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December 3

04:09:03, 3 December 2019 review of draft by Nawab Afridi


Nawab Afridi (talk) 04:09, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Nawab Afridi, You might wish to ask MJL, the reviewer who looked at your draft last, for feedback. They are very friendly and would almost certainly review it again if you left a note on their talk page. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:43, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Please guide me if the following profile OK?

06:37:19, 3 December 2019 review of submission by Xayns


Xayns (talk) 06:37, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

i have now added notable references

Xayns, The draft has been deleted so we cannot help you.Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 17:33, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:28:16, 3 December 2019 review of submission by Aheisk


Hello Wikipedia, my submission of an entry on Christopher Lloyd sometime ago was rejected. Christopher Lloyd is a very prominent Australian-Finnish professor with many achievements, including election to the Finnish Academy of Arts and Sciences. Now I have discovered that there is an entry for a young English person – Grace Blakeley – whose achievements are very scant compared with Christopher Lloyd's achievements yet she has an entry and he doesn't. Can you explain this to me please? Thank you. Aheisk.

Aheisk (talk) 08:28, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please see Wikipedia:Other stuff exists, Grace Blakeley is well sourced and passes notability guidelines. 12:32, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Request on 08:53:34, 3 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Megha101


Can i share the school establishment document with the support team of Wikipedia as a proof of existence as we don;t have much of presence online since it is a new school. Megha101 (talk) 08:53, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Megha101, That is not sufficient. We need published sources in order for them to be reliable. If published sources do not exist, the subject is not notable. Also, there is no Wikipedia support team that does what you suggest, just volunteer editors who review these articles. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:42, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 18:08:56, 3 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Sunnymish


Hi I got rid of the copyrighted material from the article I want to create, and was wondering how to try and get it published again, currently the edited version is in my drafts. Thanks any help would be great.

Sunnymish (talk) 18:08, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sunnymish. If you are asking about Draft:Manju Sheth, there is now a button on it that will let you submit it for review, but it would not be accepted in its current state. You may find Help:Your first article helpful. Concentrate on finding independent, reliable sources which prove that she is notable. Remove statements from the draft for which you cannot cite reliable, published sources. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:36, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

19:41:19, 3 December 2019 review of draft by 73.215.83.120


Hello, I am puzzled as to why my new page creation did not pass. Can you please let me know which references are needed? This page is for a company that has split from an existing company - Williams Lea Tag -- which already has an existing Wikipedia page. There is plenty of evidence of the company split, as seen in the references provided. These references are from neutral third parties including PrintWeek, campaignlive.co.uk and Marketing Interactive - none of which are "passing references", as the sources only talk about the company split. Please let me know what more I am supposed to provide.

73.215.83.120 (talk) 19:41, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please read the comments provided on the draft, in particular WP:NCORP. Mere existence of a company is not enough to prove notability, and the fact that it split from a company with a company with a page already does not matter, because WP:Notability is not inherited. All of your sources are coverage of routine business activities and press releases, which do not contribute to notability. See WP:CORPDEPTH. shoy (reactions) 15:48, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:53:25, 3 December 2019 review of submission by Tedfmyers


Hello, I would love to have some feedback on my article. I previously asked for help, but my question was archived before anyone was able to give me any comments. See here for my previous question: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2019_November_15#22:19:34.2C_15_November_2019_review_of_submission_by_Tedfmyers

To summarize my prior question, I believe that the subject of my article passes WP:NCORP due to sufficient number of significant, independent, reliable, and secondary articles cited. Would one of you kind reviewers take a look and give me your opinion on the matter?

Tedfmyers (talk) 20:53, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tedfmyers: Given you're asking for a second review, which means looking through all sources again, could you link here 3 (best) sources that you believe pass WP:GNG and thus WP:CORPDEPTH that are 1) reliable/reuptable 2) secondary/independent 3) significant/in-depth. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 21:23, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Hellknowz: Hi Hellknowz, thanks for the quick response! The three sources I'd choose are Source 7,[1] Source 13,[2] and Source 19.[3] (The Marketplace, Harvard Business Review, and Science Magazine articles). Hope this helps with the review process! Tedfmyers (talk) 23:48, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Kim, Jed (February 23, 2017). "Changing carbon from waste into gold". Marketplace. Retrieved 15 November 2019.
  2. ^ Satell, Greg (April 5, 2018). "Why Some of the Most Groundbreaking Technologies Are a Bad Fit for the Silicon Valley Funding Model". Harvard Business Review. Retrieved 15 November 2019.
  3. ^ Service, Robert (September 19, 2019). "Can the world make the chemicals it needs without oil?". Science Magazine. Retrieved 14 November 2019.
marketplace source is not in-depth; there are only a couple paragraphs about the company and half is by Kuhl. hbr looks decent; the article isn't directly about the company, but it ends up basically talking for half of it, including company's founding, funding, prototypes, plans. sciencemag is also not in-depth; there are barely two paragraphs about the company and aren't even exclusively about the company. I'm afraid that's one decent source (although I imagine editors may argue even in that one the company isn't the subject of the article, although I would argue that it's on the threshold of significant coverage). —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 10:18, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Hellknowz: Thank you for the evaluation, you’re helping me better understand the rules; especially the threshold for significant/in-depth coverage. I agree with you that the subject of an article doesn’t need to be main topic of the source material (as the WP:GNG states) - so the HBR article is a passable source (if not the other two I proposed earlier due to lack of coverage). Here are two different articles I believe are significant enough, and fulfill all other requirements: source 8[1] and source 11[2]. (Greenbiz and Vice articles). Both these articles spend multiple paragraphs discussing the environmental and business impact of the company.

