sect whose biographical article also bears the name Swaminarayan. Also edited the lede to clarify that this is a branch of Vaishnava Hinduism. --Shruti14 talksign 01:55, 12 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

https://indiankanoon.org/doc/145565 it is not Hinduism at all, it is business. laxmikant (talk) 03:02, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hinduism

Please remove references to Hinduism in this article. This sect is already falsely claiming to be the largest Hindu temple. Please stop misinformation if you believe in a God. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.55.34.248 (talk) 12:21, 23 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Fan POV Tag

WP:Conachieve can you please explain why this tag was placed? There has not been a discussion about this tag.Treehugger8891 (talk) 02:08, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Treehugger8891:, agreed. I'm tagging @Harshil169: to explain the reasoning. Moksha88 (talk) 21:47, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Moksha88 If someone is reading article then it can be clearly understandable that it’s written from point of view from person who follows it. On Wikipedia, articles related to religion must adhere NPOV and secondary and tertiary sources which critically examine one religion. Also, many details in the article is unnecessary for common person who just want to know about tradition but it may be necessary for fan/follower of sect. The article has systematic bias and thus, I’ve tshged this. Thanks— Harshil want to talk? 02:10, 3 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Merge

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
The result of this discussion was to merge.

This article needs to be merged with Swaminarayan. Editor2020 (talk) 03:13, 16 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Editor2020, I agree that this article should be merged though would like to suggest another article. This refers to the tradition founded by Swaminarayan. Just as there are separate articles for the founders of other faiths and the faith itself, I don’t think these articles should be merged. Instead, this article should be merged with the Swaminarayan Sampraday article. After a close review, the majority of scholarly sources use Swaminarayan Sampraday to refer to all the groups within this tradition (1). Some of the content in this article also duplicates what exists in the current Swaminarayan Sampraday article as noted by others. Moksha88 (talk) 04:21, 18 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, you are correct. This article should be merged with Swaminarayan Sampraday. Editor2020 (talk) 04:25, 18 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Editor2020, let me study these articles a bit more to identify how best to make the merger happen. I will then draft up an outline in my sandbox of steps moving forward. Moksha88 (talk) 03:55, 19 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Editor2020, here's my suggested merger (1). If you agree, can you change the merge tags that you've currently placed to reflect the suggested merger? Per WP:PM, I will also invite other editors in the Swaminarayan Wikiproject for discussion given the complexity of the task at hand. Moksha88 (talk) 03:06, 20 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I don't believe I set any tags, just this mention on the Talk page. Editor2020 (talk) 22:46, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Editor2020, my mistake. I added the tags to all the pages. Please let me know if they look alright: Swaminarayan Sampraday, Swaminarayan (spiritual tradition)‎, Nar Narayan Dev Gadi, and Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi. Thank you. Moksha88 (talk) 03:05, 23 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Looking good. Editor2020 (talk) 03:16, 23 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I came across this discussion on the wiki project. I agree with the proposed merger. However I feel we should move the 'Temples' section from the Sampraday article into the List of Swaminarayan Temples article.Actionjackson09 (talk) 12:18, 24 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Moksha88 for posting on the Wikiproject page regarding this merge. I, too, agree on this merge and it also seems logical to move 'Temples' from the Swaminarayan Sampradaya article to "List of Swaminarayan Temples" article. Apollo1203 (talk) 15:21, 25 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Actionjackson09 & Apollo1203, I think that makes sense and will adjust the tag accordingly. Moksha88 (talk) 19:42, 25 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
In reviewing the Sampraday article, there's a significant amount of content lacking scholarly sources along with original research. I will begin posting excerpts on my sandbox (1) which need to be verified and/or rewritten and would appreciate both of your help. I will make these edits after I merge to avoid confusing content. Moksha88 (talk) 02:32, 26 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
On closer review, I think 'Organization Structure' from the Sampraday article is best suited for articles dedicated to each of the diocese. I have revised the structure accordingly. Moksha88 (talk) 03:39, 29 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Hey everyone, came across this conversation after I joined the Swaminarayan wikiproject. Thanks to (talk) for succinctly visualizing what sections from the spiritual tradition would merge into the main page under. I happen to also think that this merge should happen and agree with the editor above that the 'Temples" section should be in the list of swaminarayan temples article. The organizations within the swaminarayan sampraday should also encompass the bit about the gunatit samaj from the spiritual traditions page. If you have not done so, review the chart on Moksha88's sandbox. I believe this grouping is the best for this proposed merge. ThaNDNman224 (talk) 04:19, 29 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I appreciate everyone's input. As this discussion has been ongoing for at least 7 days and we have unanimous consensus to move forward, I will close this thread and begin the merger. Thank you Editor2020 for starting this process. Actionjackson09, Apollo1203, ThaNDNman224, we will need to do a lot of verifying and copy editing in the coming days.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Requested move 31 December 2019

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Page moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) Jerm (talk) 15:55, 15 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Swaminarayan (spiritual tradition)Swaminarayan Sampradaya – Based on my research and the n-gram result, I am requesting to move the current article, to change the title to Swaminarayan Sampradaya as it is more appropriate. Apollo1203 (talk) 08:21, 31 December 2019 (UTC) Relisting.  — Amakuru (talk) 12:37, 7 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I supporting moving the article as it reflects scholarly consensus (1). In merging the pages, I didn't realize I couldn't simply rename the page and would have suggested merging in the opposite direction. Tagging Editor2020, Actionjackson09, ThaNDNman224 for comment. Moksha88 (talk) 18:07, 31 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Looking at the previous comments I believe that the move and name change is warranted. Not sure where the "spiritual tradition" originated but it's not in line with other religious wikis here. It makes sense to me to change the title to what the editor above has said. I'd welcome any editors who have another opinion to chime in though! ThaNDNman224 (talk) 17:34, 2 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

Gunatit Samaj

The Gunatit Samaj edits by Apollo1203 and Moksha88 are factually incorrect and the "reputable" sources are one-sided thus they are not reputable. Reputable accounts can be found on gunatitjyot.org and kakaji.org as they consider points of views from all parties who are involved with the discussion of the Gunait Samaj. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:23C5:4293:D801:3825:56ED:593F:8259 (talk) 14:29, 19 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Those are primary sources are do not meet the criteria for reliable sources as per WP:RS. Moksha88 (talk) 06:39, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Swaminarayan Mandir Vasna Sanstha: Notability

@Apollo1203: I saw you removed the section on the Swaminarayan Mandir Vasna Sanstha here from 'Major Branches' but reinserted it until you could explain your reasoning as per WP:ORGCRIT. Moksha88 (talk) 06:38, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Moksha88: I've removed the branch from the article as there is only 1 secondary source cited to the group. According to ORGCRIT, the subject needs significant sources to be viable. If you can find additional secondary sources besides the one that was cited, it can be added back into the article. Apollo1203 (talk) 03:18, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Apollo1203: You're right, there's not much to support the notability of this organization, only Raymond Williams's 2001 book and a brief mention in Gordan Melton's paper. While there are other newspaper articles referenced in the Swaminarayan Mandir Vasna Sanstha article, the depth of coverage is not significant. Moksha88 (talk) 17:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Humanitarian Service

@Kbhatt22: Your recent edits on the humanitarian service section list world records held by the Laxmi Narayan Dev Yuvak Mandal which to my knowledge is not a registered charitable organization. I think it is appropriate to limit this section to charitable organizations of the Swaminarayan sampradaya in an effort to keep this article focused as per WP:FALSEBALANCE. Additionally, the source “golden book of world records” seems dubious at least according to the editor in chief of India Book of Records (https://indiabookofrecords.in/fraudrecordbooks/) see, WP:QUESTIONABLE and its use here seems to promote the “golden book of world records” more than the activities of the Laxmi Narayan Dev Yuvak Mandal which is not a Wikipedia best practice WP:NOTPROMOTION. At the very least, I think we should 1) focus on the humanitarian activity and not the record, or 2) if the Laxmi Narayan Dev Yuvak Mandal is not a registered charitable organization, then I think these edits should be removed. Thoughts anyone?Harshmellow717 (talk) 01:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Harshmellow717: You make a great point and I agree with you. I think it would be better if it was kept out as well. Apollo1203 (talk) 18:42, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Looking at the edit, I don’t think the criteria for WP:RS is met. @Kbhatt22:, do you have another reliable source to vouch for the work done? There is consensus here that the material doesn't adhere to a core policy, so I will remove it for now until you can provide a better reference. Moksha88 (talk) 03:03, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Harshmellow717: @Moksha88: This was already discussed on Apollo's talk page 2 days ago and the change was added back in. The Indian book of world records is not a registered entity and only existed for a few years as a competitor and that is not a reliable source. The source you are referencing is an opinion article from a smaller competitor record company. The Golden Book of Records is a registered publisher in India. They are recognized by another Indian entity http://www.worldrecordholdersclub.com/ http://www.worldrecordholdersclub.com/?p=339

This is another registered publisher recognizing their work. The Indian Book of Records(your citation) is another private record book holder only in existence since 2006 that in the article you listed is simply trying to downplay other record holder companies within India. Here is another article legitimizing Golden Book of World Records: https://www.timesnownews.com/india/article/international-yoga-day-2018-yoga-guru-baba-ramdev-world-records-rajasthan-kota-vasundhara-raje-acharya-balkrishna-rac-ground-guinness-golden-book/243582 https://www.ndtv.com/india-news/2-501-blood-tests-in-6-hours-madhya-pradesh-ngo-sets-new-world-record-1813105

Both Times Now and NDTV are legitimate news networks who cover world records tracked by Golden Book of World Records. I think there is no reason to question their source material.

Adding another national level news company's (Times of India) coverage of tracking done by Golden Book of World Records: https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/tv/news/hindi/roadies-11-contestant-navjyot-gurudutta-registered-among-the-list-of-worlds-top-100-influencing-sikh/articleshow/75434744.cms

Many big Indian media networks work with and cite Golden Book of World records honors. I don't think the Indian Book of Records is a legitimate source as they are a competitor with bias in the matter. Times of India, NDTV, and Times Now News have all used Golden Book of World Records as reference material. This meats Wikipedias source policy as it is used by

The focus is on the humanitarian efforts of 21,900 eye donations. They registered a world record which is documented proof that was simply used as citation. The Laxmi-Narayan Dev Yuvak Mandal is a registered entity of SVG Charity which is a 401c registered non-profit in the United States (http://www.swaminarayanvadtalgadi.org/charity/) but instead of using their official site as a source, i used an independent recognized record tracking company. Laxmi-narayan dev yuvak mandal is also the offical acting youth charity entity of the Vadtal gadi so does not trip the False Balance policy I believe.

