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16:0916:09, 17 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ m New Horizons ‎ →‎Objectives: "budget issues" -> "the expense"

15:4315:43, 15 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ Faraday cup ‎ →‎In plasma diagnostics: uses current

20:3320:33, 19 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ Aida El-Khadra ‎ →‎Awards and honors: cap current
20:3220:32, 19 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ Aida El-Khadra ‎ →‎Research and career: cap
20:3220:32, 19 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ Aida El-Khadra ‎ →‎Research and career: cap
20:3220:32, 19 February 2024 diff hist −20‎ m Aida El-Khadra ‎ cap. None of these are proper nouns.

02:5502:55, 23 January 2024 diff hist −387‎ Super.com ‎ Remove advertising copy

22:4122:41, 29 November 2023 diff hist −12‎ Gram ‎ →‎History: I don't see how giving the French word for "weight" clarifies anything
20:1820:18, 29 November 2023 diff hist −637‎ TSA PreCheck ‎ Remove advertising copy

15:2915:29, 28 November 2023 diff hist −55‎ Nuclear engineering ‎ →‎What nuclear engineers do: remove inappropriate external link

22:5022:50, 17 November 2023 diff hist +60‎ Selenium ‎ Write out "selenium", not "Se", when used as a ordinary noun in a sentence
22:4422:44, 17 November 2023 diff hist −9‎ m Selenium ‎ →‎Toxicity: remove "actually"
00:1900:19, 17 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Soviet–American Gallium Experiment ‎ →‎Baksan Experiment on Sterile Transitions (BEST): cap

18:2318:23, 15 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Boarding pass ‎ →‎Bar-codes: cap

21:2721:27, 12 September 2023 diff hist −9‎ Bethe–Salpeter equation ‎ "actually" does nothing here

20:0220:02, 9 September 2023 diff hist −135‎ Albacon ‎ →‎Future Albacons: not a helpful section

20:5220:52, 24 August 2023 diff hist −7‎ Positron ‎ →‎Artificial production: there is no need to introduce an abbreviation here

18:5918:59, 23 August 2023 diff hist −18‎ Graduated cylinder ‎ →‎Measurement: "would be" -> "is"

20:1220:12, 4 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ Cetylpyridinium chloride ‎ →‎Medical use: cap
20:0620:06, 4 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tonsil stones ‎ →‎Cause and Diagnosis: cap

17:1017:10, 23 June 2023 diff hist −6‎ Tectonic uplift ‎ →‎Isostatic uplift: would be -> is

21:5721:57, 21 June 2023 diff hist −13‎ Ozone ‎ →‎Reactions: No need to rename the common word "half-life" to "HLT", which is never used in any case. No need to introduce "ACH" when it is never used, and it's not clear what it's abbreviating anyway.

17:4017:40, 31 May 2023 diff hist +1‎ Ethylene glycol ‎ move sentence to a somewhat less random position

17:1117:11, 30 May 2023 diff hist −105‎ Ash River ‎ remove non-sequitur current

18:2218:22, 18 May 2023 diff hist −57‎ Jitsi ‎ →‎Limitations: Remove advertising copy

16:2616:26, 17 May 2023 diff hist −16‎ m Hearing conservation program ‎ utilize -> use
16:2216:22, 17 May 2023 diff hist −4‎ Hearing protection device ‎ →‎Exposure limits: utilize -> use

18:4618:46, 16 May 2023 diff hist 0‎ m RTU ‎ cap

15:0315:03, 22 March 2023 diff hist −318‎ Hull loss ‎ This is so vague as to be useless. What does "could reach $250M" mean? Like, that's the largest anyone ever paid? And without a citation, there's no way to find clarity.

16:1916:19, 20 March 2023 diff hist −12‎ m Inertial confinement fusion ‎ →‎Hot spot ignition: fix piped link that doesn't need to be piped

15:4415:44, 10 March 2023 diff hist −149‎ m Indefinite and fictitious numbers ‎ →‎Other: Neither reference says it is over four billion, and the second reference doesn't even have anything to do with this (maybe it used to, but since it's undated, that doesn't help much)
15:4215:42, 10 March 2023 diff hist −164‎ m Carl Sagan ‎ →‎Sagan unit: The notion that it's at least 4 billion seems to be a construction of Wikipedia editors. It's certainly not "technically" true, since there is no standards body defining it. Also the first reference had nothing to do with this.
15:3115:31, 10 March 2023 diff hist +13‎ m Indefinite and fictitious numbers ‎ →‎Specific values used as indefinite: pipe 110 to the article about the number

15:3115:31, 9 March 2023 diff hist 0‎ Brown pelican ‎ →‎Predators and parasites: cap

17:0217:02, 20 February 2023 diff hist +1‎ St. Louis County, Minnesota ‎ →‎Climate and weather: close quote

21:4621:46, 14 February 2023 diff hist −399‎ Digital object identifier ‎ →‎Resolution: Remove references to the Firefox plugin since it is obsolete
21:4321:43, 14 February 2023 diff hist 0‎ Digital object identifier ‎ →‎Display: cap

02:4202:42, 10 February 2023 diff hist 0‎ Red meat ‎ →‎Diabetes: cap
02:4202:42, 10 February 2023 diff hist −6‎ Red meat ‎ →‎Cardiovascular disease and stroke: there is no reason to introduce this abbreviation here
02:2402:24, 10 February 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Marine chronometer ‎ cap

16:0916:09, 7 February 2023 diff hist −64‎ Red Hat (disambiguation) ‎ →‎Other uses: one link per entry

15:3415:34, 2 February 2023 diff hist −8‎ Transuranium element ‎ utilize -> use

15:2715:27, 1 February 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Earth mover's distance ‎ →‎PyTorch Implementation: cap
15:2715:27, 1 February 2023 diff hist 0‎ Earth mover's distance ‎ →‎Equivalent Form: cap

19:3019:30, 24 January 2023 diff hist −452‎ Smoke signal ‎ Remove paragraph about fire signaling which isn't about smoke signals at all. Make list with "people people people" flow better with piped links

17:3117:31, 23 January 2023 diff hist −15‎ Mariana Trench ‎ "hypothetically" is unnecessary in a sentence that has "if ... were"

21:2321:23, 15 January 2023 diff hist −4‎ OS-level virtualization ‎ →‎{{Anchor|IMPLEMENTATIONS}}Implementations: Utilizing -> Using
21:2221:22, 15 January 2023 diff hist 0‎ m OS-level virtualization ‎ cap

22:3622:36, 4 January 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Codependency ‎ →‎History: cap

18:5518:55, 16 December 2022 diff hist 0‎ Muon tomography ‎ →‎Non-proliferation: cap
18:5418:54, 16 December 2022 diff hist −28‎ m Muon tomography ‎ Utilize -> use

14:2714:27, 1 December 2022 diff hist 0‎ 2022–2023 pediatric care crisis ‎ →‎Contributing Factors: cap

21:2121:21, 29 November 2022 diff hist 0‎ Helium-3 ‎ →‎Tritium decay: cap
21:2021:20, 29 November 2022 diff hist 0‎ Helium-3 ‎ →‎Terrestrial abundance: cap

22:1222:12, 15 November 2022 diff hist +1‎ Molecular solid ‎ →‎Electrical properties: add another missing letter (weird...)
22:1122:11, 15 November 2022 diff hist +1‎ Molecular solid ‎ →‎Electrical properties: add missing letter
22:1122:11, 15 November 2022 diff hist 0‎ Molecular solid ‎ →‎Electrical properties: cap
22:0922:09, 15 November 2022 diff hist 0‎ Molecular solid ‎ →‎Van der Waals forces: cap

14:2714:27, 17 October 2022 diff hist −9‎ m Daylight saving time ‎ →‎History: Remove fluff word "actually". It just "did not change the clocks".