References

  1. ^ Soltoff, Ben (October 16, 2019). "Opus 12 is one startup on a mission to convert CO2 into useful products". GreenBiz. Retrieved 14 November 2019.
  2. ^ Fekri, Farnia (April 28, 2017). "Kendra Kuhl Is Building a Device That Turns Pollution Into Products". Vice. Retrieved 15 November 2019.
These do look pretty good to me. They are heavy on quoting the company/persons but that's more or less fine. They are focused on the company's work and provide a good deal of detail and history. So I'd say this reaches the bare minimum threshold. Plus, there are a bunch of other sources to supplement. I might take a look at the draft later. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 22:37, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 4

04:06:29, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Suhriyani tribe


Suhriyani tribe (talk) 04:06, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Suhriyani tribe, This page already exists in the mainspace as List of Baloch tribes. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:38, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

04:49:09, 4 December 2019 review of draft by IJK193


I have cleaned up the article and I would like an extra hand to check it out. According to Wikipedia, it should be written from a natural point of view, I have addressed this. The article doesn't look promotional in content but written from the natural point of view but I still need an extra hand to check it out.

IJK193 (talk) 04:49, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

IJK193, Perhaps you mean a neutral point of view? Regardless, I see the issue as one of notability, i.e. who gets to have an article. I'm not sure what this guy has done to warrant a Wikipedia article, he doesn't appear to meet the musician notability guidelines. Some more sources are needed. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:36, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
CaptainEek, He has no business with WP:NMUSIC cause his, not a musician. He appears to meet WP:ANYBIO and WP:NMODEL due to this contribution as an executive and talent manager.--IJK193 (talk) 05:31, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

05:12:49, 4 December 2019 review of submission by Sonu07091996


Sonu07091996 (talk) 05:12, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'm afraid that this article will not be published. The company you are writing about does not seem to be notable. Sorry. I recommend you find another area of Wikipedia to edit, and hone your skills there! Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:28, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Can you guide me what should I do to publish the article, as I am unable to make it Out?

Publish it somewhere other than Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 May 6#04:46:51, 6 May 2019 review of submission by Krutika Samnani. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:15, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:59:25, 4 December 2019 review of submission by Ayushchandrakala


Ayushchandrakala (talk) 06:59, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ayushchandrakala, This seems to be an average person, which we do not cover. Wikipedia only has articles for notable people. That usually means that said person has received significant coverage in the media. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:43, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 08:20:42, 4 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Priyanka8971


I need to know why my drafts, articles are being rejected by the wiki, as there are many pages, articles of individual companies and brands, so don't they do the marketing and promote themself over wiki? Example links: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Teahouse https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Food_4_Less


Priyanka8971 (talk) 08:20, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Priyanka8971: Wikipedia articles are supposed to be written by volunteers, not company representatives. They are not social media pages or profiles that represent a company directly (see WP:NOTPROMO). Such editors are WP:PAID editors with a conflict of interest. The company you are trying to promote here was founded this year and the article has zero reliable sources to prove notability. shoy (reactions) 15:54, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Also asked and answered at Teahouse and at Priyanka8971 Talk page. David notMD (talk) 15:17, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:48:42, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Devanshmrc


Devanshmrc (talk) 08:48, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am working on this draft past six months, striving hard to publish it. OTRS is also recieved. Please help to get it published.

09:41:12, 4 December 2019 review of submission by Andreabartoli


This is my very first article on Wikipedia. I think now I have understood what was the problem. Please allow me to resubmit the edited article. Many thanks.

Andreabartoli (talk) 09:41, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

11:48:54, 4 December 2019 review of submission by Jain13tushar

Hi there, Shubham Mishra is one of the youngest security leaders in India. He is associated with many governments like U.P police, CBI and training many officials in various sectors of cybersecurity. Do consider this article for creation.

Thank You Jain13tushar (talk) 11:48, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Jain13tushar, Have considered. This person is not notable for inclusion, as he does not have enough independent coverage of him. We only write articles about a small number of people, and this dude does not meet our standards. I recommend you focus on another area of Wikipedia to edit, where you may hone your skills. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:44, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Request on 12:32:12, 4 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Pageturners


The Wikipedia entry for Cyclingworks Dublin has been rejected, on the basis that it's not notable enough for Wikipedia. Surely this isn't correct? Multinationals, universities, unions and firms representing over 400,000 people in a city with a population of 1.5 million have asked the Government to provide safe cycling infrastructure, in a drive that is continuing with new organisations joining - surely this is notable.

Pageturners (talk) 12:32, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Pageturners:, please read WP:NORG which explains that we assess notability by to what extent other reliable, independent publications have already written in depth about the subject. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 12:52, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

== Replying to this (I'm Pageturners) - here are some links about the project. It hasn't had a lot of press coverage, but on the website of the project itself you can see the logos of the 101 companies and organisations that have so far written to the Irish Government seeking safe infrastructure for cyclists in Dublin. A little of the press coverage: The Irish Times last year: "Dublin businesses call for safe cycling infrastructure in the city" https://www.irishtimes.com/news/ireland/irish-news/dublin-businesses-call-for-safer-cycling-infrastructure-in-city-1.3550891 ; the newsletter of Fórsa, the second-largest union in the country, representing civil servants: " Fórsa backs cycle network plan" http://forsatradeunion.newsweaver.com/designtest/14fjh4llsk8?a=3&p=54228001&t=30058761 ; Orwell Wheelers, Dublin's largest cycling club (Cyclingworks Dublin was started shortly after one of the club's members was killed on a training run) "Cycling Works Dublin Initiative: https://www.orwellwheelers.org/forum/8-miscellaneous-club-chatter/6845-cycling-works-dublin-initiative ; Dublin Chamber of Commerce: "Dublin Firms Join Forces to Demand Better Cycling Infrastructure" https://www.dublinchamber.ie/media/news/july-2018/dublin-firms-join-forces-to-demand-better-cycling ; Trinity College Dublin (the country's oldest and most prestigious university, founded by the English queen Elizabeth I) "Trinity supports campaign for improved cycling infrastructure" http://trinitynews.ie/2018/05/trinity-supports-campaign-for-improved-cycling-infrastructure/

