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I too agree with Adrian, the source is fine. [[User:Dbrodbeck|Dbrodbeck]] ([[User talk:Dbrodbeck|talk]]) 21:36, 20 April 2016 (UTC) |
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Affiliate marketer
I'd prefer a label that's clearer, but it seems due and the source is used extensively. Given how prominent it is in the source, to not mention it in the lede seems problematic. --Ronz (talk) 22:38, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
- I don't understand the reason it was deleted. That's what she does to make money. QuackGuru (talk) 22:40, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
- Concur. It's well-cited and it's literally how she makes her living - David Gerard (talk) 01:13, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Omnipum: appears to be edit-warring to keep it out - David Gerard (talk) 01:24, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It belongs there, it is cited. Dbrodbeck (talk) 01:28, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Why does it belong there? Can you show me examples of how this title is used on other pages? Is typically how bloggers are described who have used affiliate marketing on their websites? I don't believe this is the case. Do you realize that almost all websites - including mainstream news websites - utilize affiliate marketing? Yet, they are not described as "affiliate marketers". I don't see how this is an accurate description of what she does.--Omnipum (talk) 01:41, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It is cited. Dbrodbeck (talk) 03:00, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Just because something is in the news doesn't mean it is encyclopedic in any way. No one has answered my questions above. --Omnipum (talk) 03:05, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Specifically in Vani Hari's case, her affiliate marketing is an issue because she evangelises a lifestyle that promotes these products. And has been called out for it. Its one thing to utilise affliate marketing, its another to say 'You should eat/drink this! Its good for you!' without disclosing you are getting a kickback. So generally yes, its not an issue for most bloggers (although with recent high profile court cases regarding promoting products this may be changing) in Hari's it is a significant issue. Only in death does duty end (talk) 09:11, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It belongs because, as the sources make perfectly clear, that is how she makes the money to support her rather agreeable lifestyle. She pimps products, and makes money when people buy them. That is not only an important fact biographically, it also bears directly on much of the criticism of her work. Guy (Help!) 09:43, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Just because something is in the news doesn't mean it is encyclopedic in any way. No one has answered my questions above. --Omnipum (talk) 03:05, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It is cited. Dbrodbeck (talk) 03:00, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Why does it belong there? Can you show me examples of how this title is used on other pages? Is typically how bloggers are described who have used affiliate marketing on their websites? I don't believe this is the case. Do you realize that almost all websites - including mainstream news websites - utilize affiliate marketing? Yet, they are not described as "affiliate marketers". I don't see how this is an accurate description of what she does.--Omnipum (talk) 01:41, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It belongs there, it is cited. Dbrodbeck (talk) 01:28, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Can we link affiliate marketer somewhere in order to give a clear definition of what we're meaning the term to mean, then check whether she meets that or not. I would agree with Guy's description here, but it's not clear that this is how "affiliate marketer" is generally interpreted or not. Is she paid to advertise products, then maybe products sell? Or is she part of the selling process more directly herself, such as FudBabe-branded tasty yoga mats? Andy Dingley (talk) 11:23, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- As per the second ref she is a fairly standard affiliate marketer, rather than a directly paid-for-promotion like some of the recent bloggers caught out. Its not a case of Organic company says 'Promote this and we will give you a chunk of cash'. She recommends brands and gets a cut/share from those brands for her referrals - which is how affiliate marketing generally works. As far as I know there isnt any allegation that states she directly does paid advertising on behalf of companies which actually puts her on the more ethical end of the blog-advertising range. Only in death does duty end (talk) 11:32, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- I don't believe you understand how affiliate marketing works here. Almost every blog on the planet, including Scibabe, makes some revenue from affiliate marketing. That does not make them an "afflilate marketer" by trade - they are a "blogger" by trade. Let's get back to the point here that Hari is a blogger - and it is not appropriate to give her a title of "affiliate marketer". Can you show me examples of other wikipedia profiles that use "affiliate marketer" as a title for someone? I do not believe they exist.Omnipum (talk) 16:35, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS is never a winning argument at Wikipedia. The point is that this is significant to Hari's income and to the public critique of her, and that both the fact and its significance are well-cited and relevant - David Gerard (talk) 16:43, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Where does it say this is "significant" to Hari's income? This is not what she "does", so it is not an appropriate title. Again... every other blogger on the planet does affiliate marketing and they are not called "affiliate marketers" by trade. This does not belong in this sentence, it is already discussed a couple sentences below where it says "Hari left her management consulting job in 2012 to devote her time to activism and blogging, as well as marketing dietary and other products." There is not reason to duplicate this and give her this title.--Omnipum (talk) 16:58, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Very few bloggers have an article about their affiliate marketing published by AdvertisingAge. --Ronz (talk) 17:04, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- That is not true. Many articles have been written about bloggers and vloggers and how they make money, and they are not given the title of "affiliate marketer" although this is a primary vehicle that they use to earn a living from their blogs and videos. --Omnipum (talk) 18:22, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Says who? Please provide reliable sources. --Ronz (talk) 19:30, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- I have read through the talk page, and there is no qualification in her schooling, university career or her activism that make her "known for" affiliate marketing. She has no expertise in marketing other than what typical bloggers do. From looking at her site, it looks like she is mainly a writer and author - this is an inaccurate designation - also furthermore she sells no series or advice to deal with affiliate marketing - nor is there any evidence of significant income that makes this form of revenue part of her identity. I agree with Omnipum's comments above, that there are no other bloggers here on wikipedia that have this type of title. This clearly looks like a situation trying to paint Ms. Hari in a money grubbing light.Maruru~enwiki (talk) 18:43, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- There is no consensus for your removal. Please don't edit war. Dbrodbeck (talk) 19:12, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- There was no consensus to add it in the first place, so it stays out. Omnipum (talk) 19:36, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Please consider me as one editor on the side of the consensus being to leave it in. I base that on the fact that sources explicitly describe her as such, and indicate that the marketing is an essential aspect of her approach to advocacy. Also, if I see any more edit warring, I am going to request page protection. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:57, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Concur with Tryptofish. Affiliate Marketing is how Hari makes her money, as covered by Advertising Age magazine link. Prostetnic Vogon Jeltz (talk) 20:47, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Please consider me as one editor on the side of the consensus being to leave it in. I base that on the fact that sources explicitly describe her as such, and indicate that the marketing is an essential aspect of her approach to advocacy. Also, if I see any more edit warring, I am going to request page protection. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:57, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- There was no consensus to add it in the first place, so it stays out. Omnipum (talk) 19:36, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- There is no consensus for your removal. Please don't edit war. Dbrodbeck (talk) 19:12, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- That is not true. Many articles have been written about bloggers and vloggers and how they make money, and they are not given the title of "affiliate marketer" although this is a primary vehicle that they use to earn a living from their blogs and videos. --Omnipum (talk) 18:22, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Very few bloggers have an article about their affiliate marketing published by AdvertisingAge. --Ronz (talk) 17:04, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Where does it say this is "significant" to Hari's income? This is not what she "does", so it is not an appropriate title. Again... every other blogger on the planet does affiliate marketing and they are not called "affiliate marketers" by trade. This does not belong in this sentence, it is already discussed a couple sentences below where it says "Hari left her management consulting job in 2012 to devote her time to activism and blogging, as well as marketing dietary and other products." There is not reason to duplicate this and give her this title.