14:0014:00, 3 October 2022 diff hist −6‎ 2022 Hunga Tonga–Hunga Haʻapai eruption and tsunami ‎ →‎January 2022: cap, and avoid introducing an abbreviation which is only used once

19:4019:40, 2 October 2022 diff hist −10‎ Flag of Madison, Wisconsin ‎ cap, and let image show at default (user-chosen) size

19:0719:07, 7 September 2022 diff hist +17‎ Frank Drake ‎ →‎Career: Pipe link for E=mc2 for superscript

15:0115:01, 15 August 2022 diff hist 0‎ Isotopes of hydrogen ‎ cap

18:0018:00, 12 August 2022 diff hist −27‎ CEB ‎ one link per line
17:5917:59, 12 August 2022 diff hist −166‎ CEB ‎ Shorten some entries

18:1318:13, 8 July 2022 diff hist −76‎ .ms ‎ →‎Usage: does not need to be a link
18:1318:13, 8 July 2022 diff hist −47‎ .ms ‎ →‎Usage: Do not need two examples, does not need to be a link

22:0322:03, 20 June 2022 diff hist 0‎ Xenon ‎ →‎Nuclear fission: cap
22:0122:01, 20 June 2022 diff hist −92‎ Xenon ‎ →‎Commercial: This statement of unit conversion is unnecessary and confusing

19:4619:46, 18 June 2022 diff hist −9‎ Jesse Sullivan ‎ remove "actually", which adds nothing to this sentence

19:5419:54, 10 June 2022 diff hist −15‎ m Bragg peak ‎ →‎See also: no reason to pipe this link

21:0621:06, 24 May 2022 diff hist 0‎ Luca ‎ →‎Arts and entertainment: cap

03:2903:29, 23 May 2022 diff hist −50‎ Automotive safety ‎ →‎Unused safety features: there have been cars with rear-facing seats, so remove this uncited claim
03:2803:28, 23 May 2022 diff hist 0‎ Automotive safety ‎ →‎Lights and reflectors: cap

18:0518:05, 16 May 2022 diff hist −8‎ m Foveon X3 sensor ‎ "Utilization" -> "Use"

02:0302:03, 8 May 2022 diff hist −1‎ Basford, Nottingham ‎ Undid revision 1073580233 by 171.33.200.182 (talk) Tag: Undo
02:0202:02, 8 May 2022 diff hist +2‎ Basford, Nottingham ‎ Undid revision 1073580303 by 171.33.200.182 (talk) Tag: Undo
02:0202:02, 8 May 2022 diff hist 0‎ Basford, Nottingham ‎ Undid revision 1073580413 by 171.33.200.182 (talk) -- this IP address seems to make bad edits, and so I'm guessing this change is a bad one too Tag: Undo
02:0002:00, 8 May 2022 diff hist −5‎ Victory in Europe Day ‎ Undid revision 1060436255 by 171.33.200.182 (talk) -- addition of "axis" looks like vandalism to me, and I'm surprised that it has been here for 5 months Tag: Undo

21:5221:52, 2 May 2022 diff hist 0‎ Eikonal equation ‎ →‎History: quotes, cap

20:5020:50, 5 April 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Tropical year ‎ →‎20th and 21st centuries: not a proper noun, uncap
20:4820:48, 5 April 2022 diff hist −90‎ Tropical year ‎ Make a sentence more clear. Remove questionable linkage to calendar eras. Unwrap a sentence from parentheses.
16:1316:13, 5 April 2022 diff hist −4‎ m Fermilab ‎ This is all of them

17:1617:16, 14 March 2022 diff hist +389‎ Talk:List of counties in Minnesota ‎ →‎Historical counties in other states?: new section

09:0109:01, 22 February 2022 diff hist 0‎ JPEG XL ‎ →‎History: cap

15:4115:41, 21 February 2022 diff hist −5‎ m Radon mitigation ‎ →‎Methods of radon gas mitigation: Don't define "MV", which is never used

03:5503:55, 9 February 2022 diff hist −839‎ Dark energy ‎ →‎Direct observation: I really don't think this dubious speculation needs to be highlighted here

20:2920:29, 28 January 2022 diff hist −455‎ G-10 (material) ‎ →‎Hazards: This looks like an advertisement, and it is also incomprehensible, what with the undefined acronyms

02:3802:38, 18 January 2022 diff hist −20‎ m Voyager program ‎ →‎Scientific instruments: Utilized -> Used (same meaning, fewer syllables)

02:0202:02, 16 January 2022 diff hist −54‎ Great white shark ‎ →‎Shark bite incidents: don't need to repeat the whole hypothesis just stated in the same paragraph

20:2820:28, 12 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Megafauna ‎ cap
20:2520:25, 12 January 2022 diff hist +10‎ Carboniferous ‎ →‎Rocks and coal: gigantism is about large humans. Pipe this link to megafauna

22:5422:54, 11 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ m COVID-19 pandemic ‎ →‎2020: cap

01:1401:14, 3 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ Sexually transmitted infection ‎ →‎Main types: cap

00:4400:44, 2 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ Nepal Sambat ‎ →‎Historical Usage: cap
00:4200:42, 2 January 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Astronomical basis of the Hindu calendar ‎ →‎{{Anchor|chandramana}}cāndra māna: thirtieths -> thirtieth

19:3719:37, 27 December 2021 diff hist +2‎ m The Matrix (franchise) ‎ →‎Screensaver: issue -> problem

04:2204:22, 22 December 2021 diff hist −13‎ Bang ‎ →‎Other uses: and also now...

13:5613:56, 8 December 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Thermal insulation ‎ →‎Buildings: cap
03:3503:35, 8 December 2021 diff hist +31‎ Alcubierre drive ‎ Despite the headline of The Debrief article, the article clearly states that they have *not* constructed it Tag: Reverted

18:4718:47, 1 December 2021 diff hist 0‎ Battle of the sexes (game theory) ‎ cap

15:1715:17, 29 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Structure of liquids and glasses ‎ cap

03:2503:25, 28 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Structure of liquids and glasses ‎ →‎Crystalline SiO2: cap
03:2403:24, 28 November 2021 diff hist −24‎ Structure of liquids and glasses ‎ →‎Other techniques: cap, and don't define any of these acronyms, since they are not used
03:2303:23, 28 November 2021 diff hist −5‎ Structure of liquids and glasses ‎ →‎Theories of Glass Formation and Criterion: cap, punct, don't define "CN" (never used)
03:1703:17, 28 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Structure of liquids and glasses ‎ cap

03:4803:48, 16 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Life insurance ‎ →‎Unit Linked Insurance Plans: cap, punct
03:3303:33, 16 November 2021 diff hist +1‎ Whole life insurance ‎ →‎Liquidity: punct
03:3203:32, 16 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Whole life insurance ‎ →‎Participating: cap
03:3103:31, 16 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Whole life insurance ‎ →‎Cash values: cap
03:3103:31, 16 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ Whole life insurance ‎ →‎Level Premium: cap

21:2521:25, 2 November 2021 diff hist −83‎ HP-35 ‎ →‎Calculator trivia: remove duplicate information. This is above in prose.
21:2321:23, 2 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ HP-35 ‎ →‎History: cap

13:1113:11, 29 October 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Hydrogen-like atom ‎ →‎Solution to Dirac equation: cap

17:2817:28, 22 October 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Levasseur PL.8 ‎ →‎Transatlantic flight: It seems very likely that "4000 litres" is only good to two digits at most, so the gallons should only have two digits of precision (maybe one)

04:3804:38, 20 October 2021 diff hist −10‎ Clifford D. Simak ‎ →‎Themes: Definitely not literally

