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December 3

04:48:17, 3 December 2018 review of submission by Loonieeex



In my opinion, Handy Backup is a program of significant importance. It exists since 2002, it has countless users throughout the world, and it is updating constantly. I don't think that all products listed in the List_of_backup_software are more important than Handy Backup. How I can rewrite an article to make it more important and helpful for Wikipedia users? Please give me an adivce.

Loonieeex (talk) 04:48, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Loonieeex. Neither PCauthorities nor TechWibe exhibit the characteristics of reliable sources, so don't use them as references. PCMag and PCworld are acceptable sources, but not great ones. Look for more and better sources. Don't cherrypick sources. PCMag's June 17, 2003 review describes Handy Backup 3.9 as "mediocre and somewhat limiting". An encyclopedia such as Wikipedia is often more interested in the history of a thing than in its current state.
You may be able to get more advice by asking at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Software. In addition to Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies)#Products and services, there's an essay on the notability of software products. If the topic doesn't meet Wikipedia's inclusion criteria, consider alternative outlets, such as Software Wikia. --Worldbruce (talk) 16:38, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

08:36:29, 3 December 2018 review of draft by Dominik Hellfritzsch


Hey dear AfC-Team,

I filed a request a couple of weeks ago on the above mentioned article that was declined by a reviewer who has been banned since then and who I could not contact for further information due to that. So far I have not gotten a response to said request so I hope it is okay to give it another try. I'll quote my original request here:

"Hi there,

I recently tried to create this article on a piece of software on behalf of the company I'm working for. I created an article for both the German and English Wikipedia using mostly the same sources (unless there was a more useful source exclusive to either language). The German article was accepted without a problem while it did not pass review here. By now I know that the different Wikipedias operate quite differently, but I'd still like to know how specifically I can improve the draft so I can re-submit it at some point. Sadly I cannot contact the person responsible for the review since they have since then been blocked due to sock puppetry. Maybe somebody here can help me. Thanks a lot in advance!

best,

Dominik"

Dominik Hellfritzsch (talk) 08:36, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

09:30:35, 3 December 2018 review of submission by Sree-Kumar


Have added references, to go with the matter [and, would add more], and believe - the content abides with the policies of Wikipedia. Please do the needful. Thanks. Sree-Kumar (talk) 09:30, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


13:37:46, 3 December 2018 review of draft by Netart nazwa


Hello, I have information that my article is an advert. Could you show me in which parts? I will be very greatfull and change my article immediately.

Netart nazwa (talk) 13:37, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

14:17:39, 3 December 2018 review of draft by Galesbury


Have started this biography. I've chosen not too get into the full biog as I'd like the community to take it and "run with it" so to speak. There are specialists in this area, so rather than make a hash of the biog and then have someone correct it, I feel a fleshing out of the biog should come from the community. Hence, my submission is not the entire lifespan of the person.

Welcome feedback!

Galesbury 14:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

16:40:56, 3 December 2018 review of submission by Crossxroads315


The reviewer said "none of he sources cover Anna in detail" but the first source is her biography. Which states that she's an artist that appeared on America's Got Talent, was a Vine personality, and it also signed to a record label. The interview source discusses her mental health, which although is a primary source, other secondary sources included have also discussed her mental health. The interview article simply shows her commitment to bringing awareness to it. Sources on HuffPost, Mashable, and Hollywood Reporter verify her participation on America's Got Talent as well as her influence on Vine. These sources are independent and reliable, and they aren't press releases or some form of advertising. She is in the process of releasing an album on a major indie label, that has many notable artists signed under them. She is worth a wikipedia article because she fits the criteria.

Crossxroads315 (talk) 16:40, 3 December 2018 (UTC)crossxroads315[reply]

Do notice that except is used (AllMusic is a good start), but everything else is a passing mention or primary. She needs multiple reliable secondary sources that cover her in detail. One is not enough (with that also being AllMusic bio to boot). Jovanmilic97 (talk) 15:30, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Confused

17:39:03, 3 December 2018 review of draft by Tara bast sadie kane


I am requesting help for a message sent to my old account. The message claimed that I was vadilizing Wikipedia, but I lost the password!!!!! It's not possible because no one knows my old password or username!!!!!!! Is it possible that Wikipedia was wrong? FROM TARA BAST SADIE KANE (respond on my page) Tara bast sadie kane (talk) 17:39, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Tara bast sadie kane. This page is for questions about the Articles for creation process. Please consider asking this question at the Wikipedia:Help desk. - This is where editors will try to answer any question regarding how to use Wikipedia. Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try searching Wikipedia for any help related to the topic you want to know more about. I hope this helps!
--Worldbruce (talk) 18:16, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

19:47:46, 3 December 2018 review of submission by Luckygoel1234


Luckygoel1234 (talk) 19:47, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

22:01:19, 3 December 2018 review of submission by Candyman0120

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wells_Town_F.C

}}Hi Wiki users,

I'm currently creating a wiki page for a local football team where I live close to. My page has been reviewed and has come back as unable to publish due to not enough valid references (Which is understandable).

After some thorough research through the internet trying to find some valuable sources relating to Wells Town, it has come to my conclusion that there just isn't any relatable resources for them. (Not to get mixed up with Wells City FC - Two completely different clubs!) Wells Town FC has only recently started using social media for live score updates and future fixtures in the last 2 years. I have linked both their facebook page and twitter page to the wiki article. I can't seem to find any history of the Club apart from archives they have at the ground.

Can anyone please shed a little bit more light as to what I can do to improve my page?

Thanks, Candyman0120.