--Omnipum (talk) 16:58, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS is never a winning argument at Wikipedia. The point is that this is significant to Hari's income and to the public critique of her, and that both the fact and its significance are well-cited and relevant - David Gerard (talk) 16:43, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- I don't believe you understand how affiliate marketing works here. Almost every blog on the planet, including Scibabe, makes some revenue from affiliate marketing. That does not make them an "afflilate marketer" by trade - they are a "blogger" by trade. Let's get back to the point here that Hari is a blogger - and it is not appropriate to give her a title of "affiliate marketer". Can you show me examples of other wikipedia profiles that use "affiliate marketer" as a title for someone? I do not believe they exist.Omnipum (talk) 16:35, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- As per the second ref she is a fairly standard affiliate marketer, rather than a directly paid-for-promotion like some of the recent bloggers caught out. Its not a case of Organic company says 'Promote this and we will give you a chunk of cash'. She recommends brands and gets a cut/share from those brands for her referrals - which is how affiliate marketing generally works. As far as I know there isnt any allegation that states she directly does paid advertising on behalf of companies which actually puts her on the more ethical end of the blog-advertising range. Only in death does duty end (talk) 11:32, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
We have two WP:SPAs who are against this and a number of experienced editors who think it belongs as it is sourced. Dbrodbeck (talk) 21:26, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- The source is
unreliable and it's major point is that she's an affiliate marketer. Removal of the information seems to be a POV violation. --Ronz (talk) 22:09, 30 March 2016 (UTC)- You meant "reliable", right? --Tryptofish (talk) 22:13, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Doh! Thanks! --Ronz (talk) 00:00, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Bloomberg Businessweek says her primary income is from selling her own eating guide. This isn't affiliate marketing. "The investigations drive readers to Hari’s Monthly Eating Guide, which she says is her primary source of revenue. For $17.99 a month, customers can download a full-color Food Babe Starter guide that teaches them about “organic living from the inside out.”
- I suggest that instead of "affiliate marketer" it should say "entrepreneur". http://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2014-09-25/food-babe-vani-hari-draws-criticism-over-her-science Omnipum (talk) 20:51, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- So you suggest we ignore the main point of a reference we are using widely, and introduce a term not being used in the refernce you prefer? Sorry, the first a POV violation, the latter a OR vio as well. --Ronz (talk) 21:21, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- No, according to this and other sources her primary source of income is an "eating guides" - not affiliate marketing. I think a more accurate description of her is an entrepreneur. " Ms. Hari also sells "eating guides" for $17.99 a month and charges for speaking appearances." and "The investigations drive readers to Hari’s Monthly Eating Guide, which she says is her primary source of revenue." (source: Bloomberg) Omnipum (talk) 23:51, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- I don't see how that matters, especially when it's just her own claim. We don't place her own claims above sources. --Ronz (talk) 15:51, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- No, according to this and other sources her primary source of income is an "eating guides" - not affiliate marketing. I think a more accurate description of her is an entrepreneur. " Ms. Hari also sells "eating guides" for $17.99 a month and charges for speaking appearances." and "The investigations drive readers to Hari’s Monthly Eating Guide, which she says is her primary source of revenue." (source: Bloomberg) Omnipum (talk) 23:51, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- So you suggest we ignore the main point of a reference we are using widely, and introduce a term not being used in the refernce you prefer? Sorry, the first a POV violation, the latter a OR vio as well. --Ronz (talk) 21:21, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- Doh! Thanks! --Ronz (talk) 00:00, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- You meant "reliable", right? --Tryptofish (talk) 22:13, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
Hari response to criticisms
Can anyone explain why this quote from Hari keeps getting removed? We have already established that responses to criticisms are allowed in a BLP. “Under their criticisms, that would mean that no journalist working in this world without a scientific degree would be able to report on science. That is unacceptable." Source --Omnipum (talk) 17:02, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- It's nonsense, over-the-top, self-serving, has no encyclopedic value that I can see, and in context looks like an attempt to undercut the valid criticisms of her lack of expertise. --Ronz (talk) 17:11, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- How is it nonsense and over the top? I disagree. It is her direct response to criticisms, whether you like it or not. --Omnipum (talk) 17:18, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- You disagree and apparently feel this is just a matter of personal preference. Now please make a policy-based case for inclusion per WP:BLPREQUESTRESTORE. --Ronz (talk) 17:50, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- This quote from Hari is appropriate under WP:BALANCE and WP:WEIGHT and "Wikipedia's policy on biographies of living persons requires exercising special care in presenting negative viewpoints about living persons."Omnipum (talk) 18:17, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- I think it's clearly the reverse, but thanks for offering an explanation. --Ronz (talk) 19:31, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- There have been so many recent reversions that it's difficult for those of us who didn't see it in real time to be sure which "response" this is. I think it might be where she said "Under their criticisms, that would mean that no journalist working in this world without a scientific degree would be able to report on science. That is unacceptable." If that's the case, then it came right after her quote about not being a nutritionist, and I don't think that it really adds that much to what the page already says, so I don't think that we need to add it back. I think the nutritionist quote covers it adequately. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:58, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- No it doesn't. This quote specifically talks about journalism and writing about science. It is a completely different quote and should be added to counter criticisms that she isn't a scientist and shouldn't write about scientific issues. --Omnipum (talk) 22:02, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- The way I see it, "I never claimed to be a nutritionist. I'm an investigator" is also clearly saying that she says she isn't a scientist but that she believes that should not prevent her from being able to publish investigations of nutrition science issues. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:02, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, she said "Nutritionist" and not "Scientist" - that is two entirely different things and I'm sure we can agree on that. The second quote is specific response to her writing about scientific subjects, and that is why it belongs. Omnipum (talk) 02:24, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- We disagree. The point here boils down to "specialist" or "expert", as opposed to "investigator" or "journalist". Contrasting "nutritionist" and "scientist" in this particular context is a distinction without a difference. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:34, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, she said "Nutritionist" and not "Scientist" - that is two entirely different things and I'm sure we can agree on that. The second quote is specific response to her writing about scientific subjects, and that is why it belongs. Omnipum (talk) 02:24, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- The way I see it, "I never claimed to be a nutritionist. I'm an investigator" is also clearly saying that she says she isn't a scientist but that she believes that should not prevent her from being able to publish investigations of nutrition science issues. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:02, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- No it doesn't. This quote specifically talks about journalism and writing about science. It is a completely different quote and should be added to counter criticisms that she isn't a scientist and shouldn't write about scientific issues. --Omnipum (talk) 22:02, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- There have been so many recent reversions that it's difficult for those of us who didn't see it in real time to be sure which "response" this is. I think it might be where she said "Under their criticisms, that would mean that no journalist working in this world without a scientific degree would be able to report on science. That is unacceptable." If that's the case, then it came right after her quote about not being a nutritionist, and I don't think that it really adds that much to what the page already says, so I don't think that we need to add it back. I think the nutritionist quote covers it adequately. