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Former good article nomineeHenry Kissinger was a good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Kissinger Encomium

The Kissinger page reads like a paid publicity brochure. Any attempt to correct the record with verifiable sources is swiftly deleted unilaterally by TheTimeAreChanging. Here is a paragraph that I inserted (with sources) at the beginning that TheTimesAreAChanging deleted. If this keeps occurring, I plan to escalate this to Wikipedia.

"Kissinger's legacy, including the Nobel Prize Award, remains controversial. [2] Critics point to Kissinger's role in overthrowing the democratically elected Allende government in Chile;[3]; his knowledge and possible abetment of Project Condor, a program of repression and political assassination carried out by Chile, Argentina and Uruguay;[4] and his support of the Pakistani army during its slaughter of Bengalis in 1971[5] . — Preceding unsigned comment added by Malpaso (talk • contribs) 11:31, 5 August 2014 (UTC) "[reply]

You can't use other Wikipedia articles as a source, and your other sources are poor. This material is covered in depth in the article itself, so repeated attempts to insert POV language about the "slaughter of Bengalis" and some such to the lead can only be seen as POV-pushing on a BLP.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 16:33, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I don't use Wikipedia as a source. Since when is Time Magazine or the National Security Archives poor sources? I will continue make these edits and not be bullied. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Malpaso (talk • contribs) 17:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"slaughter of Bengalis" is not POV language. Do you dispute it occurred? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Malpaso (talk • contribs) 18:36, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"Slaughter of Bengalis" would undoubtably be a WP:NPOV violation, even if it the reliable sorces. Try again, if you wish to do so within Wikipedia policies. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 19:17, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I don't get it. In the article on Irving Berlin, it states Nicholas II, the new Tsar of Russia, notes Whitcomb, had revived with utmost brutality the anti-Jewish pogroms, which created the spontaneous mass exodus to America. Such words are very strong, but they are generally accepted by reasonable people as the only correct way to describe pogroms. Is there something different about Bengalis, or Kissinger, that makes it biased to call it "slaughter of Bengalis", even with reliable sources?
178.38.168.13 (talk) 02:14, 16 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I can confirm Malpaso's claim that the editor known as TheTimesAreAChanging is making tendentious editorial decisions, deleting criticisms of Kissinger on the basis that they come from bad sources. Among the sources he has rubbished are CNN and Christopher Hitchens. I have tried to add to the article lead a statement that several groups and individuals, from Hitchens to Code Pink, have tried to indict Kissinger for war crimes. TheTimesAreAChanging has deleted these on the basis that they are "just opinion", while having no problem with those opinions that praise Kissinger. I have tried to initiate a discussion with TheTimesAreChanging on his talk page, but he seems uninterested in justifying his actions. G.S.Bhogal (talk) 16:44, 14 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Code Pink? Are you serious? I am no great fan of Kissinger, but you seem to lack an elementary understanding of the relevant Wikipedia policies, e.g. WP:BLP.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 17:20, 14 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Third Opinion

A third opinion has been requested, but it isn't clear what the question is, because the above discussion has not been civil. It also isn't clear whether a third opinion is applicable, because more than two editors are edit-warring the page. Please state a concise and civil question and I will try to answer. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:19, 14 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The article as written is propaganda, not necessarily by the editor's design, but by the favoritism applied to official reports of Kissinger's career and the failure to credit any of the subsequent investigative journalism that has proven persistently over the decades how a legend of diplomatic genius conceals intrigue, bloodletting, and a willingness to dispense with democracy. Macdust (talk) 18:03, 13 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Criticism" or "Controversy" sections?

This hagiography almost completely lacks any mention of this man's imperfections and/or errors. I came to the page expecting to read some clear sections about them, and they are not even covered, even in a glossed-over manner. Apart from one line about Hitchens calling him a war criminal or some such. Huw Powell (talk) 04:40, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This is certainly a priority. It's exactly what I came here to read. 92.40.250.76 (talk) 02:02, 5 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Ditto. He is a controversial figure. 178.38.168.13 (talk) 03:09, 16 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The article is effectively useless because of the absence of a "Criticism" or "Controversy" section. From the dates of the earlier comments on this topic (see above) I suspect that such a section my have been included in an earlier version of this article and may have been removed. If so, it should be immediately restored.