@Kbhatt22: Please do not add any material for which consensus has not been reached. Doing so can be seen as being disruptive editing. For the time being, I have moved it to my sandbox where we can work on it together. Harshmellow717 (talk) 02:53, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Harshmellow717: Understood. I assumed all concerns were addressed in revisions but will keep this in mind for future.
@Harshmellow717: Where is you're sandbox?
@Kbhatt22:, I agree with your move to the sandbox for us to all review. Please make sure you include a link to your sandbox next time. @Kbhatt22:, there are several problems with this edit. First, the section is entitled, "Humanitarian Service, which is nested under "Influence on Society." In the edit you included, the focus should be on the actual donations because it is an example of the humanitarian activity which has impacted society. By emphasizing the Golden Book of Records, the service is considered a promotional activity, so I proposed a simpler version which integrates the details at the end of the prior paragraph. The policy WP:NOTPROMO is very clear here, and promotional matter lowers the quality of the article. In this past, this article was tagged for not having encyclopedic material. If you do want to include those details, I think you should cite them in the Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi article. For example, BAPS Charities has more details in the BAPS article than this article which focuses on the entire Swaminarayan Sampradaya. Also, please make sure to sign your comments as it becomes very difficult to identify who is who. Moksha88 (talk) 03:29, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22: I agree with what @Harshmellow717: and @Moksha88: have outlined above. I think it would be best to move those details to the Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi article.Apollo1203 (talk) 03:42, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Apollo1203: ::@Moksha88: ::@Harshmellow717: I agree with all the points all 3 of you mentioned. My concern is the Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi article doesn't have a dedicated humanitarian service section and doesn't need it for 1 line. I saw that the following line was posted in that section: "Following the devastating earthquake in Gujarat in 2001, they rebuilt 15 villages and neighborhoods and 39 schools. For its work, BAPS has been granted consultative status with the Economic and Social Council of the United Nations" I tried to use a similar format to list the humanitarian service, eye donations, and then the source, golden book of world records. If that is a promotion violation, is the reference to the Social Council not also a promotion of that independent entity? How does this format sound "In 2013, under the guidance of Vadtal Acharya Ajendraprasadji Maharaj, Laxmi-Narayan Dev Yuvak Mandal registered 21,900 eye donations in one hour in an organ donation charity drive as well as the most body donations to medical sciences and studies with 352 registrants in a 12 hour window." It removes the text about record and company (only used as citation) designating the record but at this point there is no reason to question Golden book of world records as it is constantly used by 3 major news networks across India and recognized as a valid record tracking company by NDTV, Times of India, etc. I can see where my wording sem promotional so I simplified it. My concern with putting this in the Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi article is that it is not enough to warrant a dedicated section. On the swaminarayan sampraday page, we have a section this fits in, and the service is by the Vadtal Diocese which is a large size group in the swaminarayan sampraday. Thank all 3 of you for the help. (talk) 05:42, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22: The sentence on BAPS focuses on the work that specifically influenced society in the wake of a natural disaster. The inclusion of the UN is appropriate here because they are involved in humanitarian efforts that impact society. Additionally, it is sourced to an independent, scholarly source and not the institution's own website. I see you have posted your proposed version of the edit on my sandbox. Let us continue any further discussion regarding this topic on the talk page of my sandbox. Harshmellow717 (talk) 07:01, 13 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Harshmellow717: We should keep the discussion here since it relates to content on this article. Your points make sense, and I would like to propose Edit #3. It uses the word 'organ' instead of 'eye' and 'body' because it's less confusing and strange than mentioning both 'eye' and 'body' donations as separate. @Kbhatt22: while the Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi may not have a section, this may be the right opportunity to develop one, and all details you want to incorporate can be included there. Moksha88 (talk) 17:43, 13 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22: It appears that consensus is to not add the information you are proposing to the article here, but rather to the Laxmi Narayan Devi Gadi. I think it would help enhance that article further.Apollo1203 (talk) 20:12, 13 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Apollo1203: @Moksha88: I am not sure that is exactly the consensus being reached. Based on the sand box drafting I am working on with Harshmellow717 the idea is to have some 1-2 sentence item here like all the other listed organizations that is expanded on in Laxmi Narayan Devi Gadi. Do you agree with this approach? Harshmellow and I are working out the revised portion for here and I will work on the detailed section on Laxmi Narayan Devi Gadi after gathering more sources and can expand details there. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kbhatt22 (talkcontribs)
@Kbhatt22: I agree, let's include the one-sentence version that links back to the article. In Edit 5, I've removed the phrase 'Vadtal diocese' because it's redundant and adjusted the wording to make it more clear that people are not just ripping out their eyes and organs for charity. @Harshmellow717:@Apollo1203: what do you all think about including this sentence back into the article while Kbhatt22 adds more details to the other article? Also, Kbhatt22 don't forget to sign your posts as it can be perceived as disruptive. Moksha88 (talk) 02:23, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Moksha88: Sounds good. Do I just make the change now or have to wait for something. I think consensus is reached Kbhatt22 (talk) 15:52, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I just reviewed Edit 5 and I think it looks good. It appears the group all agrees that this is a good edit, I will go ahead and edit the page with this edit. Thank you all for the collaboration and teamwork!Apollo1203 (talk) 17:56, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for making the edits and thanks everyone for working on this! Kbhatt22 (talk) 00:21, 17 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Original Research

There have been edits to the Gunatit Samaj section which I believe are original research. The claim is: "Dadubhai believed Pramukh Swami was against him and persuaded the BAPS trustees to remove him."

The published sources the unknown unregistered editor is referencing mentions the following:

Source 1:"Dadubhai Patel and his brother, Bapabhai, left to form a separate group called the Yogi Divine Society"...
Source 2: "There is yet another breakaway group, this time from BAPS, called the Yogi Divine Society. It was founded by Dadubhai Patel and his brother Bapabhai in 1966. This group does not recognize Pramukh Swami as the rightful successor of Yogiji Maharaj. In 1986, Hariprasad Swami became the leader of this group."

Both of these sources fail to mention what is being written. If it can be found within the source, then a citation with the page number needs to be added.Apollo1203 (talk) 15:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Here is the source. Stop edit warring and owning the article.

https://www.google.com/books/edition/An_Introduction_to_Swaminarayan_Hinduism/tPkexi2EhAIC?gbpv=1&bsq=dadubhai

Page 66

Why does the article have multiple pictures of BAPS? This is not a BAPS article? Doesn't make sense.

136.2.16.182 (talk) 16:01, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have been following this discussion. The claim "Dadubhai believed Pramukh Swami was against him and persuaded the BAPS trustees to remove him." is not being made on page 66. Please correct me if I am missing something.

With that said I do agree that 7 of the 8 pictures here are BAPS picture and this is not appropriate. This page is the entire Sampradaya and so one "branch" should not dominate the entire page. Open to suggestions from Apollo1203 on how we can remediate this and spread the presence of the entire Sampradaya in the used imagery. My proposed suggestion is that images on this centeral page only be limited to mandirs, murtis and images of things originally created by Swaminarayan himself and then let each sections own landing page use their branches images. Otherwise we end up with a bias towards one branch. Kbhatt22 (talk) 21:46, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Would you like be to put exact quotes from what is stated on page 66? It literally says narayanswarupdas (pramukh was against him) and persuaded the trustees to remove him....

And we need to remove those pictures. This article is about the Sampraday not individual sects that broke off.

136.2.16.182 (talk) 22:17, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I did not draw the connection between narayanswarupdas and pramukh swami, regardless if you can use words or outline that name connection and the source is a valid book with isbn; I personally am not seeing a problem here but I will let some of the other editors/contributors provide feedback before we can all reach a consensus on this change.

I am not advocating we remove the pictures entirely but we balance them to encompass the entire Sampradaya and not any one branch. The best way being, sticking to the original content created by Swaminarayan himself. Also, please wait for others to provide feedback and a consensus to be reached before making an edit as per Wikipedia's guidelines. Kbhatt22 (talk) 22:55, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I mean that is a waste of my time and I made edits knowing my information. By the way, the entire article is written extremely biased and intentionally misleading by what appears to be members of BAPS to insinuate that he Swaminarayan Sampraday is BAPS ideology. This is misleading and wrong. Per Wikipedia, I am allowed to make constructive edits. BAPS writes do not own the article and it is unfair. If they want to debate this, then discuss here. They have a BAPS article they push any agenda they wish. The names are interchangeable. You can add it if it helps you. 136.2.16.182 (talk) 23:09, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am not looking to being argumentative. I think you have raised some valid points worth discussion. a lot of what you removed was using books written by BAPS, which upon further review do not count as unbiased and independent sources. This page should stick to referencing text written by Swaminarayan as sources for the 'Swaminarayan Sampradaya' and then lead/link to the ideology of each branch separately on the branch page. A source originating from any one branch is naturally going to be biased by that branches views so I think that point you raise has merit for discussion. Like images, I simply propose one path for consensus is this page stick to the original scriptures written during Swaminarayan's times and guide from the sampradaya page to that branch where its branch ideology can be outlined. Kbhatt22 (talk) 00:39, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@136.2.16.182 Looking at your edits, I find that the rationale behind them is unclear. As per (WP:BRD), I’ve reverted your changes so we can discuss them more fully here. I agree with Kbhatt22. The sentences you wrote under Gunatit Samaj fail verification and are not present in the sources you cited. Additionally, just because it’s reliably sourced does not merit inclusion into Wikipedia. I hope we can discuss your other edits here so we can better address your concerns about bias in the collaborative spirit of Wikipedia. Harshmellow717 (talk) 11:48, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
You reverted everything that was done yesterday. Some of this was my edits trying to provide sources for what @136.2.16.182 was doing as well as reverting some of those edits as well. I think some of the changes he/she made were valid to the Wikipedia policy. In terms of the sentence written under Gunatit Samaj, his original sentence was not aligned (name mismatch) with the source but I had revised it to match the source. "merit inclusion into Wikipedia" - that will have to be discussed. I am not one way or the other on that point apart from if a user feels it belongs and it meets proper criteria then I have no grounds to turn it down. This is the collaborative spirit of Wiki where no one owns a page or content. I do have concerns about bias as well after reading through all that was going on yesterday (it was very difficult to follow). This is the Sampradaya page and it is being dominated by one branch. Sources are being used from one branch. Using a BAPS linked source violates the (Wikipedia:Neutrality of sources) policy as they, like all branches, have a bias. I propose we simplify this page to be high level sampradaya content using only original content from Swaminarayan himself and link to each branch where they can manage individual branch ideology. That is a fair middle ground. Even the pictures are heavily dominated by BAPS imagery. 6 out of 10 are Baps imagery and not original Swaminarayan imagery that is shared between all branches. I think we can start this discussion but I do feel some of the changes from yesterday are valid and need discussion and consensus. Kbhatt22 (talk) 12:27, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