21:0821:08, 29 September 2021 diff hist −1‎ Galvannealed ‎ →‎Uses: cap, sp

13:5113:51, 3 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Torsion (mechanics) ‎ cap

20:3920:39, 2 September 2021 diff hist +1‎ WBIG (AM) ‎ punct
20:3820:38, 2 September 2021 diff hist −1‎ m WBIG (AM) ‎ It's -> Its
14:0714:07, 2 September 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Humidity ‎ →‎Electronics: avoid using "specific humidity" here as a general adjective-noun, because it is also used as a technical term, defined above

14:2814:28, 25 August 2021 diff hist +16‎ Toroidal moment ‎ →‎Anapole dark matter: clarified "tree level"

00:3000:30, 16 August 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Sunbeam ‎ cap Tag: Reverted
00:2600:26, 16 August 2021 diff hist 0‎ Sunbeam ‎ →‎Crepuscular rays: cap Tag: Reverted

20:4820:48, 9 August 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Phosphorescence ‎ →‎Materials: cap

21:2921:29, 5 August 2021 diff hist 0‎ Unsharp masking ‎ →‎Implementation: cap
21:2421:24, 5 August 2021 diff hist −9‎ m Charge-coupled device ‎ →‎Sensor sizes: remove "actually"

19:3019:30, 27 July 2021 diff hist −247‎ Gas ‎ remove this sentence, which refers to an undefined "this image", and is too detailed for the introduction, as it is getting into the ideal gas approximation

21:2421:24, 26 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ Brass Elephant ‎ →‎Building Status: cap

21:5121:51, 19 July 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Phosphor ‎ quotes not needed
21:4921:49, 19 July 2021 diff hist +5‎ Phosphor ‎ →‎Lighting: grammar

20:3920:39, 15 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ Potassium-40 ‎ →‎Banana equivalent dose: cap
20:3920:39, 15 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ Potassium-40 ‎ →‎Banana equivalent dose: cap

20:3320:33, 12 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ Frost ‎ →‎Gallery: cap
20:0820:08, 12 July 2021 diff hist −13‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ No need to introduce this abbreviation, which is never used
20:0720:07, 12 July 2021 diff hist −373‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-deuterium and other types: Remove sentence tagged {{why}}
20:0520:05, 12 July 2021 diff hist −628‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-deuterium and other types: Remove note 8, which is completely tangential. Remove note 9, which gives a very wrong figure and then goes on to be overly poetic.
20:0320:03, 12 July 2021 diff hist −9‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-deuterium and other types: rm "actually" - fluff word
20:0220:02, 12 July 2021 diff hist −12‎ m Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-deuterium (d-d or dd) and other types: not necessary to give two ways of abbreviating "deuterium-deuterium" in the heading
20:0120:01, 12 July 2021 diff hist −30‎ m Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ Changed all "about 207" to "207"
20:0020:00, 12 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-tritium (d-t or dt): cap
19:5919:59, 12 July 2021 diff hist −5‎ Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Deuterium-tritium (d-t or dt): remove another "about" and add a necessary comma
19:5419:54, 12 July 2021 diff hist −6‎ m Muon-catalyzed fusion ‎ →‎Problems facing practical exploitation: "about" is not needed. "2.2" is understood to be precise to two significant figures

20:1320:13, 7 July 2021 diff hist −4‎ m Software crisis ‎ use "use"

03:4803:48, 1 July 2021 diff hist +1‎ Finger snapping ‎ →‎In culture: punct
03:4603:46, 1 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Shock wave ‎ →‎Terminology: cap
03:4003:40, 1 July 2021 diff hist −26‎ Blast wave ‎ →‎Damage: death is not an injury. Remove overwrought modifiers

06:4706:47, 21 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ AF ‎ →‎Other uses in Science and technology: cap

22:1422:14, 18 June 2021 diff hist −6‎ m Water intoxication ‎ →‎Pathophysiology: no point in defining this
21:5621:56, 18 June 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Thermal insulation ‎ →‎Buildings: rm extra spaces
21:5221:52, 18 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Thermal insulation ‎ →‎Definition: cap
21:4121:41, 18 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Thermal insulation ‎ cap
17:1917:19, 18 June 2021 diff hist −13‎ m Periphrasis ‎ The whole article is technical, so there's no point in beginning a sentence with "techncially,".

15:4515:45, 17 June 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Ed ‎ →‎Places: cap
15:4115:41, 17 June 2021 diff hist −13‎ Ed (software) ‎ →‎Features: "in addition" didn't really make sense here.
15:3915:39, 17 June 2021 diff hist −65‎ Ed ‎ →‎Arts and entertainment: shorten entry, fix typo
15:3815:38, 17 June 2021 diff hist −63‎ Ed ‎ →‎Other uses: shorten entries
15:3715:37, 17 June 2021 diff hist −70‎ Ed ‎ →‎Businesses and organizations: shorten entries
15:3715:37, 17 June 2021 diff hist −159‎ Ed ‎ →‎Health and medicine: shorten entries
15:3415:34, 17 June 2021 diff hist −5‎ m Sirius visualization software ‎ →‎Visualizing molecular dynamics trajectories: no point in defining this
15:3415:34, 17 June 2021 diff hist −233‎ Sirius visualization software ‎ →‎Access and download: not a directory of links
15:3215:32, 17 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Slide (wind instrument) ‎ cap
15:3115:31, 17 June 2021 diff hist −2‎ Slide (wind instrument) ‎ Undid revision 1015519206 by 2600:6C51:7C7E:F5D3:9166:773B:4DE3:D393 (talk) Tag: Undo
00:5900:59, 17 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Solstice ‎ →‎Solstice determination: on -> in

17:4917:49, 16 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ SN 1885A ‎ cap
17:4717:47, 16 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m SN 1885A ‎ cap
15:3915:39, 16 June 2021 diff hist −21‎ Nearby Stars Database ‎ Collapse tiny sections together. Use past tense. Move external links to their section. Remove date formatting tag.
15:3515:35, 16 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Nearby Stars Database ‎ cap
15:3415:34, 16 June 2021 diff hist −101‎ Nearby Stars Database ‎ Remove poorly conceived graph. I think this is a non-cumulative histogram, but with the points connected by a smooth line.

22:2222:22, 14 June 2021 diff hist −22‎ m T Tauri star ‎ →‎Types: cap
22:2122:21, 14 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m T Tauri star ‎ →‎Characteristics: cap
22:2122:21, 14 June 2021 diff hist −198‎ T Tauri star ‎ →‎Characteristics: remove totally unnecessary comment
22:2022:20, 14 June 2021 diff hist −2‎ m T Tauri star ‎ →‎Characteristics: cap (lowercase "p" is the symbol for proton)

11:0311:03, 11 June 2021 diff hist −73‎ Hearing ‎ →‎Hearing loss: remove redundant bulleted list
11:0311:03, 11 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Hearing ‎ →‎Hearing loss: cap
11:0211:02, 11 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Hearing ‎ →‎Prevention: cap (not a proper noun)

14:1114:11, 10 June 2021 diff hist −5‎ m Presentation program ‎ link to correct "output", not the dab page
14:0814:08, 10 June 2021 diff hist +7‎ Presentation program ‎ →‎History: I used transparancies at a well-funded organization in the early 2000s, so I'm changing this date. But really, it needs a citation.
14:0514:05, 10 June 2021 diff hist +6‎ Presentation program ‎ →‎Features: "foils"? I've never heard this
14:0414:04, 10 June 2021 diff hist +16‎ Slide show ‎ →‎Digital: This section reads like an advertisement from 2002 or so
14:0014:00, 10 June 2021 diff hist −98‎ Slide ‎ shorten two entries

21:5521:55, 9 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Stope ‎ cap current
21:5221:52, 9 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Double Chooz ‎ →‎Detector design: cap

