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Congratulations

On the AHS Centaur article passing its A-class review. It's well deserved. --Nick Dowling 08:56, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

It seems that if no-one actually objects to the A-class nomination then the article is promoted at the end of the nomination period (which seems to be rather flexible) and the comments on Centaur were really nit-picking. When I was working on bringing Axis naval activity in Australian waters from A-class to FA standard I asked User:Cla68 for his input and advice on the article, which was very valuable. It's probably best to wait a week or so before nominating for FA-status to highlight that the article is stable and to give you some time to have a fresh look at the text. I'll print it out and do a copyedit in the next few days. --Nick Dowling 09:14, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

I just had a go at copy-editing the article but couldn't find too much to fiddle with. The only suggestion I'd make is that it might be interesting to expand the coverage of the female nurses as their deaths seem to have been a particular focus of the wartime outrage and subsequent propaganda but who they were and the public reaction aren't really mentioned in the article. --Nick Dowling 12:02, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

I've added the only detail on the nurses I have in any of my reference books, but I don't think that it adds much at all, or even if the addition fits into the paragraph's topic and wording. --Nick Dowling 02:42, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

i loved the article, and had some nitpicks so nitpicky i was going to pop them here instead of wasting discussion space on the main article, but now i'm thinking i won't lol ( i will anyway). especially since several of them are likely american english issues. on the non-english front you are a bit inconsistant with year linkages. the last paragraph, for example you got about 8 years linked, yet in the first four paragraphs no year is linked (only the complete date). as a reader (not an editor or encyclopedian) i'd love to see you drop 1938 and 1941 from paragraph two, the overview is in date order and those episodes are written about in depth in the approriate and dated section. and lastly i'd be interesting in reading about the structure of the memorial pictured. do the plaques explain the design? the link to coolangatta was dissapointingly unhelpfull, and the biblograph reference that seemed the most likely to be informative was a page listing, not an actual link. oh well. sorry for the nits :) Childhoodtrauma 00:22, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

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RE:AHS Centaur reflist

Hey, im pretty sure the code is correct it shows up as two for me, try purging your server cache, if that doesn't work let me know. Hossen27 00:51, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

nits bvol 2

ok...

>>>Dropping 1938 and 1941. I am confised as to where they are, and where they should be dropped from. Care to whack a block of text in front of me?

again this was a reader reaction not an editor reaction, the initial summary is shoved full of info. So much so that i found myself trying to skim out a few less critical details. those details are covered extremely well in the paragraphs below, so i would think we could do without those dates for sure. so much happened in her history i'm not sure how much more tightening the introduction to her story could stand. read the paragrph without it and if you don't agree ignore the suggestion..

The Scottish-built vessel was launched in 1924 as a combination passenger liner/freighter, and operated a trade route between Western Australia and Singapore via the island of Java, carrying passengers, cargo, and livestock.[1][2] Centaur served in both civilian and military capabilities, and during her career was involved in towing a damaged Japanese whale-chaser in 1938, and recovering German survivors of the engagement between HMAS Sydney and HSK Kormoran in 1941

on the links to years. i hate em. i'd gut them all. when someone talks about oh janurary 15, 1972 maybe i will take a look at that date, but the year 1932? however it is "wiki" to do so. But consistancy is easier to deal with than inconsistancy. and whatever you decide you will face the possiblity of 1000 wiki self editors changing it anyway. but consider the first two lines

>>>Australian Hospital Ship (AHS) Centaur[I] was a hospital ship during World War II, which was attacked and sunk by a Japanese submarine in 1943. Of the 332 medical personnel and crew aboard, 268 died.

The Scottish-built vessel was launched in 1924 as a combination passenger liner/freighter, and operated a trade route between Western Australia and Singapore via the island of Java, carrying passengers, cargo, and livestock.

UNLINKED

and the bottom of the article? the last paragraph has every date linked. the last line i typical

>>>>It was removed in 1992 to make way for a display related to the Vietnam War.[107]

LINKED

i might suggest the compromise of not linking any year that stands alone, and linking all dates of "month, day, year", format. in some sense it looks like that may have been something attempted at one time, as many of the early unlinked dates eventually link when they show up in a full format. but then there are some dates linked twice in the back-to-back sentences while other places that is avoided.

