Talk:Bronwen Knox
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 19:50, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]- Well-written:
- Verifiable with no original research:
- Broad in its coverage:
- Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
- Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
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(a) (prose) | One section bugs me which I'll fix. | ![]() |
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(a) (references) | No problems. | ![]() |
(b) (citations to reliable sources) | No problems. | ![]() |
(c) (original research) | No concerns. | ![]() |
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(a) (major aspects) | Looks good | ![]() |
(b) (focused) | No problems with focus. | ![]() |
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(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) | Nice pictures. | ![]() |
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) | Fine. | ![]() |
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Passing! |
Discussion
[edit]I'm going to fix up the one thing that bothered me and I'm passing this. Not sure about the concern with weight, but I don't know if its important or needed, unlike a boxer. Same goes with the matter of tattoos. Otherwise, its good.
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- Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch • • Most recent review
- Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:56, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
Listed as a GA 11 years ago. Article contains significant gaps of her career from 2012 onwards, only lists participation in 2 Olympics since then. LibStar (talk) 00:00, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
- Not a reason for GAR. WP:SOFIXIT applies. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:51, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
Do not close until June, to prevent topic overload for willing editors.~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:57, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
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