21:2721:27, 1 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Biosafety level ‎ →‎Biosafety level 2: cap
21:2521:25, 1 June 2021 diff hist +14‎ Biosafety level ‎ →‎History: what do these collections of letters mean?
17:2817:28, 1 June 2021 diff hist −1‎ m GitLab ‎ →‎GitLab repository size limits: cap

18:2018:20, 28 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ Geoffrey A. Landis ‎ →‎Photovoltaic Power Systems: cap
18:0518:05, 28 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Gravitational lens ‎ →‎Measuring weak lensing: cap
18:0218:02, 28 May 2021 diff hist −12‎ Gravitational lens ‎ →‎Search for gravitational lenses: Astrophysical Journal Letters is *not* arXiv.org
17:4817:48, 28 May 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Gravitational lens ‎ →‎Explanation in terms of spacetime curvature: "aka" -> "i.e."
17:4817:48, 28 May 2021 diff hist −4‎ m Gravitational lens ‎ →‎Explanation in terms of spacetime curvature: don't need two links to geometry in one sentence
17:4517:45, 28 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ Gravitational lens ‎ cap
17:4017:40, 28 May 2021 diff hist −1‎ m MACS J1149 Lensed Star 1 ‎ →‎History: Since it has been observed, including a temperature measurement, "does" seems more correct than "would"
17:3917:39, 28 May 2021 diff hist −8‎ MACS J1149 Lensed Star 1 ‎ →‎History: Don't need quite so many qualifiers on these numbers. And the symbol for "approximately" is "~"

16:2316:23, 26 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Economy of India ‎ →‎Manufacturing and Industry: cap
16:2116:21, 26 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Economy of India ‎ →‎Mergers and Acquisitions: cap
16:1316:13, 26 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Economy of India ‎ →‎Petroleum products and Chemicals: cap
16:1016:10, 26 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Economy of India ‎ →‎Mining and Construction: cap

17:0217:02, 6 May 2021 diff hist −14‎ m Peanut butter ‎ →‎As an ingredient: cap

21:2621:26, 3 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Cryogenic storage dewar ‎ →‎Safety: cap

20:5820:58, 29 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Bar stock ‎ →‎Uses of Bar Stock: cap
20:4420:44, 29 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m 1145 aluminium alloy ‎ cap
18:1618:16, 29 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Dense inert metal explosive ‎ cap

20:3420:34, 22 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Isotopes of copper ‎ →‎Medical Applications: cap
20:2320:23, 22 April 2021 diff hist −351‎ Annealing ‎ shorten all of the entries. It only needs enough to distinguish the alternatives
18:0818:08, 22 April 2021 diff hist −68‎ 6061 aluminium alloy ‎ →‎Uses: parallel structure
16:4116:41, 22 April 2021 diff hist +19‎ Bubble chamber ‎ →‎Function and use: the magnetic field isn't fundamental to the technology. It's just very often useful.
16:4016:40, 22 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Bubble chamber ‎ →‎Notable Discoveries: cap

22:3822:38, 21 April 2021 diff hist −64‎ Aluminium oxide ‎ →‎Other: cap, less advertisy
22:2022:20, 21 April 2021 diff hist −4‎ m 7075 aluminium alloy ‎ utilized -> used
22:1522:15, 21 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m 6061 aluminium alloy ‎ →‎Equivalent Materials: cap
22:1422:14, 21 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m 6061 aluminium alloy ‎ →‎Uses: cap
22:1322:13, 21 April 2021 diff hist −14‎ m 6061 aluminium alloy ‎ →‎6061-T6: remove extra words "in comparison"
21:4621:46, 21 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Copper ‎ →‎Human exposure: cap
21:4621:46, 21 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Copper ‎ →‎Dietary recommendations: cap
21:4321:43, 21 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Copper ‎ →‎Production: cap

05:2005:20, 19 April 2021 diff hist +18‎ Multicameralism ‎ Does "multicameral" mean more than one house or more than two? The article flip-flops between these.
05:0105:01, 19 April 2021 diff hist −54‎ Gary L. Wells ‎ →‎Real world implications: external -> internal links
04:5804:58, 19 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Gary L. Wells ‎ cap

15:5715:57, 15 April 2021 diff hist −16‎ m Metropolis–Hastings algorithm ‎ →‎Step-by-step instructions: Remove explicit thumb size. Remove extra words "note that".
15:2615:26, 15 April 2021 diff hist +60‎ Metropolis (disambiguation) ‎ →‎Other uses: Metropolis–Hastings_algorithm

02:1602:16, 13 April 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Nvidia ‎ →‎Product families: comma

21:1121:11, 9 April 2021 diff hist −124‎ Ice water ‎ →‎Other uses: cut extra words
21:1121:11, 9 April 2021 diff hist +2‎ m Ice water ‎ →‎Other uses: cap, article
21:1021:10, 9 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Water ice ‎ cap
18:0418:04, 9 April 2021 diff hist −4‎ m Thermalisation ‎ Unlink self-link and standarise spelling

17:1817:18, 8 April 2021 diff hist −5‎ Nonce word ‎ →‎Other examples: I think it's impressive that a single poem introduced two words into the language, so remove "only"

18:3618:36, 7 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ St. Charles Community Unit School District 303 ‎ →‎Teacher profile: cap
18:3518:35, 7 April 2021 diff hist −159‎ St. Charles Community Unit School District 303 ‎ →‎History: And there were many non-complaints as well. This is not a good historical summary, especially without any citations

17:4817:48, 5 April 2021 diff hist +9‎ m Illinois Route 64 ‎ →‎Route description: rephrase this so it doesn't sound like IL-64 extends into Iowa

20:3320:33, 20 March 2021 diff hist −64‎ IBM PC compatible ‎ Remove unnecessary sentence with bad English
20:3220:32, 20 March 2021 diff hist −2‎ Boot sector ‎ →‎Damage to the boot sector: word choice, punct
20:3120:31, 20 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Boot sector ‎ cap
20:2320:23, 20 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Boot sector ‎ cap
20:2220:22, 20 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ Boot sector ‎ →‎Boot Sector Viruses: cap
20:2220:22, 20 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Boot sector ‎ →‎The IBM PC and Compatible Computers: cap
16:4316:43, 20 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ Siberia ‎ →‎Climate: cap

19:3519:35, 18 March 2021 diff hist −79‎ Premature ventricular contraction ‎ →‎Treatment: not a treatment, not a lifestyle modification

16:4816:48, 3 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m St. Jude Children's Research Hospital ‎ →‎Inspiration4 Fundraiser: fix markup
16:4616:46, 3 March 2021 diff hist −96‎ m St. Jude Children's Research Hospital ‎ →‎History: remove inappropriate external link

16:1516:15, 2 March 2021 diff hist −9‎ m Choose Your Own Adventure ‎ remove unnecessary word

13:4913:49, 28 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Candle ‎ →‎Hazards: separate fire hazard and soot hazard into different paragraphs

09:1609:16, 26 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Indian reservation ‎ →‎Governance: cap
09:1509:15, 26 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Indian reservation ‎ →‎Governance: cap
09:1209:12, 26 January 2021 diff hist +2‎ m Indian reservation ‎ →‎Life and culture: issues -> problems

03:1003:10, 20 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎IBM-compatible Wang PCs: cap
01:2101:21, 20 January 2021 diff hist +19‎ Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎The original Wang PC: {{contradiction}}
01:1901:19, 20 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎Word processing market collapse: cap, sp

20:1820:18, 19 January 2021 diff hist −3‎ Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎Hardware: uncap various words that are not proper nouns, make punct consistent
20:1420:14, 19 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎The Wang VS computer line: punct
20:0020:00, 19 January 2021 diff hist +11‎ m Wang Laboratories ‎ →‎Public stock listing: rephrase instead of using awkward elided quotation, also make more accurate, since it is the holders, not the stock itself who were treated the same

