Talk:Maon Kurosaki

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Maon Kurosaki/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Greetings. I will do the GA review of this article after finally getting back my computer today. The article seems good written but there are somethings that confused me:

  • Shouldn't "Musical style and influences" be kept with the original parts of biography?
No, that's the standard way of sectioning musician articles: Biography/Career and Musical style and influences. See Mami Kawada or Supercell (band) for other examples. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Also, the "Musical style and influences" is not mentioned in the lead a bit. I am pretty sure you could expand it with two or three sentences.
 Done. I added a single sentence to the lede that summarizes the section. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
  • The music videos section is completely unsourced and lacks directors so I suggest removing it unless you plan to add content.
I've been thinking of spinning off her discography section into another article; pinging AngusWOOF to ask if this is feasible. But if you want, I'll just comment it out pending sources. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
It's not that big to warrant a separate article, but up to you. AngusWOOF (barksniff) 01:09, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Reference 9 lacks publisher.
 Done Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
 Done Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Everything else seems okay to me. Good work in the article.Tintor2 (talk) 14:37, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Passing it. Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 00:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Year of birth[edit]

Is there any source on the year Kurosaki was born? We have the date (January 13) but not the year. If anyone has a source, can they please insert it into the page? Thanks in advance.-- (talk) 23:01, 10 April 2017 (UTC)