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Welcome to my talk page. Click here to leave me a message .

Don't you write about Indian sports men — Preceding unsigned comment added by 43.241.192.161 (talk) 18:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I don't as it happens, because I know nothing about them. Theroadislong (talk) 19:08, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I will make proper changes to Jerry Blair page, please don't delete. I will make requested changes. Once I figure out how to properly use Wikipedia! Thanks in advance for your help. (2600:1000:B14E:7BCB:3DFA:F952:D19E:7F7C (talk) 09:39, 26 May 2021 (UTC)) Greer[reply]

Happy Holidays

"Everything is Going to be Alright" artwork, Christchurch Art Gallery, Christchurch, New Zealand
Everything is Going to be Alright, Martin Creed, 2015.
Thank you for all your edits and contributions this year. I wish you a happy holiday and good health!
Possibly (talk)

Happy New Year

Happy New Year 2021
I hope your New Year holiday is enjoyable and the coming year is much better than the one we are leaving behind.
Best wishes from Los Angeles.   // Timothy :: talk 

Kind request for second review :)

SysCAD

Thanks for looking over Draft:SysCAD - I have updated the reference to the original article on the company's page rather than LinkedIn. Any other advice on how to proceed with having this published would be greatly appreciated.

Where is the source here?

Hello,

thank you for reviewing Draft:Jackson Groves. I appreciate your contributions to WP. Due to the low sources, it got declined by you and after reading to your suggestions i have come up with the new references.

I request you to please review it again. Thank you. Mohirfan03 (talk) 00:05, 13 February 2021 (IST)

Unifimoney

Happy St. Patrick's Day

Happy St. Patrick's Day!
I hope your St. Patrick's Day is enjoyable and safe. Hopefully next year there will be more festive celebrations.
Best wishes from Los Angeles.   // Timothy :: talk 

Re: Paid Editing

Hi,this is Cxxisroy, I'd like to response your question here, I am not paid, I just someone from the city called longyan where is also the FULONGMA's Headquarter. My thoughts to create fulongma in WIKI is just want to let people know about the city and the company people there are so proud of.

Best Regards,

Regarding my recent article on Prime Minister Special Schoalrship scheme Your review: paid advert

Your review: paid advert Good evening sir, Sir, I am not a paid editor for any organization and I am not being paid for any editing. I am a student from J&K who is studying under this scholarship from the Army Institute of Technology, Pune

With reference to your rejection on my PMSSS Article

With reference to this talk page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Wikipmsss#Paid_editing I would like to add that Sir I am not a paid employer for any organization 

I am a student from J&K who is pursuing his Engineering from Army Institute of Technology, Pune under this scholarship. This scholarship was launched in 2011 there is no article yet in Wikipedia for this scholarship. I want to publish about this on Wikipedia but I am a beginner in Wikipedia, Please help me with this sir.

You can remove any links if they are not appropriate sir. I will be very thankful

I am a student Nikhil Kotwal and is not a paid employer. This is a government scholarship and i am studying under this scholarship. I have also requested to change my username

With reference to the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Wikipmsss Sir My name is Nikhil Kotwal and studying under this scholarship and I want to spread awareness about this scholarship as it has been 9 years now and no one has written an article about this scholarship yet on Wikipedia. I am a beneficiary of this scholarship and is not been paid by anyone to write an article for this. Sorry for my username I am new to Wikipedia and only created an account to write the article about PMSSS that's why . Now I have requested to change my username Please help me in publishing the article. I can remove the content if it is still looking like an advert

Please help I will be thankful

Removed Citations from IMBd and Instagram

Removed Citations from IMBd and Instagram, as per comment.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kv2000/Katie_Hunt_Wallpaper

Hello, you declined the article "Ikar Industries" What can I do to improve the article to fullfil wiki-criterias? Need your advice and help. By the way, I am not payed for the article and I don´t get anything for it. Mario Diel, one of the founders is my friend and asked me for a favor.

Sir my username is changed now , hope this will not make any confusion as my objective was to spread the awareness about the scholarship under which i am studying and doing any advert

Sir as i am new to Wikipedia I was not sure whom to approach for help, I have also requested another sir for help in the following talk( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Justlettersandnumbers ) who is involved in this matter.

With reference to my article on Prime Minister Special Scholarship https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Prime_Minister%27s_Special_Scholarship_Scheme There was confusion with my previous username as I was wrongly judged with my article as an advert. I am not a paid employer, I am a student who is studying under this scholarship only I am new to Wikipedia Please help me in publishing my article and spread awareness through your medium.

Thanks!

Thank you for the comment on the Susie Estelle Palmer Hamilton page - I'm new, and it's my first attempt at an article, so that was a big help! :)

I got the wrong process in editing, I added information about Sudan bookshop its original information but I was not cite source because for lake of information because about Sudan bookshop, please just I'm trying to increase the information about my country in Wikipedia by following all the rolls and legislation. tell me what I should to do? please you help is highly appreciated

MIX FM Radio Page

Hello

I am trying to add the page for Radio channel in Saudi Arabia. Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:MIX_FM_Radio But it's not getting approve as they are saying lack of reference. I gave already many reference.

Adding ExSeed to wikipedia

Hi,

you rejected a submission I made today and I was hoping you could advise if the changes I have made will make it suitable. It's the first time ive submitted a page and appreciate any help you could give.

Thanks in advance

Thanks!

Hi, thanks for your help listing the citations! Really appreciate it :)

Resubmit a draft Pierre Culot

Hello Theroadislong,

I'm Ed.Ecrimage, thank you for your interest in my draft about the sculptor and studio potter Pierre Culot. I've just submited a new draft. Itried to simplify my work and specify references. I'm not a specialist of wikipedia, but i'm working on archives of Pierre Culot in Belgium, i think it's very important to publish informations in english about this international artist. I also asked help for translation. Thank you in advance for your reading and your help, best regards, E.E

Cheers for the suggestions on the Steve Ravic page

Had a go at removing some of the overkill citations and removed those sources you cited were unreliable. Is there anything else that you reckon it could use?

Frank Martin artist

Thanks for your speedy review and suggested improvements. This is my first article so guidance is appreciated. I also need to declare my close relationship to the subject who was my grandfather. What is the best way to do this?

I tried to eliminate the wikipedia link you pointed out and researched how to do this but was unsuccessful. Can you direct me to a link or instructions regarding how to edit the change you directed?