Candyman0120 (talk) 22:01, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not notable Your search for sources proves the page can't pass our notability guidelines. I suggest working on editing and improving existing topics that interest you before trying again to create a page from scratch. New pages are not that easy - you need to find notable verifiable topic not covered in the over 5 million existing pages and that is not easy. Legacypac (talk) 08:01, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 22:47:23, 3 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Vernon123usa


History about chatbots is very essential as people are still confused as to what chatbots really are. Although the page "chatbots" exists it speaks about chatbots as a whole. The page I created shows that chatbots were simple and later on, with companies like Google and apple realized its potential, it is being integrated into various applications. I agree, the content might be less, however, people will continue to add more in time. THere are so many chatbots being developed which also need to be included here. This page should summarize the entire history of popular chatbots for easy viewing

Vernon Dmonte 22:47, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Hello, my own article draft of AMKTech Versions has references, no copies, has used reliable sources, but wasn't accepted. What could be the problem? — Preceding unsigned comment added by MatthewTheGreatestGamer (talkcontribs) 08:25, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


December 4

Hello, my own article draft of AMKTech Versions has references, no copies, has used reliable sources, but wasn't accepted. What could be the problem? — Preceding unsigned comment added by MatthewTheGreatestGamer (talkcontribs) 08:25, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

08:52:39, 4 December 2018 review of draft by Josephintechnicolor


I would like to confirm that Books indexed in Google referencing the subject, Kelly (Mohre) Hyman, can support notability please. Josephintechnicolor (talk) 08:52, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Josephintechnicolor. The first three books do nothing to establish notability. They are passing mentions in a cast list. I have not evaluated Young and the Restless: Most Memorable Moments, but even if it contains significant coverage of Hyman (think a chapter, or a few pages, or at least several meaty paragraphs), it would not be enough on its own to establish notability. Novice editors are commonly advised to cite at least three independent, reliable, secondary sources that contain significant coverage of the topic. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:11, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Worldbruce. Thank you for answering my question, I will continue to look. I also felt the Youth award nomination would be notable perhaps I can find something to help in that area.

09:08:38, 4 December 2018 review of draft by SpeedwayInfo


SpeedwayInfo (talk) 09:08, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I developed this page relating to my favourite sport of speedway prior anyone else on Wikipedia and and in previous seasons I will update this page regularly with the correct information.

Today, I noticed that because this page was put into draft space someone else has started a page on Wikipedia for the same subject although their page is inferior to the one that I'm creating. I do not think that this is far and reasonable.

Can I please edit that page and place my code over the inferior 2019 SGB Championship to something that looks much better on Wikipedia.

Answered on Draft:SGB Championship 2019. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:04, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

11:21:31, 4 December 2018 review of draft by MatthewTheGreatestGamer

MatthewTheGreatestGamer (talk) 11:21, 4 December 2018 (UTC)Can you help me? I had a draft with reliable sources, web sources, not copied, and done everything for a draft. What is the problem about my Draft:AMKTech Versions?[reply]

Hi MatthewTheGreatestGamer. Sources used to demonstrate notability must be independent of the topic, as the bulk of any article's sources must be. Draft:AMKTech Versions's only sources are AMKTech, which is not independent. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:49, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:55:31, 4 December 2018 review of draft by 134.88.35.170


I am creating this new entry for a late astrophysicist colleague who passed away tragically. I want to ensure it meets the notability requirements for academics. Can you provide feedback as to whether the current draft of the entry satisfies these? How does the formatting overall look?

134.88.35.170 (talk) 12:55, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@134.88.35.170: - as this draft is now an article and has been patrolled and approved, the initial hurdles to demonstrating academic notability have been passed. Obviously someone may disagree with it in the future, but my personal thoughts would be he passes. Overall formatting looks good. I'm sorry for the loss of your colleague. Nosebagbear (talk) 17:22, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

13:54:44, 4 December 2018 review of submission by Dave Mulryan


I have never done this, but Mulryan/Nash created a whole category of advertising, and I thought that it had some relevance. Thanks for your assistance. I have no idea what I am doing, but I am doing it anyway. Thanks, Dave Mulryan


Dave Mulryan (talk) 13:54, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Dave Mulryan. Don't write about yourself, your family, friends, or company. See WP:BFAQ#COMPANY and Wikipedia:Autobiography for further explanation of why. If you're interested in improving Wikipedia, we have millions of articles on topics to which you aren't closely connected. See Wikipedia:Community portal for ways to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:34, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 14:13:55, 4 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Fs2458


Hello. This is my first attempt at getting a page listed on Wikipedia. I'm not sure what other references to list or how to do so. Can you help with some direction?


Fs2458 (talk) 14:13, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Fs2458. Writing a new article from scratch is one of the most frustrating and time consuming things a novice editor can attempt. Wikipedia:Your first article explains how to do it, including an entire "Gathering references" section, but there are a million easier and more rewarding ways to improve Wikipedia than writing entirely new articles. Explore Wikipedia:Community portal for ideas about how to help. After editing existing articles for a few weeks or months you'll have a much better grasp of what it takes to write a new article. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:25, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

16:09:27, 4 December 2018 review of submission by Ecoarts1


hello, my first article was accepted but then I noticed one comment declaring the article needed to be rewritten. Which is it?

Ecoarts1 (talk) 16:09, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ecoarts1. The original acceptance was overturned, and the page returned to Draft:Ray Lorenzato. Three major problems were identified:
  1. Nearly every source cited is a primary source. Wikipedia articles should be based mainly on secondary sources. This is one of the differences between academic writing and writing for an encyclopedia.
  2. Inline citations are missing from material that requires them. Material for which a reliable, published source cannot be cited should be removed. An incomplete biography is fine; an unverifiable one is unacceptable.
  3. The reviewer also felt the "tone is also incredibly promotional". To address this, be sure to use independent sources and follow the guidance in Wikipedia:Encyclopedic style, Wikipedia:Neutral point of view, and Wikipedia:Avoid peacock terms. Stick to verifiable events and don't state reasons for them in Wikipedia's voice ("His passion for learning and teaching led him to take a year-long sabbatical", for example, is unacceptable).
--Worldbruce (talk) 17:15, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 18:28:03, 4 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Sampf


I have submitted an Article for Creation, published in the Sandbox. I am unclear on the prtocol - am I now waiting for review or I am supposed to move it elsewhere for review? Thank you very much for your help.