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:58, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- I think it's clearly the reverse, but thanks for offering an explanation. --Ronz (talk) 19:31, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- This quote from Hari is appropriate under WP:BALANCE and WP:WEIGHT and "Wikipedia's policy on biographies of living persons requires exercising special care in presenting negative viewpoints about living persons."Omnipum (talk) 18:17, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- You disagree and apparently feel this is just a matter of personal preference. Now please make a policy-based case for inclusion per WP:BLPREQUESTRESTORE. --Ronz (talk) 17:50, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- How is it nonsense and over the top? I disagree. It is her direct response to criticisms, whether you like it or not. --Omnipum (talk) 17:18, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- See special pleading. That and the fact that Hari has a habit of trying to rewrite history when she's caught out, so any self-serving justifications must be taken with several oceans' worth of salt. Guy (Help!) 01:21, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
- You can take it with a grain of salt if you want, but that is her response to criticisms and so it belongs here. Omnipum (talk) 02:24, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- Why? Who cares besides her? --Ronz (talk) 15:53, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- All that does is give false equivalence to her responses, no way to they belong here. This is a woman who thinks there shouldn't be nitrogen in the air she breathes.... Dbrodbeck (talk) 16:32, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- Exactly. Being a WP:FRINGE subject especially, we don't do tit-for-tat. Hari says something of note and mainstream sources point it out as quackery, etc. We don't give Hari a venue here to push her point of view further by her responses to that. Kingofaces43 (talk) 16:46, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- All that does is give false equivalence to her responses, no way to they belong here. This is a woman who thinks there shouldn't be nitrogen in the air she breathes.... Dbrodbeck (talk) 16:32, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- Why? Who cares besides her? --Ronz (talk) 15:53, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
- You can take it with a grain of salt if you want, but that is her response to criticisms and so it belongs here. Omnipum (talk) 02:24, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
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Hari's response
Hari has stated "I'm not doing this to make money. This is my life. This is my passion. This is my calling. There is no way I would put myself on the line like I do because of money. This is all about what I've learned, and I have to tell everyone." This belongs on the article. QuackGuru (talk) 18:34, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Why? Is it significant that she has said this vague and self-serving platitude? If it's credible that the claim is true (many believe that it's all about the money), then what sourcing is there for her lack of financial gain? Andy Dingley (talk) 18:46, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not sure I see why either, though I could be convinced I imagine. Dbrodbeck (talk) 18:54, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- The Adage article uses quotes from Hari to contrast what she says with what she does and the criticisms for both. However, it's rather subtle in the article, so taking quotes out of the specific context may be problematic. --Ronz (talk) 19:02, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sure, and that's why she gives her books away free as e-books, and ensures that she links direct to manufacturers rather than using affiliate links. Oh, wait... Guy (Help!) 19:09, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- I agree that her response to criticisms should be included. Omnipum (talk) 19:22, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Ok so basically the only argument I'm hearing against including this here is "I think she's bullshitting." You guys do realise this isn't how Wikipedia works right? Also Ronz is saying that we are taking the quote out of the specific context of being juxtaposed with criticism of her marketing strategy. How are we doing this you may ask? By juxtaposing it with criticism of her marketing strategy. I can't help but feel that these are not convincing arguments. Also if what she's saying is meaningless, self-serving, and unconvincing then why are you so worried about it being in the article? She'll look just as dubious either way. Brustopher (talk) 19:49, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- No, not that I think she's bullshitting, the evidence shows she's bullshitting. You're offsetting dispassionate analysis of her mechanisms for raising revenue with querulous and blatantly self-serving statements that are plainly at odds with the facts, namely that she pimps products via affiliate marketing that contain the very things against which she rants. Guy (Help!) 21:17, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- Well it's irrellevant whether or not her statements are self serving. Secondary sources have thought it necessary to quote her and get her side of hte story when making these claims about her. For us to remove them because they are self-serving is a clear violation of NPOV. This is an article about Vani Hari, so it should include Hari's arguments and thoughts which have been covered by secondary sources. Brustopher (talk) 15:45, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- No, not that I think she's bullshitting, the evidence shows she's bullshitting. You're offsetting dispassionate analysis of her mechanisms for raising revenue with querulous and blatantly self-serving statements that are plainly at odds with the facts, namely that she pimps products via affiliate marketing that contain the very things against which she rants. Guy (Help!) 21:17, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
- I think Tryptofish's recent edit is fine. She does assert the claim, after all, and the quote is not excessive IMO - David Gerard (talk) 07:49, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- I disagree and have modified the sentence accordingly. The edit as it stood gave the impression that Advertising Age and the other source took her claims at face value without doing further investigation. Prostetnic Vogon Jeltz (talk) 13:06, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Yours makes an important point that needs to be made, though it's pretty strongly worded - David Gerard (talk) 13:42, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- I am fine with the status as of now (i.e. [1]). Guy (Help!) 14:03, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Terrible edit. You've basically made the sentence look like this: "Hari has been criticised for profitting from her marketing affiliations, but says she's not in it for the money, but it's been noted Hari profits significantly from her marketing affiliations." This is just bad sentence structuring. I've removed the rejoinder but added the word "significantly" to the beginning of the sentence so meaning of your edit is not lost. Brustopher (talk) 15:45, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- I disagree and have modified the sentence accordingly. The edit as it stood gave the impression that Advertising Age and the other source took her claims at face value without doing further investigation. Prostetnic Vogon Jeltz (talk) 13:06, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money", but news reporting shows that she makes a significant amount of money from her affiliate marketing campaigns.[2][43]
The part "but news reporting shows that she makes a significant amount of money from her affiliate marketing campaigns" is a SYN violation. In the previous sentence in mentions affiliated marketing. There are two problems. SYN and duplication. QuackGuru (talk) 15:38, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- No, it is not a SYN violation. You are very very boring by now with your continual insistence that anything you did not write or approve is OR. The sources clearly support her profiting from affiliate marketing. If you want to include her weaselly self-justification, then we also get to include the rock solid documented fact that regardless of her claimed motivation, she makes money from thhe crap she peddles. And that is 100% in line with policy. She is pushing fringe views, we do not present her self-image as the truth even if she does believe her own PR. She promotes chemophobia then makes money selling products that contain the self-same chemicals. Some people think this is because she is a hypocrite, I disagree: I think she simply does not care about the factual accuracy of what she says, she is in it for ego much more than money, but that is just my personal view - the objective fact is that pleading aside, she has taken positive steps to profit form what she promotes. This is not an accidental oversight, it is a clear and conscious decision, so saying she's not in it for the money qualifies for a Jimmy Hill sized chinny-reckon. Guy (Help!) 17:49, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
Non-neutral edit and duplication. QuackGuru (talk) 17:46, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- In your opinion. As a single-minded person with a block log a mile long and a long history of problems wherever you edit.