That's fine, I have no problem with you @talk. The BAPS brigade will be here shortly to sway their view shortly. I have no issue with the point of having only the original Sampraday's texts as sources. The problem is that BAPS teaches it's followers that their ideology is supposedly the correct interpretation so for BAPS followers its really difficult for them to comprehend that their god really had a blood line family and installed them as the leaders. Their sect is a break off group and so their objective is to make sure any reader is mislead into believing their ideal devotee from scant few sentences and ignoring the thousands of verses and books on the acharayas. I am already sure this will end up with moderators soon. And @Harshmellow717, none of my edits are controversial or are disruptive. I can request for moderators but if there are any changes that need to be discussed I'm willing to hear it out but don't undo my edits without merit. 136.2.16.181 (talk) 14:43, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Consensus would be using original swaminarayan sources. I think that is a valid point made by the IP address here. MrOllie Ifnord You are veteran wiki contributors and you stepping in is appreciated. A neutral source will benefit this. I am trying to remain neutral and use only sources that comply with the (Wikipedia:Neutrality of sources) policy. The changes currently left on the page do violate this policy very clearly and that is the red flag being raised here. My proposal is using original texts of the sampradaya written or authenticated by Swaminarayan himself. Then all the biased sources from every branch, not just baps, can link off to their individual pages and support their ideology which those pages already do. I have not made any disruptive edits and made sure independent sources validate what changes I made including small changes amid the mass changes being made yesterday were properly supported and those got reverted amid a bulk reversal. The reality is consensus will never be reached by varying branches which is why the branches exist in the first place and this situation like the IP address and BAPS is happening. I am asking MrOllie Ifnord to moderate neutrally that this page is a shared section for all Swaminarayan branches and should be high level using only original sources.....not dominated by biased sources from any one branch. This is a respectful middle ground for all sides and logically also makes the most sense. Finally catching up and reading through yesterday (this is a lot to go through lol) A majority of what was done yesterday was actually just removal of content supported with sources that are not independent. I have had a healthy and respectful relation ship with all editors on this page and honestly feel that most of the changes made yesterday being removal of the viewpoint of one branch, supported by one branches sources, is not a bad thing. Make this page high level about all Sampradays branches and let each branches specific ideologies be outlined on that page. ALSO .... can the IP address make an account please. It would make this discussion easier to track. Kbhatt22 (talk) 23:20, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hey all, I came across this from the Swaminarayan Sampraday Wikiproject. I see that there are a lot of contentious accusations thrown around. I'm sure we all would just like to ensure that the article is curated properly. In that regard, it would be productive if we discussed potential edits here and added them to our respective sandboxes for us to offer critique on and hopefully update the page in an efficient manner. I don't think the constant back and forth of edit warring is serving any productive purpose. As an aside, I also would echo one of the users above stating that if the unregistered editor attempting to make the changes were to register, it would make for a cleaner conversation. ThaNDNman224 (talk) 02:13, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hey! Agree that the article could be curated better. I have tried to discuss only one potential discussion point from my side coming out of everything that has been going on between the various editor over the last few days(trying to stay neutral) but it seems to be ignored. Why is one branch sources the only thing being used? There is a violation of the (Wikipedia:Neutrality of sources) policy here. We cannot rely on ideology from one branch to dictate or represent an entire sampradaya. My proposed change is we balance images and content to be applicable to the entire Swaminarayan Sampradaya. Anything that is deemed branch variation be taken to the specific branches page OR explicitly be listed under that branch and not be posted here to represent the entire Sampradaya. Kbhatt22 (talk) 04:04, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hello @Kbhatt22: Thank you for being civil! As far as I understand, this article is about the Swaminarayan Sampradaya, not just Swaminarayan, so it should include everything from the start of the organization to the present. As outlined in these reliable sources found in the article, [1]: 2 [2][3]: 172 [4]: 58  the Swaminarayan Sampradaya is a living religious denomination that includes all the branches, so all aspects of its history need to be included.
Regarding your question about sources, you referenced Wikipedia:Neutrality of sources which is an essay, not a policy. The essay states that “Reliable sources may be non-neutral: a source's reputation for fact-checking is not inherently dependent upon its point of view.” I think it might be easier to understand your viewpoint and more productive if you suggested specific edits and photographs in your sandbox so other users can then review and come to a consensus. I am happy to moderate or help in any way that I can. Best wishes, Skubydoo (talk) 06:35, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Skubydoo. Thank you for taking the time to moderate and review this information. You're presence here is greatly appreciated. What you said makes sense. A sources reputation is not dependent upon its point of view as you mentioned but it also states "articles should reflect an appropriate balance of differing points of view" which I suppose is where this article is lacking because it is so aggressively skewed by one point of view. If this page is to include everything from the start of the organization to present, I believe for linear flow, ideological differences should exist under header of the branch whose ideology it is. If that makes sense, this would eliminate the implication that the ideology of one branch is applicable to the entire organization which this article is subtly doing in multiple ways. I am not good with sandbox as I am still learning wiki. Looking at this revision: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Swaminarayan_Sampradaya&diff=968040776&oldid=968038926. As mentioned, I am trying to be subjectively neutral and only some of these changes I feel merit discussion. Running down that revision in order.
-Desh vibah lekh is a recognized swaminarayan scripture by the highest courts of India. The IP address is trying to add it due to it being a fundamental part to the history and timeline of the organisation as it was originally approved by Swaminarayan and is recognized by all branches. It is the only explicitly documented succession plan by Swaminarayan.
-Under the Swaminarayan Gadi Maninagar section, there was a leadership change in the past few days. I am not from this branch but I was able to validate the IP addresses claim with an independent source.
-Under gunatit samaj section, I am also not from this branch but this is what sparked this entire back and forth of undoing each other between both sides. The IP address originally made a claim that didn't match the name (it was about the same person using two different names) in the source, the two sides went back and forth. I also got confused by the name variation of the claim and source material not matching. I updated the claim to match the source to resolve it for both sides, at which point Baps removed it and said it did not merit inclusion now. Even though this is using a source used throughout the article. I am indifferent about its inclusion but feel this is an ideological difference that is outlined within one branch and not implied for all branches so do not see a violation here and feel the IP's claim of feeling oppressed from making a properly sourced claim has some legs on this.
-The order of external links and major groups at the bottom of the page. This just felt petty. Baps wants to be first on the list, IP felt their organizations should be first. I propose we just list in order of organisations creation date and call it a day on "order". This point adds little scholarly value and listed by date of creation makes neutral and logical sense as a middle ground approach. @Skubydoo...I believe the two diocese were founded by Swaminarayan in 1800, then Baps was founded in 1907, then Maninagar Gadi in 1941, and then Gunatit samaj 1966. I genuinely don't know why this became a contention point but by date is neutral to all sides so we can move on.
-My own concern in any of this discussion between the two sides was with Images. I feel that this page is heavily dominated by BAPS images which does not capture the history of the organization like you mentioned the goal of this article is. I do agree with the IP on this. The images of aarti is picked to include current Baps head, the image of murti is picked to include Baps priest, the image of temple is picked to be Baps temple, the image of worship is kids in baps attire at a baps temple, the image of scriptures is baps printed book cover.....hopefully you can see the big lack of variation in point of views. I personally am not sure if some of these images add any scholarly worth to the article. The IP proposed the removal of any branch specific imagery. I proposed we use images of murtis, mandirs and scriptures created by Swaminarayan himself as this would be a universal middle ground. I would defer to you to make a decision that seems best. If we want to continue branch specific imagery for overall organisation images, then at least lets use other branches for the image of aarti, murti, and temple to mix up the skewed use of one branches images. I also am not sure why the Baps head has to have an image here but images of other branch heads will get turned down. I don't think we need an image of any branches head here as they have that on the branch pages. I personally feel it would be cooler and add more scholarly worth to show the 200+ year old original scripture sitting in the oxford museum, then a branch specific one printed 5 years ago. Or use of image of a mandir today that stands 200+ years old created by Swaminarayan himself. I defer to you for guidance. Thank you so much skubydoo for putting up with me putting this here. I look forward to you're feedback! And none of what I say is intended to be disrespectful to anyone or any branch. Kbhatt22 (talk) 10:46, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22: Hi and thanks again for your civility and enthusiasm in ensuring this article meets Wikipedia standards. I am having trouble following your proposed changes in this format. It is most effective when talk page posts are kept concise (WP:TPYES), which is why I requested earlier that we discuss proposed edits in Sandbox. WP:ABOUTSAND and H:SAND provide guidance on what Sandbox is meant for and how to use it. The photographs you mentioned will be a productive place to start. Can you please add the photographs you think should be included in the article to your Sandbox? If anyone else has any photographs to suggest, please include them in your sandboxes as well. Then everyone involved in the discussion can make decisions using concrete information. I look forward to collaborating on this. Take care, Skubydoo (talk) 03:38, 18 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Skubydoo: Great suggestion, using the Sandbox for this would be best. I agree with kbhatt22 (talk · contribs) regarding the images. All branches should be represented. Images of Swaminarayan himself and the mandirs he constructed would also be a good addition to this article. I look forward to working with everyone in selecting these images. Harshmellow717 (talk) 18:23, 18 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Skubydoo: @Harshmellow717: Sorry for writing a novel here and not going to sandbox. I thought id get some feedback before going there. Harshmellow and I have worked together before and he knows I am a new and inexperience with wiki and still learning the workflow so I appreciate the patience from everyone as I propose neutral revisions to resolve the dispute from both sides. I outlined everything the best I could in my sandbox. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbhatt22/sandbox Kbhatt22 (talk) 14:14, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22, please don’t forget to sign your replies as it’s easy to lose track between all the replies. I appreciate you taking my suggestion to upload on Sandbox. You did a good job finding and using it. I’m responding here since Sandbox is primarily used for proposing edits, not discussing them. Before I go into the specific edits, I wanted to note that this way of thinking about the edits as IP vs. ‘BAPS’ is problematic, as I haven’t seen any indication that any particular user is connected to BAPS. To claim it's IP vs BAPS may be interpreted as WP:POVFIGHTER, a sign of tendentious editing which is frowned upon. After reading the talk page, I also found that you mention what sects you are not from, thus implying a personal affiliation. The anonymous user or ‘IP’ has also said similar things, and this is an apparent conflict of interest (WP:APPARENTCOI). I know you’re relatively new to Wikipedia so I am giving you the benefit of the doubt and assuming good faith. To move away from assigning a perspective to other editors, please see this essay[5] about civility and imagining others complexly (WP:IMAGINE). My thoughts on each edit are below:
Edit 1: The ‘Major Branches’ section starts off with comprehensive details about the Lekh and its role in establishing the administrative dioceses. It is not called a scripture there but an ‘administrative document.’ Do you have supporting evidence that indicates this document is recognized as a scripture by any branch, or ideally all of them?
Edit 2: Yes, there are numerous sources from the past few days detailing the leadership change, so it makes a lot of sense to include it. Your proposed edit looks good but may need one or two more reliable sources before it’s ready to include.
Edit 3: Again you say ‘BAPS’ but no one in what I have read has suggested they have a personal affiliation with this specific denomination (WP:IMAGINE). This is problematic and shouldn’t be done in the future. Since you are indifferent on this topic, there’s no need to take it on. We can’t solve all of Wikipedia’s problems ourselves.
Edit 4: The branches listed under “major branches” are already in the chronological order that you’ve proposed.
Edit 5: In short, I think including more images is a good idea. Some of the issues that you are taking with photos do not make sense. As an example, the image you propose for the arti is very similar to the one already there. Rather than taking issue with something someone else has done, working on making your own, original contribution is always a great approach.
Best wishes, Skubydoo (talk) 04:43, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Skubydoo: Sometimes doing multiple edits, hard to remember to sign the replies. I will be more mindful of that. I am not sure how to describe a dispute (which is what happened a few days ago) without establishing two sides. I am not pointing out any one specific user has an affiliation to Baps but simply that there was one side that was using BAPs sources, hand picking BAPS images, claiming traditions and idealodies on behalf of one branch and another side who called it out by aggressively removing all of it instead of talking about it like we are. It is important to establish perspectives here. I assumed you were new to Swaminarayan, which maybe I was wrong, so I was trying to contextualize this situation but regardless I can not do that. I have consistently shown the ability to stay neutral here and will continue to do so but it is important to establish both sides of a dispute before it can be resolved. I have been clear, and continue to do so, that I am not from any branch. I just like to read the original scriptures. You say this is "implying a personal affiliation" but in the legal field this is a declaration of a either a conflict of interest or lack there of. Implying not part of one is not a causal effect to imply part of another. I am simply saying that I am not suggesting this change because I am a part of that branch but because I see merit in its inclusion subjectively. Here is my feedback:
Edit 1: Why is an administrative document different then a scripture? Merriam Webster defines a scripture as "a body of writings considered sacred or authoritative" .... the lekh being administrative in nature also has rules to be followed like the other scriptures listed, and fits the definition of being a writing considered sacred or authoritative. The book used as a source on this page called An Introduction to Swaminarayan Hinduism by William Raymond Brady (https://archive.org/details/introductiontosw0000will) mentions on pages 36, 44,49, 188, and 192 that it is accepted by the Ahmadabad branch and the vadtal branch as well as recognized by BAPS just they interperate it differently. This is actually supportive of my earlier point about one sided sources. The term "administrative document" is Baps interpretation as the Ahmdabad branch and vadtal branch see it as a spiritual document for all saying how "Acharya, saints, and haribhaktas should behave" https://www.swaminarayan.faith/media/3005/kalupur_magazine_english_nov-2014.pdf. We are already listing scriptures accepted by only one branch. This is one acknowledged by 3. Hopefully this resolves any questions you have and highlights that someone reading this article can walk away with one branches interpretations and not the sampadaya as a whole.
Edit 2: When all these edits get made, I can add in more sources. Consensus reached?
Edit 3: I am not trying to solve all of wikipedias problems. not even all the ones raised on this page. (only 4-5 of the 16 from this page), but after review I am not sure why this was being turned down is all. I want to be neutral and am seriously puzzled as to why something with a valid source, same as already being used, and what someone believed was a part of that branches "mythos" and origin story is being turned down. This is setting a very dangerous precedence for this kind of refusal and that is where my concern is.
Edit 4: Yes they are but the two sides from a few days ago around this dispute where arguing the links under the External links section and in the Swaminarayan sampradaya template at the bottom. I was proposing we just align those to be in the order of how the Major branches section already is as you stated. consensus reached?