Draft: Kalium Sulphurium

respected Theroadislong, I have written this article about homeopathic remedies. One of the valuable Dr. Schuessler 12 primary tissue remedies is the name of that Kalium Sulphurium ( Kali Sulph) Like homeopathic medicine Arsenicum album, it is also an important Homoeopathic medicine.

So,I request you to see my draft well. Thank you !

Draft:Browzan

Hi there, I understand blogs imdb, imvdb are not reliable sources. Please check the rest of the sources I have cited, they include a local newspaper, art magazines and publications to boot.

Draft Jisbar

Hi Theroadislong, I did modifications for the draft Jisbar (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jisbar). I deleted the mentions too promotional as famous / well-known for / luxurious' ... Can you please let me know if the draft can be submitted ? Thanks a lot, have a nice day;

How Can Someone Be paid on Wikipedia?

Hello Theroadislong, thank you for your apt contribution to my article except I am stunned by your comment of undisclosed paid interest, is that a common thing on Wikipedia? How do you determine a new user's status as being paid? Is Wikipedia solely for paid editors? If it is for paid editors, how does one get paid or even disclose such? I need your response please as I am yet to determine these. Meanwhile I have added additional sources to the article Draft:Elijah Chinezim Onyeagba like you requested/advised. Thank you. Bibihans (talk)Bibihans

Editing War Note

You just warned me of engaging in an edditing war. I wasn't, I was asking how to avoid one and how to engage with a user.

Benjamin Kentish

Thanks very much for your feedback. I have updated the article to include some more sources! Appreciate your advice and kind words.

Thank you for your confirmation for Shochiku_Studio.

Dr Hasan Murad Page

Hello Theroadislong,

Hope you're doing well. Kindly guide me through the procedure of submission so my page gets published in time. Thank you.

Hamza,

Updated version submitted :)

Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks for reviewing the leaving feedback for my draft SkyCiv, based on your feedback, I've added more references to support the article. Please let me know if there's anything else I can improve on. Thanks, Zoe

Paras Singh

Yes Draft Paras Singh is notable for one event

Ian not doing paid editing

This draft Draft:Walter Ezequiel Matthysse Bianchettin is finalize for creating! Review and create please, thanks

drat:androidwedakarayo.com

Hello Theroadislong,

I created my first wikipedia draft, androidwedakarayo.com. I need to make it a complete and perfect article. Could you please help me?

Queries on my submission at Articles for creation: ChrisJon Descamps (May 23)

Local news's web pages about the articles were added for references as per request, both Thai and French languages. Why has it been rejected again?

Regards,

Please review my draft and please help me to improve it any further.

Hi, Can you please give your re-reviews on my Draft:Generic Aadhaar. I've removed the major Advert looking content from the draft. Also, please assist me in improving the draft.

Message received, I guess?

I am honoured? Request to reply was not specified, nor the understandings of your message?

It’s clear now.

Hello @ Theroadislong!

I understand now, I get it why the article may seem suspicious and unacceptable, but I would like to clarify that I have no connection with this business. Despite all, I hope I’m allowed to recreate a wiki page with this same topic. I’ll give my best next time!

Best, Megi.

Draft:Anthony Martinez (Boxer)

Hi User:Theroadislong! Thank you for your help on my article , I went ahead and fixed my mistakes and resubmitted the article. I appreciate your help and thanks again.

Ashish Sahdev Draf rejection

Draft: Kamran M. Mirza

Thank you for the helpful comment. In the pathology sphere, all the awards are quite notable, but I see how the trim would be helpful. I have trimmed to the most notable of all awards. The Brownie Anderson Award is a national award for medical education from the Association of American Medical College and Dr. Mirza was the first recipient of this award last year. The Pathologist Power List is an international honor that is given from an international review of candidates. Hope this trim helped the page. Much appreciated Fascin21 (talk) 15:37, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

By not notable I meant that none of them have Wikipedia articles so confer no notability to the topic. Theroadislong (talk) 16:04, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding. I understand now. Hmmm. In that case, I am notsure how I can fix or address this. I checked out some other American Pathologst pages, like https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Valerie_A._Fitzhugh#Awards_and_honors - and none of them seem to have Wiki-notable awards. Hope this doesn't disqualify the page. What should I do to address this? Thanks for your guidance. Fascin21 (talk) 19:17, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again for your thoughtful suggested edits. Hoping for a favorable review if all issues resolved (re: draft:kamran m. mirza) Fascin21 (talk) 23:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wanted to follow-up on this draft page. Anything else we can address? The notability is in line with (if not better than) other American Pathologists. Looking forward to your next review. All the best. Fascin21 (talk) 03:01, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Submission

Thank you for the review it may just be too soon, I do however think it should have a separate article as it will be a non ministerial department with a huge responsibility and function that is too complex to just squash onto the Competition and Markets Authority or United Kingdom Internal Market Act 2020 page.

My intent was to start it as a stub article which can provide information on what is know so far and then build on it in September when it is due to start operation when all information should be known. I will continue to work on it and instead work on releasing it in on it’s commencement date.
ChefBear01 (talk) 21:25, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Good plan, thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 21:44, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Theroadislong:,

It seems from my time on Wikipedia that it is far more stringent with WP:OR & WP:GNG or WP:NOTE for the topic sources then the sub areas.
And all this is seems subject regardless to whether there is consensus between editors as to whether it ends up in a WP:RFC and possibly WP:RFD. ChefBear01 (talk) 21:22, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

July 2021 at Women in Red

Women in Red | July 2021, Volume 7, Issue 7, Numbers 184, 188, 202, 203, 204, 205


Online events:


Other ways to participate:

Facebook | Instagram | Pinterest | Twitter

--Rosiestep (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC) via MassMessaging[reply]

Thank you very much for taking a look at my wiki draft.

I have added citations and made changes as you had asked, would it be possible for you to check? MrBlaze111 (talk) 22:21, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing an article

Hi Theroadislong,

Please can you review again this page after I added credible and different sources to meet your point:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:High-Level_Panel_on_Digital_Cooperation#Reviewing_an_article

Regards,

Netsells

Hi there,

I have had my recent edit flagged as being a risk that I have received compensation. I haven't- just a fan of the Northern tech space and noticed Netsells was missing. I'd be happy to make further adjustments if there are specific areas to change :)

Thanks, Scott

Request for assistance to rectify error

Hi Theroadislong.

I'm requesting your assistance with publishing the page you see as the USER:/KingdomKome and have nominated for SpeedyDeletion.

