Talk:Kenzie Ruston Hemric

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Interesting to see a woman driver at GAN. Will review. MWright96 (talk) 09:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"She later competed as a NASCAR Drive for Diversity member in NASCAR's K&N Pro Series East" - remove the second mention of NASCAR since it has already been established the K&N Pro Series East is sanctioned by the stock car racing body

Early career

"When she turned 17," - Upon turning 17
Either add the acronyms of Texas Motor Speedway in parentheses the first time it is mentioned or spell out the track each subsequent time it is mentioned.

Stock car racing

"In 2011, Ruston began competing in stock cars, which included four ARCA Racing Series races with Venturini Motorsports, making her debut at Toledo Speedway in the No. 25 Toyota, and finished 10th." - I think separating this long sentence will help.
"She switched to No. 55 for three additional races, finishing 10th, 12th, and 26th in those races." - reptition of races

NASCAR

"and finished 6th in the points standings." - spell out 6th
"During the year, she became the highest-finishing female driver in series history, finishing second at Iowa Speedway." - repetition of finishing
Also for BKR, same query with TMS

References

Reference 11 needs to have the date format changed to January 13, 2017 for consistency

As usual, good work Ben. On hold for the minor points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:14, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96:

Done everything, thanks again! --Bcschneider53 (talk) 18:44, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Bcschneider53: No problem. This review can now be passed. :) MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]