>>>>The media were notified of Centaur's sinking on May 17, 1943, but were ordered not to release the news until it had been announced in Parliament by Prime Minister John Curtin.[71] This announcement was made on the afternoon of May 17.[72]

both linked!

on the memorial-- i did attempt some minor searches into finding out its, ummm, design history because it seems non-representative by its photo. so i can understand the problem. Shame. but perhaps unavoidable.

i also think a few commas could stand removal. and on the "two peoples seperated by a common language front" the 60 minutes here have 'stories', while newspapers have 'articles', so i had to re-read that sentence the first time though. that is not something that should be change if the originating version of 60 minutes refers to its pieces as 'articles'.

realisitcally i liked it, i'd be happy to see it featured (shame it missed last month where certain days would make it more appropriatly featured). and the points i did make were literally small enough that i did decide they didnt even merit a discussion of the disccusion section of the article itself :) always willing to nit pick past the usefullness for it to be done, but ultimately if none of this is helpfull, ignore immediately.

and if you have copious free time, i'd love to see something on the limerick on wiki. even a stub! (a search of "8,742 ton freighter Limerick" on a search engine gave nothing.) maybe i'll scrape up some money and bounty it...

grrrr

i messed up so had to stop to figure out what i accidently deleted:)

i did manage to pull a few commas and do even less unsavory things for about a third of the article. if it was unhelpful let me know and i wont do any more.

two things though... the austrialian pound linkage appears broken (and not because of me i think)

and this phrase...

>>>>unable to deal with the quantity and the injuries of the casualties

i got such an urge to try and replace injuries with something since it seems that injuries than casualties are redundant. something like "quanity and types of injuries" or maybe "qunatity and severity of the injuries of the casualties".. but im not sure either was valid so i left the original in place.

perhaps even "ovrwhelmed by the quantity of the casualties" and just remove the injuries part?

oh well

sback to the hockey game....

ok did a bit more (up to "attacker") two things i left. In american enlish the phrase "A RAAF Avro Ansen" should be "An RAAF.... wasn't sure that was universal though (the "an" before vowel SOUNDS instead of just vowels)

and "portside oil fuel tank" --know nothing abot ships so that is likely a correct designation but it did seem posible it should be fuel-oil tank instead. a phrase (fuel-oil) which is used later in the article as well.

other than that, a few more commas and stuff. tried to keep the same tense in a few sentences. a bit rough during some of the compound ones... oh well. ducks win the cup :) Childhoodtrauma 02:26, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

lol. no problems. ducks are NHL hockey. championship decided tonight. ducks won. yea pretty much a north american sport, but hey, who knows, i used to watch aussie rules football years ago at 3 am (what is up with the white coats for the judges?!?)! and didnt you hang out in boston? they have a team! or is there a boston down under as well?

anyway raaf, if pronounced, you are right (and one of the reasons i left it "a" and then asked). looked similar to RAF (royal air force) so i assumed it was pronounced R-A-A-F as raf is pronounced R-A-F. my bad.

I'll destroy another section in a day or two...Childhoodtrauma 03:05, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

AHS Centaur syntax issue

Hey, there seems to be a syntax error in the in-line citations causing them to not register in the reference list. I got too frustrated not being able to finding it so hopefully you can. Hossen27 08:33, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

No worries I've done it a few times myself. Good eye I just couldn't find it. Also if you still cant see the two column ref list i am about to use a template istead of what we have now, ope you can see this one. Hossen27`

Very unusual but not a big issue, still a very good article. Hossen27

bad day at black rock

lost the entire update i was working on. will try to remember th main ones i had written about. may have missed one or something i edited and gave a reason for. sorry... got to memorials (yea almost the end, but i am really fried lol)

>>>>>>>>>>Although initially ordered to perform the conversion, efforts by the Department of the Navy, the Admiralty, and authorities in New Zealand and the United States of America caused the completed conversion to be undone..

left as is although i think i'd prefer something like  : The initially ordered conversion was performed...

basically the opening makes it sound as if the conversion was not taking place, only ordered, until the end of the sentence and we catch up it had been a fait accompli

>>>>>>>>> lost where it is in the work but on the rumor section, i did change "these" to "this" on the last bit. seemed to me by the end of the rumor section you were talking about a specific notion (japan 'knew' war goods aboard) and that a singular worked better. I could be wrong.. but i did change it

>>>>>>>During the investigation many of the Japanese officers who had commanded submarines in Australian waters were interrogated, including Nakagawa on three seperate occasions.

perhaps two sentences would work there? during the...... interrogated. Nakadawa was interviewed three seperate times. as is, it sounds a bit like all officers might have been talked to three times. i left it alone though

>>>>>>>>>>>>These submarines attacked or sunk almost 50 merchant vessels, with 20 sinkings confirmed to be the result of a Japanese attack, and an additional 9 unconfirmed.