How can Wikipeida even allow such an article without this essential component? Editors --- please give this your immediate attention. ---Dagme (talk) 20:49, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I also came here to see an explanation of the accusations against him. Even if they are not considered true by and large, it seems they should be mentioned as being a significant subject relating to him. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.174.72.23 (talk) 19:55, 12 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fluency in German

Kissinger was born in Germany, to a German family. I would be extremely surprised if he did not speak German "like a native". So I am perplexed by the comment that "he made the acquaintance of Fritz Kraemer, a fellow immigrant from Germany who noted Kissinger's fluency in German and his intellect". Kraemer may have noted Kissinger's intellect, but his fluency in German would have not been notable to Kraemer.Royalcourtier (talk) 06:18, 25 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"I would be extremely surprised if he did not speak German "like a native"."

I would too, considering that he IS a native. ---Dagme (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 09:33, 19 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You would have to go to the source cited (Isaacson, pages 39-48) to find the answer to that one. GeorgeLouis (talk) 23:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

edit request

There is a dispute as to if the following content should be placed in the opening section of the article. Govindaharihari (talk) 05:51, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

He is also infamous for his Realpolitik involving support for genocidal actions (as in the Bangladesh Liberation War) and military coups against democratically elected governments (such as Chile).

I am quite happy to discuss wording here, the original is not mine. What is fairly clear is that his policy vis-a-vis Latin America, Africa, and South Asia (all of which are mentioned in the body, and all of which have received more criticism than his Israeli or Vietnamese policy). Thoughts? Vanamonde93 (talk) 07:44, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yes thanks. Are there any WP:RS that agree with the requested edit? I can't see genocidal actions in the article, that is also a linking to genocide, so in reality, if you support the content you can just remove the word actions and Realpolitik and leave the actual detail which is that you support inclusion of, He is infamous for supporting genocide ? I think that is the basic question to consider this requested edit, is Kissinger really WP:RS infamous for supporting genocide ? Govindaharihari (talk) 08:24, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I should've read this bit before wading in. I forget that talk pages have newest at the bottom. Hopefully my newer version solves some of the issues. 2.223.35.45 (talk) 18:29, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The question isn't "is Kissinger famous for supporting genocide. The question is "is Kissinger famous for supporting Real Politik" What is Real Politik? There is a wikipedia article that says so, someone reading this wiki article might click on that to learn more. One part of Real Politic is ignoring ethics. Ignoring ethics leads to genocide. Is this original research? What do reliable sources say. The article on the bangladesh liberation war says genocide happened there. And that the USA, including Nixon and Kissinger supported Pakistan, who are the ones who engaged in the genocide. Assuming there are reliable sources for the info on real politik and the bangladesh liberation war, and maybe more of Kissingers other atrocities, those reliable sources could be used in this article to support a statement such as "Kissinger is famous for his Real Politik which led to genocides in Bangladesh etc. . . . " I will look for the reliable sources, if they don't exist tho, then that means take it out of the article. Popish Plot (talk) 19:27, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Going from Kissinger supported Pakistan to claiming that his politics led to a Bangladesh genocide is quite a leap, dont you think? You make it sound as if mass murder was done at his request, rather than simply ignoring what was going on for politics sake. There is quite a difference between the two. Bonewah (talk) 22:54, 25 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • :) I don't believe anybody is suggesting that he ordered a mass killing; but he ignored it, and US support allowed it to happen. Similarly in Latin America, although there US support was even more active. The source for Chile is this one,[1] others forthcoming. Vanamonde93 (talk) 04:18, 26 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Real politik leads to genocide, reliable sources say so. If (big if) reliable sources say Kissinger's support of Real Politik led to genocide, the article should say that. Does he support genocide? I doubt a reliable source has him saying yes to that! It's more likely he doesn't care either way since ethics aren't important to him due to his support of Real Politik. Popish Plot (talk) 16:28, 26 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Q: I'm mysified by the mention of HK's reaction to (1989) Tianamen Square Massacre as contributing to détente in the 1970's. Perhaps should be a reference to some other incident? 178.167.254.165 (talk) 01:19, 2 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Winn, Peter (2010). "Furies of the Andes". In Grandin & Joseph, Greg & Gilbert (ed.). A Century of Revolution. Durham, NC: Duke University Press. pp. 239–275. {{cite encyclopedia}}: |access-date= requires |url= (help)