Edit 5: Can you be more specific of what is not making sense? There is a major difference between the aarti images. I agree that they look similar but the major difference is one is highlighting the person doing the aarti and the other is not crediting the person but captioning the actual aarti process. Another difference is this is an original idol installed by Swaminarayan himself during the establishment of the Sampradaya. We can add both if that seems better? We could use: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/43/%281%29_Aarti_Thali%2C_Prayer_Plate_India.jpg as an even more branch agnostic representation of aarti. Are there any concerns about the other image proposals? Kbhatt22 (talk) 14:15, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Kbhatt22 thank you for your ideas and contributions in a civil manner. However, I think there is a lot being discussed here and it may be easier if you begin with the exercise we have done previously - creating drafts on sandbox and then it can be discussed in a more organized manner. I think the first thing to add to the page would be the new Maninagar guru information. However, some of the other edits proposed I do not agree with. In terms of the images on the page. If you analyze the images on the page, only 4 of the 9 appear to be BAPS specific. However, they still are representative of the sampradaya. I think there is room on the article to potentially add 1-2 high quality images if needed. Apollo1203 (talk) 18:33, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Apollo1203. Hope all is well. I did create a sandbox as advised and the response was provided here so I provided my response here as well. Here is the sandbox with full detail: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kbhatt22/sandbox. I outlined the images individually and 7 of the 9 are Baps specific. 78% of the images here are linked to BAPS and that is not representative of the Sampradaya. As discussed with @Skubydoo: @Harshmellow717: that all branches should be represented here and there is a need to diversify the images. I made 2 over all approach proposals. We either add images to include other branches, or update existing images to be branch agnostic or branch neutral. As of right now, not a single image represents Ahmadabad, Vadtal, Swaminarayan Maningar, or Gunatit Samaj branches which are listed on the page. I would hope that you can see a problem with this? Adding 1-2 images does not balance the images to represent the entire sampradaya. Kbhatt22 (talk) 18:47, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think 7 of the 9 are BAPS specific. The following appear to be specific: 1) Mahant Swami Maharaj performing the arti. 2) Bochasan murtis 3) Mahant Swami Maharaj image and the 4) Swaminarayan Bhashya. Although the Swaminarayan Akshardham has been built by BAPS, it is one of the largest temples in India and is an icon for the Swaminarayan Sampradaya, not just BAPS. Curious as to what others think? Apollo1203 (talk) 18:54, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am not sure how to respond to that. It is a BAPS temple, created and run by BAPS. It represents BAPS. That is baps specific. If your read my sandbox, I did state that that image is a modern temple and we can balance it with an original temple image from a temple created by Swaminarayan. I am simply correctly stating that 7 of the 9 images are exclusively linked to BAPs. To correct myself, I just realized that 8 of the 9 images link directly to BAPS. The image of "Swaminarayan and his senior disciples" is a cut out of the BAPS vachnamrut:https://www.amazon.com/Vachanamrut-Spiritual-Discourses-Bhagwan-Swaminarayan/dp/8175264314. It appears branch agnostic but furthers my point of a huge lack of diversity in images. 8 of 9 are linked to or created by BAPS. Lets diversify it to represent all the branches. Kbhatt22 (talk) 19:04, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Looking over the images suggested by kbhatt22 (talk · contribs), I think these suggestions do a great job in highlighting the traditions and beliefs of the entire Swaminarayan Sampradaya as a whole and would help diversify the article. However, some of the images suggested seem to be blurry and of low resolution. Let’s see if we can find better quality images. I will try to find some high-res images on Wikimedia as well for everyone to review. Harshmellow717 (talk) 03:50, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Harshmellow717 (talk · contribs) Thanks for taking the time to review this. I found an image for aarti which I think would be great. It isn't on wiki though and am unsure of what the process for adding outside images to wikimedia would be. I'd love to go through that flow if I could with this image. But this is the very first idols installed by Swaminarayan and the person doing the aarti is barely in the focus which aligns with what we were discussing earlier. I think its perfect representation of aarti and that early in the article, it goes with the flow of how the article tracks the history of the sampraday and the beginnings. Using the first idols of the sampraday there would be a good pairing and this image is pretty good resolution. https://scontent-yyz1-1.cdninstagram.com/v/t51.2885-15/sh0.08/e35/c71.0.795.795a/s640x640/70327168_1023846777964030_4228857896113504440_n.jpg?_nc_ht=scontent-yyz1-1.cdninstagram.com&_nc_cat=110&_nc_ohc=1JPbqXpv67YAX_egODs&oh=dee889f46973483a2fc91d1dc8ea5ba3&oe=5F1DCE18. If there is another image with resolution issues, let me know and I can try to search as well so we have more to pick from. I think the murti image with vadtal gopinath should be big enough to run with and its already in wikimedia so that makes things easier. Thanks Kbhatt22 (talk) 11:45, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am late to this conversation, but I’d like to share my thoughts. I think the article reflects the entire tradition of Swaminarayan Sampradaya, but we can include new information and add to what is already there. As @Skubydoo: mentioned, implying someone is from any branch without proof could be misinterpreted as uncivil. @Kbhatt22:, I am aware of your good intentions from our past interactions, which is why I recommend rewording your reasoning in your sandbox. Imagining ‘sides’ to an argument is the problem, not a solution according to (WP:POVFIGHTER) as Skubydoo points out. Can you just state the point without attributing it to anyone to keep things clear and neutral?
Edit 1: I agree with you. The Lekh should be included in the article. Upon reviewing the ‘Scriptural tradition’ section and the reference you provided, I think it’s more logical to include the Lekh in the ‘Major branches’ section. The last line of the introductory paragraph for ‘Scriptural tradition,’ defines scriptures as “sacred biographies, ethical precepts, commentaries, and philosophical treatises,” none of which seem to address the purpose of the Lekh.
Edit 2: I agree, we should include. Skubydoo, I think it’s ok if we have one source for now. If nobody disagrees, then let’s add.
Edit 3: In reviewing the reference, I don’t see how the 2 sentences in question are supported by the reference. On page 66, Williams first states that Dadubhai blamed Narayanswarupdas Swami and said Yogiji Maharaj supported him. In the next sentence, Williams demonstrates that this is a false statement by referencing a document showing that Yogiji Maharaj signed the order of excommunication. It would not be good to include the statement that Williams establishes to be false, while ignoring the true statement (WP:CHERRY). Can everyone else please verify?
Edit 4: Let’s stick with chronological order to keep things fair.
Edit 5: I will post my suggestions on your sandbox since it’s easier to see everything there. Moksha88 (talk) 13:39, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The article is intended to encompass the entire tradition. But as discussed with Harshmellow717 and Skubydoo, the images are the only area where diversification is strongly lacking. That was my main point. If the origin of 8 of the 9 images on the page trace back to 1 branch and we list 5 major branches, this should be diversified to have some from each branch for fair representation. Especially given that none of the images encompass anything originally done by Swaminarayan himself. We can't say it reflects the entire tradition when we absolve any images to reflect the work done by its founder. Some of those idols and temples would add more value to this page. In terms of my wording of sides, I already stopped doing that after Skubydoo's suggestion. I was simply trying to outline the context of how we all ended up in this discussion.
Edit 1: That is how we define scriptures on this page but I also mentioned earlier that the dictionary definition of a scripture and how this text matches that. We alude to it in the branches section and its impact on the branches but wouldn't it make sense to have it as a scripture linking to its more detailed wiki page? Especially since it is the last known scripture authorized by swaminarayan himself. If I am reading my dates correctly.
Edit 2: Adding a second source is easy enough to do and I can add it in when we make the change. I'd say we have consensus on this one.
Edit 3: Should both statements be included? I was having a hard time following this point from the IPs, you can see above, as the names in the text and how they are here in Wiki are different and that caused confusion. I only got involved to make sure the source matched the names being used in the article.
Edit 4: Great. Consensus reached. We can updated the related links and template at bottom to match chronological order of branches section when these edits get made.
Edit 5: Sounds great. Right now we list Vadtal, Ahemdabad, Bochasanwasi, Swaminarayan Gadi, and Gunatit as major branches and 8 images source from Bochasan and 1 source from Ahembdabad. Hopefully we can source from the other branches and reach consensus on diversification of image source to represent the whole tradition.
Kbhatt22 (talk) 14:19, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kbhatt22:, I updated the sandbox with my suggestions for the photographs, reformatted it so others can comment, and also struck out the text that makes this dialogue divisive (WP:Strikeout). Please use this for the future. I think the only edits that need to be discussed are #1 and #5. I couldn't tell if you agree with keeping the original version for #3 based on my reply. Moksha88 (talk) 15:25, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Moksha88: I provided my response. I think we agree on the direction of most of the images. I am sorry that sandbox format is confusing. I was hoping to have responses below the line so they are signed but overall I will have to manage my sandbox better. I believe edit 1 and 5 are the only outstanding points. Lets resolve images first. I think edit 1 is a small change one way or the other. We can make all the other edits first. I am fine with keeping edit 3 the way it is now based on you're response. If the IP's still want it included, lets just require another entirely separate source to corroborate that so it has 2 sources should this resurface again. Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:06, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I want it all included. I’ll add more sources. 136.1.1.162 (talk) 18:23, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Before making any edits, present the sources here and start a discussion to work out the changes with the people here. The above dialog shows everyones willing to talk about and work on mutual consensus. As long as the sources are valid and meet guidelines and it is talked through, Everyone's approachable. I am assuming you are the same IP. At this point I assume all the IPs with 136 is the same person so please specify if its a new person. Best would be creating an account. It would make discussions and dialogue easier. There is a Swaminarayan project (WP:Swaminarayan) as well that I found the other day. Working with everyone will get the most done. It takes some time but you can see above that everyone is willing to work towards what best adds scholarly and informational value. Kbhatt22 (talk) 22:54, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Going back to the previous point by @Kbhatt22: @Moksha88: I provided my response. I think we agree on the direction of most of the images. I am sorry that sandbox format is confusing. I was hoping to have responses below the line so they are signed but overall I will have to manage my sandbox better. I believe edit 1 and 5 are the only outstanding points. Lets resolve images first. I think edit 1 is a small change one way or the other. We can make all the other edits first. I am fine with keeping edit 3 the way it is now based on you're response. If the IP's still want it included, lets just require another entirely separate source to corroborate that so it has 2 sources should this resurface again. Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:06, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
I agree, it’s becoming difficult to follow the photo conversation. Apollo1203 (talk · contribs), can you move your comments to the bulleted list? Either create a new bullet for a new suggestion or paste under someone else’s suggestion if you agree. This way, we can see which suggestion has the most agreement. You should avoid names so the focus remains on the point and not the person. Harshmellow717 (talk) 06:05, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
After doing some research, I agree with Moksha 88 that the Lekh is not a scripture for all the branches and is best included in the successorship section. In regards to edit #2, after looking at the source I also think the original version was better. This way, the author’s statements aren’t misrepresented. For edit 5: the links should correspond to the titles of the Wikipedia articles for each diocese, which is Narnarayan Gadi and Laxminarayan Gadi. While chronological orders would make sense, both dioceses were technically formed at the same time, so it makes the most sense to order the links alphabetically. The opinions about the photos are still coming in and the conversation is productive, so I don’t feel I need to moderate that discussion. Best wishes, Skubydoo (talk) 01:36, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Skubydoo: I think the edit numbers you connected too were off above. Your comment on edit 2 I think was meant for edit 3. I think the commend for edit 5 was meant for edit 4. In terms of the Lekh, I am not sure I follow the logic there. "The lekh is not a scripture for all branches" ..... Neither is the swaminarayan bhasyam but it is included here under scriptures. Is there a source that shows it is not for all branches? If it was authored by the founder Swaminarayan and consists of rules to be followed, why treat it differently to other texts? The scripture section captures scriptures that hold significance in the sampradaya and links too their individual wiki pages, which this inclusion would do.
I also found this during research: https://indiankanoon.org/doc/1445588/?__cf_chl_jschl_tk__=e6dcb1fc2fbb4b70290e1e379d628730973dee6b-1595765847-0-Ab_Q6vKacVHW2UgDJybMXNgg-XveG6jHWK9ylsprOKSaMcWbkVHyNjgMKqLqeqZqsPuog-F1ztaS_6XEcltWnmUCpMKNki3ntPEoJPLdh0hz4kKRpQp_nIo8CkwxcZj_rphr_WxkYGehuJk4rWj6IdTx9ZwAc1EpzUqjL2gP5oW48dbDPUhSIiBeWSnMk_5iRVifqVDKdvWPitqjANLL3Mi-Sd_bXLXB7cY-ercGDtX8KS_i7v39bkjwLdsVC3stByhe4WAyNfMaPvsRTgnhV5hb0jn5_G8n79P7JQdxJZzeusn1Pj6YMcoMQb35diTSvHj5dQBywJBNuwhmbyLeNc_zbGAPCDEJ7kR1tJPt90V2
This is an Indian court case proceedings where the Lekh was accepted as a valid shashtra which literally translated to scripture. It likens the Lekh, Satsangi Jivanam, and Shikshapatri as "three holy religious books" for the swaminarayan sect. What do we have for sources that suggest it isn't a scripture? I would think the Indian High court is pretty conclusive in its definition. Thoughts?
As a recap, we have reached consensus on edit 2,3,and 4. Awaiting feedback on the images I have suggested for edit 5 in sandbox. I proposed new images for Aarti, Murti, and Vachnamrut to diversify the page. The rest of the images are good as is. I also propose we don't have branch leaders in image form here, adds little value to this page as we outline them in text and link to each branch page where the leader images already exist. If no one has any objection to the proposed images and approach, I suggest we make the changes for edits 2-5 and shelf the lekh discussion for after(if there is still pushback to the above sources and logic). Get all the agreed changes out of the way so we aren't carrying them forward in the discussion. Thoughts? Kbhatt22 (talk) 12:15, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I also agree that it should be included. We have multiple sources now that outline it as a scripture. it is signed by the founder of the sampradaya. I am not sure why there is such a big push to not include it at this point under a section that it belongs under. @Skubydoo: I am seriously not sure why this is meeting so much resistance now. The more I read through the last source, the more its including is merited. We outline it in successorship as a part of the narrative there which is fine but it still is a part of the scriptural tradition. Ample sources have been provided. I'm truly baffled as to why it is constantly being refused for inclusion at this point. It is not a major change either. I am also wondering if Satsangi Jeevan should be listed under the scriptures as its own scripture. It seems like pretty prominent text and is originally approved by the founder. A one liner doesn't seem sufficient here. Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:10, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
This page is intended to capture the entire sampradaya so everyone is for diversification where it is needed like the images discussion above. Lets let all the pending changes be worked out and then if there are any additional proposals, we can all discuss after. I think the 4 edits proposed in my sandbox have been being discussed for almost 2 weeks now. Feel free to add feedback or alternate suggestions in my sandbox for my proposed changes as additional bullet items. I would like to complete all the changes being discussed already first before starting new discussions if that is ok with everyone. This would ensure we dont mix up multiple discussions. the IP below has created a section for Akshar pursotam darshan so we can keep this section about the 4 edits outlined and discussed so far. Thanks Kbhatt22 (talk) 17:17, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I made edits to complete 2,3 (no change),and 4 where consensus was reached to get those out of our way and not carry them forward in the ongoing discussion. 3 was a no change based on consensus so nothing was done. I accidentally put 3 in my change notes. Unsure how to update that but I meant to say edit 4 in the change notes. We are now just awaiting finalizing Edit 1 and Edit 5. Is there any further feed back to the proposed images in my last sandbox update? Kbhatt22 (talk) 13:53, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Kbhatt22: I have reorganized the sandbox, so it’s clear how many people agree/disagree with each edit. I would encourage everyone to add their votes here so it's clear where things stand. Upon review of this lengthy talk page, I don't think there's consensus for reordering the links. Skubydoo is right that there's no way to chronologically order the links because both dioceses were formed simultaneously. I’d favor reordering alphabetically, not chronologically. I don’t know how everyone else feels, but they should vote on your sandbox. Moksha88 (talk) 18:44, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Moksha88: I misread the ordering of the links feedback from Skubydoo and thought consensus was reached for chronological order. Apologies. If the two gadi's were created on the same day, they would still be about 100 years before the origin of Baps, they would still be chronologically earlier. Thank you for adjusting the sandbox. For edit 1, I had provided additional sources and outlined a response to any criticism above and have not received any further counters. I don't believe there are any points against its including that have not been addressed. Kbhatt22 (talk) 19:12, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I mean this with absolute continued respect, I have raised this as a dispute. This has gone on for over 2 weeks and I just want a resolution here. Hopefully this helps speed up consensus and closure of the 4 edits in my sandbox. I am not going to be actively a part of the discussion below on additional points raised by the IP. I did provide feedback but will refrain from ending up being involved in those proposed edits. I am just looking to round out my 4 proposed edits and take a break. I have remained respectful, civil, and supportive of the open wiki collaboration culture and have supported points made by literally everyone here. I am simply asking for diversification and have carefully outlined the clear heavy reliance on images and sources from one specific branch. With that said, I have remained neutral and fair but feel like after over 2 weeks, only 1 of the smallest change had any consensus reached. I have enjoyed working with all of you and look forward to continue working with each of you should more work be needed. I have much respect for all of you and hope the same exists both ways. Lets wrap up these 4 changes. Thanks Kbhatt22 (talk) 10:24, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Patel I. (2018) Swaminarayan. In: Jain P., Sherma R., Khanna M. (eds) Hinduism and Tribal Religions. Encyclopedia of Indian Religions. Springer, Dordrecht https://doi.org/10.1007/978-94-024-1036-5_541-1
  2. ^ Mamtora, Bhakti (2018-11-05). "BAPS: Pramukh Swami". Brill's Encyclopedia of Hinduism Online. doi:10.1163/2212-5019_beh_com_1010071046.
  3. ^ Warrier, Maya (2012). "Traditions and Transformations". In Zavos, John; Kanungo, Pralay; Reddy, Deepa S.; Warrier, Maya; Williams, Raymond B. (eds.). Public Hinduisms. SAGE Publications India Pvt Ltd. pp. 169–76. ISBN 978-1-283-57553-9. OCLC 808609622.
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Follow up on edits