17:0417:04, 14 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Bail in the United States ‎ →‎Criticism of the bail bond industry: cap

18:4118:41, 10 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Punched card ‎ →‎IBM 80-column format and character codes: cap

20:4720:47, 9 January 2021 diff hist −16‎ Second impeachment of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Former administration officials: whoops. Remove the tag and not just the reason for the tag.
20:4620:46, 9 January 2021 diff hist −109‎ Second impeachment of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Former administration officials: this section is (no longer?) a subsection of elected officials, so it need not be marked inconsistent
20:4020:40, 9 January 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Second impeachment of Donald Trump ‎ Remove leading zeros from MN-5 and MD-8
20:3920:39, 9 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ m 2021 United States Electoral College vote count ‎ Remove leading zero from AZ-4
20:3020:30, 9 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Second impeachment of Donald Trump ‎ →‎House: leading zero not necessary, particularly since Oregon has less than ten districts

01:3701:37, 8 January 2021 diff hist −19‎ Second impeachment of Donald Trump ‎ →‎Support for impeachment or removal: There are not currently 535 elected members of Congress. At least one seat is vacant and at least one member was appointed.

16:5316:53, 7 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Adam Kinzinger ‎ →‎Tenure: cap

17:3617:36, 4 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ m First point of Aries ‎ →‎Definition: cap

17:1217:12, 29 December 2020 diff hist −7‎ m Row hammer ‎ →‎{{Anchor|JS}}Exploits: remove introduction of never-used abbreviation
17:1017:10, 29 December 2020 diff hist −8‎ m Row hammer ‎ →‎{{Anchor|DISTURBANCE|VICTIM|DOUBLE}}Overview: No need to define "IC" when it would only be used once
17:0817:08, 29 December 2020 diff hist −5‎ Row hammer ‎ →‎See also: no need to introduce an abbreviation here
17:0717:07, 29 December 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Row hammer ‎ utilize -> use

17:4817:48, 17 December 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Compost ‎ →‎Phases of composting: "Three years old" -> "Three year old"
15:0015:00, 17 December 2020 diff hist −77‎ Energy ‎ →‎Conservation of energy: Remove parenthetical which is at best very confusing, and probably just wrong

22:0822:08, 16 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ ATP synthase ‎ →‎Other eukaryotes: cap
21:3121:31, 16 December 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Adenosine diphosphate ‎ →‎Mitochondrial ATP synthase complex: As per ATP synthase, the subscript on F is the letter "o", not a zero. Also added a space.
21:2821:28, 16 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Adenosine diphosphate ‎ cap
21:2721:27, 16 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Adenosine diphosphate ‎ cap
21:2321:23, 16 December 2020 diff hist −10‎ m Energy ‎ "almost invariably" -> "usually" (already used "invariably" once in this paragraph, and it's probably better to reserve absolute words like "invariable" for when the subject is actually invariable.)
21:1821:18, 16 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Energy ‎ →‎Units of measure: Write out his full name on the first use, not only later on
21:1521:15, 16 December 2020 diff hist −8‎ m Energy ‎ →‎Forms: Remove extra word

22:3722:37, 11 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ Solar particle event ‎ →‎See also: cap
22:3322:33, 11 December 2020 diff hist −10‎ Solar particle event ‎ →‎Description: not a proper noun, and this abbreviation is never used
22:2022:20, 11 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ Coronal mass ejection ‎ →‎Stellar coronal mass ejections: cap
22:0622:06, 11 December 2020 diff hist −6‎ Coronal mass ejection ‎ →‎Impact on Earth: No need to define this acronym; it is never used. Also, this is not a proper noun.
00:4000:40, 11 December 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Dreidel ‎ →‎Rules of the game: remove spaces

00:0800:08, 8 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ Lithium borohydride ‎ →‎Hydrogen Generation: cap

23:5023:50, 7 December 2020 diff hist −7‎ m Isotopes of boron ‎ →‎Applications: No reason to define this abbreviation here
23:2823:28, 7 December 2020 diff hist −96‎ Dodecaborate ‎ →‎Potential applications: Don't define never-used acronym. The reference is wrong about B-11 undergoing fission. It's a one-step (n, alpha) reaction. But so I don't have to dig up a better reference, let's just shorten the sentence so it isn't wrong.

00:4600:46, 21 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Tetrahydrocannabinol ‎ →‎No known lethal dose: cap

21:1921:19, 18 November 2020 diff hist −14‎ m Flattening ‎ →‎Numerical values for planets: Break out of parentheses and simplify language a little bit

14:1314:13, 23 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ PC LOAD LETTER ‎ cap

19:1119:11, 22 October 2020 diff hist −4‎ m New Horizons ‎ →‎Pluto approach: don't use conditional tense for things that actually happened.
15:2715:27, 22 October 2020 diff hist −548‎ Gravity assist ‎ →‎Historical origins: this sentence does not help the reader at all
15:2515:25, 22 October 2020 diff hist −13‎ m Gravity assist ‎ Remove "strictly", which didn't seems to serve any purpose, and swap "use" for "utilize" to save syllables while having exactly the same meaning
15:2215:22, 22 October 2020 diff hist −5‎ Gravity assist ‎ →‎Explanation: tense
14:5514:55, 22 October 2020 diff hist −51‎ Living With a Star ‎ →‎Objectives: remove redundancy, punct
14:5414:54, 22 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ Parker Solar Probe ‎ →‎Findings: hyphen
03:1503:15, 22 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Star formation ‎ →‎Protostar: cap: not a proper noun

22:0822:08, 19 October 2020 diff hist −149‎ Care Bears ‎ revert vandalism Tag: Manual revert
18:5318:53, 19 October 2020 diff hist −344‎ Pentomino ‎ →‎Video games: Remove these items, which look like advertisements for obscure games
18:4918:49, 19 October 2020 diff hist −30‎ Take It Easy (game) ‎ Tweak to remove 2nd person, and take off unencyclopedic tag

18:5818:58, 14 October 2020 diff hist +1‎ Coin grading ‎ →‎American Numismatic Association scale: no links in headings
18:3418:34, 14 October 2020 diff hist −3‎ m Neutron Star Collision (Love Is Forever) ‎ →‎Composition: much clearer if not abbreviated
18:3118:31, 14 October 2020 diff hist −3‎ Neutron star merger ‎ →‎Observed mergers: punct
17:0717:07, 14 October 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Hypothermia ‎ →‎Water immersion: Use a colon instead of a very long parenthetical. This is part of the main idea and does not need to be set off.