Sampf Sampf (talk) 18:28, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Sampf (talk) 18:28, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sampf. To submit it for review, click the blue "Resubmit" button in the pink box at the top of the draft. Before you do so, note that the issues raised in the March 2017 review have not been adequately addressed. The five inline citations (one of which is to Wikipedia, which is not a reliable source) support, at best, 15% of the draft. If you can't cite a reliable published source for something, remove it. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:47, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

18:40:01, 4 December 2018 review of submission by Peteri1994


Hi, my draft was rejected and I don´t understand why. Can you explain to me what was the problem?

Peteri1994 (talk) 18:40, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

20:58:00, 4 December 2018 review of submission by Mrow95


Mrow95 (talk) 20:58, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

22:45:05, 4 December 2018 review of draft by NadyaK96


Hello, Can you help me how to improve the article submission? I recently published a page under a name "Exclusive PR Solutions" and it was declined. The reason provided was that the submission appeared to be more like an advertisement and that the submission's references do not quality for Wikipedia article. Could you please elaborate on this problem? In my sources, I only cited independent news articles and I never referred to the company's website, so I was really confused when I received a decline. Also, I don't understand why the text is not neutral as I never called an audience to use the services of this company and only used information found in the news articles and press releases. I have no paid interest in the subject

Thank you very much for your help. NadyaK96 (talk) 22:45, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia NadyaK96 (talk) 22:45, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

December 5

02:18:50, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Wikidelrey

Hi there, I was hoping to get some more info on why this draft was rejected and how it fix it. It is a publicly-traded company worth billions of dollars and has 23 sources from major media publications that are about the business (including publicly-verifiable metrics), so I'm not clear on how it doesn't meet the notability standards. Thank you! Wikidelrey (talk) 02:18, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

08:34:10, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Lumoscoco


Please review my draft and publish it in the article section as soon as possible. Thank you Lumoscoco (talk) 08:34, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

14:03:55, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Farooqahmadbhat


Opinions much appreciated Farooqahmadbhat (talk) 14:03, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

14:23:42, 5 December 2018 review of draft by QueensExpert11372


QueensExpert11372 (talk) 14:23, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

15:00:22, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Ola Domena


Hello, i want to become a paid editor, what should i do?


Ola Domena (talk) 15:00, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It might be better to be a paid editor of web pages. That way, your work is not likely to be deleted, and you are not likely to make enemies. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:39, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

15:29:42, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Peteri1994


2017/2018 Ronnie_O'Sullivan_snooker_season has a standalone page, so I really have no idea why it was rejected and deleted. And with that I'm disappointed.

Peteri1994 (talk) Peteri1994 (talk) 15:29, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

18:38:14, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Treisijs


Ongoing championship. This is improved like previous championships, like, 2016 Men's World Floorball Championships.

--Treisijs (talk) 18:38, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

19:06:53, 5 December 2018 review of submission by Ambrosekemper


Ambrosekemper (talk) 19:06, 5 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


December 6

00:36:03, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Matthewsharv


Hi, I'm a first time publisher on Wikipedia, I would like some advice on why people reviewing my attempt do not find my subject matter 'Cat Mantra' to be notable. This man has now released FOUR albums in total with the Ants of Adam and The Ants fame. That's one more than Adam Ant himself did! He has been signed to Orchard/Sony BMG since 2004 and also became a published literary author in 2016. HELP! Many thanks, Harv Matthews. Matthewsharv (talk) 00:36, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


01:12:32, 6 December 2018 review of draft by MrDevonWinters


Hi, my article was just rejected. It's normal it was a mess. I have no idea about all this technical stuff. I can translate articles for you perfectly but as for the technical, I have no idea. If someone wants to assist with the technical and I will simply take care of the translation, then I would be happy to continue helping Wikapedia. ??

MrDevonWinters (talk) 01:12, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

04:31:45, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Drwellness1

Draft: Message Music A Universal Genre — Preceding unsigned comment added by Drwellness1 (talkcontribs) 04:34, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

04:31:45, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Drwellness1

I received a decline based on copyright related to Spirit2Spirit. We will be working collaboratively and so I directly quoted their definition of "message Music," and statements made by Denny Jenkins from a radio interview. Once declined, I deleted all references and mentioned his organization in my own words and the resubmitted the article. I am hopeful that will remove any infringement issues. drwellness1Drwellness1 (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Drwellness1 (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

04:31:45, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Drwellness1



Template:Message Music a Universal Genre review of submission by Template:Drwellness1 ==


My article was deleted based on copyright infringment.  I am working collaboratively with Denny Jenkins whom I mentioned in the article and offered direct quotes from him.  I referenced his work and cited the reference, so am not sure why it was deleted.  I removed all direct quotes and references and replaced it with a comment in my own words.  I am hopeful these changes with save the article from deletion.  
drwellness1


Drwellness1 (talk) 04:47, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Message Music a Universal Genre review of submission by drwellness1

My article was deleted due to copyright infringement. I am working collaboratively with Spirit2Spirit and Denny Jenkins and when citing quotes or information I referenced him and dated the reference accurately. I am not sure why these were inappropriate, but I removed all of these references and only mentioned his work in my own words. Will these changes prevent my article from being deleted, and allow me to have another review? drwellness1Drwellness1 (talk) 04:52, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Drwellness1 (talk) 04:52, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Actioned, to borrow a phrase from Legacypac. You can't just copy-and-paste website content into your article -- it has to all be in your own words, barring things quoted and cited inline. The article is being considered under {{db-copyvio}} and {{db-advert}}. programmingGeek(talk, contribs) 05:00, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 07:12:00, 6 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by KarenRutter