I have contested this to save the text but I am requesting what information I can put on the USER page that will be more accurate. (I am working for Cameron Scott and Kagiso Rabada's company Kingdom Kome and as a user want to contribute to the Wiki community. Please advise on the next steps as I see you have a reputation for assisting people.

KingdomKome (talk) 18:44, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your user page is not a place to create articles so will be deleted soon, I moved your draft to here Draft:Cameron Scott, actor, filmmaker where you can work on it. Theroadislong (talk) 18:48, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft review

Hi! I would love if you could review my draft, I had a similar page be approved! I followed the same structure https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:ProFutsal_ClubChilliwidth (talk) 21:59, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft Review - Not an advert

Hi!

I actually helped create this https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helv%C3%A9cia_Futsal_Club and I really like futsal but it sadly does not have enough courage, i'm going around and hopefully will be creating pages for the major names in Futsal in the UK. I have referenced correctly, reliable sources such as BT Sport which are major football coverage media here in the UK. With links to real universities and more. I followed the same template as the Helvecia one since I helped make it and that one was approved! Thanks :) Chilliwidth (talk) 22:34, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Theroadislong: FYI that user has blanked the Futsal drafts and user page, then retired themselves and vanished their account. --- Possibly 05:26, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I have just seen the notification that I was paid an undisclosed amount for my article and my article was nominated for speedy deletion. May I know what made you guys think that I have been paid an undisclosed payment? The reason I have created is I have worked as Asst. Director for a film named "Aggipulla", which didn't release due to some issues and out of that gratitude am creating a page of him on Wikipedia.

And you said references from google or Youtube cannot be considered. I don't know from where I can bring the reference except google. May I know what kind of references are needed for approving my article?

Thanks, Shabarish.

If you have worked on one of his films then you have a very clear conflict of interest which you need to discose on your talk page. References required need to be reliable and independent. Theroadislong (talk) 07:08, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

The Random Acts of Kindness Barnstar
Thank you for the submission of 4 of my drafts. You've been really helpful for submissions. Excellenc1 (talk) 07:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article Rejected: Heartcentre

Hello Theroadislong

I am a newbie and would love to know the reason why my first article was rejected so I may understand how to correct this.

USER:/heartcentre

Thank you.

Your draft Draft:Georgia Carr was rejected because, it has zero sources and no indication how they would pass WP:NSINGER articles are created by reporting on what reliable sources have said about a topic. The tone is also not appropriate, read WP:YFA for help. Theroadislong (talk) 07:59, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 10:31:33, 24 June 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Luca.pisu


Dear Theroadislong, first of all, thank you very much for reviewing the article I submitted and sorry for taking so long to get back to you.

I could see from your feedback: "they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject".

I am confused as, at this point, I am not sure whether I did include the reference links in the right place, proofing the info included. I could read and find articles about Michele Ardu on the most important and reliable publications of Italy, Greece and Saudi Arabia as well as official Government Cultural Offices websites. Some of the links I included are from: La Repubblica, La Stampa, TPI and SkyArte which are among the main and most diffused publications in Italy; LIFO, which is the most important and prestigious Newspaper in Greece and ArabNews (the most read Gulf Region newspaper in English). I actually could find more articles about Michele's work also many secondary publications, so I attached a selection of it in the article (they are in both Italian and English language). These publications are SpaghettiMAG, MAGZINE, eNews interview and more. On top of it, Michele Ardu is known to be a National Geograohic contributor in several editions of USA, UK, Brazil, Portugal, Italy, Spain, Germany, France, Netherlands, China, Russia, Indonesia, Traditional Mandarine...), so I attached also those links that show his work.

Please let me know if I have made any mistake in the process of making the page and attaching the links and how I could resolve it to see the article published. I thank you for your support and look forward to hearing from you, Best regards, Luca Pisu


Luca.pisu (talk) 10:31, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

dedicated book

Hello,

Regarding your message to me, is "Specification, Algebra, and Software Essays Dedicated to Kokichi Futatsugi" [1] not indicative that he is well known? Simon1791 (talk) 20:40, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Publishing a book confers zero notability, unless that book has ben reviewed in depth and reported on by independent reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 20:43, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Well, the logic of Wikipedia defies my sense of logic. If 31 experts dedicate a book, by that logic that means nothing. So I give up. He must be just an ignorant person with lots of publications. But I am sure you did no make the rules, the crowd at large must have done. Thanks. Simon1791 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 21:00, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Theroadislong. Regarding my articles, yes, you are mistaken regarding my status. For the record, I am a freelance writer currently living in Brussels but with an interest in Nigerian civil society. Thank you.

Oskar Jacobsen.

Yes, it was the fact that you are a "freelance writer" which made me suspect. Theroadislong (talk) 13:13, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza

Dear Theroadislong - looking for a positive response re. this page. I trimmed the awards and added my COI statement like user:possibly recommended. All the references have been edited and the citations fixed. All outside links are now removed. Thanks.Fascin21 (talk) 01:45, 26 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza

Thank you for the comment. I removed the "award winning" sentence and have tried to source the childhood and early career. If this does not meet criteria, should I just remove the section? What do you recommend? Hopefully the draft is now acceptable for publication. Fascin21 (talk) 23:25, 26 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jassa Dhillon

Hello Theroadislong, hope you are doing well. Actually Jassa Dhillon article created by me (by ip, 1 2 months ago I remembered my forgotten username password). While creating this article, I took the help of experienced users @Beccaynr: and @Kashmorwiki:. Kashmorwiki itself is an NPR. And he himself approved it. So I don't think it's not notable. Please think once. –– 𝚅𝚁𝙹𝙱𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚑𝚞 01:44, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

VRJ Bandhu User:Kashmorwiki was blocked for sockpuppetry, so his acceptance of the article is worthless. Theroadislong (talk) 18:03, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I hope I read your intent correctly. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:42, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

yes...thanks for that! Theroadislong (talk) 16:06, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Theroadislong, I was hoping you would give some more details regarding your comment on my draft page for Professor Kijima. I have a goal of enriching the WP content in the field of reliability engineering and professor Kijima is one of the landmarks in the field. I was going to extend an invitation to students from Hiroshima University who knows the professor to improve the article, given that I couldn't find much about professor Kijima.