I think this might go better with just "attacked almost 50", then going with the 20 sinkings. "or" just seems a weird word there and makes the inital math seem funky until you realise, 50 is ATTACKED. 20 plus 9 is SUNK. and "and" is just incorrect.

something like : These submarines attacked nearly 50 merchant vessels and sunk at least 20 of them.

>>>>>>>>>>The finding was reported on A Current Affair, during which film of the shipwreck 170 metres underwater, which was claimed by discoverer Donald Dennis had been checked by the Navy, the Queensland Maritime Museum, and the Australian War Memorial to establish the identity of the vessel.

I'm a bit fried now so it might be me, but i don't think that is a sentence. missing a verb i think. sometimes hard to see with the wiki clutter links, but shouldn't, at least, be something like during which film of the shipwreck .... WAS SHOWN.. or WAS AIRED.. or something. seems the noun of "film" needs a partner that i can't find.. Childhoodtrauma 02:18, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

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Fly Gibraltar

I see you added an AfD message and then removed it. There is no evidence that this 'airline' exists, there is no certainly no mention of it on the website of Astraeus, who are a real operator.

The CAA do not list it, and their licencing department say they know nothing about it. So much for 'we are waiting to be licenced'.

A prominent person in the trade here commented 'Smoke and Mirrors' which I found rather amusing as that was my view. I don't think imaginary airlines are good for either Gibraltar or Wikipedia.

However, I need a hand to get rid of it !

--Gibnews 22:39, 11 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice, I will follow the recipe. Others were keen to critisise my attempts at deletion but not willing explain the detail. --Gibnews 17:26, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

OK been there and done that, I think I did something wrong as the Afd page opens in the edit mode. --Gibnews 19:35, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

Seems to be working OK, thanks for your help on this. --Gibnews 07:39, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

last one

saw you removed 'unanswered' peer reviews. it that a bad thing?

obviously not much to look at, did a few things, most destructive was changing a sentence i didnt like into this "The centrepiece of the display was a scale model of Centaur, presented by Blue Funnel Line that included several items that were donated for display by the survivors, such as a lifejacket, a signal flare, and a medical kit. "

actually i'm pretty sure the ',' after survivors needs to still go. the original, and this modified version seem to assume the display items from the survivors were part of the scale model centerpiece (whihc is possible depending what the scale of the model was). if they were part of the display but NOT the centerpiece, the sentence needs to probably be something like

The centrepiece of the display was a scale model of Centaur, presented by Blue Funnel Line. The Display included several items that were donated by the survivors such as a lifejacket, a signal flare, and a medical kit.

good luck in the fa hunt

also was reading random stupid stuff and came across the date discussion, according to that, an editor whom should know listed the manual of style as saying not to link years alone, but lways like full dates. which is what i think was the basic stance you decided was appropriate anyway. just nice to be "right" lol.

Childhoodtrauma 23:14, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

Re: AHS Centaur... FAC?

I think that you should go for it. The article looks great and I think that it would have an excellent chance of passing the FAR. --Nick Dowling 09:41, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

I've started the article Japanese submarine I-177 as a stub to remove a significant red link. It looks like the FA nomination is going very well, but the article might help. --Nick Dowling 02:49, 17 June 2007 (UTC)

congrats on the featured article status! Childhoodtrauma 23:54, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

Congratulations! The ease with which the FA nomination went through says everything about the quality of your work on the article. --Nick Dowling 09:03, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

...well, if you're looking for a new challenge Attack on Sydney Harbour could very easily be brought to FA standard in my opinion - its already an excellent article, and just needs to be expanded and referenced. I'm planning to make it a priority. --Nick Dowling 10:29, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Wow, that's already looking great! As the article has been established for a lot longer than the Centaur one, could I suggest that you post each section to the main article as you're happy with it rather than inserting the lot in one go? - making a major change to a semi-prominent article with lots of 'stakeholders' could be asking for trouble. --Nick Dowling 10:47, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Bathurst class

Hi, I just noticed that you have 'Infobox Ship templating and Multiple Wikiproject templating of every single Bathurst class corvette' in your to-do list. When I wrote the HMAS Wagga article I found that the stats on Wagga's size and speed on the Seapower Centre - Australia website slightly differed from those in the Bathurst class infobox, so this may need to be either updated or tweaked for each ship (as the Bathursts were built over several years in several shipyards I imagine that there were some differences between units). --Nick Dowling 10:54, 15 June 2007 (UTC)