Creepy

At the height of Kissinger's prominence, many[who?] commented on his wit. In one instance, at the Washington Press Club annual congressional dinner, "Kissinger mocked his reputation as a secret swinger."[89] He was quoted as saying "Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac."[90]

The illustration of his wit falls kind of flat. We merge from hearing nothing witty about a self-deprecating joke he may have told, to a biting remark that changes the direction of the innuendo to a very cynical one. Is this juxtaposition supposed to illustrate his skill with words? Or bury it? The overall impression is kind of creepy.

89.217.18.237 (talk) 19:10, 15 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The aphrodisiac quote badly needs sourcing. It's been attributed to him endlessly but did he say it? If he did, was it in the (someone suggested) Napoleonic sense, i.e. an aphrodisiac effect on women lusting after powerful men, or men experiencing power as an aphrodisiac, two entirely different propositions? Context is desperately needed here. sirlanz Sirlanz 04:56, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I doubt he actually said this. Note the current source probably doesn't meet WP:RS. Also, people have a weird habit of manufacturing the supposed quotes of famous people. Take Albert Einstein for instance. [1]. If someone doesn't produce a better source in five days I'll remove it. 23 editor (talk) 05:36, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Well, no, wait. If it's poorly sourced, it's long been poorly sourced; it's in the New York Times, 28 October 1973, in a sidebar entitled "The Sayings of Secretary Henry", bylined DuPre Jones. --jpgordon::==( o ) 05:47, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
All the better. Anything but Brainy Quote.com. 23 editor (talk) 05:52, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Power, he has observed, is the great aphrodisiac." NYT, 1/19/1971. Foreign Policy: Kissinger at Hub, Hedrick Smith. That didn't take much, just looking at Wikiquote and then a quick Google search. --jpgordon::==( o ) 05:57, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Recent revert

This edit removed content sourced to an excellent source, and therefore it has been reverted. Please discuss it here if you take issue with the source. The genocidal actions by the Pakistani army are very well documented; we have an entire article on the subject. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:56, 10 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