I would like to hear your feedback on my approach and get some more explanation on your comment "please copy edit for sense and repetition". Sarouk7 (talk) 15:21, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sarouk7 The first paragraph of your draft Draft:Masaaki Kijima has a partial repetition of a sentence and so makes no sense, the draft also has zero independent sources, independent sources are what we base articles on, not what people (such as his students) know about him. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Theroadislong, I made a mistake in the first paragraph, my apologies, I corrected it. I also added some references to the draft. I would like to resubmit the draft again, but I would like to hear your feedback first. Than you Sarouk7 (talk) 15:54, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It still lacks independent sources? All of your sources are primary. Theroadislong (talk) 16:05, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft page

Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks a lot for your advice re citation references and will work on it to reduce the references. However, I'd be grateful if you could assist with an issue I have with project: Draft:Candice_Onyeama. Despite Wikipedia stating that drafts aren't indexed and so not available on search engines, I find that the draft I created for the mentioned project comes up on a google search for the subject's name, with all the private discussions, suggestions, declines, etc. Could you help me move it back to a private wiki space, so it's not coming up on the google search or advice me on how to get wiki[edia to hide my draft? Thanks a bunch for your help.

Yours very stressed. :(

Nothing comes up when I search [3]] and nothing on Wikipedia is private. What do you have to hide? Theroadislong (talk) 16:47, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
There's a couple of mirrors like [4][5]. like you said, anything put on WP is public and this can happen. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 17:38, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding Article verification

Can you have a look on this Article, if suitable kindly approve this. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sherpathri Dar zubair 17:32, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I can assure you that I have NEVER been paid by anyone to do their wikipedia page as I'm not even an expert and merely do subjects I know, whose works interest me as fellow black women whom I want the world to discover. To suggest otherwise is both wrong and unfounded. My initial writing style may indicate my passion and bias about their works, which is something I have corrected to give an impassionate and neutral slant as demanded by wikipedia. But that does not in any way imply that I am paid. Please let me know why you have reached this conclusion, and also assist me in removing one of my drafts: Candice Onyeama from google search as I initially asked your help with, since one of your editors has gone ahead and published a draft on search engines against your policy. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFRICAN001 (talkcontribs) 11:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for confirming that you are not being paid, there is nothing anyone can do about Google searches, all content becomes public once you click publish and Wikipedia has no control over how it is presented in searches. Theroadislong (talk) 11:45, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

Thanks so much for approving this article. This encourages me to continue writing similar articles for creative black women in the hope of bringing their works to a wider audience. Remain blessed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFRICAN001 (talkcontribs) 14:10, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Submission of a draft

Hello! Can you please approve my my draft? Thank you. Excellenc1 (talk) 14:16, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Stratasys

Hi Theroadislong. I'm currently attempting to work thought the backlog at CAT:EDITREQ, and I have noticed that one of requests is at Talk:Stratasys § proposed update to company box. Since you worked on the request, I just wanted to know what do you think the current status is? Do you think it could be closed? JBchrch talk 15:33, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

JBchrch Yes I think that could be closed now thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 15:38, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A kitten for you!

Just like that! :)

Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 16:55, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank You!

Just wanted to say thank you for approving my article, really appreciate it.

Have a great day! Dblu9494 (talk) 17:22, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Submission of a disambiguation draft page

I have created a draft page on a disambiguation on the title 'Tabacalera' (my draft). But an article with the same name already exists (this one). Can you please sort it accordingly and possibly submit the draft? Excellenc1 (talk) 05:28, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article for Creation 'New Horizon Art Car'

Dear Theroadislong, I kindly ask for your help in my quest to get my article approved. You mentioned that my article reads like an advertising, and since I have been writing about the art project, I only realized what that means after a tea house member kindly remarked that I should remove all mentions of the BMW and its specifications. This is an art project that is dear to me, and which is why I'm putting so much time in it. Another kind member reduced the article to its core removing all references to BMW. Might I ask your help in reading the current version and letting me know if this has a chance of getting approval? Thank you so much! BettinaGsott (talk) 06:17, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Submission of a draft

Hello! Can you please review and approve my draft? Thank you. (P.S.: Sorry if I am annoying you with my submission requests but I am just impatient with submissions, and for me, you are the most known reviewer). Excellenc1 (talk) 14:47, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Gopinath Ravi

Hi,

Thanks for spending your time and reviewing my article. Draft:Gopinath Ravi

You gave declined comment that why winning Mr India Asia Pacific has 8 sources. I'm not clear on your point. Is that wrong giving many citations? Clarify me please. Kamesh Aravind P (talk) 14:48, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

See WP:REFBOMB. Theroadislong (talk) 15:21, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Theroadislong, it is helpful for me. I have learnt a new thing.

And now I have cleared the WP:REFBOMB in Draft:Gopinath Ravi . Can you kindly verify it again please?

Thanks in advance. Kamesh Aravind P (talk) 17:06, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have removed the {{proposed deletion/dated}} tag from G. Ware Travelstead, which you proposed for deletion. I'm leaving this message here to notify you about it. If you still think this article should be deleted, please do not add {{proposed deletion}} back to the page. Instead, feel free to list it at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion. Thanks! --Tautomers(T C) 00:18, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Repeating a request

Hello! Can you please review and approve my draft? Thank you. (P.S.: Sorry if I am annoying you with my submission requests but I am just impatient with submissions, and for me, you are the most known reviewer). Excellenc1 (talk) 07:34, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments on the question I asked. I really appreciate it.Lord Klukpui (talk) 20:42, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leo Regan draft

Hello there, You have just reviewed and declined a draft I am writing as a wiki entry for Irish filmmaker, writer and photographer Leo Regan and I am not sure why. Regan is an Emmy nominated, BAFTA and Directors Guild award winning documentary maker and photographer who has exhibited at the Victoria and Albert Museum, has been on the judging panel of the country's foremost documentary award, the Grierson and has a solid body of both documentary and drama work to his credit. He is also a respected cameraman and screenwriter. The secondary sources I have added today to the draft of the biography are all that there are, not because Regan is not of interest but because he is an intensely private individual who rarely if ever does interviews or profiles. His work has been reviewed and written about in The Independent, The Guardian, The Times, The Telegraph, the New Statesman, the television industry's Broadcast newspaper and also in publications in his home country, Ireland. His work his also significant in that it tackles issues such as homelessness, drug abuse and mental health. They aren't the easiest documentaries to watch but they are consistently viewed even today. That he is a figure of note is obvious but how to deal with the fact that he is a filmmaker who refuses to do interviews because he wants the work to speak louder than he does? What else can I add to get through to the next stage. All suggestions greatly appreciated Captbalbo (talk) 21:46, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

(talk page stalker) @Theroadislong and Captbalbo: This may be a moot question at this point. I cleaned this draft up, checked all sourcing and moved it to article space. --- Possibly 22:40, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza

Following up on edits. Thank you for your time.Fascin21 (talk) 03:11, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Abubakar Muhammad Zakaria Mojumder

Hi, Thank you for your comments. Reagarding your first instruction, I tried to provide as much as information about his proffessional life. And regarding 2nd comment, Abubakar Muhammad Zakaria Mojumder provided all this information personally to me. I do not know how I can provide reference about these informations.