KarenRutter (talk) 07:12, 6 December 2018 (UTC) Good day, I received a mesage that my article had been rejected because "None of the references show original and independent opinion, analysis, investigation, and fact checking that are clearly attributable to a source unaffiliated to the subject, therefore fails WP:ORGIND".[reply]

This is actually not true. The references are all drawn from independent sources, including newspapers and business research. They are reputable sources. I cannot understand why they would not be seen as such. I would like somebody else to please review my submission. I feel that this article deserves a second look, please. Much appreciated, Karen

KarenRutter (talk) 07:12, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 08:05:04, 6 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by KarenRutter



KarenRutter (talk) 08:05, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Good morning, Further to my query regarding the references in my Wikipedia article - I do maintain that they meet Wikipedia standards. I have come across several articles in the past week which have far less credibility in terms of references and even writing, so wonder why my article, which is gramatically correct and has suitable references, is being blocked. PLease refer below: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Kramer_(singer)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rebecca_Malope

(The last example is particularly shocking). Please could a better explanation be given regarding my article? Best regards Karen

KarenRutter (talk) 08:05, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

10:39:18, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Matthewsharv



I have now added detailed explanation on Cat Mantra's role as front man and band LEADER with the Ants now. Also links to resources on why Cat should be recognised as notable for a huge body of successful work with legendary 80's fame musicians.

Matthewsharv (talk) 10:39, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Request on 11:39:58, 6 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by KarenRutter



KarenRutter (talk) 11:39, 6 December 2018 (UTC) Good day, I would like to please make a request, that when a user is searching for IFWEA, the Wikipedia page comes up. Currently, it only comes up if you type in the full title - International Federation of Workers' Education Associations - which most people will not do. The acronym is what people search for. How do I go about helping to make this change? Best regards, Karen[reply]

KarenRutter (talk) 11:39, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:22:58, 6 December 2018 review of draft by Lumoscoco


Can you move my draft to article section and review it , because when i move it in the article section it comes redirected from the draf. Thank you Lumoscoco (talk) 12:22, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Lumoscoco the draft is in the queue to be reviewed, it may take some time. I took a quick look at some of the references, you seem to have put your own "description" where the article title should be, please use the exact same title as published by the source. For example your reference 6, from the Hindustan Times, the actual title of the article is "Justice Ahluwalia, nine others take oath as Punjab and Haryana high court judges". Go through the draft and check all your references for such errors. The references should include full details such as dates, authors, etc. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:36, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:52:58, 6 December 2018 review of draft by Sgracanin


Hi there, Sgracanin user, page is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Danube_hidden_heritage, which was deleted due to a copyright infraction, but it was resolved with help provided by RHaworth, who also sent me a copy of the site per Email. Now I have reinstated the draft, but it does not have the button to resubmit. I do not want to delete the "do not delete this line" line, thus, I rather ask here if you could please help me with this matter. Thank you in advance for assistance and time. Sgracanin (talk) 12:52, 6 December 2018 (UTC) Sgracanin (talk) 12:52, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sgracanin To submit it "manually" simply add the code {{subst:submit}} (including the double curly braces) above that "do not delete" line. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:14, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Dodger67, thank you very much for your help and prompt answer! Awesome! Sgracanin (talk) 18:24, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

13:38:14, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Samuel mponda


Samuel mponda (talk) 13:38, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


15:24:04, 6 December 2018 review of draft by LYNXPlus


want to create same page as this: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yves_Ngabu but for English because now moved to England LYNXPlus (talk) 15:24, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi LYNXPlus, see WP:Translation for basic guidance, if you need further help come back here again. (BTW Where a person lives makes no difference to their notability.) Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:07, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

16:54:50, 6 December 2018 review of draft by Adicterow


I tried adding another source for my colleague, Anne McCabe who I am trying to create this page for. I'm confused why the two sources I added aren't sufficient to prove that Anne McCabe is an active working editor in film and TV.

Adicterow (talk) 16:54, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Adicterow, proof of existence is not sufficient for a draft to be accepted. See WP:GNG for the basic standards of notability. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:10, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

17:44:07, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Jsayer94


I noticed the page I created for The London School of architecture was classified as "Start" class. Could I be given further clarification on how to improve this submission and which (type) of sources and references are not considered reliable? What could be improved with the structure if so and what further information should be disclosed?

Jsayer94 (talk) 17:44, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jsayer94. Now that London School of Architecture is in article space, it is no longer in the scope of Articles for creation; we reviewers must turn our attention to the hundreds of other drafts that come in every day.
There's nothing wrong with being start-class. The shades of difference from start-class through B-class may be important to people editing the article, but are less important to the broader community than knowing simply that it's better than stub-class and not as good as GA. Consequently, the reviewer may not have spent a lot of time weighing the initial rating.
Because of your conflict of interest, please don't edit the article directly. Instead, propose any changes on its talk page. Any number of editors may pitch in and edit the article mercilessly, so it may improve without you doing anything at all.
The quality scale has general advice on how articles move up the ladder. I've left a basket of links on your talk page that may give you ideas about improvements to suggest, or how to improve some of our 5.7 million other articles, most of which need just as much work. Spending time editing a variety of articles is one of the best ways to get ideas for betterments. Related projects, such as WikiProject London and WikiProject Schools are another source of advice, as are peer reviews. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:52, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

17:56:54, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Peteri1994


I will continue in edits despite rejection of my draft. I hope there would be somebody who could accept it at the end.

Peteri1994 (talk)

18:30:23, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Lildrewzy

I would like to put in a request for a re-review on the stance of unfair assessment and treatment leading to the rejection on this draft page. Once person should not have the ability to reject an article based on their personal judgment and bias of whether or not an article is worthy of inclusion or notability. If possible can @AngusWOOF who had commented on this article previously take a look at how it can be improved. Best regards. Peace Love and Happiness to all.  