- Meanwhile, back in the real world, sources clearly identify her affiliate marketing. Guy (Help!) 17:51, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- I previously explained it was duplication. The "but" part is clearly not what the source stated. QuackGuru (talk) 17:55, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- So one minute it's WP:SYN and the next it's duplication. Put those goalposts down. The relevance is as I stated: if we're going to repeat her obviously questionable self-justification, then we doi it in the context of the published evidence that her self-justification is, in fact, questionable. She could have fixed this criticism by not engaging in affiliate marketing. Instead she chose to claim she's not in it for the money, but kept on affiliate marketing. I think we're entitled to point that out. Guy (Help!) 18:04, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- I previously explained it was duplication. The "but" part is clearly not what the source stated. QuackGuru (talk) 17:55, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- How's this phrasing? The Ad Age article is, after all, literally about this - David Gerard (talk) 18:27, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Maybe I'm misreading things but the article never seems to state that the marketing revenue is a significant proportion of her income. Also once again I must note, the addition was (before you rephrased it) literally just a rephrased repetition of the previous sentence. You may think it's an important addition, but critics of the edit have noted that it's just the previous sentence rephrased. (see what I did there?) It's just bad writing. Furthermore the Adage article seems to take Hari's claim seriously, noting she left a lucrative job to start her food blogging career. You people seem to have confused the idea of "not being in it for the money" with "being allergic to money and rejecting all earthly possesions." Adding "but she actually makes money as opposed to doing a full time job for free" isn't a rebuttal the article is trying to make nor one that really makes sense. Brustopher (talk) 18:44, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Both the previous version and new version are not rebuttals. It is OR/SYN. QuackGuru (talk) 20:20, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- How's this phrasing? The Ad Age article is, after all, literally about this - David Gerard (talk) 18:27, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- It is nothing of the sort, and repeating the assertion does not make it so - David Gerard (talk) 21:00, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Then you would have no trouble verifying the claim. QuackGuru (talk) 21:01, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- See WP:IDHT. You are now at the point of pissing off even those who agree with you on substantive matters of the validity of scientific claims. Guy (Help!) 22:04, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- Then you would have no trouble verifying the claim. QuackGuru (talk) 21:01, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- It is nothing of the sort, and repeating the assertion does not make it so - David Gerard (talk) 21:00, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- @JzG: Ok let's try this again. Here's everything wrong with the phrasing as it currently stands:
- How can the evidence contradict her claim? The claim is that Hari personally believes she's not in it for the money, and that money isn't her main motive. The only way this could be proved or disproved is by inventing a machine that reads people's thoughts to confirm. What you are doing is forcing your own opinion into the article. None of the sources we have are as skeptical about this as you are.
- Why does "having the last say" matter. You seem to think that Hari's claim being a lie is self-evident due to the fact that affiliate marketing is a significant proportion of her income. If this is the case how lowly do you think of our readers that you believe their simian minds will be unable to comprehend an obvious truth just because Hari's response is the last sentence of the paragraph?
- This is just plain bad overly repetitive writing. We've got the same clause written twice with some very mild paraphrasing. It's writing which is both bad and repetitive. (see what I did there?) Brustopher (talk) 17:34, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- I agree the phrasing is clumsy. The best thing would be simply to omit her response, since it is self-serving and contradicted by evidence. Otherwise one could merely re-order the entire para to say that while Hari insists she is not in it for the money, there is extensive evidence that she is. I have yet to encounter a single promoter of bullshit who either admits it is bullshit, or admits they are in it for the money. If you ask them about some critique of their bullshit or some proof of their making money from promoting bullshit, they will always give exactly the responses Hari gives. They might even believe it, who knows. The chances of Hari admitting that she is doing very nicely thank you from sales of the products she pimps without checking their ingredients against her made-up list of evil chemicals is zero. However, the evidence shows this to be the case, and we should not give her the last word - this is not a court of law, it's an encyclopaedia. In court the defence gets the last word, on Wikipedia, reality gets the last word. Guy (Help!) 20:19, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- It might just be best to remove it entirely. Dbrodbeck (talk) 20:28, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- Quoting her response uncritically is definitely unduly self-serving. Hardly anyone when confronted with accusations of corruption by cash would admit that they are being influenced by it. In Hari's case she does not have a long career or reputation to protect—she doesn't work for a university or a newspaper, she works for herself (or for her affiliate partners, depending on how you look at it). The sources do not appear to be agreeing with her response or making much ado about it, so devoting that portion of the page to it, especially the last word, would be WP:UNDUE. I would think simply noting somewhere that Hari disagrees would be sufficient, but even that seems unnecessary since obviously someone would disagree with their critics; it would be more worth pointing out if they agreed and made a statement that they would do something about it. In short, Hari's response simply doesn't add anything of note to the article. Adrian[232] 20:43, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- I agree that it's probably best to just remove it entirely, and I'm going to do that now. If anyone is dead set on putting it back in some form, it would be best to agree on the wording here, before putting anything back. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:01, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- I'm sorry but what the heck just happened? We have 2 sources describing Hari's response which is a good half of all the sources covering the affiliate marketting issues from what I can gather. How on earth is removing her response justified here. We cannot open windows into people's souls and know whether or not they're involved in a cause mainly for the money, so the claims that hte evidence contradicts Hari's responses are ridiculous. Even if the evidence did, these sources still felt the need to include Hari's resposnses. Furthermore, claims that we're presenting Hari's claims uncritically are absurd. We're presenting them in a section solely dedicated to critcism of her marketin strategy! Brustopher (talk) 15:49, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- Personally, I have no objection to putting it back in some form. But the question is: in which form? If we can work that out in talk, then that's fine, but there's no point in having a slow-motion edit war over it. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:59, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hmm. Given that the issue people seem to have is that Hari's response is the last line of the paragraph (I don't understand why), how about this: The adage report and Hari's reply are put first in the section/paragraph. The Bloomberg business week stuff is then put at the end of the paragraph. Would that solve everyone's complaints? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brustopher (talk • contribs) 20:13, April 12, 2016