17:0817:08, 13 October 2020 diff hist −7‎ Tritium ‎ →‎Lithium: no point in defining this acronym, which is never used
16:5816:58, 13 October 2020 diff hist +14‎ Radiolysis ‎ →‎Radiation therapy: don't define an acronym which is used only once

14:2114:21, 30 September 2020 diff hist −13‎ Solar neutrino unit ‎ Remove extraneous words
13:2813:28, 30 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ Extinct in the wild ‎ →‎Reintroduction: cap

13:1813:18, 28 September 2020 diff hist +13‎ Dewey Defeats Truman ‎ →‎External links: {{dead-link}} -- just redirects to their main page

18:1118:11, 23 September 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Gallium(III) oxide ‎ →‎Preparation: link Epitaxial
16:4516:45, 23 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ Gallium(III) oxide ‎ →‎Preparation: cap

21:5121:51, 22 September 2020 diff hist +15‎ m Year 2000 problem ‎ →‎Early attention: cap
21:4921:49, 22 September 2020 diff hist −386‎ Year 2000 problem ‎ →‎Background: This seems completely non-notable to me, since obviously his supposed solution didn't have any impact
19:1119:11, 22 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ Climate change in California ‎ →‎Paleoclimatological Evidence: cap
05:0505:05, 22 September 2020 diff hist −9‎ m Terrestrial Planet Finder ‎ remove "actually"
05:0205:02, 22 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Combat Veterans Motorcycle Association ‎ cap

22:0422:04, 21 September 2020 diff hist −141‎ LED incapacitator ‎ →‎External links: Redundant with references

10:2810:28, 19 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ Niche microdifferentiation ‎ cap
10:2410:24, 19 September 2020 diff hist −128‎ Physical configuration audit ‎ Uncapitalize lots of things which are not proper nouns. Link directly to software configuration management, consolidate short paragraphs. Remove redundant link.
10:0710:07, 19 September 2020 diff hist −13‎ m BMW 3200 CS ‎ →‎Legacy: I'm unaware of an applicable technical meaning of "era"
10:0610:06, 19 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ WKRU ‎ →‎Previous Logo: cap
09:5309:53, 19 September 2020 diff hist 0‎ Transport in Myanmar ‎ →‎Road: cap
09:5209:52, 19 September 2020 diff hist −105‎ Transport in Myanmar ‎ not a directory of links
09:5109:51, 19 September 2020 diff hist +4‎ m FFF system ‎ →‎Microfortnight and other decimal prefixes: "Jargon File" takes a definite article
07:4207:42, 19 September 2020 diff hist −661‎ Fortnight ‎ It's nonsense to focus on sports in this article. "Fortnight" is a common word in many contexts.
01:2401:24, 19 September 2020 diff hist −332‎ Safeword (sports) ‎ Being a lifeguard isn't a sport, and moreover, like the rest of the article, there's no citation

20:0720:07, 16 September 2020 diff hist −151‎ Eric W. Weisstein ‎ →‎Education: Remove inappropriate external links

04:3104:31, 1 September 2020 diff hist −423‎ Mark Curran ‎ →‎Personal life: None of the claims listed are in the reference

02:2702:27, 15 August 2020 diff hist −5‎ Stingray Nebula ‎ →‎Planetary nebula nucleus (PNN): don't define acronyms in titles, spaces, period.

15:2015:20, 14 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Ice XI ‎ cap
15:1715:17, 14 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ Ice V ‎ cap
15:1615:16, 14 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Ice III ‎ cap
15:1615:16, 14 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ Ice Ih ‎ cap
15:1315:13, 14 August 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Ice XVI ‎ cap, space

19:0619:06, 3 August 2020 diff hist −74‎ Thorne–Żytkow object ‎ →‎Formation: remove dubious uncited phrase

23:5923:59, 21 July 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Whip inflation now ‎ rm extra space

21:4421:44, 16 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ Sungrazing comet ‎ →‎History of Sungrazers: cap
21:4321:43, 16 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ Sungrazing comet ‎ →‎Coronagraphic Observations: cap, no link in heading (added link in body)
21:4021:40, 16 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ m List of Nintendo Entertainment System accessories ‎ not a proper noun
21:3721:37, 16 July 2020 diff hist −2‎ Zoomer ‎ →‎Other uses: "generation z" itself is not an official name of any sort, so let's be more neutral

02:5602:56, 15 July 2020 diff hist −10‎ m Tert-Butylthiol ‎ →‎Preparation: pronoun for better flow

16:3416:34, 7 July 2020 diff hist +19‎ Isis (given name) ‎ →‎Meaning: {{unreferenced}}

05:2505:25, 6 July 2020 diff hist +20‎ m List of numbers ‎ →‎SI prefixes: pipe orders of magnitude
05:2105:21, 6 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ List of numbers ‎ →‎Cultural or practical significance: cap
05:2105:21, 6 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ m List of numbers ‎ →‎Mathematical significance: cap

16:3416:34, 4 July 2020 diff hist +1‎ Comet NEOWISE ‎ punct

13:1613:16, 1 July 2020 diff hist −5‎ Silica gel ‎ →‎Desiccant: no need to define RH, as it is never used
13:1513:15, 1 July 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Silica gel ‎ →‎Desiccant: cap, italics
13:1013:10, 1 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Humidity buffering ‎ →‎Examples: cap
13:0913:09, 1 July 2020 diff hist −7‎ m Humidity buffering ‎ cap, tidy list formatting

01:0201:02, 26 June 2020 diff hist −1‎ Mantle ‎ cap, punct

20:5120:51, 19 June 2020 diff hist −31‎ m History of radio ‎ Remove duplicate heading. cap.
20:4320:43, 19 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Gesher (archaeological site) ‎ cap
16:3716:37, 19 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Network File System ‎ →‎NFSv3: cap
14:3214:32, 19 June 2020 diff hist −41‎ m Grandfather clock ‎ →‎Naming: remove inappropriate external link
00:2300:23, 19 June 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Food security in Ethiopia ‎ link

14:2414:24, 18 June 2020 diff hist −6‎ m History of Oak Park and River Forest High School ‎ Very misleading to have this in the 1901-1920 section with a caption saying "1907". Moved to top and put date of photo in caption.

19:1519:15, 17 June 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Mitt Romney ‎ →‎Electoral history: remove spaces that cause undesirable line breaks, consistent use of "–" for the negative sign, and leading zero for numbers less than 1.
19:1119:11, 17 June 2020 diff hist −12‎ Mitt Romney ‎ →‎Electoral history: Remove redundant formatting marks
16:0116:01, 17 June 2020 diff hist −26‎ .OOO ‎ Use default size for logo
13:4313:43, 17 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Aunt Jemima ‎ cap

23:2523:25, 16 June 2020 diff hist −2‎ The Invisible Man's Revenge ‎ →‎Series follow-ups: remove commas
06:1306:13, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Hundred (county division) ‎ →‎United States: sp

21:3621:36, 15 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Breakthrough Starshot ‎ →‎Laser data transmitter: cap
21:3421:34, 15 June 2020 diff hist −14‎ m Breakthrough Starshot ‎ →‎Concept: There's no need to set this "g" in math mode. It is just a regular unit like "mm".
21:2321:23, 15 June 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Breakthrough Starshot ‎ "utilized" -> "used"
21:2221:22, 15 June 2020 diff hist +11‎ m Breakthrough Starshot ‎ Our article on solar sails has "light sail" as two words, so use that
21:1921:19, 15 June 2020 diff hist +4‎ Breakthrough Starshot ‎ →‎Lightsail: "the" and be consistent about "lightsail" vs. "light sail"
21:1721:17, 15 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Breakthrough Starshot ‎ →‎Other potential destinations: cap
21:1521:15, 15 June 2020 diff hist −62‎ Breakthrough Starshot ‎ →‎Objectives: Remove inappropriate external link

20:2720:27, 10 June 2020 diff hist −12‎ m Nonprobability sampling ‎ If it "technically is", then it is.
20:2320:23, 10 June 2020 diff hist −116‎ Nonprobability sampling ‎ I can't make out what the second half of this sentence was supposed to mean, also it appeared to be prescriptive rather than informative. Standardize hyphenation and fix spacing.