DESPITE - is so opinionated and WP:POV it should be avoided at all costs - I support that removal completely - Govindaharihari (talk) 21:32, 10 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Sourced. No consensus for rmv.--Polmandc (talk) 05:15, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Is this a joke? What is POV about "despite"? @Govindaharihari: Please make a proper argument. So far, you are just trying to push your own POV. - Kautilya3 (talk) 07:34, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No joke, WP:BRD.--Polmandc (talk) 01:43, 13 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think so. It looks WP:CHEESE to me. - Kautilya3 (talk) 04:39, 13 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
It is indeed quite opinionated. The source article uses words like "shameful" and admits multiple points of view, by noting that Bass's book "argues for" a characterization of genocide. A point of view sufficiently controversial it requires an entire book to argue for it should not be presented as objective fact, and certainly not in such an offhand fashion. RayTalk 10:00, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
What part of our sentence is controversial? The idea that genocide occurred in East Pakistan? Or the implication that Kissinger ignored it? - Kautilya3 (talk) 10:15, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Genocide is by definition a charged and opinionated word. Unless the situation was declared a Genocide by a reputable authority, such as The UN Security council, or a consensus of governments, then the word should not be used to describe an armed conflict.192.91.173.42 (talk) 17:54, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Says who? Our policies say that reliable sources are required for any statement. Reliable sources there are aplenty; the economist article that you keep removing, as well as numerous sources in the linked article. You're argument at this point sounds like "I don't like it", which is not a valid reason for removal. Vanamonde93 (talk) 18:10, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I would argue that if we are going to talk about Kissinger's support for Pakistan, we should word it in a more neutral way. My suggestion is "Kissinger's Realpolitik resulted in controversial policies such as CIA involvement in Chile and the US's support for Pakistan during the Bangladesh War." The "despite its genocidal actions" is an obvious POV violation and so should be avoided. Further, my change makes the claims about Pakistan consistent with the way we reference Chile, i.e. we make note of it and let the reader follow links to learn more.
I've said it before; I'm willing to discuss wording changes. The point made by the article, as well as several other sources, is that US support continued despite the genocide. We can't simply ignore that because it makes Kissinger look bad, because RS have given it coverage. If you can think of a nicer way to phrase this, I'd like to hear it. Vanamonde93 (talk) 19:44, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • What had Kissinger got to do with the alleged genocide? Nothing is the answer - this POV edit forces links to genocide and Bangladesh War into his article - what is his connection to this? How was he involved in this genocide and war? Why should these links be connected to him? Also, who is commenting this, where is the attribution? Are there multiple sources stating this fact, or just the one? Govindaharihari (talk) 19:51, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The connections is fairly obvious; he continued US political, logistical, and military support to the perpetrators of the genocide. More generally, Kissinger is notable for being secretary of state; we cannot discuss his policies/positions isolated from their impact. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:08, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
User:Vanamonde93 - Have you got multiple reports of this issues notability or just this one? Despite is so opinionated, where is it from? Who says this ? Your addition imo alleged an involvement to this genocide , that Kissinger had a role in it, please tell me what involvement he had? Did he do anything to do with this genocide? No - so why is these links being forced into his biography? Govindaharihari (talk)
If you think I am suggesting Kissinger was directly involved, you need to read my comments more carefully. My statement was very clear; we cannot discuss Kissinger's policy in isolation; its implications, where they are discussed by reliable sources, are not optional. Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:28, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Its not your "statements" it is your addition to the article This edit that asserts a connection between Kissinger and genocide - Have you User:Vanamonde93 got other sources commenting on this? if not attribution would be needed - the author is not wikipedia notable - Gary Bass - ? please - I don't have a care in this so please show me his involvement in this genocide , or that multiple reliable sources have reported this connection? - or lets remove it - Garry Bass - Govindaharihari (talk) 20:43, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
There are sources aplenty; Beachler, Donald (2007) 'The politics of genocide scholarship: the case of Bangladesh'; a book by Gary Bass (who is a scholar, and therefore as good a source as we can have); Beyond the “Tilt”: US Initiatives to Dissipate Bangladesh Movement in 1971, Ali Riaz, History Compass 3 (2005); another book, this one by christopher hitchens; and several more, if only people had bothered to look. They all say the same thing; that Kissinger overlooked the genocide, and continued to support Pakistan, despite knowing about it. What exactly are you trying to argue here? You first tried to claim this was POV; when this content was demonstrated to be necessary to NPOV, you question its verifiability; now that has been demonstrated, where are you going to go? Vanamonde93 (talk) 21:06, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Garry Bass Journalist is not wp:notable at all - So attribute it, name the commenter and and drop the POV "despite"Govindaharihari (talk) 21:09, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Your behavior is now becoming tendentious. You have ignored the three other sources I provided, and continue to insist that Gary Bass is not a scholar, when he is in fact a professor of international relations at Princeton University; [2] [3]. Vanamonde93 (talk) 21:33, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. @Govindaharihari: You exhibit no knowledge of Wikipedia policies. A source must be reliable, not notable. Gary Bass is a scholar from a reputable University and his book has had 10 glowing reviews in academic journals, and pretty much every newspaper and magazine in the world. You should WP:DROPTHESTICK and go find something else to do. - Kautilya3 (talk) 21:38, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Back off with the rubbish tendentious accusations - Gary Bass is not wikipedia notable and neither are his comments - Govindaharihari (talk) 21:39, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
So go ahead and attribute his opinions and comments - please don't present them as factsGovindaharihari (talk) 21:42, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Govindaharihari - additional sources were provided. Gary Bass as a Princeton scholar is notable. No need to flog this horse any more.--Polmandc (talk) 02:03, 13 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Nobel controversy in lede