I hope this sample is enough. Pageturners (talk) 08:55, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Pageturners. The size, popularity, or virtuousness of an organization is not what determines its suitabiliy for being a stand alone article in an encyclopedia. A good example of an article about an organization is Seacology. Contrast it and WP:WHYN with the reliable and independent information available about Cyclingworks Dublin. All that The Irish Times says about CyclingWorks, for example, is that Stephen McManus is its co-founder. Based on the sample you've provided, I concur with the other reviewers that the organization is not sufficiently notable for inclusion at this time. --Worldbruce (talk) 16:31, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

== The only reason for seeking an entry is that Wikipedia is useful because journalists and others check it as a source. Pageturners (talk) 12:30, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

14:46:41, 4 December 2019 review of submission by MarcoLaudato


Hello :)

I have amended the article according to the reviewers' criticisms. In particular, I have added two secondary sources (from European Mathematical Society) and I have removed the Mission Statement section. Moreover, all the external links have been removed from the body of the article.

Please, let me know if something else needs to be done!

Kind regards, Marco MarcoLaudato (talk) 14:46, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

MarcoLaudato, This institution does not appear to be notable. I.e. there are not enough sources that cover the subject with significant coverage. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:40, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


14:53:22, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Jtorpy


Jtorpy (talk) 14:53, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. Thank you for your feedback on the most recently submitted draft. I am wondering as to which statements (a couple examples would be helpful, not necessarily every case) qualify as "individual statement[s] of importance of judgment" to be removed might be? Much of the information in the article is most readily available via internal sources, but knowing which remaining aspects are problematic would help target the search for external sources

Hi Jtorpy. Avoid stating as facts things that are opinions (as to importance, as to why, and as to other matters of judgement). Furthermore, do not state opinions in Wikipedia's voice. Examples:
  1. "Perhaps most importantly, ..."
  2. "Due to the relative seclusion of Ann Arbor, ..."
  3. "From this legislature grew a tradition ..."
  4. "Hindsdale, like most of the early museum researchers, made important contributions ..."
  5. "This contribution ... cemented his legacy as a pioneer in ethnobotany."
--Worldbruce (talk) 16:07, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

17:04:34, 4 December 2019 review of submission by Jordifernanjo


I'm studying a web develope course in english and we have been asked to post an article in wikipedia or other wiki sites. I have choose the this topic as it's a game im playing rigth now. I have base the article in the information of the developer page and some articles as well as my own experience. I have been asked to provide some links but as im using my own experience and developers information, I don't reallly know what to provide. Jordifernanjo (talk) 17:04, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia articles are based on independent reliable sources, we have no interest in what the developer says, or in what you or I know about the topic. So the draft cannot be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 17:27, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

17:40:57, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Josef Hoffman

How to create an article ?

Josef Hoffman (talk) 17:40, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Josef Hoffman, Howdy hello! You will need to submit the article for review through the Articles for Creation process. You can do that by clicking the blue submit box on your draft. But I recommend you don't do that yet, as your article is not yet sufficient. It has no sources, and will likely be failed promptly. You need at least 3 reliable and independent sources in the article. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 17:44, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:22:11, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Amgad Mohb Amin Lewaia


Amgad Mohb Amin Lewaia 18:22, 4 December 2019 (UTC)

1:1

مساحة الارقام = 1 + 1 = 2

طول ضلع الارقام = 1 ÷ 2 = 0.5

0.5 : 0.5

مساحة الارقام = 0.5 + 0.5 = 1

طول ضلع الارقام = 0.5 ÷ 1 = 0.5


طول ضلع الارقام للارقام المتشابهة يساوي النصف

This is just nonsense. Ask in English or we can't help you. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:30, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:54:34, 4 December 2019 review of draft by AleLagos77


I would like to have my article for creation reviewed again. I made the requested changes and I think now it is good to be published. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:George_Hammer_III

Best Regards,

AleLagos77 (talk) 18:54, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

AleLagos77, See my comments on the draft. In essence, this article is still overly promotional, and I see no special reason why this dude should have an article, i.e. they do not meet any part of the biography notability guidelines. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:37, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:46:00, 4 December 2019 review of draft by Vickymarco01


I don't know how to make good references. Especially the little number that appears on a word and clicking on it you can directly go to the link or notes at the end of the page. Vickymarco01 (talk) 20:46, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Vickymarco01, Please see referencing for beginners. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:05, 4 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 5

09:37:25, 5 December 2019 review of submission by Smc institute


Smc institute (talk) 09:37, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft rejected, it is blatant advertising. Theroadislong (talk) 09:55, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:02:23, 5 December 2019 review of draft by Cheznous88


Is there an update for this page please?

Cheznous88 (talk) 10:02, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Cheznous88. Draft:Abass Dodoo has been in the pool to be reviewed since 30 September. The current backlog is between four and five months, so you can anticipate a review by some time in February 2020. You may continue to improve the draft while you wait. I've left a welcome basket of links on your talk page that may help you. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:49, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:57:39, 5 December 2019 review of submission by Ashleylutaylor

The drafted Forester Life Wikipedia entry was rejected. A new entry has been made on this account which has been rejected due to the previous drafted version. Can the previous drafted entry be deleted and for the version submitted by this account be reviewed please. Ashleylutaylor (talk) 10:57, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Correction it has been rejected because the topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 16:23, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:19:43, 5 December 2019 review of submission by Linda dominic

13:19:43, 5 December 2019 review of submission by {{SUBST:REVISIONUSER}


Linda dominic (talk) 13:19, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft has no sources and no indication of how he passes WP:GNG which is why it was rejected. Theroadislong (talk) 19:11, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:48:41, 5 December 2019 review of submission by Maceone


Misfit soto is an artist that is gaining momentum in los angeles hip hop music hes released 3 albums this year, i see other artists that nobody cares about on here. Why was misfit soto rejected?