- I think the question here that I haven't seen answered is: Why does it need to be there? It seems to me her response could be summed up as simply that she disagrees that money could be an influence on her. What substance beyond that does her response have? What purpose does it serve the article? If I understood those questions, I might be able to help propose something here. Adrian[232] 21:14, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hmm. Given that the issue people seem to have is that Hari's response is the last line of the paragraph (I don't understand why), how about this: The adage report and Hari's reply are put first in the section/paragraph. The Bloomberg business week stuff is then put at the end of the paragraph. Would that solve everyone's complaints? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brustopher (talk • contribs) 20:13, April 12, 2016
- Personally, I have no objection to putting it back in some form. But the question is: in which form? If we can work that out in talk, then that's fine, but there's no point in having a slow-motion edit war over it. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:59, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- I'm sorry but what the heck just happened? We have 2 sources describing Hari's response which is a good half of all the sources covering the affiliate marketting issues from what I can gather. How on earth is removing her response justified here. We cannot open windows into people's souls and know whether or not they're involved in a cause mainly for the money, so the claims that hte evidence contradicts Hari's responses are ridiculous. Even if the evidence did, these sources still felt the need to include Hari's resposnses. Furthermore, claims that we're presenting Hari's claims uncritically are absurd. We're presenting them in a section solely dedicated to critcism of her marketin strategy! Brustopher (talk) 15:49, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- It might just be best to remove it entirely. Dbrodbeck (talk) 20:28, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- I agree the phrasing is clumsy. The best thing would be simply to omit her response, since it is self-serving and contradicted by evidence. Otherwise one could merely re-order the entire para to say that while Hari insists she is not in it for the money, there is extensive evidence that she is. I have yet to encounter a single promoter of bullshit who either admits it is bullshit, or admits they are in it for the money. If you ask them about some critique of their bullshit or some proof of their making money from promoting bullshit, they will always give exactly the responses Hari gives. They might even believe it, who knows. The chances of Hari admitting that she is doing very nicely thank you from sales of the products she pimps without checking their ingredients against her made-up list of evil chemicals is zero. However, the evidence shows this to be the case, and we should not give her the last word - this is not a court of law, it's an encyclopaedia. In court the defence gets the last word, on Wikipedia, reality gets the last word. Guy (Help!) 20:19, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
@Adrian232: Exactly so. It would be frankly astonishing if she did not deny these accusations, just as Andy Wakefield denies his film is anti-vaccine, but her word is unreliable (as established by multiple sources) and the facts speak for themselves. Guy (Help!) 22:07, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- For those reasons, I don't like the idea of restoring her quote in its entirety. But I see nothing wrong with having a shortened version of the quote, along the lines of [2], but I don't like having to add wording about the news reports. I would be OK with just saying:
Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money".
and leave it at that. It respects WP:BLP, while also letting readers see for themselves how her contention does or does not fit with all the other facts. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:28, 12 April 2016 (UTC)- But the problem with that is that the evidence clearly indicates that she is doing it for the money. It's certainly not from any love of informing people, because so much of what she writes is objectively shown to be hogwash. Guy (Help!) 22:55, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- For those reasons, I would not want us to say it in Wikipedia's voice, but I think that the verb "contends" demonstrates that she claims it, not that what she claims is true. I think that if we go too far in removing her stated positions from the page, on the basis that they are wrong (as indeed they clearly are), we end up in WP:RGW territory, trying to tell our readers that she is bad. Perhaps there is a way of rearranging the paragraph, so that we give the "last word" to the sources that show that she really does get money from this. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:09, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- How about this:
Although Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands.
--Tryptofish (talk) 23:12, 12 April 2016 (UTC)- I am ok with this. Brustopher (talk) 23:22, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money" is about her career. It is not about Marketing strategy. It does not belong at Marketing strategy.
- Hari stated that she is "not doing this to make money" belongs at Vani_Hari#Career. QuackGuru (talk) 01:49, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- @QuackGuru: In which paragraph, and worded how? --Tryptofish (talk) 16:03, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- See here. QuackGuru (talk) 16:17, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- That takes it completely out of context, which is exactly what we should not be doing. --Ronz (talk) 16:46, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- Where would it be in context? QuackGuru (talk) 16:51, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- That's my concern. The context within the reference is rather subtle - they avoid labeling, but repeatedly contrast her words with what she does - she's an entrepreneur and capitalist rather than the activist and advocate that she markets herself as. Outside that context it's very easy to abuse. --Ronz (talk) 19:52, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- So it sounds like that won't work. And I don't like the full quote in the diff QuackGuru presented, for the reasons I said just above. I think that takes us back to:
Although Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands.
--Tryptofish (talk) 01:47, 14 April 2016 (UTC)- "Ms. Hari, who left what she said was a lucrative management-consulting job in late 2012 to pursue full-time activism and blogging, responded in an interview that "I'm not doing this to make money." She added: "This is my life. This is my passion. This is my calling. There is no way I would put myself on the line like I do because of money. This is all about what I've learned, and I have to tell everyone."[3] Here is the entire paragraph. There is no "Although Hari contends...". This has nothing to do with the Marketing strategy section and should not be restored to the Marketing strategy section. This is about her career change.
- See here. QuackGuru (talk) 15:45, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- So it sounds like that won't work. And I don't like the full quote in the diff QuackGuru presented, for the reasons I said just above. I think that takes us back to:
- That's my concern. The context within the reference is rather subtle - they avoid labeling, but repeatedly contrast her words with what she does - she's an entrepreneur and capitalist rather than the activist and advocate that she markets herself as. Outside that context it's very easy to abuse. --Ronz (talk) 19:52, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- Where would it be in context? QuackGuru (talk) 16:51, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- That takes it completely out of context, which is exactly what we should not be doing. --Ronz (talk) 16:46, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- See here. QuackGuru (talk) 16:17, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- @QuackGuru: In which paragraph, and worded how? --Tryptofish (talk) 16:03, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- I am ok with this. Brustopher (talk) 23:22, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
- But the problem with that is that the evidence clearly indicates that she is doing it for the money. It's certainly not from any love of informing people, because so much of what she writes is objectively shown to be hogwash. Guy (Help!) 22:55, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
It's not just about her career change, it's not even primarily about her career change. Her marketing strategy is to present herself as a researcher and advocate, despite her failings in both. So it is about her strategy, it's her trying to keep up her brand despite the evidence that she's not what she presents.