Formatting

Hello... sorry, but I had to revert your changes at Minutes to Midnight (disambiguation). As per the style guide, song titles and television episode titles are put in quotation marks, while album titles and television series titles are italicized. Cheers. --Ckatz^chat_spy 22:36, 21 June 2007 (UTC)

Re: Attack on Sydney Harbour

I think that it looks fantastic. I'd suggest that you start uploading parts of it to the main article. --Nick Dowling 10:40, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

Congratulations on the article passing A-class review! It's well deserved. --Nick Dowling 08:44, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

I think that it's ready for a FA nomination now. --Nick Dowling 11:35, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

Congratulations! --Nick Dowling 08:39, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

Hello

Hi Saberwyn, seems we have some things in common, being both ex-Normo and naval buffs. I was a seaman officer in the RAN and Merchant Navies for 29 years. I also note a pleasing grammatical pedantry on your part. If I can help with any naval articles or whatever, give a shout. Rumiton 10:18, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

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attack

how is it going?

probably going to be slower in getting though this one, just read the intro a few times, and might make some minor changes that you can change back etc, but there is a central issue i have with the into that is making the editing difficult to start. I suggest leaving the ulimate fate of the one submarine that did damage in the over night raid to the main body. as it is, not only does it break the narrative of the intro, it makes the pronoun in the next paragraph confusing

This midget submarine then disappeared, its fate remaining a mystery until its wreck was discovered in 2006 by amateur scuba divers off Sydney's northern beaches.

Immediately following this, the five fleet submarines responsible for delivering the midgets embarked on a ...

making this logically refer to the scubba divers' discovery an making the fleet seem to be australian instead of Japanese, etc...

Childhoodtrauma 18:21, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Well done. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 02:00, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

On a quick pass, I think you got everything. There are so many dashes and hyphens in there, it's hard to tell :-) Congrats on the FA ! SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:00, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

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attack on sydney harbour

reread this entry a few times today (finally, sorry for the delay). Other than the typical thought that there may be too many commas, i didnt find a single of import thing that i wanted to change. the cleanup of the pronoun at the bigging was effective and looked like it removed a minimal of words. really nice job.

the only only only thing that had me pausing at all was the lead line of the main body of the article

"Six submarines of the Imperial Japanese Navy were to be used in the attack on Sydney Harbour"

because i keep trying to figure out if six would be used, or six were originally planned to be used but less (or more) were actually used :)

really nicly done..

Childhoodtrauma 18:32, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

I like the change. certianly flagged well as the original plan of six being used. the forces section does go on to mention which one of the 6th was sunk before the attack. Childhoodtrauma 18:22, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

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X-Wing

That's fucking boss. I like that article version tremendously. Brave-o! Howa0082 14:29, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

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DYK

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HMAS Melbourne

Hi, The Flikr photoset I pulled 3 photos of Melbourne out of is at: http://flickr.com/photos/11360033@N04/sets/72157603350030732/ and has other images you might want to consider - though the quality isn't great. I stupidly uploaded the small versions of the images, and not the large version. User:Saberwyn/HMAS Melbourne (R21) is looking fantastic. --Nick Dowling (talk) 09:29, 22 December 2007 (UTC)

I've got some stuff on the fate of Melbourne's A-4s, but not much else I'm afraid. According to David Stevens et al's 'The Royal Australian Navy', the ADF had pretty much decided that purchasing a new carrier wasn't a good use of money before the 1982 election (the Navy seems to have still thought a replacement worthwhile, but not by much of a margin), so the article should reflect this. I'll add some stuff in later today. --Nick Dowling (talk) 22:58, 22 December 2007 (UTC)

Thanks and Happy New Year

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Re: HMAS Melboure rewrite Mark II

Were these significant refits? If they were just routine maintenance (which looks like it was the case) they should be integrated into the operational history section and the 'refits' section only cover the refits in which she was significantly modified. The amount of time she spent out of service is incredible, but this is in line with the service histories of the USN's carriers. No wonder the Navy always wanted two active carriers! (and the other services wanted Melbourne gone). --Nick Dowling (talk) 10:22, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Date formats.