Lildrewzy (talk) 18:30, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

18:35:36, 6 December 2018 review of submission by 2405:204:672C:EDE:9829:6289:2907:9994


2405:204:672C:EDE:9829:6289:2907:9994 (talk) 18:35, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Request on 19:04:22, 6 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Adicterow



Hi all, I'm having a lot of trouble getting my article published. I believe I have sufficient articles/proof but I keep getting rejected with little specific help as to how to fix any issues. The article in question is on Anne McCabe.

Many thanks!

Adicterow (talk) 19:04, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Adicterow. Of the draft's four sources, Studio Daily and Script Magazine are interviews – McCabe in McCabe's own words with little or no analysis by the interviewer. As such, they lack independence. Basically, talking about oneself doesn't make one notable. Manhattan Edit Workshop is a capsule bio supplied by McCabe, so also not independent. IMDb is user-generated, so not a reliable source (and therefore not something that can demonstrate notability either).
My own searches found another one-page interview in Emmy Magazine and a couple sentences about her in a Cinemaeditor article on a panel discussion in which she participated. The latter is the best source available, but falls far short of significant coverage. Your conflict of interest may blind you to this, but the inescapable conclusion is that the topic is not suitable for a Wikipedia article. --Worldbruce (talk) 20:37, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

19:36:48, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Farooqahmadbhat


Your feedback is highly appreciated Farooqahmadbhat (talk) 19:36, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

21:45:52, 6 December 2018 review of submission by Lordofthefloor


Hello! Since my article was rejected I have tried my best trying to understand and study the guidelines. I’m still not quite sure why it was rejected. But I have however updated the article with more content, links, and references that I could find. There’s probably a lot more to add, but since I am still learning I take one step at a time:)

I would really appreciate if you would review it once more, and maybe help me out if there is still things you consider missing, or could be better.

Thank you for your time. Cheers!

(Update December 7, I have added additional content and references, Thank you)

Lordofthefloor (talk) 21:45, 6 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

December 7

00:49:13, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Nyc snow bus


I read the article concerning notability. it is not clear why this article is not notable. its a business that over 100,000 people take, and is one of the top 3 providers in NYC. Nyc snow bus (talk) 00:49, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

01:21:47, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Ilovebirthdays


Ilovebirthdays (talk) 01:21, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


01:21:47, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Ilovebirthdays



Can you please explain the reason why the draft was not approved?

Thx!!

Ilovebirthdays (talk) 01:21, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

01:35:10, 7 December 2018 review of draft by Ebrebelmusic


Ebrebelmusic (talk) 01:35, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

All of the sources I have provided are independent of the subject of the page. I am not sure which in particular is causing the denial.

Please review again.

Hi Ebrebelmusic. You could resubmit the draft, but it would simply be declined again. Referencing rawartists, centraltrack, and afropunk does not help. Throw away all three. Look for non-interview significant coverage in any three of the reliable sources listed at Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums/Sources. If such coverage is not found, then the topic is not suitable for Wikipedia. --Worldbruce (talk) 06:39, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

01:52:26, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Ilovebirthdays


Ilovebirthdays (talk) 01:52, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Hello,

I have added a few sources after reading your comments. How can I resubmit the article?

Thanks!!

02:15:27, 7 December 2018 review of submission by PoonamVRajput


PoonamVRajput (talk) 02:15, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


03:58:04, 7 December 2018 review of submission by MichelangeloT


MichelangeloT (talk) 03:58, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, just would like to understand why the post was denied? I know there isn't as much information as some major record producers articles yet but I feel there is enough information under "Mekazazzo" to be considered valuable so far being associated with Outlawz and Savemoney's Kami de Chukwu and Monster Mike.

Please fill me in, Thank you!

Michel Vaughan

04:57:40, 7 December 2018 review of draft by Carlobulletinph


How do I check if the Draft article I made was already submitted for review? Thank you. Carlobulletinph (talk) 04:57, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It was not submitted but the subject is not suitable as fails WP:NPOL Legacypac (talk) 05:38, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

05:25:46, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Ruchika Daga

My page was not accepted even though the person talked about in the page/draft is a celebrity and India's first lingerie designer. Ruchika Daga (talk) 05:25, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ruchika Daga, It's not about being a celebrity, Wikipedia topics should be notable per WP:GNG and similar guidelines (the WP:N ones). Her draft is way too promotional with a lot of buzzwords which even if the sources were enough, it still wouldn't be accepted due to being promotional. Sources should be from newspapers, books ,magazines independent of her and more than in passing (see WP:IRS). JC7V (talk) 05:31, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

07:34:54, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Farooqahmadbhat


09:33:27, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Lordofthefloor


Hello, I have updated the article initially rejected even more now. Would really appreciate if you could have another look. And please help me out if there is still anything that seems wrong. Lordofthefloor (talk) 09:33, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

09:43:26, 7 December 2018 review of draft by Nicholas Eastop - Scenkonstmuseet


Hello! I'm asking for help with a draft article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jens_Bj%C3%B8rn-Larsen I'm perplexed that an individual I feel to be highly notworthy and deserving of documentation is rejected as "not notworthy". Mr. Björn Larsen is possibly the most famous tubist in the world - merely winning the Geneva competition (a staggering achievement) puts him in the top rank of international musicians let alone tubists... He is a member of (according to the BBC) "the best chamber orchestra in the world", The Chamber Orchestra of Europe. He has recorded a number of solo CDs, of which I've only listed one so far, and teaches at two extremely respected conservatories. I am deeply saddened that the wikipedia editors consider him unnoteworthy and can only put it down to a narrow world view and lack of understanding of the milieu of classical music. I assume in there view that there is nothing a mere tubist, not even the best in the world, can do to become notworthy - it is simply not possible?