Thanks

We cannot use ANY info that came from him directly, ALL content needs to be published in reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 15:08, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 16:29:46, 1 July 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Bblqk37


I am very disappointed at rejection of my submission. I have referenced it. Why would I bother to record something that will be lost if not recorded


Bblqk37 (talk) 16:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Bblqk37 Your draft Draft:Staflo drilling rig was declined not rejected, I don't understand your second question sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 08:48, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Theroadislong, the page was resubmitted and cleaned up according to your suggestions. It was very helpful. Many thanks. Would you be able to approve it, or advise how to proceed further. Regards, and many thanks in advance

More references

I add more references on draft. Can you check them? Azemla (talk) 17:48, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza

Hoping all edits now make this an acceptable publication. Thanks. Fascin21 (talk) 17:59, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article Review

Hi Theroadislong, I believe you were the reviewer on an article titled "Sasha Gordon" and denied it due to the sources not being substantial enough for you. Now that this artist's works have been acquired by major museums and there are 10+ more substantial sources, is there any way to restore the article draft or do I need to start again from scratch? My experience here has greatly diminished my motivation to contribute further to Wikipedia.

Your draft was deleted because it hadn't been edited for 6 months you can get a refund by clicking the appropriate link here [6]] good luck, creating an article is the very hardest task here. Theroadislong (talk) 07:44, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

RE My Rupert Gather Article

Hi Theroadislong,

I was just wondering if you could give me some more insight into what I need to do to make my article publishable? I notice on one of the links you say that its not he right type of link or something, is there a youtube video you could direct me to that can explain how to change that?


Thanks,

Christian

References

Hello Theroadislong Thankyou for your comment :) Any advice is welcome so thankyou again! FlowerMoon593 (talk) 12:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No improvements

Hi Theroadislong,

My last decline was about my references, not enough reliable sources, so I have added more, I also removed discogs and soundcloud reference after your helpful comment :) Im struggling as to what else would be appropriate or helpful. thankyou againFlowerMoon593 (talk) 12:42, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding Article verification

Can you have a look on this Article, if suitable kindly approve this. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sherpathri Dar zubair 02:39, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article on Arham Shri

Hello I just wanted to tell you that Arham Shri is a very notable personality in North India and is the founder of Arham Dhyan Yoga in the country. Arham Dhyan is one of the leading institutes of yoga in India and is a major yoga promoter under Ministry if Aush, india. Pls this article needs tos be up on the wiki as people do believe wikipedia for bios of these personalities https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Arham_Shri_108_Muni_Pranamya_Sagar_ji_Maharaj#Arham_Shri pls go through this link and just make a a search on google related to him

It is not for me to find sources for your draft. Theroadislong (talk) 07:32, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft Hans-Peter Wipplinger

--LMPpaulafreisl (talk) 11:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC) I kindly ask you to reconsider your review on the Draft on Hans-Peter Wipplinger https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Hans-Peter_Wipplinger it it a mere translation of the German article, that was written and edited by numerous people over the last years. Thank you in advance[reply]

English Wikipedia has stricter guidelines for inclusion, independent sources are required and you also need to properly disclose your conflict of interest re the terms and conditions of editing here. Theroadislong (talk) 12:02, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Theroadislong

I would like to know how much did I improve the article Sword Art Online Progressive: Aria of a Starless Night with my contribution? Can you suggest me some tips to improve further?

Your edits look to be mostly fine, except a "see also section" isn't required if all it contains are links to articles already mentioned in the article. Theroadislong (talk) 13:40, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Should I removed it? Can you me some tips in editing? Katie Allie (talk) 17:15, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Maria Bennan Re: Paid Editing / In-line Citation

Dear Theroadislong,

I have taken well note of the comments on the subject submission. Please find below my responses.

Paid editing: With regard to the query on paid editing, I would like to kindly confirm that there is no financial compensation that I have received from the subject / any other entity towards contribution of the content.

Regarding the nature of edits made: Two primary edits were made in response to the comments made by the initial reviewer:

    1. Any part of the text with a non-neutral tone was deleted.
    2. The infobox was updated with the website of the subject. The website has the same content as the reference sources.

Relevance of this topic: The number of female chefs from India is quite low and this can be mainly attributed to the gender stereotyping still prevalent in the society. Therefore, an article on a female chef from India who has been featured on national platforms was contributed.

Regarding in-line citations: No further edits have been made at this stage as mentioned on the editor's note. I would be grateful to receive assistance on the in-line citations aspect.

Many thanks and looking forward to hearing from you, Nina's Storm

Your draft Draft:Maria Bennan "shows signs of having been written by someone associated with the subject", which is why you were asked about paid editing, you also need to declare any conflict of interest even if you are not being paid, you have taken a photograph of the subject so have clearly met them. You can find help with reference formatting here WP:REFB. Theroadislong (talk) 18:33, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your quick response and kind clarifications on the above. Yes, a high definition photograph and something to represent her other interests were obtained by directly getting in touch with subject as rightly pointed out. Hopefully, this aspect of the comment can be treated as closed out for now? :)

Regarding the referencing, apologies for not being able to format correctly the first time around; shall refer carefully to the source provided and resubmit at the earliest.

Many thanks once again for your kind help and assistance on this matter.

Dear Theroadislong, All the references have now been corrected in line with WP's format. Thanks for your valuable guidance :) The references initially were wrongly formatted which gave the impression that the subject was claiming many of the stated points when the references were actually independent sources. Learnt a new thing today! :) Thank you!

A barnstar for you!

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Just trying to translate a Swedish page into English

Hey, I have no clue how to edit pages on Wiki. Just wanted to offer an English translation of this page: https://sv.wikipedia.org/wiki/Johan_Gr%C3%B6nvall

nothing much but a story about my great great great grandfather, but i got declined. How can i help translating this page into English or other languages?