Tidying-up, as per Manual of style. Most Wikipedia users are readers, rather than editors, and as such have no accounts and hence no date preferences. --Pete (talk) 07:54, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

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RE:Sources in Through the Fire and Flames

Thanks for the clarification I changed it to just that Totman is seen drinking in the video which seems obvious. It also looks like the label is intentionally obscured in the video. My main concern is that I see a lot of citation needed tags that are ambiguous. The note seemed like it wanted a source that mentions wether or not Totman was drinking and not that the citation is needed as to what is being drunk in the video.--Chinakow (talk) 19:15, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

Redirect in User:Saberwyn/Bathurst class corvette

Hi. I've been fixing erroneous references to Australia in the War of 1939–1945 and eliminating redirects to this article via Official History of Australia in the War of 1939–1945. One of these redirects is in User:Saberwyn/Bathurst class corvette; but as this article resides in your user space, I'll let you eliminate it. Thanks. R. A. Hicks (talk) 23:11, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

Barnstar

		The Special Barnstar
		Well young man, as an old codger nearly four times your age, let me just say how impressed I am with your work on HMAS Melbourne. I read it with my best jaundiced eye, slept on it, and at the end could only come up with nit pickers. Your collision giffs are great. I'm impressed... Geronimo20 (talk) 10:44, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Okay, I've done an initial nit picker with an edit summary Set more coherent format for references. Revert if you aren't happy with it. Cheers. --Geronimo20 (talk) 11:11, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Battle Cougar

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Melbourne/Evans

Thanks for the note—I'll take a look at it soon. If I haven't gotten to it in a few days, please do remind me; I'm in the midst of several FA reviews but I don't want to forget you. Thanks. Maralia (talk) 00:31, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

You've mainly addressed my sourcing concern, thanks; I know it must have been a fair amount of work. I remain concerned, though, about comments like "King...was seen...to be biased", "King's attitude, performance, and conflict of interest were criticised by ... the Press", and "significant attempts were made to reduce the US destroyer's culpability and place partial blame for the incident on Melbourne". You have sourced all those statements, but they are unattributed in the text, and therefore come across as some sort of global condemnation rather than the reaction of an aggrieved party in a dispute. By way of comparison, imagine if I quoted "Stevenson was seen to be careless and negligent" and "the RAN was criticized for attempting a coverup", all referenced to American books but not qualified in the text as American opinion/reaction—I completely made those up, obviously, but I hope you can see the problem.

Since we can't find any significant non-US and non-Australian coverage, it seems like the best way to proceed might be to compartmentalize the two 'sides' and present them as such in the article. I propose a reorg of the Inquiry section:

1. Proceedings - a strictly factual summary of the inquiry proceedings (who, when, where, etc and the official findings)
2. Reaction in the US - the subsequent 3 courts-martial
3. Reaction in Australia - controversy over King's selection as president, accusations of bias in the proceedings, and info about Stevenson's court-martial and effect on his career

I think this would alleviate most of my concerns about POV here. What do you think? (and my apologies for proposing what will likely, in the end, be more work for you.) Maralia (talk) 04:31, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

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Pacific class patrol boat

Hi, I've recently created an article on the Pacific class patrol boats which you might be interested in. --Nick Dowling (talk) 10:56, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

Wow, that's excellent! --Nick Dowling (talk) 22:27, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

HMAS Melbourne (R21) is an outstanding article and the only suggestion I have is to trim the bits on the Voyager and Frank E. Evans collisions further as they're covered in dedicated articles on the topics. The material on the Royal Commissions and inquiries should probably be pruned (as they're not directly about Melbourne) while all the material on the collisions should remain. --Nick Dowling (talk) 23:14, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

Yep, that's great. I've just removed the POV tag as the sources and wording seem fine. I'd say that the article is ready for an A-class review --Nick Dowling (talk) 04:27, 2 March 2008 (UTC)

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Photos for HMAS Melbourne article

I have been going through some old negatives and have found a few that might be uuseful for the Melbourne article. As you know I have alread put up a couple that are on there, but I have some more (actually I have lots, but let's not over do this) - it takes my scanner a very long time to scan the negs at a reasonable resolution, so I will only be putting them up slowly, but I notice that most of the photos in the articel are from early service, so I will chuck in what I have got.

Currently I am scanning a photo of a tracker on the catapault and I have one of a tracker just launched, not sure which one will prove to be the best, wait and see. I think I have a photo of the DDG HMAS Brisbane taken at sea, if I find that, I will look to see if there is an article for that ship. Anyway, just pluggin away. The Melbourne article is looking pretty good to me at the moment.

