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Changing name to Kurdish transliteration

Altering every instance of a subjects name without moving the page is disruptive. An IP user is doing that, and needs to engage in discussion, per the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle, rather than just "Bold, Revert, Revert...". Why should the Kurdish name be used when it has already been determined by the first section on this page that the Persian name should go first, per WP:COMMMONNAME, then the Kurdish transliteration? Mako001 (C) (T) 🇺🇦 02:47, 30 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

When a death is not a death

How unusual not to report the death of an individual in an article about her death.[1] WWGB (talk) 06:38, 9 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The death is already apparent from the title and in the article text, it doesn't need to be a line-item in the infobox as well. Rolf H Nelson (talk) 02:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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"referring to the protests[112]" needs a "." at the end of the sentence YASYASHACKER (talk) 01:24, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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ِDissolution of Guidance Patrol

The Attorney General of Iran, Mohammad Jafar Montazeri, stated in Qom on December 3, 2022, that the police guidance patrol is not under the supervision of the judiciary system and has been disbanded. He also said that the hijab law is under review.^[1]^[2]^[3]^[4]^[5]

کوردوان (talk) 18:25, 4 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

^ "Protest-Hit Iran Reviewing Mandatory Headscarf Law, Official Says". Voice of America. 3 December 2022.
^ "Protest-Hit Iran says reviewing mandatory headscarf law". France24. December 3, 2022.
^ "Iran's hijab law under review: attorney general". Al-Monitor. 3 December 2022.
^ "Prosecutor General of the country: Guidance patrol was closed | it was closed from the place it was established]". asriran.com. December 3, 2022.
^ "Protest-hit Iran abolishes morality police". France 24. 4 December 2022. Retrieved 4 December 2022.

[1] "Protest-Hit Iran Reviewing Mandatory Headscarf Law, Official Says". Voice of America. 3 December 2022.

[2] "Protest-Hit Iran says reviewing mandatory headscarf law". France24. December 3, 2022.

[3] "Iran's hijab law under review: attorney general". Al-Monitor. 3 December 2022.

[4] "Prosecutor General of the country: Guidance patrol was closed | it was closed from the place it was established]". asriran.com. December 3, 2022.

[5] "Protest-hit Iran abolishes morality police". France 24. 4 December 2022. Retrieved 4 December 2022.

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 ===ِDissolution of Guidance Patrol===
-The Attorney General of Iran, [[Mohammad Jafar Montazeri]], stated in [[Qom]] on December 3, 2022, that the police guidance patrol is not under the supervision of [[Judicial system of the Islamic Republic of Iran|the judiciary system]] and has been disbanded, although it is suspected that the agency continues to exist.<ref>{{cite news |title=Protest-hit Iran abolishes morality police |url=https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20221204-protest-hit-iran-abolishes-morality-police |access-date=4 December 2022 |work=France 24 |date=4 December 2022 |language=en}}</ref> He also said that the [[hijab]] law is under review.<ref>{{Cite news |date=3 December 2022 |title=Protest-Hit Iran Reviewing Mandatory Headscarf Law, Official Says |work=[[Voice of America]] |publisher= |url=https://www.voanews.com/a/protest-hit-iran-reviewing-mandatory-headscarf-law-official-says-/6861457.html}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |date=December 3, 2022 |title=Protest-Hit Iran says reviewing mandatory headscarf law |work=[[France24]] |publisher= |url=https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20221203-protest-hit-iran-says-reviewing-mandatory-headscarf-law}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=3 December 2022 |title=Iran's hijab law under review: attorney general |url=https://www.al-monitor.com/originals/2022/12/irans-hijab-law-under-review-attorney-general |access-date= |website=[[Al-Monitor]] |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|url=http://asriran.com/003dyf |title=Prosecutor General of the country: Guidance patrol was closed {{!}} it was closed from the place it was established]|website= asriran.com|date=  December 3, 2022}}</ref>
+The Attorney General of Iran, [[Mohammad Jafar Montazeri]], stated in [[Qom]] on December 3, 2022, that the police guidance patrol is not under the supervision of [[Judicial system of the Islamic Republic of Iran|the judiciary system]] and has been disbanded. He also said that the [[hijab]] law is under review.<ref>{{Cite news |date=3 December 2022 |title=Protest-Hit Iran Reviewing Mandatory Headscarf Law, Official Says |work=[[Voice of America]] |publisher= |url=https://www.voanews.com/a/protest-hit-iran-reviewing-mandatory-headscarf-law-official-says-/6861457.html}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |date=December 3, 2022 |title=Protest-Hit Iran says reviewing mandatory headscarf law |work=[[France24]] |publisher= |url=https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20221203-protest-hit-iran-says-reviewing-mandatory-headscarf-law}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=3 December 2022 |title=Iran's hijab law under review: attorney general |url=https://www.al-monitor.com/originals/2022/12/irans-hijab-law-under-review-attorney-general |access-date= |website=[[Al-Monitor]] |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|url=http://asriran.com/003dyf |title=Prosecutor General of the country: Guidance patrol was closed {{!}} it was closed from the place it was established]|website= asriran.com|date=  December 3, 2022}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |title=Protest-hit Iran abolishes morality police |url=https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20221204-protest-hit-iran-abolishes-morality-police |access-date=4 December 2022 |work=France 24 |date=4 December 2022 |language=en}}</ref>
 [[User:کوردوان|کوردوان]] ([[User talk:کوردوان|talk]]) 18:25, 4 December 2022 (UTC)