Thanks and great day!

R Grönvall

Having an article in the Swedish Wikipedia is no guarantee that we can have one here, the guidelines on notability are often very different. Theroadislong (talk) 20:42, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC Drive

Hello Theroadislong:

WikiProject Articles for creation is holding a month long Backlog Drive!
The goal of this drive is to eliminate the backlog of unreviewed articles. The drive is running until 31 July 2021.

Awards will be given out for all reviewers participating in the drive in the form of barnstars at the end of the drive.

There is a backlog of over 2800 articles, so start reviewing articles. We're looking forward to your help! Curbon7 (talk) 23:19, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Just sending this cause I noticed you weren't signed up on the drive page. Curbon7 (talk) 23:19, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
thanks for that, I guess the hundred or so I did in the last few days don't count! Theroadislong (talk) 07:32, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Reviews only count after you sign up using the button above. Exception: because the drive pages were created late, if you sign up in the first week of the drive, all of your reviews since 8:00 pm, 30 June 2021, last Wednesday (6 days ago) (UTC−4) will count." From the drive page.
I think this means the reviews you've done so far count. Curbon7 (talk) 19:27, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Can u advise us on how to get the page published?

No I cannot, you are being paid, whilst I am a volunteer, try some research into company notability. Theroadislong (talk) 09:31, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Need help to know how can i make my article comply with the policies.

Hello, Theroadislong! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. I am trying to make my [[7]] comply with the policies of Wikipedia. Please let me know what will be left and making the article declined. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tamannakhatri (talkcontribs) 09:29, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Theroadislong,

Unfortunatory, limited to Japanese sources. I added three independent sources. Among them, one is from Japanese Wikipedia. I know it's not usually understood "unliliable," but the articles note is remarkable to show Takahashi's notablity in Japanese social work. Therefore I forced to put it as an independent source. Thank you very much for your review.

Best regards, IyataYada

Japanese sources are fine, but Wikipedia can absolutely NOT be used as a source. Theroadislong (talk) 16:45, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Knowable Magazine

It seems like we have reviewed at the same time. Would you like me to revert the move? – robertsky (talk) 17:05, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No of course not! We are all working to the same goal. Cheers. I just felt it had some rather promotional content but nothing that can't be sorted. Theroadislong (talk) 17:07, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Naosaku Takahashi

Hi again Theroadislong,

I deleted the first one fron Japanese Wikipedia. Thanks. The other two are from the home pages of still existing institutes for the needy, which were established by Naosaku Takahashi. By the way, as Naosaku Takahashi is a historikal figure (1886-1976), his Website informaton is limited. However, Naosaku Takahashi was an important figure of social work in Japan, during and after the war, WWII. Unfortunately, his writings, including his autobiography, and critical evaluations were published in Japanese only. But I, IyataYada, tried to cite the limited literature which is housed in National Diet Library of Japan; and CiNii of National Institute of Informatics, Japan, for everyone's reference to reach out the original sources. Although he is not a famous in the U.S.A. and other foreign countries, I belive that this English version will help the English speaking people in the Wikipedia community.

Best regards, IyataYada

Draft:KOKOKO!

Hello Theroadislong, I've made some changes to my draft and I would like to ask if it now falls under NBAND. I'd say non-trivial articles on the subject of the article from NPR, Billboard, Radio France Internationale, and Time Magazine count to pass NBAND. Thank you, Roniiustalk to me 17:50, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!

Thanks for the message. I totally did that page wrong--thought I was submitting my user page info. (doh!). Thanks for your support. I'll check it out. I hope I'm doing THIS message correctly. haha

National Environmental Education Foundation

Not clear on what is considered advertising about our entry

Hello. We submitted an entry for the National Environmental Education Foundation. We made sure to source all the information and make sure we included only facts about an organization that was chartered by Congress in the 1990 National Environmental Education Act. I would like to better understand how to improve this as I've followed all the guidance I've read on Wikipedia. Thank you very much! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:14d:8a00:29d0:99d:d71b:8e9d:2020 (talkcontribs)

Giffy & Co,

Thanks for speedying the duplicated draft. I have rejected the 'main' one as was done previously. Tripped myself up there when moving to draft by 'hidden' subpage. Cheers. Eagleash (talk)

RD Sharma is best seller in India

Hi,

RD Sharma is best seller in mathematics textbook category in India since last twenty years. He is most popular name and have been covered by leading news outlets. There are numerous whole article on him so we can not say it is just a passing mention. In case of your doubt you can google.

Regards, Manish — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mannitish (talkcontribs) 17:00, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jacqueline Bishop (artist) page

Thank you for approving the article.

There are actually TWO Jacqueline Bishops now on Wiki: both are artists, while one is an artist and a writer. I'm wondering if both could be just

"Jacqueline Bishop" (NO "artist" after the name)

and that there could be a DISAMBIGUITY page so the user can select which one they want.

I'm also working on a couple of DRAFT entries; I have one up for approval--another New Orleans person. Can you take a look: Draft:HowardPhilipsSmith. Also working on Draft:Henri Schindler but not ready yet for review. Need to clean up some others. I was sick and could not get to them.


Nilbogg (talk) 17:34, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 20:18:27, 7 July 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Chin3901



Chin3901 (talk) 20:18, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

IMDb is the only secondary source available for this show, if it isn't reliable, I will have to delete the article permanently.

Ok.I'm afraid that IMDb is never considered reliable here. Theroadislong (talk) 20:20, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Why? Chin3901 (talk) 20:18, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chin3901 Because it is user generated see here [8]. Theroadislong (talk) 08:04, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Articles for Creation July 2021 Backlog Elimination Drive

Hello Theroadislong:

WikiProject Articles for creation is holding a month long Backlog Drive!
The goal of this drive is to eliminate the backlog of unreviewed articles. The drive is running until 31 July 2021.

Barnstars will be given out as awards at the end of the drive.
There is currently a backlog of over 2800 articles, so start reviewing articles. We're looking forward to your help!

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Question

Could you explain to me how Draft:The Titan Spectator is not notable? I have provided 5 secondary, significant, independent and reliable sources. [1][2][3][4][5] These articles are not trivial mentions. I think this coverage meets the guidelines of WP:ORGDEPTH. I guess i'm just curious what more editors here expect to meet this?