Maceone (talk) 13:48, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please see other stuff exists, your draft has two sources, his own website and a Facebook page, articles require there to be multiple in-depth coverage in reliable independent sources such as newspapers or magazine articles. Theroadislong (talk) 16:27, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

19:08:34, 5 December 2019 review of submission by 95.205.101.145

why da fac i know clutch pop clutch go throttle bam drifting in 69moh


95.205.101.145 (talk) 19:08, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is an encyclopedia, and we welcome neutral and well written encyclopedic content. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:05, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

22:27:05, 5 December 2019 review of draft by Cheznous88


The wikipedia page of Abass Dodoo has followed the exact same format as his fellow band members I.e Ginger Baker, Pee Wee Ellis and Alec Dankworth. Abass Dodoo is even referenced on those published Wikipedia pages. It does not make sense that those three pages are accepted and published but Abass Dodoo's page is not being published. Even though it is the exact same format, style and content.

Can the inconsistency be explained and if it can not then the page needs to be published.

Cheznous88 (talk) 22:27, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Cheznous88, It is in the review queue. Please be patient for someone to review it. Also, be careful about comparing your article to existing ones. Many of the articles on Wikipedia were created before we began the rigorous Article for Creation process. That means a lot of ...honestly junk articles were created, and many of them have slipped through the cracks. You can read more about the logical fallacies involved in article comparison at WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:35, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


December 6

01:50:46, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Waveygrapes1001


I want this to go through to main page. Waveygrapes1001 (talk) 01:50, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Waveygrapes1001, Two words of content does not an article make. You need prose, you need references. You need to actually have content before it can be published into the main space. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:37, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

05:20:25, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Rajanm99


I request more editors to review and verify the facts and publish in article space.

Rajanm99 (talk) 05:20, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rajanm99, Your initial reviewer was correct. Heed their words and improve your article, then resubmit it. You have only one source that is not independent. You need at least 3 reliable and independent sources, and currently have zero. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:39, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

05:51:03, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Jpncan

I have added some references in order to pass the check, so please review again. Jpncan (talk) 05:51, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Jpncan, He still does not appear to be notable. Please see the notability guidelines for academics. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:48, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:59:00, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Sanjaysingh4334


Sanjaysingh4334 (talk) 06:59, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sanjaysingh4334, This person is not notable, per our guidelines. We don't cover everybody. I suggest you find another area of Wikipedia to work on. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 09:21, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

07:36:36, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Linda dominic


Linda dominic (talk) 07:36, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Linda dominic, Has no sources, and no obvious reason why they are deserving of an article per our notability guidelines. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 09:19, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 07:50:56, 6 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Sucker28

{{SAFESUBST:Void|


I am requesting an assistance because the recent article that I Published was rejected.

It had no content, and was of course rejected. If you'd like to make some edit tests, you should use your sandbox, accessible in the top right of your browser. If you'd like to write an article on a notable subject, we can guide you. But if your article has nothing meaningful in it, we can't do much. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 09:16, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hari Krishnan Nair born on 11/10/1976 in India. He completed his Masters degree from Mumbai. He is the son of late K K Nair a profound trade union Leader from Naval Dockyard Mumbai. Mr.K K Nair is well know among the trade union leaders he also served as Naval Dockyards Co-operative bank's Director Post in the year 1988. He worked very closely with other famous trade union leaders like Samuel Augustine and Datta Samanth who was the leader for Kamghar Agadi union. Mr. Hari krishnan Nair also followed his father's principles but he was quite good at writing. He is the Author for WHO AM I which is been published on Kindle bookshelf even had pen down few Life Inspirational Quotes on kindle bookshelf. His passion towards singing and even released an Album called Ormakal which got above fifty thousand views on social media and over 1000 comments. He is the founder for an eCommerce platform in India called Jummanji.

His vision is to build the future infrastructure of commerce. Aim is to enable hundreds of millions of commercial and social interactions among the users, between consumers and merchants, and among businesses every day. Quite Aggressive person and razor focused towards his target.

Early Life Hari was born in mumbai, India, on october 11, 1976.[3] His father use to work in Naval Dockyard and mother, a homemaker.[8] Hari krishnan Nair attended R K Talreja college and graduated as a BA in economics in 1994. He even completed MBA from Indian Institute of Business Management.


Work profile: Currently in Kenya(Nariobi) working with a Office Automation company since 2015. He is passionate about writing composing and singing.He is the author for "WHO AM I" and "My Best Friend" which is published in amazon Kindly bookshelf. Even written few Life Inspirational Quotes can share one quote “We experience our lives like able persons. But end up with inability of taking the risk” ― Hari Krishnan Nair, He is even the founder for eCommerce platfrom in India called jummanji


Personal life

Hari Nair is married to,Prinitha a gold medalist in Master of Commerce from Salem Periyar university(Tamil Nadu). They have two kids a daughter and son. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Linda dominic (talk • contribs) 11:16, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Linda dominic, Please don't post article content here, only links to pages with content. Are you asking a new question? What do you need? Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:34, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 11:29:38, 6 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Bibeksijapati



Bibeksijapati (talk) 11:29, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

11:32:18, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Smwoolen


Can someone please help me with this article? I’m new to drafting articles and not really sure why it has been declined. I very much would appreciate any help given. Thank you.

