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This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the "Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the third-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.

Malik Arslan

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  • Source: * Har-El, Shai (1995). Struggle for Domination in the Middle East: The Ottoman-Mamluk War, 1485-91. E.J. Brill. p. 86. ISBN 9004101802. OCLC 624096003. Retrieved 19 March 2023.
  • Venzke, Margaret L. (2017). "Dulkadir". In Fleet, Kate; Krämer, Gudrun; Matringe, Denis; Nawas, John; Rowson, Everett (eds.). Encyclopaedia of Islam (3rd ed.). Brill Online. doi:10.1163/1573-3912_ei3_COM_27743. ISSN 1873-9830.
  • Yinanç, Refet (1989). Dulkadir Beyliği (in Turkish). Ankara: Turkish Historical Society Press. p. 61. ISBN 9751601711. OCLC 21676736.
  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by Aintabli (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Aintabli (talk) 16:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is not needed as nominator has 5 or less nominations. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 16:46, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Margaret Pargeter

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  • ... that Margaret Pargeter was one of the most widely read authors in Britain in 1986?
5x expanded by Cielquiparle (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 65 past nominations.

Cielquiparle (talk) 03:48, 3 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Review: Hook fact is cited in the article to an RS, and is sufficiently interesting; hook length is ok; earwig copyvio shows no issues; DYK check shows 5 x expansion so article is valid for DYK: Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 60 edits ago on September 29, 2024; 223 characters to 4,485 characters is actually a 20x expansion; article is long enough; article is presentable, stable and fully cited (note it was recently saved from AfD by the nominator); QPQ done. Either hook considered acceptable. Good stuff! ResonantDistortion 08:38, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative

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Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

Yue🌙 08:36, 30 September 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Eunus

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Bronze alloy coin minted by Eunus under the name of King Antiochus. On the obverse is the head of Demeter, while the reverse shows a grain ear.
Bronze alloy coin minted by Eunus under the name of King Antiochus. On the obverse is the head of Demeter, while the reverse shows a grain ear.
  • Source: Urbainczyk, Theresa (2014). Slave Revolts in Antiquity, pp. 52, 56. Park Square, Milton Park, Abingdon, 711 Third Avenue, New York, NY 10017, USA: Routledge. ISBN 978-1-84465-101-6.
  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by Harren the Red (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Harren the Red (talk) 18:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough, well sourced, hook is interesting and QPQ is completed. I don't see anything that would hold this back from DYK, so I approve. Only thing I will say is that I don't think this image should be used, as I don't find it particularly informative, and the caption is also quite long. However, if anyone disagrees, feel free. TheBritinator (talk) 22:42, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On a second look, it would appear that the website the image is sourced from declares that the image is published under a CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 license, which would make it incompatible with commons. If I am missing something, please feel free to correct me. TheBritinator (talk) 22:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I can certainly edit the caption to be shorter (more concise), but from what I gather the image is a no go? I am not the original uploader of it to Commons, nor am I super familiar with copyright, so I will defer that judgement to you, though the image on commons itself says CC 4.0 international license. Also, would I edit the caption here, submit a new entry, or something else? How does the process work exactly? Thank you! Harren the Red (talk) 23:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Harren the Red:, no need for a new nomination, we'd just not use the image. Is that good for you? TheBritinator (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TheBritinator:, yes, certainly! Thank you for the help :) Harren the Red (talk) 15:39, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds good, then I approve of the hook. TheBritinator (talk) 16:15, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The proposed hook has two non-bolded links next to each other, which is discouraged by WP:DYKMOS. Since "slave" is linked to the more specific page Slavery in ancient Rome, I think it's better to unlink "Syrian". jlwoodwa (talk) 05:52, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jlwoodwa: I'm perfectly fine with unlinking Syrian. Harren the Red (talk) 16:48, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TheBritinator and Harren the Red:, you cannot be "king of a war", right? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:18, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@AirshipJungleman29: hi, the verbage is a bit of an oversimplification. Eunus became king of the revolting slaves; so I guess it could be that he "rose to become leader and king of the First Servile Revolt", but the name of the article on the war is First Servile War, so it reads a bit strangely. It can certainly be edited toward that end. Harren the Red (talk) 16:45, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hugh O'Neill, Earl of Tyrone

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Hugh O'Neill, Earl of Tyrone
Hugh O'Neill, Earl of Tyrone
  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by SkywalkerEccleston (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 12:52, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Stuntman (2024 film)

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The escalators where Stuntman was filmed
The escalators where Stuntman was filmed
Created by Prince of Erebor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 18 past nominations.

Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 06:45, 3 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: New enough, long enough, and including Bruce Lee will definitely hook readers. Earwig shows only 4.8% for English-language sources; AGF on Chinese ones. Not sure the image is very relevant, and it should probably be omitted. Looks good to go!  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:27, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ 彭麗芳 (20 September 2024). "《武替道》導演：找一個方法繼續走下去". Ming Pao (in Chinese). Retrieved 30 September 2024. 電影開首完美還原一九八○年代港產經典武打戲場景和老舊質感，包括在尖東半島中心幾層樓和扶手電梯之間追逐打鬥、從九龍海旁天橋一躍而下到貨車頂等等。 [The film's opening perfectly recreates the classic action scenes and vintage feel of 1980s Hong Kong films, including chase fights between several floors and escalators at Peninsula Centre, East Tsim Sha Tsui, as well as jumping from the Kowloon waterfront overpass onto the roof of a truck.]
  2. ^ "《武替道》兄弟導演致敬港產動作片 伍允龍夥董瑋演繹武師辛酸". Hong Kong Economic Times (in Chinese). 18 September 2024. Retrieved 30 September 2024. Albert透露他們常到尖東星光大道一間咖啡店構思劇本，有次留意到咖啡店外設於星光大道的李小龍銅像，但如今像被置於一旁，予人一種不再重要的感覺。兩人坦言：「始終李小龍令香港動作電影變得知名。」因此深思現時香港有誰曾跟李小龍同框出現過，便即時想起董瑋參演《龍爭虎鬥》中「Don' t look at my finger」的經典對白，認為若戲中有Dee哥望着李小龍銅像一幕，對武師題材的電影帶有一份深厚的意思。 [Albert [Leung] revealed that they often go to a café at the Avenue of Stars to brainstorm for the script. One time, they noticed the statue of Bruce Lee located on the promenade outside the café, but now it seems to have been set aside, giving off a sense of being unimportant. The two admitted, "After all, Bruce Lee made Hong Kong action films famous." This led them to reflect on who in Hong Kong has appeared alongside Bruce Lee, and they immediately recalled Stephen Tung’s classic line "Don't look at my finger" from The Big Boss. They believed that if there were a scene in the film with Tung looking at the Bruce Lee statue, it would add a profound significance to a film about martial artists.]

Fijian Labour Corps

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Members of the Fijian Labour Corps, 1918
Members of the Fijian Labour Corps, 1918
  • ... that members of the Fijian Labour Corps (pictured) attracted notice on the Western Front of the First World War for their height and muscularity?
  • Source: "The Native Fijian Contingent caused quite a stir on their travels to the frontline. They were highly visible in their traditional sulu uniform, wore no hats, and were of large and muscular build" from: "Fiji – Pasifika involvement in the First World War". Christchurch City Libraries. Retrieved 23 September 2024. the goes on to give other examples of their physicality, including references to their height
Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 885 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 15:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • I love the height/muscle hook. Is the source reliable? I'm not familiar with it. Is there perhaps a better one? Facially, the base requirements are met, and it's a well-written, well-sourced article. Only pending the source for the hook (which is also the sole cited source for the fact in the article). ꧁Zanahary꧂ 03:09, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Zanahary, it's published by the library service for New Zealand's second city. It looked reliable enough to me but happy to hear other opinions - Dumelow (talk) 09:51, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, then that is reliable Dumelow. I would still seek a source with an attributable author, since it is a viewpoint, but for the purpose of DYK I think it's settled. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 17:15, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Rose O'Neill (Irish noblewoman)