Nick Thorne ^talk 13:35, 7 March 2008 (UTC)

Ha! It wasn't Brisbane, it was Perth - should have realised, if I had only thought about it, I always knew it was Perth that accompanied us to RIMPAC 80. FYI, I have put the photo up on the HMAS Perth (D 38) page. P.S. Do you think I have over done it with the photos on the Melbourne article? it's hard to know when to stop somethimes <grin> Nick Thorne ^talk 21:59, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

spacing

Thanks, i know i messed it up, but on the edit window i couldn't see what to do to fix it.--Cube lurker (talk) 03:29, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

To be honest, had absolutely no idea about the strike needing to start to the right of the asterisk. As i said, i learned something, many thanks.--Cube lurker (talk) 03:40, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

New! BCAD drive from Milhist

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Traker wingtip clearance

Hi there, don't be too upset about the issue of the clearance, Hall did not say the superstructure but I can see how this could easily be interpreted as what he meant. Who lnows where he got his info from, and maybe he even thought it was to the island anyway. Even the new wording in the Melbourne article would probably be interpreted as meaning to the island by most readers. Unfortunately I have not yet been able to find source that lists the correct clearance to the island, if I do manage to find one, then I will alter tha article to show both figures and give a more complete picture of the reality of it. The fact is, things were damn tight on Melbourne, she was not designed to operate the aircraft we were using on her and I have to admit it did give us an enormous sense of pride to achieve what we did on the old lady. Nick Thorne ^talk 21:19, 11 March 2008 (UTC)

HMAS Melbourne (R21)

Passed A-class review. Well done. Blnguyen (vote in the photo straw poll) 07:01, 12 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Image query - HMAS Melbourne's bell

I took the photo at the Navy Heritage Centre in Sydney. I also took a photo of the ship's anchor which is on the Commons page, but can't figure out where it fits in the article. The bell is arguably more important anyway, as ship's bells are considered a key symbol of the ship. --Nick Dowling (talk) 10:56, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

I'd imagine that she had several anchors. A ship that big would certainly need them! --Nick Dowling (talk) 11:08, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Awards

		WikiProject Ships Barnstar
		For being the first Wikipedian to promote an article on an aircraft carrier to A-class status I hereby award you the WikiProject Ships Barnstar. Keep up the good work! TomStar81 (Talk) 05:58, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

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		For being the first Wikipedian to promote an article on an aircraft carrier to FA-class I hereby award you the WikiChevrons. Keep up the good work. TomStar81 (Talk) 05:58, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

I relaise that second award is a little preemptive, but I believe that your article will go featured sometime during the work week, and I have school work to see to, so I am giving you this award now so you can reveal in it when Melborne does go featured :-) TomStar81 (Talk) 05:58, 16 March 2008 (UTC)

Re: Fire and Flames

Probably. ---Torchflame (talk) 22:55, 17 March 2008 (UTC)

the permanent campaign to reduce or eliminate excess noncontributory verbiage

Glad you agree. I find in particular that a sentence containing "the fact that" can nearly always be improved. —Tamfang (talk) 00:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

HMAS Melbourne FAC attempt

Hi, I am done for the moment. I have been mostly trying to just pick on small things, I do not think we have conflicted so far. If I spy any typos or other minor things like that, I may still nick in for a quick edit, but I will avoid editing the entire article and stick to section edits, that way we are unlikely to cross swords, so to speak. I see my role as entirely supportive of your efforts, the only reason that I have not made a comment on the FAC page is that I consider myself a substantive contributor tot he article and so consider myself inelligible. Nick Thorne ^talk 00:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

I do have a couple verticle photos of Melbourne, the full photo of the one that I used in the wingtip clearance does not quite include the bow of the ship. I do have another one that I found just recently that I took at the same time, but I have not yet scanned the neg and I am not sure just how good it is. Most of these I had previously only seen after getting them printed commercially years ago and some of them which were pretty ordinary in the print have scanned up very well. I'll scan the new one and I can also give you a copy of the other. Would you like me to email them first so you can see if they are suitable for what you want? Might take me a day or two, I'm in the middle of an epic clean up here. It's amazing how much junk you can collect over the years! Nick Thorne ^talk 09:13, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Ok, I've also got sdome deck shots of trackers, folding wings, in the lift and some other stuff, I planned to upload them anyway, I just didn't think we neede to over do the thing on the main article. Keep your eyes peeled on the Commons, I'll categorise them for Melbourne so they shoulf be easy enough to find.