I do think "contends" is too far into SYN. What's wrong with just Although Hari says that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands.
? --Ronz (talk) 16:36, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- I think that's a fair point about contends→says, and that version would be fine with me. I don't have a strong opinion about the alternatives discussed just below. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:09, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I just got done with explaining the problem with the proposal. QuackGuru (talk) 01:14, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I know that you posted that, and I didn't mean to sound dismissive, nothing personal. It's just that I'm not seeing you persuade anyone else, and those issues don't seem like a big deal to me. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:18, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I provided verification for my proposal. If you still support the other proposal then I request verification. QuackGuru (talk) 14:59, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I know that you posted that, and I didn't mean to sound dismissive, nothing personal. It's just that I'm not seeing you persuade anyone else, and those issues don't seem like a big deal to me. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:18, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I just got done with explaining the problem with the proposal. QuackGuru (talk) 01:14, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I think that's a fair point about contends→says, and that version would be fine with me. I don't have a strong opinion about the alternatives discussed just below. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:09, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- The source did not say "Her marketing strategy is to present herself as a researcher and advocate, despite her failings in both." The paragraph I quoted has nothing to do with marketing strategy.
- There is no "Although Hari says that she is "not doing this to make money"..." That is taking the source out of context. The paragraph I quoted in only related to the career section. QuackGuru (talk) 16:40, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- I think a better spot is here. QuackGuru (talk) 17:22, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- 'The source did not say "Her marketing strategy...'" It's my summary of the source as a whole relating to the quote. The paragraph is part of a larger context: the section within the source, titled "Advocate or entrepreneur?", and the source as a whole, titled "Activist or Capitalist? How the 'Food Babe' Makes Money: Blogger Attacking Subway, Kraft and More Has Thousands of Fans, Plenty of Critics". That's why I think it is in context in Marketing strategy, and out of context in Career. --Ronz (talk) 18:43, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- "Hari who left her management consulting job in late 2012 to be an activist and a blogger full-time, replied in an interview that "I'm not doing this to make money."[2]"[4]
- The text is specifically about her reason she left her previous job. Your proposal was out of context. No source came to the conclusion "Although Hari says that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands." The part "Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands." is from another source. Trying to combine two different sources together is WP:SYN. The quote was her respond in an interview. QuackGuru (talk) 18:54, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- I hear what you're saying. I think you're ignoring the larger context. The AdAge source does indeed verify the information that you think is only in other sources, so there's no SYN at all. --Ronz (talk) 19:08, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- The source said "Ms. Hari, who left what she said was a lucrative management-consulting job in late 2012 to pursue full-time activism and blogging, responded in an interview that "I'm not doing this to make money." She added: "This is my life. This is my passion. This is my calling. There is no way I would put myself on the line like I do because of money. This is all about what I've learned, and I have to tell everyone."[5]
- The paragraph only verified this proposal. Trying to conduct your own review of the source is SYN. I previously explained it was her response in an interview. That's what the source said. I think we should not try to twist the text. QuackGuru (talk) 19:16, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- If you think the AdAge source does indeed verify the information you proposed then you would have no trouble providing verification. QuackGuru (talk) 14:59, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but if you are unable to look beyond a single paragraph of a source, you're wasting our time. Not everything is SYN and OR if it's scope is beyond a single paragraph. --Ronz (talk) 15:18, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- If we follow the AdAge source more heavily, we can remove "critics" completely, unless we are labeling the entire AdAge article as a critic, which we shouldn't. Can we put it in Wikipedia's voice completely, or is there some doubt?:
Although Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's profits by recommending organic and non-GMO brands with which she has affiliated marketing partnerships.
If we like, that could serve to introduce that critics point out that some of the products she recommends are made with GMOs (I don't recall which sources do this). --Ronz (talk) 15:29, 15 April 2016 (UTC)- I asked for verification since you claimed it was sourced. You and others are unable to provide verification from the source. You have not explained how other paragraphs verified the claim. Here is the the source. Please provide verification or withdraw your proposal. The source must make the claim not the editor. QuackGuru (talk) 15:35, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry. I'm trying to work with editors that actually read the sources. Please join us when you have the time. --Ronz (talk) 16:31, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- You are claiming I did not read the sources? I quoted the source and summarised it according to WP:V policy. If there is another source you are using to verify the claim then provide verification.
- User:The 321 kiddo stated "She said it. Nobody responded. End of discussion."[6] I am not the only editor who has concerns with the possible WP:BLP violation. QuackGuru (talk) 16:53, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Please do not misrepresent the situation. Let us know when you have time to read more than the single paragraph. --Ronz (talk) 17:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- See http://adage.com/article/news/activist-capitalist-food-babe-makes-money/294032/ I read more than the single paragraph. Please quote the part you are trying to summarise. QuackGuru (talk) 17:48, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- As soon as we change core policy to allow us to report the self-image of proven bullshitters as fact, we can make the edit. Guy (Help!) 22:50, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
- Is there anything in core policy you think forbids us from detailing the self-image of a person (bulshitter or not) in their biography? If anything surely how a person portrays themselves is something that surely should feature in their biography.Brustopher (talk) 00:01, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Yes. Per WP:UNDUE, when a proven bullshitter says they are not in it for the money, but the evidence shows that they are in it for the money, we don't report their self-serving statements without context. Guy (Help!) 00:06, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- WP:UNDUE is about significant viewpoints and means you shouldn't give Flat earthers a significant section in the article on earth. It doesn't however mean you shouldn't give significant space in the article on the head of the Flat Earth Society towards expounding their views. Hari's viewpoints are significant in an article about Hari, all the moreso when multiple sources cover them. Brustopher (talk) 00:18, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Says who? Answer that question with an independent source, and there's the possibility at least that we're no violating WP:SOAP]. --Ronz (talk) 15:31, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- WP:UNDUE is about significant viewpoints and means you shouldn't give Flat earthers a significant section in the article on earth. It doesn't however mean you shouldn't give significant space in the article on the head of the Flat Earth Society towards expounding their views. Hari's viewpoints are significant in an article about Hari, all the moreso when multiple sources cover them. Brustopher (talk) 00:18, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Yes. Per WP:UNDUE, when a proven bullshitter says they are not in it for the money, but the evidence shows that they are in it for the money, we don't report their self-serving statements without context. Guy (Help!) 00:06, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Is there anything in core policy you think forbids us from detailing the self-image of a person (bulshitter or not) in their biography? If anything surely how a person portrays themselves is something that surely should feature in their biography.Brustopher (talk) 00:01, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- As soon as we change core policy to allow us to report the self-image of proven bullshitters as fact, we can make the edit. Guy (Help!) 22:50, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
- See http://adage.com/article/news/activist-capitalist-food-babe-makes-money/294032/ I read more than the single paragraph. Please quote the part you are trying to summarise. QuackGuru (talk) 17:48, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Please do not misrepresent the situation. Let us know when you have time to read more than the single paragraph. --Ronz (talk) 17:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry. I'm trying to work with editors that actually read the sources. Please join us when you have the time. --Ronz (talk) 16:31, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I asked for verification since you claimed it was sourced. You and others are unable to provide verification from the source. You have not explained how other paragraphs verified the claim. Here is the the source. Please provide verification or withdraw your proposal. The source must make the claim not the editor. QuackGuru (talk) 15:35, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- I hear what you're saying. I think you're ignoring the larger context. The AdAge source does indeed verify the information that you think is only in other sources, so there's no SYN at all. --Ronz (talk) 19:08, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- 'The source did not say "Her marketing strategy...'" It's my summary of the source as a whole relating to the quote. The paragraph is part of a larger context: the section within the source, titled "Advocate or entrepreneur?", and the source as a whole, titled "Activist or Capitalist? How the 'Food Babe' Makes Money: Blogger Attacking Subway, Kraft and More Has Thousands of Fans, Plenty of Critics". That's why I think it is in context in Marketing strategy, and out of context in Career. --Ronz (talk) 18:43, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
It seems to me that this has been an awful lot of discussion over something that, frankly, is a rather small matter. I promise that I have read everything, nonetheless. But I still have not heard a convincing reason not to go with: Although Hari contends that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, from which she profits by recommending them above mainstream brands.