I am proposing the following edits throughout the article and the lead.

  • Edit A

Early in his leadership of the group, Sahajanand Swami directed his devotees to chant the Swaminarayan mantra, which is stands one entity Purushottam.[1] In the Vachanamrut, the principal theological text of the sampradaya, Swaminarayan identifies five eternal and distinct entities: parabrahman, brahman, maya (māyā), ishwar (iśvara), and jiva (jīva) See Gadhada I.7, Gadhada I.39, Gadhada I.42, Gadhada III.10

Currently it only shows the BAPS version which is "Early in his leadership of the group, Sahajanand Swami directed his devotees to chant the Swaminarayan mantra, which is a compound of two Sanskrit words: Swami and Narayan. ‘Swami’ denotes Aksharbrahman" which even in the source that is currently up, shows both means and needs to be clarified that the Sampraday believes the first and baps breakoff believes their own made up version. Clearly the original name meaning is different then what is currently on the article. Does this entire need to have separate BAPS interpretations? This book An introduction to Swaminarayan Hindu theology is written by a BAPS sadhu 'Paramtattvadas, Sadhu' so it needs to be tossed from this article on non BAPS items.

  • Edit C

I am proposing removing references to Akshar-Purushottam Darshan in this article. It is not something created by Swaminarayan and has way too much undue weight on this article. It is a synthesis of sources and cherry picking of scriptures by the BAPS founder and he was legally barred from entering the Swaminarayn Sampraday premises by a judge for making up his own crap that led him to getting his followers to worship him instead. How does the shikshaprati have a tiny blurb about it from a BAPS sourced book while BAPS supporting items like Akshar-Purushottam Darshan and Swamini Vato are heavily weighted in here?

136.2.32.181 (talk) 13:53, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I can't speak to edit A. Little too deep of a dive for me to follow. I'll leave that for others to provide feedback on. For B, based on the source you provided. Swami Vato is to Baps as Lekh is to the other branches. @Skubydoo: I think including Lekh under scriptures would resolve this. Both are listed and both merit inclusion is how I see this. As for Edit C, is that branch specific ideology? I just hovered over every source in that section and every single source was BAPs branch sourced or from the Williams, Raymond Brady book which outlines it as Baps beliefs. Instead of the IP's proposal of removing it, I propose we move it under the Baps section under branches if it is specific to that branch. Thoughts? @Skubydoo: Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:20, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've taken a look at the point the above user made on 'Edit C'. The sources that are speaking to this 'Akshar-Purshottam Darshan' seem to come from academic sources and don't seem 'cherry picked'. Of note, all the sources mentioned have been published by various universities, and academic organizations. I've noticed that this english translation of this 'Vachanamrut' text has been called into question as well. I am not too familiar with this text, however it is seemingly very often cited in other academic sources on the subject of this Swaminarayan Sampraday and therefore I see it being used here as ok. I am following this discussion and have sporadically had time to weigh in, but I welcome the discussion to move further. ThaNDNman224 (talk) 02:17, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am not suggesting they are not academic. I am suggesting if the 'Akshar-Purushottam Darshan' is a branch specific idealody like the IP claims, then we can move it under the branch as opposed to the proposal of outright removal. That's all. I ctrl+f the vachnamrut linked here and the term 'Akshar-Purushottam Darshan' did not appear in it also. The only source I saw in that section that uses that phrase was 'Swaminarayan's Brahmajnana as Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsanam' by Bhadreshdas Swami who came up as a monk from the Bochasanwasi Akshar Purushottam Swaminarayan Sanstha. The other source uses is the book by Swami Paramtattvadas who is also listed as a monk under that same branch/group. So I am simply asking if this is branch specific idealody or general sampradaya idealody? Can we find another source that suggests another branch shares this ideology? The answer to that I think would dictate the discussion around "Edit C' I feel. Kbhatt22 (talk) 03:33, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with ThaNDNman224 (talk · contribs) about “Edit C”. All but one source listed in the Metaphysics section is an academic, secondary source, the other being the English translation of the Vachanamrut, which the cited academic sources also reference. Therefore, in my opinion, this Vachanamrut is branch agnostic as it is widely cited in academic articles related to the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. Please see the list of scholarly sources cited in the Metaphysics section:
  • Paramtattvadas, Sadhu (17 August 2017). An introduction to Swaminarayan Hindu theology. Cambridge, United Kingdom: Cambridge University Press. ISBN 978-1-107-15867-2. OCLC 964861190.
  • Kim, Hanna (2002). Being Swaminarayan: the ontology and significance of belief in the construction of a Gujarati diaspora. UMI Dissertation Services. OCLC 452027310.
  • Kim, Hanna (2014) "Svāminārāyaṇa: Bhaktiyoga and the Akṣarabrahman Guru". In Singleton, Mark; Goldberg, Ellen (eds.). Gurus of modern yoga. New York, NY: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-993871-1. OCLC 861692270.
  • Gadhia, Smit (2016). "Akshara and its four forms in Swaminarayan's doctrine". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Trivedi, Yogi (2016). "Multivalent Krishna-bhakti in Premanand's Poetry". In Williams, Raymond Brady (ed.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Brahmbhatt, Arun (2016). "The Swaminarayan commentarial tradition". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity(1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Bhadreshdas, Sadhu; Aksharananddas, Sadhu (1 April 2016), "Swaminarayan's Brahmajnana as Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsanam", Swaminarayan Hinduism, Oxford University Press, pp. 172–190, doi:10.1093/acprof:oso/9780199463749.003.0011, ISBN 978-0-19-946374-9
  • Kim, Hanna (2016). "Thinking through Akshardham and the making of the Swaminarayan self". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
Harshmellow717 (talk) 11:36, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Harshmellow717: Hey Harshmellow717. Thanks for outlining the sources. That is very helpful. I agree with you and ThaNDNman224 (talk · contribs) that this should not be removed. I am simply questioning the placement in the article. None of the other sources use the phrase 'Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsan' except the two from Baps origin. Please see my last comment for more details on the reasoning here. None of the sources above imply or suggest that that phrase is branch agnostic. It also does not exist in the vachnamrut from my ctrl+f search. That phrase is listed under the branch it is associated with already. At the very least, shouldn't we remove that phrase from the Metaphysics section? The rest is sourced and fine but it seems odd to have a branch specific ideology listed for a section applicable to the entire sampradaya. No one has surfaced a source that links that ideology with any of the other branches? Please provide one if it exists or is implied in the above sources that are not branch specific in origin.
I believe there’s a difference in how the unregistered user is interpreting the Swaminarayan Sampradaya which underlies Edit C and the other suggested edits. The Swaminarayan Sampradaya encompasses all the branches. This interpretation is based on the majority of secondary sources available which I have outlined here. Thus, it’s incorrect to state,

“the BAPS founder and he was legally barred from entering the Swaminarayn Sampraday premises by a judge for making up his own crap that led him to getting his followers to worship him instead,”

because BAPS, Maninagar, and Sokdha are all included in the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and thus merit inclusion in this article. Undue weight would be to represent a minority opinion as the majority opinion based on available scholarly sources, which in this case would be to assert that these subgroups do not fall within the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and thus should be excluded from the article altogether. Please also note that the list of references I have provided are published by branch agnostic publishers, not BAPS, similar to the list by @Harshmellow717:. The claim that these sources are BAPS in origin remains unverified. Moksha88 (talk) 18:06, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Moksha88: My feed back addressed some of those concerns. I agree with you that the proposal by IP to remove that section isn't right. Which is why I proposed moving that under the branch section. You said "The claim that these sources are BAPS in origin remains unverified." But the authors of both the texts sourced that explicitly use this phrase 'Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsan' are from a specific branch. I don't know how we can verify it any further. Do you have a source that uses that phrase linking it to any other branch besides BAPS? During research I found this, https://www.baps.org/News/2019/Akshar-Purushottam-Darshan-Pith-Established-by-BAPS-in-Kashi-16999.aspx They are claiming ownership of that concept. What is wrong with my proposal that we move that content under the branch section or at the very least, outline it is branch specific. I propose keeping it just like you, just wanting to add clarification if we have an opportunity to do so. Kbhatt22 (talk) 19:12, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I think the sources used are not cherrypicked, they are all academic and reliable sources. It does not appear to be synthesized either, which would be considered original research. The sources are from scholars and does not skew the information, the consensus among the scholars is in fact what is written in the article.Apollo1203 (talk) 02:50, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am sorry but if the sources are all linked to originating from one branch then regardless of if you find them scholarly or not, I can present and prove a case of biased viewpoint. Which goes back to an earlier discussion we already had about diversification of sources. Can you justify the reasoning for not wanting diversification on this page? Kbhatt22 (talk) 09:11, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Continuing my points here: @Kbhatt22: and the unregistered user, before we can even discuss the Lekh and other suggested edits, we need to establish that the sources used in the ‘Metaphysics’ section are indeed reliable, scholarly secondary sources.

We are discussing the lekh above. Lets not re-run that discussion down here and keep that discussion above to avoid confusion. Also to be clear for everyone, the page history shows that that entire section was made by Apollo. Not that there is anything wrong with that but lets let others have some feedback in the section here. I did verify myself that the phrase was only in sources originating from one branch. Am still waiting for someone to surface a source that links that concept with another branch. I could not find such a source and the ones used, be it scholarly, are still biases and I continue to drive for diversification of sources, images, and equal representation for all branches. I still stand by my original proposal that we simply move that phrase under the branch whose ideology it is and resolve this dispute between the changes you had already made and the changes the IP suggests. I see merit on both sides. This is not my talking point, I am simply providing neutral feedback to help reach consensus here. Let it also be known that my concern/comments are not with the entire section....As outlined above, it is with the phrase 'Akshar-Purshottum Darshan' which based on research is branch specific and should be relocated. Please don't confuse my points about that one phrase and the bias in the sources representing that phrase to the whole section. I am not targeting the whole section. I quite frankly don't understand that whole section and just independent researched the one phrase and found it to be branch specific.
The sources that are used to reference 'Akshar-Purshottum Darshan' violate the WP:IS policy as the source is not independent and is closely affiliated with the subject. The author of the source behind that that phrase is openly part of one branch so it is dangerous to imply it is accepted by the entire sampradaya the way it is currently presented on this page. This also means the source has a conflict of interest. Kbhatt22 (talk) 09:11, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Desh Vibhag Lekh Discussion (Previously Edit 1 & Edit B)

Hello all, between the sandbox and the 3 different threads on the talk page, the discussion was getting difficult to follow so I have decided to create a new section for each point being addressed. I have taken the liberty to add relevant discussions from "Original Research" and "Follow up on edits" sections on the talk page. I have also added the relevant info from Kbhatt22 (talk · contribs)'s sandbox in order to track consensus. Please note in an effort to streamline the discussion the previous comments pasted over from other sections have been modified to only include content relevant to the point being addressed.