@Vanamonde93: I side with the IP here [4]. Talking about the details of the controversy in the lead seems undue. - Kautilya3 (talk) 16:58, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Well, the wording is not perfect, but we can hardly present it as an uncontroversial award. Vanamonde93 (talk) 17:09, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there. Happy to talk about it here. :-) I'm not really that hard-over about the matter. The exact wording doesn't matter much to me. To confess, I first noted a POV tone in that the details given tend to add weight to an "anti" position. Given that so many controversies and points of view surround the man, paying extra attention to POV tone would be extra important in this article I think. Anyway, I noted also it was a little digressive. I based my initial rewording on that reason because those kinds of reasons tend to get people's backs up less-so than POV-based reasons. So anyway, there's both the POV argument and the digression argument for rewording.

I don't understand Vanamonde93's comment because the last wording Vanamonde93 reverted does present it as controversial. And, the wording not being perfect is a reason to improve it, rather than leave it alone. The reverted "..., which was controversial." wording directly satisfies Vanamonde93's desire to mention that it was controversial as well as the need to reduce digression and POV. It may be slightly awkward though. Does anyone else want to take a crack at it? 71.174.213.3 (talk) 17:23, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The word "controversial" is a WP:WEASEL word because it suggests you are holding back information. But it is ok to use such words in the lead, because the body provides the substance. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 18:10, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Although, the source says "controversial" directly, it's even in the source's title. So, it's not weasely here for that reason as well. It's straightforward, descriptive, and sourced.  :-) 71.174.213.3 (talk) 18:24, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Vanamonde93,
Based on the above discussion, I'm inclined to simply revert back to the "...,which was controversial." wording (with the ref). But, since you're the one who didn't like it, I want to offer you first dibs at finding a better way to fix the POV/digression issue. I'll sit on it for a little while to give you time before I go ahead and reinstate my (slightly awkward) wording. 71.174.213.3 (talk) 19:31, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate your willingness to discuss it. The two constraints in my mind are a) Not presenting the award as non-controversial and b) not using dodgy wording, (like non-controversial :-) If we want to cut down on length, though, that might be unavoidable. How about "Kissinger was awarded the 1973 Nobel Peace Prize for negotiating a ceasefire in Vietnam which was never actualized. Two members of the Nobel committee resigned in protest at the decision." Slightly shorter, and avoids the digression to Le Duc Tho, but keeps the more important controversy. Vanamonde93 (talk) 00:40, 19 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Controversial" by itself isn't weaselly in any way. The word is even used without difficulty in the 2nd paragraph of the lede and in other places in the article. The original words beat around the bush [5] and force the reader to infer that it was controversial. That does two things: 1) reader can too easily infer other things than was intended and 2) one of those other things is POV. It's much more encyclopedic to straightforwardly say "it was controversial", especially given that we have a strong ref for it.

The tizzy that two committee members worked their minds into is a detail best left out of the lede as off-topic for the lede. It also doesn't actually support that it was controversial very well because it was just two guys. Additionally, the fact that the plan ultimately didn't work is also best left out. It's a fact of life that things don't always work out. If the award was for the negotiation of the plan, then that's that. Mentioning "never actualized" in the lede again seems POV because it seems eager to cast the award in a certain light -- with a peripheral detail that only occurred after the fact and that he had much less control over. Lest you think I'm trying to be POV on the other (pro) side, I think both of those side details are indeed important and notable, but they're both quite adequately fleshed out in the text. Putting them so prominently in the lede is POV and also a distraction given that the lede is nice and tight (as it should be).

71.174.213.3 (talk) 15:49, 19 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have to disagree with you there. Kissinger's image in the literature is mixed at best, pretty negative in many sources. Putting the award in the lede with no clarifying detail is a problem, because it's supposed to be a summary of the article, and as such the summary can't have a different POV than the article does. If wordiness is the price to pay for that, well, it's worth it. There's so many articles with ledes that are a little longer than ideal, simply because they need to give due weight to the sources on the topic. Vanamonde93 (talk) 16:48, 19 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Right, mentioning only the award would indeed have a pro-POV. That's why we'd also say it was "controversial". The clarifying detail is that it was "controversial". "Controversial" (or some other equivalent word) is factual, it's directly from a strong secondary source, and without bias.