--Tryptofish (talk) 00:29, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Indeed. She can protest that she is not in it for the money, but we include the evidence that says she is. Just one more data point in the "FUD Babe says X, reality says not-X" narrative that defines her entire career. Guy (Help!) 10:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, but below it appears that other editors would rather fight than switch. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:47, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- But it's not just Hari's critics. We have the Advertising Age article pointing these issues out: "Part of her business model appears to be rooted in her affiliate-marketing partnerships. One of the companies she has recently plugged on her site is called Green Polka Dot Box, which sells home-delivered natural, organic and non-GMO foods." There's an entire section, "The FTC requires disclosure", about how she discloses her partnerships. Given that, I don't see why we shouldn't use:
Although Hari states that she is "not doing this to make money", Hari's profits by recommending organic and non-GMO brands with which she has affiliated marketing partnerships.
--Ronz (talk) 15:41, 18 April 2016 (UTC)- Hari states that she is "not doing this to make money", but there is no "although" part. "Hari's profits by recommending organic and non-GMO brands with which she has affiliated marketing partnerships." is a different claim.
- Please quote the part you are trying to summarise.[7] User:Tryptofish, I requested verification in order to properly summarise the text. User:Ronz was unable to provide V. QuackGuru (talk) 16:57, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- When you say someone wasn't able to verify information immediately after they just did, it becomes hard to take you seriously here at any level. Instead you've created the impression that you're intentionally disrupting the discussions, harassing editors, and preventing us from improving this article. If you don't want to create this impression, WP:FOC, WP:AGF, and work cooperatively with others.
- Your interpretation of V doesn't appear to match the actually policy. The material is verified. There are entire sections of the article about her partnerships. It's one of the main areas of focus in the reference, first introduced in the third paragraph and continuing to the second-to-last.
- We most certainly can summarize individual references, and groups of references as a whole. We need to be careful to avoid giving undue weight when doing so, but we must also be careful not to overlook main points. It's a main point. --Ronz (talk) 17:57, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- It should not be hard for you to quote the paragraghs you are trying to summarise if it is sourced.[8] QuackGuru (talk) 18:00, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- As I've already identified specific sentences, paragraphs, and sections, take a look at them and see what you think. --Ronz (talk) 16:55, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- At this point, my preferred outcome would be to leave her response out entirely. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:47, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- What is the consensus here? I agree with Brustopher and QuackGuru in adding this: "I'm not doing this to make money. This is my life. This is my passion. This is my calling. There is no way I would put myself on the line like I do because of money. This is all about what I've learned, and I have to tell everyone." It is from a reliable source and is her direct response to that criticism in the criticism section. Omnipum (talk) 23:30, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- It should not be hard for you to quote the paragraghs you are trying to summarise if it is sourced.[8] QuackGuru (talk) 18:00, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
OR?
Hari's critics have drawn attention to her affiliated marketing partnerships with organic and non-GMO brands, which she profits significantly from by recommending them above mainstream brands.[citation needed] The part Hari's critics and profits "significantly" may be OR. QuackGuru (talk) 15:54, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- You may have a point about the word "significantly, but a citation is there. Start reading the NPR article from "Other critics are less generous in their assessment, noting that Hari isn't just raising the alarm about food additives." Are you ok with keeping the bit about critics given this? We also have other sources of people criticising her market strategy later in the section. Brustopher (talk) 16:05, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
bannedbyfoodbabe.com
Unless there's a third party source demonstrating that there's something encyclopedic about bannedbyfoodbabe.com that is worth mention, I think we should keep it out per BLP, WP:SOAP, and POV. --Ronz (talk) 01:20, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- Found two news mentions and re-added. Prostetnic Vogon Jeltz (talk) 04:05, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- As a self-published source, I think the site itself should remain out. --Ronz (talk) 16:17, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously. Guy (Help!) 23:28, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- As a self-published source, I think the site itself should remain out. --Ronz (talk) 16:17, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- Found two news mentions and re-added. Prostetnic Vogon Jeltz (talk) 04:05, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Category issue, again
Please see: Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2016 April 17#Category:Diet and food fad creators.
Please remember back to Talk:Vani Hari/Archive 6#Pseudoscience category for earlier discussions about how Category:Advocates of pseudoscience was removed from this page in favor of making it a parent category of Category:Diet and food fad creators, which is currently a category of this page. An editor has objected to making it a parent category (because quite a few of the diet creators are scientifically credible), so I have opened Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2016 April 17#Category:Diet and food fad creators. I propose splitting the category, such that this page would be re-categorized as Category:Food fad creators. I hope that editors here will comment on the CfD proposal. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:20, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
- If it was already determined that this article should not contain the Pseudoscience category, why has it not been removed? --Omnipum (talk) 23:39, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- The consensus was that the category Category:Diet and food fad creators would be made a subcategory of Category:Advocates of pseudoscience, which, in turn, is a subcategory of Category:Pseudoscience. That would make it redundant and unnecessary to apply Category:Pseudoscience directly, but the page would still, by extension, be part of that category. So that was not a consensus that Category:Pseudoscience should not apply to this page. It has continued to apply all along.