Smwoolen (talk) 11:32, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Smwoolen, Please see Fall Out Boy for an example of a good article on a band, which you could in part emulate. Your article does not currently meet our standards for formatting, writing quality, and neutrality. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:35, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

14:18:33, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Emery.geyer


Greetings, I am trying to get an article published that is just a factual statement about Vola Guitars and their CEO Shawn Cho. Although they do not have the historical background as other guitar manufacturers such as Fender, Gibson, etc., they still are a guitar brand led by an industry pro in Shawn Cho. Plus, since they are a younger company, the internet is not littered with third-party articles that I can use as references, but there are a few.

I understand that "notability" and "reference-able" information is required, however, if you look at some other guitar brands on Wikipedia - Caparison Guitars as an example - their Wiki article was accepted, but is now flagged as "contains content that is written like an advertisement", yet is still up & live. I just think that a double-standard exists here and would love some help on creating a factual article, that passes the requirements to be accepted and published as a Wiki article.

I have updated my last denied article. Where can I show people this updated article and get some help on it without it being deleted before someone can help?

Please understand, I am not trying to be difficult and I LOVE Wikipedia!!! Maybe I am just bad at word-smithing ??  :/

Thank you!!!

Emery.geyer (talk) 14:18, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Emery.geyer. Wikipedia is forever a work in progress. It contains high quality articles and poor quality articles. The existence of an article does not mean it meets Wikipedia's requirements, has been "accepted", or should exist. It may mean only that no one has gotten around yet to fixing it or deleting it. Existence is not a good excuse to create additional unsuitable pages. The essay WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS may help you understand why. Wikipedia is not a business directory and may not be used for advertising, promotion, or public relations. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:37, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

14:30:31, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Aryeh2


Aryeh2 (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, this draft article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:International_Association_of_Coaching

appears linked to the profile for Thomas J. Leonard: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_J._Leonard

There is another organisation this man founded which also has a profile on wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_Coach_Federation

The page above, named 'Draft:International_Association_of_Coaching' appears to be set for a review. I have added to the original draft and wonder whether it is best to await a Review, or simply delete it and recreate it as a new page??? Haven't dealt with a Draft page before so don't fully understand the best way to proceed.

Thanks. --Aryeh2 (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aryeh2. You many continue to improve the draft while you wait for it to be reviewed. There is no reason to delete it. You can find more information about drafts at Wikipedia:Drafts. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:58, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

15:38:41, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Sucker28


Sucker28 (talk) 15:38, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sucker28: Do you have a specific question? JTP (talk • contribs) 19:07, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

19:00:56, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Grasarlia


My favorite color is the color of the clouds during sunset. I eventually decided I should name it, so I was going to put it on Wikipedia for the world to see. But I'm wondering if I should scrap it because it seems that if I'm going to make a new article, it must be about something that already exists. Grasarlia (talk) 19:00, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Grasarlia: Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. JTP (talk • contribs) 19:06, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grasarlia (talk • contribs) 19:17, 6 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 7

03:23:41, 7 December 2019 review of submission by LonB

User:Theroadislong kindly reviewed my draft for a new article about a new company here in NYC. I would appreciate a bit more specific feedback about which aspect of this article seems to not be neutral. I spent a lot of time trying to research reliable news sources. This company has ads all over the New York City subway and bus system and I felt this was well worth inclusion in Wikipedia, especially since I was able to find so many articles about them. I'm happy to do the leg work and to try to adjust tone or to do more research, if you wouldn't mind helping me understand which areas to clean up. Thanks! --LonB (talk) 03:23, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

LonB (talk) 03:23, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is promotional... "The website's insight engine analyzes thousands of datasets in real time to assist customers when buying or renting a home" sourced to a press release, press releases are not reliable independent sources. Theroadislong (talk) 08:53, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:50:08, 7 December 2019 review of submission by 115.118.115.46


115.118.115.46 (talk) 06:50, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The article was deemed purely promotional and there's no further assistance we can provide unless you have a specific question. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:42, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

07:27:36, 7 December 2019 review of submission by 37.41.145.246

I want to see this article as an encyclopedia article with it's original content.Please help me rectify this article before it is deleted, post me some tips into my Mac. 37.41.145.246 (talk) 07:27, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Well what you need here are some sources. Wikipedia articles are built on sources, such as book reviews. If you can look up and find at least 3 book reviews, we can go from there.You may wish to read the Wikipedia article for Diamonds Are Forever (novel) or The Fountainhead to get an idea of how an article about a book should be written. The article as is needs to be entirely rewritten and structured like a typical Wikipedia article. You cannot just have a plot summary. You need at least a reception section, discussing reviews of the book. If you cannot find reviews, then the book is not notable, i.e. we cannot give it an article. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:55, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:59:04, 7 December 2019 review of submission by Shaik Safiya


Shaik Safiya (talk) 10:59, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

May i know why my article was rejected, the reason behind that and what are the sufficient notabilities for an article to include in wikipedia

@Shaik Safiya: The rejection links to the page that explains what is expected. You would need proper sources, like described at WP:GNG: "significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject". —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 11:47, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:23:15, 7 December 2019 review of submission by Nawab Afridi


Nawab Afridi (talk) 13:23, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


I hope you have done much better than this guy but I think a person who has dedicated his life for well-being of underprivileged and marginalized communities and who daily faces threats for being an advocate of religious minorities at least deserved to be highlighted on wikipedia. I wish we could be able to honour such person in his life, not after his death.