References

Alecpalm (talk) 22:07, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looking at the draft as a whole [9]is written by you so is not independent, Instagram is not a reliable source at all, neither are press releases we need more than merely local coverage and as you have a clear conflict of interest your draft will be very closely scrutinised. Theroadislong (talk) 07:17, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It seems that you moved it to main space here The Titan Spectator bypassing the afc process so it has now been nominated for deletion. Theroadislong (talk) 08:02, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza

I understand how busy you must be. Following up on this page - hoping for a successful approval now. Fascin21 (talk) 02:55, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Are you reviewing my Dr. Elizabeth "Betty" Hayes article?

I see that you've at least opened my article, which I stupidly titled "Dr. Ellizabeth 'Betty' Hayes" (two Ls in Elizabeth) as I submitted it to Articles for Creation. Some questions:

a) Do you plan to review it soon? I was alarmed after I pressed the submit button and saw that wait times are as much as four months. Also, I just noticed that when my first article was approved four years ago, Wiki wrote me indicating that I don't have to submit further articles to Articles for Creation. Since you've probably got lots on your plate already—I see the tremendous number of articles you've reviewed—would you consider sending it back to me and telling me how to post it without review? Of course, I'd love to have your feedback, but if it's not necessary, I'm wasting your valuable time.

b) Also I need to know how to fix the name of the page, which I suppose should be just Dr. Elizabeth Hayes (one l, no "Betty") to match my text. I'd appreciate your thoughts on that unless you think I should post my question on the help page.

c) I have a photo, which I believe is now free. (It's a high-res scan from a 75-year-old magazine named Salute, which changed hands decades ago. The current publisher of Salute said his company does not hold the copyright for anything published in a 1946 issue.) I need to make my case that it's copyright-free. Should I ask the help people about this?

Busypencil (talk) 17:49, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A beer for you!

I'm sending you a beer (because wine wasn't an option) to thank you for approving my article for submission! Best wishes from Brooklyn, New York, and I appreciate all that you do for Wikipedia. Busypencil (talk) 18:37, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Draft:Howard Philips Smith

I deleted the external links from the main text on the Draft:Howard Philips Smith page. This makes perfect sense to me; not sure why I plugged those in!!! Let me know what else might need correcting, and I thank you for your patience.


Nilbogg (talk) 23:11, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

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I thought I had a lot of talk page messages to respond to but reviewing drafts really increases the number of editors who want to have a discussion about their work with you. Thank you for your cordiality, since many people coming to your talk page are new editors, you might be their first contact with another editor on the project. Thanks for any help & guidance you can provide to them. Liz Read! Talk! 23:55, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Help in improving Abdul Hakeem Azhari

Dear, i have improved this Draft:Abdul_Hakeem_Azhari and request you to edit/remove/trim it to make it fit for the main space. If it is fine in present form please approve it.ScholarM (talk) 10:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! How are you doing? I just wanted to drop a message to get a few insights in regards to the draft on Oghalé. I came across the draft while editing other articles this morning. I saw that Oghalé had specified the conflict of interest so I decided to take a look. I was able to verify the sources and that they were credible. The National Portrait Gallery is a prestigious honour here in the UK. I checked for all the things that were listed as potential issues and addressed them. One of the most recent comments for the draft being declined mentioned that two of the sources were written by Oghalé himself. But I opened those sources and one of the states that it is written by the Editorial Director of the magazine Stephanie Wade. The other is directly from the National Portrait Gallery website and was written by Exhibition Director, Andy Horn. The tone of the writing in the draft is consistent with not only the other articles that are published here on Wikipedia, but also matches the tone of what is written in the articles. Here is an example (Nadine Ijewere). That article which is published in a similar fashion has even fewer sources.

I do not mean to come off as rude and I hope I have not done so priorly. I just wanted to ask you some of these questions and see if I could get your insight and perhaps re-review of the draft.

Thank you for your time!

Tone is still unacceptable and he still fails WP:NARTIST, also see other stuff exists. Theroadislong (talk) 11:31, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Norton page

Hi — I was just looking at the Draft:Www.norton.com/setup in AfC, trying to figure out whether I need to reject it first or if I can request speedy without doing so. Then I saw that you rejected it already. Can I ask, is that enough to get it deleted, or does it need to go through some sort of deletion process also? (Sorry if this is silly noob question.) Thanks, --DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:39, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

PS: Oh okay, I guess that answers my question. :) --DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:39, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think it could have been tagged for speedy first, it was such blatant advertising. Theroadislong (talk) 15:45, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

hello,

Why you only look to YouTube, IMDb and Google search! There are other 8 reliable sources have article in en.wikipedia.--197.48.65.162 (talk) 16:38, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

There are also many press releases which are not reliable sources. It would help if you removed the unreliable sources, so we can see the wood for the trees. Theroadislong (talk) 16:44, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Theroadislong: Done, I have remove the unreliable sources. Thank you. -197.48.65.162 (talk) 17:05, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I'll leave it for another reviewer to take a look. Theroadislong (talk) 17:10, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Theroadislong:I hope you can help and not leave it :( -197.48.65.162 (talk) 17:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Neeru Malik

hey, thank you Theroadislong for reviewing the article. Actually, I myself didn't find much about her. The article was created by some other user in a very wrong manner and i just improved the artile in order to help him because I cannot decline the article myself . Divineplus (talk) 16:59, 9 July 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Creation of "Mindsponge"

Hi Theroadislong,

I just resubmitted the entry "Mindsponge", and it was declined because of "unsourced content". Could you please specify which content is "unsourced"? I think there might be some misunderstanding.

Thank you! Han — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nmhhg8 (talkcontribs) 17:35, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The extremely large section titled "Main components" has zero sources. Theroadislong (talk) 17:37, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comment! Actually, the content in the section titled "Main components" was retrieved from the 4th reference, which I cited in the picture's caption. I noticed that when I added the reference which has already existed, the draft still displays the reference as a new one. Therefore, I did not add any new references. I'm not used to Wikipedia editing. Could you please guide me on how to improve the paper?

Thank you!

Haessle Draft Discussion

Hello!

Thanks for taking the time to look at the draft and reviewing it. I was just curious as to what more could be done to get the draft approved. I could debate that he goes under the following:

"1. The person is regarded as an important figure or is widely cited by peers or successors."