13:4413:44, 8 June 2020 diff hist −6‎ Elburn, Illinois ‎ →‎Demographics: It's not a mystery which cities are neighboring. Remove "would".
13:3513:35, 8 June 2020 diff hist +264‎ Talk:Delta Ursae Minoris ‎No edit summary

22:5422:54, 6 June 2020 diff hist +6‎ m Police brutality in the United States ‎ →‎Redirecting Funds To Other Departments (Defund The Police): sp, cap, commas
22:5222:52, 6 June 2020 diff hist −2‎ m Police brutality in the United States ‎ →‎Redirecting Funds To Other Departments (Defund The Police): placement of periods
22:5222:52, 6 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Police brutality in the United States ‎ →‎Redirecting Funds To Other Departments (Defund The Police): cap

02:3602:36, 29 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ m James Doohan ‎ →‎Video Games: cap

21:1021:10, 26 May 2020 diff hist −37‎ Professional Coin Grading Service ‎ cap, remove inappropriate external link
19:4119:41, 26 May 2020 diff hist −942‎ DeKalb, Illinois ‎ →‎Parks and greenspace: The deleted portion was copied from https://www.dekalbparkdistrict.com/mission-history , which has no permissive license.

15:0915:09, 22 May 2020 diff hist −2‎ m Chimborazo ‎ →‎Farthest point from Earth's center: It's not "thicker", it's just thicker

21:5221:52, 21 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ Time complexity ‎ →‎Sub-quadratic time: cap
21:3021:30, 21 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Profiling (computer programming) ‎ →‎History: cap
15:4715:47, 21 May 2020 diff hist +2‎ m PlayStation (console) ‎ →‎CD format: issues -> problems
03:0503:05, 21 May 2020 diff hist −62‎ Hillcrest, Paterson ‎ Not neutral

20:3320:33, 19 May 2020 diff hist −30‎ m Frits Kemp ‎ →‎Activism: Remove inappropriate external link. sp.
16:2716:27, 19 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Gradient boosting ‎ →‎Penalize Complexity of Tree: cap
16:0816:08, 19 May 2020 diff hist −56‎ CDF ‎ Shorten an entry
02:3502:35, 19 May 2020 diff hist −48‎ The Daily Telegraph ‎ Remove inappropriate external link

17:3617:36, 10 May 2020 diff hist −102‎ m List of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine episodes ‎ →‎External links: dead link

13:3313:33, 8 May 2020 diff hist −4‎ Planetary phase ‎ →‎Inferior planets: having most of the paragraph inside parentheses harms readability. These sentences can stand with the others.

14:0714:07, 6 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Megabucks ‎ →‎Other: cap

16:0416:04, 5 May 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Voyager 1 ‎ →‎Future of the probe: Single quotes make no sense here. I think italics were intended.

14:3914:39, 30 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Ted Halstead ‎ →‎Previous Organizations Founded: cap

20:4720:47, 28 April 2020 diff hist −116‎ Magnitude (astronomy) ‎ →‎Problems: Remove complainy sentence that just duplicates information above

22:2122:21, 24 April 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Cadmium ‎ →‎External links: sp
21:5121:51, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ Caesium ‎ →‎Atomic clocks: cap
21:4321:43, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Dysprosium ‎ →‎Applications: cap
21:3921:39, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Magnetic refrigeration ‎ →‎The magnetocaloric effect: cap
21:1021:10, 24 April 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Hafnium ‎ →‎Other uses: cap, italics
21:0621:06, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Iridium ‎ →‎Scientific: cap
21:0021:00, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Gold ‎ →‎Occurrence: cap
20:5420:54, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Bismuth ‎ →‎Medicines: cap
20:4820:48, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Radium ‎ →‎Commercial use: cap
20:1220:12, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Uranium ‎ →‎Discovery: cap
19:3119:31, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Lithium ‎ →‎Nuclear: cap
18:2918:29, 24 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Hydrogen ‎ →‎Steam reforming (Industrial Method): cap

02:0902:09, 21 April 2020 diff hist +252‎ User talk:Strait ‎ →‎File:Soudan 1 proton decay experiment.jpg

11:0911:09, 20 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Don DeWitte ‎ →‎Senate Committees: cap

17:2517:25, 14 April 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Lessons (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Science education: save syllables

22:1322:13, 13 April 2020 diff hist −6‎ m IRC ‎ →‎Modern IRC: neutral language

23:3823:38, 12 April 2020 diff hist −6‎ m Trussing needle ‎ "is", not "would be". This is still a thing that is done.

03:2703:27, 10 April 2020 diff hist −189‎ Space Cowboy ‎ tighten up some tries
03:2503:25, 10 April 2020 diff hist −306‎ Space Cowboy ‎ →‎Other uses: The fact that the phrase appears in a show doesn't mean it needs an entry here
03:2403:24, 10 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m OnePiece (music production team) ‎ →‎Formation and Production History: cap

13:5513:55, 9 April 2020 diff hist −3‎ m Gluten ‎ →‎Imitation meats: quotation marks are redundant when prefixed by "mock"
13:5213:52, 9 April 2020 diff hist −11‎ m Dust explosion ‎ →‎Conditions required: remove unnecessary word

20:2720:27, 5 April 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Queen Elizabeth ‎ fix markup

15:1015:10, 27 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Ubuntu ‎ →‎Variants: cap

21:2621:26, 21 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Zeolite ‎ →‎Uses of zeolites: cap

17:5217:52, 18 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Ventilator ‎ Remove extra white space
17:5017:50, 18 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Ventilator ‎ Not every sentence needs to be its own paragraph
03:2103:21, 18 March 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Toilet paper ‎ →‎Recreational use: cap, quotes

18:5318:53, 13 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Large Magellanic Cloud ‎ →‎History of observation: This sentence had nothing to do with the rest of the paragraph. Made new paragraph.

17:4017:40, 10 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Alchemy ‎ cap
17:3817:38, 10 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Etymology of chemistry ‎ punct

22:5822:58, 6 March 2020 diff hist −10‎ STEAM fields ‎ Remove a lot of quotation marks, and standardize on double quotes where retained. Cap.
22:5522:55, 6 March 2020 diff hist −105‎ STEAM fields ‎ cap, spaces, remove inappropriate external link
22:5322:53, 6 March 2020 diff hist −420‎ STEAM fields ‎ Remove this section: no citations, reads poorly

17:5117:51, 5 March 2020 diff hist −24‎ SMIL (computer) ‎ already translated at the top of the article

23:2523:25, 4 March 2020 diff hist −75‎ This Island Earth (novel) ‎ This is not from 1944
15:0315:03, 4 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Acid mine drainage ‎ →‎Nomenclature: cap - these are not proper nouns
14:5314:53, 4 March 2020 diff hist −8‎ m Aluminium ‎ →‎Nuclei and isotopes: use simpler language

14:4414:44, 12 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Interstate 190 (Illinois) ‎ →‎Route description: cap
14:4314:43, 12 February 2020 diff hist −221‎ Interstate 190 (Illinois) ‎ →‎History: This paragraph makes no sense. What improvements? Was there other text preceding this before?
14:4214:42, 12 February 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Interstate 190 (Illinois) ‎ →‎History: tense

04:0104:01, 10 February 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Voyager 2 ‎ →‎Interstellar mission: issue -> problem, and remove stray apostrophe

15:4615:46, 31 January 2020 diff hist −9‎ m Asia ‎ →‎Asia–Europe boundary: remove fluff word "actually"
15:4515:45, 31 January 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Asia ‎ →‎Asia–Europe boundary: remove space
15:1115:11, 31 January 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Rammed earth ‎ remove extra white space
15:1015:10, 31 January 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Rammed earth ‎ →‎Characteristics: "like" -> "such as" and remove a comma
15:0915:09, 31 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Rammed earth ‎ cap
15:0715:07, 31 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Rammed earth ‎ →‎Characteristics: cap
15:0715:07, 31 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Rammed earth ‎ →‎Characteristics: cap
15:0615:06, 31 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Rammed earth ‎ →‎The process: cap
15:0615:06, 31 January 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Rammed earth ‎ add period