@Nawab Afridi: Wikipedia has precise guidelines for miniumum article criteria, which are outlined in notability. We are an encyclopedia and this means having quality sources for all the content. There is the bare minimum of sources required for a stand-alone article and the vast majority of people do not reach this threshold, many whom happen to be distinguished persons by outside measures. But Wikipedia does not base articles on any such (subjective) criteria like someone's fame, importance or the need to honor them. This simply is not the purpose and goal of Wikipedia and we cannot accept articles unless they are sourced by at least multiple independent reliable in-depth sources. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:40, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Hellknowz: I have been using wikipedia for last 15 years and I know very well how distinguished profiles are added in this website. I don't wish to criticize many existing profiles but it is a separate matter. It is a bit weird for me that an activist whose nobility and notability has been globally accepted through a noble prize, does not qualify for wikipedia. If noble laureates are even not worthy to be highlighted on wikipedia then who else can achieve some space here. Anyways, you may please delete this draft. I have no complaints.

18:51:13, 7 December 2019 review of submission by Anaya1970


Hello I want to know with more details why my submission was denied. Thank You.

Anaya1970 (talk) 18:51, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anaya1970. Draft:Fabian Alexander Ortega was declined because Wikipedia doesn't publish biographies of all authors, only those who are notable. The draft supplies no evidence that he is notable (suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). --Worldbruce (talk) 19:48, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:56:32, 7 December 2019 review of submission by 2409:4042:271C:617E:908E:1618:E20E:C5F1


2409:4042:271C:617E:908E:1618:E20E:C5F1 (talk) 18:56, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This seems to be an average person, like you or I. We don't cover everyone, only those who have recieved notable coverage in reliable sources, i.e. the media. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:26, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:18:25, 7 December 2019 review of submission by Olle0031

I think that since James channel dead meat has more than 3 million subscribers i think that this article should be allowed on wikipedia Olle0031 (talk) 20:18, 7 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Olle0031. That rationale does not follow consensus. See the essay Wikipedia:WikiProject YouTube/Notability#Principles and more importantly the guideline Wikipedia:Notability (people). --Worldbruce (talk) 00:00, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 8

01:16:22, 8 December 2019 review of draft by Mdsjm


Hi, I did editions on the article I am working on, based on the comments from the reviewer. I wrote a text addressing issues asked by the reviewer in the same draft I am working on, is the reviewer going to be notified so he/she can see the text? Or I have to contact the reviewer in a different way?

Thanks!!!

Mdsjm (talk) 01:16, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Mdsjm, If you'd like to talk to the reviewer, you should leave a message on their talk page. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:24, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Ok @CaptainEek Thank you very much!

--Mdsjm (talk) 02:56, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:54:03, 8 December 2019 review of draft by Dani Ivanov

Dani Ivanov (talk) 10:54, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dani Ivanov, You need more sources that cover the subject, as well as more inline citations. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 18:52, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:23:59, 8 December 2019 review of submission by Alieneggs


Alieneggs (talk) 13:23, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comment being handled at Wikipedia:Teahouse ~~ OxonAlex - talk 14:14, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


14:08:29, 8 December 2019 review of submission by CraigMc1979


Have added multiple citations to meet criteria of notable, as well as references to other relevant achievements.

- first Nigerian to have obtained a PhD in Computer Science - responsible for the creation of Nigeria's first internet registry and Top Level Domains (TLDs)

referenced https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adenike_Osofisan who odly enough credited this articles subject with her being able to be the first Female Nigerian to do Computer Science http://ir.library.ui.edu.ng/bitstream/123456789/1471/1/ui_ina_transforming_osofisan_2011.pdf CraigMc1979 (talk) 14:08, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 9

03:49:13, 9 December 2019 review of submission by CraigMc1979


All changes made as per reviewer suggestions.

CraigMc1979 (talk) 03:49, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


06:53:46, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Swapnil021994

I have made enough citations to cover the remarkableness/Notability of the subject, he is a renowned photographer in India and was associated with some significant ventures far and wide.

what else do I have to include as all the available information on the web has been included as references. Swapnil021994 (talk) 06:53, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:56:32, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Swapnil021994

I have made enough citations to cover the remarkableness/Notability of the subject, he is a renowned photographer in India and was associated with some significant ventures far and wide.

what else do I have to include as all the available information on the web has been included as references. Swapnil021994 (talk) 06:56, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

07:44:44, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Jelenaelek

Hello.... the latest reference changes I made to this article are still under review, but the previous two times the article got rejected. I keep getting "not enough resources" as a reason, but I stumbled across this company bank and they have only 2 references and both are from their website. I am trying to understand what kind of references get a pass if my article gets declined again.

Jelenaelek (talk) 07:44, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:35:27, 9 December 2019 review of draft by 169.149.242.168


hey, anyone have any additional info please help me to creating this article, thank you.169.149.242.168 (talk) 08:35, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, check to see if he meets the requirements of WP:NACTOR - most typically, have they had significant roles in multiple notable films, television shows, stage performances, or other productions.
Secondly, your draft was rejected as it didn't really have enough information, other than that they're an actor, and the films he was involved in. You could include (sourced) biographical information etc. ~~ OxonAlex - talk 11:33, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

169.149.242.168 (talk) 08:35, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

09:37:43, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Felixchery

I just started an article called 'Kenya Diary'. It's meant to be a summary of all events/news happening in my country everyday but i got a decline with commentary that it is not fit for Wikipedia.

Can someone kindly tell me what is wrong with that. I have read the rules on news reporting and I can't seem to see the reason why it was declined based on those rules.

Felixchery (talk) 09:37, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Felixchery, it has been declined because Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. A summary of events happening isn't the purpose of Wikipedia. There are lists of events that exist and are encyclopedic, but these will be lists of events with existing articles, that fit a theme - for example List of events at the O2 Arena is fine, but a list when every event that has taken place there would not be. ~~ OxonAlex - talk 11:22, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:27:45, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Ramzaleewohoek


Hello, I'm the Public Relations agent for Carlos Daniel Delgado Vazquez. He has been a political candidate for two different parties in Québec, Canada and he's been involved in Mexican Politics. The Quebec school board has published articles on him, Vanier College as well and I genuinely think he's an extraordinary person. I'm willing to work on the format of the article as much as needed, but I don't think the reason given by David Moreno is legitimate.