Regarding "the summary can't have a different POV than the article does", are you saying that the article has a POV?! Whoa! Back up there. It shouldn't. Actually, I don't think it does, but if it did, well that problem should be fixed first rather than copied into the lede. Also, I think you're implying that the current wording does have a POV -- the same as purportedly in the main text. If so, you agree with me that the current wording is POV, right? Well then, shouldn't we correct that POV?

And, "controversial" is your own word. You said it nicely when you said "The point is that the award was controversial" (I removed the double negative). That was perfect! It was straightforward, unbiased, and nicely encyclopedic. If that's the point, then we should say it.

Actually come to think of it, it also a matter of primary vs. secondary sources. Listing the two committee member's actions and by that vaguely implying that it was controversial is original research from primary source. The primary source is the source providing the facts of the members quitting. The OR is the conclusion (that it was controversial) implied by those facts. Primary sources and OR from them is forbidden. By saying "it was controversial" in the lede, we have a nice strong secondary source in support of it.

71.174.213.3 (talk) 03:55, 20 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I took another stab at it. I'm fairly pleased with it if I do say so myself.  :-) The "never actualized ceasefire" wording seemed to be trying to criticize the quality of the negotiated plan. I reworded that to be more of a "in the course of events it didn't pan out" kind of tone. I removed the original-research implied conclusion from a primary source and replaced it with the heart of the matter ("controversy") from a strong secondary source, which I cited. I think it's nice and tight now, with no POV (none that I can smell at least). It's also smoother, less awkward than the previous iteration. 71.174.213.3 (talk) 04:38, 20 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Controversy" is weaselly because it can mean too many different things; without further detail the statement is meaningless. The article does have a POV, in the sense that it gives a certain weight to certain sources. Ideally, that weight is appropriate; but that is not at issue. My point is that the lead needs to give the same due weight, and the version you created, while concise, goes too far in one direction. We are looking for "neutrality" with respect to reliable source material, not neutrality with respect to Kissinger. The current version sort of has that. Also, please read WP:TLDR. Vanamonde93 (talk) 21:39, 20 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Nice! I'm happy with your last fix. Regarding long windedness on the talk pages, it just goes to show that it takes a lot more time and effort to make something short, sweet, and readable rather than long and/or digressive -- as we've been struggling with here! :-)

No word in and of itself is automatically weaselly. A word isn't weaselly because it can have different meanings, all words have multiple meanings of course. The gist behind WP:weasel is disguising the evasion of a specific meaning.

Use of "controversy" here isn't weaselly, but it does beg the question of "why?" is it so. That naturally leads to a desire to explain why in situ. And that is the genesis of all digression!  :-)

WP:Due doesn't give us license to make a judgement about the subject and then frame our wording in that light. It's centered around not putting undue weight on "fringe ideas". So, it would apply if we focused an overly large portion of the article on a fairly inconsequential circumstance about him. If a source takes a POV, it's not okay at all to adopt it, even if a majority of sources take the same POV.

71.174.213.3 (talk) 08:14, 21 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Kissinger's role in Cyprus

I added some information, in a new section, on the role of Kissinger in Cyprus. It is a crucial issue Kissinger encountered as Secretary of State; an international issue still unresolved today, after at least 40 years. Users such as TheTimesAreAChanging from Illinois (edit of 28.06.2015) seem to regard the information or part as “of undue weigh” or dubious. Not at all the case.