From Kbhatt22's Sandbox:

The Change (Addition)

=== Desh Vibhag Lekh ===
The Desh Vibhag Lekh was written by Swaminarayan in 1827 establishing the division of territory into two dioceses of Ahmedabad and Vartal It was dictated by Sahajanand Swami himself and written by Sadhu Shukmuni in the Darbar of Khachar Dada Ebhal at Gadhada in the year 1826. It was translated into English by Geo. P Taylor in 1903. It has been accepted as such by the Bombay High Court as valid document.


From "Original Research" Section:

Hi @Skubydoo. Thank you for taking the time to moderate and review this information. You're presence here is greatly appreciated. What you said makes sense. A sources reputation is not dependent upon its point of view as you mentioned but it also states "articles should reflect an appropriate balance of differing points of view" which I suppose is where this article is lacking because it is so aggressively skewed by one point of view. If this page is to include everything from the start of the organization to present, I believe for linear flow, ideological differences should exist under header of the branch whose ideology it is. If that makes sense, this would eliminate the implication that the ideology of one branch is applicable to the entire organization which this article is subtly doing in multiple ways. I am not good with sandbox as I am still learning wiki. Looking at this revision: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Swaminarayan_Sampradaya&diff=968040776&oldid=968038926. As mentioned, I am trying to be subjectively neutral and only some of these changes I feel merit discussion. Running down that revision in order.

Desh vibah lekh is a recognized swaminarayan scripture by the highest courts of India. The IP address is trying to add it due to it being a fundamental part to the history and timeline of the organisation as it was originally approved by Swaminarayan and is recognized by all branches. It is the only explicitly documented succession plan by Swaminarayan. Kbhatt22 (talk) 10:46, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Edit 1: The ‘Major Branches’ section starts off with comprehensive details about the Lekh and its role in establishing the administrative dioceses. It is not called a scripture there but an ‘administrative document.’ Do you have supporting evidence that indicates this document is recognized as a scripture by any branch, or ideally all of them? Skubydoo (talk) 04:43, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Edit 1: Why is an administrative document different then a scripture? Merriam Webster defines a scripture as "a body of writings considered sacred or authoritative" .... the lekh being administrative in nature also has rules to be followed like the other scriptures listed, and fits the definition of being a writing considered sacred or authoritative. The book used as a source on this page called An Introduction to Swaminarayan Hinduism by William Raymond Brady (https://archive.org/details/introductiontosw0000will) mentions on pages 36, 44,49, 188, and 192 that it is accepted by the Ahmadabad branch and the vadtal branch as well as recognized by BAPS just they interperate it differently. This is actually supportive of my earlier point about one sided sources. The term "administrative document" is Baps interpretation as the Ahmdabad branch and vadtal branch see it as a spiritual document for all saying how "Acharya, saints, and haribhaktas should behave" https://www.swaminarayan.faith/media/3005/kalupur_magazine_english_nov-2014.pdf. We are already listing scriptures accepted by only one branch. This is one acknowledged by 3. Hopefully this resolves any questions you have and highlights that someone reading this article can walk away with one branches interpretations and not the sampadaya as a whole. Kbhatt22 (talk) 14:15, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Edit 1: I agree with you. The Lekh should be included in the article. Upon reviewing the ‘Scriptural tradition’ section and the reference you provided, I think it’s more logical to include the Lekh in the ‘Major branches’ section. The last line of the introductory paragraph for ‘Scriptural tradition,’ defines scriptures as “sacred biographies, ethical precepts, commentaries, and philosophical treatises,” none of which seem to address the purpose of the Lekh. Moksha88 (talk) 13:39, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
After doing some research, I agree with Moksha 88 that the Lekh is not a scripture for all the branches and is best included in the successorship section. In regards to edit #2, after looking at the source I also think the original version was better. This way, the author’s statements aren’t misrepresented. For edit 5: the links should correspond to the titles of the Wikipedia articles for each diocese, which is Narnarayan Gadi and Laxminarayan Gadi. While chronological orders would make sense, both dioceses were technically formed at the same time, so it makes the most sense to order the links alphabetically. The opinions about the photos are still coming in and the conversation is productive, so I don’t feel I need to moderate that discussion. Best wishes, Skubydoo (talk) 01:36, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Skubydoo: I think the edit numbers you connected too were off above. Your comment on edit 2 I think was meant for edit 3. I think the commend for edit 5 was meant for edit 4. In terms of the Lekh, I am not sure I follow the logic there. "The lekh is not a scripture for all branches" ..... Neither is the swaminarayan bhasyam but it is included here under scriptures. Is there a source that shows it is not for all branches? If it was authored by the founder Swaminarayan and consists of rules to be followed, why treat it differently to other texts? The scripture section captures scriptures that hold significance in the sampradaya and links too their individual wiki pages, which this inclusion would do.
I also found this during research: https://indiankanoon.org/doc/1445588/?__cf_chl_jschl_tk__=e6dcb1fc2fbb4b70290e1e379d628730973dee6b-1595765847-0-Ab_Q6vKacVHW2UgDJybMXNgg-XveG6jHWK9ylsprOKSaMcWbkVHyNjgMKqLqeqZqsPuog-F1ztaS_6XEcltWnmUCpMKNki3ntPEoJPLdh0hz4kKRpQp_nIo8CkwxcZj_rphr_WxkYGehuJk4rWj6IdTx9ZwAc1EpzUqjL2gP5oW48dbDPUhSIiBeWSnMk_5iRVifqVDKdvWPitqjANLL3Mi-Sd_bXLXB7cY-ercGDtX8KS_i7v39bkjwLdsVC3stByhe4WAyNfMaPvsRTgnhV5hb0jn5_G8n79P7JQdxJZzeusn1Pj6YMcoMQb35diTSvHj5dQBywJBNuwhmbyLeNc_zbGAPCDEJ7kR1tJPt90V2
This is an Indian court case proceedings where the Lekh was accepted as a valid shashtra which literally translated to scripture. It likens the Lekh, Satsangi Jivanam, and Shikshapatri as "three holy religious books" for the swaminarayan sect. What do we have for sources that suggest it isn't a scripture? I would think the Indian High court is pretty conclusive in its definition. Thoughts?
As a recap, we have reached consensus on edit 2,3,and 4. Awaiting feedback on the images I have suggested for edit 5 in sandbox. I proposed new images for Aarti, Murti, and Vachnamrut to diversify the page. The rest of the images are good as is. I also propose we don't have branch leaders in image form here, adds little value to this page as we outline them in text and link to each branch page where the leader images already exist. If no one has any objection to the proposed images and approach, I suggest we make the changes for edits 2-5 and shelf the lekh discussion for after(if there is still pushback to the above sources and logic). Get all the agreed changes out of the way so we aren't carrying them forward in the discussion. Thoughts? Kbhatt22 (talk) 12:15, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

From "Follow up on edits" Section:

Edit B

Before his death in June 1830, Swaminarayan established the Sampradaya into two 'gadis' or 'dioceses': Nar Narayan Dev Gadi and Laxmi Narayan Dev Gadi. He had succession designated through a hereditary mode in a document titled the Desh Vibhag Lekh.[7]:132–156 In 1825, he formally adopted his nephews to maintain a bloodline leadership[8] and detailed duties and rituals in the Sampradaya's scriptures including the Shikshapatri and Satsangi Jeevan.[9] The 'Lekh' stated explicitly only Acharayas were allowed to establish temples and no sadhu may ever take control of a temple.[10]

Additional source that states the Lekh is not significant for BAPS https://www.google.com/books/edition/South_Asians_in_the_Diaspora/DsyiDwAAQBAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1&bsq=lekh

This will allow the readers to know that Swaminarayans actions did not include BAPS ideology and his actual process into adopting his nephews as sons to maintain bloodline lineage and proper ownership of the sampraday was what he wanted and designed.

136.2.32.181 (talk) 13:53, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I can't speak to edit A. Little too deep of a dive for me to follow. I'll leave that for others to provide feedback on. For B, based on the source you provided. Swami Vato is to Baps as Lekh is to the other branches. @Skubydoo: I think including Lekh under scriptures would resolve this. Both are listed and both merit inclusion is how I see this. As for Edit C, is that branch specific ideology? I just hovered over every source in that section and every single source was BAPs branch sourced or from the Williams, Raymond Brady book which outlines it as Baps beliefs. Instead of the IP's proposal of removing it, I propose we move it under the Baps section under branches if it is specific to that branch. Thoughts? @Skubydoo: Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:20, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

New Comments

Kbhatt22 stated earlier [see diff] that Swaminarayan himself signed the Lekh however, looking at the Lekh itself [see link] it appears Swaminarayan did not sign it, or write it for that matter. Second, Kbhatt22 cites the high court’s use of the term holy religious books to describe the Lekh as a definitive statement validating the Lekh’s characterization as a scripture [see diff]. However, the Holy book is the term used by the involved parties. The court itself is not stating that this a holy book, it is simply referring to it as such since the involved parties mention it as such. In my opinion, the use of the Lekh in the court case elucidates its function as a legal administrative document as opposed to a religious scripture. Editors acknowledge that the lekh is not considered a sacred scripture by all branches. Referencing a statement from Williams’ book, Kbhatt22 further suggests that the Swamini Vato is not accepted by all branches [see diff]. The problem with this argument is that while Williams makes it clear that the Lekh is only accepted by two branches, but not by others, in regards to the Swamini Vato he says that while the Swamini Vato is a primary text for one branch, Williams doesn’t say that it is not accepted as a scripture by other branches. In fact, the Swamini Vato is published and accepted as a scripture by all the branches of the sampradaya, [here are a few examples 1, 2, 3, 4 ]. For this reason, I would argue that the Lekh would not be included in the scripture section, while the Swamini Vato should. As the Lekh is an important document to some branches it has been included where appropriate. However, because the Lekh is not considered a scripture by all branches it is not included in the scriptures section. The scriptures section includes texts accepted by all branches. Therefore, I feel the term “administrative document” is more appropriate in this case because the document functions in some branches of the sampradaya administratively, — it accords administrative positions of significant value, i.e acharyaship, for instance. What is operative in a text’s categorization as a scripture or administrative document, or otherwise, is of course it’s content but more importantly its use and function. The Lekh doesn’t necessarily function as a scripture, as much as it does administratively, namely, in establishing administrative positions of some branches of the sampradaya. Administrative documents are very important when it comes to determining a branch’s organizational structure, and this document serves most explicitly in that way, so I’m definitely for keeping how we term the Lekh as is. Oxford English Dictionary published by the Oxford Academic Press represents scripture with these examples of texts: “the Bible; the Old and New Testaments” and the “Torah, the Prophets (former and latter), and the Hagiographa.” Both of these sets of texts are dedicated almost expressly to doctrine, theology, and religious accounts (for instance, of the Genesis, etc.). They also function and are used precisely for such content within their respective religions. Terming the Lekh a scripture would place it into this context, which seems foreign considering the document’s function. My point is that, therefore, terming it so may amount to a disservice to the document’s significance as an administrative document. Kbhatt22 makes an argument that it functions as a scripture, which I think is a possible argument that can be made, but I don’t find it as convincing as the above logic, so after some consideration, I would support the approach of leaving it as is, so that its important role as an administrative document is highlighted. Harshmellow717 (talk) 09:29, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The scripture I suggested not applying to all branches that is listed is already was not Swami ni Vato like you mentioned above. That would be an incorrect summary of my point. I was referring to the Swaminarayan Bhashyam which is written and accepted by one branch. So the argument that the Lekh should not be listed because it only applies to 3 branches and not all falls flat because we already list something that only applies to 1 and not all. That was all I was saying their. Since most of the above counter is based on the assumption of comparing the application of the lekh and swami ni vato and I was comparing the application of the Bhashyam book and Lekh's application to branches, I think the above counter doesn't apply. In the court link i found, it is referenced as a holy book by the judge in the judges notes section. The other source listed outlines it as the "constitution." That other source, the Hindutatva, has been used as a source on this page for other things as well. It is accepted by more branches then the other texts listed. Kbhatt22 (talk) 12:16, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
To follow up on the signature point, I was clicking through various sources about the lekh and ended up here during searching: http://www.swaminarayanmuseum.com/highlights.html and thought that this was refering to the lekh. It is not clear if it is so I withdraw that point. It is important to note that the two links you specified about the lekh above categorize it as a scripture which is the heart of my point here that it is a scripture. Kbhatt22 (talk) 00:04, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Akshar-Purushottam Darshan (Previously Edit C)

Hello all, between the sandbox and the 3 different threads on the talk page, the discussion was getting difficult to follow so I have decided to create a new section for each point being addressed. I have taken the liberty to add relevant discussions from "Original Research" and "Follow up on edits" sections on the talk page. Please note in an effort to streamline the discussion the previous comments pasted over from other sections have been modified to only include content relevant to the point being addressed.