Best wishes,


Ramzaleewohoek (talk) 10:27, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with David Moreno that the topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. He may be "extraordinary" but Wikipedia requires in-depth coverage in independent sources to establish notability. You also need to declare your conflict of interest. Theroadislong (talk) 11:09, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:50:27, 9 December 2019 review of submission by 117.195.85.106


117.195.85.106 (talk) 10:50, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Do you have any questions?
You posted here two days ago, and nothing has changed since then.
Unless you can show that you have received significant coverage in reliable sources, you can't have an article here
Please stop resubmitting the article - websites are available if you want to host a CV, but Wikipedia is not one of them ~~ OxonAlex - talk 11:25, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

11:22:16, 9 December 2019 review of submission by Queenkong1

Because I want to approved Queenkong1 (talk) 11:22, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia requires in-depth coverage in independent sources to establish notability you have no such sources. Theroadislong (talk) 11:25, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:46:22, 9 December 2019 review of draft by Millie Vago


Millie Vago (talk) 13:46, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I wante to know why is it taking so ling or if I had to make more changes, please. Thank you!!

You have not addressed the issues yet, namely that your draft is still full of unsourced marketing puffery for example "an AIl Management Software that serves Worldwide top Agencies and Consultants" " one of Argentina's fastest growing digital agencies, among other businesses" "passing 7 final exams in one call" " an motivational blog that became popular as posts started being published in various international newspapers" "recognized as a next potential billion dollar company." "He has non-traditional thoughts about religion, government systems, human extinction, currencies, territorial borders." "Since young, he felt a social responsibility of giving others equal opportunities" "As a hobby, he sometimes writes and speaks about self development and how to break paradigms" Theroadislong (talk) 13:52, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

December 10

00:40:10, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Ahjazzer


I would like to continue working on this draft (I wasn't aware that I was submitting an incomplete draft that was supposed to be complete—I thought I was submitting an incomplete draft for advice). I would hate to do this all over again and have it rejected b/c I had too many format mistakes yet again. Is there anyway I can get the text that I submitted today back so I can work on it again? Ahjazzer (talk) 00:40, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

01:04:15, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Eugenia Sawin


I would like to add images to the article David Sawin. Also I would like to add more important biographical information about the subjects's gallery representation in New York at the Virginia Zabriskie Gallery and that he is in a book about the gallery's 50th anniversary.Eugenia Sawin (talk) 01:04, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Eugenia Sawin (talk) 01:04, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Eugenia Sawin, Howdy hello! I see that your article is no longer a draft, so you're better off asking for help at the Teahouse. But since you've asked, I'd say that you can go ahead and make those edits. For the picture, if you have a free image (i.e. an image you took yourself, or have permission from the photographer to use) you can upload it using Wikipedia:File Upload Wizard. If he is in a book about the 50th anniversary, you could probably use that as a source in the page. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:33, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

01:31:53, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Ahjazzer

I would like to continue working on the submission that I erroneously submitted earlier today. Is there anyway that it is still available? Ahjazzer

Ahjazzer (talk) 01:31, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ahjazzer, Are you referring to your sandbox? If so, you are free to keep editing it. It was declined as a test, but you are free to remove the AfC tag and improve it. You could then re-add the AfC tag at a later date when you want it to be reviewed. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Mmitin

I need a help to create the article.

I took as examples 2 existing pages:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anglo-American_School_of_Moscow https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_School_of_Moscow

And I created an article about the third international school in Moscow in the image and likeness.

What else do I need to add?

Mmitin (talk) 04:13, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Mmitin, Well, you need more sources for one. Those sources need to be reliable and independent, i.e. not affiliated with the school. You also need to remember that this is an encyclopedia, not an ad platform. We aren't trying to sell schools, we're trying to present a neutral and formal take on them, in a context that is useful to the general reader.
By the way, are you affiliated with the school in any way? Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:21, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:35:55, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Prachurapp


Prachurapp (talk) 06:35, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:13:05, 10 December 2019 review of draft by 123.49.14.217


I created a draft article on Bangladesh Competition Commission. I added much information, content, references as well as data from many websites. Still my article got declined. I need to know why this is happening and also need help in the same.

123.49.14.217 (talk) 08:13, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please see referencing for beginners on how to properly use and format references. References need to be included inline next to hte information they support. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:37, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

09:19:02, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Gorlapraveen123



For the article submitted (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:IndiaRxiv) to wikipedia, please help me where i need to rectify. I have provided all the reliable resources. As I was one of the core member in organisation, in which the articles describe, I have given best resources and needed references.

Gorlapraveen123 (talk) 09:19, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Gorlapraveen123, For starters, you have a conflict of interest. I have posted more info on your talk page about how to deal with that.
For the article, most of the sources are just from the subject's website. That is not tenable. You need independent sources. In order to show notability, you need independent coverage in at least 3 reliable sources. It also seems overly promotional to me. The language should be neutral. An encyclopedia covers a subject from a disinterested perspective, and formally. It does not seek to show off any part of the subject. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:36, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

09:21:41, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Amit Srivastava


Amit Srivastava (talk) 09:21, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Why you are purposefully declining articles on Pushpendra Kulshrestha? Whereas you immediately approve the articles on Islamic terrorists. What is your agenda?