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  • Source: Morgan, Hiram (1993). Tyrone's Rebellion: The outbreak of the Nine Years' War in Tudor Ireland. London: The Boydell Press. ISBN 0-86193-224-2. p.
  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by SkywalkerEccleston (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 12:58, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 15:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Delibird

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  • Reviewed:
Created by Captain Galaxy (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

CaptainGalaxy 00:46, 4 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: No QPQ required, article was promoted to GA in the last week. Interesting hook as well, and is supported by reliable sources. Good work on the article, Captain Galaxy! ~ Tails Wx 13:51, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Grizel Niven

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5x expanded by Edwardx (talk) and Cielquiparle (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 66 past nominations.

Cielquiparle (talk) 06:24, 3 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:10, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Puck Building

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The Puck Building
The Puck Building
5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 678 past nominations.

Epicgenius (talk) 13:59, 4 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article is new and long enough (expanded), well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. I prefer ALT1. All hooks are cited to reliable sources, and are short enough and interesting. Images are properly licensed. QPQ done. Looks good to go. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 18:39, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Labour Party of Turkey

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  • Source: Hüseyin Aykol. Türkiye'de sol örgütler: bölüne bölüne büyümek. Phoenix yayınevı, 2010. p. 41, Zehra F. Kabasakal Arat. Human Rights in Turkey. University of Pennsylvania Press, 2013. p. 47
5x expanded by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 402 past nominations.

Soman (talk) 23:11, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article looks good. Pending the AfD outcome to be approved. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:01, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfD closed now, ping BeanieFan11. --Soman (talk) 09:17, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:03, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

He Jianshi

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  • Source: Swordsman: Zheng Jiazhen (鄭家鎮) (2018). 香港漫畫春秋 [Hong Kong Comics: Spring and Autumn] (in Chinese). Sanlian Bookstore. ISBN 978-962-04-4165-3. Translated: "When he was young, he studied swordsmanship with a monk from a temple in Sichuan, so he called himself Swordsman"; not to carry Americans: Jiang Peiyang (江沛扬) (6 May 2019). 广东——中国现代漫画的策源地 [Guangdong – The Origin of Modern Chinese Comics] (in Chinese). Guangdong Department of Arts and Culture. Archived from the original on 21 July 2020. Retrieved 21 July 2020. "1905 年，在反对美国对华工苛约的运动中，美国陆军部部长塔夫脱偕总统女儿到广州活动。何剑士闻讯，立即创作《龟抬美人图》张贴街头，轿夫见漫画，义愤填膺，拒绝给美国人抬轿，令美国佬狼狈不堪" ("In 1905, during a campaign against the harsh terms imposed by the United States on Chinese workers, U.S. Secretary of War Taft and the president's daughter went to Guangzhou for activities. Upon hearing the news, He Jianshi immediately created "A Beautiful Woman Carried by a Tortoise" and posted it on the streets. When the sedan bearers saw the cartoon, they were filled with righteous indignation and refused to carry the sedan for the Americans, which embarrassed the Yankees.")
  • ALT1: ... that a Chinese swordsman urged the people of Guangzhou not to carry William Howard Taft? Source: Swordsman: Zheng Jiazhen (鄭家鎮) (2018). 香港漫畫春秋 [Hong Kong Comics: Spring and Autumn] (in Chinese). Sanlian Bookstore. ISBN 978-962-04-4165-3. Translated: "When he was young, he studied swordsmanship with a monk from a temple in Sichuan, so he called himself Swordsman"; not to carry Americans: Jiang Peiyang (江沛扬) (6 May 2019). 广东——中国现代漫画的策源地 [Guangdong – The Origin of Modern Chinese Comics] (in Chinese). Guangdong Department of Arts and Culture. Archived from the original on 21 July 2020. Retrieved 21 July 2020. "1905 年，在反对美国对华工苛约的运动中，美国陆军部部长塔夫脱偕总统女儿到广州活动。何剑士闻讯，立即创作《龟抬美人图》张贴街头，轿夫见漫画，义愤填膺，拒绝给美国人抬轿，令美国佬狼狈不堪" ("In 1905, during a campaign against the harsh terms imposed by the United States on Chinese workers, U.S. Secretary of War Taft and the president's daughter went to Guangzhou for activities. Upon hearing the news, He Jianshi immediately created "A Beautiful Woman Carried by a Tortoise" and posted it on the streets. When the sedan bearers saw the cartoon, they were filled with righteous indignation and refused to carry the sedan for the Americans, which embarrassed the Yankees.")
  • ALT2: ... that He Jianshi used the Chinese opera to advance an anti-Qing agenda? Source: Guo Shan (蔡登山) (28 August 2014). 潘达微与何剑士：寓褒贬于毫端诛奸邪于纸上 [Pan Dawei and He Jianshi: Putting Praise and Blame to Paper and Punishing Evil on Paper]. Nanfeng News (in Chinese). Archived from the original on 4 October 2024. Retrieved 4 October 2024 – via Sina.com. 精通音律的何剑士，于辛亥革命前夕创办“优界改良社”，用戏曲宣传革命。"He Jianshi, who was proficient in music, ... used opera to promote the revolution."
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Happy of the End
  • Comment: Please note that Crisco 1492 mobile is an alternate account; it's the same editor, and thus no second credit is needed
Moved to mainspace by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 685 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:20, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Interesting life, on good sources, foreign and offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio ovious. I like ALT2 bes, thinking that the others may a bit too cryptic, - funny, that swordsman, but more so after you know that it was his chosen art name. I wonder if the word "revolution" from the source would make a hook more interesting. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:12, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Embassy of the Philippines, Bucharest