17:0517:05, 30 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Helium flash ‎ →‎Red giants: cap
17:0417:04, 30 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ Helium flash ‎ →‎Binary white dwarfs: Move link to different words in the sentence that give a more predictable outcome when selected
14:4014:40, 30 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Iowa caucuses ‎ "first in the nation" isn't a proper noun, but we can use hyphens to make it an adjective

20:5320:53, 29 January 2020 diff hist −9‎ m Africanized bee ‎ →‎Misconceptions: remove fluff word "actually"
20:5120:51, 29 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Africanized bee ‎ →‎Consequences of selection: cap (everywhere else in the article uses lower case)
15:0115:01, 29 January 2020 diff hist +4‎ AirPods ‎ →‎Reception and criticism: Replaced euphemism "issue" with honest "problem"
15:0015:00, 29 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m AirPods ‎ →‎Reception and criticism: cap

20:3120:31, 19 January 2020 diff hist −9‎ Pat Paulsen ‎ →‎Political campaigns: remove fluff word "actually"

18:0018:00, 16 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Magnetic reconnection ‎ →‎Earth's magnetosphere: cap

20:1820:18, 13 January 2020 diff hist −2,679‎ User:Strait ‎ Remove out-of-date and mostly-irrelevant stuff current
20:0420:04, 13 January 2020 diff hist −158‎ Gini coefficient ‎ Discussion of an unusual corner case does not belong in the introduction
18:2118:21, 13 January 2020 diff hist +1‎ Conasprella pfluegeri ‎ Fix unclosed italics markup
18:2018:20, 13 January 2020 diff hist +8‎ m Areostationary orbit ‎ →‎Formula: fix superscript

21:5021:50, 9 January 2020 diff hist −2‎ m Charles Vernon Gridley ‎ →‎Battle of Manila Bay: remove a stray single quote
20:5720:57, 9 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Death from the Skies! ‎ →‎Some of the subjects discussed in the book: cap

16:2516:25, 8 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m First Night ‎ →‎Other cities: cap
16:2216:22, 8 January 2020 diff hist −1‎ m First Night ‎ →‎Boston: remove extra line break
16:0916:09, 8 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Office of Censorship ‎ →‎End of the Agency: cap
16:0816:08, 8 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Office of Censorship ‎ →‎Immediate Predecessors: cap
16:0716:07, 8 January 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Fu-Go balloon bomb ‎ →‎Offensive: Separate last sentence into its own paragraph, since it is a new idea
16:0516:05, 8 January 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Fu-Go balloon bomb ‎ →‎Origins: issues -> problems

22:4822:48, 3 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Fungus ‎ →‎Symbiosis: cap
18:5118:51, 3 January 2020 diff hist −930‎ Cap Digital ‎ Remove advertising copy
18:3218:32, 3 January 2020 diff hist −42‎ m Canton of Lucerne ‎ →‎Religion: Remove all the "about"s When you give a number to three digits, it is understood to be accurate to three digits.
18:2818:28, 3 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ Canton of Lucerne ‎ →‎Historic Population: cap

17:5117:51, 2 January 2020 diff hist −11‎ m Year 2038 problem ‎ Remove confusing link to the first section of the article the user is already viewing

18:3518:35, 30 December 2019 diff hist +16‎ m Gregorian calendar ‎ →‎Months: No need to use a cryptic abbreviation here
18:2918:29, 30 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Status quo (Israel) ‎ →‎The Law of Return: fix sentence fragment
18:0018:00, 30 December 2019 diff hist +2‎ No true Scotsman ‎ offset with a long dash instead of a parenthetical, since this is part of the main idea

07:4907:49, 28 December 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Visual flight rules ‎ →‎Low flying rules in the US: overreaching is one word, not two
07:4707:47, 28 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Aircraft dynamic modes ‎ →‎Lateral-directional modes: cap
07:4707:47, 28 December 2019 diff hist −7‎ m Aircraft dynamic modes ‎ →‎Phugoid (longer period) oscillations: remove fluff word "really"
07:4607:46, 28 December 2019 diff hist −4‎ Aircraft dynamic modes ‎ Undid revision 930443110 by 141.241.26.39 (talk) --- remove garbage characters Tag: Undo

17:4517:45, 27 December 2019 diff hist −71‎ X. J. Kennedy ‎ →‎External links: the link to his personal site took me to a domain squatter, so removed

14:2714:27, 19 December 2019 diff hist +20‎ m Streaming media ‎ →‎Greenhouse gas emissions: don't use never-defined abbreviation. And don't define it, since it would only be used once.

21:1621:16, 13 December 2019 diff hist −5,512‎ University of Cincinnati College of Arts and Sciences ‎ You can't just copy a page from the university website here. Not only is that copyright infringement, but it reads like a brochure, not an encyclopedia.
21:0621:06, 13 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m University of Cincinnati Blue Ash College ‎ cap

21:3721:37, 12 December 2019 diff hist −200‎ Mathematical universe hypothesis ‎ →‎Coexistence of all mathematical structures: Most of this sentence seemed confused to me, and it is not drawn from the source material.

01:1501:15, 11 December 2019 diff hist −546‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Neutrinoless double-beta decay searches: Remove wrong information about neutrinoless double beta decay (no, it doesn't say that in the reference [the PDG]). Make new section for unrelated material.
01:1201:12, 11 December 2019 diff hist −617‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Research: Highlighting a 2013 T2K result as "confirming neutrino oscillations" is silly. Oscillations were well established by 2013 and many oscillation results came out before and after this one.
01:1001:10, 11 December 2019 diff hist −96‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Types: You can't ever prove that there are only three of something. This idea needs either more explanation, or not to be here.
01:0501:05, 11 December 2019 diff hist −27‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Flavor oscillations: No, it's more complicated than a sine wave
01:0301:03, 11 December 2019 diff hist −110‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Cosmic neutrinos: This was confused. Removed the wrong parts.
01:0101:01, 11 December 2019 diff hist −22‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Solar neutrino problem: I don't know what "but indistingushably" was supposed to mean. The sentence is right without it.
00:5800:58, 11 December 2019 diff hist +4‎ m Neutrino ‎ use "per", not an asterisk
00:5700:57, 11 December 2019 diff hist −95‎ Neutrino ‎ Remove unnecessary and confusing Latin, as well as a redundant sentence. Don't claim that leptogenesis is known to be real.
00:5300:53, 11 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Neutrino ‎ →‎Detection: past tense for SNO
00:5100:51, 11 December 2019 diff hist −510‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Detection: This paper clearly states that their results are consistent with zero. Also, there's no "it has been said" in physics. Either a publication reports something or it doesn't.
00:4700:47, 11 December 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Neutrino ‎ →‎Supernovae: Remove superfluous "+"
00:4400:44, 11 December 2019 diff hist −3‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Accelerator neutrinos: construct -> design
00:4200:42, 11 December 2019 diff hist −456‎ Neutrino ‎ →‎Reactor neutrinos: Remove non-sequitur

20:4020:40, 10 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Broken windows theory ‎ →‎New York City: cap
20:3820:38, 10 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Squeegee man ‎ →‎United States: cap

18:1518:15, 5 December 2019 diff hist −398‎ Sexagesimal ‎ →‎Fractions: Delete two sentences, one of which is meant to help and doesn't, in my opinion, and the second which contradicts the first

17:5517:55, 4 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Operation Plumbbob ‎ cap

20:5020:50, 3 December 2019 diff hist −3‎ m Bullying ‎ →‎Prison bullying: Rewrite first sentence to be easier to read
20:3720:37, 3 December 2019 diff hist −9‎ m Bullying ‎ →‎Inanimate objects: remove fluff word "actually"
20:3520:35, 3 December 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Bullying ‎ →‎Etymology: balance parentheses by removing one
20:3220:32, 3 December 2019 diff hist −3‎ m Bullying ‎ The second "may" is not necessary.

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