  1. The draft was indeed purposefully declined - every decline is done for a reason
  2. Our "Agenda" is whether a draft meets our notability requirements
  3. The draft's secondary (newspaper, books etc - not court papers) sources don't cover Pushpendra himself in enough detail. You need multiple, secondary, in-depth (10+ lines on him) sources that are also independent (which also rules out most interviews) and reliable.
  4. I hadn't noticed an AfC-wide plan to prioritise articles about Islamic terrorists, presumably ones without suitable sourcing - please give examples so I can review them. Nosebagbear (talk) 11:11, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

10:58:32, 10 December 2019 review of submission by TonyWestling-Dataspelsbranschen


Hi David.moreno72.

I followed your guideline and advice on talk page, and tried to follow WP:LISTN with companies only listed on Wikipedia. I deleted all URLs.

Can I resubmit Draft:Swedish Video Game Industry? Please can you tell me what else I need to do in the article?

Wish you all the best

Tony TonyWestling-Dataspelsbranschen (talk) 10:58, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

TonyWestling-Dataspelsbranschen, as it seems to have become more of a list article, rather than a directory, I've resubmitted it. There are no guarantees the reviewer at the end agrees with me though. ~~ OxonAlex - talk 12:31, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I've also moved it to Draft:List of Swedish video game developers, which I think better reflects the content. ~~ OxonAlex - talk 12:34, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Why is this list necessary when we have List of video game developers? (VG project consensus has established to allow only notable articles/entries.) This article would be a split from it but I don't see a clear reason why it's needed. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:22, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

15:36:45, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Caraalee

I made adjustments to make the language as unbiased as possible and reduce the amount of promotional language. Any further suggestions would be helpful. Caraalee (talk) 15:36, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


15:57:10, 10 December 2019 review of submission by 87.238.210.51


87.238.210.51 (talk) 15:57, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Note: Previously-deleted A7 and expired draft, copy-pasted and AfC banner removed by IP. Probably a G11. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

16:46:41, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Frakes928


Adjusted the notability based on wikipedia musician notability standards. This should satisfy #6 & #7 of the notability standards based on being a prominent member of at least two individually prominent ensembles, and showing the prominence of Freestyle Kingz.

Frakes928 (talk) 16:46, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Frakes928, You still only have three sources. That is not sufficient. Also, if his ensembles do not have articles currently, you must prove that those ensembles are notable. In general, most of the article lacks inline citations, which needs to be remedied. If sources backing up the info cannot be found, then the article is not notable. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:26, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


16:58:03, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Slasher2point1


Slasher2point1 (talk) 16:58, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Slasher2point1, Our way of changing the title of a page is to "move" it. We call them moves because we move the page and its history to a new title. Its based on how the server backend works. You can move a page if you have made enough edits and been around long enough by using the "more" dropdown menu near the top of a page and changing it. Luckily, I see you've figured out how to do that already! Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

To whom it may concern,

I was wondering if you could help fix the title for my page. I made a page for actor Tommy Nelson, but the heading is listed as "Thomas Daniel Nelson" his full name, but I meant for it to be "Tommy Nelson." I am having trouble fixing it and was wondering how I go about doing so? Thank you.

Sincerely,

Slasher2point1

20:10:52, 10 December 2019 review of submission by 2.30.139.228


2.30.139.228 (talk) 20:10, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


22:20:17, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Frakes928


Added yet another news story in the T Town Music section with a Dallas Morning News article about the ensemble's notability

Frakes928 (talk) 22:20, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


23:10:29, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Monmouth1946


I need help placing the citations by number in the actual text of the article. I have no idea as to how to proceed. Also I was informed that it reads like an obituary. I have made it a much smaller submission and have tried yo keep it as much plain fact as possible. Any help in correcting the article would be greatly appreciated Thank You

Monmouth1946 (talk) 23:10, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

23:16:03, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Lilymj42

I wrote an article on Trudy Comiskey, and it keeps getting declined, so I fix the error and resubmit. The latest review, someone told me that it wasn't a good topic for an article, though I believe it would be as she has many followers on TikTok, and is very funny (in my opinion at least), and is a star vball player

Lilymj42 (talk) 23:16, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


02:44:13, 11 December 2019 review of submission by Frakes928


Found and added a number of citations highlighting both music ensembles and solo work for Tite's career Frakes928 (talk) 02:44, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


04:31:00, 11 December 2019 review of submission by Epiphyllumlover


Epiphyllumlover (talk) 04:31, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,

I found some reliable sources not yet mentioned in the article, but a reviewer put on a "Stop" button that I believe was unwarranted. How can I get the stop button removed from the article so I can continue to improve the article with the additional sources for eventual re-submission? For reference and a listing of the additional sources, see the end of the discussion on User_talk:RoySmith#Lutheran_Indian_Ministries, the new ones are the books by Wengert and Atkins, and the article in the star phoenix. Thank you for your consideration.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 04:31, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

05:18:36, 11 December 2019 review of draft by Ccccchaton000


How do I delete this. (kind of want to cry but eh :b) Ccccchaton000 (talk) 05:18, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

06:01:34, 11 December 2019 review of submission by Goforexcellence


The company website is updated. Could you re-review? Also feel free to tell me what would be required to make it published? thanks Goforexcellence (talk) 06:01, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]


08:28:09, 11 December 2019 review of draft by 84.46.52.229

Could somebody with admin rights please "add" (=history merge) the deleted (expired PROD 2016) Kim Iverson with an o to this draft with an e? The birth date on d:Q6408835 needs a better reference than imported from a deleted enwiki page, and I'd like to know which of many US radio stations were considered as "notable" on the deleted page. While at it please also check File:Kim-041.jpg, maybe it can be recycled with a "move to commons".
–84.46.52.229 (talk) 08:28, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:58:38, 11 December 2019 review of submission by Jordifernanjo


Good morning, As I told you few days ago, I need to have this article published before Christmas. I don’t understand why it is rejected and what should I do to publish it. I would be glad if you could help me.

Regards, Jordi

Jordifernanjo (talk) 08:58, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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