From "Original Research" Section:

This page is intended to capture the entire sampradaya so everyone is for diversification where it is needed like the images discussion above. Lets let all the pending changes be worked out and then if there are any additional proposals, we can all discuss after. I think the 4 edits proposed in my sandbox have been being discussed for almost 2 weeks now. Feel free to add feedback or alternate suggestions in my sandbox for my proposed changes as additional bullet items. I would like to complete all the changes being discussed already first before starting new discussions if that is ok with everyone. This would ensure we dont mix up multiple discussions. the IP below has created a section for Akshar pursotam darshan so we can keep this section about the 4 edits outlined and discussed so far. Thanks Kbhatt22 (talk) 17:17, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


From "Follow up on edits" Section:

  • Edit C

I am proposing removing references to Akshar-Purushottam Darshan in this article. It is not something created by Swaminarayan and has way too much undue weight on this article. It is a synthesis of sources and cherry picking of scriptures by the BAPS founder and he was legally barred from entering the Swaminarayn Sampraday premises by a judge for making up his own crap that led him to getting his followers to worship him instead. How does the shikshaprati have a tiny blurb about it from a BAPS sourced book while BAPS supporting items like Akshar-Purushottam Darshan and Swamini Vato are heavily weighted in here?

136.2.32.181 (talk) 13:53, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I can't speak to edit A. Little too deep of a dive for me to follow. I'll leave that for others to provide feedback on. For B, based on the source you provided. Swami Vato is to Baps as Lekh is to the other branches. @Skubydoo: I think including Lekh under scriptures would resolve this. Both are listed and both merit inclusion is how I see this. As for Edit C, is that branch specific ideology? I just hovered over every source in that section and every single source was BAPs branch sourced or from the Williams, Raymond Brady book which outlines it as Baps beliefs. Instead of the IP's proposal of removing it, I propose we move it under the Baps section under branches if it is specific to that branch. Thoughts? @Skubydoo: Kbhatt22 (talk) 16:20, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've taken a look at the point the above user made on 'Edit C'. The sources that are speaking to this 'Akshar-Purshottam Darshan' seem to come from academic sources and don't seem 'cherry picked'. Of note, all the sources mentioned have been published by various universities, and academic organizations. I've noticed that this english translation of this 'Vachanamrut' text has been called into question as well. I am not too familiar with this text, however it is seemingly very often cited in other academic sources on the subject of this Swaminarayan Sampraday and therefore I see it being used here as ok. I am following this discussion and have sporadically had time to weigh in, but I welcome the discussion to move further. ThaNDNman224 (talk) 02:17, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am not suggesting they are not academic. I am suggesting if the 'Akshar-Purushottam Darshan' is a branch specific idealody like the IP claims, then we can move it under the branch as opposed to the proposal of outright removal. That's all. I ctrl+f the vachnamrut linked here and the term 'Akshar-Purushottam Darshan' did not appear in it also. The only source I saw in that section that uses that phrase was 'Swaminarayan's Brahmajnana as Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsanam' by Bhadreshdas Swami who came up as a monk from the Bochasanwasi Akshar Purushottam Swaminarayan Sanstha. The other source uses is the book by Swami Paramtattvadas who is also listed as a monk under that same branch/group. So I am simply asking if this is branch specific idealody or general sampradaya idealody? Can we find another source that suggests another branch shares this ideology? The answer to that I think would dictate the discussion around "Edit C' I feel. Kbhatt22 (talk) 03:33, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with ThaNDNman224 (talk · contribs) about “Edit C”. All but one source listed in the Metaphysics section is an academic, secondary source, the other being the English translation of the Vachanamrut, which the cited academic sources also reference. Therefore, in my opinion, this Vachanamrut is branch agnostic as it is widely cited in academic articles related to the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. Please see the list of scholarly sources cited in the Metaphysics section:
  • Paramtattvadas, Sadhu (17 August 2017). An introduction to Swaminarayan Hindu theology. Cambridge, United Kingdom: Cambridge University Press. ISBN 978-1-107-15867-2. OCLC 964861190.
  • Kim, Hanna (2002). Being Swaminarayan: the ontology and significance of belief in the construction of a Gujarati diaspora. UMI Dissertation Services. OCLC 452027310.
  • Kim, Hanna (2014) "Svāminārāyaṇa: Bhaktiyoga and the Akṣarabrahman Guru". In Singleton, Mark; Goldberg, Ellen (eds.). Gurus of modern yoga. New York, NY: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-993871-1. OCLC 861692270.
  • Gadhia, Smit (2016). "Akshara and its four forms in Swaminarayan's doctrine". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Trivedi, Yogi (2016). "Multivalent Krishna-bhakti in Premanand's Poetry". In Williams, Raymond Brady (ed.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Brahmbhatt, Arun (2016). "The Swaminarayan commentarial tradition". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity(1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
  • Bhadreshdas, Sadhu; Aksharananddas, Sadhu (1 April 2016), "Swaminarayan's Brahmajnana as Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsanam", Swaminarayan Hinduism, Oxford University Press, pp. 172–190, doi:10.1093/acprof:oso/9780199463749.003.0011, ISBN 978-0-19-946374-9
  • Kim, Hanna (2016). "Thinking through Akshardham and the making of the Swaminarayan self". In Williams, Raymond Brady; Trivedi, Yogi (eds.). Swaminarayan Hinduism: tradition, adaptation and identity (1st ed.). New Delhi, India: Oxford University Press. ISBN 978-0-19-908657-3. OCLC 948338914.
Harshmellow717 (talk) 11:36, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Harshmellow717: Hey Harshmellow717. Thanks for outlining the sources. That is very helpful. I agree with you and ThaNDNman224 (talk · contribs) that this should not be removed. I am simply questioning the placement in the article. None of the other sources use the phrase 'Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsan' except the two from Baps origin. Please see my last comment for more details on the reasoning here. None of the sources above imply or suggest that that phrase is branch agnostic. It also does not exist in the vachnamrut from my ctrl+f search. That phrase is listed under the branch it is associated with already. At the very least, shouldn't we remove that phrase from the Metaphysics section? The rest is sourced and fine but it seems odd to have a branch specific ideology listed for a section applicable to the entire sampradaya. No one has surfaced a source that links that ideology with any of the other branches? Please provide one if it exists or is implied in the above sources that are not branch specific in origin.
I believe there’s a difference in how the unregistered user is interpreting the Swaminarayan Sampradaya which underlies Edit C and the other suggested edits. The Swaminarayan Sampradaya encompasses all the branches. This interpretation is based on the majority of secondary sources available which I have outlined here. Thus, it’s incorrect to state,

“the BAPS founder and he was legally barred from entering the Swaminarayn Sampraday premises by a judge for making up his own crap that led him to getting his followers to worship him instead,”

because BAPS, Maninagar, and Sokdha are all included in the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and thus merit inclusion in this article. Undue weight would be to represent a minority opinion as the majority opinion based on available scholarly sources, which in this case would be to assert that these subgroups do not fall within the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and thus should be excluded from the article altogether. Please also note that the list of references I have provided are published by branch agnostic publishers, not BAPS, similar to the list by @Harshmellow717:. The claim that these sources are BAPS in origin remains unverified. Moksha88 (talk) 18:06, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Moksha88: My feed back addressed some of those concerns. I agree with you that the proposal by IP to remove that section isn't right. Which is why I proposed moving that under the branch section. You said "The claim that these sources are BAPS in origin remains unverified." But the authors of both the texts sourced that explicitly use this phrase 'Aksarabrahma-Parabrahma-Darsan' are from a specific branch. I don't know how we can verify it any further. Do you have a source that uses that phrase linking it to any other branch besides BAPS? During research I found this, https://www.baps.org/News/2019/Akshar-Purushottam-Darshan-Pith-Established-by-BAPS-in-Kashi-16999.aspx They are claiming ownership of that concept. What is wrong with my proposal that we move that content under the branch section or at the very least, outline it is branch specific. I propose keeping it just like you, just wanting to add clarification if we have an opportunity to do so. Kbhatt22 (talk) 19:12, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I think the sources used are not cherrypicked, they are all academic and reliable sources. It does not appear to be synthesized either, which would be considered original research. The sources are from scholars and does not skew the information, the consensus among the scholars is in fact what is written in the article.Apollo1203 (talk) 02:50, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am sorry but if the sources are all linked to originating from one branch then regardless of if you find them scholarly or not, I can present and prove a case of biased viewpoint. Which goes back to an earlier discussion we already had about diversification of sources. Can you justify the reasoning for not wanting diversification on this page? Kbhatt22 (talk) 09:11, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Continuing my points here: @Kbhatt22: and the unregistered user, before we can even discuss the Lekh and other suggested edits, we need to establish that the sources used in the ‘Metaphysics’ section are indeed reliable, scholarly secondary sources.

We are discussing the lekh above. Lets not re-run that discussion down here and keep that discussion above to avoid confusion. Also to be clear for everyone, the page history shows that that entire section was made by Apollo. Not that there is anything wrong with that but lets let others have some feedback in the section here. I did verify myself that the phrase was only in sources originating from one branch. Am still waiting for someone to surface a source that links that concept with another branch. I could not find such a source and the ones used, be it scholarly, are still biases and I continue to drive for diversification of sources, images, and equal representation for all branches. I still stand by my original proposal that we simply move that phrase under the branch whose ideology it is and resolve this dispute between the changes you had already made and the changes the IP suggests. I see merit on both sides. This is not my talking point, I am simply providing neutral feedback to help reach consensus here. Let it also be known that my concern/comments are not with the entire section....As outlined above, it is with the phrase 'Akshar-Purshottum Darshan' which based on research is branch specific and should be relocated. Please don't confuse my points about that one phrase and the bias in the sources representing that phrase to the whole section. I am not targeting the whole section. I quite frankly don't understand that whole section and just independent researched the one phrase and found it to be branch specific.
The sources that are used to reference 'Akshar-Purshottum Darshan' violate the WP:IS policy as the source is not independent and is closely affiliated with the subject. The author of the source behind that that phrase is openly part of one branch so it is dangerous to imply it is accepted by the entire sampradaya the way it is currently presented on this page. This also means the source has a conflict of interest. Kbhatt22 (talk) 09:11, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Let me start by addressing a few of Kbhatt22’s assertions that are, in my opinion, erroneous. In regards to “Edit C”, I think that Kbhatt22 is confusing the role of primary and secondary sources. First, some of the content of both the metaphysics and vedanta commentaries sections draws from Swaminarayan’s teachings in the Vachanamrut, which is a source accepted by the sampradaya as whole and does not favor any particular branch of the sampradaya. Therefore these sections are not branch-specific ideology and should remain as is.

Second, The vast majority of sources cited in this article are secondary academic sources that are not sectarian. These sources are reliable as per WP:RS.

Third, the personal affiliations of some authors have been questioned. However according to WP:RS the authors’ cited work cannot be discounted for their presumed affiliation as the work that has been cited here has been vetted by peer review and published by high-quality, independent academic publishers such as Oxford University Press, Cambridge University Press, etc. Moreover, they state they are writing about Swaminarayan’s views as explained in his oral teachings in the Vachanamrut, not views based on branch-specific scriptures.

Fourth, the baps.org link mentioned by Kbhatt22 links to an article about the establishment of the Akshar Purushottam Darshan Pith. The “pith”-or ‘seat of learning’ is a research institute dedicated to the study of Swaminarayan’s philosophy, which is called Akshar Purushottam Darshan, according to scholarly sources. In this linked article, there is no claim made that BAPS is establishing the Akshar Purushottam Darshan, only that they are establishing an research institute based on this philosophy which Swaminarayan propounded. In the cited article, the Kashi Vidvat Parishad, an independent group of scholars unaffiliated with the Swaminarayan Sampradaya, endorse the Akshar Purushottam Darshan of Swaminarayan as a valid Vedanta Darshan. So, this doesn’t show that the term Akshar Purushottam Darshan is confined solely to one group.

Finally, it is possible that the use of the terms Akshar-Purushottam Darshan or Brahma-Parabrahm Darshan to describe the collection of spiritual beliefs based on Swaminarayan’s teachings in the Vachanamrut may be the respective author’s valid, scholarly contribution to the field, so it makes sense that the Vachanmrut (primary source) makes no mention of these terms. For lack of a better example, one might think of it as later scholars terming Chaitanya Mahaprabhu’s philosophy Achintya-bheda-bhed vada [1]. Though Chaitanya did not include that term in his writings himself, it describes his philosophy well, and thus has been accepted. Thus, one cannot make the argument that since Chaitanya didn’t coin the term and did not write about it anywhere, it cannot be used with regard to his philosophy. Similarly, Akshar-Purushottam Darshan is the term scholars are using for Swaminarayan’s metaphysics.