- If it was already determined that this article should not contain the Pseudoscience category, why has it not been removed? --Omnipum (talk) 23:39, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- The problem has arisen that another editor has removed Category:Diet and food fad creators from Category:Advocates of pseudoscience. Therefore, I opened Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2016 April 17#Category:Diet and food fad creators and reapplied Category:Pseudoscience on a temporary basis until the CfD discussion is resolved. If you would prefer not to have Category:Pseudoscience appear here, but have a Diet-related category appear instead, you need to speak up at the CfD discussion. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:58, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
Gawker not a reliable source
I want to raise the issue that Gawker as not a reliable source on Wikipedia.
1. Gawker has been deemed an unreliable source several times in the past on the WP:IRS Noticeboard, and described as a tabloid, gossip site, and clickbait:
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_16#Huffington_Post.2C_Gawker_and_About.com
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_131#List_of_unusual_deaths
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_37#Gawker.com
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_180#Media_as_RS_for_their_own_controversies_.28GamerGate.29
2. Gawker is a blog with questionable editorial oversight. They admit that they do not fact check their articles:
- http://themoderatevoice.com/nick-denton-on-journalisms-future/
- https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/monkey-cage/wp/2015/11/05/gawker-got-pranked-kony-isnt-looking-for-peace-here-are-the-facts/
“Questionable sources are those with a poor reputation for checking the facts, or with no editorial oversight. Such sources include websites and publications expressing views that are widely acknowledged as extremist, that are promotional in nature, or that rely heavily on rumors and personal opinions. Questionable sources are generally unsuitable for citing contentious claims about third parties, which includes claims against institutions, persons living or dead, as well as more ill-defined entities. The proper uses of a questionable source are very limited.” WP:QUESTIONABLE “Editors must take particular care when writing biographical material about living persons. Contentious material about a living person that is unsourced or poorly sourced should be removed immediately; do not move it to the talk page. This applies to any material related to living persons on any page in any namespace, not just article space.” Omnipum (talk) 00:30, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- While Gawker is indeed dubious, it ought to be kept in mind D'Entremont is an analytical chemist with specialist knowledge and expertise. Furthermore her article and criticisms of Hari were covered by multiple other sources.[9][10] Therefore D'Entremont's criticisms should be kept in the article. Brustopher (talk) 00:45, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- If a source is not reliable how can it still be used? It appears to me that Gawker has never been considered a reliable source for Wikipedia articles. Shouldn't then the other sources be used instead of Gawker? SMH seems to be a reliable source at first glance, but not sure about BostInno. Omnipum (talk) 00:52, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Most of the archived discussions you linked rightly point out that whether a source is reliable depends on what it is being used for and who the author is. It's not a good idea to simply throw out everything that comes from one of the internet's largest blogs, which does have editorial oversight. In the case of d'Entremont, everything used is attributed directly to her. d'Entremont cites her sources, and has scientific training. We also have other RS's referencing the article, as the article is notable to the subject of criticism about Hari. If you have reason to suspect that the specific information provided in that article is unreliable or incorrect, I'd be willing to consider it, but eliminating all content simply because it originates at Gawker is neither reasonable nor Wikipedia's policy. Adrian[232] 05:23, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- What proof is there that Gawker has editorial oversight? I've read the opposite is true.
- Omnipum (talk) 16:19, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- "Questionable sources are generally unsuitable for citing contentious claims about third parties, which includes claims against institutions, persons living or dead, as well as more ill-defined entities. The proper uses of a questionable source are very limited.” WP:QUESTIONABLEOmnipum (talk) 16:29, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Agreeing with Adrian232. We have reliable sources supporting the d'Entremont reference. --Ronz (talk) 15:54, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Then reliable sources should be used instead of Gawker, which is not reliable. Omnipum (talk) 16:19, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, but the source appears reliable and we're qualifying it to be safe. To throw out a source for such reasoning would be a POV violation. --Ronz (talk) 17:24, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- How would that be a POV violation? As you know, the WP:NPOV policy still requires reliable sources be used: "All encyclopedic content on Wikipedia must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all of the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic." Furthermore: "The reliable sources guideline refers to a source's overall reputation for fact-checking and reliability--not the source's neutrality” Wikipedia:Neutrality of sources and “Neutrality requires that each article or other page in the mainspace fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources… Wikipedia aims to present competing views in proportion to their representation in reliable sources on the subject. This applies not only to article text, but to images, wikilinks, external links, categories, and all other material as well… Keep in mind that, in determining proper weight, we consider a viewpoint's prevalence in reliable sources, not its prevalence among Wikipedia editors or the general public."
- In other words - reliability doesn’t require neutrality, but neutrality requires reliability. This is why only reliable sources can be used, and Gawker is not one of them. Omnipum (talk) 18:30, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- You really haven't made your case to impeach this particular source - David Gerard (talk) 18:48, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Are you arguing that Gawker is a reliable source for wikipedia articles? Omnipum (talk) 19:11, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- You really haven't made your case to impeach this particular source - David Gerard (talk) 18:48, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, but the source appears reliable and we're qualifying it to be safe. To throw out a source for such reasoning would be a POV violation. --Ronz (talk) 17:24, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Most of the archived discussions you linked rightly point out that whether a source is reliable depends on what it is being used for and who the author is. It's not a good idea to simply throw out everything that comes from one of the internet's largest blogs, which does have editorial oversight. In the case of d'Entremont, everything used is attributed directly to her. d'Entremont cites her sources, and has scientific training. We also have other RS's referencing the article, as the article is notable to the subject of criticism about Hari. If you have reason to suspect that the specific information provided in that article is unreliable or incorrect, I'd be willing to consider it, but eliminating all content simply because it originates at Gawker is neither reasonable nor Wikipedia's policy. Adrian[232] 05:23, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- If a source is not reliable how can it still be used? It appears to me that Gawker has never been considered a reliable source for Wikipedia articles. Shouldn't then the other sources be used instead of Gawker? SMH seems to be a reliable source at first glance, but not sure about BostInno. Omnipum (talk) 00:52, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
I too agree with Adrian, the source is fine. Dbrodbeck (talk) 21:36, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Why is it fine here when Gawker has been deemed an unreliable source multiple times? Omnipum (talk) 21:44, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
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