The main source used is To Vima, issued since 1922, which is today among the most popular Greek newspapers (even if I am not a regular reader). The articles are contemporary to the events, available in a photo-reprint -if this is the right term, I mean in a photocopy-like form. The “dubious” passage (about Kissinger’s visits to Athens/ Ankara) is equally verifiable and important. I could translate it word by word. Any additional or even opposite reliable information on the issue is of course welcome. Deleting, though, entire parts including important references doesn’t help, Ι think. Any licensed relevant photo is also welcome. Routhramiotis/Ρουθραμιώτης (talk) 12:51, 5 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have added information from the official results of the investigations of the parliament of the Republic of Cyprus, in relation with the two Turkish invasions of Cyprus in 1974 and the coupRon1978 (talk) 23:36, 29 July 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtier1978 (talk • contribs)

The information from the official results of the investigations of the parliament of the Republic of Cyprus, in relation with the two Turkish invasions of Cyprus in 1974 and the coup are keep being deleted with out any explanation or discussion in the talk page. Hm....I am wondering why. Did I just found a sensitive spot here, that even 41 years after, the public shouldn't know? Ron1978 (talk) 08:59, 3 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtier1978 (talk • contribs)

at a glance, id say that the text in question is being removed because it is OR or non-neutral or both. There could be other reasons as well, thats just the obvious stuff. If you really want to expand this section, you should start by specifying what you think needs to be changed and why. Bonewah (talk) 17:57, 3 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have discussed the contributions that I have made, and the sources that I have added are official. They were also in harmony with the previous users contributions and discussions as well. They are keep being deleted without any explanations on what so ever. Based on discussions, in harmony with the previous talks and contributions and from official sources. What else some one can ask? If we add the fact that are keep being deleted with out any explanations on what so ever....Ron1978 (talk) 20:46, 3 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtier1978 (talk • contribs)

The content that I have added is from the sources that I have added, and in harmony with the previous users content. Of course I can add more sources if that is the issue and get more consensus from other users. I have being discussing in the talk page as well, as you can see. From the other hand, the ones that are deleting all the material that I have added, haven't discussed anything in order to come to a mutual NPOV agreement. One of them came with heavily insulting comments as well. You can check the comments between edits and what he said and judge by yourselfRon1978 (talk) 20:23, 8 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtier1978 (talk • contribs)

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BLP and Due weight.

BLP does not require sugar-coating anything supported by reliable sources. It does require giving due weight to all reliable sources. Can we please discuss massive removals of sourced content before implementing them? Vanamonde93 (talk) 21:44, 5 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Contentious POV-pushing in violation of WP:BLP

Kissinger and Ford effectively "green-lit" Indonesia's invasion of East Timor. Therefore, user Guccisamsclub has inserted the following claim into this BLP: "The invasion and occupation resulted in the deaths of nearly a quarter of the Timorese population from 1975 to 1981." Gucci assures us that his preferred estimate of 170,000 deaths during this period is "undeniable" according to all reliable "specialists". However, Guicci's own source—Ben Kiernan—appears to favor an estimate of 145,000. More importantly, this figure is far from undisputed. For example, F. Hiorth estimated that 95,000 Timorese died unnatural deaths from 1975 to 1980, while Robert Cribb notes in "How many deaths? Problems in the statistics of massacre in Indonesia (1965-1966) and East Timor (1975-1980)" that "there is a remarkable shortage of detailed testimony on Indonesian atrocities, except in the initial assault on Dili" and East Timor "does not appear—on the basis of news reports and academic accounts—to be a society traumatized by mass death ... the circumstance leading up to the Dili massacre of 1991 ... indicate a society which retained its vigor and indignation in a way which would probably not have been possible if it had been treated as Cambodia was treated under Pol Pot." The Commission for Reception, Truth and Reconciliation in East Timor (CAVR)—which is considered more reliable than the earlier indirect estimates based on flawed census data—casts further doubt on the 170,000 figure for 1975-1981 alone, as the latter greatly exceeds CAVR's documented total of 102,000 deaths throughout the entire period 1975-1999 (including significant atrocities during 1983-1984 and 1999) and is roughly equivalent to CAVR's hypothetical maximum of 183,000. Obviously, I could just add a different estimate, but this exceedingly minor footnote in Kissinger's career should not take on undue significance here—not even Suharto's biography gets into a debate over what percentage of the Timorese population died during the war he initiated, and the topic certainly isn't broached in the biography of any other Western official.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 08:22, 13 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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