Now, getting to the actual text in the article: as the article stands currently, the term “Akshar-Purushottam Darshan” is mentioned 3 times, 1) as a redirect link for the metaphysics section, 2) in the vedanta commentaries section and 3) in the major branches section under BAPS. As per the above arguments, I don’t see anything wrong in this. However, Kbhatt22 asserts that this term may not be acceptable to all branches. Based on my research on this topic, I did not see any academic sources supporting Kbhatt22’s assertion, but when I was going through the rest of the Oxford University Press book that used the terms cited, I found another chapter by a Prof. Brahmbhatt that used an alternative term - Swaminarayan Vedanta - to describe Swaminarayan’s metaphysics. So, it seems both terms -- Akshar Purushottam Darshan and Swaminarayan Vedanta -- are used synonymously by scholars of this field. Since the term Swaminarayan Vedanta is talking about the Swaminarayan Sampradaya founded by Swaminarayan, it makes sense to call his metaphysics Swaminarayan Vedanta. Thus, I propose this alternative to the current text to take into account Kbhatt22’s personal preference while remaining true to the academic sources: In instance 1(redirect link for the metaphysics section), replace the term Akshar-Purushottam Darshan with Swaminarayan Vedanta. In instance 2(vedanta commentaries section), add the term Swaminarayan Vedanta to the existing text (I don’t think we can legitimately remove the existing term altogether since that is also a term used in scholarly literature), and for instance 3(BAPS section), keep it as it, since it is in the BAPS section and Kbhatt22 does not object to the term there. What do you all think? Skubydoo (talk · contribs), Apollo1203 (talk · contribs), Kbhatt22 (talk · contribs), Moksha88 (talk · contribs), ThaNDNman224 (talk · contribs), Applebutter221 (talk · contribs), and 136.2.32.181


Harshmellow717 (talk) 09:33, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Just to clarify, This was not an original proposal I made. Someone suggested removing it entirely, I dug in and found the sources originated from one branch and as discussed that has happened too much on this page and diversity is lacking. Even you have accepted that about images above. This is not "my personal preference" so I would prefer that you not make this a personal target please. I was not proposing removal of anything. Simply a reorder it on the page. I did ask above if someone had a source that remotely suggested 'Akshar Purshottam Darshan' was a phrase associated with another branch as I could not find anything to make that point. All the sources using that phrase simply originated from one branch or the author was directly from that branch. And if it in fact is a concept that can't be linked to other branches then we represent it as branch specific ideology. We have a situation where someone proposed removing it, someone suggested we keep it exactly the same.....I suggested if it is branch specific, we outline it as such for the reader and leave it like it is. Kbhatt22 (talk) 12:28, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

7th school of Vedanta

Similar to my post on the Akshar-Purshottam Darshan page I looked up the excerpt User: Joshua Jonathan referenced from Gavin Flood’s book and there are only two sentences about Swaminarayan in Flood’s book, and neither of them state that the Swaminarayan sect ascribes to the Shudhadvait philosophy. I then looked at the reference Flood cites, Raymond Williams’s The New Face of Hinduism, the Swaminarayan Religion (Cambridge University Press, 1984), but no specific page numbers. I reviewed this book and can’t find where Williams actually makes this claim. In fact, Williams clarifies in several instances that Swaminarayan’s philosophy has some similarities to Ramanujacharya’s Vishishtadvaita philosophy. Although Williams does briefly mention that the concept of Akshar is present in Vallabacharya’s Shudhadvait philosophy, he never states that the Swaminarayan philosophy is Shudhadvait or even similar to Shudhadvait. Since Gavin Flood’s book was published in 1996, other scholars have published more work in this area which clarify that his philosophy is different from Vallabhacharya and Ramunjacharya. WP: AGE MATTERS They do not describe Swaminarayan’s philosophy as Shudhadvait. WP:SOURCETYPES For example, you mention Arun Brahmbhatt’s chapter which cites the verse from the Shikshapatri, but he does so to highlight this confusion as he goes on to explain, “Despite this nominal alignment, Sahajanand Swami indirectly acknowledges that there is a difference between his system and Ramanuja’s.” The rest of his chapter is devoted to this analysis, so it would be a misrepresentation of this source to claim that Swaminarayan’s philosophy is Vishistadvait as well.

A quick Google search shows that the Akshar Purushottam Darshan has been recognized and discussed in the World Sanskrit Conference as a distinct Vedanta tradition (1). The World Sanskrit Conference brings together renowned Sanskritists and Indologists from around the world, and thus the recognition of Akshar Purushottam Darshan as a distinct Vedanta within this forum illustrates scholarly consensus. WP:RS/AC You say that this does not ‘change a bit of Flood’s observations’, but since Flood has not published on this topic since 1996 I assume you mean to say it does not contradict Flood’s observation. If that is what you mean, then I wonder which of Flood’s observations you are referring to? Please provide the specific page numbers for reference.

(1) https://www.easterneye.biz/world-sanskrit-conference-recognises-akshar-purushottam-darshan-as-distinct-vedanta-tradition/ Actionjackson09 (talk) 22:58, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

See Talk:Akshar-Purushottam Darshan#Shuddhadvaita. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 03:08, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I'd already corrected that statement; please don't use an old edit as an excuse to remove sourced info, as you did here. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 03:51, 10 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Clarification on the origin of the Swaminarayan Sampradaya

A phrase added by Joshua Jonathan stating that the Swaminarayan Sampradaya was “developed out of Ramanand Swami’s Uddhav Sampradaya”, based on a source published by Mittal Publications. However, a closer examination of the academic sources on this topic make it clear that the author’s claim is a misunderstanding. In the 2018 book by Williams, who’s academic work has been focused on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya, there is no mention of the Swaminarayan Sampradaya developing from another Uddhav Sampradaya. In I Patel (2018), the author describes how the Swaminarayan Sampradaya formed, and it does not mention its development from another distinct sampradaya. The exact quote from Patel’s work: “[Swaminarayan] concluded his 7-year, over 8000-mile journey upon meeting an ascetic named Ramanand Swami, whom he accepted as guru and from whom he received the names of Sahajanand Swami and Narayan Muni at initiation. Two years later, in 1801, Ramanand Swami announced the 21-year-old Sahajanand Swami as his successor. In one of his first actions as a leader, Sahajanand Swami asked his disciples to chant the new mantra of “Swaminarayan”….Over the next 29 years, Swaminarayan institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth” (I Patel 2018, 2). From this quote, it is clear that Swaminarayan ‘institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth’, not by growing from another sampradaya. S Patel (2017) clarifies that ‘Uddhav Sampradaya’ was “another name” for the same group before Swaminarayan took over as Ramanand Swami’s successor and not a separate sampradaya. The Swaminarayan Sampradaya was called that before Swaminarayan became its successor; after he became the leader of the Sampradaya, ‘Swaminarayan’ soon became a popular eponym...for the tradition he established.” (I Patel 2018, 2) Describing it as the ‘Uddhav Sampraday’ would also be incorrect because, as S Patel (2018) describes, historically speaking, the tradition was known as the Swaminarayan Sampradaya after Swaminarayan became its leader. Additionally, the publisher of the source you have used to make the claim is not a source that is well-known in academia nor would it take precedence over the 3 scholarly sources cited above (WP:RS/AC). The book used seems to also have a broad focus and would not be as reliable compared to scholarly works published solely on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. (WP:RS; WP:SOURCETYPES; WP:SCHOLARSHIP) Based on the above it should be removed from the article as it does not provide any substantive information, while likely misleading readers.Apollo1203 (talk) 19:56, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

As Actionjackson09 has mentioned, Gavin Flood’s work is from 1996 and fairly outdated (WP:AGEMATTERS). Also, Gavin Flood’s work is on the entire Hindu religion, not specific to the Swaminarayan Sampradaya. In fact, in his entire book, there are only 2 sentences about the Swaminarayan Sampradaya and it cannot be used to make a contentious claim about a particular tradition (WP:UNDUE). For those 2 sentences, Flood cites William’s work, however, in Williams (2018), there is no mention of the Swaminarayan Sampradaya’s development from the Pusthimarg. Scholarship from 2017 and 2018 refute Gavin Flood’s claim: I Patel (2018) has summarized the Swaminarayan Sampradaya in a scholarly encyclopedia entry in which there is no mention of the sampradaya developing from Vallabha’s pushtimarga: “[Swaminarayan] concluded his 7-year, over 8000-mile journey upon meeting an ascetic named Ramanand Swami, whom he accepted as guru and from whom he received the names of Sahajanand Swami and Narayan Muni at initiation. Two years later, in 1801, Ramanand Swami announced the 21-year-old Sahajanand Swami as his successor. In one of his first actions as a leader, Sahajanand Swami asked his disciples to chant the new mantra of “Swaminarayan”….Over the next 29 years, Swaminarayan institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth.” In fact, this quote supports the contrary and shows that Swaminarayan concluded his journey and met Ramanand Swami, who named him his successor. Swaminarayan then “institutionalized his community and laid the foundation for its growth.” First, there is no mention of Gavin Flood’s claim in the encyclopedia entry. Second, if Flood’s claim was supported by consensus and scholars, there would be a mention of this. And finally, in the way Vallabh is described refutes the claim by Flood, “[Swaminarayan] referred to Vallabha’s son, Vitthalnath’s prescriptions on fasting, temple rituals, and festivals in presenting his modified conceptualizations of all three.” This is the only time that Vallabh is mentioned in the entry and it shows that Swaminarayan presented “modified conceptualizations” of fasting, temple rituals, and festivals that can be traced back to Vitthalnath’s prescriptions about the three. A journal article on the Swaminarayan Sampradaya features a sustained comparison of Vallabha’s pushtimarg and the Swaminarayan Sampradaya (S Patel 2017). Nowhere does the author write that the former developed from the latter. In fact, the author cautions against precisely the claim that the Swaminarayan Sampradaya developed from pushtimarg. The claim is further negated as S Patel explains: “I would like to caution against reading the pointed but limited agreement with the Pustimarga as a means by which to pin down the history of Swaminarayan development…[T]he latter’s self-presentation in light of the former was to help the nineteenth-century collective move efficiently towards its motive—the implementation of its own programme” (Patel 2017: 54). The most recent and credible scholarly consensus on this point, then, is that the Swaminarayan Sampradaya did not “develop from Vallabha’s Pushtimarga” (WP:RS/AC) and it is misleading to put it in the article and warrants removal. Furthermore, the sentence “The various branches of the Swaminarayan-tradition narrate their origin as a biographical account of Swaminarayan,[5]” is vague and the language is a bit too convoluted to be easily comprehensible. My edit summarizes Kim’s quote better.

Out of context regarding Swaminarayan and Vallabha

The specific point that Joshua Jonathan has added, “utilising elements of Vallabha’s Pushtimarg to gain recognition” is giving an intermediate claim in the cited source undue emphasis (WP:UNDUE). Within the same source cited, the following quote shows that the claim added is misleading, “By identifying with the widely-recognised Pushtimarg in the course of worshipping Krsna the Svaminarayan foundation could be related to an identifiable, solidified ethos. Particularly, assimilation would be achieved more effortlessly with the adoption of select Pushtimarg symbols. And yet, this would not require the sacrifice of core ideas or independence …” (S Patel 2017: 53). (WP:Cherrypicking) The quote you have added is making a historical claim for the sampradaya which S Patel (2017) is clearly not emphasizing (WP:OR). There are more quotes within the same source that make it clear that Pushtimarg was a matter of identification and not for gaining recognition: “I would like to caution against reading the pointed but limited agreement with the Pushtimarg as a means by which to pin down the history of Svaminarayan development” (S Patel 2017: 54); “Though it has been valuable to understand how the Svaminarayan community engaged with the Pushtimarg, we should pause before implicitly extending this relationship to Sahajanand’s entire vision” (S Patel 2017: 57); the Pushtimarg (amongst other influences) was one reference point, not a catalyst for Sahajanand’s initiative (S Patel 2017: 57). S Patel (2017) clearly asserts that she does not stand behind any claim about Swaminarayan "utilising" Pushtimarg for an ulterior purpose, like gaining recognition. She says, "to be clear, I am not implying that forging a connection to the Pushtimarg excluded the possibility of genuine respect and affection for it by Sahajanand, but retaining likeness to establishment also would have been potent in sanctioning novelty" (53). She uses the phrase "would have been potent," meaning that retaining likeness may have helped sanction the novelty that colored Swaminarayan's distinct and categorically novel tradition. But that such a utilization of the support of established traditions did occur is a claim Patel does not unequivocally affirm. She, in fact, thinks it important to clarify precisely that she doesn't mean to say that. And thus quoting her to suggest Swaminarayan's “utilising elements of Vallabha’s Pushtimarg to gain recognition” is misrepresenting her intention and involves cherrypicking (WP:Cherrypicking) a quote. Critical information has been omitted from the source to synthesize an interpretation which is misleading and false and warrants removal. (WP:CONTEXTMATTERS, WP:OR)Apollo1203 (talk) 20:04, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Any suggestion for a better formulation? Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 20:09, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]