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  • Source: "Not only was she the first Ambassador to Ceaucescu's [sic] Romania or to any Communist country; she was also the first woman Ambassador to serve in that part of the world." —The Philippine Star
Created by Sky Harbor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 54 past nominations.

Sky Harbor (talk) 18:39, 6 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • The article is new enough, long enough, and adequately sourced. I did not find any close paraphrasing and a QPQ has been provided. I'm only approving the first hook as the second hook is less interesting and more complicated; it is a "first" hook, but the sourcing required for the claim isn't exceptional and so it should be acceptable in this case. My only sticking point is that the Embassy isn't reopening until next year, so I'm not sure if the hook should instead say "was", but I'll leave it to the promoter to decide. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:45, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Matthew Webb

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  • Source: Seccombe, Thomas (1899). "Webb, Matthew" . In Lee, Sidney (ed.). Dictionary of National Biography. Vol. 60. London: Smith, Elder & Co. p. 105: "At the beginning of August 1875 public interest was greatly aroused by the announcement that Webb intended to attempt the feat of swimming across the English Channel without any artificial aid. The attempt made by J. B. Johnson to swim the straits in August 1872 had ended in a fiasco. On 28 May 1875 Captain Paul Boyton, the American life-saving expert, had, after one failure, successfully accomplished the feat of paddling across the Straits when clothed in his patent dress; but although the journey demonstrated the great value of the dress, the paddle in itself was mere child's play in comparison with the task which Webb set himself to accomplish. His first attempt on 12 Aug. was a failure, owing to the fact that he drifted upwards of nine miles out of his proper course in consequence of the strong current and the stress of weather. Twelve days later he dived from the Admiralty Pier, Dover, a few seconds before one o'clock in the afternoon (31/4 hours before high water on a 15 ft. 10 in. tide), and swimming through the night by a three-quarter moon reached Calais at 10.40 A.M. next morning (25 Aug.), having been immersed for nearly twenty-two hours, and having swum a distance of about forty miles without having touched a boat or artificial support of any kind."
  • ALT1: ... that Matthew Webb died attempting to swim down the Niagara Rapids? Source: Watson, Kathy (2001). The crossing: the glorious tragedy of the first man to swim the English channel. New York: G. P. Putnam's Sons. ISBN 1-58542-109-X: 223-224, 230 (link to fulltext in article sources)
  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by It is a wonderful world (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

It is a wonderful world (talk) 08:42, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: None required.