No probs with the license thing, I'm not interested in trying to make money out of them, I'm only too happy that I can contribute. Nick Thorne ^talk 09:32, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

CPI

No problem, but let's keep a look out for these data—they must be somewhere. Tony (talk) 00:41, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Congratulations on the article on HMAS Melbourne passing FA review! As an economist, I still think that the CPI is a missleading measure of warship prices as the cost of most kinds of military equipment has consistantly increased faster than the CPI as technology advances and limited competition do their things. The figure of AU$113.6 million 2007 dollars for both carriers in the article is clearly not realistic in my opinion given that the two Canberra class large amphibious ships, which are roughly as sophisticated as the carriers were in their day, are going to cost about $3 billion - while the carriers were sold for a low price, I doubt that the British would have reduced their cost by that much, especially given that a considerable ammount of work was needed to finish the ships. The conversions from the 1960s onwards look more realistic at face value, but are also serious under-estimates. For instance, according to the 2006-07 Defence Annual Report the annual cost of the Navy's air arm (which is both smaller and, arguably, less sophisticated than the air arm prior to 1982 - though the Seahawks were until recently the most expensive aircraft the ADF has ever purchased) was no less than $587,952,000, which is much higher than the estimated $89.5 million for Melbourne in 1977 (I assume that this includes her running costs and the costs of operating her air group - if not, the cost of running the Navy's 13 frigates in 2006-07 was over $1.8 billion, which works out at about $141 million per frigate per year - given that wages are a major component of this, the cost of operating Melbourne today would be several times this figure). That said, you might be interested to know that the ABS recently placed all editions of Year Book Australia online and they could have the figures you're after - if the series goes back that far, which it may not. --Nick Dowling (talk) 01:34, 21 March 2008 (UTC) --Nick Dowling (talk) 02:00, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Just to summarise, my concern is that the conversions don't reflect the true cost of operating the carrier in modern terms. The conversions provide a rough estimate of the ammount of household goods the money used on the carrier would have bought if it had been used for this purpose instead, which is certainly of some value, but this leads to readers possibly coming away from the article thinking that naval aviation is much cheaper than is actually the case. I don't know what the best wording solution is, but it's not correct to state things like Melbourne's 1967-69 modernisation "cost AU$8.5 million (AU$79.6 million in 2007)" as the cost of performing this modernisation today would probably be much higher as the cost of ship modifications has increased faster than the cost of the 'bundle' of household goods used to calculate the CPI. --Nick Dowling (talk) 02:16, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Rather than just whinge, I've been a bit bold and edited the article to better explain the conversions. This diff: [4] shows how I've vauged up the figures. You should cite the CPI data you used to make these conversions (presumably ABS Cat. 6401 Consumer Price, Australia - if so the month of issue should be noted as the ABS sometimes adjusts its figures - or the historical data on the Reserve Bank's website) --Nick Dowling (talk) 09:00, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

a small token

		The Resilient Barnstar
		Congratulations on the promotion of HMAS Melbourne (R21) to FA! My most heartfelt thanks for the time, care, and especially the patience you put into addressing my nitpicking points since the peer review back in January. I'm awfully pleased with the article, and look forward to doing it again (hopefully with less of the painful bits)! Maralia (talk) 03:21, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Well done that man!

Bravo Zulu for your work in getting the HMAS Melbourne article to FA. A magnificent effort. Nick Thorne ^talk —Preceding comment was added at 14:31, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

multirefs

I always hate seeing 30 refs with only 21 sources. As a matter of opinion do you think named ref links(<ref name="Larry">[Larry.com Larry Page]</ref>)should be the first refence, the last refernce, or a middle reference? --Lemmey (talk) 13:24, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

List of Bathurst class corvettes

Is it OK for me to add items to this list on your user page? (I hope so, as I've just added about 8 ships!) --Nick Dowling (talk) 07:25, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

OK. I don't see any reason why a comprehensive and well set out list like that one can't become a featured list... --Nick Dowling (talk) 22:22, 29 March 2008 (UTC)

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No problem!

Hey. Sorry, not sure how to send messages on wiki yet. No problem about the article though. I hate seeing false information.WTFitsRacerD (talk) 07:30, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

Badges

I've always found the infobox an odd place for images. It lends itself perfectly well to an official textual description, as at HMS Arrow (H42) but I think it looks a bit out of place in the infobox, especially when it displays halfway in the box. On the other hand it seems a nice illustrative feature to lift out and bring a little prominence to in the introductory section. At the moment its a standard applied to all of the S, T and U classes that have badges, so I wouldn't really be in favour of piecemeal changes that break that convention. I understand what you mean about the risk of pinching the text, but it doesn't seem to me to be that much of an issue. There's also cases where a ship has had two badges, in which case a badge can illustrate the appropriate sections, but would rather overwhelm the infobox. Benea (talk) 11:30, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