He is recognized by his peers Arman and Venet in the draft and is recognized by art critics I mentioned as well and known in multiple countries which I believe is enough. I have seen other artists on wikipedia who have less references but somehow end up getting approved so I'm just a little confused. Thank you again for any feedback. OneEyedWolf (talk) 22:17, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Theroadislong,

I have resubmitted my article for Andre Gaines. Kindly view it and let me know if any changes are required. I also want to share that I certainly by mistake clicked on this user article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ImanSalvador/sandbox and submitted it by mistake and now it is coming in my contribution. I was just searching for help in Live chat and suddenly saw this article link was shared by someone. Once I clicked on it I went on submitting this article I thought it was for Andre Gaines and submitted it.

The only article which I want to publish is "Andre Gaines"


Regards, — Preceding unsigned comment added by RepulsiveRow82 (talkcontribs) 22:32, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello

Replying kindly for Wikipedia page Roman Perez- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roman_Perez

I represent Mr. Perez, and have been working on his article page here on Wikipedia for 1-2 years now.

I received the notification that all of the hard work put into this might finally go to waste.

You accepted his page and now are asking for it to be deleted.

Roman is a public figure. He is verified on social media, and has all the credentials to be here on Wikipedia.

The guidelines for Notability sports person specifically says- American Basketball Association which is the ABA. Perez has played with 3 teams (bronx holy flames, team innovation and the harlem underdogs from 2013-19. Unfortunately those franchises have folded so their websites are not up for me to add on Wikipedia.

He also entered the nba draft in 2009 https://www.eurobasket.com/player/Roman-Perez/APBL/New-York-Black-Eagles/187107

Please take into consideration that he is notable. He has many articles on google and deserves a chance to be here.

I really appreciate your time and effort.

Regardless of the outcome,

Thank You,

Steve Warner — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stevewarner23 (talkcontribs) 00:50, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You will need to make your case at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Roman Perez, not here. Being verified on social media and having articles on Google is irrelevant, he needs to pass WP:NBASKETBALL. Theroadislong (talk) 06:51, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Unacceptable draft becomes instant article

Draft:Gopinath Ravi was multiply declined and a discussion took place with the creator here, whereupon, this morning, they pasted the draft material into an eponymous article, which awaits review. Given this history, I'd like to try a speedy deletion. I've never done this before, and am not sure whether lack of notability is a sufficient criterion for speedying. Would PROD be more appropriate? What do you recommend here?--Quisqualis (talk) 02:28, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Re Gopinath Ravi The next step would be to take it to WP:AFD. It has an assertion of notability so speedy would be declined. Theroadislong (talk) 07:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Afripedia and Afripedia Project are different topics

Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks so much for looking into the draft article I've submitted; Afripedia.

You have rejected the draft article and suggested I merge it with an already existing article: Afripedia Project. However, the subject of the article Afripedia I submitted and the already existing article Afripedia Project are not the same.

The already existing article Afripedia Project is an initiative organised by Wikimédia France, Institut Français, and the Agence universitaire de la Francophonie and "aims to expand offline Wikipedia access in French-speaking Africa, and encourage Africans to contribute to Wikipedia".

The Afripedia article I have suggested is a completely other initiative, a documentary series, as well as a platform that aims to bridge the gap of employment of diverse talents in creative industries across the globe. It is also run by different people and it is an active project, 2010-now, unlike the Afripedia Project.

Please see this discussion page here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Afripedia_Project

To clarify this ambiguousness, I have inserted the form indicating that the page should not be confused with Afripedia project.

I have resubmitted the article, please see if that solves the issue raised.

Many thanks,

User YNovakovic

I have removed my decline and comment, the draft itself appears to be about two separate topics which is also confusing! Theroadislong (talk) 08:47, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Krilo Shipping Company

Hi Theroadislong, thank you for you review of Articles for creation: Krilo Shipping Company. I created the wiki article to connect it via languages. The original wiki article is on Croatian language.

The submission was declined as it appeared to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Im reaching out to ask for your help on how to create articles on other languages and that they dont appear like an advertisement.

Thanks BryanTheCorrector (talk) 18:10, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Croatian Wikipedia has very different guidelines for articles. Here, we need a summary of what reliable independent sources say about a topic Draft:Krilo Shipping Company has no independent sources see WP:NCORP for the criteria it needs to pass. Theroadislong (talk) 18:18, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Thankyou for your comment, I have read through WP:NBAND already and looked on other band pages on wikipedia, some of them seem to have less than what I have referenced on my draft for Holy Coves page. So I feel at a loss as to why I newspaper articles, magazine articles, BBC radio plays aren't enough. Thankyou FlowerMoon593 (talk) 09:28, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

See other poor quality articles exist for that argument. Theroadislong (talk) 09:30, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

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For knocking it out of the park this week with over 500 reviews (including deleted) 💫 KylieTastic (talk) 10:01, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Crikey! Thank you!! Theroadislong (talk) 10:03, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 07:59:48, 12 July 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Sir Ubaid Ur Rehman


Hi Theroadislong, Hope you are doing good, you have recently left a review on my submission User:Sir Ubaid Ur Rehman/MTFX Group , I am trying my best to write it in a neutral tone and make it as simple as possible, I have followed my competitors on wiki e.g Knightbridgefx, they pretty much talk about the same thing but they are approved, can you help me please point a few lines which look like an advertisement so I can reassess my paragraphs it will greatly help me. Sir Ubaid Ur Rehman (talk) 07:59, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sir Ubaid Ur Rehman (talk) 07:59, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Each and every sentence of your draft contains promotional puffery, "leading provider", "receivable solutions", " largest and most respected", " amazing people and great technology.", "solutions span multiple industries" etc etc, See WP:SOLUTIONS and please note that other poor articles existing is not a good argument. Theroadislong (talk) 08:24, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Hamutal Slovin

Hello, I do not understand your reason for the decline... Slovin is a proffesor and I placed many links. Would you please be kind enough to better explain and review this issue? Li-reg (talk) 11:22, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

Greeting of the day

Can you please help me out with my article? where I am doing mistakes? How to get my article live.

Your draft is not written like an an encyclopedia article, some topics are just not suitable, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 12:39, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Amazing guidance you provided

Thank you so much for providing amazing guidance, I will make sure to follow your guidelines. one more question I have if you can spare some time for me I am a new user learning wiki I have requested to include a space for the company in the template Template talk:Exchange rate but I don't know how to proceed further, the company genuinely provide live rates with 5 decimal point, can you guide me how I can elaborate it as I have already declared disclosures in my talk page.