Overall: @It is a wonderful world: No issues from a DYK stand, GA is new enough(despite what DYKCheck thinks?), interesting hook, certainly comprehensively cited, no need for a quid pro quo. Earwig caught a few similar clips but they're generic and small enough that I don't see any issue with copyvio. Marking as AGF since I don't have access to the text for the hook cite. Awesome work, approved from me. PixDeVl yell talk to me! 22:11, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hermance Edan

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  • Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795
  • ALT1: ... that little is known of Hermance Edan before she patented her first board game in 1908, at the age of 57? Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795
  • ALT2: ... that L'Attaque, the board game that became Stratego, was patented in 1908 by its designer, a 57-year-old woman? Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Farrest (talk • contribs) 05:06, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: I translated this article from the French, so the references in the article may need some work, but Edan's age at the time of her patent seems well-attested. Thanks for your consideration!
Created by Farrest (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Farrest (talk) 20:41, 5 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

HMNZS Manawanui (2019)

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HMNZS Manawanui in 2020
HMNZS Manawanui in 2020
  • ... that the Royal New Zealand Navy dive and hydrographic vessel Manawanui (pictured) sank off Samoa in October 2024?
  • Source: "The HMNZS Manawanui, a specialist dive and hydrographic vessel worth $100m, sank this morning after it ran aground on a reef off the coast of the Samoan island of Upolu and caught fire last night." from: "He said losing one of the Navy's five crewed ships, the first to be lost in peacetime, was "significant"." from: "HMNZS Manawanui crew and passengers rescued after ship runs aground in Samoa". New Zealand Defence Force. Archived from the original on 6 October 2024. Retrieved 6 October 2024.
5x expanded by Dumelow (talk), IdiotSavant (talk), and Nick-D (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 886 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 07:44, 7 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: All good here. An alternative hook could talk about the oil leakage and damage to the reef, but both extant hooks are sourced and viable. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lesser sign of the cross

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Created by WatkynBassett (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 27 past nominations.

WatkynBassett (talk) 06:10, 11 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Coming here from the QPQ at Template:Did you know nominations/Hammond's Hard Lines. The hook here doesn't match the text - the hook says the practice "has been traced back to the 12th century", but the article text says that that academic "traces the origin...to the 11th century". ♠PMC♠ (talk) 00:05, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Slgrandson and Premeditated Chaos: Thank you for time and the kind review. PMC, you are of course correct, this was an error or typo on my part. It should read "11th century". I corrected it above. WatkynBassett (talk) 20:07, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Black Lesbian and Gay Centre

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Created by Fomoriii (talk) and Medievalfran (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 106 past nominations.

Lajmmoore (talk) 17:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: Yes
  • Neutral: Yes
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: No - Just a little close paraphrasing to clean up: The centre found a permanent home in 1992 in a converted railway arch in Peckham is a little too similar to the source wording ...in 1992 the BLGC finally found a permanent home in a converted railway arch in Peckham, South London in my opinion.

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - Very minor wording issue with ALT0 - the source says they "supported" the boycott, the article says they "organised" it, and the hook says they "joined" it. I think all instances should reflect the wording in the source as these three can mean different things.
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: A cite for the one cn tag would be good but I won't hold this up just for that. Earwig looks good apart from the close paraphrasing noted above (basically all of the other similarity is a direct quote, which is attributed and cited. QPQ is good as well. I'm cool with either hook, both interesting IMO and sourcing checks out apart from a small wording question. (Just a note, I have named the reference used for ALT1 so the reference itself isn't duplicated). After the two issues above are resolved we should be good for a tick! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 15:37, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much for the review PCN02WPS - I've addressed the missing reference, the disparity in wording for ALT0 and the close paraphrasing. Lajmmoore (talk) 18:27, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sweet! Good to go. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 01:07, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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