I think it wouldn't work for your Melbourne example (actually there are a lot of images on that page that do exactly the same thing, ie. risk pinching the text. Have you considered an image gallery?), as it is too big and in the absence of a specific section discussing the badge, and with a surfeit of images anyway, the infobox is probably the only place it can go. This doesn't on the other hand apply to Tabard (with the section about the name where the fact she was probably named after the Tabard, the badge serves as a little piece of evidence, neat eh?) so I agree it's probably best to leave it to personal preference on how the format looks and works in each specific case. As to Royal Navy histories, there are many excellent books about ship services in the Second World War. For accessibility the best online resource is probably Geoff Mason's ship histories. Queenborough's entry is here. It's quite thorough, specifically about that ship and very reliable. Good luck, Benea (talk) 12:27, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

Cardiff review

Nope, not harsh at all, in fact thanks for contributing some good ideas, I'll action them soon. Let me action some of your ideas first, before you go to "town" (ooh er misses, be gentle, I've been nurturing this baby for 2 n half months) on the article, and I've also updated the review.

P.S. Sorry for the late reply I was called away for a day Ryan4314 (talk) 14:06, 16 April 2008 (UTC)

Great ideas, especially in regards to the excess links and merging bracketed information in for flow. I'm a little more reserved on the idea of cutting back the refs, only because those refs are the only refs citing that particular piece of infomation.

I've looked over your rewrite and there is a few things I feel I should point out:

• In the first line which says: Cardiff was built in the first batch of Type 42 or "Sheffield class" destroyers. Do we really need the extra "Type 42" link, considering we have a "see also, Type 42" tag just one line above it?
• In regards to the incident with TC-92, I deliberately made the description of the event vague, as there is (of course) some controversy concerning it. The British say they missed because she was at maximum range, the Argentines will say she dodged because of skillfull flying. In particular the word "damaged", some Argentine sources state that due to one of the missiles passing so close, that it left a strange sticky brown substence on the tail (which could be construed by some as "damage"). I think it will be better just to have the basics, Cardiff fired, TC-92 made it home and bam! end off. After all, we provide the "external links" section for readers if they want to further their research.
• You missed a space in "intoGroup X-ray" in the Gulf section ;)

Everything else is ace, top stuff honestly. I completely give my blessing for you to make the proposed changes in your rewrite, after we have a little chat about TC-92. I'm keen to read your reply, it's obvious you know your stuff :) Ryan4314 (talk) 18:22, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Yes I've been admiring your work, I'm very impressed. replies;

• I too have been pondering about the "Sheffield class" link, perhaps we should just drop the whole link all together?
• In regards to TC-92, I don't think a typical "controversy bit" would be appropiate. Problem is, it wasn't a very major event of the war, in fact a lot of Cardiff's actions were drowned out. However in hindsight (re; my previous reply concerning TC-92) I guess I could actually expand on the incident a little more (just a little though, sources for it are so spurios lol). So how about I expand that bit in about the next week or so (I'm away at the mo and I like to do proper contributions from my home computer)?

I'll happily merge in 95% of your rewrite (tomorrow though, as it's bedtime over here), barring TC-92 as per above. It's a real pleasure to meet such a helpful editor, with great ideas and is considerate to the feelings of others regarding big rewrites, cheers. Ryan4314 (talk) 22:10, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Merged your C/E in, you might wanna check the review & article, there's been some other great contributions. Ryan4314 (talk) 20:39, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Hi mate, I expanded the TC-92 (and Dagger attack) sections as promised, would you mind giving them a quick C/E, cheers. Ryan4314 (talk) 14:07, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

1. May 22nd
2. I've changed the bit about the 3rd dagger, let me know what you think. Ryan4314 (talk) 23:24, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Right you are, thanks again for the help. Ryan4314 (talk) 23:50, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Hi mate, I just made some teeny changes to your edits, let me know what you think. In regards to "the detection" by the Tidespring, I'd just leave it out if I was you. Ya see, the Tidespring was essentially just a supply ship, it's unlikely it detected an incoming contact as opposed to the 2 Anti-Aircraft vessels (Bristol & Cardiff) in the group. Plus the veteran Ken I spoke to says he doesn't even remember Tidespring having any radar (of that sort). If memory serves, that particular piece of information came from the Navy News "day by day", which has been a little unreliable. Ryan4314 (talk) 07:18, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

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