Nicholas Eastop - Scenkonstmuseet (talk) 09:43, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Not exactly, Nicholas Eastop - Scenkonstmuseet – we do have articles (though not necessarily very good ones) on most of the best-known tuba players: Roger Bobo, Carol Jantsch, Harvey Phillips, Øystein Baadsvik, Howard Johnson, for example. What you need to do for Jens Bjørn-Larsen is to show that he is notable by the standards of Wikipedia, by finding independent reliable sources which cover his achievements and abilities in depth; as far as I can see, there is not one of those in your draft. The sources must support the text: you say, for example, that Bjørn-Larsen won the Concours de Genève in 1991, but his name is not present on the page you link to, or indeed (apparently) anywhere on that website; searching laureates for 1991 + tuba gets one hit, Øystein Baadsvik (that could be the fault of the website). I note that – unlike Phillips, Bobo, Johnson and a good number of other tuba players, Bjørn-Larsen does not have an article in Grove – but then neither does Jantsch or Baadsvik. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 11:18, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your reply Justlettersandnumbers (talk) I added a link to the wikipedia page listing the winners of the Geneva competition, is this acceptable? One has to search the Geneva competition's own website, I do not know how to link to a search or search result - I too searched https://www.concoursgeneve.ch/section/laureates/search_laureates/ and found JBL straight away as the 1991 winner. Baadsvik came second. Baadsvik has a lot of links to CD's, would a more complete list of JBL's recordings be sufficient to indicate noteworthiness? Would you not say his collaboration with manufacturers B&S on an instrument that bears his name is an indication of his noteworthiness? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nicholas Eastop - Scenkonstmuseet (talkcontribs) 15:27, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:39:41, 7 December 2018 review of draft by Leonardoamico


Dear Wikipedia team, I hope you are fine. I feel lost, because it seems that the page I wrote is wrong. I put more than 42 references (reliable references). Could you help me ? Hope not to disturb you too much.$$ Sincerely yours.

Leonardoamico (talk) 12:39, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Leonardoamico - From the responses the reviewers have given you, it looks as though they are not only worried about the references, but also the layout. You need to remove all external links in the body of the text. The article seems to just go into details about his hobbies, and such, and is very promotional. Wikipedia articles (specifically Biographies) need to be written from a neutral perspective.
Wikipedia's inclusion criteria is very specific about how subjects are deemed notable, and that is that independent reliable source talk about the subject in depth, and not just a list of sources talking about where the subject has worked.
I hope this is helpful, please {{ping}} me if you need more information. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:36, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:45:26, 7 December 2018 review of draft by Darshana1818


Darshana1818 (talk) 12:45, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

ESDS Software Solutions Pvt. Ltd. is actually a renowned and one of the leading data centers and managed service providers in India. It has received US and UK Patents (numbers mentioned in the draft) for the eNlight cloud’s vertical scaling technology and its Wikipedia page is also there as earlier referenced in this new draft. Okay, I got to know that another Wikipedia article's reference is not valid so I have removed that but, the other link references given are from reliable sources as observed in other published articles. I have seen the pages of Ctrl S, Amazon AWS, and Microsoft’s Azure too and took cues from that. I’m really not able to figure out what is lacking. Kindly explain in detail.

17:08:12, 7 December 2018 review of submission by VinceWakeman76


Hi There I am a little confused why this was declined, it's taken a while for me to get back to this due to other committments. I have based writing this article from looking at another page for Carl Reader. It has the same type of links and text. Do I need to include links to where Warren is mentioned but he hasn't written the Article?

Can you give me some specific ideas as to what I need to do to improve this and get it accepted.

Regards, Vince VinceWakeman76 (talk) 17:08, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Zeraoulia Rafik

Zeraoulia Rafik is a researcher in Mathematics , He was Born in 05/11/1985 at yabous , Khenchela , County Algeria He have got him Bac in 2005 and he studied in University Batna, He is actually Master PDE In university of Batna, i'm actually a teacher in high school , Timgad , Batna, Algeria .My interesting researchs are : number theory and Functional analysis and Also special function [1]

Zeraoulia Rafik is a Researcher in mathematics interesting to special functions and Number theory , "He has got a new Special function with it's application in probability and thermo-Dynamics"

Contribution to Mathematics

A new special function and its application in probability see[2]

Solutions to some problems in international journal k.s see[3]

Posting questions and Answers in stackexchange math[4]

Posting questions and answers in Mathoverflow .com see[5]

Researchgate[6]
Group for mathematical research in Facebook[7]

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References

2019 NCAA Division I FBS football season article

I Know That Tomorrow is the last day of the 2018 College Football Regular season. But when will the 2019 NCAA Division I FBS football season article start I Think it will start Tomorrow if I'm not mistaking. 68.103.78.155 (talk) 21:14, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Quite frankly you seem to be the only person here who is in such a hurry, so its up to you to create the article. See WP:YFA for guidance. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 13:10, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I created the 2019 NCAA Division I FBS Article and it has one reference and the templates need to change from red to blue. Because the 2018 NCAA Division I FBS football regular season has just now ended. you need to start the 2019 NCAA Division I FBS football season article right now. 68.103.78.155 (talk) 23:45, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

22:40:14, 7 December 2018 review of submission by Maxlysle


This article describes a concept called a "smart token" introduced in the bancor whitepaper. However, it is written in a platform-agnostic way, only using the word "bancor" when citing a particular implementation as an example (such as in the formulas for price calculation). It was removed with a comment that it is "more cryptospam." It was not explained how the article is in violation of wikipedia's general sanctions. The general sanctions do not give carte blanch ability to scrub all crypto topics. I believe the article was removed unfairly by a biased editor. Maxlysle (talk) 22:40, 7 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

User:Maxlysle - The draft has not yet been deleted, only declined and proposed for speedy deletion as spam. You may challenge the deletion of the draft on the draft talk page. This is not the preferred venue to challenge that deletion, because it may already be deleted before the deleting administrator reads this page. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:32, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

December 8

07:51:25, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Bharatudaipur

The other Malls of same group has the wikipedia page. How can I add the Wikipedia page for Forum Celebration mall Udaipur



Bharatudaipur (talk) 07:51, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


09:31:08, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Sarvasuddi Bandi Raju

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FIRST TELL US WHY YOU ARE REQUESTING HELP ON THE LINE BELOW THIS LINE. Take as many lines as you need. -->}}

Sarvasuddi Bandi Raju (talk) 09:31, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

11:31:23, 8 December 2018 review of draft by Leonardoamico


Dear Lee Vilenski (and dear Wikipedia team. I did the corrections you suggested me. I removed all links inside the text body. I put only Wikipedia links. Please, tell me if these corrections are oK ? Thank you for your help. With all my respect. Sincerely.

Leonardoamico (talk) 11:31, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

User:Leonardoamico - The page is copied from a web site and so is a copyright violation. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:39, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

11:57:48, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Ilovepitts



This page was the subject of a deletion years ago by an editor who has since been banned. I did a draft after Sara got in the Hall of Fame. It was rejected by an editor who considered the prior history. That editor is now gone. Sara Jay is in the adult Hall of Fame. If there is one standard in the adult industry for notable.. it is that. It is not as if she has not fame in her own industry. Here are the standards all of which she qualifies for. She's been in mainstream media, is well known an a member of hall of fame. What am I missing here? Have I messed up the citations somehow? If my citations aren't enough, those can be easily fixed. If the draft is never going to be accepted no matter what she does, I guess I'd like to know so I don't waste time.

Pornographic actors and models Shortcuts

   WP:PORNBIO
   WP:PORNSTAR

The following criteria are relevant only to people involved in pornography (and should not be raised with regard to actors and models outside the pornography industry):

   The person has won a well-known and significant industry award. Awards in scene-related and ensemble categories are excluded from consideration.
   The person has made unique contributions to a specific pornographic genre, such as beginning a trend in pornography; starring in an iconic, groundbreaking or blockbuster feature; or being a member of an industry hall of fame such as the AVN Hall of Fame, XRCO Hall of Fame or equivalent.
   The person has been featured multiple times in notable mainstream media.

Ilovepitts (talk) 11:57, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

User:Ilovepitts - There has been considerable discussion of whether there should be articles about this person, with four deletion debates, three of which concluded that she is not notable, and that the articles should be deleted. The most recent is Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Sara Jay (4th nomination). On the one hand, no amount of improving the citations will change that. A decision has already been made. On the other hand, it appears that you are saying that the deletion decision should be revisited or reviewed. The procedure for doing that in Wikipedia is Deletion Review. Trying to rework the draft will be a waste of your time and ours unless you go to Deletion Review first. That is what you should do. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:45, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

13:53:24, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Skkhanfilms


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15:19:00, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Skkhanfilms


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20:37:32, 8 December 2018 review of submission by 109.252.83.19

Template:Galois axis

Is not explaining the meaning of terms is the main purpose of any encyclopedia. Why wouldn’t a term stand alone in an article?

109.252.83.19 (talk) 20:37, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

21:20:32, 8 December 2018 review of draft by Davidshahhah


Davidshahhah (talk) 21:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


21:20:32, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Davidshahhah



I am asking for assistance for the article I am writing. I am writing on the subject "Murray Howe." It has not been published yet and was originally denied and I edited it again after. Would like to hear feedback and how to get it officially published.

Davidshahhah (talk) 21:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

22:08:42, 8 December 2018 review of draft by Arandompersonwhoishere


I created an article for satirical purposes, on an actual fictional character who exists for satirical purposes.

Arandompersonwhoishere (talk) 22:08, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

So the reviewer was correct that it is just a joke. Your submission did not attribute it to anyone else, and it does not appear to be worth attributing. You are wasting your time and ours, and are likely to be blocked as not here to contribute to the encyclopedia. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:11, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

22:49:20, 8 December 2018 review of submission by Arandompersonwhoishere

My article was blocked for appearing to be just a joke. I was writing about a character whose existence is a joke, so it was impossible to not write something funny if I was to write a true article about him.


Arandompersonwhoishere (talk) 22:49, 8 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


December 9

04:30:45, 9 December 2018 review of submission by Zvowell

Hello, help desk, thanks for considering my question. I submitted an article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Don_Morris) that was declined on October 30 for the following reason: "This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia."

My question is more a request for clarification. Is it that the article does not contain enough secondary sources? If so, can I ask if newspaper articles that document the article's subject and his activities would qualify as secondary sources. I had hoped that the article contained enough secondary sources.

Thanks you! zv Zvowell (talk) 04:30, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 05:15:24, 9 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by MaynardClark


Draft:Christine Mitchell has been rejected twice because it appeared to be promotional. The first reviewer had told me that he would not reject it on notability grounds, but the second reviewer claimed that the article did not demonstrate notability. MaynardClark (talk) 05:15, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

MaynardClark (talk) 05:15, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Opinions may differ. Legacypac (talk) 05:10, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

08:01:38, 9 December 2018 review of draft by 109.233.47.132


Hello. In said article, the first source is grave finder. It must be filled every time. And filing should be Imie - Teresa and Nazwisko -Adamczewska. How to make such note? 109.233.47.132 (talk) 08:01, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

109.233.47.132 (talk) 08:01, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Place instructions explaining how to use the grave finder after the {{Cite web}} template, but before the closing </ref> tag for the citation. Such primary sources are not ideal. Replace it with a better source, such as a scholarly book, if possible. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:14, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

09:55:55, 9 December 2018 review of submission by Shane Chambers


Hi guys

I tried to ad a new page for the Bravo TV show 'Get a Room with Carson and Thom', though it seems it was rejected.

I know this is my first attempt, so please excuse my probably inexcusable ignorance, but I'm not sure what I've done here that doesn't meet guidelines.

Being my first attempt, I truly welcome anyone's feedback, including instructions on how I might add a page for a TV show that follows guidelines.

Thanks people. I love all of your work, of course ;-).

Shane Shane Chambers (talk) 09:55, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Shane Chambers. There is much to master in order to successfully create a new article. The welcome basket of links left on your talk page provides excellent starting points. For writing about TV shows, you'll want to thoroughly understand notability (the criteria for inclusion on Wikipedia). Also, Wikipedia:WikiProject Television offers a number of topic-specific guidelines. Many editors find it easier to start by editing existing articles, and build up to creating new ones. See Wikipedia:Community portal for ways to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:07, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

05:23:00, 9 December 2018 review of submission by 119.92.15.205

Excuse me, Draft:AMKTech Versions needs some reliable sources. On which way should I be able to get resources? 119.92.15.205 (talk) 12:25, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Generally speaking, reliable sources can be found among books, articles, and news reports. A library is a good place to find such resources. If no such independent sources can be found, Wikipedia should not have an article on the subject. --Worldbruce (talk) 04:54, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

17:04:42, 9 December 2018 review of submission by Sudesh tomar13


Sudesh tomar13 (talk) 17:04, 9 December 2018 (UTC) (Resume removed) Legacypac (talk) 05:08, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sudesh tomar13 Editors may create a user page containing limited autobiographical information for the purpose of collaboration with other editors. If that was what you were trying to do with User:Sudesh tomar13/sandbox, then you do not need to post the content here or submit it for review. Simply write at User:Sudesh tomar13.
It is draft articles that need to be submitted for review before being published as encyclopedia articles. If that is what your sandbox submission was intended as, then please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). --Worldbruce (talk) 04:25, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

19:12:41, 9 December 2018 review of draft by Sportscaptain


How do I save my draft? Sportscaptain (talk) 19:12, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sportscaptain. Click the blue "Publish page" button at the bottom left (see Help:Editing for an illustration and more information). Once the page exists, the button will be titled "Publish changes". It means "save"; what is saved is still a draft, it isn't published to article space. --Worldbruce (talk) 02:30, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

21:26:10, 9 December 2018 review of submission by Joshua Beschutzer


Please return Company B 6th Florida Infantry to "Draft". If it was submitted by me for posting, the error was mine; the posted version has also been stripped of biographical sketches.

Joshua Beschutzer (talk) 21:26, 9 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

23:38:18, 9 December 2018 review of draft by Fortriudavid


Incorrectly recorded date format for downloading web sources - not sure how to resolve that. Numerous references to same publication but differing pages - appreciate how best to correct that

Hi Fortriudavid. Don't use ordinals with dates on Wikipedia. In other words, access-date=26 November 2018, not access-date=26th November 2018. See MOS:DATES for more information. --Worldbruce (talk) 02:16, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

December 10

03:22:01, 10 December 2018 review of draft by Aashnasidhu


Hi I have given one website link "NTFF" , which is a dead link now.There was a website with this name 6 months back and they have published the results for Norway tamil short film festival. I have given the link for this website so that the artist name "Jayaditya kang" can be verified from the website's list of awardees. Jayaditya kang won best child artist award in this festival for his short film childhood diaries. But looks like the website is deleted or expired as some error 404 displays when ever i click the link to website. I have couple of questions.

1. should i remove the website ref link from the article "Jayaditya Kang" ?

2.For verification of the award results , Norway tamil film festival has a wikipedia page . The complete list of awardees is mentioned in the said page. Should i give this wikipedia page link for reference?

Thanks.:) Aashnasidhu (talk) 03:22, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Aashnasidhu (talk) 03:22, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aashnasidhu. Do not cite Wikipedia, it is not a reliable source (neither are IMDb or Wikiwand). Do not remove the website ref link just because it is dead (404). See Wikipedia:Link rot for how to bring the link back to life. Consider, however, whether a (non-notable?) award that is only mentioned by the awarding organization and the awardee is worth mentioning in an encyclopedia biography. --Worldbruce (talk) 04:42, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

05:11:34, 10 December 2018 review of submission by Malek404


Malek404 (talk) 05:11, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Malek404. This is the fifth time you've posted here in the past few weeks, but you have never asked a question. Draft:Shahan Kabondho fails to show that he is notable (that he satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion in the encyclopedia).
Sometimes this can be fixed by finding significant, independent coverage in reliable sources. The Daily Star and Dhaka Tribune are reliable sources, but the cited articles contain only passing mentions of Kabondho, not in-depth coverage. Other times all you can do is wait a few years and see if by then more has been written about the subject. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:59, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

09:38:41, 10 December 2018 review of submission by Dadasaheb Halvankar


Dadasaheb Halvankar (talk) 09:38, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dadasaheb Halvankar (talk) 09:43, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dadasaheb Halvankar (talk) 10:40, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dadasaheb Halvankar (talk) 10:46, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dadasaheb Halvankar (talk) 11:58, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Dadasaheb Halvankar Editors may create a user page containing limited autobiographical information for the purpose of collaboration with other editors. If that was what you were trying to do with User:Dadasaheb Halvankar/sandbox, then you do not need to post the content here or submit it for review. Simply write at User:Dadasaheb Halvankar.
It is draft articles that need to be submitted for review before being published as encyclopedia articles. If that is what your sandbox submission was intended as, then please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). --Worldbruce (talk) 16:41, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

16:48:29, 10 December 2018 review of submission by Julietronic9


Julietronic9 (talk) 16:48, 10 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]